I'm gonna mod only Quit User's map because its the map that need the more modifications (courage
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First of all your map has a lot of pp patterns
I explain that : 01:22:784 (8,9,1) - is ultra easy to fc , hold left and dash
BUT thats a double hyperdash so it give a lot of pp , in consequence your map has 7 stars but doesn't deserve it
its ok to put sometime that kind of patterns (spectacular and easy to do) but you have put too many of these , its repetitive and thats pp cheat
Try to create other patterns from that
00:06:617 (6,7,1) - That triplet isn't clean at all and just after a jump just NO
00:07:284 (4,5,1) - Same thing here
00:07:950 (4) - this one is hard to catch and its dangerous to miss a so important hyperdash , try to make it closer to 3
00:08:034 (5,6,7,8,9) - too hard to read try to make a line from that
00:08:700 (2) - make it closer to 1 , I don't think a double hyperdash is necessary here
00:10:700 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this stream isn't clean at all , you can use a slider and morph it into a stream it would be better because double hyperdash in the middle
00:11:200 (8,9,10) - it make the pattern hard to read , try to make 8 and 9 with different X
00:13:117 (5,6,7,8,9) - Seems so random , its like you put them randomly
00:16:117 (7,1,2,3) - too random too
00:16:950 (5,6,7) - same thing here
00:18:284 (7,8,9) - not clean at all this triplet is ugly in my opinion
00:20:450 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - this stream is too random like I said before try to use sliders and go to compose --> transform a slider into a stream it will have better result , your stream has 2 useless hyperdash
00:21:784 - this pause isn't legit in my opinion ^^ I'm sure you can do a calm part from that
00:32:117 - the singer begins to sing here so I think its better to start here
00:36:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - maybe you had a idea here BUT I hate patterns where you need to have the right position and wait...
00:41:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe in editing its beautiful (mini star
) but in ctb just no the pattern is random
00:43:450 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't really like it because its very hard to catch , remember your map is going to be fc and I hate frustrating maps
00:45:617 (10) - I think its too far and too hard to catch make it closer to 9
00:51:617 (2,3,4) - I think you shouldn't made them go in the right but un the left , just after a hyperdash it demand an excellent timing to continue this way
00:52:034 (5) - Too hard to catch make it closer to 4
00:57:367 (6,7,8,9,10,1,2) - too random the hyperdash are everywhere and its ugly to read
01:00:284 (7,1,2,3) - too hard to do I think if 1-2-3 go to the right it would be less random
01:05:784 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think you can make it more clean
01:06:117 (5,6,7) - triple hyperdash there (1/2 1/4 1/4) just no its too difficult
01:08:450 (1,2,3) - same thing
01:09:117 (5,6,7) - same thing (stop copy paste plez)
01:09:450 (8,9,10,11) - try to place them more in left it requiers less timing
01:10:450 (4,5,6) - double hyperdash (useless)
01:11:117 (1) - make 1 closer to 6 because its too hard to catch it
01:16:117 (8,9,10,11) - I don't think I need to explain why its too hard
01:17:673 (9,1) - thats troll : right after a hyperdash stream (thats how I call it ) you want we go to the left and catch that technical slider (gimme us a break)
01:19:450 (4,5,6) - make the whole pattern hard to read , change it
01:23:117 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - repetitive and give too much pp and its a easy pattern , no.
01:36:450 (2,3) - double hyperdash there : useless
I think thats the BIG things you need to change but there is more issues but its due to lack of rigour
You can't put circles that randomly the result are random patterns hard to do and ugly to read
I can see you begin in mapping so its normal you can't imagine that at the begining
so thats why I told you , MAKE YOUR MAP MORE CLEAN
good luck