Fuseka wrote:

Yeah make it more easy and remove the storyboard then you ll probably be able to rank it.
But no one is gonna play ur map cuz there are already 2 boring maps of this ranked.

mapping to the music = bored GG

I just chose the wrong song to map... I think I'm just going to let this one graveyard

skinnyjimmy wrote:

I just chose the wrong song to map... I think I'm just going to let this one graveyard

is not about that, I mean your map is really fuun to play, but there are spots where are nothing in the music: 00:21:978 - 00:19:223 - 00:23:814 - 00:25:728 (5) -

00:23:049 (3) - about this one will be really great if it end in 1/4 instead of 1/8, mainly cuz there is a small sound in 1/4, but nothing at 1/8
02:38:049 (4) - ^

01:24:733 (3) - there are some sliders like this one, that have a clearly sound in 01:24:886 - but for some reason you extended it to 01:25:039 - where is nothing in the music, also the vocals are ending in 01:24:886 - so I dont see a valid reason to have sliders like this one

02:28:406 (1) - ^

Those are just a few examples, as I said before this is my opinion, your map have nice patterns, good flow, but the rhythm is not following the song , atleast for me. You can ask to other BATs of course, but I think they will have similar opinions. Sorry if I sound rude or something, but that's what I think of this map, for example this is really noticeable at the piano parts, even you did really good in the vocal parts.

I'm really sure if you try to follow the song better, you will do a great diff.

Sorry i just had WAY more FUN playing with the SB on the 1st version than now.
And i could still feed the rythmn very well.

No offense about your map Natsu or oracle's one, but they are just boring to me.

Having fun and feeling a rhythm doesn't mean it follows the music well. Feeling a rhythm can be done on any song, whether it suits one particular song is another matter.

Revive the map pls so good x.x

pls revive

[ Setsuna ] wrote:

pls revive

do it D:

REVIVED!!!

I BELEIVEDDDD

FINNALY <3
+star and good luck >w<

Hi, i am not great at modding:

-Add Clap at 00:06:825 (4,6) and 00:10:192 (1,3,5)

-Use hit circle at 00:12:641 (2) , 00:24:886 (3)

-Remove note at 00:15:090 (3) , 00:17:539 (4) , even you don't want to remove it, just use shorter distance

-Remove note at 00:18:457 (2)

-Using star pattern in 00:23:661 (3,4,5,6) like this:


- shorten the spinner at 00:29:860 to 00:29:860-00:31:927 , and add 4 notes at 00:32:233 , 00:32:539 , 00:32:845 and 00:33:151 , any pattern you like

- Use hit circle at 00:39:564 (1) (Optional: 00:34:682 (1)

- Remove the slider at 00:50:906 (3) and use triples

(Optional: use slider instead in 01:06:518 (6,7) but however, it should place nearby 01:08:967 (1) )

slainender2013 wrote:

Hi, i am not great at modding:

-Add Clap at 00:06:825 (4,6) and 00:10:192 (1,3,5) fixed

-Use hit circle at 00:12:641 (2) , 00:24:886 (3) I think these are fine the way they are

-Remove note at 00:15:090 (3) , 00:17:539 (4) , even you don't want to remove it, just use shorter distance I shortened distance

-Remove note at 00:18:457 (2) It's a slider

-Using star pattern in 00:23:661 (3,4,5,6) like this: hmm okay ty

SPOILER

- shorten the spinner at 00:29:860 to 00:29:860-00:31:927 , and add 4 notes at 00:32:233 , 00:32:539 , 00:32:845 and 00:33:151 , any pattern you like I really like this idea, thanks!!

- Use hit circle at 00:39:564 (1) (Optional: 00:34:682 (1) I think that would be kind of over mapping

- Remove the slider at 00:50:906 (3) and use triples I like the slider though

(Optional: use slider instead in 01:06:518 (6,7) but however, it should place nearby 01:08:967 (1) )

Thank you so much for the mod!!!

First time modding :/

01:30:932 (7,1) - Considering SV is high here, this 2 feels weird to me. Add a 1/4 slider and continue with the flow of the squared jumps.

01:43:253 (1,2,3,4) - You made this pattern because of 01:43:253 (1,2) because of the quick voice, but 01:44:018 (4) don't support it.

02:16:314 (4) drags along with the voice but 02:16:620 (5) doesn't. Since it's together, change 02:16:620 (5) to 2 hit circles.

02:16:926 (6,7) - Simple blanket?

02:19:988 (1) - overlapping quite a bit, bring up and to the right that it perfectly fits.

02:22:437 (1,2,3) - try a triple blanket

02:34:069 (2,3,4) - this 1/3 jumps placement looks weird to me. You can try using small distance snap while 02:34:681 (1) can overlap either of the circles.

02:42:488 (2) - blanket?

03:04:069 (5) - NC?

03:16:620 (2,3) - Try replacing with a slider with low velocity as the music abruptly stops.

03:36:824 (5) - Voice continues to drag, you can consider change the slider shape and repeat it, or create 1/4 slider and another 1/2 to support continuation.

since you love overlapping, you can consider 03:45:243 (6) to overlap with the slider's end 03:45:702 (1)

03:51:518 (4,1) - A gap, but there's a dragging voice. Consider a weird slider shape to support it.

04:15:013 (4) - I don't hear any sounds that can support this triplet.

04:27:334 (1) - Voice starts at the end of slider. You can replace this with a hit circle then continue with a slider for the voice.

04:40:804 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Greatly focusing on the lower part of the screen. Consider 04:42:028 (1) - going upwards.

04:57:181 (2,4) - Overlap?

Beautiful song, beautiful map! Hope my mod isn't too bad, this are all my opinions! Good luck for approval!

woah

general

1. 04:27:335 - kiai end not snapped?
2. 02:29:018 (3) - apparently repeat unsnapped or something (from aibat so don't trust it too much)
3. 03:27:335 - unsnapped green line.

first time modding

1. tbh i think ar9 would work a bit better, you have some overlaps that i found a bit hard to read on first testplay. remember, this basically plays like a 196 bpm
2. 00:03:763 (3) - why the slider body whistle?
   00:48:151 (3) - ^
3. 00:15:702 (4,1) - i would space this out more
   03:37:743 (8,9) - ^
   03:33:457 (1,2,3) - ehh. ^
4. 00:19:069 (3,4) - copy paste D:?
   01:15:702 (4,5) - ^
5. 00:32:998 - u could probably add a note here
6. 00:51:518 (3) - not too sure what this should be snapped. possibly 1/6?
7. 01:14:784 (4) - damn this was pretty hard to read, but maybe ar increase will fix
8. 01:34:627 (1,2) - this was pretty weird to play, cuz of the short slider. i think a good option would be to increase the sv for just this single slider.
9. 02:56:416 (7) - 1/4 slider would be a better option here. to get the drum 02:56:569 -
   03:47:232 (2) - ^
10. 03:21:212 (1,2,3) - maybe use a little less spacing here for the spacing transition from something like 03:20:906 (6,1) - to 03:21:212 (1,2) -
11. 03:23:661 - does this part also need additional timing? some parts sound off.
12. 03:27:334 (1) - put this a bit closer to the center of the screen, cuz the spinner recovery for this is honestly pretty short.
13. 04:26:952 (3,4) - i feel like these should be on 1/6 or something
14. 05:08:967 (1) - could curve this a bit more to give it kind of a pseudo symmetry with 05:09:886 (3) -
15. 05:10:804 (4,5) - honestly this jump is pretty unfitting for this calm part. i would just stack these probably

Kibbleru wrote:

woah

general

1. 04:27:335 - kiai end not snapped? fixed
2. 02:29:018 (3) - apparently repeat unsnapped or something (from aibat so don't trust it too much) fixed
3. 03:27:335 - unsnapped green line.

fixed

first time modding

1. tbh i think ar9 would work a bit better, you have some overlaps that i found a bit hard to read on first testplay. remember, this basically plays like a 196 bpm yeah I think so too... thanks!
2. 00:03:763 (3) - why the slider body whistle? Wow I never noticed that, fixed
   00:48:151 (3) - ^ fixed
3. 00:15:702 (4,1) - i would space this out more fixed
   03:37:743 (8,9) - ^ fixed
   03:33:457 (1,2,3) - ehh. ^ fixed
4. 00:19:069 (3,4) - copy paste D:? fixed
   01:15:702 (4,5) - ^ fixed
5. 00:32:998 - u could probably add a note here fixed
6. 00:51:518 (3) - not too sure what this should be snapped. possibly 1/6? hmm I think you're right
7. 01:14:784 (4) - damn this was pretty hard to read, but maybe ar increase will fix yeaah maybe
8. 01:34:627 (1,2) - this was pretty weird to play, cuz of the short slider. i think a good option would be to increase the sv for just this single slider. fixed
9. 02:56:416 (7) - 1/4 slider would be a better option here. to get the drum 02:56:569 -fixed
   03:47:232 (2) - ^ fixed
10. 03:21:212 (1,2,3) - maybe use a little less spacing here for the spacing transition from something like 03:20:906 (6,1) - to 03:21:212 (1,2) - fixed
11. 03:23:661 - does this part also need additional timing? some parts sound off. yeah it was, fixed
12. 03:27:334 (1) - put this a bit closer to the center of the screen, cuz the spinner recovery for this is honestly pretty short. fixed
13. 04:26:952 (3,4) - i feel like these should be on 1/6 or something fixed
14. 05:08:967 (1) - could curve this a bit more to give it kind of a pseudo symmetry with 05:09:886 (3) - hmm ok fixed
15. 05:10:804 (4,5) - honestly this jump is pretty unfitting for this calm part. i would just stack these probably

ty for the mod!!

This is my first mod, so I hope, this will be okay:

00:51:518 (3) - This slider seems to be a bit off. Maybe just one way would be enough?

01:34:042 (3) - I would make this and the next one like stairs. Because the piano goes higher as well.

01:57:870 (5) - Maybe these two short notes are too much. Can't here them in the song. Just feels a bit weird

02:16:161 (3) - No. 3 out and 4 and 5 as long note?

02:22:476 - I woul add there one more note (no.5)

03:23:661 (1) - The same like before: I would make this and the next one like stairs. Because the piano goes higher as well.

I hope, it's a bit helpful for my first time. Good Luck for this nice map.

Good Luck for Ranking :3

Sorry My Queue For STDHas Been Closed I Can't Handle That Mode Anymore ..

THIS IS ALIVEEE

it lives \o/

jk ;w;

You are the most underrated mapper ever.
*shoots 1*

Remap Everlasting Guilty Spice and let me GD.

great song!
good job

Really nice map, pls rank it

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