• 
  Hp + 1
  Also,Glasslake changed his name to Glass~

• 
  00:22:686 (6): Remove this whistle(It doesn’t sounds good)
  00:26:171 (8): ^
  00:27:837 (7): ^
  00:29:049 (2,3): Sounds strange~ So remove the finish hitsound
  00:40:943 (7): New combo
  00:41:171 (1): Remove new combo
  00:44:580 (7): New combo
  00:44:807 (1): Remove new combo
  01:10:943 (6): New combo
  01:11:171 (1): Remove new combo
  01:27:307 (2): Clap
  01:28:216 (6): ^
  01:49:466 (4): Whistle(Maybe sounds better )
  01:56:739 (10): ^
  02:07:307 (2): Add whistle at the end
  02:08:443 (5): ^
  02:10:262 (1): Spinner starts here
  02:10:034 (4): Whistle
  03:55:943 (5): Move to 03:55:867
  04:11:398 (3): Reverse
  04:39:807 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  04:41:398 (6): Whistle
  04:43:216 (6): ^
  04:45:034 (4): ^
  04:45:261 (1): Add whistle at the end
  04:46:398 (5): Move whistle to 04:46:284
  04:46:625 (6): Remove finish
  04:47:079 (1): Add finish
  04:50:488 (8): Whistle
  04:52:591 (1): Finish
  05:32:534 (11): Add clap at the end
  05:58:442 (1): Add whistle at the end
  05:59:465 (3): Remove whistle and add whistle here
  05:59:806 (4): Remove finish
  06:00:260 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  06:01:851 (6): Whistle
  06:05:772 (1): Finish
  06:32:988 (1): Add clap at the beginning

impossiblexu wrote:

Hi~

My suggestions:

[General]

• 
  Hp + 1 Done
  Also,Glasslake changed his name to Glass~ Oh, ok (Tags will change, don't have access to the fonts atm)

[Easy]

• 
  00:22:686 (6): Remove this whistle(It doesn’t sounds good)
  00:26:171 (8): ^
  00:27:837 (7): ^
  00:29:049 (2,3): Sounds strange~ So remove the finish hitsound
  Re hitsounded
  00:40:943 (7): New combo
  00:41:171 (1): Remove new combo
  Done.
  00:44:580 (7): New combo
  00:44:807 (1): Remove new combo
  Done.
  01:10:943 (6): New combo
  01:11:171 (1): Remove new combo
  Done.
  01:27:307 (2): Clap
  01:28:216 (6): ^
  Done.
  01:49:466 (4): Whistle(Maybe sounds better )
  01:56:739 (10): ^
  Nah ^^
  02:07:307 (2): Add whistle at the end
  02:08:443 (5): ^
  Done.
  02:10:262 (1): Spinner starts here
  Simply moved back a bit.
  02:10:034 (4): Whistle
  03:55:943 (5): Move to 03:55:867
  Nah~.
  04:11:398 (3): Reverse
  Nah
  04:39:807 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  Done.
  04:41:398 (6): Whistle
  04:43:216 (6): ^
  04:45:034 (4): ^
  04:45:261 (1): Add whistle at the end
  04:46:398 (5): Move whistle to 04:46:284
  04:46:625 (6): Remove finish
  04:47:079 (1): Add finish
  04:50:488 (8): Whistle
  04:52:591 (1): Finish
  Done.
  05:32:534 (11): Add clap at the end
  05:58:442 (1): Add whistle at the end
  05:59:465 (3): Remove whistle and add whistle here
  05:59:806 (4): Remove finish
  06:00:260 (1): Add finish at the beginning
  06:01:851 (6): Whistle
  06:05:772 (1): Finish
  06:32:988 (1): Add clap at the beginning
  Done.

Good map~

☆ STAR ☆

Soaprman wrote:

Good show! This map is well-made and it was quite fun to play. Thanks for posting it in my queue. Too bad I found nothing wrong with it.

Cyclone wrote:

Just keep telling me and i'll move to pending whenever needed

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Collab:
05:27:534 (2) - make this end exactly on 6? (it would look nicer that way)

blissfulyoshi wrote:

03:53:443 (4) - I don't like how this hits the hp bar because this is aesthetically unpleasing to me, but I'll let you decide what to do with it

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Sorry for being so late, here is my mod.

Since this is a collab, I am going to be a lot more lenient on my mod just because there are so many styles that you can't use a single guideline for all of them.

Remove your names from the tags pianist, you don't need your own. whoops done

Collab:
00:28:443 (1,2,3) - make these sliders a little rounder on the curve because the current curve looks fairly ugly Should be betters
01:05:716 (4) - I don't really like slowing down sliders to make it parallel and even because it feels awkward for me to play, but I'll let you decide what you want to do with this I think it's kinda eh as well, yet I'm not sure if I can make a better solution
01:51:171 (3) - This looks a little nicer as a horizontal reflection of 1 Done
02:03:898 (4) - I would like this to be a vertical reflection of 6 (What is with the shape here? It looks so different in comparison to the rest of your section) Done
02:51:057 (2,3,4,5) - this was hard for me to read under the 300 of the spinner Going to first leave this for now.
02:52:534 (1) - Why is the start of this not directly under the green 5? I would imagine it would look better if they directly overlapped each other Done
03:10:716 (3) - move this downward to stay clear of the green 5 Changed
03:16:170 (1,4) - the normal whistles here sounded a little strange to me, probably because they haven't been used much in any earlier part of the song. Changed
03:53:443 (4) - I don't like how this hits the hp bar because this is aesthetically unpleasing to me, but I'll let you decide what to do with it Fixed
04:05:943 (5) - ^ hmm
04:28:897 (4) - it would look nice if you can round out the bottom half of the curve (it looks a little sharp right now) Done
05:27:534 (2) - make this end exactly on 6? (it would look nicer that way) I think it already is!
05:48:898 (1) - the mass amount of repeats made this slider a little boring, so I would advise changing it How's this~?
T_T my own section makes me feel ashamed :
06:32:988 (1,2) - make this a little easier by using DS and align 1 with 4 and make 2 a 180 degree spin of that err like this?
06:35:260 (2,2,3,4) - if you can find a way try to make this area of the jump easier, it just feels weird to me now (I think it is the 2,3,4 section,but I am not too sure what to do with it) I think it's fine~
Okay back to regular modding now.
06:42:988 (5) - Having this note go into the toward the origin like the next few notes just makes this pattern look more crowded than it should be, so I advise you change this slider mmkay

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Thanks for letting me map in this collab. i wish you the best of luck in getting this ranked.

loveFantasy wrote:

hi~testplay feedback

<01:29:125..> (4..) i think you need more green line Better transition now
<02:56:511..> (1..) i think the claps are too loud Quieter now~
- feel weird of using whistle in al2e10 and no-7 part, doesn't match the song They're slightly quieter now~
- feel weird of usage of finishes in dksslqj part should be better now~

great collab, star

TheVileOne wrote:

IRC mod. Fixed up some small things.


Star. Get this approved already.