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kakichoco - ifuudoudou

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Topic Starter
Suzuya Jyuzo
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年10月11日 at 15:41:04

Artist: kakichoco
Title: ifuudoudou
Tags: kakichoco ifuudoudou vocaloid shichoko niconico hentai hatsune miku gumi luka megpoid kagamine
BPM: 130
Filesize: 3155kb
Play Time: 03:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (3.49 stars, 348 notes)
  2. Insane (4.24 stars, 583 notes)
  3. Normal (1.77 stars, 188 notes)
Download: kakichoco - ifuudoudou
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my first beatmap <3
normal by me 100%
hard by me 100%
insane by me 100%
vedio is 绅(hen)士(tai) from http://www.bilibili.com/video/av614089/
2391645784
i guess it must be from bilibili http://www.bilibili.com/video/av614089/
police uncle ,this is the hentai!!!!
:) :) :) :) :) :) :)

ranked it! ,i support you on the spirit

wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Topic Starter
Suzuya Jyuzo
谢谢你的支持,会尽力的吧,毕竟算是第一次做图
2391645784

Suzuya Jyuzo wrote:

谢谢你的支持,会尽力的吧,毕竟算是第一次做图
是滴!! 加油 :) :) :) :)

我来帮你宣传
2391645784
啦啦啦 加油
Dex-OW9
Normal:

No Problem :)

Hard:

No problems seen 8-)

Insane:

01:01:006
01:01:402

It is highly recommended to set the combo far, Come a little
Topic Starter
Suzuya Jyuzo

Dex-OW9 wrote:

Normal:

No Problem :)

Hard:

No problems seen 8-)

Insane:

01:01:006
01:01:402

It is highly recommended to set the combo far, Come a little
thanks for the mod,I‘m change
Topic Starter
Suzuya Jyuzo

2391645784 wrote:

啦啦啦 加油
:) 图是做好了啊,想rank不是那么容易 sad,有什么意见可以提一下的哦~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦
Starfall9908
[Normal]
  1. 01:10:863 (1) - Delete that slider and put something different instead. It's too hard for newbies to read it.
  2. 01:14:325 (1) - Same thing here
  3. 01:15:940 (1,1) - and here
  4. 01:18:940 (2) - Here
  5. 01:21:248 (2) - delete the reverse arrow and make the slider 1/2 beat long
  6. 01:22:633 (1,2) - Same here
  7. 01:48:017 (1) - and here
  8. 02:05:325 (2) - same as 01:10:863 (1)
  9. 02:10:863 (2) - same thing
  10. 02:12:710 (2) - and here
  11. 02:16:402 (3) - Here too

    Thatsexyvideothough
Topic Starter
Suzuya Jyuzo

nadapan wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 01:10:863 (1) - Delete that slider and put something different instead. It's too hard for newbies to read it.
  2. 01:14:325 (1) - Same thing here
  3. 01:15:940 (1,1) - and here
  4. 01:18:940 (2) - Here
  5. 01:21:248 (2) - delete the reverse arrow and make the slider 1/2 beat long
  6. 01:22:633 (1,2) - Same here
  7. 01:48:017 (1) - and here
  8. 02:05:325 (2) - same as 01:10:863 (1)
  9. 02:10:863 (2) - same thing
  10. 02:12:710 (2) - and here
  11. 02:16:402 (3) - Here too

    Thatsexyvideothough
thanks for the mod <3
normal is upload,and i change short slider to note,delete some 1/2 note,as a new mapper ,i think im not good at make normal :(.
the vedio is hentai XD,uhhh...i think i will delete it ;)
2391645784
hard 难度可以改成 ar8, :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Tages可以多添加几个标签
source也可以加一些相关的标签

嗯,经常更新可以让更多人看到,即使是小更新
Topic Starter
Suzuya Jyuzo

2391645784 wrote:

hard 难度可以改成 ar8, :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Tages可以多添加几个标签
source也可以加一些相关的标签

嗯,经常更新可以让更多人看到,即使是小更新
:)
2391645784

Suzuya Jyuzo wrote:

2391645784 wrote:

hard 难度可以改成 ar8, :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Tages可以多添加几个标签
source也可以加一些相关的标签

嗯,经常更新可以让更多人看到,即使是小更新
:)
hard难度忘了加视频了啦 :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Topic Starter
Suzuya Jyuzo
视频太绅(hen)士(tai)了 ;) ,(虽然歌也很绅士向)rank规则好像不允许还是删掉了,要加的话自己加一下吧 :)
SkyDevil
Modding stuff

Normal
Ehrm I suggest you to use Distance spacing (check those number in the top right corner beneath 1/4 and the x and y axis while clicking on an object) you need to keep a certain spacing at easy's and normals.. you should definitly look into this

Also use new combo's every big white line, there are a few exceptions whenever the rhythm feels like it.

Can't say anything else since the diff is in a weird state, definitly looks better than my first maps tho

Hard
I think you should replace the new combo's, same as at normal: place them at every big white line (look at the timeline at the top of the screen)
Lower the approach rate by 1
00:30:940 (5) - make it 1/4 longer and place it onto (2) or somewhere else cause its right now weirdly above 00:32:094 (1) -
btw I suggest looking up something with the distance spacing here too cause it could clean up some patterns
00:33:479 (3,1) - you should really avoid putting them so weirdly close together, it doesn't fit that well
00:37:863 (6,7,1) - also this, two circles onto each other are okay but 3 is too much ( just place (1) somewhere else)
00:39:017 (1,2) - same case as the other one
00:41:556 (4,5,6) - triple circle thingy ;-;
02:00:479 - okay these random circles every few seconds are pretty weird to play, just remove them all and let the player take a break xD
02:22:633 (1,1) - why is the slider length so random owo? if you wanted to follow the vocals make it stop at the 2nd blue line (3 1/4's long)
02:25:402 (3) - to make it sync properly, move the circle at the top right corner (the one where it says 1/4) and move it a little bit back until it says 1/3, then make it a little bit shorter, now it syncs perfectly with the vocals

Insane
.. Approach rate 9 is way too high, should be 7.5
00:43:633 (10) - just give it the same length as (9) and remove the next circle
00:54:479 (8,9,10) - you just placed these three under 5 circles that just combo'd,, it will look really tacky and unreadable during playing and in editor it already looks weird,, just place them somewhere else..

... there are so many things i want to point out and i dont know where to start... I just think you should have a friend look through it and play it and ask him what's wrong about it,,, i think you should basically keep an eye on the distance spacing since it gives a base to work onto

gl with it
Topic Starter
Suzuya Jyuzo

SkyDevil wrote:

Modding stuff

Normal
Ehrm I suggest you to use Distance spacing (check those number in the top right corner beneath 1/4 and the x and y axis while clicking on an object) you need to keep a certain spacing at easy's and normals.. you should definitly look into this

Also use new combo's every big white line, there are a few exceptions whenever the rhythm feels like it.

Can't say anything else since the diff is in a weird state, definitly looks better than my first maps tho

Hard
I think you should replace the new combo's, same as at normal: place them at every big white line (look at the timeline at the top of the screen)
Lower the approach rate by 1
00:30:940 (5) - make it 1/4 longer and place it onto (2) or somewhere else cause its right now weirdly above 00:32:094 (1) -
btw I suggest looking up something with the distance spacing here too cause it could clean up some patterns
00:33:479 (3,1) - you should really avoid putting them so weirdly close together, it doesn't fit that well
00:37:863 (6,7,1) - also this, two circles onto each other are okay but 3 is too much ( just place (1) somewhere else)
00:39:017 (1,2) - same case as the other one
00:41:556 (4,5,6) - triple circle thingy ;-;
02:00:479 - okay these random circles every few seconds are pretty weird to play, just remove them all and let the player take a break xD
02:22:633 (1,1) - why is the slider length so random owo? if you wanted to follow the vocals make it stop at the 2nd blue line (3 1/4's long)
02:25:402 (3) - to make it sync properly, move the circle at the top right corner (the one where it says 1/4) and move it a little bit back until it says 1/3, then make it a little bit shorter, now it syncs perfectly with the vocals

Insane
.. Approach rate 9 is way too high, should be 7.5
00:43:633 (10) - just give it the same length as (9) and remove the next circle
00:54:479 (8,9,10) - you just placed these three under 5 circles that just combo'd,, it will look really tacky and unreadable during playing and in editor it already looks weird,, just place them somewhere else..

... there are so many things i want to point out and i dont know where to start... I just think you should have a friend look through it and play it and ask him what's wrong about it,,, i think you should basically keep an eye on the distance spacing since it gives a base to work onto

gl with it
Thanks for the mod :)
hard is update
normal : I need time to make a major changes
insane :I'm not change it. :( sorry, I think your rank can't MOD this diff
thanks again :)
neonat
General

Artist: 柿チョコ
Romanised: Kakichoco

Remove kakichoco ifuudoudou from tags
Remove hatsune miku gumi luka megpoid kagamine from tags as well because they aren't involved in this version
Add cover into the tags

Romanised Title is not 'ifuudoudou' or 'If You Do Do'

As according to the official video post: "If you do do ではありません"

Title should be "Pomp and Circumstance"

Official Source: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm19233263

Insane

00:24:710 (1,2,3,4) - the flow between 00:24:710 (1,2) is not good, you jerk upwards to do the stream, which is bad. Place the stream anywhere other than above the end of 00:24:710 (1) - best is below or directly beside it
00:26:556 (1,2) - sounds weird because it's very generalised, map to the streams, or at least 1/2 beats, because this sounds too empty
00:28:863 (5) - change this slider to have something start at 00:29:094 because the vocals here are important and something should start here instead of being in the middle of a slider
00:30:941 (5) - NC for slider velocity change indication, as well as put it in the middle of the pattern 00:30:018 (1,2,3,4) to make it look more uniform
00:36:480 (5,6) - blanket them
00:42:941 (9) - NC
00:44:786 (3) - slider end at 00:45:017 and add a note at 00:45:248 - the current rhythm doesn't fit the song
00:51:941 (5,6) - the angle is too acute, 00:52:172 (6) should be placed in a more decent angle, like x: 256 y: 152
00:53:095 (9) - place it more to the left of the end of 00:52:633 (8) instead of underneath it and towards the right, so that it flows better and movement is more smooth
00:55:864 (6,7,8,9) - make spacing between them look equal for better looking presentation
00:57:711 (1) - rotate more clockwise, same with 00:57:941 (2) - the flow gets awkward if the curve goes upwards and higher than the straight direction of the stream
01:00:480 (4) - NC
01:10:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - use more curves instead of straight lines, curves make flow better
01:11:440 (5,6) - this jump is too extreme, put them closer
01:15:249 (5) - NC for velocity change indication
01:17:095 (5) - ^ and blanket it with 01:16:056 (2) the curve is not pretty right now
01:17:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it more round, make it look nicer, this shape is ugly, doesn't look neat too
01:18:941 (7) - NC to show change in velocity
01:19:403 (8) - ^
01:25:403 (4) - NC
01:32:671 - continue the stream here because the vocals are here also and should be mapped
01:33:249 (3,4,5) - blanket better
01:39:017 (3) - slider should end at 01:39:248 with the vocals
01:42:710 (4) - remove the finishes on the 2nd and 3rd repeat, you should only have a finish on the end of the whole slider
01:45:710 (1) - use a better shape, you can then blanket 01:46:172 (2) as well
01:47:556 (9) - Ctrl + H this shape for better flow. NC should be here also, instead of 01:48:018 (1)
01:48:480 (3,4) - blanket
01:49:403 (6) - the slider is not in rhythm. Remove 01:49:864 (7) and make the repeat slider in 1/2 beat rhythm
01:50:787 (4) - the ends being not in same plane looks ugly
01:52:864 (1) - something should start at 01:53:094 with the vocals, not go over with this slider
02:08:556 (3,4,5) - make it a straight line
02:31:402 (6,1) - blanket them
02:32:326 (2) - slider should end at 02:32:556 to go with the music
02:32:902 (1) - slider starts late. Start at 02:32:786
02:49:403 (3,4,6,7) - repeat sliders are off-rhythm, they should be 1/2 repeat sliders, so the circles shouldn't be there at all
02:53:326 (6,1,1) - not in a straight line, it doesn't look good

Overall, I think the rhythm can be better, at times the rhythm is too simplistic, it does not go well with the song, just doesn't fit nicely. Map more to the vocals, it will help make it blend better to the song. Flow could be better, just try and move around and create imaginary lines to connect the parts together, that will really help in making a more fluid map.

Hard

00:30:940 (5,1) - you should not start 00:32:094 (1) behind the end of 00:30:940 (5) because the movement is not natural, you have to move the opposite direction to go to 00:32:094 (1) before moving back up again
00:34:633 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern looks disproportionate, 00:33:940 (1,2) should also be further apart
00:35:786 (1,2,3) - blanket better
00:36:940 (3,6) - must the overlap?
00:38:325 (1,2) - ^
00:44:786 (4) - slider should end at 00:45:017 and add a circle at 00:45:248 to fit the song better
00:47:095 (3,4) - this is bad flow
00:54:710 (5) - the flow should not be moving in this direction, according to the song, the slider moving in the left direction would flow better. You would have to move it elsewhere too
01:19:633 (1,2) - don't overlap
01:26:556 (6,7) - ^
01:27:479 (1,1) - don't touch each other
01:31:863 (5,1) - blanket them
01:33:248 (4,5) - bad flow
01:47:556 (5,2) - must the overlap?
01:47:556 (5,3) - ^
01:52:402 (5,1) - doesn't flow well with each other
02:14:556 (2) - this slider doesn't fit the song, the main beat is at 02:14:786
02:29:556 (1,2) - flow between them isn't good
02:34:172 (3,4) - bad flow
02:38:326 (5,1) - blanket them
02:44:095 (1,2) - too close to each other, not good for playing as well as doesn't look nice
02:48:249 (4,5) - ^
02:48:480 (5,2,3) - don't overlap
03:07:633 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - bland and boring rhythm to end the song, use more variety and less repeat sliders

Rhythm needs to be more interesting, it's too boring most of the time, flow looks angular and straight as well, needs more fluidity

Normal

00:26:556 (1,2) - blanket
00:30:940 (4,1) - ugly overlap
00:40:403 (1,2) - blanket
00:44:787 (2) - shape doesn't look good in this song
00:47:095 (2,1) - blanket
00:49:633 (1,2) - ^
00:59:556 (1,2) - stack nicely please
01:15:249 (2,1) - don't touch each other
01:15:941 (1) - you should not have so many repeats in the Normal difficulty, you should change the rhythm here
01:18:018 (1,2) - end of (2) don't touch other slider
01:33:248 (2,1) - blanket
01:35:786 (1,2) - ^
01:45:709 (1,1) - stack properly
02:13:403 (3,2) - don't overlap
02:16:633 (3,4) - stack properly
02:26:556 (1,2) - blanket
02:28:633 (4) - could have been more fitting to the rhythm of the music, with the crucial beat at 02:29:094
02:30:017 (1,2,3) - you generalized the rhythm too much here, it honestly doesn't fit the song
02:40:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part definitely looks copy-pasted from the previous chorus, doesn't look good knowing it's the exact same thing
02:46:633 (1,1) - stack properly
02:53:095 (2,1) - blanket
02:54:017 (1,2,3,4) - use better shape
02:55:402 (4,1) - don't touch
02:57:710 (2) - don't have so man repeat in a Normal, change the rhythm here

Rhythm can be improved a lot, positioning and shape as well, the difficulty looks very plain and not distinct to the song as well, you need to make it more designed just for this song, the positions and placement helps in making the map look more professionally done and more structured and more experienced looking.

Song can be improved a lot more, good luck
Topic Starter
Suzuya Jyuzo

neonat wrote:

General

Artist: 柿チョコ
Romanised: Kakichoco

Remove kakichoco ifuudoudou from tags
Remove hatsune miku gumi luka megpoid kagamine from tags as well because they aren't involved in this version
Add cover into the tags

Romanised Title is not 'ifuudoudou' or 'If You Do Do'

As according to the official video post: "If you do do ではありません"

Title should be "Pomp and Circumstance"

Official Source: http://www.nicovideo.jp/watch/sm19233263

Insane

00:24:710 (1,2,3,4) - the flow between 00:24:710 (1,2) is not good, you jerk upwards to do the stream, which is bad. Place the stream anywhere other than above the end of 00:24:710 (1) - best is below or directly beside it
00:26:556 (1,2) - sounds weird because it's very generalised, map to the streams, or at least 1/2 beats, because this sounds too empty
00:28:863 (5) - change this slider to have something start at 00:29:094 because the vocals here are important and something should start here instead of being in the middle of a slider
00:30:941 (5) - NC for slider velocity change indication, as well as put it in the middle of the pattern 00:30:018 (1,2,3,4) to make it look more uniform
00:36:480 (5,6) - blanket them
00:42:941 (9) - NC
00:44:786 (3) - slider end at 00:45:017 and add a note at 00:45:248 - the current rhythm doesn't fit the song
00:51:941 (5,6) - the angle is too acute, 00:52:172 (6) should be placed in a more decent angle, like x: 256 y: 152
00:53:095 (9) - place it more to the left of the end of 00:52:633 (8) instead of underneath it and towards the right, so that it flows better and movement is more smooth
00:55:864 (6,7,8,9) - make spacing between them look equal for better looking presentation
00:57:711 (1) - rotate more clockwise, same with 00:57:941 (2) - the flow gets awkward if the curve goes upwards and higher than the straight direction of the stream
01:00:480 (4) - NC
01:10:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - use more curves instead of straight lines, curves make flow better
01:11:440 (5,6) - this jump is too extreme, put them closer
01:15:249 (5) - NC for velocity change indication
01:17:095 (5) - ^ and blanket it with 01:16:056 (2) the curve is not pretty right now
01:17:556 (1,2,3,4,5) - make it more round, make it look nicer, this shape is ugly, doesn't look neat too
01:18:941 (7) - NC to show change in velocity
01:19:403 (8) - ^
01:25:403 (4) - NC
01:32:671 - continue the stream here because the vocals are here also and should be mapped
01:33:249 (3,4,5) - blanket better
01:39:017 (3) - slider should end at 01:39:248 with the vocals
01:42:710 (4) - remove the finishes on the 2nd and 3rd repeat, you should only have a finish on the end of the whole slider
01:45:710 (1) - use a better shape, you can then blanket 01:46:172 (2) as well
01:47:556 (9) - Ctrl + H this shape for better flow. NC should be here also, instead of 01:48:018 (1)
01:48:480 (3,4) - blanket
01:49:403 (6) - the slider is not in rhythm. Remove 01:49:864 (7) and make the repeat slider in 1/2 beat rhythm
01:50:787 (4) - the ends being not in same plane looks ugly
01:52:864 (1) - something should start at 01:53:094 with the vocals, not go over with this slider
02:08:556 (3,4,5) - make it a straight line
02:31:402 (6,1) - blanket them
02:32:326 (2) - slider should end at 02:32:556 to go with the music
02:32:902 (1) - slider starts late. Start at 02:32:786
02:49:403 (3,4,6,7) - repeat sliders are off-rhythm, they should be 1/2 repeat sliders, so the circles shouldn't be there at all
02:53:326 (6,1,1) - not in a straight line, it doesn't look good

Overall, I think the rhythm can be better, at times the rhythm is too simplistic, it does not go well with the song, just doesn't fit nicely. Map more to the vocals, it will help make it blend better to the song. Flow could be better, just try and move around and create imaginary lines to connect the parts together, that will really help in making a more fluid map.

Hard

00:30:940 (5,1) - you should not start 00:32:094 (1) behind the end of 00:30:940 (5) because the movement is not natural, you have to move the opposite direction to go to 00:32:094 (1) before moving back up again
00:34:633 (2,3,4,5) - this pattern looks disproportionate, 00:33:940 (1,2) should also be further apart
00:35:786 (1,2,3) - blanket better
00:36:940 (3,6) - must the overlap?
00:38:325 (1,2) - ^
00:44:786 (4) - slider should end at 00:45:017 and add a circle at 00:45:248 to fit the song better
00:47:095 (3,4) - this is bad flow
00:54:710 (5) - the flow should not be moving in this direction, according to the song, the slider moving in the left direction would flow better. You would have to move it elsewhere too
01:19:633 (1,2) - don't overlap
01:26:556 (6,7) - ^
01:27:479 (1,1) - don't touch each other
01:31:863 (5,1) - blanket them
01:33:248 (4,5) - bad flow
01:47:556 (5,2) - must the overlap?
01:47:556 (5,3) - ^
01:52:402 (5,1) - doesn't flow well with each other
02:14:556 (2) - this slider doesn't fit the song, the main beat is at 02:14:786
02:29:556 (1,2) - flow between them isn't good
02:34:172 (3,4) - bad flow
02:38:326 (5,1) - blanket them
02:44:095 (1,2) - too close to each other, not good for playing as well as doesn't look nice
02:48:249 (4,5) - ^
02:48:480 (5,2,3) - don't overlap
03:07:633 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - bland and boring rhythm to end the song, use more variety and less repeat sliders

Rhythm needs to be more interesting, it's too boring most of the time, flow looks angular and straight as well, needs more fluidity

Normal

00:26:556 (1,2) - blanket
00:30:940 (4,1) - ugly overlap
00:40:403 (1,2) - blanket
00:44:787 (2) - shape doesn't look good in this song
00:47:095 (2,1) - blanket
00:49:633 (1,2) - ^
00:59:556 (1,2) - stack nicely please
01:15:249 (2,1) - don't touch each other
01:15:941 (1) - you should not have so many repeats in the Normal difficulty, you should change the rhythm here
01:18:018 (1,2) - end of (2) don't touch other slider
01:33:248 (2,1) - blanket
01:35:786 (1,2) - ^
01:45:709 (1,1) - stack properly
02:13:403 (3,2) - don't overlap
02:16:633 (3,4) - stack properly
02:26:556 (1,2) - blanket
02:28:633 (4) - could have been more fitting to the rhythm of the music, with the crucial beat at 02:29:094
02:30:017 (1,2,3) - you generalized the rhythm too much here, it honestly doesn't fit the song
02:40:171 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this part definitely looks copy-pasted from the previous chorus, doesn't look good knowing it's the exact same thing
02:46:633 (1,1) - stack properly
02:53:095 (2,1) - blanket
02:54:017 (1,2,3,4) - use better shape
02:55:402 (4,1) - don't touch
02:57:710 (2) - don't have so man repeat in a Normal, change the rhythm here

Rhythm can be improved a lot, positioning and shape as well, the difficulty looks very plain and not distinct to the song as well, you need to make it more designed just for this song, the positions and placement helps in making the map look more professionally done and more structured and more experienced looking.

Song can be improved a lot more, good luck
Thanks for the mod :)
I find these tips useful
I will take the time to modify
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