• 
  General

1. Better to use the real bpm "98 bpm", usually BATs don't accept the double bpm again example p/3350761#p3350761
2. add "xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx" in tags as Kanari's old name
3. Audio lead in 1000 for preparing time before play?
4. SB\White.png on first time, please give it around 1/1 or 1/2 fade in.. that's totally weird to see suddenly appear (see when player play this map, you will be know what i mean ><)
5. 04:00:650 - until 04:13:983 - for all diffs. consider to add whistles for every stanza. their piano are quite loud here

• 
  Salad

1. 00:18:832 (1) - imo the music isn't really loud to need dash. the part of music is calm so reduce the spacing. x:192
2. 00:23:378 (2) - it looked like a trap here, because the spacing between sliders to this circle are same but the snap aren't. i would say move this circle x:320. easier to read the pattern
3. 00:03:075 (5) - NC here so the combo won't be too long :p
4. 00:24:287 - add note here. the piano sound is really strong. ofc feel empty
5. 00:28:226 (2) - imo the flow feel better when move this one to x:448 (only personal taste)
6. 00:28:529 (3) - add a whistle here to emphasize both music and vocal?
7. 00:35:499 - add note would be nice here :3
8. 00:31:863 (5) - the different spacing looks tidy here for me.. hmm try move to x:384?
9. 00:50:499 - insert break here :p
10. 00:05:499 (7,1) - imo the NC should be swap here because.. yap the metronome lol
11. 01:03:075 - add note to follow the clap sound? if no, 01:03:075 - 01:03:226 - remove these greenlines :3
12. 01:12:166 (1) - add whistle to slider's repeat? the piano is strong and on pitch
13. 01:22:620 - i would say to map this time since you seem following vocal here 01:20:650 (1,2,3) -, how about http://puu.sh/bxBwD/8944f980e3.jpg instead?
14. 01:26:105 (2) - the lack of movement here feels too weird for me. well this is might break your design pattern (in editor) but the flow seems better for me https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2031989
15. 01:30:347 (1,2,3,4) - the flow a little bit rigid for me. i would try ctrl+H,move them to x:80 and then move 01:31:560 (1) - x:400 and 01:32:166 (2) - x:224 to keep the flows
16. 01:43:681 - i really wishing there is a jump here to emphasize the cymbal :C
17. 01:53:378 (1) - i guess a jump for this slider would be awesome.. x:403?
18. 01:57:620 (2,2,2) - the lack movements here imo feel weird for me. at least give them a little movement so the ryuuta won't be only waiting the fruits
19. 02:06:105 (2) - ^
20. 02:24:893 (1) - remove finish? i know you just give finish this cymbal sounds here, the current music here is only a piano so imo whistle only feels better (if you feel the hitsound too low, you can increase the volume as well)
21. 02:26:257 (1) - the spinner is really unfit here. if i were you i would remove this one and add note to 02:26:711 - (02:27:014 - this one is fine to added a note too but that's up to you)
22. 02:27:317 (1) - same as 02:24:893 (1) - (on head)
23. 02:33:984 (2) - how about ctrl+G and move to x:0? the flows are too rigid here. i feel this way could make better flow
24. 02:39:438 (1,2) - the violin sounds on this part are main important sounds here. try follow them http://puu.sh/bxDXC/987744d400.jpg ?
25. 02:49:135 (1) - ^
26. 03:26:104 (2) - give a little movement here example x:80 so the flow of fruits improved and giving a jump for next slider to emphasize the cymbal
27. 03:38:225 (2) - you forgot add clap on head here for consistency clap patterns
28. 03:40:649 (2) - the vocal of slider's head is really strong. why not mapped it with a movement? ;w;
29. 03:41:861 (2,2) - same as 01:57:620 (2,2,2) -
30. 03:43:680 (1,2,3,4) - imo same spacings here feel too rigid and repetitive. i would say to arrange them like http://puu.sh/bxESt/42f90cda26.jpg
31. The repetitive rhythms on kiai times are really make me boring here. i would say to combine the sliders and circles making into various rhythms

• 
  Platter

1. 00:08:378 (2) - how about move this one to x:368 to give more movement since it has piano sound. if you follow this one, move 00:08:832 (3) - x:336 :3
2. 00:18:226 - are you really to skip this sound? the piano is on pitch here. i would 00:18:075 (2) - change this one with http://puu.sh/bxKy3/2eead899c4.jpg instead
3. 00:19:438 - here too same as above, shorten the slider to 1/2 and add circle to 00:19:590 -
4. 00:23:681 (1) - since the vocal ended in 00:23:984 - so i would say separate this slider into 2 sliders. it would giving better feel here
5. 00:25:499 (2,1,2) - the sliders are a little bit boring imo because they are going go left left left with repetitive. hmm try http://puu.sh/bxL5q/0a549fe01b.jpg instead?
6. 00:28:529 (4) - add whistle here to emphasize both vocal and piano?
7. 00:35:196 (3) - i would separate this slider into 2 sliders and give a jump 00:35:499 - to emphasize the piano sound
8. 00:35:044 (2) - nazi, the spacing looks inconsistency here. try 1 grid left /runs
9. 00:59:741 (3) - give a little bit more movement example x:352? the sensation feels better for me
10. 01:23:378 (2) - how about ctrl+G this one and move to x:208.. imo this part already have much of repetitive flow here so variation ones are really needed
11. 01:53:378 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - do some variations please. imo the flows are really boring here with the repetitive here
12. 02:23:529 (1) - well imo it would be better if you follow the more music (drum at 02:23:984 - ) and vocal (on stanza) here. something like http://puu.sh/bxMy6/ec8b1b5dfb.jpg won't be hurt at all
13. 02:27:317 (1) - remove finish here and use whistle on head instead. the vocal is normal, music too. finish heard random
14. 02:32:772 (3) - the repetitive flow feels bad for me. how about ctrl+G and move to x:384?
15. 02:39:590 - hmm skip the pitch of violin sound is bad here. same as i told on Salad before. you need to map this one :C
16. 02:41:863 (1) - for me this one feel a little bit blank here. i would use http://puu.sh/bxMRF/a7137801e0.jpg . yup same used 1/2 but the sensation is different :p
17. 02:43:984 (4) - no movement? :C , i feel give a movement would improve the flow. x:320?
18. 03:11:257 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - the musics are calm here and the circles are hard to catch w/o dash here.. hmm i would say to reduce the spacings, how about this one http://puu.sh/bxNf5/e27eda7e40.jpg ?
19. 03:14:590 (4) - HDash feel uncomfortable here while the part of music is really calm. try move to x:224 instead
20. 03:36:407 - until 03:55:801 - actually i can catch all fruits here but imo players who after play Salad diff and try this patterns. they would be confuse a lot. consider to remove some of HDashes here

• 
  Tears

1. 00:12:772 (1) - hmm give more jump here x:240. since the vocal is increased
2. 00:40:650 (1) - x:0 here to give HDash for this slider, emphasizing the cymbal
3. 01:43:681 (1) - ^
4. 02:12:772 (1) - hmm you can map the pianos instead only following vocal here example from here 02:13:529 - you can map 1/2
5. 02:17:317 - maybe just for me but i feel empty here. map 1/2 slider feel better for me
6. 02:27:317 - same as Platter
7. 02:39:590 (2,4) - you must to add at least normal jumps here since their music are pitch of violin sounds
8. 02:49:135 (1,2) - imo the rhythm can improved a lot here. since 02:49:287 - is violin pitch, add jump is really needed there http://puu.sh/bxOLw/ebbdeab998.jpg
9. 03:46:104 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - for me these patterns are quite hard for Rain. consider to use another pattern or reduce the spacings
10. 03:55:347 (6) - consider reduce (a lot) the spacing) or ctrl+G. this is really hard to catch for me. only a piano sound on the kiai time isn't need a huge jump for me
11. 04:13:983 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - evil mapper, consider reduce the spacings. the music turning into calm so huge jumps are really uncomfortable to me
12. Hard to complain for your flow on Rain diffs. they're feel nicely to play but you're really an evil mapper lol

1. Tags: I advise you to add the following tags: 中村 舞子 Best of Love
2. Combo Colors: I think there should have a bigger contrast in between of combo color 2 and 3. For 1 and 4, it is nice.
   
   The storyboard is impressive! Keep up the good work.

1. 00:04:287 (1) - Remove the NC?
2. 00:23:681 (1,2) - I recommend to make this part much simpler, I think 1/4 note distances should only be occurring in Kiai Time. As a result you can merge the slider and circle into a 1/1 slider.
3. 00:35:499 (2,1) - Distance between them can be bigger, because of the big-stanza difference (Add a little dash effect)
4. 00:40:347 (2,1) - ^
5. 00:47:923 (1,2,3) - To be honest this part is pretty complex, check the mod made at 00:23:681 (1,2), I think you can just make a 3/4 reversed slider there instead of cutting them into 1/2 sliders and circle.
6. 00:56:408 (1) - Remove NC here, the audio pattern is the same as 00:55:196 (1)
7. 00:58:832 (1) - ^
8. 01:01:257 (1) - ^
9. 01:03:682 (1) - (Suggestion) This can be NC'ed but if not, you can still keep it for stress
10. 01:02:469 (1,2) - A bit complex, perhaps changing this into a 1/1 slider
11. 01:06:105 (1) - Remove NC
12. 01:08:529 (1) - ^
13. 01:10:954 (1) - ^
14. 01:13:378 (1,1) - Make a larger distance between them, I recommend moving 01:13:378 (1) to a bit to the left, so there will be a lil' dash effect
15. 01:33:984 (1) - Move a bit to the left for dash effect because of the start of Kiai Time!
16. 01:43:680 (1,2,3) - *This seems interesting.
17. 01:47:923 (3,1) - Distance between them can be bigger?
18. 01:52:772 (3,1) - ^
19. 02:01:711 (1) - You should make this slider curved more, maybe *example (it looks much better)
20. 02:12:469 (4,5) - The distance between them should be enlarged so that dash effect is right there, try reallocating the note placement and make it something similar to *this.
21. 02:12:772 (5) - NC it, because there are quite a lot of banana falling onto the catcher platter in the spinner after this note.
22. 02:25:196 (1) - Cut the spinner because the note distance between this note and 02:26:408 (1) is very small, you can just add a long slider there.
23. 02:53:984 (4) - NC, reason is similar to 02:12:772 (5)
24. 03:35:801 (2,1) - Distance between this two can be smaller, I deem that hyperdash in Salad is not really preferable... Consider *this.
25. 03:44:741 (1) - Same as 02:01:711 (1)
26. 03:54:590 (1,2,3,4,5) - Just the Ctrl+H'ed version of 02:12:469 (4,5)
27. 03:55:802 (5) - NC for spinner
28. 03:56:104 (1) - It should stop at 04:00:044 so that there is sufficient time for player to shift back to catching the notes
29. 04:03:074 (1) - ^, stop at 04:04:892
30. 04:07:923 (1,2,1,2) - Change the patterns of these sliders to make it much more interesting, what it is right now is: Repeating the pattern of left, right, left, right

1. 00:43:529 (2) - Remove HDash here because of consistency with the previous patterns (they have no HDashes), otherwise it will be pretty awkward to have a sudden HDash
2. 00:44:135 (4) - ^
3. 00:54:893 (2,1) - Why not adding a HDash between them?
4. 01:46:559 (2) - Same as 00:43:529 (2)
5. 01:47:165 (4) - ^
   
   The Kiai Time part behind is pretty hard as a Platter in my opinion... Somehow I would say it is a Rain, change most of them, and remove HDashes except the last note of each combo.
   
6. 03:55:801 (5) - NC
   
   Overall, Platter is quite nice except the Kiai Time around the last part. Maybe it is the style problem lol.

1. 00:16:863 (3) - Not suiting the audio background, I recommend changing it into 1/2s
2. 00:54:893 (2,1) - HDash between them?
3. 01:18:832 (5) - NC here? There is 1/4 streams behind
4. 01:21:257 (5) - If you applied the previous mod, apply it to this as well
5. 01:23:681 (5) - ^
6. 01:24:060 (6,7,8) - So weird here because of the broken stream, brandish it
7. 01:28:529 (5) - NC
8. 02:17:317 - Why there have no notes here and 02:17:469?
9. 02:37:923 (3) - NC and remove NC at 02:38:529 (1)
10. 03:55:801 (7) - NC
    
    Evil rain, I can't mod the distance because of the style :c

Salad

1. 00:57:014 (2) - 여기 휘슬을 빼고 00:56:408 (1) - 여기에다 휘슬을 넣는게 더 괜찮을것 같네요.
2. 00:58:832 (1,2) - 여기도 위와 마찬가지로... 그래야 바로 뒤에오는 반복파트에 넣으신 힛사랑 비슷해 질거 같네요.
3. 01:01:863 (2) - 여기는 01:04:288 (2) - 여기처럼 똑같이 클랩만 넣어주세요.
4. 01:19:438 (1,2,1,2,3) - 여기 일정하게 휘슬 넣으시다가 01:22:469 (2,3) - 여기만 일반 사운드니까 조금 어색한거 같아요. 2번 머리에만 클랩, 3번 서클에 휘슬 하시면 괜찮을거 같네요.
5. 01:52:772 (3) - 머리에 클랩 넣는게 개인적으로 어울린다고 생각해요. 하지만 03:35:801 (2) - 여기는 비슷한 부분인데도 불구하고 클랩 넣는게 조금 어색한거 같네요. 이건 일단 원하시는대로 하시는게 좋겠어요.
6. 02:07:620 - 여기 박자는 일부러 빼먹으신건가요? 03:50:650 - 도 마찬가지인것을 보니, 의도하신것 같긴 한데 넣는게 더 낫지 않을까요?
7. 02:38:832 (2) - 여기도 똑같이 뉴콤보 하시는건 어떤지요.
8. 03:43:679 (1,2,3,4) - 이파트는 아무래도 샐러드를 할만한 하위 플레이어들이 03:44:286 (3,4,1) - 이구간에서 실수를 많이할것 같은데 괜찮을지 모르겠네요.
9. 04:03:074 (1) - 이미 03:56:104 (1) - 여기서 스피너가 한번 더 나왔으니, 여긴 스피너보단 패턴을 추가하시는게 더 자연스러울것 같아요.