1. Easy (1.49 stars, 91 notes)
2. Hard (2.91 stars, 223 notes)
3. Normal (2.14 stars, 165 notes)

Chyo-Kun wrote:

Requested in my modding queue : t/229105

       General

 
 

1. You should have an Audio Lead-In of at least 2000ms in all difficulties (Reccomanded amount of milliseconds before the map starts). Will do later
    
2. Remove "ed" from your tags done
      
      
   
   
   

   Easy

    
    
3. 00:00:707 - Add a green line here and set its volume to 35%. 65% sounds way too loud for the beginning of the map!
    
    
   You should modify the volume of the greenlines in your map so it fits more the volume of the song itself. Here's what you should do:
    
4. 00:07:965 Change the volume of this greenline to 55% done
5. 00:46:674 Change the volume of this greenline to 60% done
6. 01:17:640 Change the volume of this greenline to 55% done
    
   Now it should sound better.
    
7. 01:15:705 (6) - This slider looks really ugly! Try to smooth it out a little and make it look better. You might even want to replace it with a spinner, if you prefer so. spinner replaced
    
   Remember that you can always improve your map, make it look better with smoother slider curves,better beat placing and hitsounds. Go throug your map several times and figure out how to make it better everytime. This way you will more likely get it ranked much faster!
    
    
   

   Normal

    
    
8. Do the same thing with the green lines I wrote in Easy. done for all diffs
    
9. 01:15:705 (5) - This slider looks bad too. I suggest just adding a spinner,the kind of slider you're going for is far too complicated and unnecessary. spinner replaced
    
10. 01:21:511 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Instead of doing this by yourself,delete it,go to Compose > Create Polygon Circles and create it in there. Way faster and better looking! looked pretty identical but fixed anyway
     
     
    

    Hard

     
     
11. 00:50:303 (6,7,1,2) - Use distance snap on these beat instead of just stacking them togheter,it's really confusing at the moment. done, had to change 00:49:577 (5) due to space
     
12. 01:06:996 (4) - Make this slider's curve smoother, like this:
    
    
    fixed
     
    One thing I have to note: All of these difficulties can be much improved by just replacing the beats to make them look more ordered and throug better slider shaping. You should definitely keep working on it and request more mods. well let's see if I really can...
     
    You did a discrete job for your first beatmap,the only thing I can say is keep it up and 頑張って！