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nowsmart wrote:

HI :D from my queue.
MOD :D

6K Crack's EXTREME : LV 28
00:01:441 (1441|2,1537|4,1633|1,1825|3,1922|1,2018|4) - delete all. no sound Done ç_ç
00:03:748 (3748|2) - delete Done!
00:04:325 - add to 1 Done!
00:04:710 (4710|4,4710|1) - move to 3 and 6 Done!
00:04:902 (4902|5,4902|3) - move to 2 and 5 Done!
00:05:095 (5095|2) - move to 1 and add note to 4 Done!
00:05:287 (5287|0,5383|1,5479|2) - move to right 1 line Done!
00:07:018 - delete one note Done!
00:09:902 (9902|2) - delete Done!
00:10:095 (10095|3,10095|1) - move to 4 and 6 Done!
00:10:479 - add note to 2 Done!
00:10:864 (10864|4,10864|2) - move to 4 and 6 Done!
00:11:056 (11056|5) - move to 3 Done!
00:11:248 - add to 2 Done!
00:12:210 (12210|1,12306|2) - ctrl + j Done!
00:12:402 - add note to 1 Done!
00:47:979 - change SV to 1.00 Removed SV
01:25:287 - 01:26:729 - double note is enough Done ç_ç
01:25:287 - 01:25:960 - 2,3 and 4,5 Done!
01:26:056 - 01:26:729 - 1,2 and 5,6Done!
01:31:441 - i suggest you to change pattern > 6543 1234 6543 1234 .... to 01:32:931 ( sorry i cant upload screenshot) Done!
>.<)b
01:51:056 (111056|2,111152|3,111248|4) - move to 654 Done!
nowsmart, great thanks for your useful mod :) (MrS shoots a great KD)
Link update map: http://puu.sh/byA3q/620e7dcf05.rar http://puu.sh/byFWf/cb40f994e0.rar
Topic Starter
fukashi

[ C r a c k ] wrote:

nowsmart wrote:

HI :D from my queue.
MOD :D

6K Crack's EXTREME : LV 28
00:01:441 (1441|2,1537|4,1633|1,1825|3,1922|1,2018|4) - delete all. no sound Done ç_ç
00:03:748 (3748|2) - delete Done!
00:04:325 - add to 1 Done!
00:04:710 (4710|4,4710|1) - move to 3 and 6 Done!
00:04:902 (4902|5,4902|3) - move to 2 and 5 Done!
00:05:095 (5095|2) - move to 1 and add note to 4 Done!
00:05:287 (5287|0,5383|1,5479|2) - move to right 1 line Done!
00:07:018 - delete one note Done!
00:09:902 (9902|2) - delete Done!
00:10:095 (10095|3,10095|1) - move to 4 and 6 Done!
00:10:479 - add note to 2 Done!
00:10:864 (10864|4,10864|2) - move to 4 and 6 Done!
00:11:056 (11056|5) - move to 3 Done!
00:11:248 - add to 2 Done!
00:12:210 (12210|1,12306|2) - ctrl + j Done!
00:12:402 - add note to 1 Done!
00:47:979 - change SV to 1.00 Removed SV
01:25:287 - 01:26:729 - double note is enough Done ç_ç
01:25:287 - 01:25:960 - 2,3 and 4,5 Done!
01:26:056 - 01:26:729 - 1,2 and 5,6Done!
01:31:441 - i suggest you to change pattern > 6543 1234 6543 1234 .... to 01:32:931 ( sorry i cant upload screenshot) Done!
>.<)b
01:51:056 (111056|2,111152|3,111248|4) - move to 654 Done!
nowsmart, great thanks for your useful mod :) (MrS shoots a great KD)
Link update map: http://puu.sh/byA3q/620e7dcf05.rar
Posso correggerlo da solo == <3
Mysticalia
MrS's request for the other two 4k difficulties~

Mod~
[Please Read Carefully]
->+0/1/2/3 = add note to column 0/1/2/3, and -0/1/2/3 = delete note from column 0/1/2/3 (for example, "<Time> +0" means add note to column 0 at <Time>).
->"Add one", "Delete one" etc. (where numbers aren't used) refer to number of notes to add or delete, and the column choice is up to you (for example, "<Time> add one" means add one note at <Time>, at any open column you want.
->Arrows which come just after the mention of an LN leads to the ending time of the LN - for example, "Add LN (+X) -> <Time>" means "Add a LN to column X, ending at <Time>".
->Previous / Next Corresponding Point (PCP /NCP) = the timepoint at which the same instruments with the same rhythm (i.e. a repeat in the music) occurred last or occurs next. CPs should ideally be layered the same.


[Sirade's 4K ADVANCED: Lv18]
  1. I think there's a rule about difficulties being in order (i.e. ascending star rating order) - so maybe make this below 3.27SR?
  2. 00:02:210 / 00:02:595 / 00:02:979 / 00:03:364 / 00:11:441 / 00:11:825 / 00:12:210 / 00:12:595 - End on the red line where the note has a "click" sound.
  3. 00:12:079 - Missing note (+1), then move 00:13:172 (13172|1) to column 2 to follow pitch?
  4. 00:31:248 to 00:31:441 / 00:37:402 to 00:37:595 / 02:03:556 to 02:03:748 / 02:09:710 to 02:09:902 - Overmapped streams.
    ->Delete the two middle notes and just put a single note on the blue line (which column is up to you).
  5. 00:55:575 / 00:55:864 - Missing notes from drum
  6. 01:10:960 / 01:17:114 / 01:20:191 - Move the note on column 3 to the white line? (incorrect emphasis, better to use single-triple rather than two doubles)
  7. 01:13:172 - Missing note (+3)
  8. 01:13:652 - Move to 01:13:556?
  9. 01:14:133 - The strong beat is actually here, meaning your triple is early. Move all the notes from 01:14:037 to here and switch LNs here too.
  10. 01:14:235 - Change the LN to a normal note, delete 01:14:325 (74325|1) because of extra note (overlayered) then +2 to 01:14:422 to make a stream?
  11. 01:22:979 - I'd delete two since you're not hearing the cymbal-like sound here any more (for which you used triples) - so a double here would make more sense.
  12. 01:25:960 (85960|1,85960|3,86056|3,86056|1) - Just continue the pattern instead of restarting it here, it might catch people out.
  13. 01:26:922 - +0 for consistency with 01:27:306.
  14. 01:27:979 - Delete a note from this, since you use a triple at 01:28:364 too and that has a cymbal on it whereas 01:27:979 doesn't.
  15. 01:31:441 to 01:32:979 - Use 25% playback for this - I think this stream is actually 1/8. It might be better just to have it going right to left repeatedly.
  16. 01:34:518 - Can probably add a note here (+2) for the drum.
  17. 02:05:287 (125287|0) - Can't tell what this is mapping, because the vocal starts at 02:05:095. If you really want an emphasis here then just change it to a normal note, but I'd recommend deleting that LN and repositioning your other notes.
  18. 02:11:441 (131441|0) / 02:11:825 (131825|1) / 02:12:210 (132210|2) / 02:13:364 (133364|0) / 02:14:133 (134133|3) / 02:14:518 (134518|1) /02:14:902 (134902|2) /02:15:287 (135287|0) / 02:17:210 (137210|1) / 02:17:595 (137595|2) / 02:17:979 (137979|1) / 02:18:364 (138364|3) / 02:18:748 (138748|0) / 02:19:518 (139518|3) / 02:20:287 (140287|0) / 02:20:672 (140672|3) / 02:21:056 (141056|2) / 02:21:441 (141441|1) / 02:21:825 (141825|0) - End on red line "cilck" sound.
  19. 02:14:325 -1, and 02:14:422 -0, because this is a weaker version of 02:12:979 / 02:13:075. Just the jackhammer on column 2 is enough.
  20. 02:15:672 -1, because there's no other sound apart from that random fading note.
  21. 02:23:556 - Move one of the LNs to 02:23:748 to follow the instrument instead of vocal (end at 02:25:287)?
  22. Summary
    ->Overall a really nice map, but can't tell if you were following vocal or instruments at times, and a few spots which emphasised a ghost position.
    ->Not sure why you would use a 1/6 divider for every stream which isn't even 1/6 - I understand if it was to make the 1/8 stream easier, but using 1/6 (which isn't even a multiple of 4 or 8) is doing it the wrong way.
[nowsmart's 4K EXPERT: LV 22]
  1. 00:06:825 - Missing LN -> 00:07:018 (+3)?
  2. 00:07:979 (7979|3) - End at 00:08:172 (started pattern early) - then +3 at 00:08:364?
  3. 00:09:133 +3, 00:09:518 +1, and 00:12:979 +1 - (consistency breaks - for this pattern you've ended your long LN with a normal note and a LN. This would also apply to the ending at 00:12:979 since it's technically still part of the pattern (This LN 00:12:979 (12979|2) would then act as a link between this pattern and the next.)
  4. 00:42:979 (42979|2,43075|3,43172|2,43268|1) - These four sound like the main part of the stream, so maybe have this going left to right, and move 00:43:364 (43364|0) to column 3? (optional)
  5. 00:43:556 / 00:43:652 - not really consistent with PCPs (00:31:248 / 00:31:345) and (00:37:402 / 00:37:498) - so maybe:
    ->Move 00:43:364 (43364|2) to column 1, then
    ->Add LN at 00:43:556 (+2) -> 00:43:652, then
    ->Add LN at 00:43:652 (+1) -> 00:43:478, then
    ->Move 00:43:748 (43748|1) to column 2?
  6. 00:49:710 - Same rhythm as above - maybe change 1/4 note on column 1 into an LN, then add 1/4 LN on column 2, and move 00:49:902 (49902|2) to column 1?
  7. 01:08:364 / 01:09:133 - Add note? Seems to have the same instruments as 01:08:748 so make the three consistent (maybe +1 to both)?
  8. 01:23:268 - Missing note - maybe:
    ->Move 01:22:979 (82979|0) to column 1, then
    ->Move 01:23:172 (83172|1) to column 0, then
    ->+1 at 01:23:268?
  9. 02:19:806 - Maybe move to column 1 (optional)?
  10. 02:22:018 - Maybe replace note with LN -> 02:22:114, then add LN (+2) 02:22:114 -> 02:22:210, then move 02:22:210 (142210|2) to column 3 for rhythm consistency?
  11. Summary
    ->Not much to find here, really consistent throughout, just a few minor issues which I'm not too sure if it was deliberate or not.
I spotted this while looking at the mapset overall...
[7K Sergio's MEDIUM: LV 9]
  1. Star rating too high (2.25 max) - might need to make it easier.
  2. Don't forget to rename this~
Also, just a quick check of the other two difficulties:
[4K SOFT: LV 5]
  1. 00:38:748 - Pattern break - add one (maybe +1).
  2. 00:40:672 - Also needs to add one (maybe +2).
  3. 00:57:595 - Add in the two notes from before (+0, +3) - those notes were correct, you didn't need to delete them (sorry if this seemed confusing in my last mod).
  4. 00:59:518 - Maybe move 00:59:518 (59518|3) to 00:59:902 for a double-single-double-single-double alternation?
  5. 01:06:441 - You don't need a note and LN at the same time because the music doesn't increase in strength (-1).
  6. 02:13:941 - Add one so it's consistent with 02:13:172 (maybe +2)?
  7. 02:16:825 - Keep the single-double-single-double alternation by deleting one (-3)?
  8. Final star rating if you change all of the above = 1.49 (Easy difficulty - JUST!).
[4K EXTREME: LV 20]
  1. 00:11:441 - Still missing one - maybe +0?
  2. 01:29:902 - Maybe delete one, there's no need for emphasis since this isn't the absolute middle of the section (try -3? (optional))
  3. 01:31:393 - Ghost note
  4. 01:35:768 / 01:38:845 / 01:41:922 / 01:44:806 - I like how you're keeping this consistent (actually, 01:44:806 should have been at 01:44:998 if you wanted the consistency) - but there's just no blue line note at those positions so it might be better to delete. If you don't want to delete the ghost notes, then at least move 01:44:806 to 01:44:998 to keep the pattern consistent.
  5. 02:03:268 - Missing note
  6. 02:06:537 - Ghost note
  7. 02:09:806 - Missing note (try +2?)
  8. 02:18:652 - Missing note (try +2, then maybe move 02:18:748 (138748|2) to column 3 and 02:18:748 (138748|1) to column 0 to avoid awkward hand positioning?)
Good job, a lot more consistent now I think~

Good luck~! :)
mike91lau
- Extreme above 3.75 star!
- Some diff different preview point

4K EXTREME Lv.20
00:37:018 (37018|3,37018|0) - no hit sound ? But other got
00:38:556 (38556|0,38556|3) - ^

nowsmart 4K Expert Lv22
OD HP lower please :)

Can i GD?
Rilene

Mysticalia wrote:

MrS's request for the other two 4k difficulties~

Mod~
[Please Read Carefully]
->+0/1/2/3 = add note to column 0/1/2/3, and -0/1/2/3 = delete note from column 0/1/2/3 (for example, "<Time> +0" means add note to column 0 at <Time>).
->"Add one", "Delete one" etc. (where numbers aren't used) refer to number of notes to add or delete, and the column choice is up to you (for example, "<Time> add one" means add one note at <Time>, at any open column you want.
->Arrows which come just after the mention of an LN leads to the ending time of the LN - for example, "Add LN (+X) -> <Time>" means "Add a LN to column X, ending at <Time>".
->Previous / Next Corresponding Point (PCP /NCP) = the timepoint at which the same instruments with the same rhythm (i.e. a repeat in the music) occurred last or occurs next. CPs should ideally be layered the same.


[Sirade's 4K ADVANCED: Lv18]
  1. I think there's a rule about difficulties being in order (i.e. ascending star rating order) - so maybe make this below 3.27SR?
  2. 00:02:210 / 00:02:595 / 00:02:979 / 00:03:364 / 00:11:441 / 00:11:825 / 00:12:210 / 00:12:595 - End on the red line where the note has a "click" sound.
  3. 00:12:079 - Missing note (+1), then move 00:13:172 (13172|1) to column 2 to follow pitch?
  4. 00:31:248 to 00:31:441 / 00:37:402 to 00:37:595 / 02:03:556 to 02:03:748 / 02:09:710 to 02:09:902 - Overmapped streams.
    ->Delete the two middle notes and just put a single note on the blue line (which column is up to you).
  5. 00:55:575 / 00:55:864 - Missing notes from drum
  6. 01:10:960 / 01:17:114 / 01:20:191 - Move the note on column 3 to the white line? (incorrect emphasis, better to use single-triple rather than two doubles)
  7. 01:13:172 - Missing note (+3)
  8. 01:13:652 - Move to 01:13:556?
  9. 01:14:133 - The strong beat is actually here, meaning your triple is early. Move all the notes from 01:14:037 to here and switch LNs here too.
  10. 01:14:235 - Change the LN to a normal note, delete 01:14:325 (74325|1) because of extra note (overlayered) then +2 to 01:14:422 to make a stream?
  11. 01:22:979 - I'd delete two since you're not hearing the cymbal-like sound here any more (for which you used triples) - so a double here would make more sense.
  12. 01:25:960 (85960|1,85960|3,86056|3,86056|1) - Just continue the pattern instead of restarting it here, it might catch people out.
  13. 01:26:922 - +0 for consistency with 01:27:306.
  14. 01:27:979 - Delete a note from this, since you use a triple at 01:28:364 too and that has a cymbal on it whereas 01:27:979 doesn't.
  15. 01:31:441 to 01:32:979 - Use 25% playback for this - I think this stream is actually 1/8. It might be better just to have it going right to left repeatedly.
  16. 01:34:518 - Can probably add a note here (+2) for the drum.
  17. 02:05:287 (125287|0) - Can't tell what this is mapping, because the vocal starts at 02:05:095. If you really want an emphasis here then just change it to a normal note, but I'd recommend deleting that LN and repositioning your other notes.
  18. 02:11:441 (131441|0) / 02:11:825 (131825|1) / 02:12:210 (132210|2) / 02:13:364 (133364|0) / 02:14:133 (134133|3) / 02:14:518 (134518|1) /02:14:902 (134902|2) /02:15:287 (135287|0) / 02:17:210 (137210|1) / 02:17:595 (137595|2) / 02:17:979 (137979|1) / 02:18:364 (138364|3) / 02:18:748 (138748|0) / 02:19:518 (139518|3) / 02:20:287 (140287|0) / 02:20:672 (140672|3) / 02:21:056 (141056|2) / 02:21:441 (141441|1) / 02:21:825 (141825|0) - End on red line "cilck" sound.
  19. 02:14:325 -1, and 02:14:422 -0, because this is a weaker version of 02:12:979 / 02:13:075. Just the jackhammer on column 2 is enough.
  20. 02:15:672 -1, because there's no other sound apart from that random fading note.
  21. 02:23:556 - Move one of the LNs to 02:23:748 to follow the instrument instead of vocal (end at 02:25:287)?
  22. Summary
    ->Overall a really nice map, but can't tell if you were following vocal or instruments at times, and a few spots which emphasised a ghost position.
    ->Not sure why you would use a 1/6 divider for every stream which isn't even 1/6 - I understand if it was to make the 1/8 stream easier, but using 1/6 (which isn't even a multiple of 4 or 8) is doing it the wrong way.
[nowsmart's 4K EXPERT: LV 22]
  1. 00:06:825 - Missing LN -> 00:07:018 (+3)?
  2. 00:07:979 (7979|3) - End at 00:08:172 (started pattern early) - then +3 at 00:08:364?
  3. 00:09:133 +3, 00:09:518 +1, and 00:12:979 +1 - (consistency breaks - for this pattern you've ended your long LN with a normal note and a LN. This would also apply to the ending at 00:12:979 since it's technically still part of the pattern (This LN 00:12:979 (12979|2) would then act as a link between this pattern and the next.)
  4. 00:42:979 (42979|2,43075|3,43172|2,43268|1) - These four sound like the main part of the stream, so maybe have this going left to right, and move 00:43:364 (43364|0) to column 3? (optional)
  5. 00:43:556 / 00:43:652 - not really consistent with PCPs (00:31:248 / 00:31:345) and (00:37:402 / 00:37:498) - so maybe:
    ->Move 00:43:364 (43364|2) to column 1, then
    ->Add LN at 00:43:556 (+2) -> 00:43:652, then
    ->Add LN at 00:43:652 (+1) -> 00:43:478, then
    ->Move 00:43:748 (43748|1) to column 2?
  6. 00:49:710 - Same rhythm as above - maybe change 1/4 note on column 1 into an LN, then add 1/4 LN on column 2, and move 00:49:902 (49902|2) to column 1?
  7. 01:08:364 / 01:09:133 - Add note? Seems to have the same instruments as 01:08:748 so make the three consistent (maybe +1 to both)?
  8. 01:23:268 - Missing note - maybe:
    ->Move 01:22:979 (82979|0) to column 1, then
    ->Move 01:23:172 (83172|1) to column 0, then
    ->+1 at 01:23:268?
  9. 02:19:806 - Maybe move to column 1 (optional)?
  10. 02:22:018 - Maybe replace note with LN -> 02:22:114, then add LN (+2) 02:22:114 -> 02:22:210, then move 02:22:210 (142210|2) to column 3 for rhythm consistency?
  11. Summary
    ->Not much to find here, really consistent throughout, just a few minor issues which I'm not too sure if it was deliberate or not.
I spotted this while looking at the mapset overall...
[7K Sergio's MEDIUM: LV 9]
  1. Star rating too high (2.25 max) - might need to make it easier.
  2. Don't forget to rename this~
Also, just a quick check of the other two difficulties:
[4K SOFT: LV 5]
  1. 00:38:748 - Pattern break - add one (maybe +1).
  2. 00:40:672 - Also needs to add one (maybe +2).
  3. 00:57:595 - Add in the two notes from before (+0, +3) - those notes were correct, you didn't need to delete them (sorry if this seemed confusing in my last mod).
  4. 00:59:518 - Maybe move 00:59:518 (59518|3) to 00:59:902 for a double-single-double-single-double alternation?
  5. 01:06:441 - You don't need a note and LN at the same time because the music doesn't increase in strength (-1).
  6. 02:13:941 - Add one so it's consistent with 02:13:172 (maybe +2)?
  7. 02:16:825 - Keep the single-double-single-double alternation by deleting one (-3)?
  8. Final star rating if you change all of the above = 1.49 (Easy difficulty - JUST!).
[4K EXTREME: LV 20]
  1. 00:11:441 - Still missing one - maybe +0?
  2. 01:29:902 - Maybe delete one, there's no need for emphasis since this isn't the absolute middle of the section (try -3? (optional))
  3. 01:31:393 - Ghost note
  4. 01:35:768 / 01:38:845 / 01:41:922 / 01:44:806 - I like how you're keeping this consistent (actually, 01:44:806 should have been at 01:44:998 if you wanted the consistency) - but there's just no blue line note at those positions so it might be better to delete. If you don't want to delete the ghost notes, then at least move 01:44:806 to 01:44:998 to keep the pattern consistent.
  5. 02:03:268 - Missing note
  6. 02:06:537 - Ghost note
  7. 02:09:806 - Missing note (try +2?)
  8. 02:18:652 - Missing note (try +2, then maybe move 02:18:748 (138748|2) to column 3 and 02:18:748 (138748|1) to column 0 to avoid awkward hand positioning?)
Good job, a lot more consistent now I think~

Good luck~! :)
Thanks for modding, well, I'll check those mod later due to homework I got... :o
PANDAAAAAAAA
Topic Starter
fukashi

mike91lau wrote:

Can i GD?
no thanks :3
Fullerene-
Mod request by PM.

Columns:
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[General]
-According to http://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/B009QWZED6 song artist should be "Ryu☆ feat. MAYU". Also remove "Ryu*" from source and "mayu" and "ryu" from tags as they are in the song name/artist name already.
-Move offset to 687, it's a bit early right now
-Try to make your SVs look as close to 1.0x as possible. For everyone past the beginner level of playing, they will always look ahead when playing. This is why it is important to make them easy to react to. See here for more info and here for a calculator to make 1.0x-looking SVs that are sightreadable.


[nowsmart's 4K LV.22]
00:06:825 (6825|3) - Make this a normal note since you are only putting LNs to vocal here
00:08:556 (8556|1,8941|1,9325|3,9710|3) - Unsure what these LNs are going to. You didn't put LNs to those sounds earlier, so it's a bit inconsistent
00:11:633 (11633|1,12018|2,12402|0,12787|0,13172|3,13556|0,13941|3,14325|0) - ^ I think it'd be better if these were removed to keep consistency with the rest of this section. Alternatively, you can make all of these as LNs.
00:14:518 (14518|3) - Move this to start on 00:14:325 - and end it at 00:16:056 - for the vocals
00:17:595 (17595|2,20672|1,23748|0) - It seems the LNs here are to the synth that gets louder, but it's only one sound and you placed 3 different LNs to them. It would be better if you put down only a single LN for this sound and extend it all the way until 00:25:287 -
00:37:979 (37979|0) - Make this LN since it's the same sound
00:38:748 (38748|0) - ^
00:38:941 (38941|1) - Make this normal note
00:43:268 (43268|1) -Move to 1
00:43:364 (43364|1,43556|2,43652|1) - Switch to normal note
00:44:518 (44518|3) - remove
00:49:806 - add note here
00:50:383 - ^
00:50:575 - ^
00:54:518 (54518|0,54902|3,55287|0,55672|3) - These vocals start a 1/4 later
00:57:595 (57595|0,57979|3,58364|0,58748|3) - ^
01:02:210 (62210|3) - remove. this sound is not strong enough to have the same chord as the sounds before
01:09:518 - add note here
01:11:056 - ^
01:12:595 - ^
01:14:133 - ^
01:14:518 (74518|0,74518|2,74710|2,74710|0,74902|0,74902|2) - add a note to these chords
01:15:191 (75191|1) - move to 01:15:287 - since there's no sound at this 1/4 part
01:21:537 (81537|1,81633|2,81729|3) - since you're not layering this as double notes, make this into a trill to put more emphasis on these fast kicks
01:23:268 - add note?
01:24:806 - ^
01:32:066 (92066|2,92162|2) - One thing I think every mapper should consider is that if there is a fast stream, then instances of repetitions like this can make the pattern a lot harder than it needs to be. Something like this will keep the fast speed but will also be much more intuitive to hit. http://puu.sh/bEla4.png
02:13:460 (133460|3,133460|2,133556|0,133556|1,133748|3,133748|2) - ctrl+H to get rid of that minijack. Alternatively, you can put that minijack pattern in all those instances for that section.
02:15:575 - add note
02:15:672 - ^
02:16:056 (136056|2) - remove
02:17:595 (137595|0,137979|3,138364|0) - make these LNs normal notes. It's inconsistent with the rest of this section.
02:18:652 - add note
02:19:806 - ^
02:22:018 - why not add the 2 short LNs here like you did in other parts?

[Sirade's 4K LV.23]
00:04:325 - there's 2 different pitch here when she sings "mine" but if you're only putting a single LN to each word then you can ignore. only pointing it out for this part but it's the same for the rest of the song
00:14:518 (14518|3) - start this at 00:14:325 - and add note at 00:14:518 -
00:20:672 (20672|1) - move this LN to 4 since it's for the rising pitch, of course you have to arrange the other LNs accordingly
00:25:287 (25287|2) - move to 1
00:26:825 - add note here since it's a strong chord and a new section of the song
00:31:313 (31313|1,31377|2) - this is 1/4, not 1/6
00:37:466 (37466|2,37530|1) - ^
00:37:466 (37466|2,37530|1,39902|1,40095|0,40287|3) - remove since no extra sounds are added, just repeated
00:43:268 - and 00:43:364 - add notes
00:43:460 (43460|2,43652|0) - remove, there's no 1/4 here
00:47:979 - and 00:48:172 - add notes (optional)
00:49:902 (49902|1,50287|1,50672|1,51056|1) - move to 3 and adjust others accordingly, having the chord entirely on 1 hand puts more emphasis on the sounds you're mapping
01:03:364 (63364|3) - shorten this LN to 01:03:556 - since the sound you mapped ends here
01:04:614 (64614|1) - remove, there's no sound here. same for all other sections you put a note here
01:10:672 (70672|2) - since you seem to be putting LN to vocal here, shorten this to end at 01:10:864 - same for other repetition
01:10:960 (70960|1) - move this to start at 01:11:056 - and end at 01:11:248 - same for other repetition
01:11:248 (71248|0) - remove, same for other repetition
01:23:748 (83748|1,84037|3,84325|0,84518|1,84518|0) - remove these as there's no crash hits here
01:25:287 (85287|2,85383|1,85479|2,85575|1,85672|2,85768|1,85864|2,85960|1,86056|2,86152|1,86248|2,86344|1,86440|2,86536|1,86633|2,86729|1,86825|2) - ctrl+h all of this, chords on one hand are more impactful and comfortable to hit than trills
01:26:922 (86922|2,86922|0) - turn this into [34] chord, the whoosh sound you put an LN to starts a 1/4 later (red line) than what you have now
01:27:306 (87306|0) - start this LN on red line as before
01:31:489 (91489|2,91537|1,91633|1,91681|2,91777|2,91825|1,91922|1,91970|2,92066|2,92114|1,92210|1,92258|2,92354|2,92402|1,92498|1,92547|2,92643|2,92691|1,92787|1,92835|2,92931|2) - same as in nowsmart's GD, this is a very awkward pattern to hit for fast players and is a huge difficulty spike. the last part of this pattern is even worse because it creates a 1/8 trill on the right hand. I very very highly suggest you change this pattern to eliminate the 1/4 minijacks and 1/8 right hand trill. this is an example pattern that has no minijacks but still has the staircase-like pattern you had in the original one http://puu.sh/bEnyP.png
01:45:287 (105287|2) - move to 4
02:03:620 (123620|1,123684|2) - this is 1/4, not 1/6, same also as before
02:05:095 (125095|0) - LN here is inconsistent, either remove this or add one to the same sound before
02:09:774 (129774|2,129838|1) - 1/4, not 1/6
02:12:595 - add note here to keep consistency with other section, and also add LN since you do that for other sections
02:14:325 (134325|2,134422|2) - move this to 1 and shift 02:14:518 (134518|0,134518|1) - one column right. the sound chops here are only on the left speaker, so the notes should be on the left hand as well
02:22:498 (142498|1) - LN here started a bit early, move to start LN at 02:22:595 -
02:23:556 (143556|1,143556|0) - shift these over to 02:23:748 - as the crash notes start here, the LN on 4 is for vocals i presume. optionally, you can make the LN here on 1 instead of 2 for symmetry

Good luck.
Rilene
Well, sorry to modders for wasting your time on modding on my map since I want to remove my GD from this map (because I'm busy on other maps), so please remove it, thanks in advance.

By the way...

Good luck on getting this ranked.
Topic Starter
fukashi
It's not necessary.
You do not to do anything. You just expect it to become ranked ;)
Kawawa
Hi~

mania modding about..

u know?

u r song, each level diffierent have source, tag, previewtime

it must be the same "soruce, tag, previewtime"

check it. CTRL+SHIFT+A

sry, poor modding T-T
because, u beat good at, no problem. so, just it.

good luck :)
Topic Starter
fukashi
Ook, thanks :3



I'm in love with your avatar ( ̄ー ̄)
Kawawa
HI?
and, poor modding desu

7K LV.24
Column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7
00:12:402 - move to 1,3
00:38:364 - move to 2,4,6
00:38:556 - move to 3
00:40:095 - move to 1,2,4,6
00:40:287 - move to 1,2,4,6
00:40:383 - move to 4
01:03:556 - move to 4
01:03:652 - move to 2,6
01:03:748 - move to 1,4,7
01:20:095 - move to 3
01:20:191 - move to 1,5
01:20:768 - move to 5,7
01:20:864 - move to 1
01:21:729 - delete 6
01:21:825 - move to 4
02:13:268 - move to 1,4
02:13:460 - move to 1,4
02:13:556 - move to 2,5
02:15:960 - move to 1,2
because that, i think note is need a better place
so, just simple suggest XD

good luk XD
Topic Starter
fukashi
ohu thanks :3
Rilene
Hi just telling that you forgot to remove my name on my tag so hoping you to remove it soon, just reminding... :P

And well, about 4K LV.24, you have to make SV more easier to read... :P (just test played only one diff...)
Topic Starter
fukashi
I think now I'm active to support this map..sorry for long time in graveyard?
Kurisu Makise
Hi! From Kivi's random queue.
Columns 1-7.

7K LV.19
HP7 OD7
00:03:556 - Add note. Notes must be every 1/2 till 00:14:325- (dont tell me, you mapped the entire section for vocal, when there are insteumental souns to map).
00:37:402 (37402|6) - To 5th column, now it's uncomfortable pattern. If you like it too much, move 00:37:210 (37210|2) - to 1st and 00:36:825 (36825|3) - to 3rd.
00:44:518 (44518|5,44518|1,44710|1,44710|5,44902|4,44902|2,45095|6,45095|0,45287|2) - Re-arrange to piano slides, your pattern absolutely don't suit the music.
00:49:422 - Missed note.
01:12:498 - ^
01:51:633 (111633|3) - Why simple note? Following notes for vocal are long.
02:01:825 (121825|4) - Move to 4th column, balance and comfort.
02:03:748 (123748|6) - To 5th for pitch.
02:09:710 (129710|0,129806|1,129902|0) - 4-2-5 for balance, 02:09:422 (129422|1) - to 3rd.
LNs must be re-arranged. Now they don't follow any rules at all.

7K LV.24
HP8 OD8
00:09:518 (9518|1) - To 6th column for balance.
00:11:825 (11825|4) - To 2nd for balance.
00:28:941 (28941|2) - 4 for balance.
00:30:864 (30864|4) - 4 for common sense ._.
00:33:172 (33172|4) - 4 for balance.
00:33:941 (33941|4,34037|6) - 3-4, more comfortable.
00:35:095 (35095|5) - 7... I can't explain in english, it just better suits the motion of melody.
00:37:018 (37018|0) - 3 for same reason.
00:39:902 (39902|0,39902|1,39902|4,39902|2,39902|6,40095|1,40095|3,40095|5,40095|0,40287|3,40287|5,40287|0,40287|1) - Wut? 3 notes are enough (overmap anyway, but who cares about this now...)
00:40:383 (40383|2) - Delete.
00:41:441 (41441|1,41633|2) - Move 1 column right, 00:42:018 (42018|6,42210|5) - 2 columns left, 00:42:595 (42595|2) - to 6th column. Seems better.
00:45:095 - Where're notes?
00:44:710 (44710|5,44710|3,44710|4,44902|0,44902|1,44902|5) - Totally spam.
00:56:441 - What's THIS? Why 4-noted chords?
01:00:672 - Same question, but here chords are 3-noted.
01:04:902 (64902|5,64902|4,64902|3) - Don't do this. Don't place 3 notes in near columns (exceptions must be really rare).
01:17:210 (77210|2,77210|5,77210|4,77402|3,77402|2,77402|5,77595|6,77595|2,77595|3) - Spread this on all 7 columns.
01:25:287 - Here starts 1/4 stream. Not 1/8.
01:31:441 - And here starts 1/8!
I think, enough. Maybe you should get more experience, playing ranked maps (or converts from other rhythm games) and watching them in editor. Then you will understand, what else in this map need to be erased.

Good luck
Topic Starter
fukashi
lv 19 is a GD......is not own by me


(ohm, I don't play 7k, so that's hard.)
Harbyter
ciao Smooch ,eccoti la mod

[General]

Ora come ora la mappa e' altamente inrankabile, dovresti per prima cosa assortire per bene ogni difficolta' per ogni key mode

al momento abbiamo
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4K lv 5 1.47
4K lv 22 3.30
4K lv 24 3.26 wut

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6K lv 8 1.78
6K lv 26 3.45

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7K lv 19 2.70
7K lv 24 3.71


hai bisogno di un set completo se vuoi mischiare tutte queste key mode

per ogni key mode hai bisogno di una :

EZ sotto ai 1.50 di star obbligatorio
NM sotto ai 2.10 di star obbligatorio
HD e MX

e poi tra' ogni difficolta' non puoi superare il limite del 1.50 di star rating

[4K lv.24]


00:38:845 (38845|2,39037|0) - niente qui ,delet?

00:39:133 - aggiungi una nota qui ,il suono dei bassi e' molto forte

00:39:325 - suggerisco di rimuovere una nota qua

00:40:672 - aggiungi una nota qui per il basso

00:47:306 (47306|2,47498|2) - niente qui, delet?

00:48:075 (48075|2,48268|0) - niente anche qui

00:55:095 - 00:55:575 - 00:55:864 - consiglio di aggiungere delle note per questo strano suono xD

01:08:652 (68652|1) - niente qua

01:09:614 (69614|2) - anche qui,niente

01:15:768 (75768|2) - per quella vocal una LN da parte di questa 01:15:672 (75672|3) - andrebbe meglio ,suggerisco di rimuovere

01:20:960 (80960|2) - rimuovi ,nulla qui

01:22:979 - aggiungi una nota per il basso qui

01:24:518 - ~

01:24:902 - aggiunti due note nelle colonne 1 2

01:27:018 (87018|1,87018|0) - consiglio di rimuovere queste note,dato che qui i bassi non ci sono

01:27:595 (87595|2,87595|3,87691|1,87691|0) - CTRL+J

01:27:787 (87787|2,87883|1) - consiglio di rimuovere

01:27:979 - aggiungi una nota 2 qui

01:28:364 - puoi aggiungere una nota 4 qui il suono spacca i timpani qui Xd

01:31:313 (91313|0) - sta nota e' in 1/4 qui 01:31:345 - fixa lo snap

01:31:505 (91505|3,91569|2,91697|0,91761|1,91889|3,91954|2,92082|0,92146|3,92274|1,92338|0,92466|2,92530|3,92659|1,92723|2,92851|0,92915|2) - lo snap e' in 1/8 snappare in 1/6 risulta overmap dato che metti le note dove non c'e' suono

01:35:768 (95768|3) - consiglio di levare, il ritmo e' calmo e costante qui ,aggiungere questa nota e' brutto

01:38:845 (98845|2) - 01:41:922 (101922|3) - 01:44:998 (104998|1) - rimuovi queste anche

01:59:133 - ~02:04:902 - suggerisco di seguire il semplice ritmo 2-1-2-1-2 ecc. lol

02:13:364 - aggiungi nota 2 02:13:460 - qui nota 1

02:18:652 - aggiunti nota 2

02:19:518 - nota 3

02:19:806 - 02:19:902 - note 3 e poi 4

02:20:287 - nota 4

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figliolo hai bisogno di tanto lavoro ancora :o
arviejhay
hello u req?


1,2,3,4,5,6,7
[Sergio's 7K LV.19]
Check AImod, there's unsnapped objects
01:02:210 (62210|3) - move the LN end to 01:03:274 and add 1 note on 4 in 01:03:364
01:26:825 (86825|1) - move to 3
01:46:056 (106056|3,106248|4,106441|5,106633|6) - move 1 column to the left?
02:07:787 (127787|2,127883|3,127979|4) - move 1 column to the right

[7K LV.24]
01:37:595 - missing 1 note?
02:23:748 - add 1 note on 5


That's all
good luck! :)
Topic Starter
fukashi
Updated!
Sorry for the long time in graveyard :o
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