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Shibayan feat. Sakaue Nachi - Ame wa Rira Rira

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truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on March-27-16 at 10:57:26 AM

Artist: Shibayan feat. Sakaue Nachi
Title: Ame wa Rira Rira
Source: 東方Project
Tags: Lust alacat Natsu Nozhomi Satellite eironeia captin1 Garven KokoroStudiox3 Mako Sakata aki shizuha minoriko Mágico Catástrofe マジコカタストロフィ ShibayanRecords Nachi Sakaue 坂上なち まざきさやか tak 人恋し神様 Romantic Fall Comiket 83 c83 東方風神録 Mountain of Faith marathon collab
BPM: 118.7
Filesize: 12984kb
Play Time: 05:56
Difficulties Available:
  1. Rainfall (3.37 stars, 1025 notes)
  2. Rainstorm (4.65 stars, 1351 notes)
Download: Shibayan feat. Sakaue Nachi - Ame wa Rira Rira
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Redownload for updated storyboard.
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?? Circle? ShibayanRecords
?? Vocal? Sakaue Nachi

Storyboard and Rainfall by truonant
Rainstorm - collab


Rainstorm Collab
00:00:631 - 00:32:980 - by Mako Sakata
00:32:980 - 01:05:330 - by truonant
01:05:330 - 01:37:681 - by KokoroStudiox3
01:37:681 - 02:10:032 - by Garven
02:10:032 - 02:42:379 - by captin1
02:42:379 - 03:14:729 - by eironeia
03:14:729 - 03:47:079 - by Giralda
03:47:079 - 04:03:259 - by Satellite
04:03:259 - 04:19:434 - by Nozhomi
04:19:433 - 04:51:778 - by Natsu
04:51:778 - 05:24:128 - by alacat
05:24:128 - 05:40:310 - by Lust
05:40:310 - 05:56:478 - by truonant

aki sisters: popular for being unpopular

Join and Support the ShibayanRecords Discography Project


Rainfall edits made since pending (09/13/2014)
09/14/2014 - timing points, note positioning
09/14/2014 - more inherited timing points!, perfect stacks
09/15/2014 - added missing hitsounds
09/15/2014 - CS 4 -> 4.5
09/16/2014 - added inherited timing points, perfect stacks
09/16/2014 - fixed more stacks.. and blankets
09/17/2014 - note positioning
09/18/2014 - NC
09/19/2014 - NC, note positioning
09/21/2014 - rhythm, timing
09/22/2014 - note placement
09/24/2014 - rhythm, note placement
09/26/2014 - storyboard progress - general
09/27/2014 - storyboard progress - highlights
09/28/2014 - storyboard progress - lyrics, slider shapes, resnapped timing points
10/10/2014 - WIP - renamed marathon to rainfall and added a lunatic difficulty (rainstorm)
Rainstorm edits made since pending (11/05/2015)
Last edited by truonant , edited 115 times in total.
neurosis
508 posts
Joined March 2012
neurosis
りらりら~
Lurei
667 posts
Joined March 2014
Lurei
Well, came from mod queue.
Nice map, nice song. I quite like it. I didn't found many things to mod, so I'll only suggest little changes.

  1. First, disable the letterboxes during breaks. Unneeded if you don't have breaks at all.
  2. 03:12:707 (2,3,4,5) - The way you arrange those sliders is quite hard to read, even for a Marathon. Arrange them so that "at least" half of the slider end's circle isn't overlapped by previous slider.
  3. 04:01:232 (1,1,1) - Well... same goes for those ones, but in those you should also make half of the start visible. This is so that players know where to hit.
  4. 05:19:578 (4,6,1) - Those three sliders somehow overlap. Try to solve it.
  5. 05:22:106 (3,4) - Same goes for those.
Well, that's all. Such a short mod, because I don't want to be so "nazi" in Hard or Insane-style mapping.
Anyway, good luck!
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

LixRei wrote:

Well, came from mod queue.
Nice map, nice song. I quite like it. I didn't found many things to mod, so I'll only suggest little changes.

  1. First, disable the letterboxes during breaks. Unneeded if you don't have breaks at all. - Is this necessary to do? I can't uncheck it because its greyed out http://puu.sh/bzsjR/2177ad1c26.png
  2. 03:12:707 (2,3,4,5) - The way you arrange those sliders is quite hard to read, even for a Marathon. Arrange them so that "at least" half of the slider end's circle isn't overlapped by previous slider. - fixed. since the slider velocity changes, i put them into separate combos and positioned them parallel from each other
  3. 04:01:232 (1,1,1) - Well... same goes for those ones, but in those you should also make half of the start visible. This is so that players know where to hit. - fixed. made them rotate an additional 15 degrees each
  4. 05:19:578 (4,6,1) - Those three sliders somehow overlap. Try to solve it. - fixed
  5. 05:22:106 (3,4) - Same goes for those. - fixed
Well, that's all. Such a short mod, because I don't want to be so "nazi" in Hard or Insane-style mapping.
Anyway, good luck!
Thank you for the mod and star <3
Lurei
667 posts
Joined March 2014
Lurei

truonant wrote:

LixRei wrote:

Well, came from mod queue.
Nice map, nice song. I quite like it. I didn't found many things to mod, so I'll only suggest little changes.

  1. First, disable the letterboxes during breaks. Unneeded if you don't have breaks at all. - Is this necessary to do? I can't uncheck it because its greyed out http://puu.sh/bzsjR/2177ad1c26.png
Well, if it's greyed out, it can't be helped, I guess.
Pereira006
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined October 2010
Pereira006
hi

[Marathon]

Hitsound

  • 00:44:100 (5) - Missing add whistle in end slider, you have done pattern hitsound before, example 00:36:013 (5) and many more, so I think you missing add whistle in end slider
    00:47:133 (1) - Missing add whistle in start slider
    00:52:188 (5) - missing add whistle in end slider
    00:55:221 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider
    01:00:275 (5) - missing add whistle in end slider
    01:03:308 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider
    01:09:121 (5) - missing add whistle in end slider, in 02:13:821 (5) and 03:51:122 (1) is same vocal, same beat, so i think you missing add whistle in end slider
    01:16:197 (2) - missing add whistle
    01:16:450 (3) - missing add whistle in end slider
    01:17:208 (5) - missing add whistle in end slider
    01:18:725 (5) - missing add whistle
    01:19:231 (7) - missing add whistle
    01:28:329 (2) - missing add whistle
    01:32:372 (3) - missing add whistle
    01:34:900 (5) - missing add whistle
    01:35:406 (7) - missing add whistle
    01:43:998 (4) - missing add whistle
    01:46:020 (4) - missing add whistle
    01:50:822 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider
    01:51:328 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider
    02:02:194 (4) - missing add whistle
    02:13:062 (3) - missing add whistle in end slider
    02:20:897 (2) - missing add whistle
    02:33:028 (2) - missing add whistle
    02:37:072 (2) - missing add whistle
    02:39:599 (5) - missing add whistle
    03:57:946 (3) - missing add whistle
    03:58:957 (6) - missing add whistle
    03:59:210 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider
    04:06:034 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:07:044 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:10:077 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:14:121 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:15:132 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:17:154 (7) - missing add whistle
    04:22:208 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:23:219 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:26:251 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:27:263 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:30:296 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:31:307 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:38:383 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:39:394 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:42:426 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:46:471 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:47:482 (6) - missing add whistle
All whistle, your style hitsound have lot missing pattern, Example 01:24:285 (2) - this vocal, melody and beat they are same in 04:06:034 and have whistle, but this 04:06:034 (3) - don't have, why? So my opinion your style hitsound pattern is missing lot, you better recheck IMO

Gameplay

  • 00:20:344 (4) - this shape slider is different 00:20:849 (1), can be same shape?
    01:08:363 (3) - in end point, should grid 1 down to perfect stack with start slider 01:09:121 (5)
    03:26:860 (5) - Shouldn't be new combo?
    04:54:726 (1,2) - I really i can see this little unstack, try stack perfect
When i did test play look perfect for me

[]
I could more mod hitsound, but there too much missing, you should recheck
sorry bad eng
I wish good luck
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

Pereira006 wrote:

hi

[Marathon]

Hitsound

  • 00:44:100 (5) - Missing add whistle in end slider, you have done pattern hitsound before, example 00:36:013 (5) and many more, so I think you missing add whistle in end slider
    00:47:133 (1) - Missing add whistle in start slider
    00:52:188 (5) - missing add whistle in end slider
    00:55:221 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider
    01:00:275 (5) - missing add whistle in end slider
    01:03:308 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider
    01:09:121 (5) - missing add whistle in end slider, in 02:13:821 (5) and 03:51:122 (1) is same vocal, same beat, so i think you missing add whistle in end slider
    01:16:197 (2) - missing add whistle
    01:16:450 (3) - missing add whistle in end slider
    01:17:208 (5) - missing add whistle in end slider
    01:18:725 (5) - missing add whistle
    01:19:231 (7) - missing add whistle
    01:28:329 (2) - missing add whistle
    01:32:372 (3) - missing add whistle
    01:34:900 (5) - missing add whistle
    01:35:406 (7) - missing add whistle
    01:43:998 (4) - missing add whistle
    01:46:020 (4) - missing add whistle
    01:50:822 (1) - missing add whistle in end slider
    01:51:328 (2) - missing add whistle in end slider
    02:02:194 (4) - missing add whistle
    02:13:062 (3) - missing add whistle in end slider
    02:20:897 (2) - missing add whistle
    02:33:028 (2) - missing add whistle
    02:37:072 (2) - missing add whistle
    02:39:599 (5) - missing add whistle
    03:57:946 (3) - missing add whistle
    03:58:957 (6) - missing add whistle
    03:59:210 (1) - missing add whistle in start slider
    04:06:034 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:07:044 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:10:077 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:14:121 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:15:132 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:17:154 (7) - missing add whistle
    04:22:208 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:23:219 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:26:251 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:27:263 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:30:296 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:31:307 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:38:383 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:39:394 (6) - missing add whistle
    04:42:426 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:46:471 (3) - missing add whistle
    04:47:482 (6) - missing add whistle
All whistle, your style hitsound have lot missing pattern, Example 01:24:285 (2) - this vocal, melody and beat they are same in 04:06:034 and have whistle, but this 04:06:034 (3) - don't have, why? So my opinion your style hitsound pattern is missing lot, you better recheck IMO

Gameplay

  • 00:20:344 (4) - this shape slider is different 00:20:849 (1), can be same shape?
    01:08:363 (3) - in end point, should grid 1 down to perfect stack with start slider 01:09:121 (5)
    03:26:860 (5) - Shouldn't be new combo?
    04:54:726 (1,2) - I really i can see this little unstack, try stack perfect
When i did test play look perfect for me

[]
I could more mod hitsound, but there too much missing, you should recheck
sorry bad eng
I wish good luck
Thank you for the mod!. I fixed the hitsounds and the things you mentioned under gameplay. I will try to mod your map soon
Starfall9908
663 posts
Joined November 2013
Starfall9908
From my Modding Queue

[General]
  1. 00:33:486 - Kiai mod is activated to less than 15 seconds
  2. The mapset is bigget than 10MB try to change the size of the mp3 file (it's usually the mp3 file that's the reason that this happens)
[Marathon]
  1. 01:07:352 (1) - The slider doesn't look beautiful and doesn't feel like it match the song.
  2. 02:35:808 (6,1) - The blanket is a bit off
Sorry for not modding so much. I'm actually really bad at modding insane but I did my best.

Good Luck ;)
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

nadapan wrote:

From my Modding Queue

[General]
  1. 00:33:486 - Kiai mod is activated to less than 15 seconds - I have it there for the fountain effect to emphasize the build up 00:30:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
  2. The mapset is bigget than 10MB try to change the size of the mp3 file (it's usually the mp3 file that's the reason that this happens) - The song is currently at 192kbps, but I want to wait until I finish the storyboard first before I reduce the quality of the song.
[Marathon]
  1. 01:07:352 (1) - The slider doesn't look beautiful and doesn't feel like it match the song. - No change. I think it looks good.
  2. 02:35:808 (6,1) - The blanket is a bit off - fixed. I went through the rest and fixed those as well

Sorry for not modding so much. I'm actually really bad at modding insane but I did my best.

Good Luck ;)
Thank you for the mod!
GuiltyGecko
57 posts
Joined December 2012
GuiltyGecko
First of all, I really like the song, so have a star for that. Want to play it ranked lol.
Second, during my play test, it was actually pretty smooth. I didn't fail, and it was easy to read. With that said, I have a few things that may help:

-00:30:537 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like how this is the ONLY stream of notes in the WHOLE song that is arranged in a chaotic way. All other streams are pretty straight or curved nicely, except this one. I would suggest making it like the others. If you are trying to stagger it and alternate side by side, then perhaps align it better.

-00:32:980 - I know you said that you want the Kiai time, but it doesn't really do much for me effect wise. Maybe if you get enough opinions on it you'll be able to see, but right hey. Up to you.

-00:39:046 (1,2,3) / 03:20:794 (1,2,3,4) / 03:28:882 - The sliders here. Compare to: 03:12:707 sliders, 04:01:232 sliders, 04:17:407 sliders, and 04:33:581 sliders. The Ones I pointed out later have you changing the combo color for each slider. I like this effect it adds because it's already a "colorful" song, so "colorful" sliders match it well. I wish you would add it to the sliders I mentioned. If you choose to do the combo color thing with the sliders, there are a few other places that I didn't mention that have 3 or more white to white tick sliders that could use the same love too.

-01:04:825 (4) Beginning of this slider sounds like it needs a finish/clap.

Really, most of this is style stuff. The most pressing thing I would change is just the first mod I mentioned. I think this is actually very well done...can't find much to say. Hope this gets ranked soon lol.
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

KillerGecko wrote:

First of all, I really like the song, so have a star for that. Want to play it ranked lol. - Thank you very much for the star!! <3
Second, during my play test, it was actually pretty smooth. I didn't fail, and it was easy to read. With that said, I have a few things that may help:

-00:30:537 (3,4,5,6) - I don't like how this is the ONLY stream of notes in the WHOLE song that is arranged in a chaotic way. All other streams are pretty straight or curved nicely, except this one. I would suggest making it like the others. If you are trying to stagger it and alternate side by side, then perhaps align it better. - fixed. I made it straight and I also unstacked 00:22:534 (6,7,8) -

-00:32:980 - I know you said that you want the Kiai time, but it doesn't really do much for me effect wise. Maybe if you get enough opinions on it you'll be able to see, but right hey. Up to you. - So at this point I might keep or just get rid of it. I have an idea in mind for the storyboard, but it depends on when I make my storyboard. So hopefully I will have time to work on it.. (learning how to use SGL. As you can tell from the series of falling leaves that should be falling during kiai time instead >.>)

-00:39:046 (1,2,3) / 03:20:794 (1,2,3,4) / 03:28:882 - The sliders here. Compare to: 03:12:707 sliders, 04:01:232 sliders, 04:17:407 sliders, and 04:33:581 sliders. The Ones I pointed out later have you changing the combo color for each slider. I like this effect it adds because it's already a "colorful" song, so "colorful" sliders match it well. I wish you would add it to the sliders I mentioned. If you choose to do the combo color thing with the sliders, there are a few other places that I didn't mention that have 3 or more white to white tick sliders that could use the same love too. - no change. I don't really think it's necessary for those particular sliders.

-01:04:825 (4) Beginning of this slider sounds like it needs a finish/clap. - no change. it should be the same as 00:55:221 (1,2,3,4) -

Really, most of this is style stuff. The most pressing thing I would change is just the first mod I mentioned. I think this is actually very well done...can't find much to say. Hope this gets ranked soon lol.
I mentioned that I would mod your map tonight, but I need to read 3 chapters for tommorow. I promise to mod your map tommorow night. Sorry for the wait and thank you for the mod!~
ilikepudge
39 posts
Joined June 2013
ilikepudge
hi for m4m from your queue

[Marathon]

00:28:852 (6) - I feel like this is slider really kills the flow, I'd suggest changing it to a different slider
00:30:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6) I don't think the change in direction here is a good idea here because it seems a bit sudden to me(hard to play)
01:19:483 (1,2) This doesn't sound right to me. It is a little different from other parts of the song, like 01:27:570 (1,2) . I assume this is a unintentional mistake
03:00:070 (5) This is a good slider. I like it
03:09:506 (3) This slider doesn't match the beat
03:12:707 (2,1,1,1) I feel the slider velocity shouldn't be decreasing here. Instead, I suggest you increase the slider velocity because it feels like music is getting more epic
03:42:698 (4) I feel like this should be a slider. Same for applies for other similar scenarios
05:40:808 (5) This note should probably be a little earlier imo

Alright that's all I got. Sorry, if the mod is bad because this is my first one

All in all, I think this a great map. Very unique and should get ranked
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

ilikepudge wrote:

hi for m4m from your queue

[Marathon]

00:28:852 (6) - I feel like this is slider really kills the flow, I'd suggest changing it to a different slider - fixed. turned it into a single curve slider. I was previously trying to include the other sounds, but i guess i should just focus on the bell like sound
00:30:200 (1,2,3,4,5,6) I don't think the change in direction here is a good idea here because it seems a bit sudden to me(hard to play) - Right after that long note (the slider), I felt that a sharp turn would suit the music. If more people mention it, i'll consider changing it.
01:19:483 (1,2) This doesn't sound right to me. It is a little different from other parts of the song, like 01:27:570 (1,2) . I assume this is a unintentional mistake - this is actually intentional. It is the same as 01:35:658 (1) -
03:00:070 (5) This is a good slider. I like it ^^
03:09:506 (3) This slider doesn't match the beat - fixed. removed repeat splider and added a circle
03:12:707 (2,1,1,1) I feel the slider velocity shouldn't be decreasing here. Instead, I suggest you increase the slider velocity because it feels like music is getting more epic - If i made it faster, it would unfortuately defeat the purpose of having 03:14:729 - 03:45:057 - speed up and get louder. I think the slowing down of velocity and sound volume was the best action to make that transition smooth
03:42:698 (4) I feel like this should be a slider. Same for applies for other similar scenarios. - fixed. turned the circles into 1/6 sliders
05:40:808 (5) This note should probably be a little earlier imo - fixed.

Alright that's all I got. Sorry, if the mod is bad because this is my first one

All in all, I think this a great map. Very unique and should get ranked
Thank you for the mod ^^ It was helpful
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa
from your ticket reqs. sorry for delay
Mod Info

  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Important things. You should consider
  3. Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix


  • General
  1. BPM=118.703 that 0.003 is not needed. 118.7 is perfect. maybe you use some software to determine the BPM and this 0.003 is just software inaccuracy error.
  2. 3.52 stars is a little easy for this song...both rhythm and placement could be improved


  • Insane
  1. 00:11:245 (2,3,4,5) - oh fuck...whats this...who can read this rhythm while playing....maybe you can stack 00:11:624 (4,5) - to distinguish the 1/4 and 1/6. and separate those stacked 1/6 like 00:14:447 (5,1) - 00:07:623 (3,4) - to 00:01:136 (2,3) - this kind of DS. and use bigger DS on 1/3(because BPM is low. jump between 1/3 is also easy to play)
  2. 00:25:314 (1,2,3,4) - wrong smapped! you can change 00:25:314 (1,2,3) - these to a reverse slider like 00:25:819 (4) - . because judgement on slider is loosen. but I suggest you add timing section here.
    SPOILER
    offset and BPM need fine tuning
  3. 00:30:537 (3,4,5,6) - also wrong snapped! please add timing section here and here just have three sounds.
    SPOILER
  4. 03:41:939- 03:42:950- miss the ryhthm.
  5. 03:09:506 (3,4,5,6) - rhythm is really strange. maybe try this
  6. 03:10:938 (1,2,3) - feel really bad while test playing. change 1 2 to a slider

really busy recently. so I just do a short mod to say something I think important. sorry for this >.<
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

kamisamaaa wrote:

from your ticket reqs. sorry for delay
Mod Info

  1. Black: Suggestions
  2. Bold: Important things. You should consider
  3. Red: Unrankable issues. You Must Fix


  • General
  1. BPM=118.703 that 0.003 is not needed. 118.7 is perfect. maybe you use some software to determine the BPM and this 0.003 is just software inaccuracy error. - fixed
  2. 3.52 stars is a little easy for this song...both rhythm and placement could be improved


  • Insane- intended to be just hard
  1. 00:11:245 (2,3,4,5) - oh fuck...whats this...who can read this rhythm while playing....maybe you can stack 00:11:624 (4,5) - to distinguish the 1/4 and 1/6. and separate those stacked 1/6 like 00:14:447 (5,1) - 00:07:623 (3,4) - to 00:01:136 (2,3) - this kind of DS. and use bigger DS on 1/3(because BPM is low. jump between 1/3 is also easy to play) - fixed
  2. 00:25:314 (1,2,3,4) - wrong smapped! you can change 00:25:314 (1,2,3) - these to a reverse slider like 00:25:819 (4) - . because judgement on slider is loosen. but I suggest you add timing section here.- fixed
    SPOILER
    offset and BPM need fine tuning
  3. 00:30:537 (3,4,5,6) - also wrong snapped! please add timing section here and here just have three sounds. - no change
    SPOILER
  4. 03:41:939- 03:42:950- miss the ryhthm. - fixed the ones similar to 03:41:939-
  5. 03:09:506 (3,4,5,6) - rhythm is really strange. maybe try this - fixed
  6. 03:10:938 (1,2,3) - feel really bad while test playing. change 1 2 to a slider - no change. i think its fine

really busy recently. so I just do a short mod to say something I think important. sorry for this >.<
No problem. Thank you for the mod.
kamisamaaa
605 posts
Joined July 2011
kamisamaaa
you should use AI mod and fix all those unsnapped objects and green lines because of BPM change
00:30:538 (3,4,5,6) - why you reject this? just need three note here. not four. listen with 50% speed pls
blaterwolf
267 posts
Joined November 2013
blaterwolf
hello from Queue

anyways not a pro mapper and here some few suggestions

[General]

Expecting these Marathons would be a much harder by 4 or 4.5 stars

[Marathon]

00:28:853 (3) - i think this is too far away

01:04:826 (4,1,1) - unexpected fast movements like these can kill players , try a different positions

02:48:364 (1,2) - move these : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2063301

03:47:757 (2) - blanket this from 03:48:431 (4) - properly

03:48:094 (2,3,4,5) - the hitsound from here seems conflicting with the song
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

SkyBearer245 wrote:

hello from Queue

anyways not a pro mapper and here some few suggestions

[General]

Expecting these Marathons would be a much harder by 4 or 4.5 stars - Marathon doesn't necessarily mean that it needs to be insane or overly difficult. It only relates to the length.

[Marathon]

00:28:853 (3) - i think this is too far away - no change - I think that distance is perfect for that note

01:04:826 (4,1,1) - unexpected fast movements like these can kill players , try a different positions - no change. I disagree. They are not "unexpected fast movements"

02:48:364 (1,2) - move these : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2063301 - fixed

03:47:757 (2) - blanket this from 03:48:431 (4) - properly - barely noticeable but fixed anyways

03:48:094 (2,3,4,5) - the hitsound from here seems conflicting with the song - This was actually out of place. Fixed it, but it still sounds fine
Thanks for the mod.
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

kamisamaaa wrote:

you should use AI mod and fix all those unsnapped objects and green lines because of BPM change
00:30:538 (3,4,5,6) - why you reject this? just need three note here. not four. listen with 50% speed pls
Main reason is that it doesn't play too well. It an easy way to get a 100 or 50. Although 3 notes matches it audibly, I feel it doesn't particularly play too well as it would with 4 notes.
Support
28 posts
Joined October 2013
Support
Hi from modding queue

In the AI mod it shows 01:54:867 (1) - 05:08:971 (1) - 05:41:321 (1) the error with kiai time it might be a bit unnecessary for the kiai time to have such short breaks in the middle, might be better off just merging the kiai sections together. having a 1 sec gap in the kiai time seems a bit silly


00:22:366 (1,2,3,4,5) - a pretty sudden speed up from the map

01:37:682 (7) - at the start of the kiai time here i feel like you can switch it up a bit like adding some repeaters ect. at some parts the map sort of feel repetitive

02:52:745 (1,2,3,4) - instead of this http://puu.sh/bMBSp/85d5852c02.jpg I feel like something like this can help the map flow better and sound a bit less "weird" http://puu.sh/bMBHs/e8950a259b.jpg

I like the map :) the song is also really nice I hope you found my suggestions useful in some way!
Aerous
1,492 posts
Joined September 2013
Aerous
Hey thanks for mapping my Ftails 16th opening :D

General
http://puu.sh/bMLcH/b2d1749e26.png
You should try combining the Kiai time together.
Spacing is pretty good
Really good map overall
I really liked how you made this map

Marathon :

00:09:392 (3) You can change this slider's length to the white tick at : 00:09:729

00:11:372 (3) Move the three back to the blue tick

00:13:394 Move the slider back to the blue tick. Change this slider length to 00:13:773

00:22:534 (2,3,4) You can change this into a slider

00:49:661 (2,3) This is a suggestion : stack 2 and 3 together.

00:51:683 (2,3) This is a suggestion : stack 2 and 3 together.

00:57:749 (2,3) This is a suggestion : stack 2 and 3 together.

01:02:551 (5,6,7) Make it into a triangle pattern

01:05:331 (1) If you want to, you can change this slider's shape into those wavy ones.

01:53:601 (2,4) Move the 2 on top of 4

01:54:362 (5) This is a suggestion, make a tiny stream here if you like.

The rest of the song looks pretty good.

Good Luck!
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

Support wrote:

Hi from modding queue

In the AI mod it shows 01:54:867 (1) - 05:08:971 (1) - 05:41:321 (1) the error with kiai time it might be a bit unnecessary for the kiai time to have such short breaks in the middle, might be better off just merging the kiai sections together. having a 1 sec gap in the kiai time seems a bit silly - the only purpose of doing that was for the fountain effect. i wanted to do something with the SB to emphasize it but for now since I dont have the SB done yet, ill just merge it. fixed


00:22:366 (1,2,3,4,5) - a pretty sudden speed up from the map - It may seem fast, but its just a little stream

01:37:682 (7) - at the start of the kiai time here i feel like you can switch it up a bit like adding some repeaters ect. at some parts the map sort of feel repetitive - no change

02:52:745 (1,2,3,4) - instead of this http://puu.sh/bMBSp/85d5852c02.jpg I feel like something like this can help the map flow better and sound a bit less "weird" http://puu.sh/bMBHs/e8950a259b.jpg - fixed. I guess i had too many offbeat sliders in a row

I like the map :) the song is also really nice I hope you found my suggestions useful in some way!
Thank you for the mod~
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

Aerous wrote:

Hey thanks for mapping my Ftails 16th opening :D

General
http://puu.sh/bMLcH/b2d1749e26.png
You should try combining the Kiai time together. - fixed
Spacing is pretty good
Really good map overall
I really liked how you made this map

Marathon :

00:09:392 (3) You can change this slider's length to the white tick at : 00:09:729 - no change. There is no sound at that time for me to shorten the slider

00:11:372 (3) Move the three back to the blue tick - the song is mapped in 6/4. Moving it to blue tick doesn't suit the music at all.

00:13:394 Move the slider back to the blue tick. Change this slider length to 00:13:773 - no change. doesnt fit

00:22:534 (2,3,4) You can change this into a slider - no change. I really want those 3 notes of the song to hit. using a slider would leave 1 note (red tick) missing. and using a repeat slider would break the flow

00:49:661 (2,3) This is a suggestion : stack 2 and 3 together. no change

00:51:683 (2,3) This is a suggestion : stack 2 and 3 together.no change

00:57:749 (2,3) This is a suggestion : stack 2 and 3 together.no change

01:02:551 (5,6,7) Make it into a triangle pattern - fixed. stacked 01:03:056 (7) - on slider head of 01:01:961 (3) -

01:05:331 (1) If you want to, you can change this slider's shape into those wavy ones. no change

01:53:601 (2,4) Move the 2 on top of 4 no change

01:54:362 (5) This is a suggestion, make a tiny stream here if you like. no change

The rest of the song looks pretty good.

Good Luck!
Thank you for the mod~
Aeonian Sonder
974 posts
Joined May 2012
Aeonian Sonder
Please remember to snap timing points.
00:08:719 (1) - Try not to curve this too much
00:17:312 (1,2) - Can you try to make these two more symmetrical?
01:05:331 (1) - The sudden slider velocity change is kinda out of touch with the beatmap itself.
01:08:364 (3) - Curve this less so that it looks like a continuation of slider 1
01:19:485 (1) - Curve the part near the end of the slider more circular. Try making it so that it can blanket a circle is one were to be put there
01:35:660 (1) - ^
01:42:737 (1) - ^
01:58:912 (1) - ^
04:17:413 (1,1,1) - The rankability of stack the first and third one is questionable. If a bat comes, I'd check with him/her.
04:33:587 (1,1,1) - ^
04:51:784 - It's a cool idea to have "lights" behind the circles and sliders, but the gridding is a bit off.

05:23:875 - For one thing, I already told you to snap your timing points. Two, how about turning off Kiai for this point so that it starts again in the next timing point?

05:29:189 (1) - You should know by now...
05:38:793 (5) - Not straight like the other two
05:40:563 (4) - Why...?

What an interesting set of hitsounds.
Good luck~
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

-APXH wrote:

Please remember to snap timing points. - I had to remove 0.03 from my bpm and as a result all of inherent timing points unsnapped. However I talked to a QAT and they said its fine as long as red timing points and kiai are snapped. to be honest, there are too many for me to resnap even though they all function properly. I only renapped kiai
00:08:719 (1) - Try not to curve this too much - fixed
00:17:312 (1,2) - Can you try to make these two more symmetrical? - fixed
01:05:331 (1) - The sudden slider velocity change is kinda out of touch with the beatmap itself. - i think its fine. no change
01:08:364 (3) - Curve this less so that it looks like a continuation of slider 1 - fixed slider 1 to match with 01:08:364 (3) - instead
01:19:485 (1) - Curve the part near the end of the slider more circular. Try making it so that it can blanket a circle is one were to be put there
01:35:660 (1) - ^
01:42:737 (1) - ^
01:58:912 (1) - ^ - no change. ^ not really my intention to blanket a circle so I don't really want to give up the shape of it just to give it more curve. However, if the slider itself was longer, i would.
04:17:413 (1,1,1) - The rankability of stack the first and third one is questionable. If a bat comes, I'd check with him/her.
04:33:587 (1,1,1) - ^
04:51:784 - It's a cool idea to have "lights" behind the circles and sliders, but the gridding is a bit off. - no change. the storyboard that shows on the compose tab is never a real representation of the actual product. There is actually an offset in the x and y so technically they are should be fine. It looks correct when actually playing it.

05:23:875 - For one thing, I already told you to snap your timing points. Two, how about turning off Kiai for this point so that it starts again in the next timing point? - Ah I orginally had this in the beginning but I didn't have my storyboard then so I just took it off so avoid people needlessly mentioning it in mods. I'll put it back since I know a fountain would look good here. Thanks for reminding me.

05:29:189 (1) - You should know by now... - no change
05:38:793 (5) - Not straight like the other two - fixed
05:40:563 (4) - Why...? - problem?

What an interesting set of hitsounds. - This Shibayan song deserves it ^^
Good luck~
Thank you for the mod!~
eironeia
88 posts
Joined June 2013
eironeia
quick mini mod.
00:27:757 (3) - kak, ini not kedengerannya kena snap 1/4 di 00:27:799 (3) deh. coba didenger, kykny lebih pas.
00:32:727 (4,5,6) - (to both truonant and Mako) in the actual song, circle 5 isn't an actual drum beat. you might or might not want to keep it bcs it's a bit of an overmap.
00:35:002 (4) - for this note, i think what you meant to do was:
fm4a93au04
129 posts
Joined March 2012
fm4a93au04
Hello ~

fm4a93au04's standard modding and GD ( ? ) queue

Uh … your map is too hard to me , I can’t give you some good suggestion =ㄦ= .

But I’ll try my best ~

Modding
[General]

1. You have 2 red point in Rainstorm but only 1 red point in Rainfall . Is anything wrong ?

2. Consider insert some break time in your map =- = .

3. Where is E / N @A@ ?

[Rainfall]

00:01:137 (2,3) – This is … a little hard to click , other similar places are also hard to click . I prefer to make it a short slider ( like 00:14:195 (4) - . ) or overlap them ( like 00:15:711 (3,4) - . ) . If that is a Insane diff , then ignore me plz .

00:22:535 (2,3,4) – I prefer to delete 2 ,4 .

00:25:315 (1,2,3,4) – Very uncomfortable for me … but maybe is my problem . I try to do this :



And I found that you need 1/12 divider to make that reverse slider match this part =口= .

02:54:177 (6) – End it at 02:54:513 .

03:12:711 (2,1,1,1) – This composing are not very fit this part . It absolutely can be holded , but I think you still have more better choice . Like some note with big jump or something .

03:14:986 (2,3) – Make them closer , then it will easier to judge .

03:15:996 (2,3) - ^ .

03:17:008 (2,3) - ^ . I’m lazy , so plz check other similar places =ㄦ= .

03:38:996 (1) – Delete clap here .

03:41:018 (1) - ^ .

03:43:040 (1) - ^ .

03:47:084 (1,2) – Closer ?

Okey , I think that is all I can found …

[Rainstorm]

I die . So I can’t tell you anything =- = .

Give you a star ~ since I love the way you use your sound effect ~ I'm so love it XD .
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

fm4a93au04 wrote:

[General]

1. You have 2 red point in Rainstorm but only 1 red point in Rainfall . Is anything wrong ? - I added the second red point previously, if i remove it, everything unsnaps and then i'd have to manually resnap everything >.> I just left it because it doesn't affect gameplay at all

2. Consider insert some break time in your map =- = . - There's a break that starts at 05:56:485 - Kidding, I don't there's any good spots for a break.

3. Where is E / N @A@ ? - These are marathons so I don't need Easy and Normal. I don't really want to map another 6 - 12 minutes of Easy and Normal

[Rainfall]

00:01:137 (2,3) – This is … a little hard to click , other similar places are also hard to click . I prefer to make it a short slider ( like 00:14:195 (4) - . ) or overlap them ( like 00:15:711 (3,4) - . ) . If that is a Insane diff , then ignore me plz . - no change

00:22:535 (2,3,4) – I prefer to delete 2 ,4 . - no change

00:25:315 (1,2,3,4) – Very uncomfortable for me … but maybe is my problem . I try to do this : - no change



And I found that you need 1/12 divider to make that reverse slider match this part =口= .

02:54:177 (6) – End it at 02:54:513 . - fixed

03:12:711 (2,1,1,1) – This composing are not very fit this part . It absolutely can be holded , but I think you still have more better choice . Like some note with big jump or something . - no change. I did it like this for a better sv transition into the next section. I tried using jumps before but i felt it was too disruptive going into the next section

03:14:986 (2,3) – Make them closer , then it will easier to judge . - i'll revisit this

03:15:996 (2,3) - ^ .

03:17:008 (2,3) - ^ . I’m lazy , so plz check other similar places =ㄦ= .

03:38:996 (1) – Delete clap here .

03:41:018 (1) - ^ .

03:43:040 (1) - ^ . - ^ intentional. It's a part of my custom hitsounding exclusive for that section

03:47:084 (1,2) – Closer ? - no change. its the right distance following a slower sv slider

Okey , I think that is all I can found …

[Rainstorm]

I die . So I can’t tell you anything =- = .[/box]

Give you a star ~ since I love the way you use your sound effect ~ I'm so love it XD .
Thank you for the mod & star <3 ~ ^^
Kyouren
5,582 posts
Joined October 2012
Kyouren
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KokoroStudiox3
1,272 posts
Joined April 2011
KokoroStudiox3
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50 %
ggmwr
31 posts
Joined February 2013
ggmwr
Hi, nice map you have here.

Some timing points are off by 1 in collab, didn't checked other diffs.
Giralda's part feels a bit awkward to play and some objects are off, these for example:
03:27:707 (3) -
03:30:572 (4) -
Could it be because of bmp changing?

Anyway, just wanted to mention a star. Looking forward to see this ranked.
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant

ggmwr wrote:

Hi, nice map you have here.

Some timing points are off by 1 in collab, didn't checked other diffs.
Giralda's part feels a bit awkward to play and some objects are off, these for example:
03:27:707 (3) -
03:30:572 (4) -
Could it be because of bmp changing?

Anyway, just wanted to mention a star. Looking forward to see this ranked.
Thanks for the star ^^. It should be fine if the timing points are off by 1, as long it still functions as intended and that the kiai sections are snapped
ggmwr
31 posts
Joined February 2013
ggmwr
That's the point that they aren't. I randomly mapped something for fun on satellite's part and sliders that supposed to be slower wasn't.

edit: nevermind, everyone will be making their own anyway.
loopuleasa
81 posts
Joined February 2014
loopuleasa
HOLY MOTHER OF PEPPY

PLEASE MORE

I got a new favourite map. All that rhythm porn.
truonant
408 posts
Joined October 2013
Topic Starter
truonant
3 more sections left to go!
alacat
osu! Alumni
3,872 posts
Joined May 2011
alacat
I hope you like my part :3

http://puu.sh/hPvIM/3ca4240c4e.zip

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