DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix) · forum

Moo-Chan

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-08-30T20:14:08+00:00

EvilElvis wrote:
[Insane]
You should increase volum at beginning a bit (10-15%) because hitsounds it's kinda difficult to audible them ok
00:04:304 (6) - NC because of downbeat + it will be help with reading that anti-jump fixed
00:15:091 (7) - same ^
00:17:788 (4,5) - i'm really dislike that you killing all the movement wich you made before with this stack. You should make a jump here (you could try something like that) alright, I took your idea
SPOILER
00:19:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - doesn't flow well, doesn't look well. Also i do not get why you reduced spacing here 00:20:316 (4,5) - music don't calls for this. Soo some suggestions : took them all
SPOILER

00:21:158 (7,8) - try to increase spacing here and make the jump bigger, it'll be more fitting because of music fixed
SPOILER
00:24:529 (1,2,3,4,5) - that star looks messy made it more neater
00:26:889 (5,1) - waay too close, well it's still playable, tho, but not really enjoyable if you ask me. Better stack them or increase the spacing stacked them
00:35:990 (5,6,7,8) - flows kinda bad. Actually something like this : ok
SPOILER
will flow better and more intuitive. You could try something like this if you want add someBIGTASTYjumps :
SPOILER
00:38:686 (3,4,5,6) - huum try to make a better rhomb because current pattern looks kinda messy : cleaned it up
SPOILER
00:48:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - justapatternsuggestion : I think it fixed it
SPOILER
00:51:495 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - increase spacing between these "triangles" because it feels kinda ant-ijupmy ok
01:09:024 (6) - NC again alright
01:19:136 (5) - this tic should be mapped. ok
01:37:001 (3,4) - consider deleting theese notes it'll make rhytms more interesting. Moreover, music "stops" here eh, it feels empty without them
01:37:338 (1) - 01:46:945 (9) - you should start decreasing spacings from 01:37:338 (1) - because music actually starts to calm down here fixed

Well, this diff not really bad, but needs some improvement. yea i know ;w;

Still needs work.

Ty <3

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-08-31T03:59:19+00:00

EvilElvis wrote:
[Smug's Hard]
00:28:574 (1) - should be 1/2. 1/1 sounds not really good because these dilidilidongdong sounds way to strong to be unmapped okay, changed
SPOILER

00:28:574 (1) - well, you still can make sv change here like you did earlier, because it's sounds same with other moments
00:34:979 (3) - you overloading calm part with these hitsounds, please remove them
00:43:406 (1) - now hitsounds sounds weak for much faster part I hope i fixed the hitsounds
00:49:473 (3) - nonononono. You should map downbeat with circle or start slider on that thing, because new music part starting here and it should be emphazed stronger done
01:03:630 (1) - it will be much cooler if you increase sv a bit, you did great with emphazing this moment but it's not really enjoayble ingame. Use something around 0.75. Also remove clap from tail and use softsample for this yup, done
01:04:304 (1) - soft finish sounds much better I prefer clap
01:45:428 (1) - add circle on downbit and start spinner at blue tic. started spinner at red tick

I love that your diff pretty neat and way how you emphazing music changes. This diff almost ready, but sv at end too slow and it's not really enjoyabe, try to increase it a bit. thanks <3, but I like it being slow at the end because I think it's a good "you did it!" kinda section

thanks for mod~

updoot

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Squigly

449 posts

Joined August 2013

Squigly 2014-09-01T05:09:10+00:00

ey babe
i gotchyo mod rite heer

dis is onli insaen as requeztd

00:17:113 (7) - make this spacing consistent to the others, it looks like you accidently moved it
00:17:282 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could be a bit prettier considering most similar combos are nice even shapes this looks lik a house, maybe square it a bit more?
00:19:979 (2) - maybe move over to the right and try to make a sexy triangle
00:19:136 (3,4,5,6) - maybe smoother curve?
00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit neater, i honestly am too tired to think of a way S;
00:23:181 (1) - have it lead into the other notes
00:27:226 (1,2,3,4) - more symmetrical to its self? owo
00:31:608 (4,5,6) - i was thinking it would be cool to have the sliders decrease in slider velocity hear a little bit more for each, so that way it has more of an effect coming into the next section. the notes are also descending in tone so it would match that as well.
00:39:361 (1) - to stay consistent to the previous patterns this would need to be longer but thats up to you i suppose it just doesnt look very good when you see 2 long sliders played over beats and then in a similar sounding section you map it to break the consistency already upheld.

im tired, the rest coming after looks much more solid, maybe some little things would look better neater but you know im exhausted ;w;

aigoh

398 posts

Joined February 2014

aigoh 2014-09-01T09:15:30+00:00

Hi from modding queue! This was hard to mod b/c it was already good XD

[Insane]
change volume for timing point to 30%
00:55:203 (7,8,1) - ovemapping? maybe delete 00:55:456 (8)

[Hard]
00:10:035 (5) - move to 00:10:203
01:01:271 (2,3) - DS
01:26:552 (1) - why NC?
01:27:394 (3) - ^ NC here instead
01:26:552 (1,2,3) - ^
00:21:158 (1,1) - DS here is off just a little bit
01:45:597 (1) - whistle. In insane difficulty, there's a whistle.

[normal]
01:25:202 (3) - whistle
01:47:113 (1) - whistle.
01:46:776 (3) - add note/slider here

[notice][Easy]
01:46:102 (1) - whistle
[/noctice]

Moo-Chan

405 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-09-01T18:09:43+00:00

Squigly wrote:
ey babe
i gotchyo mod rite heer

dis is onli insaen as requeztd
00:17:113 (7) - make this spacing consistent to the others, it looks like you accidently moved it fixed
00:17:282 (1,2,3,4,5) - this could be a bit prettier considering most similar combos are nice even shapes this looks lik a house, maybe square it a bit more? I'll keep it how it is ><
00:19:979 (2) - maybe move over to the right and try to make a sexy triangle ok
00:19:136 (3,4,5,6) - maybe smoother curve? alright
00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - maybe a bit neater, i honestly am too tired to think of a way S; I shall keep it how et is
00:23:181 (1) - have it lead into the other notes ok
00:27:226 (1,2,3,4) - more symmetrical to its self? owo sure
00:31:608 (4,5,6) - i was thinking it would be cool to have the sliders decrease in slider velocity hear a little bit more for each, so that way it has more of an effect coming into the next section. the notes are also descending in tone so it would match that as well. I dont wanna mess with the SV anymore than I already have
00:39:361 (1) - to stay consistent to the previous patterns this would need to be longer but thats up to you i suppose it just doesnt look very good when you see 2 long sliders played over beats and then in a similar sounding section you map it to break the consistency already upheld. I'll keep
im tired, the rest coming after looks much more solid, maybe some little things would look better neater but you know im exhausted ;w; its okay~

mangocurry wrote:
Hi from modding queue! This was hard to mod b/c it was already good XD

[Insane]
change volume for timing point to 30% I'll keep it where it is
00:55:203 (7,8,1) - ovemapping? maybe delete 00:55:456 (8) fixed

Thanks guys <3

arronchu1207

804 posts

Joined December 2012

arronchu1207 2014-09-10T07:53:17+00:00

Hi M4M from queue

[Easy]
00:07:001 (2,1) - How about do a blanket here？
00:15:091 (4,1) - blanket better
00:25:203 (2,1) - ^
01:10:372 (1) - I think this slider is weird
01:14:417 (3) - ^
01:46:102 (1) - ^
[Normal]

00:39:360 (3) - How abou Ctrl+J and place it to x220 y116 ?
00:53:518 (5) - make it curve

[Hard]
I think AR7 is enough (or 7.5)
00:55:203 (3,1,2) - Try this ↓

this

[Insane]
HP-1 ?
00:05:653 (3,1) - Try blanket better
00:33:967 (3) - ^
00:18:799 (2) - How about Ctrl+H and place it to original place ?
00:38:349 (2) - How about Ctrl+J and place it to original place ?
00:42:731 (4) - ^
01:36:158 (10) - ^

[]

sorry for my poor English ;w;;;;
Good Luck >w<~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-09-10T10:32:28+00:00

arronchu1207 wrote:
[Hard]
I think AR7 is enough (or 7.5) the song is fast enough for AR8
00:55:203 (3,1,2) - Try this ↓ I don't see any noticeable difference, so I don't know what you mean
this

thank you for the mod, anyway~

I did some changes on my own

updoot

osu file format v13

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AudioFilename: DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Daikazokou DnB.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 64304
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)
TitleUnicode:Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)
Artist:DJ Genericname
ArtistUnicode:DJ Genericname
Creator:Moo-Chan
Version:Smug's Hard
Source:Clannad
Tags:chata ed ending liquid DNB Adam Whitton guineaq smallboat smug-
BeatmapID:467603
BeatmapSetID:196813

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-09-10T11:30:06+00:00

arronchu1207 wrote:
Hi M4M from queue

blue - applied
purple - consideration will be given/unsure
red - NOPE

[Easy]
00:07:001 (2,1) - How about do a blanket here？(2) blankets beginning of 00:04:304 (2) -
00:15:091 (4,1) - blanket better ? it's fine
00:25:203 (2,1) - ^ derp
01:10:372 (1) - I think this slider is weird I think it plays fine desu
01:14:417 (3) - ^ it would be boring if we don't have stuffs like those
01:46:102 (1) - ^ let's have some eye candies for newbies

sorry for my poor English ;w;;;;
Good Luck >w<~

update

osu file format v13

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Kinomi

1,220 posts

Joined August 2012

Kinomi 2014-09-12T03:15:35+00:00

General
rhythm is anyway tedious in the beginning. insane

Insane

12345678

00:05:316 (3,1) - a bit ugly....

SPOILER

00:15:765 (1) - do what you do like 00:40:035 (1,2,1) - , i think it fits the song better, of course you should change the next pattern if you decide to change

SPOILER

00:27:057 this empty is a bit tricky the drum is obviously continuous, adding a note here is better
00:51:833 (3,1) - it's better to separate them to avoid misreading. you can try some ctrl g like this
00:48:462 (5,6) - their spacing should be bigger since the piano tone is higher and higher.
00:58:911 an empty here can show the piano better, so you can remove 00:58:911 (3) - and stack 00:59:080 (4) - on tail of 00:58:574 (2) - than adjust the placement of 00:59:248 (5,6) -
01:28:574 (7,8) - i think they are not perfectly paralleled

00:11:046 (1) - this finish doesn't fit, try sc2 whistle
00:29:922 (1) - remove whistle on tail, and whistle on its head than add whistle on 00:30:597 (3) - head, 00:31:271 (1,4,5,6) - whistle each white line.
when you don't know how to use whistle , you can follow the piano or other tracks.
00:36:664 you miss a downbeat here, kinda confusing

SPOILER

00:44:080 (5,6) - whistle on white lines as you do 00:46:608 (5,6,7,8) -
00:21:833 - 00:29:585 lack of whistle, follow the piano and add some whistle
i can't catch all hitsound problems, remember that good hitsound can fit one or more tracks in music, or it can create its own track.
than mod your hitsounds yourself

guineaQ's Easy
00:09:361 (3) - whistle on head
00:54:192 (1) - finish
00:43:406 after this the diff lacks of whistle
01:37:675 (1) - after this the song still has 2,4 clap, i think you should add clap then
rhythm is a bit hard in some last parts

S.Boat's Normal
一开始的前奏阶段其实不用24白线都下whistle,像00:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - 这两小节一样只在第4条白线下whistle就够了，24whistle很吵，而且有些滑条带过了第二根白线，突然少了音效感觉别扭。
后面音效和easy一样，whistle美丽，跟着钢琴多加点
01:46:776 (1) - 这应该大白线开始转啊

Smug's Hard
00:02:451 (2) - unnecessary jump i think
00:07:675 (2,1,2) - same spacing but different empties, which leads to misreading
00:21:158 (1) - 00:23:181 (1) - 00:25:877 (1) - add whistle can help people read the sv change more easier, and whistle sounds good here
01:23:855 (1) - whistle on head is better
01:31:945 - 01:37:338 though the music is not so fierce here， the piano is still easy to hear, at least add some whistle on sownbeats
00:20:821 (3,1) - separate them, kinda hard to read the empty and sv change

that's all

Last edited by Kinomi 2014-09-12T06:03:06+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Moo-Chan

405 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-09-12T03:34:53+00:00

Tsukuyomi wrote:
General
rhythm is anyway tedious in the beginning. insane

Insane
00:05:316 (3,1) - a bit ugly.... made it neater
SPOILER
00:15:765 (1) - do what you do like 00:40:035 (1,2,1) - , i think it fits the song better, of course you should change the next pattern if you decide to change i think ill keep it how it is
SPOILER
00:27:057 this empty is a bit tricky the drum is obviously continuous, adding a note here is better i feel like it wouldn't fit because the part before this doesn't have a note either
00:51:833 (3,1) - it's better to separate them to avoid misreading. you can try some ctrl g like this fixed
00:48:462 (5,6) - their spacing should be bigger since the piano tone is higher and higher. done
00:58:911 an empty here can show the piano better, so you can remove 00:58:911 (3) - and stack 00:59:080 (4) - on tail of 00:58:574 (2) - than adjust the placement of 00:59:248 (5,6) - keep how it is
01:28:574 (7,8) - i think they are not perfectly paralleled think its fixed

have a rest. it's too far from my last mod, i even don't know how to mod now

thanks~

Narcissu

1,744 posts

Joined August 2012

Narcissu 2014-09-12T09:25:24+00:00

Xelie‘s request

BG ：1366*768 better than now……

why not use custom color …… i suggest ↓↓↓

SPOILER

Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 128,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,255

[insane]

HP - 2 …… play whit Hard Rack will fail if player can't get 98~100% ACC

00:21:327 (8,9) - music stop here …… so i suggest you stack note , not jump …… and …… about insane diff , i suggest you use consistent rhythm only if music stop . it's mean use 1/2 slider or 3/4 slider instead note like 00:00:765 (2) - 00:03:462 (2) - 00:04:304 (1,2) - …… .

00:24:192 (5,1) - too close …… maybe player can’t judge it's 1/1 here

00:33:967 - i dislike 0.75*SV …… It is not obvious , and 00:39:192 - is same , use same way if you wish 0.75*SV in 00:33:967 (3,8) -

00:40:372 (2) - NC …… point antijump

01:48:799 - delete whistle …… i think music need fade out

that's all …… star ~

Moo-Chan

405 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-09-13T01:43:42+00:00

Narcissu wrote:
Xelie‘s request

BG ：1366*768 better than now…… ok ill resize

why not use custom color …… i suggest ↓↓↓ sure

SPOILER
Combo1 : 255,255,128
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 128,128,255
Combo4 : 255,128,255

[insane]

HP - 2 …… play whit Hard Rack will fail if player can't get 98~100% ACC im gonna keep it where it is

00:21:327 (8,9) - music stop here …… so i suggest you stack note , not jump the piano gets higher in tune, and if i were to make it scak, it wouldnt flow with what i had before …… and …… about insane diff , i suggest you use consistent rhythm only if music stop . it's mean use 1/2 slider or 3/4 slider instead note like 00:00:765 (2) - 00:03:462 (2) - 00:04:304 (1,2) - …… . i feel like adding sliders here would make the map seem overmapped

00:24:192 (5,1) - too close …… maybe player can’t judge it's 1/1 here fixed

00:33:967 - i dislike 0.75*SV …… It is not obvious , and 00:39:192 - is same , use same way if you wish 0.75*SV in 00:33:967 (3,8) - took away the 0.75*SV and did some things of my own

00:40:372 (2) - NC …… point antijump fixed

01:48:799 - delete whistle …… i think music need fade out fixed

that's all …… star ~ thank you~

Thanks!

Midge

475 posts

Joined December 2012

Midge 2014-09-13T03:09:47+00:00

m4m <3

[Easy]

00:34:642 - add a note here, there's a piano sound
00:45:765 (2,1) - idk about this pattern. it works, but it's confusing. i'd strongly recommend following the piano, but it seems you're already set on the drums
00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - make these parallel http://puu.sh/bwKqT/3b61dcbd50.jpg
00:55:203 (2,3,4) - looks wonky, move 4 to x:360 y:80
01:04:304 (2) - move to x:196 y:84 (looks neater)
01:17:113 (2) - should follow the drums instead of the slider
01:39:698 (5,1) - swap nc
01:41:046 (3) - nc

[Normal]

00:08:349 (1) - blanket instead of usign a red anchor
00:09:697 (3,4) - not parallel (proof: http://puu.sh/bwKFb/90d80b0c56.jpg)
00:35:652 (2) - sorry, nazi mod, move red anchor to x:428 y:356 http://puu.sh/bwKLH/cc3cabe79d.jpg
01:34:642 (1,2) - blanket looks off
01:47:113 (1) - start at 01:46:439

[Hard]

first dt runthrough and replay

http://puu.sh/bwL3w/39d9732961.osr

00:07:001 (1) - move to x:184 y:304 (semi-blankets 4)
00:17:788 (1,2,3) - stack 2 and 3 on 1?
00:19:810 (1) - rotate this a little bit http://puu.sh/bwLmh/df824ecc44.jpg
01:25:372 (5,6,1) - eeehh i wouldn't have these stack

[Insane]

first runthrough and replay

http://puu.sh/bwLfS/6b35bfc831.osr

00:01:608 (6) - nc?

eh, i think this map is fine

Good set mate o/

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-09-14T12:57:06+00:00

Sorry very late reply this time x_x"

To mangocurry : Sounds like fine,so no change it.
To arronchu1207 : 第一項改了
Thanks mod ~ !

Tsukuyomi wrote:
General

S.Boat's Normal
一开始的前奏阶段其实不用24白线都下whistle,像00:00:260 (1,2,3,4) - 这两小节一样只在第4条白线下whistle就够了，24whistle很吵，而且有些滑条带过了第二根白线，突然少了音效感觉别扭。恩，前面調了點音效
后面音效和easy一样，whistle美丽，跟着钢琴多加点是指哪裡?
01:46:776 (1) - 这应该大白线开始转啊好，fixed.

感謝BBQ了~ !

Midge wrote:
m4m <3

[Normal]

00:08:349 (1) - blanket instead of usign a red anchor fixed
00:09:697 (3,4) - not parallel (proof: http://puu.sh/bwKFb/90d80b0c56.jpg) Copy (3) and fixed.
00:35:652 (2) - sorry, nazi mod, move red anchor to x:428 y:356 http://puu.sh/bwKLH/cc3cabe79d.jpg Nothing,fixed.
01:34:642 (1,2) - blanket looks off Move a bit.
01:47:113 (1) - start at 01:46:439 NO

Thanks mod ~ !

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[General]
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Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-09-16T07:54:18+00:00

Midge wrote:
[Hard]

first dt runthrough and replay

http://puu.sh/bwL3w/39d9732961.osr

00:07:001 (1) - move to x:184 y:304 (semi-blankets 4) done
00:17:788 (1,2,3) - stack 2 and 3 on 1? nah
00:19:810 (1) - rotate this a little bit http://puu.sh/bwLmh/df824ecc44.jpg done
01:25:372 (5,6,1) - eeehh i wouldn't have these stack done

Good set mate o/

Tsukuyomi wrote:
Smug's Hard
00:02:451 (2) - unnecessary jump i think changed
00:07:675 (2,1,2) - same spacing but different empties, which leads to misreading changed
00:21:158 (1) - 00:23:181 (1) - 00:25:877 (1) - add whistle can help people read the sv change more easier, and whistle sounds good here
01:23:855 (1) - whistle on head is better
01:31:945 - 01:37:338 though the music is not so fierce here， the piano is still easy to hear, at least add some whistle on sownbeats don't like the whistle
00:20:821 (3,1) - separate them, kinda hard to read the empty and sv change hard to move

thanks for the mods, I'm slow at replying to them >_<

updoot

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Tags:chata ed ending liquid DNB Adam Whitton guineaq smallboat smug-
BeatmapID:467603
BeatmapSetID:196813

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Maruyu

742 posts

Joined July 2013

Maruyu 2014-09-23T11:42:13+00:00

Hello!~ here from Strawberry Mousse modding queue~

Let's get it started, shall we?~

Guinea Pig's Easy

00:00:260 (1) - The movement on 00:00:260 (1,2,3,1) - seems a bit weirdish to me, mostly because of the angle on that triangle with the tail and 2 circles on 00:00:260 (1,2,3). I'd solve this issue by just placing 00:00:260 (1) like this, what this does is allowing a better curve, which ends up in relieving a bit the cursor at 00:02:956 (1) because of the upward movement:
Example
00:09:024 (2,3) - I would advise against the usage of this 1/2 rhythm. You can easily simplify this into a 1/1 repeating slider starting at 00:09:024 (2) and ending at 00:10:035, it feels much better at least to me.
00:40:035 (2) - Consistency!~ Either remove this circle or add one at 00:37:338 and 00:34:642. I'd personally have you remove it for simplicity's sake
I feel like the way you mapped the pre-kiai section is a bit questionable; not because of the 1/2 density that shows up because of the song (which is OK), but because of some patterns. Some to point out would be:
00:49:810 (2,1,2,1,2) - This feels a bit too clumped up together. But the pattern with 00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - is what I really dislike. it feels a bit too sudden as a movement change for an easy difficulty.
00:59:585 (1,2,3,1) - There's also no reason for your density to go down so much at this point, the song is exactly the same as before and this time you fill it with a big 1/1 reverse for no sudden change in the song. As I said before, consistency!~
I'm gonna take up on the suggestion above this one: your kiai time should usually be the hardest part in your diff, with a more highlighted and noticeable rhythm. The fact that you just fill it up with sliders feels wrong to me, and I'd simply advise you to go through it again and make sure if you want to keep it or not. I advise you not to.
01:39:698 (5,3) - This is a very confusing stack due to the 180º cursor movement change. I'd change it by just reorganizing the following notes around a bit.

smallyacht's Normal

hi smallboat ~w~

I believe this diff is missing the slidertick hitsound present on the other diff(s), is this intentional? D:
00:17:451 (2,3) - You should totally take these and move it a bit downwards: avoids the overlap with 00:15:765 (4,2), gives you a triangle with 00:15:765 (4,1,2) (4's head) and makes 00:17:788 (3,4,1) that much more smooth~ do it!
***NAZI ALERT*** Move 00:20:146 (2) to X:348 Y:321, the triangle is slightly off~
01:46:776 - No note here?

Nice diff!~

Smoge's Hard

00:02:451 (2,3) - If anything, you'd want to keep this snapped with 00:01:608 (1), though keeping increased spacing between 00:02:619 (3,1) would be fine. The reason would be that the jump is felt between 00:02:619 (3,1), but not really between 00:01:608 (1,2), at least the way I see it. But since you don't use increased spacing in the next couple objects, I'd just snap everything because consistency~ Same for 00:11:046 (1). And while you would think that it IS consistent, take a look at 00:05:653 (1), 00:13:743 (1), 00:15:091 (1), 00:16:439 (1). The drum hit is the same! Of course, you can always choose to increase spacing on all cases; in that case go for it, it looks great!~
01:07:170 (3,4) - First off, you need to invert the rhythm here, meaning it's circle then slider. Then I'd advise you to stack 3 and 4, like this. It looks really good~:
Example
01:07:675 (1,2,3) - Hmm, try something like this suggestion, I feel like it improves this section a bit. Right now I don't really like the movement at 01:07:675 (1,2)
Example

I actually just went ahead and searched for your name on the beatmap page. I'm not quite sure for how long you've been mapping, or if the mods the set currently has boosted the difficulty's quality this much, but this looks good. I'd like to leave a word of encouragement, good work!~

Insane

00:00:765 (2) - Ehh, this feels a bit meh... I don't have any suggestions for this, so you should just keep it I don't really like that stack, just wanted to point that out~
00:05:316 (3) - This spacing is a bit illogical, considering that the song has no changes between 00:05:147 (2,3). The spacing increase should be used if anything between 00:05:316 (3,1), otherwise change 00:05:147 (2,3)'s spacing to 1.5x, same as 00:04:979 (1,2).
00:05:653 (1,2) - Same as first~ ;w;
00:08:012 (10,1) - ^
01:07:507 (4) - try this at X:212 Y:100, feels great~
01:17:788 (5) - Feels a bit off place to me because of 01:17:451 (4) - 's curve. Try something like this and see if you like it:
Example

Looks great overall, good job~

If you have any question, or if you think I was a bit rude, or you just have feedback on my modding, let me know! Good luck with ranking this!~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-09-23T14:23:33+00:00

Yuzu- wrote:
Hello!~ here from Strawberry Mousse modding queue~

Let's get it started, shall we?~ yes we shall

Smoge's Hard
00:02:451 (2,3) - If anything, you'd want to keep this snapped with 00:01:608 (1), though keeping increased spacing between 00:02:619 (3,1) would be fine. The reason would be that the jump is felt between 00:02:619 (3,1), but not really between 00:01:608 (1,2), at least the way I see it. But since you don't use increased spacing in the next couple objects, I'd just snap everything because consistency~ Same for 00:11:046 (1). And while you would think that it IS consistent, take a look at 00:05:653 (1), 00:13:743 (1), 00:15:091 (1), 00:16:439 (1). The drum hit is the same! Of course, you can always choose to increase spacing on all cases; in that case go for it, it looks great!~ moo-chan is a lazy butt and hasn't updated this to my latest version, which changed this to your suggestion anyway :3
01:07:170 (3,4) - First off, you need to invert the rhythm here, meaning it's circle then slider. Then I'd advise you to stack 3 and 4, like this. It looks really good~: yes, i agree
01:07:675 (1,2,3) - Hmm, try something like this suggestion, I feel like it improves this section a bit. Right now I don't really like the movement at 01:07:675 (1,2) I switched up 3, but I kept the flow the same

I actually just went ahead and searched for your name on the beatmap page. I'm not quite sure for how long you've been mapping, or if the mods the set currently has boosted the difficulty's quality this much, but this looks good. I'd like to leave a word of encouragement, good work!~ hey, thanks a lot~ <3

EDIT

updoot

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P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-09-24T07:01:04+00:00

SPOILER

12:37 Moo-Chan: hey pan?
12:37 P A N: hey moo moo
12:37 P A N: what is it
12:38 Moo-Chan: hey >< i was just gonna see if you would be able to mod my map or do a m4m with me
12:39 P A N: can I look at your map?
12:39 P A N: I mean which map
12:40 *Moo-Chan is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/472674 DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)]
12:40 Moo-Chan: ;w;
12:41 P A N: btw how can you know me?
12:41 Moo-Chan: ive talked to you before o:
12:41 Moo-Chan: i asked you to map an easy for me on this map
12:44 P A N: yea
12:44 P A N: I remember
12:45 Moo-Chan: mhm ;w;
13:03 P A N: irc possible?
13:03 Moo-Chan: yea, irc is fine
13:08 P A N: woops sorry
13:08 P A N: did I mod it before?
13:13 Moo-Chan: uhm
13:13 Moo-Chan: i dont believe so
13:13 Moo-Chan: let me look
13:13 P A N: I already looked
13:13 P A N: don't have my post
13:14 Moo-Chan: alright
13:14 P A N: but I think I suggested you about flow
13:14 P A N: well let's start
13:14 P A N: I heard from death
13:14 Moo-Chan: oh god
13:14 P A N: she said this map is not bubble qualified yet?
13:14 Moo-Chan: how many people did he tell?
13:14 P A N: he told me because
13:14 P A N: I'm modding your map
13:14 Moo-Chan: usw said it wasnt bad
13:15 Moo-Chan: and ahh
13:15 Moo-Chan: uws*
13:15 P A N: yea I know
13:15 P A N: wasn't bad
13:15 P A N: first thing is 00:07:675 (9) - 
13:15 P A N: really not flow well
13:16 Moo-Chan: have any suggestions? ive seen this part show up before, but i cant seem to think of a way to fix it
13:16 P A N: ok believe in me
13:17 Moo-Chan: hm?
13:18 P A N: http://puu.sh/bLGJg/9112a479a7.jpg
13:18 P A N: like here
13:21 P A N: hm
13:21 P A N: don't like it?
13:21 Moo-Chan: i was trying it
13:21 Moo-Chan: so like this?
13:21 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/15f558e984360b86dfff6464373240de
13:22 Moo-Chan: wait
13:22 P A N: ctrl+g the slider
13:22 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/543e18903c8faa40f4bf449e430af6fa
13:22 Moo-Chan: yea, that works c:
13:22 P A N: yea
13:22 P A N: that's right
13:22 P A N: what about it
13:22 P A N: the flow
13:23 P A N: is it flow well?
13:23 Moo-Chan: its nice ^^
13:23 Moo-Chan: yea, it does
13:23 Moo-Chan: so then would i move 00:08:349 (1) -  below 00:08:012 (10) - ?
13:23 P A N: yea below
13:23 P A N: if above it will force the flow
13:23 Moo-Chan: alright
13:25 P A N: and some of your pattern
13:25 P A N: looks not neater
13:25 P A N: but it flow
13:25 Moo-Chan: like what?
13:26 P A N: sec
13:26 Moo-Chan: okay
13:26 P A N: seems like you are really serious about spacing symmetry
13:27 Moo-Chan: i didnt intend to ><
13:28 P A N: I mean 00:13:068 (4,1) - 
13:29 Moo-Chan: hm?
13:30 P A N: not neater
13:30 P A N: but that's not the problem
13:30 P A N: because it still flow well
13:30 Moo-Chan: so should i make it neater? since it flows well
13:31 P A N: if possible
13:31 Moo-Chan: alright
13:32 P A N: any part that most modder complain?
13:32 P A N: or BAT
13:33 P A N: I will help you
13:33 Moo-Chan: does this look any better?
13:33 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/b030425cb56e9c8a42cf2e1a32bf7164
13:34 P A N: wait
13:34 Moo-Chan: and i dont think there was anything inparticuar
13:36 *Moo-Chan is waiting
13:36 P A N: >_>
13:36 Moo-Chan: ;w;
13:37 P A N: http://puu.sh/bLHrC/b4d7fce1c9.jpg there
13:37 P A N: 5 blanket with 3 and 1's tail blanket with 3
13:38 Moo-Chan: alright
13:41 Moo-Chan: like this?
13:41 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/420b8998f34611407f54143ada6d415f
13:41 P A N: kind of
13:42 P A N: make sure 5 blanekt with 3 and 1's tail blanket with 3
13:42 P A N: but you can avoid that too
13:42 P A N: not that problem
13:42 Moo-Chan: thats the part i dont understand ;w;
13:42 P A N: I see
13:42 P A N: maybe my english too suck
13:43 P A N: http://puu.sh/bLHFA/42753f8028.jpg
13:43 Moo-Chan: nah, your english is fine, i just understand the placements of the sliders
13:43 P A N: here
13:43 P A N: like this
13:43 P A N: 5 blanket with 3
13:45 Moo-Chan: better?
13:45 Moo-Chan: http://gyazo.com/78ccf074c6a087d8c69c624775ec305b
13:45 P A N: nice
13:46 Moo-Chan: c:
13:50 P A N: this part is hard to fix by chat
13:50 Moo-Chan: which?
13:50 P A N: 00:19:136 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
13:51 Moo-Chan: uhm
13:51 Moo-Chan: evilelvis suggested that part
13:53 P A N: may you save, update and copy this code http://puu.sh/bLI2b/1718f2ed4f.txt ?
13:53 P A N: so if you don't like you can update to revive your old one
13:53 Moo-Chan: so, update the map then try it?
13:54 P A N: submit
13:54 P A N: and try this code
13:54 Moo-Chan: okay
13:54 P A N: lol I mention all part that people complain? XD
13:54 P A N: even BAT
13:55 Moo-Chan: i think so ;w;
13:56 Moo-Chan: oh wow
13:56 Moo-Chan: it looks nice
13:56 P A N: oh really?
13:56 Moo-Chan: mhm :3
13:57 P A N: I still keep your rhythm and spacing way so don't worry
13:57 P A N: I just make it neater
13:57 Moo-Chan: yea, it looks a lot better
13:57 P A N: well try to check it for the whole diff
13:57 P A N: make them neater
13:57 P A N: if have any question you can ask me
13:58 Moo-Chan: alright c:
13:58 P A N: I will check again
13:58 Moo-Chan: thank ypu <3
13:58 Moo-Chan: you*
13:58 P A N: you are lucky that I'm in a good mood today XD
13:58 Moo-Chan: are you gonna post to thread? or
13:58 P A N: I will
13:59 Moo-Chan: okay, and yes i  am lucky :P
13:59 P A N: already 11pm for you?
13:59 P A N: so maybe you will off soon?
13:59 Moo-Chan: uhmm
14:00 Moo-Chan: yea, in like 1 hour
14:00 P A N: I post first then

irc mod

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2014-09-25T00:50:43+00:00

some suggestions in IRC

SPOILER

2014-09-24 16:49 Moo-Chan: hey natsu?
2014-09-24 16:49 Natsu: Hello
2014-09-24 16:50 Moo-Chan: hai, uhm, do you think you could take a look at my map? it doesnt have to be a mod
2014-09-24 16:50 Natsu: ok wait me a bit
2014-09-24 16:52 Moo-Chan: alright
2014-09-24 17:38 Natsu: you still there xD?
2014-09-24 17:38 Moo-Chan: yes :3
2014-09-24 17:38 Natsu: what is your map
2014-09-24 17:39 Moo-Chan: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/472674 DJ Genericname - Dango Dango Daikazoku (Drum and Bass Remix)]
2014-09-24 18:36 Natsu: there are not much things to point out though
2014-09-24 18:36 Moo-Chan: so, does that mean the map isnt bad?
2014-09-24 18:37 Natsu: is not bad, but there are few things like combo spam and not consistent comboing, plus some missing hitsounds
2014-09-24 18:37 Natsu: 00:04:979 (1) -  I don't think this combo is necesary
2014-09-24 18:38 Moo-Chan: i didnt have it nc'd before but people were saying to
2014-09-24 18:38 Moo-Chan: oh well, i removed the nc
2014-09-24 18:38 Natsu: 00:05:653 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -  in this part your combing is not consistent IMO, since you have some following every 1 stanza before, but here you suddenly changed to 2
2014-09-24 18:39 Natsu: 00:11:046 (1) -  finish and whistle sound a bit not good IMO, maybe remove the whistle here >:
2014-09-24 18:39 Moo-Chan: huh, i never noticed that and alright
2014-09-24 18:40 Natsu: 00:15:765 (1) -  same with the combos, spamming them just mess up the HP drain
2014-09-24 18:40 Natsu: 00:29:922 (1) -  in parts like this you are missing whistles following the instrument
2014-09-24 18:40 Natsu: 00:30:597 (3) -  ^
2014-09-24 18:41 Natsu: 00:40:035 (1,1,1) -  same with combos here, I can read this without the spam tho
2014-09-24 18:42 Moo-Chan: so make those 3 one combo?
2014-09-24 18:42 Natsu: yeah 
2014-09-24 18:42 Moo-Chan: alright
2014-09-24 18:42 Natsu: 00:48:799 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -  here you are overusing whistles, and doesn't sound good imo
2014-09-24 18:43 Natsu: 01:21:748 - should be a triplet here also
2014-09-24 18:44 Natsu: oh HP 8 is kinda evil in this kinds of maps, reduce it to 7
2014-09-24 18:45 Moo-Chan: would i remove the triple before it then?
2014-09-24 18:45 Moo-Chan: and alright
2014-09-24 18:45 Natsu: nah both are fine, since this song have a lot of triplets, idk if you played the ranked version before
2014-09-24 18:45 Moo-Chan: yea, i have
2014-09-24 18:46 Natsu: well that's all for now, I guess you need to find some hitsound mods
2014-09-24 18:47 Moo-Chan: okay
2014-09-24 18:47 Natsu: but yeah this have potencial, maybe I'll do a ull mod when I finish my other request
2014-09-24 18:48 Moo-Chan: yay c: i hope so~

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-09-25T03:49:08+00:00

Yuzu- wrote:
smallyacht's Normal

hi smallboat ~w~ o /

I believe this diff is missing the slidertick hitsound present on the other diff(s), is this intentional? D: Well,feel sounds fine,s okeep it now...xD
00:17:451 (2,3) - You should totally take these and move it a bit downwards: avoids the overlap with 00:15:765 (4,2), gives you a triangle with 00:15:765 (4,1,2) (4's head) and makes 00:17:788 (3,4,1) that much more smooth~ do it! Okay..fix this overlap and change this slider curve.
***NAZI ALERT*** Move 00:20:146 (2) to X:348 Y:321, the triangle is slightly off~ Move a bit.
01:46:776 - No note here? Feel nothing
Nice diff!~ Thanks Yuzu-

Code

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422,106,86552,6,0,B|345:101|345:101|302:19,1,160,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
218,19,87563,1,8,0:0:0:0:
161,86,87900,2,0,B|122:159|122:159|45:164,1,160
14,246,88911,1,8,0:0:0:0:
79,304,89248,6,0,P|47:328|8:332,2,80,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,238,90259,1,8,0:0:0:0:
217,201,90596,2,0,L|296:190,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,228,91271,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,190,91608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,108,91945,6,0,L|468:24,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,20,92619,2,0,L|288:40,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
239,99,93293,2,0,L|147:119,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,178,93967,2,0,L|6:198,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,284,94642,5,0,0:0:0:0:
75,340,94979,2,0,P|47:366|5:371,2,80,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,260,95990,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,204,96327,2,0,B|256:179|256:179|327:212,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,232,97338,5,0,0:0:0:0:
472,164,97675,2,0,P|468:124|372:44,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,98686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,80,99024,2,0,P|143:96|75:58,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,120,100035,5,0,0:0:0:0:
12,208,100372,2,0,B|44:280|44:280|136:264,1,160,10|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,248,101383,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,196,101720,2,0,L|272:108,2,80,10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,276,102731,5,0,0:0:0:0:
400,320,103068,1,10,0:0:0:0:
488,324,103406,2,0,L|492:228,1,80,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,181,104080,2,0,L|433:85,1,80,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,32,104754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
292,28,105091,1,10,0:0:0:0:
216,72,105428,6,0,L|213:156,1,80,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,236,106102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,308,106439,1,10,0:0:0:0:
256,192,106776,12,0,108799,0:0:0:0:

Moway

1,143 posts

Joined January 2012

Moway 2014-09-25T04:09:28+00:00

Hi.

[General]

I think it was determined that the name of this should be Dango Dango Drum and Bass (according to Newgrounds.)

[guineaQ's Easy]

Seems like we have a lot of unsnapped inherited sections.
00:11:483 - snap to 00:11:552
00:13:506 - snap to 00:13:574
00:14:180 - snap to 00:14:248
00:16:876 - snap to 00:16:945
00:18:225 - snap to 00:18:293
00:19:573 - snap to 00:19:642
00:43:843 - snap to 00:43:911
00:54:629 - snap to 00:54:698
00:57:326 - snap to 00:57:394
01:00:022 - snap to 01:00:091
01:00:697 - snap to 01:00:765
01:02:719 - snap to 01:02:788
01:03:393 - snap to 01:03:462
01:05:416 - snap to 01:05:484
01:06:764 - snap to 01:06:833
01:08:112 - snap to 01:08:181
01:10:809 - snap to 01:10:877
01:12:157 - snap to 01:12:226
01:15:528 - snap to 01:15:597
01:17:551 - snap to 01:17:619
01:18:225 - snap to 01:18:293
01:20:247 - snap to 01:20:316
01:20:921 - snap to 01:20:990
01:29:685 - snap to 01:29:754
01:30:359 - snap to 01:30:428
01:31:034 - snap to 01:31:102
01:31:708 - snap to 01:31:776
01:33:730 - snap to 01:33:799
00:10:709 - The break here is awkward because there's a lot of music happening, and no object to hit. I would suggest a circle here to match the drum beat.
00:20:484 (4) - whistle on the head and end, clap on the repeat
00:29:585 (1,2) - the NC should be switched here for consistency.
00:31:271 (1) - remove this NC, inconsistent with the rest of your comboing
00:43:406 - Beginning at this section until the end of the map, I think there is a lot more you can do with the hitsounding. In earlier sections, you used the hitwhistle to highlight piano parts, which sounds great. I think you can continue to use them here to highlight the piano parts and vocals, which stick out a lot even with all of the drum beats.
It would make this section sound a lot more interesting.
00:43:406 - from here to 00:51:495 you seem to overcombo. Halve the combos in this section to remain consistent with the rest of the difficulty.
00:47:451 (1) - clap on the end
00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit awkward for an Easy. Here's my suggestion for this part.
00:54:192 (1) - Finish on the head
00:55:203 (2,3,4) - I don't really like these three circle things in an Easy difficulty, so I would suggest turning (3,4) into a slider.
00:57:900 (2,3,4) - same with these I think
01:13:068 (1,2) - This feels better to me if you put the 2/1 slider first, and then the circle. This emphasizes the strong sound with a slider, and the circle fits the music better as a transition to the slider at 01:14:417 (3) IMO.
01:14:417 (3,1) - I think it would play better to have (3) end at 01:15:428 and have 01:16:102 (1) begin at 01:15:765. This would put strong emphasis on the finish where the kiai fountain occurs, which would feel really strong.
01:18:799 (3,1) - NC should be swapped here for consistency
01:21:495 (2,1) - ^
01:29:248 (3) - Missing a finish on the sliderend.
01:35:990 (2) - could use a finish on the sliderend.
01:37:338 - I said this before, but most definitely here you need to be using more hitsounds. This part is way too empty without them. Hitwhistles work well to match strong musical elements for parts like this.
01:37:675 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This section should be split up by sliders. Too many circles, especially ones in different rhythms like this, can be tricky for an Easy player.
01:40:035 (1,2,3,4) - If you happen to not take the previous suggestion, I would recommend something else for this part. Having the Easy player go in a straight line back from (1,2) to (3) is awkward because it is so counter to the flow.
01:42:731 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest changing this part. Right now, we're missing out on the strong vocal at 01:44:754, and the two circles are kind of funky to play because there's the 1/1 break before the 1/2 circle rhythm, if that makes any sense. I would suggest something like this.

[S. Boat's Normal]

00:00:260 (1,3) - add a whistle to the tail of these, I think this a strong point
00:02:619 (4) - and remove this whistle, this part seems weaker than the previous, so I would remove this one.
00:04:304 (3,4) - add a whistle to the head of both of these, and remove the whistle on the tail of (4). This matches the music better.
00:05:653 (1,3) - whistles to the tails here
00:08:012 (4) - and remove this whistle, again, stronger sounds for those other two than here.
00:09:697 (3,4) - whistle on the heads of these.
00:29:248 (1) - remove the NC here, and
00:29:922 (3) - add it here for consistency
00:40:034 (1) - remove the NC here and
00:40:709 (3) - add it here for consistency
00:43:406 - Beginning at this section until the end of the map, I think there is a lot more you can do with the hitsounding. In earlier sections, you used the hitwhistle to highlight piano parts, which sounds great. I think you can continue to use them here to highlight the piano parts and vocals, which stick out a lot even with all of the drum beats.
00:43:406 - From here to here until the kiai, you use the same rhythm for most of this. There is a lot of stuff happening in the music which I think should be mapped, rather than sticking to one rhythm. For example, 00:45:091 (5). There is a piano part that occurs in the middle of the slider, so I would prefer either a circle and a 1/1 slider, or a repeating 1/1 slider here. Listen to the music, mainly the piano parts which are different, to help you create more interesting rhythms.
00:45:428 - silence the slidertick here
01:15:765 (1) - add a finish here

[Smug's Hard]

Some unsnapped inherited sections.
.
0:00:593 - snap to 00:00:597
00:11:042 - snap to 00:11:046
00:11:379 - snap to 00:11:383
00:21:154 - snap to 00:21:158
00:21:829 - snap to 00:21:833
00:23:177 - snap to 00:23:181
00:24:525 - snap to 00:24:529
00:25:873 - snap to 00:25:877
00:27:222 - snap to 00:27:226
01:03:626 - snap to 01:03:630
01:04:300 - snap to 01:04:304
01:31:941 - snap to 01:31:945
01:37:334 - snap to 01:37:338
Check your kiai, seems like we have an inconsistency with the other diffs (01:14:754 versus 01:14:922)
00:08:686 - I don't really like this break here because there's a pretty prominent vocal, which you seem to be following pretty well. I suggest adding a circle here to fill the empty space.
00:18:799 (2) - Seems like this is an accidental clap? It's inconsistent with the rest of the section.
00:21:158 (1,1) - I think you should decrease the spacing here. Because the slider is slowed down, that jump is kind of awkward because there is little motion going into it.
00:28:574 (1) - I would put a slowdown here to match the other two piano sliders in this section.
00:37:001 (2,3,4,5) - I think these circles miss out on some nice music, mainly the piano. This section feels like it should be more flowy, so I would like to see this mapped out some more.
00:42:057 (3) - NC here and possibly remove the NC at 00:41:383 (1). This would be for consistency, but if you like the NC at 00:41:383 (1), I still recommend NC at 00:42:057 (3). It makes sense musically to do so.
00:42:731 (5,6) - I would add whistles to the starts of these, and remove that clap.
00:43:406 - Kind of the same with the other difficulties. I think you can use more whistles and finishes to compliment the vocals, piano, and other strong points in the music. This would make the hitsounding a lot more fleshed out, and would sound really nice.
00:45:259 (2) - I think you should separate this into a circle and a 1/2 slider to provide an object for that piano.
00:58:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:37:001 (2,3,4,5), but even more so here since there is even more music happening.
01:26:215 (2) - add a clap at the end of this I think

[Insane]

I think you could afford to bump up the volume a bit in the intro. At first, I thought you didn't hitsound the intro at all, so I think you can bump it up some.
As a general thing, I think you could go back through this map and add more hitsounding, particularly to match the piano and vocal parts. It sounds really nice to fill out the hitsounding instead of just having a clap every 2nd and 4th beat. See what you can do on your own, since I think that would be really helpful for you to better hitsound this and all future maps.
00:08:686 - I think you could add an object here in order to match the vocal.
00:16:776 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is a little sloppy. Right now, the spacing between (5,6,7) is kind of erratic, and looks kind of off compared to the uniform spacing of (2,3,4).
00:42:394 (3,4) - I think you should remove the claps here, don't really hear what these would match in the music.
00:43:406 - Your whistle use in this section, is a bit much, funnily enough. Focus on using the hitsounds with strong piano or vocals, and other higher pitched sounds that stick out above the rest of the music.
00:48:125 (3,4,5,6,1) - Use some distance snap here, right now the spacing is kind of erratic. 1.9-2.0 seems to be what you were going for.
00:50:147 - I think this volume decrease shouldn't be here. The whistles should be very present for this piano, which sticks out way above the rest of the music.
00:54:445 - for consistency with how you've been mapping these, you should add a circle here.
00:59:838 - and here. Keep consistent with your main mapping idea for these, which is the 1/2 slider+two 1/4 circle triplet thing.
00:58:911 (3,4,5,6) - same thing as the other volume decrease.
01:07:001 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could tidy up the spacing changes here, they don't seem to be matching to the music a lot, so I think uniform spacing looks cleaner here.
01:09:024 (1,2) - I don't really like these circles because they break a lot of the flow you built up. I think they work well when you use the breaks to match the vocals, but for a spot like this, I don't think these pauses and stops work too well.
01:12:394 (4,5,1) - These would look a bit better if you made the spacing uniform, not only in distance between the ends and heads of sliders, but the distance between the slider bodies themselves.
01:19:136 (5,6,7,8) - I think uniform spacing works well here, right now you're just a bit off it, and it looks a bit sloppy as a result.
01:27:394 (1) - remove this NC
01:27:900 (4) - add an NC here, more consistent with your comboing.
01:34:642 (3) - NC here
01:35:821 (9) - NC here also, this combo is too long, and comboing like this separates this into musical ideas.
01:38:012 (5,6,7,8) - Would be nice to make this into a perfect square.
01:44:754 (1) - remove the NC
01:45:428 (3) - NC here
01:47:113 (1) - This spinner kind of ends at an awkward spot, not sure what the end is matching in the music.
I do worry about the use of triplets in this difficulty. It seems like some of them aren't really mapped to anything in the music. If I were you, I would go back through this map and pick out the triplets, turn down the sample volume, and see if the music behind them supports that. I'm not going to point out every instance of this, but I do recommend doing this as it will help your mapping overall.

Sorry guys, I lost most of this mod and had to try to redo it. I probably missed out on some things I said before, but hope this helps. Good luck!

UnitedWeSin

889 posts

Joined July 2012

UnitedWeSin 2014-09-25T04:44:38+00:00

fck you Moway
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[General]

Your mp3 has an audio bit rate of 128kbps, so it's not as high quality as it could be. Check the one in this map https://osu.ppy.sh/b/190043. Not a big deal but maybe you'd consider upgrading it. Although it would entail hitsound volume increases.
I don't think you are using the files soft-hitclap3, soft-sliderslide3, and soft-slidertick3. If so these files need to be removed from the folder.
Fix the unsnapped timing sections in Hard and Easy.
What Moway said.

[Insane]

00:08:012 (5) - Curve this slider less to make a proper blanket on the 4.
Example
00:09:024 (3) - This slider is slightly curved while the 00:09:529 (5) is not. On purpose?
00:11:046 (1) - Ctrl+G is better flow here imo.
00:12:394 (1,2) - I'd place 1 in a triangle with the previous pattern and place 2 so that there is curved flow into 3 with even spacing. Maybe you can try this:
Example
00:17:282 (5,6,7,1) - Use more even spacing here? Strange how spacing gets smaller after the 5 when the player was pushing to the right.
00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't be afraid to spread the notes out. More even/flowing and beautiful placements.
Example
00:27:226 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you can try an arrangement like this, it might play nicer for you than your back and forth pattern:
Example
00:27:057 (6) - I recommend to delete this note, it makes too much 1/2 and jumping for the slow section and is consistent with 00:24:361.
00:30:934 (4,5) - Try Ctrl+G? I'd really like a direction/pattern change onto the 00:31:271 (1). Maybe spacing is too large then, you can experiment.
00:34:473 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I felt there was too much continuous 1/2 for this slow section. Maybe you'd consider replacing 00:34:979 (5,6) with a 1/2 slider. Imo it's more comfortable if the 1/2 starts again on the downbeat.
00:50:147 (1) - Imo this slider is more comfortable to hit after the jump pattern if it's placed to the right of 9 like this:
Example

It messes up your slider pattern a bit though, maybe you can experiment and see what you think about it.
00:52:170 (1,2,3) - Make it a reflection of 00:51:495 (1,2,3). Use even spacing.
00:56:720 (7,1,2,3,4) - Try a direction change onto the triplet, feels much better for me:
Example
I moved the triplet further down and left and the 5 upwards. Also rotated the 00:57:563 (1).
00:57:563 (1) - NC seems extra here. You didn't have one at 00:54:866.
00:59:922 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try more even curvature here so that the curve can fit with that of the 01:00:597 (6).
Example
01:02:282 (1,2,3,4) - To simulate some build-up here I suggest to reduce the spacing between 1 and the triplet.
01:04:642 (3,4) - How about a larger jump here? It would echo the 00:43:068 (5,6) pattern since that's the same music there. You can try moving 4 further down and right, maybe (280,304). Just an idea, maybe you'd like it.
01:07:001 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use more even spacing? Spacing seems pretty random here.
01:07:675 (5) - I think NC is better here on the 5 than the 01:08:012 (1).
01:10:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I felt like a direction change into 01:11:215 (7,8) would feel better here. You can try moving 01:10:540 (2,3,4) more down and trying an arrangement like this:
Example
I just felt it had a nicer flow after 01:10:035 (4) and the jump to 01:11:215 (7) is great with the vocals.
01:13:743 (1) - Remove NC? Consistent with 01:24:529 (5).
01:19:136 (5,6,7,8,1) - Too much back and forth left and right flow feels stiff. Maybe you can try an arrangement more like this:
Example
01:22:338 (9,1) - Try stacking the 9 on the 7 and rotating the 2 a bit to avoid this linear flow to the left you have. I think it might feel nicer for you, try it:
Example
01:35:316 (6) - Missed NC is seems.
01:43:574 (4,1) - Switch NC? Seems more consistent like with 01:27:394 (1) or 01:32:788 (1).

Hitsound Suggestions

00:00:260 (1) - Finish on head seems nicer.
00:08:349 (1) - Whistle.
00:21:664 (9) - Missed a S:C1 clap here?
00:23:181 (1) - Missed clap on end?
00:24:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why not use whitles along with your claps like you did at 00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). Same at 00:27:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and so on.
00:40:709 (1) - Whistle.
00:42:057 (1) - Whistle.
00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - Missed claps/also whistles fit here.
00:58:068 (3) - Maybe whistle is nice.
00:58:574 (2) - Clap.
01:02:956 (5) - Whistle on the head is nice.
You use more whistles in the second kiai than the first. Maybe you'd consider adding more to the first kiai.

[Smug's Hard]

00:18:799 (2) - Don't you just want a whistle here? This is the only clap you used in the section.
00:21:158 (1) - Maybe whistle or clap on the end. Seems nice.
00:43:068 (6) - Clap on the purpose here? Really stands out, I would have expected a whistle.
01:14:922 - Maybe you want to end the kiai here to be consistent with all the other diffs.
01:36:664 (5) - Consider a clap on the first repeat and the end to fit the music.

[Smallboat's Normal]

I suggest OD 4 for better spread.
00:13:742 (1,2,3,4) - Too many whistles in this pattern, I recommend remove some. You didn't add whistles to follow this sound at other places such as 00:11:720 - 00:13:068 - so it sounds off. I recommend remove the the end of 3 and 4.
01:23:854 (1) - Remove whistle from the head? It's the only one in the kiai so doesn't seem to fit.

[guineaQ's Easy]

00:09:024 (2,3) - Doesn't really fit the music very closely. I suggest more simple like this:
Example
00:20:484 (4) - Clap on repeat?
00:43:406 to 00:51:495 - NC's are too frequent in this section, I recommend to NC every other downbeat to be consistent with your patterns later on.
01:07:675 (1) - How about end this 1/1 earlier and move the 2-3 back 1/1. This way fits better with the vocals and creates a gap in play at 01:09:698 which is what you want for an Easy diff.
Example
01:13:068 (1,2) - Switch these on the timeline will fit nicer with the music.
01:16:102 (1) - Consider to remove this and replace with a circle on 01:16:439.
01:17:113 (2,3) - Consider to end the 2 one or two beats earlier to you can have the 3 fall on the downbeat here.
01:19:810 (1,2) - Same as above about the downbeats.

Placements are pretty nice, but keep in mind it's not always great to put slider starts on the offbeats and slider ends on the downbeats. In the kiai it becomes a problem. Then it feels like I'm playing along with the BPM, not along with the music itself. Don't be afraid to miss some claps, you just want the player to click along with the music.

Definitely a lot of great potential but I'd like to see more work put into Insane and Easy. I didn't check Moway's mod for overlap with mine btw.
Star~

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-09-25T05:29:40+00:00

Moway wrote:
Hi.

[Smug's Hard]
Some unsnapped inherited sections.
.
0:00:593 - snap to 00:00:597
00:11:042 - snap to 00:11:046
00:11:379 - snap to 00:11:383
00:21:154 - snap to 00:21:158
00:21:829 - snap to 00:21:833
00:23:177 - snap to 00:23:181
00:24:525 - snap to 00:24:529
00:25:873 - snap to 00:25:877
00:27:222 - snap to 00:27:226
01:03:626 - snap to 01:03:630
01:04:300 - snap to 01:04:304
01:31:941 - snap to 01:31:945
01:37:334 - snap to 01:37:338
fixed
Check your kiai, seems like we have an inconsistency with the other diffs (01:14:754 versus 01:14:922) fixed
00:08:686 - I don't really like this break here because there's a pretty prominent vocal, which you seem to be following pretty well. I suggest adding a circle here to fill the empty space. the only thing I can hear is a small breath, so I'd prefer to keep this empty.
00:18:799 (2) - Seems like this is an accidental clap? It's inconsistent with the rest of the section. yup, fixed
00:21:158 (1,1) - I think you should decrease the spacing here. Because the slider is slowed down, that jump is kind of awkward because there is little motion going into it. okay
00:28:574 (1) - I would put a slowdown here to match the other two piano sliders in this section. it's a smaller length slider and it immediately transitions into the next part of the song
00:37:001 (2,3,4,5) - I think these circles miss out on some nice music, mainly the piano. This section feels like it should be more flowy, so I would like to see this mapped out some more. changed it up to make it feel less stoppy
00:42:057 (3) - NC here and possibly remove the NC at 00:41:383 (1). This would be for consistency, but if you like the NC at 00:41:383 (1), I still recommend NC at 00:42:057 (3). It makes sense musically to do so. okay yeah, this makes sense
00:42:731 (5,6) - I would add whistles to the starts of these, and remove that clap. yep
00:43:406 - Kind of the same with the other difficulties. I think you can use more whistles and finishes to compliment the vocals, piano, and other strong points in the music. This would make the hitsounding a lot more fleshed out, and would sound really nice.
00:45:259 (2) - I think you should separate this into a circle and a 1/2 slider to provide an object for that piano. alrighty
00:58:237 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:37:001 (2,3,4,5), but even more so here since there is even more music happening. done
01:26:215 (2) - add a clap at the end of this I think done

UnitedWeSin wrote:
[Smug's Hard]
00:18:799 (2) - Don't you just want a whistle here? This is the only clap you used in the section. fixed in Moway's
00:21:158 (1) - Maybe whistle or clap on the end. Seems nice. put a whistle
00:43:068 (6) - Clap on the purpose here? Really stands out, I would have expected a whistle. fixed
01:14:922 - Maybe you want to end the kiai here to be consistent with all the other diffs. yup, fixed
01:36:664 (5) - Consider a clap on the first repeat and the end to fit the music. done

phew, thanks for the mods~ ^w^

updoot

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Countdown: 0
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Creator:Moo-Chan
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Moo-Chan

405 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-09-25T06:03:09+00:00

Moway wrote:
Hi.

[General]
I think it was determined that the name of this should be Dango Dango Drum and Bass (according to Newgrounds.) about this, i want to ask KSHR about it. ive had problems with the name, but if i remember correctly then it should be right the way i have it
[Insane]
I think you could afford to bump up the volume a bit in the intro. At first, I thought you didn't hitsound the intro at all, so I think you can bump it up some. ok
As a general thing, I think you could go back through this map and add more hitsounding, particularly to match the piano and vocal parts. It sounds really nice to fill out the hitsounding instead of just having a clap every 2nd and 4th beat. See what you can do on your own, since I think that would be really helpful for you to better hitsound this and all future maps. i'll see what i can do
00:08:686 - I think you could add an object here in order to match the vocal. okay
00:16:776 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is a little sloppy. Right now, the spacing between (5,6,7) is kind of erratic, and looks kind of off compared to the uniform spacing of (2,3,4). i think i fixed it? i hope at least
00:42:394 (3,4) - I think you should remove the claps here, don't really hear what these would match in the music. fixed
00:43:406 - Your whistle use in this section, is a bit much, funnily enough. Focus on using the hitsounds with strong piano or vocals, and other higher pitched sounds that stick out above the rest of the music. alright
00:48:125 (3,4,5,6,1) - Use some distance snap here, right now the spacing is kind of erratic. 1.9-2.0 seems to be what you were going for. what i was doing was spacing the notes out according to the piano pitch change
00:50:147 - I think this volume decrease shouldn't be here. The whistles should be very present for this piano, which sticks out way above the rest of the music. removed
00:54:445 - for consistency with how you've been mapping these, you should add a circle here. added
00:59:838 - and here. Keep consistent with your main mapping idea for these, which is the 1/2 slider+two 1/4 circle triplet thing. ^
00:58:911 (3,4,5,6) - same thing as the other volume decrease. fixed
01:07:001 (1,2,3,4) - I think you could tidy up the spacing changes here, they don't seem to be matching to the music a lot, so I think uniform spacing looks cleaner here. fixed in my own way
01:09:024 (1,2) - I don't really like these circles because they break a lot of the flow you built up. I think they work well when you use the breaks to match the vocals, but for a spot like this, I don't think these pauses and stops work too well. im gonna keep them. it'll break the pattern if i dont
01:12:394 (4,5,1) - These would look a bit better if you made the spacing uniform, not only in distance between the ends and heads of sliders, but the distance between the slider bodies themselves. did something of my own
01:19:136 (5,6,7,8) - I think uniform spacing works well here, right now you're just a bit off it, and it looks a bit sloppy as a result. fixed
01:27:394 (1) - remove this NC ok
01:27:900 (4) - add an NC here, more consistent with your comboing. ^
01:34:642 (3) - NC here ^
01:35:821 (9) - NC here also, this combo is too long, and comboing like this separates this into musical ideas. ^
01:38:012 (5,6,7,8) - Would be nice to make this into a perfect square. fixed
01:44:754 (1) - remove the NC ok
01:45:428 (3) - NC here ^
01:47:113 (1) - This spinner kind of ends at an awkward spot, not sure what the end is matching in the music. keeping but shortened to here, 01:48:462
I do worry about the use of triplets in this difficulty. It seems like some of them aren't really mapped to anything in the music. If I were you, I would go back through this map and pick out the triplets, turn down the sample volume, and see if the music behind them supports that. I'm not going to point out every instance of this, but I do recommend doing this as it will help your mapping overall. we'll see
Good luck! thank you

UnitedWeSin wrote:
fck you Moway
asdfasdfasdf ehehe

[General]
Your mp3 has an audio bit rate of 128kbps, so it's not as high quality as it could be. Check the one in this map https://osu.ppy.sh/b/190043. Not a big deal but maybe you'd consider upgrading it. Although it would entail hitsound volume increases. just gonna keep it how it is <.<
I don't think you are using the files soft-hitclap3, soft-sliderslide3, and soft-slidertick3. If so these files need to be removed from the folder. will do
Fix the unsnapped timing sections in Hard and Easy. *nudges guinea and smug*
What Moway said.
[Insane]
00:08:012 (5) - Curve this slider less to make a proper blanket on the 4. fixed (i hope)
Example
00:09:024 (3) - This slider is slightly curved while the 00:09:529 (5) is not. On purpose? whoops, didnt mean to, will fix
00:11:046 (1) - Ctrl+G is better flow here imo. alright
00:12:394 (1,2) - I'd place 1 in a triangle with the previous pattern and place 2 so that there is curved flow into 3 with even spacing. Maybe you can try this: fixed
Example
00:17:282 (5,6,7,1) - Use more even spacing here? Strange how spacing gets smaller after the 5 when the player was pushing to the right. *conflict* Moway had suggested something, and i went and fixed it, so im just gonna keep it how i just fixed
00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5) - Don't be afraid to spread the notes out. More even/flowing and beautiful placements. semi-fixed
Example
00:27:226 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you can try an arrangement like this, it might play nicer for you than your back and forth pattern: hope i fixed
Example
00:27:057 (6) - I recommend to delete this note, it makes too much 1/2 and jumping for the slow section and is consistent with 00:24:361. so many back and fourth things about this. i'll just remove it and keep it removed
00:30:934 (4,5) - Try Ctrl+G? I'd really like a direction/pattern change onto the 00:31:271 (1). Maybe spacing is too large then, you can experiment. fixed and it should be fine now
00:34:473 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I felt there was too much continuous 1/2 for this slow section. Maybe you'd consider replacing 00:34:979 (5,6) with a 1/2 slider. Imo it's more comfortable if the 1/2 starts again on the downbeat. alright
00:50:147 (1) - Imo this slider is more comfortable to hit after the jump pattern if it's placed to the right of 9 like this: should be fixed
Example

It messes up your slider pattern a bit though, maybe you can experiment and see what you think about it.
00:52:170 (1,2,3) - Make it a reflection of 00:51:495 (1,2,3). Use even spacing. mmk
00:56:720 (7,1,2,3,4) - Try a direction change onto the triplet, feels much better for me: lets hope i fixed it
Example
I moved the triplet further down and left and the 5 upwards. Also rotated the 00:57:563 (1).
00:57:563 (1) - NC seems extra here. You didn't have one at 00:54:866. removed
00:59:922 (2,3,4,5,6) - Try more even curvature here so that the curve can fit with that of the 01:00:597 (6). okay
Example
01:02:282 (1,2,3,4) - To simulate some build-up here I suggest to reduce the spacing between 1 and the triplet. okay
01:04:642 (3,4) - How about a larger jump here? It would echo the 00:43:068 (5,6) pattern since that's the same music there. You can try moving 4 further down and right, maybe (280,304). Just an idea, maybe you'd like it. looks nice, shall do that
01:07:001 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use more even spacing? Spacing seems pretty random here. *conflict* i changed this part due to moway's mod
01:07:675 (5) - I think NC is better here on the 5 than the 01:08:012 (1). true, fixed
01:10:372 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I felt like a direction change into 01:11:215 (7,8) would feel better here. You can try moving 01:10:540 (2,3,4) more down and trying an arrangement like this: mmk
Example
I just felt it had a nicer flow after 01:10:035 (4) and the jump to 01:11:215 (7) is great with the vocals.
01:13:743 (1) - Remove NC? Consistent with 01:24:529 (5). ok
01:19:136 (5,6,7,8,1) - Too much back and forth left and right flow feels stiff. Maybe you can try an arrangement more like this: fixed the space between (1) and (2) is so big
Example
01:22:338 (9,1) - Try stacking the 9 on the 7 and rotating the 2 a bit to avoid this linear flow to the left you have. I think it might feel nicer for you, try it: lets hope i fixed it
Example
01:35:316 (6) - Missed NC is seems. *conflict* already fixed due to moway's mod
01:43:574 (4,1) - Switch NC? Seems more consistent like with 01:27:394 (1) or 01:32:788 (1). ^
Hitsound Suggestions
00:00:260 (1) - Finish on head seems nicer. ok
00:08:349 (1) - Whistle. ^
00:21:664 (9) - Missed a S:C1 clap here? dunno, but i added it
00:23:181 (1) - Missed clap on end? fixed
00:24:529 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why not use whitles along with your claps like you did at 00:21:833 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7). Same at 00:27:226 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and so on. fixed
00:40:709 (1) - Whistle. ok
00:42:057 (1) - Whistle. ^
00:50:147 (1,2,3,4) - Missed claps/also whistles fit here. fixed
00:58:068 (3) - Maybe whistle is nice. added
00:58:574 (2) - Clap. ok
01:02:956 (5) - Whistle on the head is nice. ^
You use more whistles in the second kiai than the first. Maybe you'd consider adding more to the first kiai. i'll go through and fix

Placements are pretty nice, but keep in mind it's not always great to put slider starts on the offbeats and slider ends on the downbeats. In the kiai it becomes a problem. Then it feels like I'm playing along with the BPM, not along with the music itself. Don't be afraid to miss some claps, you just want the player to click along with the music.

Definitely a lot of great potential but I'd like to see more work put into Insane and Easy. I didn't check Moway's mod for overlap with mine btw.
Star~ thank youu

thank you so much for the mods (:

smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-09-25T13:51:56+00:00

Moway

Moway wrote:
Hi. :)

[S. Boat's Normal]
00:00:260 (1,3) - add a whistle to the tail of these, I think this a strong point I think this is a quiet, parts,so don't add hitsound here.
00:02:619 (4) - and remove this whistle, this part seems weaker than the previous, so I would remove this one. ^
00:04:304 (3,4) - add a whistle to the head of both of these, and remove the whistle on the tail of (4). This matches the music better. Only add (4) in head.
00:05:653 (1,3) - whistles to the tails here Feel fine.
00:08:012 (4) - and remove this whistle, again, stronger sounds for those other two than here. ^
00:09:697 (3,4) - whistle on the heads of these. ^
00:29:248 (1) - remove the NC here, and fixed
00:29:922 (3) - add it here for consistency fixed
00:40:034 (1) - remove the NC here and fixed
00:40:709 (3) - add it here for consistency fixed
00:43:406 - Beginning at this section until the end of the map, I think there is a lot more you can do with the hitsounding. In earlier sections, you used the hitwhistle to highlight piano parts, which sounds great. I think you can continue to use them here to highlight the piano parts and vocals, which stick out a lot even with all of the drum beats. Feel fine now.
00:43:406 - From here to here until the kiai, you use the same rhythm for most of this. There is a lot of stuff happening in the music which I think should be mapped, rather than sticking to one rhythm. For example, 00:45:091 (5). There is a piano part that occurs in the middle of the slider, so I would prefer either a circle and a 1/1 slider, or a repeating 1/1 slider here. Listen to the music, mainly the piano parts which are different, to help you create more interesting rhythms. Feel fine now.
00:45:428 - silence the slidertick here Added a 20% green line here.
01:15:765 (1) - add a finish here Added.
Thanks Moway ~ !

UnitedWeSin

UnitedWeSin wrote:
fck you Moway LOL
asdfasdfasdf

[Smallboat's Normal]

I suggest OD 4 for better spread. Fixed.
00:13:742 (1,2,3,4) - Too many whistles in this pattern, I recommend remove some. You didn't add whistles to follow this sound at other places such as 00:11:720 - 00:13:068 - so it sounds off. I recommend remove the the end of 3 and 4. Sure,removed (3) and (4) hitsound here :3
01:23:854 (1) - Remove whistle from the head? It's the only one in the kiai so doesn't seem to fit. Fixed.
Thanks UWS ~!

Mystyk

Mystyk wrote:
[S.Boat's Normal]
In general, the diff is "okay", but I think it is a bit "overmapped" considering this is a Normal difficulty. You put 1/1 distance everywhere between the notes, there are no 2/1 "breaks" and it becomes kind of monoton and boring so I would suggest to vary the rhythm a bit. Removing some notes and rearranging some patterns, things like that. For example you could make the beginning and ending a lot "slower" because the music is slow. Perhaps will change it.
00:01:271 (2,4,1) - remove hit circles and make that reverse slider a long slider, reason is what I said in general about this difficulty - http://puu.sh/bKzw3/6b45076479.jpg Only reduce a reverse here.
00:06:664 (2) - same as above ^ http://puu.sh/bKzBV/14e7965649.jpg Feel has no problem here,playing looks fine.
00:21:158 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same here too, but I especially suggest this, because the song gets a lot slower and I think if you reduced the number of objects it would emphasize the slow and fast parts better - http://puu.sh/bKzSn/d5c24903cc.jpg Change another way,but still
00:28:574 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing about too many objects - http://puu.sh/bKAAJ/e9c2a60777.jpg Feel fine now.
00:36:663 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here you use just as many objects as 00:43:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - but clearly 00:43:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - is a faster part and I understand that you wanted to map to the soft sounds too, but maybe you could do it in a different way
etc...I really don't want to tell everything because I said it in general. It would be nice if you could make the beginning and ending of the diff slower compared to the kiai times. Maybe can change a bit,but I think still keep it now.
01:34:979 (2) - while playing this "touches" the combo number and it's both annoying and a little bit confusing so I would try to replace this a bit especially because the reverse arrow is also there Okay,cancel the reverse slider here.
Thanks Mystyk ~ !

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guineaQ

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guineaQ 2014-09-25T16:02:27+00:00

I just looked at the thread again holy fk i think it would be easier to remap this shit easy

I was gonna just drop the easy since the normal was already 1.70 and was quite easy but then ~~shit happened~~ I thought it would be disrespectful if I backed out now when the easy received 3 wall mods ~~along with a star~~

Tsukuyomi

guineaQ's Easy
00:09:361 (3) - whistle on head
00:54:192 (1) - finish
00:43:406 after this the diff lacks of whistle
01:37:675 (1) - after this the song still has 2,4 clap, i think you should add clap then would be too loud
rhythm is a bit hard in some last parts

Midge

00:34:642 - add a note here, there's a piano sound gonna leave it blank for c-o-nsistencyyy
00:45:765 (2,1) - idk about this pattern. it works, but it's confusing. i'd strongly recommend following the piano, but it seems you're already set on the drums remapped
00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - make these parallel http://puu.sh/bwKqT/3b61dcbd50.jpg remapped
00:55:203 (2,3,4) - looks wonky, move 4 to x:360 y:80 remapped
01:04:304 (2) - move to x:196 y:84 (looks neater)
01:17:113 (2) - should follow the drums instead of the slider
01:39:698 (5,1) - swap nc
01:41:046 (3) - nc

Yuzu-

Guinea Pig's Easy u wot

00:00:260 (1) - The movement on 00:00:260 (1,2,3,1) - seems a bit weirdish to me, mostly because of the angle on that triangle with the tail and 2 circles on 00:00:260 (1,2,3). I'd solve this issue by just placing 00:00:260 (1) like this, what this does is allowing a better curve, which ends up in relieving a bit the cursor at 00:02:956 (1) because of the upward movement:or just ctrl+g would do
00:09:024 (2,3) - I would advise against the usage of this 1/2 rhythm. You can easily simplify this into a 1/1 repeating slider starting at 00:09:024 (2) and ending at 00:10:035, it feels much better at least to me. yeeeh much better
00:40:035 (2) - Consistency!~ Either remove this circle or add one at 00:37:338 and 00:34:642. I'd personally have you remove it for simplicity's sake and I don't even know why its there
I feel like the way you mapped the pre-kiai section is a bit questionable; not because of the 1/2 density that shows up because of the song (which is OK), but because of some patterns. Some to point out would be:
00:49:810 (2,1,2,1,2) - This feels a bit too clumped up together. But the pattern with 00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - is what I really dislike. it feels a bit too sudden as a movement change for an easy difficulty. remapped
00:59:585 (1,2,3,1) - There's also no reason for your density to go down so much at this point, the song is exactly the same as before and this time you fill it with a big 1/1 reverse for no sudden change in the song. As I said before, consistency!~ color=#0000FF]remapped[/color]
I'm gonna take up on the suggestion above this one: your kiai time should usually be the hardest part in your diff, with a more highlighted and noticeable rhythm. The fact that you just fill it up with sliders feels wrong to me, and I'd simply advise you to go through it again and make sure if you want to keep it or not. I advise you not to. remapped;;
01:39:698 (5,3) - This is a very confusing stack due to the 180º cursor movement change. I'd change it by just reorganizing the following notes around a bit. remapped~

Moway

~~wild moway has appeared~~

[guineaQ's Easy]

Seems like we have a lot of unsnapped inherited sections.
all fixed, holy mackarels thats a lot
00:10:709 - The break here is awkward because there's a lot of music happening, and no object to hit. I would suggest a circle here to match the drum beat. y
00:20:484 (4) - whistle on the head and end, clap on the repeat I swear to RNG I put clap on repeat
00:29:585 (1,2) - the NC should be switched here for consistency. all NC applied
00:31:271 (1) - remove this NC, inconsistent with the rest of your comboing
00:43:406 - Beginning at this section until the end of the map, I think there is a lot more you can do with the hitsounding. In earlier sections, you used the hitwhistle to highlight piano parts, which sounds great. I think you can continue to use them here to highlight the piano parts and vocals, which stick out a lot even with all of the drum beats.
It would make this section sound a lot more interesting. remapped desu
00:43:406 - from here to 00:51:495 you seem to overcombo. Halve the combos in this section to remain consistent with the rest of the difficulty.
00:47:451 (1) - clap on the end
00:51:495 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit awkward for an Easy. Here's my suggestion for this part. remapped
00:54:192 (1) - Finish on the head
00:55:203 (2,3,4) - I don't really like these three circle things in an Easy difficulty, so I would suggest turning (3,4) into a slider. remapped
00:57:900 (2,3,4) - same with these I think remapped
01:13:068 (1,2) - This feels better to me if you put the 2/1 slider first, and then the circle. This emphasizes the strong sound with a slider, and the circle fits the music better as a transition to the slider at 01:14:417 (3) IMO. remapped
01:14:417 (3,1) - I think it would play better to have (3) end at 01:15:428 and have 01:16:102 (1) begin at 01:15:765. This would put strong emphasis on the finish where the kiai fountain occurs, which would feel really strong. remapped
01:18:799 (3,1) - NC should be swapped here for consistency
01:21:495 (2,1) - ^
01:29:248 (3) - Missing a finish on the sliderend. remapped
01:35:990 (2) - could use a finish on the sliderend. remapped
01:37:338 - I said this before, but most definitely here you need to be using more hitsounds. This part is way too empty without them. Hitwhistles work well to match strong musical elements for parts like this.
01:37:675 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This section should be split up by sliders. Too many circles, especially ones in different rhythms like this, can be tricky for an Easy player.
01:40:035 (1,2,3,4) - If you happen to not take the previous suggestion, I would recommend something else for this part. Having the Easy player go in a straight line back from (1,2) to (3) is awkward because it is so counter to the flow.
01:42:731 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest changing this part. Right now, we're missing out on the strong vocal at 01:44:754, and the two circles are kind of funky to play because there's the 1/1 break before the 1/2 circle rhythm, if that makes any sense. I would suggest something like this.

UnitedWeSin

fck you Moway wait wot
asdfasdfasdf

~~amen~~
[guineaQ's Easy]

00:09:024 (2,3) - Doesn't really fit the music very closely. I suggest more simple like this: fixed on my own
00:20:484 (4) - Clap on repeat? I swear to all the saints i fixed that
00:43:406 to 00:51:495 - NC's are too frequent in this section, I recommend to NC every other downbeat to be consistent with your patterns later on.
remappedu
01:07:675 (1) - How about end this 1/1 earlier and move the 2-3 back 1/1. This way fits better with the vocals and creates a gap in play at 01:09:698 which is what you want for an Easy diff. remapped
01:13:068 (1,2) - Switch these on the timeline will fit nicer with the music. remapped andd everything else below's response is "remapped"
01:16:102 (1) - Consider to remove this and replace with a circle on 01:16:439.
01:17:113 (2,3) - Consider to end the 2 one or two beats earlier to you can have the 3 fall on the downbeat here.
01:19:810 (1,2) - Same as above about the downbeats.

I fixed the pre kiai (most problematic) and made kiai a bit more interesting AND added more hitsounds. SO ANYTHING AFTER PREKIAI WAS REMAPPED ~~basically i swapped kiai and pre kiai /me runs~~

gonna finish the remap soon
pls kill me

Mystyk

osu! Alumni

950 posts

Joined June 2011

Mystyk 2014-09-25T21:13:09+00:00

Hi! Your request from a long time ago...sorry X_X

[guineaQ's Easy]

In general I would suggest you to make this a little bit easier, because of the high BPM even the 1/1 plays a bit like 1/2 on slower BPM, so even if it shows an E icon I think that simplifying the difficulty a little bit wouldn't hurt.

00:44:417 (2) - sounds like you missed a clap, so add clap
00:46:102 (1) - missing clap from sliderend
00:47:451 (1) - same as above ^
00:49:810 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I think there is too much 1/1 here, consider making it easier please - http://puu.sh/bCMNB/cb5872c0aa.jpg
01:04:304 (2,1) - small thing but you could make this nicer in my opinion - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2044586 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2044592 (just to make the shapes more interesting)
01:13:406 (2,3,1) - the beginning and ending of (3) is too close to each other (and to the previous and upcoming notes) it would be better to do a different shape for (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2038298 - just an example, try something similar
01:32:282 (1,2,3,4,1) - you had quite a lot of 1/1 without having 2/1 breaks, it would be better to try this - http://puu.sh/bA4YV/c69627c2bc.jpg - it fits to the beats better, they are louder than the vocals here, and it will be easier to play
01:41:046 (3,4) - I would rather replace these because it's confusing, the approach circle comes "quickly" and it's confusing - well just a suggestion - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2044629 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2044634 - of course the notes were replaced but it shouldn't be that much of a trouble since it's the end of the map

[S.Boat's Normal]
In general, the diff is "okay", but I think it is a bit "overmapped" considering this is a Normal difficulty. You put 1/1 distance everywhere between the notes, there are no 2/1 "breaks" and it becomes kind of monoton and boring so I would suggest to vary the rhythm a bit. Removing some notes and rearranging some patterns, things like that. For example you could make the beginning and ending a lot "slower" because the music is slow.

00:01:271 (2,4,1) - remove hit circles and make that reverse slider a long slider, reason is what I said in general about this difficulty - http://puu.sh/bKzw3/6b45076479.jpg
00:06:664 (2) - same as above ^ http://puu.sh/bKzBV/14e7965649.jpg
00:21:158 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - same here too, but I especially suggest this, because the song gets a lot slower and I think if you reduced the number of objects it would emphasize the slow and fast parts better - http://puu.sh/bKzSn/d5c24903cc.jpg
00:28:574 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing about too many objects - http://puu.sh/bKAAJ/e9c2a60777.jpg
00:36:663 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - here you use just as many objects as 00:43:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - but clearly 00:43:406 (1,2,3,4,5) - is a faster part and I understand that you wanted to map to the soft sounds too, but maybe you could do it in a different way
etc...I really don't want to tell everything because I said it in general. It would be nice if you could make the beginning and ending of the diff slower compared to the kiai times.
01:34:979 (2) - while playing this "touches" the combo number and it's both annoying and a little bit confusing so I would try to replace this a bit especially because the reverse arrow is also there

[Smug's Hard]

Check AiMod please, it says the kiai green lines are unsnapped.
00:20:821 (3,1) - I don't really like this anti-jump, it's confusing, I would rather do this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2071346

And now excuse me but I'm falling asleep while modding and during the weekend I'm not sure if I can finish it, but anyway here is what I have done so far, I'll actually finish this don't worry.

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-09-25T21:41:40+00:00

[guineaQ's Easy]

In general I would suggest you to make this a little bit easier, because of the high BPM even the 1/1 plays a bit like 1/2 on slower BPM, so even if it shows an E icon I think that simplifying the difficulty a little bit wouldn't hurt.

00:44:417 (2) - sounds like you missed a clap, so add clap
00:46:102 (1) - missing clap from sliderend
00:47:451 (1) - same as above ^
00:49:810 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - I think there is too much 1/1 here, consider making it easier please - http://puu.sh/bCMNB/cb5872c0aa.jpg
01:04:304 (2,1) - small thing but you could make this nicer in my opinion - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2044586 and https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2044592 (just to make the shapes more interesting)
01:13:406 (2,3,1) - the beginning and ending of (3) is too close to each other (and to the previous and upcoming notes) it would be better to do a different shape for (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2038298 - just an example, try something similar
01:32:282 (1,2,3,4,1) - you had quite a lot of 1/1 without having 2/1 breaks, it would be better to try this - http://puu.sh/bA4YV/c69627c2bc.jpg - it fits to the beats better, they are louder than the vocals here, and it will be easier to play
01:41:046 (3,4) - I would rather replace these because it's confusing, the approach circle comes "quickly" and it's confusing - well just a suggestion - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2044629 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2044634 - of course the notes were replaced but it shouldn't be that much of a trouble since it's the end of the map

ummm majority of things u pointed out are being remapped >w< sry

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-09-27T21:45:03+00:00

Now -100% more moe

osu file format v13

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HabiHolic

5,372 posts

Joined October 2012

HabiHolic 2014-09-28T07:20:24+00:00

Hello. From My lazy google queue

your already bubbled?. I'm not accept modding your map. cuz your already bubbled~

if your previously bubbled my modding call me please i can modding

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

theramdans 2014-09-30T12:13:02+00:00

o.o Starred o.o
gogogo
contact me for irc mod if you want

Squigly

449 posts

Joined August 2013

Squigly 2014-10-01T21:46:57+00:00

HabiHolic wrote:
Hello. From My lazy google queue

your already bubbled?. I'm not accept modding your map. cuz your already bubbled~

if your previously bubbled my modding call me please i can modding

i dont think a star means its bubbled VVV:::

theramdans

1,251 posts

Joined September 2012

theramdans 2014-10-09T09:23:54+00:00

hi, random modding wwww
mainly modding guineaQ's diff

General

I checked AI mod and I find out that the countdown and audio lead-in conflicts and not consistent throughout the diffs, which is unrankable, you should check on them, HOWEVER, this is what I found when opening smallboat's .osu file :3
You will immediately know what do I want you to do with this

guineaQ

Generally, why guinea, I am not sure about those 1/1 notes overlaps ;w;. Not really a fan of them. Maybe you should use wider DS
~~OOOh the slider is kinda slow in velocity, that should be fine :p. Forget what I say~~

00:00:260 (1) - Maybe you can rotate this 90 degrees clockwise for better flow to the next circle, Take a look at this screenshot http://puu.sh/c5jHv/34ab135d5a.png - UNLESS, you want to keep the blanket like you always do

00:25:203 (2) - Just my opinion, you can remove the reverse on this slider and add a note instead where the reverse should be before http://puu.sh/c5jQR/352da3191a.png
00:31:271 (2,3) - slider first, then circle, a bit confusing to have a circle first imo
00:32:619 (1) - If you do the above^, you should move this away to avoid overlaps/stacks
00:41:383 (2,3) - I found this is more comfortable by removing the circle 3 and add a reverse on slider 2, idk maybe it is just me
01:04:304 (2,3) - Merge this into one slider, as you use the same pattern on 00:56:215 (3,1)
01:13:068 (1) - kinda an awkward reverse, but it fits the music, so it is fine

smallboat

As I mentioned above, you should fix this

nice diff, full of blankets and variation between curved sliders and linear/sharp-turn sliders. Flawless !!

gums aka smug-

Wow ,tricky with those sv change, as expected from smug :3
Nothing I can see as a wrong

moo-moo

00:02:619 (5) - ctrl+g this maybe, for epic playability :p
Cant find anything that could be improved coz I am a nub modder ueuhuehe

Anyways, good mapset overall tbh, just have to tweak the Easy diff a bit guinea. I am watching you :p
Good luck for bubble-rank etc.etc \o/
me runs

guineaQ

1,588 posts

Joined December 2013

guineaQ 2014-10-09T15:07:26+00:00

theramdans wrote:
hi, random modding wwww vvvvvvvvv
mainly modding guineaQ's diff

Generally, why guinea, I am not sure about those 1/1 notes overlaps ;w;. Not really a fan of them. Maybe you should use wider DS
~~OOOh the slider is kinda slow in velocity, that should be fine :p. Forget what I say~~ u know i hate funky overlaps

00:00:260 (1) - Maybe you can rotate this 90 degrees clockwise for better flow to the next circle, Take a look at this screenshot http://puu.sh/c5jHv/34ab135d5a.png - UNLESS, you want to keep the blanket like you always do blanket is life blanket is love...but screw it for this case.
00:25:203 (2) - Just my opinion, you can remove the reverse on this slider and add a note instead where the reverse should be before http://puu.sh/c5jQR/352da3191a.png o, fack i should have listened to music more closely here
00:31:271 (2,3) - slider first, then circle, a bit confusing to have a circle first imo I really need dat reverse slider for that piano back and forth
00:32:619 (1) - If you do the above^, you should move this away to avoid overlaps/stacks ;~;
00:41:383 (2,3) - I found this is more comfortable by removing the circle 3 and add a reverse on slider 2, idk maybe it is just me I'll say no to this since if piano goes back to the original pitch as the start of the slider i would have done it but it goes up more instead here :S
01:04:304 (2,3) - Merge this into one slider, as you use the same pattern on 00:56:215 (3,1) kill me
01:13:068 (1) - kinda an awkward reverse, but it fits the music, so it is fine I'm just hoping that 3/2 is enough time for newbies to realize its 2 reverse instead of one :c

Anyways, good mapset overall tbh, just have to tweak the Easy diff a bit guinea. I am watching you :p i'm being stalked halp
Good luck for bubble-rank etc.etc \o/
me runs

powa updoot

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Kibbleru

osu! Alumni

5,844 posts

Joined August 2013

Kibbleru 2014-10-10T00:17:40+00:00

wtf 3 bat mods one page

Moo-Chan

405 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-10-10T02:25:06+00:00

Kibbleru wrote:
wtf 3 bat mods one page

just dont question it

Moo-Chan

405 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-10-10T02:30:34+00:00

theramdans wrote:
hi, random modding wwww
mainly modding guineaQ's diff

General
I checked AI mod and I find out that the countdown and audio lead-in conflicts and not consistent throughout the diffs, which is unrankable, you should check on them, HOWEVER, this is what I found when opening smallboat's .osu file :3
You will immediately know what do I want you to do with this fixedu desu

moo-moo
00:02:619 (5) - ctrl+g this maybe, for epic playability :p uh, i ctrl - g'd the other one, but tweaked it a bit c:
Cant find anything that could be improved coz I am a nub modder ueuhuehe

Anyways, good mapset overall tbh, just have to tweak the Easy diff a bit guinea. I am watching you :p
Good luck for bubble-rank etc.etc \o/ \o/
me runs

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-10-11T01:09:55+00:00

I sort of go into maps with star spams with a certain mindset

Insane:
00:34:979 (5) - This overlap doesn't look all that great.

Wow that actually wasn't that bad

Hard:
00:30:597 (3) - This jump doesn't make much sense because the rest of the map is so spaced nicely

Normal:
Is there any good reason why the diff's name is S.Boat?

Easy:
Fine

Wow, this map actually wasn't bad at all. Granted I look like a total dumbass because of the BAT posts above me, but uhh. . . I'll bug Mystyk and see if he wants to finish his mod or if I can just bubble after you apply these changes

Moo-Chan

405 posts

Joined November 2013

Topic Starter

Moo-Chan 2014-10-11T19:36:13+00:00

CDFA wrote:
I sort of go into maps with star spams with a certain mindset

Insane:
00:34:979 (5) - This overlap doesn't look all that great. fixed

Wow that actually wasn't that bad \o/

Wow, this map actually wasn't bad at all. Granted I look like a total dumbass because of the BAT posts above me, but uhh. . . I'll bug Mystyk and see if he wants to finish his mod or if I can just bubble after you apply these changes

wooo~ thank you

Fizz

275 posts

Joined September 2013

Fizz 2014-10-12T06:02:59+00:00

implemented CDFA's change :3

quick hitsound suggestions for insane

00:26:720 (4) - clap here
00:27:563 (3) - clap here
00:28:574 (1) - clap on tail
00:29:585 (3) - clap
00:49:136 (4) - clap
01:08:686 (6) - clap
01:09:361 (2) - clap
01:10:035 (4) - clap on head
01:12:731 (5) - clap on head
01:30:259 (4) - clap

that's all I could find

updoot

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