1. Asphyxia's Insane (4,83 stars, 365 notes)
2. Extra (5,26 stars, 395 notes)
3. Hard (3,45 stars, 266 notes)
4. Normal (2,08 stars, 166 notes)
5. ZLOdeuka's Easy (1,8 stars, 166 notes)

1. Yo, those jumps tho. (I say this as a jump-lover) Good job with the distances.
2. Although it is an Extra, and it's pretty hard to be picky with anything above Insane, I think it's quite unforgiving with an HP drain of 8 and OD of 9. That's just me. I probably shouldn't complain just because I failed the first playthrough xD, but that's how I feel.
3. 00:32:973(4) I found it odd to play. The only odd part about this combo is that it ends the phrase (without ending the combo too) with a sliderend as the final downbeat. Usually, that would be fine wouldn't it? I just think, with the flow that you have going here, it seems weird to do that.

1. Have you mapped a lot before? The patterns are quite fun to play.
2. 00:56:912(1) I think this circle should be spaced a little bit further away from the last circle. Earlier, you introduced some jumps that, during my sightread, I thought were being replicated here. Although it is true to say "pay attention to the approach circles, Tsumi, you noob!," I pay a LOT of attention towards flow, patterns, jumps, and combos throughout a map I'm playing. I say this to clear the thought you might have that I'm just being picky.

1. 00:08:427(3,1,2) These three sliders look a tad messy. Like, they look as if they are THERE, but not because they are connected to the next slider by flow. For reference, 00:18:124(3,1,2) looks a lot nicer. I can see how they flow together. I'm denying any sort of "flow" at 00:08:427 if you're wondering.

1. 00:18:427(1,2) I'm not sure what distance spacing had to say about this (if you used it), but the sliderend of slider 1 is spaced with slider 2 the same way all the other quarter beats are. HOWEVER since slider 2 isn't a quarter beat from slider 1, I think you should indicate that more obviously by slider 2 (and I suppose the notes coming afterwards too since a change like this affects them) to the left a little bit. JUST enough to indicate the extra eighth beat after the quarter beat.
2. It sounds better if you move the spinnerend from 01:37:215 to 01:37:064 in my opinion.

Tsuchimikado wrote:

Greeeeetings from my modding queue!

[Asphyxia's Insane]

1. Have you mapped a lot before? The patterns are quite fun to play. Aw thanks! I've mapped maybe one map similar to this but, nothing impressive lmao
2. 00:56:912(1) I think this circle should be spaced a little bit further away from the last circle. Earlier, you introduced some jumps that, during my sightread, I thought were being replicated here. Although it is true to say "pay attention to the approach circles, Tsumi, you noob!," I pay a LOT of attention towards flow, patterns, jumps, and combos throughout a map I'm playing. I say this to clear the thought you might have that I'm just being picky. Hmm you have a valid point there, I still think that this is super easy to read and even if I would go for more spacing, it'd feel too much, the music doesn't ask for (much) more imho so keeping it like this is cool too~ I hope this makes sense xD

1. Aldnoah.Zero might be considered one term in tags, so also add Aldnoah Zero separately
2. Add TV size to tags in case people search for that

1. 00:01:609 (3) - make middle point closer for blanket http://puu.sh/aKwb3/a01d238e91.png
2. 00:11:155 (4,5) - 00:16:003 (4,5) - deleting (5) and making (4) a 2 beat long slider plays better
3. 00:32:670 (2,3) - avoiding overlap at all looks nicer
4. 00:47:215 (3,4) - improve blanket
5. 01:03:276 (1) - it looks smoother if you make the angles around the red slider point the same like http://puu.sh/aKwwg/8880c08b6d.png

1. 00:00:246 (1,2) - make them the both type of slider?
2. 00:07:518 (1,2) - improve blanket
3. 00:11:155 (1,2) - any reason why there is increased spacing between notes like these?
4. 01:01:761 (2) - make middle point closer for blanket

1. 00:03:882 (1,2) - blanketing (2)'s slider end looks better than trying to blanket the head, since that's hard to notice
2. 00:34:791 (3,3) - try to make them overlap completely
3. 00:45:700 (2,1) - drag middle point of (1) to 388, 64 and end point to 508, 40 for better blanket
4. 01:21:761 (2) - drag middle point to 136, 156 for blanket
5. 01:23:882 (1) - let this take on a more neutral angle between 01:23:730 (3,2) for better flow like http://puu.sh/aKvyl/0fe9f1d250.png similar to 01:34:791 (1,2,3)

1. 00:06:155 (1) - move middle slider point to 228, 176 and end point to 144, 200 for perfect blanket. may have to adjust 00:06:609 (2,3) -
2. 00:09:639 (10) - I don't personally have anything against 3/4 sliders and this one plays pretty well, but there is a pretty prominent sound on the red tick 00:09:791 and nothing on the blue tick so using a 1/2 slider here would follow the music better
3. 00:12:064 (3) - here too and a couple other 3/4 sliders throughout the map
4. 00:12:367 (1,2,3,4) - I think following the same rhythm as 00:00:246 (1,2,3,4) suits the music better especially since the red ticks you're leaving unmapped are pretty strong
5. 00:29:791 (1,2) - move (2) to 20, 152 for blanket
6. 00:43:124 (3) - end point to 300, 188
7. 00:56:609 (4,1,2) - there's a new combo but i think overlapping (4) and (1) like http://puu.sh/aKurs/0a80857b16.png would make the time difference of 1 beat followed by 1/2 beat easier to read
8. 01:21:761 (2) - try ctrl-g for better flow?
9. 01:28:124 (4) - drag end point down a grid for blanket
10. 01:35:245 (5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 13 2-3x distance snap 1/2 beat circles in a row is too hard for an insane, this much usually belongs in extra

1. 00:32:367 (3,4) - it'd look a bit neater if you let a portion of (3) blanket (4)
2. 00:50:245 (3) - ctrl-g would be better flow
3. 01:19:033 (4) - the flow is kind of awkward right now, try http://puu.sh/aKsWz/fe4785e8a2.png or http://puu.sh/aKt3C/e30305e793.png
4. 01:26:912 (3,4,5,6) - forming a square with these looks better http://puu.sh/aKtqm/137ed7c322.png since these 4 notes are the same and there's no reason to have a larger jump between any of them.
5. 01:29:336 (3,4,1) - your other 1/2 circle stacks are spaced a little apart so do the same here to stay consistent

xxdeathx wrote:

LET JUSTICE BE DONE, THOUGH THE HEAVENS FALL

[General]

1. Aldnoah.Zero might be considered one term in tags, so also add Aldnoah Zero separately Not needed, just searching for aldnoah will have it show up anyway
2. Add TV size to tags in case people search for that

Already changed titoru

[Normal]

1. 00:00:246 (1,2) - make them the both type of slider? why :/
2. 00:07:518 (1,2) - improve blanket it's not supposed to be a blanket but I did a blanket cuz why not :3
3. 00:11:155 (1,2) - any reason why there is increased spacing between notes like these? Yes, it looks better than if I'd have used the same DS. At least I made it consistent throughout
4. 01:01:761 (2) - make middle point closer for blanket

okok

[Hard]

1. 00:03:882 (1,2) - blanketing (2)'s slider end looks better than trying to blanket the head, since that's hard to notice I'm not going for a specific blanket here tho :p
2. 00:34:791 (3,3) - try to make them overlap completely oki
3. 00:45:700 (2,1) - drag middle point of (1) to 388, 64 and end point to 508, 40 for better blanket fixd
4. 01:21:761 (2) - drag middle point to 136, 156 for blanket fixd
5. 01:23:882 (1) - let this take on a more neutral angle between 01:23:730 (3,2) for better flow like http://puu.sh/aKvyl/0fe9f1d250.png similar to 01:34:791 (1,2,3)

works great, thanks!

[Extra]

1. 00:32:367 (3,4) - it'd look a bit neater if you let a portion of (3) blanket (4) changed slider shape cuz unhappy with it to begin with
2. 00:50:245 (3) - ctrl-g would be better flow naww mayne
3. 01:19:033 (4) - the flow is kind of awkward right now, try http://puu.sh/aKsWz/fe4785e8a2.png or http://puu.sh/aKt3C/e30305e793.png naaaaww maaaayne
4. 01:26:912 (3,4,5,6) - forming a square with these looks better http://puu.sh/aKtqm/137ed7c322.png since these 4 notes are the same and there's no reason to have a larger jump between any of them. 01:17:215 (3,4,5,6,1) - I'm going for this effect, it's reoccuring in these parts of the song
5. 01:29:336 (3,4,1) - your other 1/2 circle stacks are spaced a little apart so do the same here to stay consistent

Thanks!
sorry extras are hard for me to mod

Love this song (Aldnoah Zero soundtrack) and map, I look forward to seeing it ranked!!

• don't use chars in tags like ed 2 where '2' is splited by spaces.

• 00:02:670 (1,2) - make perfect blanket
  00:05:094 (1,2) - ^
  00:37:215 (2,3) - ^
  00:39:639 (2,3) - ^?
  00:42:367 (3,1) - overlap, it must be readable
  00:49:336 (3,4,5) - make blanket?
  00:52:064 (3,1) - same like 00:42:367 (3,1) -
  01:16:609 (3) - what this slider follow?
  01:19:336 (4,1) - make blanket?
  01:31:458 (4,1) - ^, to not overlap on 01:33:579 (3) -

• 00:00:852 (2) - unsharp slider and make like the slider on 00:00:246 (1) -
  00:17:215 (1) - smooth slider like next one?
  01:04:791 (2,3) - make sym here
  01:11:458 (2,1) - stack slide tails perfect
  01:21:458 (1) - unsharp, smooth for blanket

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

Hi, from VV modding queue~

[General]

• don't use chars in tags like ed 2 where '2' is splited by spaces.

[ZLOdeuka's Easy]

• 00:02:670 (1,2) - make perfect blanket
  00:05:094 (1,2) - ^
  00:37:215 (2,3) - ^
  00:39:639 (2,3) - ^?
  00:42:367 (3,1) - overlap, it must be readable
  00:49:336 (3,4,5) - make blanket?
  00:52:064 (3,1) - same like 00:42:367 (3,1) -
  01:16:609 (3) - what this slider follow?
  01:19:336 (4,1) - make blanket?
  01:31:458 (4,1) - ^, to not overlap on 01:33:579 (3) -

[Normal]

• 00:00:852 (2) - unsharp slider and make like the slider on 00:00:246 (1) - No change sorry
  00:17:215 (1) - smooth slider like next one? sure!
  01:04:791 (2,3) - make sym here hmm
  01:11:458 (2,1) - stack slide tails perfect thanks
  01:21:458 (1) - unsharp, smooth for blanket

thanks

no kudos if mod is useless... good mapset~ ^^

HabiHolic wrote:

[ZLOdeuka's Easy]

00:11:155 (4,5) - 00:11:761 (5) - this note delete and 00:11:155 (4) - this slider increase 00:11:155 (4) - here

[Normal]

00:00:852 (2) - like this? I'll keep as it is for now, might change later

SPOILER

00:28:124 (1) - Delete NC why?
00:32:670 (1) - same(^)
00:37:821 (1) - same(^)
01:21:458 (1) - blanket please changed

SPOILER

01:36:306 (1) - Delete NC The NC's are consistent as well as possible, why change that? :s

[Hard]

00:23:579 (2) - Ctrl + g Please. now is bad flow
00:31:003 (2) - bad spacing
00:45:700 (2) - Ctrl + g?
changed all, thanks

[Asphyxia's Insane]

00:22:367 (3) - move 268:232
00:22:518 (4) - move 228:64
00:57:973 (2) - Ctrl + g?
01:00:018 (7) - this note don't need
01:02:442 (7) - ^
Good diff!! Gratz Asphyxia!

[Extra]

Nice

HabiHolic wrote:

[Asphyxia's Insane]

00:22:367 (3) - move 268:232 Okay, I like the stack movement more now o/
00:22:518 (4) - move 228:64 I want to keep the stack, so I'm keeping it!
00:57:973 (2) - Ctrl + g? I feel like this would cause an unnecessary jump there which I don't want to, this current way I can keep the jump between 1->2 and still have a relatively nice spacing from 2 to 1, otherwise it'd ruin my plans for this so I'd love to keep it!
01:00:018 (7) - this note don't need
01:02:442 (7) - ^ Hmm, after listening these parts several times, I think these fit really well and idk, I feel like there's just something there so I'd love to keep these aswell!
Good diff!! Gratz Asphyxia! Wow, thank you a lot HabiHolic!

Nice

Kuron-Kun wrote:

Insane

Beautiful. Aw thank you <3

00:03:882 (1) - Curving this looks a bit better, also the flow. I fixed it a bit, not the curve but the position.

00:52:821 (2) - This slider is following the vocal but it skips the strong beat in the song, it's a bit weird because all the rest is following the beats. You can do this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951370, this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951375, or whatever pattern you like. I like this very much though, skipping one important beat isn't too bad imho and besides, it follows the vocals perfectly and it plays nicely too. I MIGHT end up fixing it later more people mention, but for now I want to keep it like this.

01:16:609 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - omg this is so beautiful So are you<3

01:22:973 (2,3) - The transition between these 2 objects is a bit weird imo. You can Ctrl + G 01:23:276 (3) - and increase the DS of 01:22:973 (2) - moving it to x276 y352 or somewhere near, then stack 01:23:730 (4) - with 01:24:791 (4) - and Ctrl + G 01:23:882 (1) - . I think this is better, hope you understand something. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951398 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1951402. Would ruin how I wanted this to play, you have a nice example but sorry, I prefer mine :/

1. Huh, video starts that late? Is that because of the Anime?
   
   
2. Actually, your BPM is double from what it should be. BPM 99 goes perfectly with the drums and is what you should use.

1. 00:11:155 (4,5) - According to your previous rhythms, this one is kinda too difficult. Generally you should avoid 1/2 rhyhtms on Easys so just delete 5 and end the Slider on its position.
2. 00:16:003 (4,5) - Same as above.
3. 00:24:488 - Would be better to map this downbeat as you mapped the previous one aswell, it'd be a lot easier for newbies to follow the rhythm like that.
4. 00:26:003 (4,5) - Constantly pressing circles is terribly tiering for newbies, so it becomes like harder and harder and will cause them to have a frustrating miss, how about making 4 and 5 a Slider?
5. 00:57:973 (3) - Move this one down a bit more, so it will look less messy with 1.
   
   Example

   
6. 00:59:942 (2) - Same as my first complaint, but this is even worse since the Slider is shorter which gives less recovery time to newbies.
7. 01:02:367 (2,3,) - Same here again.
8. 01:04:791 (2,3) - And again, you should be able to see those yourself by now.
9. 01:05:700 (1,2,3) - Try to space them out a little bit more so the spacing will fit to 4 and 5?
10. 01:18:124 (1,2) - It would be better not to start with a circle after that repeat Slider, will bring newbies more out of rhythm. So make 1 and 2 a Slider?
11. 01:26:894 (3,2) - The way 3 touches 2 looks untidy, how about making a blanket here?
12. 01:34:791 (1) - Change to default Soft for the Spinner, so the end won't have that unfiting sound. Also since there's nothing on the end it'd be sure better to change to 5% volume there.

1. Using NCs every second downbeat should work better here. Combos of 1 you have sometimes are too short and having shorter combos as in Easy seems weird.
2. 00:08:730 (1) - Removing the curve might work better here to follow the previous Slider's movement.
3. 00:19:033 (2) - The extra repeat here might confuse some players, how about spliting up into 2 1/2 Sliders?
4. 00:25:549 (3) - Reduce the spacing here, it's really confusing to read due to the high spacing you use on 1/2 rhythms.
5. 00:28:730 (2,1) - Same thing as above.
6. 01:26:912 (2,1) - How about moving 2 a bit to the right so you can stack 1 with the previous note to make it less messy?
7. 01:35:094 (1) - Move this up a bit so it won't touch the other Slider anymore.

1. 00:48:124 (4) - Would be cool if you could give this one a light shape too so it fits to the previous Slider.
   
   Example

   
2. 00:57:973 (2) - CTRL + G would improve the flow to 3 and the transition from 1 a lot in my opinion, have a try.
3. 01:01:458 (2) - Would be cool if you moved this a bit more away from 1's Sliderbody to prevent it from looking messy.
4. 01:04:488 (1) - Try CTRL + J to improve the flow, since the curve kinda moves weirdly away from the circles. You could try a little rotating if you want to, would make the pattern more free.
   
   Example

   
5. 01:25:094 (1) - Increase the curve a bit here? Would give the Slider a stronger expression kinda? Try it yourself.
   
   
6. 01:27:518 (1) - I found this jump a bit too harsh, to maintain spacing and make it consistent, you could try to CTRL + H and J 01:27:215 (4) - .
7. 01:36:306 (3) - Too sudden spacing increase for me here, try to move it to the pattern and make a square?
   
   

1. 00:02:594 (5) - Why do you use this note here although there's nothing to be heard? I find this just odd here and recommend to remove this note.
2. 00:05:018 (5) - Same here again.
3. 00:08:882 (5) - NC since there's a downbeat?
4. 00:09:639 (10) - 5% volume to the tail since it doesn't serve anything but to endure?
5. 00:11:609 (2) - Make this an 1/2 Slider to follow the drums and add a note to the position 2 ended?
6. 00:12:064 (3) - Same as for 00:09:639 (10) - .
7. 00:14:033 (2) - Same here as for 00:11:609 (2) - .
8. 00:16:458 (2) - And again if you followed the ones before.
9. 00:31:458 (4) - Mute the end as it doesn't follow anything.
10. 00:39:488 (2) - Kinda too huge jump for what the music resembles, would be nice if you could reduce the spacing here.
11. 00:42:670 (1) - Would be cool if you moved this a bit to the right to build a triangle with 3 and 4.
12. 00:50:549 (6) - How about trying to use a Slider with another direction to create a better transition to 8?
    
    
13. 00:51:988 (5) - Why using a triple here that doesn't follow the music? It doesn't really feel nice here. Just remove the note and leave it as 1/2 stack or space it out.
14. 00:52:821 (2) - Shorten it to an 1/2 Slider to catch the drums since they are really prominent here?
15. 00:54:185 (3) - Mute the end for the previous shown reason?
16. 00:59:942 (6,7,8) - Triples that start on a white tick aren't that good of an idea if they don't follow the music. If you start them on red ticks, they support the drum, but like this it sounds weird and tones the bass sound down. Just remove that note and do something else?
17. 01:00:700 (11) - Huh? Why that huge jump? Would be better to space this closer to 10 and have the jump impact on 1 instead?
18. 01:02:367 (6,7,8) - Same here as on 00:59:942 (6,7,8) - .

1. 00:01:382 (5) - Same as on Insane, why is this triple here when it does not follow the music?
2. 00:28:427 (7) - Move this into a line with 8 to make the view more pleasing.
3. 00:33:882 (5) - Kinda confusing, plays like one of the previous 1/2 stacks you used when it isn't. Move this either away or stack it completely to make the difference more clear.
4. 00:35:094 (4,1) - Same as above.
5. 00:37:215 (4) - Huuh, kinda random to see this shape, also doesn't really look appealing either. How about changing to a more regular one?
6. 01:07:973 (6) - Move this into a line with 4 and 5 to make it look more structured and maintain spacing?
   
   
7. 01:10:549 (1) - While it does follow the music and looks rather good, having a Slider lasting this long breaks the excitement a bit, so having a regular 1/1 Slider might be more what you want in an Extra.