1. dhea_lsl's Insane (3,79 stars, 292 notes)
2. Insane (3,75 stars, 277 notes)
3. kuroan's Easy (1,66 stars, 99 notes)
4. natsume cilla's Hard (3,27 stars, 216 notes)
5. Normal (2,03 stars, 151 notes)

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Mood Breaker wrote:

Numpang modding yang insane nya yak

cihuy

00:03:236 (11,12,13) – urutan nya diganti ya jadi slider terus circle terus slider lagi


00:05:451 (7) – tambah reverse slider

00:09:679 (9) – sama ^

00:13:102 (12,13,14) – slider dipendekin sama ditambahin note seperti digambar


00:16:524 (8) – ditambah reverse slider sebelumnya sama 00:17:129 (1) – circle pindah ke akhir slider sblm nya


00:23:370 (3) – arahin slidernya keatas aja

00:24:377 (5,6,7) – ganti ke pola kayak digambar


circle nmr 7 diakhir slider

00:26:390 (1) – pindah circle kesini


00:28:605 (8) – tambah reverse slider

00:29:209 (9) – setelah circle ini ditambah circle lagi dengan cara ditumpuk sma dengan 00:29:612 (11) –


00:30:820 (2,3) – pola aku bikin seperti ini


cicle nmr 3 diakhir slider

00:34:243 (5) – tambah reverse slider

00:35:853 remove circle

00:36:054 tambah circle dengan pola seperti ini


circle 11 di taro sama dengan posisi 10. kemudian circle 12 arah naik ke slider berikutnya

00:42:296 tambah circle dengan pola seperti ini


00:45:719 tambah circle ditumpuk sama circle sblm nya

00:54:176 (1) – add inheriting, kiai start, setelahnya ada inheriting lagi, itu dipakai buat matiin kiai lalu ada inheriting section berikutnya dibiarkan nyala kiainya.

segini dlu aja ya dam....
oh ya ane tunggu diff normal nya

naoe dami wrote:

Mood Breaker wrote:

Numpang modding yang insane nya yak

segini dlu aja ya dam....
oh ya ane tunggu diff normal nya

Makasih dim, padahal mo ane update lg :v

Blanc Kisaragi wrote:

Saya bisa gd taiko Kantan tapi itu bisa lama dan jika kamu butuh itu...

dhea_lsl wrote:

GD done, sorry for the late post

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 997
Countdown: 1
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Outotsu Kaiketsu Sensation (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Outotsu Kaiketsu Sensation (TV Size)
Artist:Ayame & Yurika
ArtistUnicode:Ayame & Yurika
Creator:naoe dami
Version:dhea_lsl's Insane
Source:Jinsei
Tags:anime ost op opening
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
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dhea_lsl wrote:

iya sama2 kk, diperbaiki aja klo ada yg kurang pas :3
huehue, maap dopost, sy gatau cara delete post yg satunya -_-

kuroanchan wrote:

here my gd

fm4a93au04 wrote:

kuroan's Easy

For a beginner’s diff , I think it is a little hard for them 0.0” .

First , spacing should be consistent . sometimes you use x1.2 but sometimes x1.5 or other . It should be avoid .

Second , why don’t use S:C1-C ( S:C1 Clap ) in Easy ? If you think it not fit this song , then use more S:C1-W in this diff . I think that is not bad .

Anyway , I will use spacing x1.0 to make a mod ( I think x1.0 is best , near object are also well to beginner . x1.2 is also good , but plz make it consistent at x1.2 ) . All I do is just reference , If you don’t like then just ignore . ( that also can use x1.2 to compose ) .

If it offend you , then sorry . I just want to help you and share some ideas of mine .

00:00:417 (1) – Delete it and make a startment at 00:01:021 is better . Or , shorten it to 00:01:021 and add S-F ( Soft Finish ) at end . Like :



00:02:632 – Here I prefer to make a once reverse slider to 00:03:840 . It match vocal very well .

00:04:242 (1,2,3) – Let them at 00:04:242 . 00:04:645 . 00:05:048 . Or :





00:05:652 (3) – If you want to emphasize vocal , then I recommend you let it start at 00:05:450 end at 00:06:256 and make a red point on it , like :



Since there is a curve on slider , that will make people feel like there was something on the curve , some sound on it . That is a illusion but useful =..= .

00:07:464 – Add a circle with S-F here .



00:10:283 (3) – Ctrl+H . S-F at end ( 00:10:685 . ) .

00:11:491 (5,6) – Here I will do some change . Just look the picture .





Something note worthy :

1. I add S:C1-F at 00:11:491 . 00:12:296 . 00:13:907 . 00:14:712 .

2. I add S:C1-W at 00:13:101 ( try to add it more at other place ~~ ! ) . Or S:C1-F also fine .

3. Last part I use 4 continuous click for a little end . It’s a little hard for beginner , but I think it is acceptable .

4. The last reverse slider is done with 1/4 beat divisor , but it just a slider not 3 click , so I think it is acceptable .



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00:16:726 – It is unnecessary for me . Or , add S:C1-W . I prefer to delete it =..= .

00:17:128 (1,2,3) – Just a reference :



Add some S:C1-W ( Whistle ) at them , like :

Lin ( - ) Lin ~ ( - ) ( - ) Lin ~ ( - ) Lin Lin ~ - > “ Lin “ is S:C1-W ,and add F at there head is also fine .

00:17:128 ~ 00:21:960 - Oh ~~~~~ I … @ # $ % !!!!!!! ( just look at the picture … he gonna crazy for the 3 cute girls on BG , so ignore ) .





Just … a idea fleeting in my brain …

00:19:544 (4) – S:C1-F at head .

00:20:350 (1,2,3) – Same as 00:17:128 (1,2,3) . 00:20:350 add S:C1-F . 3 add S:C1-F .

00:23:571 (1) – Why here add spinner ? I will delete it and add 2 circle at 00:23:571 . 00:25:182 . with S:C1-F . If you still want a spainner here , then shorten it to 00:25:182 and S:C1-F .

00:26:390 (1) – Devise into a slider and a circle is better imo , since there are no long sound here .

00:27:598 (2,3,4,5) – Add more sound here , some C and W . Most important is 5’s end add a S:C1-F ( also mean as F ) .

00:30:820 (1) – F at end .

00:32:028 (2) – Delete it to match first round , since in first round here ( 00:25:585 ~ 00:25:987 ) is no object .

00:34:041 (4) – Here you want to match vocal ? I think it don’t mach so well . If want match vocal very well , it will be like that :



Too hard for Easy ~ So , I prefer to make a normal slider here .



00:34:846 (1) – I prefer to delete it , and make a once reverse slider to 00:36:054 . Something like this :



Spinner is very very very very …… hard to compose fine in Easy diff . First it should be long enough ( +1000 at least , Easy maybe +3000 ) ; Second , the next object can’t appear too fast , or beginner can’t click it . So here , I recommend a reverse slider .

00:37:665 – Add a circle ?

00:38:068 (1) – prev : x1.92 . previous object are far from this , but , it is Easy . If in Normal , it maybe is accepetable , but Easy should be consistent its’ spacing .

00:40:887 – Add something ?

00:41:289 (3,4) – Change they into a long slider is fit a lot imo .



00:42:497 – Add something to match vocal ( the “ yes ~ yes ! “ sound ) .

00:44:108 (3) – Change into a circle at 00:44:108 .

00:44:913 (4) – Make it start at 00:44:511 and end at 00:45:316 .

If you follow above 2 suggestion , then last change 2 and 3’s gradation .



00:46:122 (1) – Make it match vocal and delete 2 .



A short reverse slider = a long - pressing circle , so I think it is accptable in Easy .

00:47:732 (1) – Same as 00:46:122 (1) .

00:49:343 (2) – Move it to 00:48:940 .

00:49:343 ~ 00:50:752 – Use Easy’s pattern can’t match the vocal well at here . So , I suggest that follow the main rhythm .

00:52:564 (3,4) – Make a reverse it better imo .

00:54:175 (1,2) – Same problem . You can’t match vocal well in Easy’s pattern , so I suggest follow the main rhythm .

If follow vocal , it will be like that :



But it too hard so :



Or another way :



00:57:397 (1,2) – Same . 00:54:175 (1,2) .

00:59:410 – Add something ? Or make a slider from 00:59:007 to here . The another way is move 00:59:813 (4) to here and make a reverse .

01:00:618 (1,2) – Same . 00:54:175 (1,2) .

01:02:229 (3,4,5) – Change their gradation , don’t make here ( 01:03:840 ) as a slider’s end , since here ( 01:03:840 ) is a startment to next part , so don’t let it as a end . Maybe like this :



01:05:450 (3,4) – I prefer to make a long reverse here .



It match the vocal and also easy to connect with next object .

01:07:061 (1,2) - Same . 00:54:175 (1,2) .

01:09:880 – Add something ? Or make a slider from 00:59:007 to here .

01:12:296 (4) –Make a reverse .

01:07:061 ~ 01:22:162 – Follow the same pattern above to fix this part . Choose what you like as reference , ignore what you dislike . 以上 ~~~~~ !!!!! < - These chinese words is mean as “ That’s all ~~~~~ !!! “ Ha Ha ~~ @ㄦ@ “

@ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “

01:23:169 (2,3) - …… Just kill them no mercy plz ……and maybe 01:21:558 (1,1) can change into a reverse .

fm4a93au04 wrote:

Hi , from my queue .

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

As my rule , I can't mod Insane diff , sorry ...... .

General

00:01:021 ~ 00:16:323 - kiai time ?

BG

The picture ... why her face ...... oh , just look at the picture .



Plz avoid this =..= .

kuroan's Easy

For a beginner’s diff , I think it is a little hard for them 0.0” .

First , spacing should be consistent . sometimes you use x1.2 but sometimes x1.5 or other . It should be avoid .

Second , why don’t use S:C1-C ( S:C1 Clap ) in Easy ? If you think it not fit this song , then use more S:C1-W in this diff . I think that is not bad .

Anyway , I will use spacing x1.0 to make a mod ( I think x1.0 is best , near object are also well to beginner . x1.2 is also good , but plz make it consistent at x1.2 ) . All I do is just reference , If you don’t like then just ignore . ( that also can use x1.2 to compose ) .

If it offend you , then sorry . I just want to help you and share some ideas of mine .

00:00:417 (1) – Delete it and make a startment at 00:01:021 is better . Or , shorten it to 00:01:021 and add S-F ( Soft Finish ) at end . Like :



00:02:632 – Here I prefer to make a once reverse slider to 00:03:840 . It match vocal very well .

00:04:242 (1,2,3) – Let them at 00:04:242 . 00:04:645 . 00:05:048 . Or :





00:05:652 (3) – If you want to emphasize vocal , then I recommend you let it start at 00:05:450 end at 00:06:256 and make a red point on it , like :



Since there is a curve on slider , that will make people feel like there was something on the curve , some sound on it . That is a illusion but useful =..= .

00:07:464 – Add a circle with S-F here .



00:10:283 (3) – Ctrl+H . S-F at end ( 00:10:685 . ) .

00:11:491 (5,6) – Here I will do some change . Just look the picture .





Something note worthy :

1. I add S:C1-F at 00:11:491 . 00:12:296 . 00:13:907 . 00:14:712 .

2. I add S:C1-W at 00:13:101 ( try to add it more at other place ~~ ! ) . Or S:C1-F also fine .

3. Last part I use 4 continuous click for a little end . It’s a little hard for beginner , but I think it is acceptable .

4. The last reverse slider is done with 1/4 beat divisor , but it just a slider not 3 click , so I think it is acceptable .



-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

00:16:726 – It is unnecessary for me . Or , add S:C1-W . I prefer to delete it =..= .

00:17:128 (1,2,3) – Just a reference :



Add some S:C1-W ( Whistle ) at them , like :

Lin ( - ) Lin ~ ( - ) ( - ) Lin ~ ( - ) Lin Lin ~ - > “ Lin “ is S:C1-W ,and add F at there head is also fine .

00:17:128 ~ 00:21:960 - Oh ~~~~~ I … @ # $ % !!!!!!! ( just look at the picture … he gonna crazy for the 3 cute girls on BG , so ignore ) .





Just … a idea fleeting in my brain …

00:19:544 (4) – S:C1-F at head .

00:20:350 (1,2,3) – Same as 00:17:128 (1,2,3) . 00:20:350 add S:C1-F . 3 add S:C1-F .

00:23:571 (1) – Why here add spinner ? I will delete it and add 2 circle at 00:23:571 . 00:25:182 . with S:C1-F . If you still want a spainner here , then shorten it to 00:25:182 and S:C1-F .

00:26:390 (1) – Devise into a slider and a circle is better imo , since there are no long sound here .

00:27:598 (2,3,4,5) – Add more sound here , some C and W . Most important is 5’s end add a S:C1-F ( also mean as F ) .

00:30:820 (1) – F at end .

00:32:028 (2) – Delete it to match first round , since in first round here ( 00:25:585 ~ 00:25:987 ) is no object .

00:34:041 (4) – Here you want to match vocal ? I think it don’t mach so well . If want match vocal very well , it will be like that :



Too hard for Easy ~ So , I prefer to make a normal slider here .



00:34:846 (1) – I prefer to delete it , and make a once reverse slider to 00:36:054 . Something like this :



Spinner is very very very very …… hard to compose fine in Easy diff . First it should be long enough ( +1000 at least , Easy maybe +3000 ) ; Second , the next object can’t appear too fast , or beginner can’t click it . So here , I recommend a reverse slider .

00:37:665 – Add a circle ?

00:38:068 (1) – prev : x1.92 . previous object are far from this , but , it is Easy . If in Normal , it maybe is accepetable , but Easy should be consistent its’ spacing .

00:40:887 – Add something ?

00:41:289 (3,4) – Change they into a long slider is fit a lot imo .



00:42:497 – Add something to match vocal ( the “ yes ~ yes ! “ sound ) .

00:44:108 (3) – Change into a circle at 00:44:108 .

00:44:913 (4) – Make it start at 00:44:511 and end at 00:45:316 .

If you follow above 2 suggestion , then last change 2 and 3’s gradation .



00:46:122 (1) – Make it match vocal and delete 2 .



A short reverse slider = a long - pressing circle , so I think it is accptable in Easy .

00:47:732 (1) – Same as 00:46:122 (1) .

00:49:343 (2) – Move it to 00:48:940 .

00:49:343 ~ 00:50:752 – Use Easy’s pattern can’t match the vocal well at here . So , I suggest that follow the main rhythm .

00:52:564 (3,4) – Make a reverse it better imo .

00:54:175 (1,2) – Same problem . You can’t match vocal well in Easy’s pattern , so I suggest follow the main rhythm .

If follow vocal , it will be like that :



But it too hard so :



Or another way :



00:57:397 (1,2) – Same . 00:54:175 (1,2) .

00:59:410 – Add something ? Or make a slider from 00:59:007 to here . The another way is move 00:59:813 (4) to here and make a reverse .

01:00:618 (1,2) – Same . 00:54:175 (1,2) .

01:02:229 (3,4,5) – Change their gradation , don’t make here ( 01:03:840 ) as a slider’s end , since here ( 01:03:840 ) is a startment to next part , so don’t let it as a end . Maybe like this :



01:05:450 (3,4) – I prefer to make a long reverse here .



It match the vocal and also easy to connect with next object .

01:07:061 (1,2) - Same . 00:54:175 (1,2) .

01:09:880 – Add something ? Or make a slider from 00:59:007 to here .

01:12:296 (4) –Make a reverse .

01:07:061 ~ 01:22:162 – Follow the same pattern above to fix this part . Choose what you like as reference , ignore what you dislike . 以上 ~~~~~ !!!!! < - These chinese words is mean as “ That’s all ~~~~~ !!! “ Ha Ha ~~ @ㄦ@ “

@ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “ @ㄦ@ “

01:23:169 (2,3) - …… Just kill them no mercy plz ……and maybe 01:21:558 (1,1) can change into a reverse .

Normal

Why use CS4 ? It is not common in Normal diff .

But , I think it is acceptable …

And one important thing … WHY DON’T ADD SOME FINISH SOUND ~~~~~

There are almost no sound in Easy so I’m a little sensitive now … sorry .

Let’s start =..=“ ……

AR can higher .

00:01:021 (2,3,4) – Make them gain more relevance . Like symmetry :



00:04:242 (9,10,11) – Same :



Use some easy copy and ctrl+h ctrl+j and rotate to gain this .

00:06:256 (5,6,7) – Make them a symmetry or something . ( do this at other similar place ) .

00:06:256 (5,6) – S:C1-F ( inish ) .

00:08:873 (10,11,12) – I make some change here . Just for a reference .



00:17:934 (3,4,5) – More relevance . Symmetry or something else .

00:21:961 (5) – Change to a circle , and it will be a powerful end .

00:23:169 (6) –NC .

00:27:598 (3) – Spacing ( prev : x0.8 ) . Make it near x1.4 .

00:34:846 (4,5) – A idea …… :



Copy and rotate 120. to gain this =..= . It’s a easy idea , try to compose better then I .

00:39:075 – Add a circle .

00:42:497 (1,2,3) – More relevance .

00:45:316 (7) – Blanket ? If so then better .

00:46:122 (1,2) – I don’t recommend this ( overlap at slider’s end ) . It’s not necessary .

00:54:175 (2,3,4) – Symmetry .

00:56:390 ~ 00:56:793 – Make a long slider here .

01:01:424 (8) – Scale it to 01:01:826 . Delete 9 and add a circle at 01:02:028 .

01:02:632 (11) – move it to 01:02:833 , and do a overlap at its’ head . Last , move 01:03:236 (12) to 01:03:437 and remove reverse . When you finish , they will be like :



01:21:558 (5,6) – I prefer to make a spinner start at here and end at 01:22:766 .

There is not big problem on rhythm and sound , so I think you can improve your composing , try to make more symmetry or something to gain more relevance .

Good luck to your map ~

SeNoZinD wrote:

From the Rakutenshi Modding Queue~ (SeNoZinD)

General
What a cute song :3


Easy
00:07:464 - Consider adding a circle here for the vocals
00:42:900 (1,2) - Perfect this blanket ^.^
00:59:410 - Consider adding a circle here for the vocals again :3
01:15:920 (4,1) - Perfect blanket


Normal
Consider a smaller CS. 3.5 maybe
00:22:766 - Consider adding a pattern like this to match the vocals http://puu.sh/bhm3p/829c77079d.jpg
Just a general note, consider adding in more new combos. Seems like some combos go quite high for a normal diff


natsume cilla's Hard
00:37:464 (5) - Ctrl-G would help flow
00:47:934 (2) - Maybe remove this?
01:12:297 (7) - Make this slider longer, it'll be more in sync with the music http://puu.sh/bhmDT/71d985325e.jpg


Insane
Nothing here to say, its well made


dhea_lsl's Insane
00:16:525 (5) - MAYBE turn this slider to face the stream?
01:17:733 (5,6) - Ctrl-g for flow
Not much to say here, but as a general note, some of the jumps are a bit extreme. consider toning down a few


I hope this helped you!!

SeNoZinD wrote:

Easy
00:07:464 - Consider adding a circle here for the vocals
00:42:900 (1,2) - Perfect this blanket ^.^
00:59:410 - Consider adding a circle here for the vocals again :3
01:15:920 (4,1) - Perfect blanket

kuroanchan wrote:

SeNoZinD wrote:

Easy
00:07:464 - Consider adding a circle here for the vocals
00:42:900 (1,2) - Perfect this blanket ^.^
00:59:410 - Consider adding a circle here for the vocals again :3
01:15:920 (4,1) - Perfect blanket

thx~
EDIT: dam, updated

1. I strongly recommend that you find a louder .mp3 file. Please compare your mp3 to the other osu! maps. It needs to be louder.
2. Please add custom combo colors!
3. It is more accurate to map with the Grid Size 4, so please Ctrl+1 in all difficulties prior to mapping!
4. The correct offset is at 00:01:021 -. This is where the downbeat occurs.
5. The first chorus starts at 00:54:175 -. Please consider adding a Kiai time here.

1. 01:00:618 (1,2) - The 1/2 slider repeat pattern is off. Notice how the 2nd vocal occurs immediately on the next 1/2 when your slider starts on the next 1/1. Please try using a different pattern throughout the mapset for increased playability.
2. 00:34:846 (6,2) - This is unrankable because the slider start of slider 2 is hidden behind the slider track of slider 6. Do not do this.

1. Please check your new combos, like e.g: 01:13:504 (7) -. For Normal, try to never go above Combo number 8. I usually stick around 4-7.

1. For patterns like 00:20:350 (1,2,3) -, these need to be properly stacked behind the slider. To do this, Ctrl+G the slider to get the exact coordinates needed to place the next circles. Do this for all similar patterns.

1. Honestly, I do not think the AR should be this high with the slider velocity of 1.50x and 149bpm. Please consider A: Reducing the AR or B: Increasing the SV.

1. Easy is missing the 1st kiai time ( 00:01:021 to 00:16:323 )
2. The map has some issues with the blanketing. Try to use approach circle ( with 1/4 or 1/8 distance divisor to check blanketing) i will show an example below. I hope you understand the method

SPOILER

General: -

00:00:417 (1,2) - Fix blanket . look here: http://puu.sh/bt78b/a2b9014d81.png see the approach circle how it is not in same curve as the slider's ? Make it look beautiful like this : http://puu.sh/bt7bu/1fb86bd8f5.png ( btw use tiny grid )
00:01:826 (3,4) - having sliders end or start on red ticks here sounds awkward. i recommend shorten 00:01:826 (3) 1/2 > then move 00:02:833 (4) to 00:02:632 > and then add a circle @ 00:03:840 ( keep them in the same combo color ) > after you fix that make a better blanket on these two :00:01:826 (3,4)
00:05:048 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:05:450 (4,1) - stack on slider(4) tail > then fix the blanket on these : 00:06:658 (5,1)
00:07:867 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:11:088 (5) - NC
00:11:491 (6,7) - fix blanket
00:18:739 (3,4) - blanket a bit better
00:23:571 (1) - due to low AR the following slider appears under the spinner and it is kinda confusing . Shorten the spinner so it ends @ 00:25:182 - where i think it should , since there is a strong beat there !
00:28:806 (5,6) - make them 100% parallel
00:33:638 (4) - NC
00:33:638 (4,6) - blanket a bit better (in this case you cant see the approach circle and the slider together so lower the AR to 0 , fix the blanket and then revert the AR change )
00:34:846 (6,2) - this kind of overlap may be a bit confusing for an easy map. i suggest you separate them .
00:39:679 (2,3) - blanket a bit better
00:40:887 (3,4) - ^
00:42:497 (1,2) - rotate a bit to make a nice blanket !
00:44:511 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:46:122 (1,2) - blanket a bit better
00:47:330 (2,1) - ^
00:54:981 (2,3) - make them 100% parallel
00:54:981 (2,3) - not sure about this stack if readable on easy.
00:58:203 (2,5) - the overlap doesn't look nice. try to make a blanket overlap
01:00:618 (1,2) - parallel issue ^^
01:02:229 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:02:229 (3,5) - note perfectly stacked. ( to do so. ctrl+g the slider (move it a little bit so it gets a location on the grid) then stack circle 3 > then ctrl+G the slider again to get it back how it was ( make sure after to copy-paste slider (5) and replace 01:02:632 (4) so they are identical )
01:04:242 (1,2) - blanket a bit better
01:13:504 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:13:504 (1,3) - overlap looks bad
01:19:142 (4,5) - blanket a bit better

SPOILER

General:

1. The map feels like it was not mapped with care.
2. The map itself doesn't feel like a normal map, its too hard to be one.
3. Also according to AiMod and me playing the map. the maps has inconsistent spacing, which is something that should not be happening with a normal map. Easy and Normal must preferably be mapped on a constant distance snap.

Due to these issue above i will not mod the map coz i will just end up typing a wall of text 2 or 3 times more than the Easy diff.

Will drop a few suggestions here:
1. Fix all the overlaps ( the ones that are caused because of the distance snap you can ignore them )
2. Try to reduce the amount of circles/ slider on red ticks as they cause the map diff to go higher and make the map confusing for new players.
3. Check all your blankets to make sure they are as perfect as possible ( read the above mod for a how to blanket )
4. Check for notes not stacked properly. ( even if a circle is slightly off try to perfectly stack it )
5. 00:49:343 (1,1) - shorten the spinner so it doesn't overlap with the following notes.
6. Check your color combos ( they are too high ) . a way i choose to put a new color combo is by following the vocals. When the singer starts a new line from the lyrics i put a new combo. ( i don't know the lyrics to all song but i am sure you can listen and understand when they end. its very easy )
7. Add a circle here 01:22:766 -
8. CS -1

SPOILER

General:

1. The diff has issue with inconsistent spacing. Not necessarily need to be all mapped in a constant ds like easy/normal but you still got to at some parts . please check the map and fix the unnecessary higher/lower spacing.
2. I highly recommend you work a bit on the aesthetic part of the map coz at some parts the map doesn't look appealing. try to create some more nice patterns.

00:12:296 (6) - NC
00:15:518 (5,6,7) - you got the beat here a bit wrong the middle beat is @ 00:15:820 - not 00:15:719 . So i suggest you change them to this: http://puu.sh/bue4L/b67ee94aad.png
00:20:350 (1,2,3) -fix stack
00:22:766 (10) - NC > 00:23:572 (1) - remove NC
00:28:404 (8) - NC
00:34:846 (6) - NC
00:37:464 (5) - NC
00:47:733 (6) - NC
00:56:391 (7,8) - fix blanket
01:00:619 (4) - NC > 01:02:430 (1) - remove NC > 01:03:840 (9) - NC
01:01:424 (6,8) - stack better
01:08:269 (5) - NC > remove NC > 01:10:082 (9) - NC
01:17:531 (7) - NC
01:22:564 (7) - NC

SPOILER

General:

1. There is and unsnapped inherited points @ 00:32:846
2. This diff also could use some works on the aesthetics part

00:11:692 (1,2,3,4) - don;t know if you tried to mirror or not . either way , make mirror with them
00:15:619 (1,2,3,4) - why create your own rhythm if there is already one ? > 00:15:619 (1,2) - remove > 00:15:820 (8) move to 00:15:820 ! sounds perfect this way
00:16:927 (13) - remove. its unnecessary. the beat ends @ 00:16:826 there is not beat @ 00:16:927 . ( also try to align them so they are in a straight line )
00:17:129 (1,2,3,4) - again the mirror issue. make them perfectly mirrored. ctrl+H
00:21:961 (8) - replace with 1 circle. The beat here must be clicked one as it is a strong beat .Also increase the spacing a bit :3
00:28:404 (6,7) - this overlap doesn't look nice. fix it
00:36:458 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - i would keep the spacing between these the same
00:40:082 (4,5) - pls no touch
00:41:088 (7) - tiny curved reversed slider doesn't look that nice as you may think change it
00:42:498 (1,2) - no touch T^T... make a nice blanket instead
00:47:733 (5,2) - they touch no touch pls
00:49:545 (1) -this is an ugly reverse slider change it
00:59:008 (2,3,4) - mirrors !!!
01:00:619 (1,2,3,4) - not identical flipped mirror.copy paste and then use 2x ctrl + > or <
01:03:840 (5) - NC
01:04:243 (6,7,8,1) - this part sounds too passive. follow the the lyrics here 100%. . Suggestion : Delete 01:04:242 (6,7,8) - and put 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + 1 circle > then delete 01:05:249 (1) - and you are g2g
01:07:061 (2,3,4,5) - i wouldn't recommend spacing triplets away from the kick slider. Stick em together like a stream.
01:08:270 (1,2) - not perfect mirror. use ctrl+J
01:12:095 (3,4) - Y U DO DIS ? no toucherino pls
01:13:706 (2,4) - use 2x ctrl+ <
01:19:041 (6) - remove > 01:19:343 (8) change into 1 circle > then ad some space between them. Don't forget to fix the combo color if you change !
01:19:746 (9,1) - doesn't follow the lyrics as it should since it sounds nicer. > remove 01:20:149 (1) and move 01:19:746 (9) to 01:19:947
01:21:357 (6) - the beat on the tail has to be clicked. it is the end of the song and the beat here must be together with these: 01:21:860 (7,8) . So i recommend : 01:20:954 (5) - turn into a reverse slider > add a note @ 01:21:558 then make a nice pattern . something like this : http://puu.sh/bujjA/aeb9ec7c02.png
01:21:860 (2,3) - note perfectly mirrored ( use ctrl+h on (2) )
01:22:364 (4,5) - stack (4) on to or (5)

SPOILER

General:
THE MAP IS FULL OF UNSNAPPED SLIDER ENDS did you change the sv/sv multiplier ? Check AiMod ( ctrl+shift+A )
1. The map is also full or long color combos.


00:01:021 (3,4) - fix blanket. you can do it using the approach circle like this ( may have to lower AR to be visible) : http://puu.sh/bukad/3199b76210.png
00:02:229 (7) - NC
00:05:450 (7) - NC
00:08:672 (7) - NC
00:09:075 (8,9) - doesn't flow really well. i recommend curve the slider the opposite side and ctrl+G . Like this: http://puu.sh/bukhr/7bb09cabe5.png
00:10:283 (10) - NC
00:12:095 (8) - NC
00:12:498 (11,12,13) - the flow here also bad.feels very uncomfortable. don't have anything in mind to fix it
00:16:524 (8) - NC
00:18:337 (8,9) - fix blanket
00:21:558 (8,9) - blanket a bit better
00:23:974 (5) - NC
00:25:585 (11) - NC > 00:26:390 (1) - remove NC > 00:26:793 (2) - NC
00:28:404 (7) - NC
00:28:605 (8,9) - fix blanket
00:32:028 (5) - NC> 00:32:833 (1) - remove NC > 00:33:236 (2) - NC
00:34:847 (6) - NC
00:37:666 (5) - NC
00:43:706 (9) - NC
00:59:209 (5) - NC
00:59:612 (8) - i would move it a bit more up-left for a better flow
01:08:270 (5) - NC
01:11:492 (7) - OR 01:12:095 (8) - NC i am not sure :/
01:14:713 (7) - NC
01:18:136 (8) - NC
01:18:337 (10,11) - blanket a bit better
01:18:538 (11,12) - why no blanket ?
01:19:948 (1,2) - not sure if tried for blanket but do it
01:20:752 (4,5) - blanket a bit better
01:21:558 (6) - NC

uuff that was a lot of work
hope the mod helps you coz there are some serious issue but they will be fixed eventually .
good luck !!

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

Kuroan's Easy

*00:11:491 (6,7) - This is blanketed weridly, fix ASAP.
**00:36:860 (2) - Make this start at the same place 00:34:846 (6) did.
**00:47:330 (2,1) - Blanketed wrong

Project Railgun wrote:

[kuroan]

1. 01:00:618 (1,2) - The 1/2 slider repeat pattern is off. Notice how the 2nd vocal occurs immediately on the next 1/2 when your slider starts on the next 1/1. Please try using a different pattern throughout the mapset for increased playability.
2. 00:34:846 (6,2) - This is unrankable because the slider start of slider 2 is hidden behind the slider track of slider 6. Do not do this.

neonat wrote:

kuroan's Easy

Lacking in hitsounds, please add them, especially in the later half of the song.
00:01:826 (3,4) - doesn't fit the rhythm of the song, change it to this:

SPOILER

00:11:491 (6,7) - blanket them
00:23:571 (1) - starts and ends in no-mans' land
00:34:846 (6,2) - this overlap is ugly
00:40:887 (3,1) - ^
01:02:229 (3,5) - not stacked properly
01:13:504 (1,3) - ugly overlap

Ntasuto wrote:

Easy

SPOILER

General: -

00:00:417 (1,2) - Fix blanket . look here: http://puu.sh/bt78b/a2b9014d81.png see the approach circle how it is not in same curve as the slider's ? Make it look beautiful like this : http://puu.sh/bt7bu/1fb86bd8f5.png ( btw use tiny grid )
00:01:826 (3,4) - having sliders end or start on red ticks here sounds awkward. i recommend shorten 00:01:826 (3) 1/2 > then move 00:02:833 (4) to 00:02:632 > and then add a circle @ 00:03:840 ( keep them in the same combo color ) > after you fix that make a better blanket on these two :00:01:826 (3,4)
00:05:048 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:05:450 (4,1) - stack on slider(4) tail > then fix the blanket on these : 00:06:658 (5,1)
00:07:867 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:11:088 (5) - NC
00:11:491 (6,7) - fix blanket
00:18:739 (3,4) - blanket a bit better
00:23:571 (1) - due to low AR the following slider appears under the spinner and it is kinda confusing . Shorten the spinner so it ends @ 00:25:182 - where i think it should , since there is a strong beat there !
00:28:806 (5,6) - make them 100% parallel
00:33:638 (4) - NC
00:33:638 (4,6) - blanket a bit better (in this case you cant see the approach circle and the slider together so lower the AR to 0 , fix the blanket and then revert the AR change )
00:34:846 (6,2) - this kind of overlap may be a bit confusing for an easy map. i suggest you separate them .
00:39:679 (2,3) - blanket a bit better
00:40:887 (3,4) - ^
00:42:497 (1,2) - rotate a bit to make a nice blanket !
00:44:511 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:46:122 (1,2) - blanket a bit better
00:47:330 (2,1) - ^
00:54:981 (2,3) - make them 100% parallel
00:54:981 (2,3) - not sure about this stack if readable on easy.
00:58:203 (2,5) - the overlap doesn't look nice. try to make a blanket overlap
01:00:618 (1,2) - parallel issue ^^
01:02:229 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:02:229 (3,5) - note perfectly stacked. ( to do so. ctrl+g the slider (move it a little bit so it gets a location on the grid) then stack circle 3 > then ctrl+G the slider again to get it back how it was ( make sure after to copy-paste slider (5) and replace 01:02:632 (4) so they are identical )
01:04:242 (1,2) - blanket a bit better
01:13:504 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:13:504 (1,3) - overlap looks bad
01:19:142 (4,5) - blanket a bit better

Project Railgun wrote:

Hello from Railgun's Quality Appreciation Queue,

[General]

1. I strongly recommend that you find a louder .mp3 file. Please compare your mp3 to the other osu! maps. It needs to be louder. I convert it to 150% sound
2. Please add custom combo colors! OK
3. It is more accurate to map with the Grid Size 4, so please Ctrl+1 in all difficulties prior to mapping! aye sir
4. The correct offset is at 00:01:021 -. This is where the downbeat occurs. well, maybe same as beat before
5. The first chorus starts at 00:54:175 -. Please consider adding a Kiai time here.if I adding that, it's too long kiai time

[kuroan]

1. 01:00:618 (1,2) - The 1/2 slider repeat pattern is off. Notice how the 2nd vocal occurs immediately on the next 1/2 when your slider starts on the next 1/1. Please try using a different pattern throughout the mapset for increased playability.
2. 00:34:846 (6,2) - This is unrankable because the slider start of slider 2 is hidden behind the slider track of slider 6. Do not do this.

[Normal]

1. Please check your new combos, like e.g: 01:13:504 (7) -. For Normal, try to never go above Combo number 8. I usually stick around 4-7. is 8 ok?

[natsume cilla]

1. For patterns like 00:20:350 (1,2,3) -, these need to be properly stacked behind the slider. To do this, Ctrl+G the slider to get the exact coordinates needed to place the next circles. Do this for all similar patterns. well, i'll do in some patterns

[Insane & dhea_lsl]

1. Honestly, I do not think the AR should be this high with the slider velocity of 1.50x and 149bpm. Please consider A: Reducing the AR or B: Increasing the SV. well...

Good luck.

neonat wrote:

General

Add 2000 to the AudioLeadIn in the .osu in Notepad for all difficulties. First object is at 00:00:417 which is too early at the start of the song, you need at least 2000ms before the first object OK
Use combo colours that suit the BG, the default ones don't work well, which you are currently using OK

kuroan's Easy

Lacking in hitsounds, please add them, especially in the later half of the song.
00:01:826 (3,4) - doesn't fit the rhythm of the song, change it to this:

SPOILER

00:11:491 (6,7) - blanket them
00:23:571 (1) - starts and ends in no-mans' land
00:34:846 (6,2) - this overlap is ugly
00:40:887 (3,1) - ^
01:02:229 (3,5) - not stacked properly
01:13:504 (1,3) - ugly overlap

Normal

Check your spacing, it's not constant, there are errors to them, check them one by one. You can already see that the spacing between 00:00:417 (1,2) and 00:01:021 (2,3) are different and 00:01:826 (4,5) are obviously too close to each other. Try to make them look as similar as possible throughout thanks, maybe at the last I blanket it
00:08:873 (4,5) - swap places, circle before slider; 00:09:477 (5) at 00:08:873 and 00:08:873 (4) starts at 00:09:075
00:17:128 (1) - finish on start of sliderno, sounds weird
00:20:350 (1) - ^ no
00:24:779 (9) - new combo it's 4th combo
00:26:390 (1) - remove new combo, place the new combo on 00:26:793 (2) i dont think so
00:32:833 (1) - remove finish well, i synchronized with the music
00:33:236 (2) - finish on start of slider
00:36:457 (1) - ^
00:38:068 (4) - ^
00:38:672 (5) - finish on end of slider
00:44:913 (6,7) - blanket them I'll fix it
01:07:061 (3) - finish on start of slider
01:13:504 (7) - new combo
01:22:766 - song should end here. Instead of 01:21:860 (6) have a circle at 01:21:860 and a slider from 01:22:162 to 01:22:766 nice idea

could look less messy and more structured

natsume cilla's Hard

Reduce the number of objects per combo, it's too long right now, have a NC every 4 beats or so

00:09:881 (9) - fits better when shifted to 00:10:081
00:17:934 (4,5,6) - not stacked perfectly fixed
00:20:350 (1,2,3) - ^ fixed
00:54:981 (3) - make it less curvy OK
01:01:424 (6,8) - not stacked fixed
01:05:451 (1) - less curvy, it's not looking nice, doesn't move well to 01:06:055 (2) either
01:21:961 (5) - off rhythm. It should be at 01:21:860

Needs more reworking and refining, the patterns aren't the best right now, it doesn't flow too well and playing it isn't that nice. Work on the easier ones, then try and implement similar polishing to the more difficult ones. You should work on getting these difficulties right first.

Good Luck thanks

Ntasuto wrote:

You modded my map and said you don't meet the requirement's for my M4M Q but you do
So i will mod your map.

General

1. Easy is missing the 1st kiai time ( 00:01:021 to 00:16:323 ) kuroan?
2. The map has some issues with the blanketing. Try to use approach circle ( with 1/4 or 1/8 distance divisor to check blanketing) i will show an example below. I hope you understand the method Thanks, cuz I still new in mappng (not newbie, but new)

Easy

SPOILER

General: -

00:00:417 (1,2) - Fix blanket . look here: http://puu.sh/bt78b/a2b9014d81.png see the approach circle how it is not in same curve as the slider's ? Make it look beautiful like this : http://puu.sh/bt7bu/1fb86bd8f5.png ( btw use tiny grid )
00:01:826 (3,4) - having sliders end or start on red ticks here sounds awkward. i recommend shorten 00:01:826 (3) 1/2 > then move 00:02:833 (4) to 00:02:632 > and then add a circle @ 00:03:840 ( keep them in the same combo color ) > after you fix that make a better blanket on these two :00:01:826 (3,4)
00:05:048 (3,4) - fix blanket
00:05:450 (4,1) - stack on slider(4) tail > then fix the blanket on these : 00:06:658 (5,1)
00:07:867 (2,3) - fix blanket
00:11:088 (5) - NC
00:11:491 (6,7) - fix blanket
00:18:739 (3,4) - blanket a bit better
00:23:571 (1) - due to low AR the following slider appears under the spinner and it is kinda confusing . Shorten the spinner so it ends @ 00:25:182 - where i think it should , since there is a strong beat there !
00:28:806 (5,6) - make them 100% parallel
00:33:638 (4) - NC
00:33:638 (4,6) - blanket a bit better (in this case you cant see the approach circle and the slider together so lower the AR to 0 , fix the blanket and then revert the AR change )
00:34:846 (6,2) - this kind of overlap may be a bit confusing for an easy map. i suggest you separate them .
00:39:679 (2,3) - blanket a bit better
00:40:887 (3,4) - ^
00:42:497 (1,2) - rotate a bit to make a nice blanket !
00:44:511 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:46:122 (1,2) - blanket a bit better
00:47:330 (2,1) - ^
00:54:981 (2,3) - make them 100% parallel
00:54:981 (2,3) - not sure about this stack if readable on easy.
00:58:203 (2,5) - the overlap doesn't look nice. try to make a blanket overlap
01:00:618 (1,2) - parallel issue ^^
01:02:229 (3,4) - fix blanket
01:02:229 (3,5) - note perfectly stacked. ( to do so. ctrl+g the slider (move it a little bit so it gets a location on the grid) then stack circle 3 > then ctrl+G the slider again to get it back how it was ( make sure after to copy-paste slider (5) and replace 01:02:632 (4) so they are identical )
01:04:242 (1,2) - blanket a bit better
01:13:504 (1,2) - fix blanket
01:13:504 (1,3) - overlap looks bad
01:19:142 (4,5) - blanket a bit better

Normal

SPOILER

General:

1. The map feels like it was not mapped with care.
2. The map itself doesn't feel like a normal map, its too hard to be one.
3. Also according to AiMod and me playing the map. the maps has inconsistent spacing, which is something that should not be happening with a normal map. Easy and Normal must preferably be mapped on a constant distance snap.

Due to these issue above i will not mod the map coz i will just end up typing a wall of text 2 or 3 times more than the Easy diff.
Right in my kokoro, senpai :')

Will drop a few suggestions here:
1. Fix all the overlaps ( the ones that are caused because of the distance snap you can ignore them ) Too many use that, so it makes me dependence with that
2. Try to reduce the amount of circles/ slider on red ticks as they cause the map diff to go higher and make the map confusing for new players. OK
3. Check all your blankets to make sure they are as perfect as possible ( read the above mod for a how to blanket ) I know the basic
4. Check for notes not stacked properly. ( even if a circle is slightly off try to perfectly stack it ) Yup
5. 00:49:343 (1,1) - shorten the spinner so it doesn't overlap with the following notes.
6. Check your color combos ( they are too high ) . a way i choose to put a new color combo is by following the vocals. When the singer starts a new line from the lyrics i put a new combo. ( i don't know the lyrics to all song but i am sure you can listen and understand when they end. its very easy )
7. Add a circle here 01:22:766 - I'm using slider, is it ok?
8. CS -1 'kay

natsume cilla's Hard

SPOILER

General:

1. The diff has issue with inconsistent spacing. Not necessarily need to be all mapped in a constant ds like easy/normal but you still got to at some parts . please check the map and fix the unnecessary higher/lower spacing.
2. I highly recommend you work a bit on the aesthetic part of the map coz at some parts the map doesn't look appealing. try to create some more nice patterns.

00:12:296 (6) - NC
00:15:518 (5,6,7) - you got the beat here a bit wrong the middle beat is @ 00:15:820 - not 00:15:719 . So i suggest you change them to this: http://puu.sh/bue4L/b67ee94aad.png
00:20:350 (1,2,3) -fix stack
00:22:766 (10) - NC > 00:23:572 (1) - remove NC
00:28:404 (8) - NC
00:34:846 (6) - NC
00:37:464 (5) - NC
00:47:733 (6) - NC
00:56:391 (7,8) - fix blanket I didn't make a blanket actually
01:00:619 (4) - NC > 01:02:430 (1) - remove NC > 01:03:840 (9) - NC
01:01:424 (6,8) - stack better
01:08:269 (5) - NC > remove NC > 01:10:082 (9) - NC
01:17:531 (7) - NC
01:22:564 (7) - NC no

dhea_lsl's Insane

SPOILER

General:

1. There is and unsnapped inherited points @ 00:32:846
2. This diff also could use some works on the aesthetics part

00:11:692 (1,2,3,4) - don;t know if you tried to mirror or not . either way , make mirror with them
00:15:619 (1,2,3,4) - why create your own rhythm if there is already one ? > 00:15:619 (1,2) - remove > 00:15:820 (8) move to 00:15:820 ! sounds perfect this way
00:16:927 (13) - remove. its unnecessary. the beat ends @ 00:16:826 there is not beat @ 00:16:927 . ( also try to align them so they are in a straight line )
00:17:129 (1,2,3,4) - again the mirror issue. make them perfectly mirrored. ctrl+H
00:21:961 (8) - replace with 1 circle. The beat here must be clicked one as it is a strong beat .Also increase the spacing a bit :3
00:28:404 (6,7) - this overlap doesn't look nice. fix it
00:36:458 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - i would keep the spacing between these the same
00:40:082 (4,5) - pls no touch
00:41:088 (7) - tiny curved reversed slider doesn't look that nice as you may think change it
00:42:498 (1,2) - no touch T^T... make a nice blanket instead
00:47:733 (5,2) - they touch no touch pls
00:49:545 (1) -this is an ugly reverse slider change it
00:59:008 (2,3,4) - mirrors !!!
01:00:619 (1,2,3,4) - not identical flipped mirror.copy paste and then use 2x ctrl + > or <
01:03:840 (5) - NC
01:04:243 (6,7,8,1) - this part sounds too passive. follow the the lyrics here 100%. . Suggestion : Delete 01:04:242 (6,7,8) - and put 1/2 slider + 1/2 slider + 1 circle > then delete 01:05:249 (1) - and you are g2g
01:07:061 (2,3,4,5) - i wouldn't recommend spacing triplets away from the kick slider. Stick em together like a stream.
01:08:270 (1,2) - not perfect mirror. use ctrl+J
01:12:095 (3,4) - Y U DO DIS ? no toucherino pls
01:13:706 (2,4) - use 2x ctrl+ <
01:19:041 (6) - remove > 01:19:343 (8) change into 1 circle > then ad some space between them. Don't forget to fix the combo color if you change !
01:19:746 (9,1) - doesn't follow the lyrics as it should since it sounds nicer. > remove 01:20:149 (1) and move 01:19:746 (9) to 01:19:947
01:21:357 (6) - the beat on the tail has to be clicked. it is the end of the song and the beat here must be together with these: 01:21:860 (7,8) . So i recommend : 01:20:954 (5) - turn into a reverse slider > add a note @ 01:21:558 then make a nice pattern . something like this : http://puu.sh/bujjA/aeb9ec7c02.png
01:21:860 (2,3) - note perfectly mirrored ( use ctrl+h on (2) )
01:22:364 (4,5) - stack (4) on to or (5)

well I still fix it, so thx for it

Insane

SPOILER

General:
THE MAP IS FULL OF UNSNAPPED SLIDER ENDS did you change the sv/sv multiplier ? Check AiMod ( ctrl+shift+A ) damn, I forget
1. The map is also full or long color combos.


00:01:021 (3,4) - fix blanket. you can do it using the approach circle like this ( may have to lower AR to be visible) : http://puu.sh/bukad/3199b76210.png
00:02:229 (7) - NC
00:05:450 (7) - NC
00:08:672 (7) - NC
00:09:075 (8,9) - doesn't flow really well. i recommend curve the slider the opposite side and ctrl+G . Like this: http://puu.sh/bukhr/7bb09cabe5.png
00:10:283 (10) - NC
00:12:095 (8) - NC
00:12:498 (11,12,13) - the flow here also bad.feels very uncomfortable. don't have anything in mind to fix it I'll blanket it
00:16:524 (8) - NC
00:18:337 (8,9) - fix blanket
00:21:558 (8,9) - blanket a bit better
00:23:974 (5) - NC
00:25:585 (11) - NC > 00:26:390 (1) - remove NC > 00:26:793 (2) - NC
00:28:404 (7) - NC
00:28:605 (8,9) - fix blanket
00:32:028 (5) - NC> 00:32:833 (1) - remove NC > 00:33:236 (2) - NC
00:34:847 (6) - NC
00:37:666 (5) - NC
00:43:706 (9) - NC
00:59:209 (5) - NC
00:59:612 (8) - i would move it a bit more up-left for a better flow
01:08:270 (5) - NC
01:11:492 (7) - OR 01:12:095 (8) - NC i am not sure :/
01:14:713 (7) - NC
01:18:136 (8) - NC
01:18:337 (10,11) - blanket a bit better
01:18:538 (11,12) - why no blanket ?
01:19:948 (1,2) - not sure if tried for blanket but do it
01:20:752 (4,5) - blanket a bit better
01:21:558 (6) - NC

nice, I use the NC cuz I still confused about it

uuff that was a lot of work
hope the mod helps you coz there are some serious issue but they will be fixed eventually .
good luck !!

any question regarding my mod or your map feel free to ask me in-game thx, it would be great for me

EDIT

naoe dami wrote:

Ntasuto wrote:

General

1. Easy is missing the 1st kiai time ( 00:01:021 to 00:16:323 ) kuroan?