Mod request by PM.
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[General]
-According to
http://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B009QWZED6 song artist should be "Ryu☆ feat. MAYU". Also remove "Ryu*" from source and "mayu" and "ryu" from tags as they are in the song name/artist name already.
-Move offset to 687, it's a bit early right now
-Try to make your SVs look as close to 1.0x as possible. For everyone past the beginner level of playing, they will always look ahead when playing. This is why it is important to make them easy to react to. See
here for more info and
here for a calculator to make 1.0x-looking SVs that are sightreadable.
[nowsmart's 4K LV.22]
00:06:825 (6825|3) - Make this a normal note since you are only putting LNs to vocal here
00:08:556 (8556|1,8941|1,9325|3,9710|3) - Unsure what these LNs are going to. You didn't put LNs to those sounds earlier, so it's a bit inconsistent
00:11:633 (11633|1,12018|2,12402|0,12787|0,13172|3,13556|0,13941|3,14325|0) - ^ I think it'd be better if these were removed to keep consistency with the rest of this section. Alternatively, you can make all of these as LNs.
00:14:518 (14518|3) - Move this to start on 00:14:325 - and end it at 00:16:056 - for the vocals
00:17:595 (17595|2,20672|1,23748|0) - It seems the LNs here are to the synth that gets louder, but it's only one sound and you placed 3 different LNs to them. It would be better if you put down only a single LN for this sound and extend it all the way until 00:25:287 -
00:37:979 (37979|0) - Make this LN since it's the same sound
00:38:748 (38748|0) - ^
00:38:941 (38941|1) - Make this normal note
00:43:268 (43268|1) -Move to 1
00:43:364 (43364|1,43556|2,43652|1) - Switch to normal note
00:44:518 (44518|3) - remove
00:49:806 - add note here
00:50:383 - ^
00:50:575 - ^
00:54:518 (54518|0,54902|3,55287|0,55672|3) - These vocals start a 1/4 later
00:57:595 (57595|0,57979|3,58364|0,58748|3) - ^
01:02:210 (62210|3) - remove. this sound is not strong enough to have the same chord as the sounds before
01:09:518 - add note here
01:11:056 - ^
01:12:595 - ^
01:14:133 - ^
01:14:518 (74518|0,74518|2,74710|2,74710|0,74902|0,74902|2) - add a note to these chords
01:15:191 (75191|1) - move to 01:15:287 - since there's no sound at this 1/4 part
01:21:537 (81537|1,81633|2,81729|3) - since you're not layering this as double notes, make this into a trill to put more emphasis on these fast kicks
01:23:268 - add note?
01:24:806 - ^
01:32:066 (92066|2,92162|2) - One thing I think every mapper should consider is that if there is a fast stream, then instances of repetitions like this can make the pattern a lot harder than it needs to be. Something like this will keep the fast speed but will also be much more intuitive to hit.
http://puu.sh/bEla4.png02:13:460 (133460|3,133460|2,133556|0,133556|1,133748|3,133748|2) - ctrl+H to get rid of that minijack. Alternatively, you can put that minijack pattern in all those instances for that section.
02:15:575 - add note
02:15:672 - ^
02:16:056 (136056|2) - remove
02:17:595 (137595|0,137979|3,138364|0) - make these LNs normal notes. It's inconsistent with the rest of this section.
02:18:652 - add note
02:19:806 - ^
02:22:018 - why not add the 2 short LNs here like you did in other parts?
[Sirade's 4K LV.23]
00:04:325 - there's 2 different pitch here when she sings "mine" but if you're only putting a single LN to each word then you can ignore. only pointing it out for this part but it's the same for the rest of the song
00:14:518 (14518|3) - start this at 00:14:325 - and add note at 00:14:518 -
00:20:672 (20672|1) - move this LN to 4 since it's for the rising pitch, of course you have to arrange the other LNs accordingly
00:25:287 (25287|2) - move to 1
00:26:825 - add note here since it's a strong chord and a new section of the song
00:31:313 (31313|1,31377|2) - this is 1/4, not 1/6
00:37:466 (37466|2,37530|1) - ^
00:37:466 (37466|2,37530|1,39902|1,40095|0,40287|3) - remove since no extra sounds are added, just repeated
00:43:268 - and 00:43:364 - add notes
00:43:460 (43460|2,43652|0) - remove, there's no 1/4 here
00:47:979 - and 00:48:172 - add notes (optional)
00:49:902 (49902|1,50287|1,50672|1,51056|1) - move to 3 and adjust others accordingly, having the chord entirely on 1 hand puts more emphasis on the sounds you're mapping
01:03:364 (63364|3) - shorten this LN to 01:03:556 - since the sound you mapped ends here
01:04:614 (64614|1) - remove, there's no sound here. same for all other sections you put a note here
01:10:672 (70672|2) - since you seem to be putting LN to vocal here, shorten this to end at 01:10:864 - same for other repetition
01:10:960 (70960|1) - move this to start at 01:11:056 - and end at 01:11:248 - same for other repetition
01:11:248 (71248|0) - remove, same for other repetition
01:23:748 (83748|1,84037|3,84325|0,84518|1,84518|0) - remove these as there's no crash hits here
01:25:287 (85287|2,85383|1,85479|2,85575|1,85672|2,85768|1,85864|2,85960|1,86056|2,86152|1,86248|2,86344|1,86440|2,86536|1,86633|2,86729|1,86825|2) - ctrl+h all of this, chords on one hand are more impactful and comfortable to hit than trills
01:26:922 (86922|2,86922|0) - turn this into [34] chord, the whoosh sound you put an LN to starts a 1/4 later (red line) than what you have now
01:27:306 (87306|0) - start this LN on red line as before
01:31:489 (91489|2,91537|1,91633|1,91681|2,91777|2,91825|1,91922|1,91970|2,92066|2,92114|1,92210|1,92258|2,92354|2,92402|1,92498|1,92547|2,92643|2,92691|1,92787|1,92835|2,92931|2) - same as in nowsmart's GD, this is a very awkward pattern to hit for fast players and is a huge difficulty spike. the last part of this pattern is even worse because it creates a 1/8 trill on the right hand. I very very highly suggest you change this pattern to eliminate the 1/4 minijacks and 1/8 right hand trill. this is an example pattern that has no minijacks but still has the staircase-like pattern you had in the original one
http://puu.sh/bEnyP.png01:45:287 (105287|2) - move to 4
02:03:620 (123620|1,123684|2) - this is 1/4, not 1/6, same also as before
02:05:095 (125095|0) - LN here is inconsistent, either remove this or add one to the same sound before
02:09:774 (129774|2,129838|1) - 1/4, not 1/6
02:12:595 - add note here to keep consistency with other section, and also add LN since you do that for other sections
02:14:325 (134325|2,134422|2) - move this to 1 and shift 02:14:518 (134518|0,134518|1) - one column right. the sound chops here are only on the left speaker, so the notes should be on the left hand as well
02:22:498 (142498|1) - LN here started a bit early, move to start LN at 02:22:595 -
02:23:556 (143556|1,143556|0) - shift these over to 02:23:748 - as the crash notes start here, the LN on 4 is for vocals i presume. optionally, you can make the LN here on 1 instead of 2 for symmetry
Good luck.