paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~

I modded every diff except the easy diff. (see my rules)

[General]

1. 04:05:584 - I am not sure if you forgot to cut this out of your mapset, this was part of the amv where I picked that song, so in theory it is part of the video. I don't know really if I have to cut it or not. I think it could be there but I'm not sure 100% I'll see what other people says and maybe a BAT one day...
2. Your offset feels a bit too early, it's more around ~150 - You should consult a timing expert here. hm, yes, maybe I'll call someone to check

[Normal]

1. 00:01:948 - Make the spinner stop at this place, the vocal is going to start at 00:02:857 - already and it feels odd if you leave this out. Map the gap. ok, tryed to fix it
2. 00:04:902 (1) - This looks like a trap, right at the beginning. Newer players will think this starts on a white tick if you don't set a circle before it or make the slider start there to make it clearer. this is a normal diff. it follows the vocals and I think there is no problem about it
   In reference to that, you should make 00:08:311 (1) - the same pattern.
3. 00:22:857 (1) - Set whistle HS on this slider, like you did at 00:19:220 (1) - fixed
4. 00:29:220 (1,1) - waiting 4/1 beats long while there is still vocals is not a good choice. try this http://puu.sh/b92ZV/5e25349eea.jpg ok, tryed
5. 00:49:902 (4,1) - Please blanket this so it actually look like a bow pattern: http://puu.sh/b937N/20758e8b10.jpg I tryed but I can't do that without breacking the distance snap, so no change
6. 01:18:311 (5) - Set a new Combo here ok
7. 02:22:857 (2,3) - really just a trifle, but the overlap annoys me here: http://puu.sh/b93ru/27cfbc471b.jpg . Please try to fix this. for me is ok and it was the only good way to keep the flow a bit imo
8. 02:31:720 (5,6,7) - three sliders starting at red ticks and ending on white ones is too much imo, since white ticks are normally accented and should be clickable naturally. at least swap the last slider with two circles. ok
9. 02:36:493 - Normal hitsound at 50% vol. is just way too loud. Change into Soft hitsound here, add a whistle maybe and lower the volume. yes, I did that in other diffs but I forgot here
10. 02:58:652 (3) - add clap HS to this whole slider there is a clap
11. 03:04:675 (2,3) - trifle: check the blanket again it was ok, but fixed anyway
12. 03:43:539 (9) - Again, starts on red tick no change here, I don't want to add more notes
13. 03:57:402 (6) - The hiccup here has no real musical interpretation to me, it also doesn't look pretty good. It's better if you fix this up. tryed to fix it putting it on the sliderthick... maybe I'll see what other people say also before changing it completely

[Hard]

1. OD7 is a bit over the top for the hard diff. Push it down by 1 or 2. ok
2. 00:00:130 (1) - Same as in Normal. fixed
3. 00:21:948 (2,3) - Check the blanket here again. Also try to adjust the red anchor such that it lies exactly at the slidertick http://puu.sh/b94tf/93e121c216.jpg ok
4. 00:31:493 - The gap here still feels awkwardly silent. I recommend the same as in Normal. added a note
5. 00:54:448 (1,2) - check the blanket again ok
6. 01:10:584 (4,5) - ^ here is ok
7. 01:31:039 (1,1,1) - These SV changes... are very neat. :3 geh ^.^
8. 01:56:493 (1,2) - Check blanket. ok
9. 02:03:766 (1,2) - ^ ok
10. 02:13:084 (7) - Add a new combo here ok
11. 02:26:039 (2,3) - The jump here is just way too high than the music can support. try this: http://puu.sh/b95iv/aede60210e.jpg good idea
12. 02:32:630 (9,1) - I recommend you don't stack these, it doesn't fit the music. Making equal distances between 02:31:948 (8,9,1) - is much better. tryed
13. 03:27:175 (4,5) - Check the blanket ok
14. 03:58:311 (6) - It's better if you put this circle below circle 5, fits much better tryed something
15. 04:03:311 - soft whistle HS sounds like 10 times better here. fixed

[Insane]

1. You can increase the HP drain by 1 or 2, the current one is a tad too low for an insane map. ok
2. 00:00:130 (1) - If not for the other diff, than at least make a smaller spinner here to map a more interesting beginning. ok but that vocals are hard to follow :/
3. 00:06:493 (3) - The flow here is improvable here if you arrange the slider as follows: http://puu.sh/b968U/1ac5894d16.jpg ok
4. 00:27:857 (6,7,8) - Inequal distances looks pretty bad here, fix this up. ok
5. 00:31:039 (1) - Plays really boring, try to be more creative here: http://puu.sh/b96D9/e1108e621d.jpg lol great idea, I just put it to go ahead >.<
6. 00:38:084 (1) - Preference: End this slider on the white tick already no change
7. 01:11:039 (1,3) - Trifle: The overlap here annoys me very hard D: Please try to fix this up. ok
8. 01:20:811 (2,3) - This overlap here doesn't look very neat in my opinion, try to avoid it here. here no change
9. 01:17:857 (1,2) - I'm a bit ambiguous if the piano sound supports such a big SV change. At least your 2nd slider needs a lower SV, since the piano sound is also going piano again (Hope you get this reference ) yes, fixed
10. 01:31:493 (1,1,1) - Feels a bit odd in comparison to the hard diff where you slightly increased the SV's instead of suddenly dampening it up. For consistency, I'd increase the SV's at 0.1 or 0.15 differences here. tryed to fix it in my way
    If not, consider to lower the SV change from 1.2 to 1.5 at 01:31:948 (1) - , it's just way too much of a difference in comparison to the vocal.
11. 01:46:948 (4,1) - This looks bad since it is not symmetrical. Please clean it up: http://puu.sh/b97Y2/e62487634c.jpg ok
12. 01:56:266 (1,2) - Try to blanket here. ok
13. 02:21:948 (1,2) - The overlap doesn't look very neat here either, please fix this up. ok
14. 03:58:311 (1) - Add a finish HS here. I also feel that the jump is a bit too high. added finish but the jump is ok
15. 04:03:311 - Same as in Hard.fixed

Very neat maps, they need some fine-tuning though. Good luck!

Greetings,
paseli

P.S. If you want, give my mod a very short review so I can improve them: Out of 5 points, how many would you give my mod? Thanks! \o/

oook mod checked! if I have to give a little review of the mod as you said, I found it very useful mod you found good things and also proposed a way to fix them so I think is a very good mod I can also give a 5/5 xD good job! and thank you

[General]
Steins gate /o/~

Nice song...no life light!

Add audio lead in like around 1500-2000, the time of spinner is too close to the start button

[Easy]
00:04:902 - Slider slide at starting sounds noisy, make it silence? (juz the beginning part)
00:33:084 - Make the spinner on red tick, blue tick is a bit hard for easy
00:36:948 - Feel this one's is skipped purposely, suggest to add something
^ or adjust the spinner, make it stop 00:35:811 - , if you do this add note at 00:36:493 -
00:41:039 (1) - Sounds offed cuz there's nothing sounded at 00:41:039 - , try to stick to the vocal at 00:40:811 -
01:31:493 (1) - Tail is a bit off blanket
02:33:084 - Spinner can start at red tick
02:52:857 (1,1) - Looks awkward in easy haha >_< change it to slider or unstack it
02:59:220 (1) - Change to slider, this one's a bit too short
03:23:766 (3) - Not properly snapped to 1.0x
03:57:857 (4) - Blanket
03:58:539 - Spinner

Playable, but some 1/1 sounds extra, stick to the music and try not to make it hard as well
More opinion and mods could make it perfect, keep up da good work :d

[Normal]
00:01:948 - Make this silence or something 5%
00:51:039 (1) - Blanket this (either move it looks like blanket or change the shape)
00:52:857 (3) - Blanket rawr
01:24:675 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - GG pattern @_@ '' looks so hard to even look at it, try to reduce note density and perfect stacks on sliders like 01:25:811 (4) -
01:29:902 (6) - I'm sure this would be a bit hard to rank
02:59:220 (1) - Change to notes, spinner to hard imo, and something can be hit instead of spin here
03:16:948 - Maybe try to increase the AR, at this point you are hitting the first note but you can see 5th note start to coming out
03:55:584 (2,3,4,5) - Change it to some sliders and follow vocal, there's like nothing here for 1/1

Kinda a bit different from my map, I prefer 1.2x DS for whole map since lots of 1/4 and almost all notes are sticked together :c
Rhythm are fully followed by the music, which is good, keep up~

[Hard]
AR8 looks a bit fast, try to reduce it, make it around 7.7~7.8
03:16:493 (6) - Stack with 03:15:584 (4) - might be a bit strange, try not to let both slider tail stacked (or make it least)
^ Like this 03:24:675 (7,8,9,1) - would be fine

Can't find major mistakes in the diff >_< not my fault cuz it's your mapping style
Gj!

[Insane]
AR9 is a bit too fast, the BPM and note dense is not that high, try something around 8.6
00:06:720 - Prefer to follow vocal here, looks more insane and looks alike with 00:02:857 (1,2) -
00:56:493 (1) - Try to move this away from stacking, hard to read cuz 00:55:925 (3) - and 00:57:175 (2) - are stacked in the same place as well
01:18:311 (2) - NC for SV change
01:25:811 (1,2) - Prefer one slider with reverse, feel it's more fit to the BG music
01:34:220 (6,7,8) - Cool pattern
02:10:811 (1,2,3) - Feel this one's forced to vocal, suggest rhythm like this
02:11:720 - Clap
03:56:948 (1) - Prefer to stack around right btm corner after 03:55:811 (2) - , more flowy and easier to read, don't troll players to retry :d

Not overmapped, looks perfectly fit with the music XD/
Keep up~

Rakuen wrote:

[General]
Steins gate /o/~

Nice song...no life light! lol

Add audio lead in like around 1500-2000, the time of spinner is too close to the start button

[Easy]
00:04:902 - Slider slide at starting sounds noisy, make it silence? (juz the beginning part) I'll add it >.<
00:33:084 - Make the spinner on red tick, blue tick is a bit hard for easy ok
00:36:948 - Feel this one's is skipped purposely, suggest to add something tryed as you said but I didn't liked it so no change
^ or adjust the spinner, make it stop 00:35:811 - , if you do this add note at 00:36:493 -
00:41:039 (1) - Sounds offed cuz there's nothing sounded at 00:41:039 - , try to stick to the vocal at 00:40:811 -
01:31:493 (1) - Tail is a bit off blanket fixed
02:33:084 - Spinner can start at red tick ok
02:52:857 (1,1) - Looks awkward in easy haha >_< change it to slider or unstack it ok, did something
02:59:220 (1) - Change to slider, this one's a bit too short no, I like this way. if others will mention this I'll change
03:23:766 (3) - Not properly snapped to 1.0x ok
03:57:857 (4) - Blanket ok
03:58:539 - Spinner ok

Playable, but some 1/1 sounds extra, stick to the music and try not to make it hard as well
More opinion and mods could make it perfect, keep up da good work :d

[Normal]
00:01:948 - Make this silence or something 5% fixed this also to other diffs to 15%
00:51:039 (1) - Blanket this (either move it looks like blanket or change the shape) no change
00:52:857 (3) - Blanket rawr ok
01:24:675 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - GG pattern @_@ '' looks so hard to even look at it, try to reduce note density and perfect stacks on sliders like 01:25:811 (4) - ok, tryed to fix
01:29:902 (6) - I'm sure this would be a bit hard to rank you're right. aaah flow make me do this things, why!?!? >.<
02:59:220 (1) - Change to notes, spinner to hard imo, and something can be hit instead of spin here no change
03:16:948 - Maybe try to increase the AR, at this point you are hitting the first note but you can see 5th note start to coming out hm... don't really understand this..
03:55:584 (2,3,4,5) - Change it to some sliders and follow vocal, there's like nothing here for 1/1 no change for now

Kinda a bit different from my map, I prefer 1.2x DS for whole map since lots of 1/4 and almost all notes are sticked together :c
Rhythm are fully followed by the music, which is good, keep up~

[Hard]
AR8 looks a bit fast, try to reduce it, make it around 7.7~7.8 ok
03:16:493 (6) - Stack with 03:15:584 (4) - might be a bit strange, try not to let both slider tail stacked (or make it least)
^ Like this 03:24:675 (7,8,9,1) - would be fine hm... tryed something.. hope I understood well, anyway I think it was perfectly readable

Can't find major mistakes in the diff >_< not my fault cuz it's your mapping style
Gj!

[Insane]
AR9 is a bit too fast, the BPM and note dense is not that high, try something around 8.6 good
00:06:720 - Prefer to follow vocal here, looks more insane and looks alike with 00:02:857 (1,2) - tryed
00:56:493 (1) - Try to move this away from stacking, hard to read cuz 00:55:925 (3) - and 00:57:175 (2) - are stacked in the same place as well nah, I think in this case is ok for the insane diff
01:18:311 (2) - NC for SV change ok
01:25:811 (1,2) - Prefer one slider with reverse, feel it's more fit to the BG music ok
01:34:220 (6,7,8) - Cool pattern geh ^.^
02:10:811 (1,2,3) - Feel this one's forced to vocal, suggest rhythm like this no, I prefere to leave this way

image

02:11:720 - Clap no
03:56:948 (1) - Prefer to stack around right btm corner after 03:55:811 (2) - , more flowy and easier to read, don't troll players to retry :d lol ok

Not overmapped, looks perfectly fit with the music XD/
Keep up~

Thank you for mod!

Hi, luxoDeh! From my queue! Sorry for a late mod, busy fangirling. I should've modded this already >_<

A quality map! Here's my die hard mod ;_;

Overall, Insane is fine as hell, GJ anyway!
Yes, I have no light, except my eyes and my a$s are spitting out light at night, soab me... ~(⊙ω⊙ ~)

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, luxoDeh! From my queue! Sorry for a late mod, busy fangirling. I should've modded this already >_<

A quality map! Here's my die hard mod ;_;

[> General <]

1. - Remove the .osb file on your map, you don't use storyboard.

[> Easy <]

1. 00:13:766 (2) - Curve more for a better Claw formation with the next slider. ok
2. 00:26:493 (1,2) - You've used 1.0x spacing 'til here, by then, the spacing is bad just for a blanket. ok
3. 00:38:311 (2,3) - Nazi, Perfect the blanket here, just one downgrid on the slider (3)'s last point. ok
4. 00:44:220 (1,2) - ^, rightgrid. ok
5. 00:59:220 (1,2) - Change the placement of slider (2) nearby front of slider (1)'s tail. Keeping the flow smoother. And watch the spacing. fixed
6. 01:21:039 (1,2) - Make a blanket here like you've did on the next notes, a bit of symmetry, instead of breaking the flow here. no, it's ok
7. 01:44:675 (4,1) - ^, or you're trying to make a Claw form here? hm... I just mapped, didn't really thought about it O.o
8. 01:54:675 (3,1) - Same as 00:38:311 (2,3) - ok
9. 02:11:039 (1,2) - I prefer this kind of pattern for smoother flow, just curve the slider (2) downgrid > http://puu.sh/ba6vn/4174e8e799.png no, I'll leave it as it is in both way the flow is the same imo
10. 02:52:857 (1,1,1) - This looks confusing to newbie players, they might think it's a 1/2 beat or some triplet, to avoid that, just make a triangle formation here. I don't think it was so confusing but tryed to change anyway
11. 03:16:493 (3,4) - Blanket? ok
12. 03:17:857 (4,2) - Stack to avoid a little overlap. ok
13. 03:21:948 (1,2,3) - Check your spacing, looks like a jump here. oh, I didn't noticed it
14. 03:34:675 (3) - Did you made this ugly slider on purpose? if so, it looks meh. I was actually trying to make something different... but anyway it's ok to change
15. - No suggestions~

[> Normal <]

1. 00:16:948 (3,4) - Perfect the blanket here. ok
2. 00:19:220 (1,2) - Nazi, a little overlap there. fixed
3. 00:28:766 (5,2) - ^, how about a little blanket here? ok
4. 00:40:811 (2) - I prefer this kind of slider here, it'd fit the song track > http://puu.sh/ba9k3/57cdbb247e.png hm... I'll leave it as it is
5. 00:48:993 (3) - Same reason as the previous diff, just remake it as a normal curved slider, since it's between it. why? no, it's ok to me
6. 00:49:902 (4,1) - Same as 00:16:948 (3,4) - for better X formation. tryed to fix it again...
7. 01:07:402 (5,6,7) - Symmetry here? ok
8. 01:17:175 (2,3) - Check your spacing here. ok
9. 01:19:220 (4,5) - ^ ok
10. 01:29:902 (6,7) - Improve the flow here, just curve them much. tryed..
11. 01:41:493 (5,1) - Same as 01:07:402 (5,6,7) - not here
12. 02:07:402 (1,3) - same as 00:19:220 (1,2) - no it's ok as it is
13. 02:15:584 (2,3) - I was think about these two sliders why are they ugly, omg... i don't understand this flow here >_> I just tryed to make something different. I want to try keeping the different shape. it's not for the flow (wich is ok anyway) is just to change and try to make it less boring..
14. 02:19:220 (2) - I think reducing this slider as a 1/1 slider should hit the beat on 02:19:675 - for the song track and the vocals. Add a circle next to it if so. no, is ok as it is
15. 02:21:948 (1) - ^ ^
16. 02:32:857 (8) - Add NC? new track ok
17. 02:52:857 (1,1,1) - Same reason as the previoud diff yes but no change. I think in normal diff is ok
18. 03:17:630 (8,9,10) - Replace these circles as a slider? it'd fit the rhythm but much pure hits would tire players. tryed but I'm not sure..
19. 03:21:039 (5,6) - Same as 01:07:402 (5,6,7) - ok
20. 03:24:902 (7,8,9) - Same as 03:17:630 (8,9,10) - ok
21. - No suggestions as well.

[> Hard <]

1. - Check AiMod for your spacing, although you want to keep some for you. hm... there are not spacing issues that AiMod can tell O.o
2. 00:11:039 (1,2,3) - Perfect the blanket here. ok
3. 00:28:311 (1,4) - Rotate the slider (4) a little for better flow and stack with circle (1). ok
4. 00:47:402 (1,2,3) - Instead of stacking like this, make a triangle formation. no, I like this stack
5. 00:58:084 (1,2,3) - To avoid overlapping like this one, Stack. Or split for triangle formation. no. for me the overlap is ok here and also I don't want to change pattern here
6. 01:30:357 (4,5,6) - What a big jump for a Hard diff, looks like an Insane here. maybe, but I'll keep it
7. 01:31:039 (1,1,1) - Much weird NCs there, just remove them on 01:31:493 (1,1) - , and make a better blanket on them. of caurse not because there is a SV change, and also blanckets were ok..
8. 01:52:857 (1) - Move this circle on the place where slider (6) exactly is, Better flow. ok, eaven if maybe now the jump is a bit high
9. 02:00:811 (2,3,4) - Same as 00:58:084 (1,2,3) - same to me too
10. 02:08:766 (3,4) - Same as 00:11:039 (1,2,3) - ok
11. 02:17:630 (8) - Move the circle's placement to x:128|y:140, Better flow. ok
12. 03:11:039 (1,2,3) - Make a triangle formation here, and i don't know if this overlap is on purpose... o.o yes it is on purpose and no change
13. 03:22:857 (4,5) - Same as 00:11:039 (1,2,3) - no, it's ok
14. 03:28:766 (8,4) - Stack. ok
15. 03:37:175 (3,7) - Much like an overlap, split. no, it's ok
16. - (OvO)b

Overall, Insane is fine as hell, GJ anyway!
Yes, I have no light, except my eyes and my a$s are spitting out light at night, soab me... ~(⊙ω⊙ ~) hm... lol? xDDD

Thanks for mod

From my queue

[Easy]
02:59:220 (1) - short spinners are unacceptable for Easy. I almost broke combo while testing diff because of this spinner. You can replace it with slider.
00:39:675 (4) - make reverse maybe?
00:56:948 (3) - why clap is at begin and end of slider? I through you put it before downbeat and nowhere else. I noticed it, because they sound strange.
01:10:130 (1) - could you fix it? http://puu.sh/bbuFx/93d2fc2460.jpg Propose to change slider like it shown at screens: http://puu.sh/bbwa5/d65e2ba8bc.jpg or http://puu.sh/bbwmg/d369cd3356.jpg
01:52:857 (1) - make blanket more curved http://puu.sh/bbxcs/3adedbae06.jpg

[Normal]
02:59:220 (1) - same
03:44:902 - looks empty. Maybe add circle since you have note at same part 03:48:084 - ?

[Hard]
I suggest to increase LeadIn by 1 sec. When player starts play diff, he doesn't know what objects will be the first or how they placed. Just give to players 1 second to prepare before spinner.
If you will make it, don't forget to add LeanIn to other diffs
00:30:357 (4,5) - I'd replace it with circle and slider http://puu.sh/bbAkN/eef2477030.jpg Slider = "heart" in lyrics. Or even better idea: http://puu.sh/bbAMJ/ae6d8685ad.jpg It's just an example of slider's form, but I think you get main idea.
01:01:948 (1,3) - stack please
Such good blankets and flow!

[Insane]
01:17:857 (1) - so fast for relatively calm part! Decrease SV Multiplier to 1.4x at least maybe?
01:34:220 (6,7,8,1) - very difficult to read. I suggest don't cover this slider 01:34:675 (1) -

Nothing else can find. Good luck!

TrigonometrY wrote:

From my queue

[Easy]
02:59:220 (1) - short spinners are unacceptable for Easy. I almost broke combo while testing diff because of this spinner. You can replace it with slider.
00:39:675 (4) - make reverse maybe? no
00:56:948 (3) - why clap is at begin and end of slider? I through you put it before downbeat and nowhere else. I noticed it, because they sound strange. lol this is perfectly right. I have a clap every 2 white line
01:10:130 (1) - could you fix it? http://puu.sh/bbuFx/93d2fc2460.jpg Propose to change slider like it shown at screens: http://puu.sh/bbwa5/d65e2ba8bc.jpg or http://puu.sh/bbwmg/d369cd3356.jpg tryed
01:52:857 (1) - make blanket more curved http://puu.sh/bbxcs/3adedbae06.jpg ok

[Normal]
02:59:220 (1) - same
03:44:902 - looks empty. Maybe add circle since you have note at same part 03:48:084 - ? no, it's ok

[Hard]
I suggest to increase LeadIn by 1 sec. When player starts play diff, he doesn't know what objects will be the first or how they placed. Just give to players 1 second to prepare before spinner. oh, yes I forgot to change it before
If you will make it, don't forget to add LeanIn to other diffs
00:30:357 (4,5) - I'd replace it with circle and slider http://puu.sh/bbAkN/eef2477030.jpg Slider = "heart" in lyrics. Or even better idea: http://puu.sh/bbAMJ/ae6d8685ad.jpg It's just an example of slider's form, but I think you get main idea. good idea
01:01:948 (1,3) - stack please ok
Such good blankets and flow!

[Insane]
01:17:857 (1) - so fast for relatively calm part! Decrease SV Multiplier to 1.4x at least maybe? no, it's ok
01:34:220 (6,7,8,1) - very difficult to read. I suggest don't cover this slider 01:34:675 (1) - ^

Nothing else can find. Good luck!

Thank you for mod

Hello there from my modding queue

[Insane]

• HP=7 because 8 might be too much

1. 00:44:448 (2,3) - I think you emphasis the beat on (3) too much lower down the spacing to somthing like this http://puu.sh/beWPe/22b664be1c.png
2. 00:48:084 (3) - I find Ctrl+G will get nice flow for me but I think it no need to use high spacing here since the music start to stay the low tone and doesn't need to do high spcing for low tone here but I suggest high spacing here 00:48:766 (4) - because of emphasis in hard beat
3. 01:20:811 (2) - How about this ? http://puu.sh/beXnI/9e250e9281.png it doesn't hurt flow and spacing much and it also fix overlap too
4. 01:23:766 (1) - Kind of looks a bit bad you can improve curve of this slider
5. 01:48:766 (6,7) - Spacing can be improve here just copy-paste 01:48:311 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/beXFc/36fafb9eb7.png
6. 02:03:084 (3) - I recommend to not use 1/4 slider I think it doesn't consist with 02:03:311 (4,5,6,7) -
7. 02:21:948 (1,2) - Suggest to use high spacing here to emphasis beat on this 02:22:630 (2) -
8. 02:26:493 (3) - Suggest Ctrl+G for better cosmetic since this does looks like 02:25:584 (1) -
9. 03:02:857 (3,3) - Stack perfectly (x=209 y=204)
   Nice Insane only suggestions here also you can improve some blanket but I think you didn't intend to do blanket much like this one 03:26:266 (3,4) - so I don't say much about blanket

[Hard]

1. 01:22:630 (6,7,8,9) - Better diamond shape like this http://puu.sh/beYWR/c52ff275f0.png
2. 02:26:720 (3) - Ctrl+G I just don't recommend symmetry here
3. 03:11:493 (2,3) - Intend to overlap ?
   Good job, nice Hard I like it

[Normal]

1. 00:42:630 (4) - Delete it maybe? Better rhythm
2. 01:37:630 (6) - Delete this if you want to emphasis a beat here 01:37:857 (7) -
   Well this Normal is just not my taste so I don't suggest very much but you can use more pattern in Normal I think this Normal is a bit too boring for me. Some notes are also a bit overmapped for Normal

[Easy]

1. 00:40:584 - Add a note here so HS on downbeat will consistent
2. 01:05:584 (1) - y-1 to line up 01:04:675 (3,1) - so it consistent with 01:04:220 (2,4) -
3. 02:05:130 - Add a note here so HS on downbeat will consistent
4. 03:37:857 (2,3) - Recommend to line up
   ์Nice Easy not many suggestions here

Overall
Nice map but you can make Normal more intresting
Have a star

Good luck

CelsiusLK wrote:

Hello there from my modding queue

[Insane]

• HP=7 because 8 might be too much decreased to 7.5

1. 00:44:448 (2,3) - I think you emphasis the beat on (3) too much lower down the spacing to somthing like this http://puu.sh/beWPe/22b664be1c.png ok
2. 00:48:084 (3) - I find Ctrl+G will get nice flow for me but I think it no need to use high spacing here since the music start to stay the low tone and doesn't need to do high spcing for low tone here but I suggest high spacing here 00:48:766 (4) - because of emphasis in hard beat no change here
3. 01:20:811 (2) - How about this ? http://puu.sh/beXnI/9e250e9281.png it doesn't hurt flow and spacing much and it also fix overlap too yes, it's ok
4. 01:23:766 (1) - Kind of looks a bit bad you can improve curve of this slider ok
5. 01:48:766 (6,7) - Spacing can be improve here just copy-paste 01:48:311 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/beXFc/36fafb9eb7.png fixed
6. 02:03:084 (3) - I recommend to not use 1/4 slider I think it doesn't consist with 02:03:311 (4,5,6,7) - no change
7. 02:21:948 (1,2) - Suggest to use high spacing here to emphasis beat on this 02:22:630 (2) - yes
8. 02:26:493 (3) - Suggest Ctrl+G for better cosmetic since this does looks like 02:25:584 (1) - ok, fixed
9. 03:02:857 (3,3) - Stack perfectly (x=209 y=204) they weren't meant to be stacked but anyway fixed xD
   Nice Insane only suggestions here also you can improve some blanket but I think you didn't intend to do blanket much like this one 03:26:266 (3,4) - so I don't say much about blanket

[Hard]

1. 01:22:630 (6,7,8,9) - Better diamond shape like this http://puu.sh/beYWR/c52ff275f0.png tryed to fix
2. 02:26:720 (3) - Ctrl+G I just don't recommend symmetry here ok
3. 03:11:493 (2,3) - Intend to overlap ? yes it was intentional
   Good job, nice Hard I like it

[Normal]

1. 00:42:630 (4) - Delete it maybe? Better rhythm no
2. 01:37:630 (6) - Delete this if you want to emphasis a beat here 01:37:857 (7) - here's ok
   Well this Normal is just not my taste so I don't suggest very much but you can use more pattern in Normal I think this Normal is a bit too boring for me. Some notes are also a bit overmapped for Normal

[Easy]

1. 00:40:584 - Add a note here so HS on downbeat will consistent didin't add now... but maybe I will..
2. 01:05:584 (1) - y-1 to line up 01:04:675 (3,1) - so it consistent with 01:04:220 (2,4) - ok
3. 02:05:130 - Add a note here so HS on downbeat will consistent ok
4. 03:37:857 (2,3) - Recommend to line up ok
   ์Nice Easy not many suggestions here

Overall
Nice map but you can make Normal more intresting
Have a star

Good luck

Thank you for the mod

From paper modding queue
[General]

• 
  Add Ceremonials in source.And Florence and The Machine in tags.

[Insane]

• 
  Half the volume before the first kiai time,the volume of the song is really low...
  00:48:766 (4,1) - blanket
  03:01:948 (1) - The vocal at 03:02:175 make it looks strange.How about make the slider finish here?
  00:47:402 (1,2,3) - bad flow
  01:17:857 (1) - I don't think it's proper...and most player will not notice the fasten slider velocity in the first play count
  01:22:175 (1,2,3,4) - bad flow,maybe make 1,2,3,4 blanket 6 will be better
  With too near distance,your insane seems to be too easy

Hard is good.
I love this AMV so I hope you will make insane a bit more exciting...
Good luck!

I tried to dl. My computer calls it a corrupt file or smthn. Sorry

hhkkyy wrote:

From paper modding queue
[General]

• 
  Add Ceremonials in source.And Florence and The Machine in tags. not 100%sure if ok

[Insane]

• 
  Half the volume before the first kiai time,the volume of the song is really low...
  00:48:766 (4,1) - blanket ok
  03:01:948 (1) - The vocal at 03:02:175 make it looks strange.How about make the slider finish here? no, it's ok
  00:47:402 (1,2,3) - bad flow not really
  01:17:857 (1) - I don't think it's proper...and most player will not notice the fasten slider velocity in the first play count but it is an insane diff, it won't be a big problem imo
  01:22:175 (1,2,3,4) - bad flow,maybe make 1,2,3,4 blanket 6 will be better no, it's ok
  With too near distance,your insane seems to be too easy but it's ok anyway, and of caurse it's not a hard, there's no actual problem with it

Hard is good.
I love this AMV so I hope you will make insane a bit more exciting...
Good luck!

Thank you for mod

yurunneram wrote:

I tried to dl. My computer calls it a corrupt file or smthn. Sorry

hm... ok xD

bg/audio/video mod

used this image to make a clearer, less artifact-filled version of your bg. here is that:
if you want to use a modern aspect ratio w/ more pixels, you can use this 16:9 version. the only problem is that it crops off a bit much for 4:3 players.

Now for your video and mp3. They both include the credits portion, but none of the diffs map that part so it's kinda pointless. Here are the cut versions of both the audio and video.

pishifat will give you the new offsets

no kudosu

from ^

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hi o/ from MQ
ohh Steins;Gate

[Genenal]
none

[Insane]
00:54:448 (1) - how about 00:40:357 (2) - ctrl+g 00:40:811 (3) - ctrl+g 00:41:493 (4) - ctrl+g?
01:20:811 (2,3) - sad flow
01:22:402 (2) - fix stack just 0.01x don't slap me
01:01:039 (3) - out of bounds
01:27:402 (1) - ^
03:36:493 (1) - ^
03:41:493 (4) - ^
02:22:630 (2,3) - how to ctrl+g and 02:23:084 (4) - 278,297
03:05:130 (5) - improve blanket

[Hard]
00:54:448 (1) - how about 01:04:675 (7) - out of bounds
02:30:357 (3) - maybe this overlap is not allowed in Hard diff
03:11:493 (2,3) - ^
03:18:084 (1,2,3) - how about 03:58:311 (6) - NC?

[Normal]
01:26:493 (7) - make beginner confuse
fine

[Easy]
fine

good luck o/
prpr

El psy congroo

Woh! Finally updated!
EL PSY CONGROO

Hey, as requested :3





I hope my mod was helpful
Good luck for rank <3

Um sorry, i downloaded this map and i can't open it, it says it's corrupted. I've try to download again, and i can't open it again. So i can't mod it. Sorry for the inconvience.

i played it// just want to say - i didnt liked how this white like combocolour blended with some parts of video, mb you should change it..

hey there!
mod from my queue :3
I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General

1. It doesn't really matter but what's up with the name of background image..? O-O
2. think about changing up the combo colours. your current ones are all very similar in brightness, so they are hard to differentiate sometimes and like ego_17 said slightly blend with the background video (not just the light grey tune). you could go with higher contrasts, that looks more interesting! :3
   if you wanna change them and have trouble finding nice colours, feel free to ask for help ingame!

Easy

1. remove SV changes from this diff, it's way too hard for beginners. remember the diff is for players who just started playing and they have to learn how to read approach circles and distances yet. they'll be really confused about changing speed and distances, even if the SV changes fit the song. it's above their skill level.
2. hitsounds in the beginning are a tiny bit too loud, imo. I'd prefer if you reduce them to ~35%
3. 00:00:185 (1,1) - recovery time is too less for Easy diff, replace the slider with a cirlce on the downbeat at 00:05:639. then the approach circle appears after the spinner's gone, so it doesn't cause any confusion.
4. 00:11:094 (1,2) - you could blanket this really nicely ;w;
5. 00:26:548 (1) - rhythm feels off, two slider match better, imo - http://puu.sh/d2bpv/1b4f906a11.png
6. 00:30:185 (4,1) - even if there is enough time to get 1, you could keep the DS consistent here as the higher DS doesn't make it more interesting or anything (and jumps, even if small, are a no-go in Easy anyway (imo))
7. 00:33:139 (1,1) - as mentioned above, the object's way too close to the spinner. beginners need more recovery time. how about replacing the spinner with a long slider?
8. 00:44:275 (1,2) - refine blanket please >w<
9. 00:56:094 (2,3) - the rhythm doesn't match, I think. you could try this instead - http://puu.sh/d2bM0/567bd2d580.png
10. 01:31:548 (1,2) - move 2 further to the right to improve movement by a lot, it feels a little forced atm. (blanketing is nice, but flow's more important I think. ;-; at least in lower diffs)
11. 01:42:003 (1,2,3,4) - why do you end 1 and 3 on the red ticks? the beats are clearly on the white ones.
    if you wanna add more vareity to the diff there are other, better ways, I think. .o.
    same here - 02:11:094 (1,2) -
12. 01:54:730 (3,1) - similar to 01:31:548 (1,2), you can try this - http://puu.sh/d2c4v/1284775aa3.png - that smoothens he movement and still looks good
13. 02:19:730 (2) - shorten this and add a circle at 02:21:548, that goes super-well with beat and vocals - http://puu.sh/d2cd9/4941285f78.png
14. 02:28:821 (1,2,3) - blanket better, please ;w;
15. 02:33:139 (1) - I think this should end on 02:36:094 and not on the downbeat, cause vocals start there again, which makes the spinnerend feel off
16. 02:52:912 (1,1,1) - fix DS. (really, how are beginner players supposed to read anti-jumps? >: ..)
17. 02:58:366 (1,1) - cause of the on-going sound I'd prefer if you replace the circle with a slider starting at the red tick after the first slider - http://puu.sh/d2cBI/ead6c9471c.png
18. 03:12:912 (3) - missing a hitsound on the reverse, it gets kind of lost atm ;-;
19. 03:25:639 (1,2) - movement could be improved here, from 2 to 03:29:275 (1) - , too. try this - http://puu.sh/d2cIu/6373f7c7f7.png

Normal

1. I'm not sure if it's a godd idea to use CS4 in 3 diffs, how about 3.5 in Normal? since you have so many objects it might look very crowded if you go lower than that
   remember to fix blankets in case you change something!
2. 00:24:730 (3,4) - if this follows the vocals it should look slightly different I think? try this - http://puu.sh/d2dfb/d6566af6c9.png
3. 00:33:025 (1,1) - end the spinner a white tick earlier to ensure players have enough recovery time after it
4. 00:47:457 (1,3) - agreeing with Kenterz here, for further information you might wanna pay a visit to t/256438
   but I've seen a lot of them ranked anyway, so.. Idk?
5. 00:49:957 (4,1) - blanket could need a little refining ;-;
6. 00:54:503 (1,2) - split this at a later point and replace second slider with a cirlce? this goes better with beat/vocals - http://puu.sh/d2dnS/566a9dde4b.png
7. 01:16:321 (1) - the number of objects is sooo high, I'd suggest to break the combo at this point, so players don't get so tired out - http://puu.sh/d2dtT/657a472bb3.png
8. 01:26:321 (6,7) - unstack them to avoid unnecessary confusion. the previous aren't stacked either, so it feels al little off
   also, consider ending 7 a white tick before, the beat's louder than the one on the red tick (and the combo's getting so long again..)
9. 01:27:457 (1,2) - similar to ^, how about shortening 1 to the white tick and add a reverse? just remove 2, it plays good, I think
10. 01:47:685 (1) - this is, imo, still too short for Normal diff. the spinner will be gone once players realize there is one. :/ replace with slider?
11. 02:22:912 (2,3) - don't stack on sliderends, it's way harder to read than normal stacks and therefore for most Normal players unreadable!
    same here - 03:17:912 (9,1) - and 03:25:185 (8,1) - (NCing doesn't make this better readable, I'm afraid)
12. 02:52:912 (1,1,1) - same as in Easy - fix DS.
13. 02:57:457 (2,3) - blanket's a little off. also, it should look better and be fine if you place this at 0.85 DS. then it doesn't look as cluttered as it does atm
14. 02:59:275 (1) - uhm. mentioned before, this is WAY too short. and the following object 03:00:639 (1) - definitely is too close. Normal players aren't on a level where they can read these things.

Hard
I like the diff, but some random jumps bother me a little. I don't see any specific reason for the jumps as they're not placed on particular loud beats or anything..? it shouldn't be an issue since you use them constantly, but at some points they feel off, so think about changing them a bit. anyway -

1. AR7,8 seems a little to high, consider lowering it slightly? (to ~7.2 ~ 7.5, should balance the spread slightly already)
2. 00:11:094 (1,2) - jump isn't bad, but considering the beginning is so calm and slow you migth wanna avoid it? I'm sure you can alternate the slidershape so you can place it at regular 1.2 DS
3. 00:22:003 (2,3,1) - ^
4. 00:28:821 (2,3) - -cough blanketpls-
5. 00:45:639 (6) - why don't you stack this below 00:44:503 (2) - ? looks better, I think
6. 00:57:003 (6) - jump is mreh, imo. ;-; but if you wanna keep it, consider stacking it below 00:56:321 (3) - , that flows better (> easier to play)
   if you do that you can blanket 00:56:775 (5) - really nicely with 00:57:685 (7) -
   also, wether you changes something or not, the movement to 00:58:139 (1) - is weird, cause of the shape, consider curving it differently
   or overall suggestion - http://puu.sh/d2f4c/397b693d7d.png
7. 01:04:048 (4,5,6) - I'd prefer if you use regular spacing here cause this part is slowing down slightly and jumps don't match with this
8. 01:05:412 (8,9,1) - no beat where 9 is. feels overmapped to me. :/ it's totally playable, but why place something there if there is no beat and no vocals?
   there are several others of them. look for them yourself if you wanna change them, please
9. 01:11:775 (6,7,8,9,10) - similar to 01:04:048 (4,5,6)
10. 01:17:457 (1,1,2) - these speed changes don't make any sense to me. the patterns work very nicely without changing speed, so consider using regular SV.
    same goes for 01:26:548 (1,1,2) - and 01:31:548 (1,1,2) - and 03:32:003 (1,1,1) -
11. 01:30:412 (4,5,6) - jumps seems exaggerated, move them a little closer? the song's still rather calm here
12. 01:36:548 (5) - ctrl+g this for better flow, you might also wanna ctrl+g 01:37:003 (6) - then
13. 01:51:775 (6) - how about ctrl+h and rotating it a little, so it looks like this - http://puu.sh/d2fxi/f597873d21.png - that flows better, imo
    if you do that you might wanna place 01:52:685 (8) - somewhere else
14. 02:06:548 (8,9,1) - jump shouldn't be from 7 to 8, but from 9 to 1 instead, no? cause the beat's way louder
15. 02:09:957 (5,6,7) - I'd prefer regular spacing here, cause it's so calm

skipping Insane, cause I can't play it and am tired of the song, sorry.
but the song's cool, good luck with ranking it! :3

Kenterz wrote:

Hey, as requested :3

Easy

00:44:275 (1,2) - You can improve this blanket here ok
01:21:094 (1) - I suggest to reverse this slider's curve, to increase the flow a bit : ok

SPOILER

01:54:730 (3,1) - The blanket between (1) and (3)'s tail can be improved it was not supposed to be blancket
03:29:275 (1) - This slider is quite weird... I suggest this kind of pattern (it's just a suggestion) : ok

SPOILER

03:38:821 (4) - This slider's last curve is strange, you should make the end like this : fixed

SPOILER

Normal

I think CS4 is too small for a Normal, it's going to be hard with HR =/ it is 3.5 now

00:47:457 (1,3) - I'm afraid these sliders are unrankable... You should probably change them to avoid issues for ranking I really won't say unrnakable O.o why? I saw a lot worst sliders shape in ranked maps
01:45:412 (6,1) - You can maybe make a blanket here ? ok

This diff is very polished and quite perfect.

Hard

00:13:821 (3,1,2) - The end of these sliders looks strange. Try to move the inherited point exactly at the beat you want to decrease the volume (on the red tick), then it won't decrease the volume of the sliderslider at the blue tick. good suggestion
00:20:185 (3,1) - ^
00:44:503 (2) - Just a suggestion, but you can stack this with 00:42:685 (7)'s tail maybe ? ok, tryed
00:47:912 (2) - I think it'd be better to destack it, it won't annoy people when playing with Hidden mod. I suggest to move it around x68|y200 no, I like it that way. plus I think it's better to not make it too easy for hd
01:10:639 (4,5) - The blanket can be improved. ok

Insane

00:02:912 (1,2) - Actually the pattern should be like this : not sure. I don't like that way

SPOILER

00:06:548 (3,4) - ^
00:10:185 (4,5) - ^
00:14:730 (2,3) - This jump is breaking the distance snap you have between 00:13:821 (1,2) and 00:15:639 (3,4). You should try to use the same distance snap here, it's a slow part, so it doesn't needs jumps. it's really not a proble. plus I don't want to hurt the pattern
01:03:139 (4) - Try maybe to stack it with 01:02:003 (1)'s tail ? tryed
01:23:139 (5,1) - The blanket can be improved. ok
01:34:616 (8,1) - This jump is so hard... And the pattern is quite unreadable. I suggest to delete this circle. really no. and it's not unrankable ofc.
01:58:366 (1,3) - There's a little overlapping here, it'd be perfect if you fix it tryed, but anyway not really a problem imo
02:29:275 (1,3) - ^ ^
03:54:730 (1) - I think this slider is quite unrankable, you should just try this kind of shape : no. it's not unrankable at all.

SPOILER

I hope my mod was helpful
Good luck for rank <3

Thank you for modding

Hello

[General]

1. Offset needs +8 ~ +10
2. Uncheck countdown.
3. Artist should be "Florence + the Machine" since this is what they have on official site and CD's.
4. Title should be "No Light, No Light" http://ceremonials.florenceandthemachine.net/media

[Easy]

1. 00:26:548 (1,2,3) - Check DS here.
2. 00:28:366 (2,3) - Make this sliders by copy-paste, so they will be similar.
3. 00:33:139 (1,1) - There should be 1 full measure of recovery time -> 1500 ms for easy.
4. 01:16:548 (1,3) - Normal whistles here sounds pretty inconsistent\random.
5. ^ Also applies to:
   01:26:094 (2) -
6. From 01:35:639 (2) - until kiai. It's quite strange that you choose this part to put normal whistles and not kiai because it's obvious that they is strong hitsounds and should stress strong part in music which happens on kiai.
7. 02:33:139 (1) - Something like soft set + finish on 20% volume fill fit better at the end.
8. 02:52:912 (1,1) - Check DS here.

[Normal]

1. 00:04:957 (1) - Should start from 00:04:730 () like 00:08:366 (1) - well, at least make them consistent because they similar in music
2. 00:31:094 (2,1) - Check DS here.
3. 00:33:025 (1) - There should be 2 beats recovery time -> 750 ms for normal
4. ^ Also applies to:
   01:47:685 (1) // 02:59:275 (1) -
5. 00:42:912 (5) - No need to extend this, should end on strong beat 00:43:366 () This slider is different from similar 00:51:094 (1) - cus you have no lyrics after 00:43:139 () - so best way will be follow strong music beats.
6. 01:08:366 (7) - Split this into slider + circle to actually allow player to "play" very strong beat 01:09:275 () -
7. 01:25:639 (3,4,5,6,7) - Five 1\2 hits in a row may be a bit tiring for normal level players.
8. ^ Also applies to:
   03:42:685 (5,6,7,8,9) -
9. 01:26:321 (6,7) - This stack after 01:25:639 (3,4,5) - will be way too confusing to play for normal level players.
10. 01:29:730 (5,6) - Following lyrics this should be as 1 slider.
11. 01:41:548 (5) - Split this into circle + circle to actually allow player to "play" very strong beat 01:42:003 () -
12. 01:45:412 (6) - Also this slider music wise should be just circle on 01:45:639 (6) - Take care with finish emphasized beats, strong emphasized beats should be played by player (which slider end can't provide) in other case there is no sense to emphasize them.
13. ^ Also applies to:
    02:10:185 (4) // 03:28:821 (6) // 03:43:594 (9) // 03:57:457 (6) -
14. 03:25:185 (8,1) - Do not stack under slider, this is way too confusing to play for normal level players.
15. 03:34:730 (4) - Slider shape have questionable quality and not so clear path which is important for normal.
16. ^ Also applies to:
    03:38:366 (4) -

[Hard]

1. 00:04:957 (1,1) - Same as for normal
2. 00:30:185 () - Add circle here or extend slider to this point, quite strong lyrics beat.
3. 00:47:457 (1,2) - This plays terrible, better to unstack 2 to something like 48:164
4. 01:34:275 (5) - Why this one is extended there is no noticeable sound on blue tick, no long sounds in music here too
5. ^ Also applies to:
   01:37:457 (7) // 02:17:912 (9) // 03:01:094 (2) // 03:05:185 (3) // 03:14:275 (11) // 03:19:275 (2) // 03:30:185 (4) // 03:32:457 (1) // 03:34:730 (5) -
6. 02:32:685 (9,1) - There should be noticeable jump according to music here.
7. 02:52:912 (1,1) - You almost stack this on normal and now it spaced out, hm…

[Insane]

1. AR 8 will fit bpm better.
2. 00:02:912 (1,3,3,4) - What happened with this sliders snapping?
3. 00:17:760 (6,7) - Lyrics is not in 1\6
4. ^ Also applies to
   00:21:094 (4,5) // 00:25:033 (5) -
5. 00:38:139 (1,2) - Extended for no reason, moreover you skipped quite strong beats 00:38:366 () - 00:38:821 () -
6. ^ Also applies to
   00:59:730 (3) // 01:14:275 (3) // 01:17:912 (1) // 01:27:003 (1) // 01:35:639 (3) // guess you can find them all by yourself
7. 01:23:821 (1) - Even considering that this is blanket slider shape have questionable quality.
8. 01:34:389 (7,8,1) - By unstacking 01:34:730 (1) - and making clear visible path you improve playability here a lot.
9. 02:03:139 (3) - Replace this with 1 circle to improve playability of following stream.
10. 03:27:230 (1) - off-screen

Good Luck!

Well I downloaded and played your map (Insane only) so I thought I'd comment:

Like Sieg said the title is wrong and it should be No Light, No Light

See:
http://ceremonials.florenceandthemachine.net/media (links to itunes to)
https://itunes.apple.com/gb/album/no-li ... d485714697

[Insane]

1. I really dislike the normal whistle; it sounds so bad and interferes with my enjoyment f the map. I think it'd be better if you replaced all normal whistle with soft whistle + hitnormal
2. At the intro the notes seem kinda off; I question whether it's actually 1/6 but mapping the vocals on this part will always be difficult. I'd definitely get more opinions on this
3. Sometimes I felt there was a bit to much 1/4 but you've mapped so much of it I think it works in its own way

00:00:185 (1) - Reduce the volume on this it's too loud compared to the music; 20% would be good imo
00:03:821 (3) - If you could end this at 00:04:730 - it'd be good because at the moment you miss out "in" from "hole in my head". Or add a note
00:26:775 (3,4) - Eh it doesn't really fit the song; it's playable I guess
00:30:185 (2,3) - ^ feel a slider would be more appropriate
01:34:616 (8,1) - Spacing is a bit tricky compared to 01:34:275 (6,7,8) - it's doable though
02:20:866 (5) - I'm not keen on the 1/8 I don't feel it adds anything but i guess it's okay
02:28:139 (6) - ^
02:31:775 (2,3) - Here I don't think it fits at all. I think using 1/2 circles as a pattern would be better flow and rhythm.
02:52:912 (1,1) - You need to make these hitnormal because the kick is so loud xD
02:55:639 (1,2,3) - ^ at the start
03:03:821 (1,2,3) - Hm the spacing is kinda far compared to the rest of the map
03:18:821 (2,3) - Be careful with the spacing; you've mapped similar pattern at 03:07:457 (1,2) - and 03:08:821 (4,1) - as 1/4 and it's almost identical.
03:27:230 (1) - Offscreen; move it up or draw a new slider
03:49:048 (1,2) - Again be careful with the spacing; 03:29:275 (1,2) - was 1/4 but looks almost identical.
03:54:730 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - Soft hitsounds would be better

Overall you have a nice flow and it's quite fun. I'd be happy if you removed that normal whistle lol

That's all from me, maybe I'll get to the other diffs another day.

Hello luxoDeh! from my queue

This is just the NM, you can still use the ticket for another map if you want :3







I didn't mention a lot in the harder diffs, because I think you should look at Sieg's mod about the overmapping.

But overall, the mapset is nicely done. I'm not sure if the hitsounds overall are OK, but the placement and rhythm seems to be fine.

Good luck!

I save this post for a replay when I have time D:

Squirrel wrote:

hey there!
mod from my queue :3
I'm just making suggestions, feel free to disagree!

General

1. It doesn't really matter but what's up with the name of background image..? O-O
2. think about changing up the combo colours. your current ones are all very similar in brightness, so they are hard to differentiate sometimes and like ego_17 said slightly blend with the background video (not just the light grey tune). you could go with higher contrasts, that looks more interesting! :3
   if you wanna change them and have trouble finding nice colours, feel free to ask for help ingame!

Easy

1. remove SV changes from this diff, it's way too hard for beginners. remember the diff is for players who just started playing and they have to learn how to read approach circles and distances yet. they'll be really confused about changing speed and distances, even if the SV changes fit the song. it's above their skill level.
2. hitsounds in the beginning are a tiny bit too loud, imo. I'd prefer if you reduce them to ~35% no
3. 00:00:185 (1,1) - recovery time is too less for Easy diff, replace the slider with a cirlce on the downbeat at 00:05:639. then the approach circle appears after the spinner's gone, so it doesn't cause any confusion. lol nope, it's perfectly ok
4. 00:11:094 (1,2) - you could blanket this really nicely ;w; yes but no.
5. 00:26:548 (1) - rhythm feels off, two slider match better, imo - http://puu.sh/d2bpv/1b4f906a11.png no, it's ok
6. 00:30:185 (4,1) - even if there is enough time to get 1, you could keep the DS consistent here as the higher DS doesn't make it more interesting or anything (and jumps, even if small, are a no-go in Easy anyway (imo)) ok, I didn't noticed
7. 00:33:139 (1,1) - as mentioned above, the object's way too close to the spinner. beginners need more recovery time. how about replacing the spinner with a long slider? really no.
8. 00:44:275 (1,2) - refine blanket please >w< ok
9. 00:56:094 (2,3) - the rhythm doesn't match, I think. you could try this instead - http://puu.sh/d2bM0/567bd2d580.png no
10. 01:31:548 (1,2) - move 2 further to the right to improve movement by a lot, it feels a little forced atm. (blanketing is nice, but flow's more important I think. ;-; at least in lower diffs) no, no need of it
11. 01:42:003 (1,2,3,4) - why do you end 1 and 3 on the red ticks? the beats are clearly on the white ones. it's ok
    if you wanna add more vareity to the diff there are other, better ways, I think. .o. why don't you tell me some?
    same here - 02:11:094 (1,2) -
12. 01:54:730 (3,1) - similar to 01:31:548 (1,2), you can try this - http://puu.sh/d2c4v/1284775aa3.png - that smoothens he movement and still looks good ok
13. 02:19:730 (2) - shorten this and add a circle at 02:21:548, that goes super-well with beat and vocals - http://puu.sh/d2cd9/4941285f78.png no
14. 02:28:821 (1,2,3) - blanket better, please ;w; ok
15. 02:33:139 (1) - I think this should end on 02:36:094 and not on the downbeat, cause vocals start there again, which makes the spinnerend feel off no
16. 02:52:912 (1,1,1) - fix DS. (really, how are beginner players supposed to read anti-jumps? >: ..) ok, just one
17. 02:58:366 (1,1) - cause of the on-going sound I'd prefer if you replace the circle with a slider starting at the red tick after the first slider - http://puu.sh/d2cBI/ead6c9471c.png no
18. 03:12:912 (3) - missing a hitsound on the reverse, it gets kind of lost atm ;-; no lol
19. 03:25:639 (1,2) - movement could be improved here, from 2 to 03:29:275 (1) - , too. try this - http://puu.sh/d2cIu/6373f7c7f7.png no

Normal

1. I'm not sure if it's a godd idea to use CS4 in 3 diffs, how about 3.5 in Normal? since you have so many objects it might look very crowded if you go lower than that hm...
   remember to fix blankets in case you change something!
2. 00:24:730 (3,4) - if this follows the vocals it should look slightly different I think? try this - http://puu.sh/d2dfb/d6566af6c9.png no
3. 00:33:025 (1,1) - end the spinner a white tick earlier to ensure players have enough recovery time after it no, is ok
4. 00:47:457 (1,3) - agreeing with Kenterz here, for further information you might wanna pay a visit to t/256438 no change
   but I've seen a lot of them ranked anyway, so.. Idk?
5. 00:49:957 (4,1) - blanket could need a little refining ;-; ngh, can't do it
6. 00:54:503 (1,2) - split this at a later point and replace second slider with a cirlce? this goes better with beat/vocals - http://puu.sh/d2dnS/566a9dde4b.png no
7. 01:16:321 (1) - the number of objects is sooo high, I'd suggest to break the combo at this point, so players don't get so tired out - deleted onehttp://puu.sh/d2dtT/657a472bb3.png
8. 01:26:321 (6,7) - unstack them to avoid unnecessary confusion. the previous aren't stacked either, so it feels al little off ok
   also, consider ending 7 a white tick before, the beat's louder than the one on the red tick (and the combo's getting so long again..) no
9. 01:27:457 (1,2) - similar to ^, how about shortening 1 to the white tick and add a reverse? just remove 2, it plays good, I think no
10. 01:47:685 (1) - this is, imo, still too short for Normal diff. the spinner will be gone once players realize there is one. :/ replace with slider? no
11. 02:22:912 (2,3) - don't stack on sliderends, it's way harder to read than normal stacks and therefore for most Normal players unreadable! ok
    same here - 03:17:912 (9,1) - and 03:25:185 (8,1) - (NCing doesn't make this better readable, I'm afraid)
12. 02:52:912 (1,1,1) - same as in Easy - fix DS. not here for now
13. 02:57:457 (2,3) - blanket's a little off. also, it should look better and be fine if you place this at 0.85 DS. then it doesn't look as cluttered as it does atm hm..
14. 02:59:275 (1) - uhm. mentioned before, this is WAY too short. and the following object 03:00:639 (1) - definitely is too close. Normal players aren't on a level where they can read these things. no change

Hard
I like the diff, but some random jumps bother me a little. I don't see any specific reason for the jumps as they're not placed on particular loud beats or anything..? it shouldn't be an issue since you use them constantly, but at some points they feel off, so think about changing them a bit. anyway -

1. AR7,8 seems a little to high, consider lowering it slightly? (to ~7.2 ~ 7.5, should balance the spread slightly already) no
2. 00:11:094 (1,2) - jump isn't bad, but considering the beginning is so calm and slow you migth wanna avoid it? I'm sure you can alternate the slidershape so you can place it at regular 1.2 DS no change, this is fine
3. 00:22:003 (2,3,1) - ^
4. 00:28:821 (2,3) - -cough blanketpls- fixed
5. 00:45:639 (6) - why don't you stack this below 00:44:503 (2) - ? looks better, I think tryed
6. 00:57:003 (6) - jump is mreh, imo. ;-; but if you wanna keep it, consider stacking it below 00:56:321 (3) - , that flows better (> easier to play)
   if you do that you can blanket 00:56:775 (5) - really nicely with 00:57:685 (7) - changed a bit here
   also, wether you changes something or not, the movement to 00:58:139 (1) - is weird, cause of the shape, consider curving it differently
   or overall suggestion - http://puu.sh/d2f4c/397b693d7d.png
7. 01:04:048 (4,5,6) - I'd prefer if you use regular spacing here cause this part is slowing down slightly and jumps don't match with this no
8. 01:05:412 (8,9,1) - no beat where 9 is. feels overmapped to me. :/ it's totally playable, but why place something there if there is no beat and no vocals?
   there are several others of them. look for them yourself if you wanna change them, please I hear the beat.
9. 01:11:775 (6,7,8,9,10) - similar to 01:04:048 (4,5,6) ^
10. 01:17:457 (1,1,2) - these speed changes don't make any sense to me. the patterns work very nicely without changing speed, so consider using regular SV.
    same goes for 01:26:548 (1,1,2) - and 01:31:548 (1,1,2) - and 03:32:003 (1,1,1) - why would you mention this? it is fine and is just something particular.. itherwise the map is more boring to me
11. 01:30:412 (4,5,6) - jumps seems exaggerated, move them a little closer? the song's still rather calm here hm..
12. 01:36:548 (5) - ctrl+g this for better flow, you might also wanna ctrl+g 01:37:003 (6) - then yes
13. 01:51:775 (6) - how about ctrl+h and rotating it a little, so it looks like this - http://puu.sh/d2fxi/f597873d21.png - that flows better, imo
    if you do that you might wanna place 01:52:685 (8) - somewhere else nah, it will be overlapped with other things in this way..
14. 02:06:548 (8,9,1) - jump shouldn't be from 7 to 8, but from 9 to 1 instead, no? cause the beat's way louder I like it in my way also
15. 02:09:957 (5,6,7) - I'd prefer regular spacing here, cause it's so calm no

skipping Insane, cause I can't play it and am tired of the song, sorry.
but the song's cool, good luck with ranking it! :3

I'll continue later

Ranking plz!!

Ranking plz!!!

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