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Ari Ozawa - URAOMOTE FORTUNE

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kumaapon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, September 14, 2014 at 12:39:48 PM

Artist: Ari Ozawa
Title: URAOMOTE FORTUNE
Source: 月刊少女野崎くん
Tags: Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun Ending Chiyo Sakura
BPM: 132
Filesize: 8597kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.48 stars, 88 notes)
  2. Hard (3.03 stars, 229 notes)
  3. kakifly's Hard (3.1 stars, 200 notes)
  4. Normal (1.76 stars, 133 notes)
  5. Ts8zs' Insane (3.54 stars, 230 notes)
Download: Ari Ozawa - URAOMOTE FORTUNE
Download: Ari Ozawa - URAOMOTE FORTUNE (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This is my 2nd beatmap :)
I thank you for everybody who's kindly willing to download and try my beatmap :) _-Mapset-_
Easy 100%
Normal 100%
Hard 100%
kakifly's Hard 100% ( Thx for the GD!!! )
ts8zs's Insane 100% ( thx for the GD!!! )
Now enjoy this cute sakura <3


Feedback and Mods are very appreciated. Really. :)
Please redownload after 09/12/2014 Many changes were made >.<
5eania
offset must be -25 (656)

if you fix it, i'll help you again. pm to me
Topic Starter
kumaapon

5eania wrote:

offset must be -25 (656)

if you fix it, i'll help you again. pm to me
Fixed. Thank you :)
5eania
[Easy Fortune]
looks like sv is fast
00:07:018 (4) - Copy & paste from 3
00:09:064 (6,7) - just one slider. 1/2 snap
00:13:154 (1) - nc off
00:09:745 (1) - end is 00:10:200
00:10:882 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - move to forward 1/2 snap
00:13:836 - add 1/2 snap slider
00:22:245 (1) - slider end is unsnapped
00:24:290 (3) - change to 1/2 snap slider
00:25:199 (4,5) - delete and add 1/1 snap slider to 00:24:972
00:26:108 (1) - move to forward 1/2 snap
00:37:698 (3) - increase 1/4 snap
00:43:607 - add note
00:49:970 - ^
01:08:150 (2,3,4,1) - suggest : http://cl.ly/WkgC
01:17:922 (1) - change to 3/4 slider
01:18:831 (2) - move to forward 1/2 snap, decrease to 1/2 length, and add circle to 01:19:286
01:22:922 - 1/2 slider one repeat.

[Normal Fortune]
00:09:291 (5) - stack to 4
00:09:745 (1) - suggest : http://cl.ly/WkZZ
00:13:836 - add note
00:17:927 ~ 00:18:836 - change to slider.
00:37:698 (3) - increase 1/4 snap
00:43:834 - add note
00:54:060 - 1/4 slider one repeat
01:14:968 (4) - don't repeat
01:17:922 (1,2,3,4) - suggest : http://cl.ly/WkZZ

[Hard Fortune]
3 stream is fine.
00:36:789 - add note
01:17:922 - suggest :http://cl.ly/Wkbb
Topic Starter
kumaapon

5eania wrote:

[Easy Fortune]
looks like sv is fast
00:07:018 (4) - Copy & paste from 3
00:09:064 (6,7) - just one slider. 1/2 snap
00:13:154 (1) - nc off
00:09:745 (1) - end is 00:10:200
00:10:882 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - move to forward 1/2 snap
00:13:836 - add 1/2 snap slider
00:22:245 (1) - slider end is unsnapped
00:24:290 (3) - change to 1/2 snap slider
00:25:199 (4,5) - delete and add 1/1 snap slider to 00:24:972
00:26:108 (1) - move to forward 1/2 snap
00:37:698 (3) - increase 1/4 snap
00:43:607 - add note
00:49:970 - ^
01:08:150 (2,3,4,1) - suggest : http://cl.ly/WkgC
01:17:922 (1) - change to 3/4 slider
01:18:831 (2) - move to forward 1/2 snap, decrease to 1/2 length, and add circle to 01:19:286
01:22:922 - 1/2 slider one repeat.

[Normal Fortune]
00:09:291 (5) - stack to 4
00:09:745 (1) - suggest : http://cl.ly/WkZZ
00:13:836 - add note
00:17:927 ~ 00:18:836 - change to slider.
00:37:698 (3) - increase 1/4 snap
00:43:834 - add note
00:54:060 - 1/4 slider one repeat
01:14:968 (4) - don't repeat
01:17:922 (1,2,3,4) - suggest : http://cl.ly/WkZZ

[Hard Fortune]
3 stream is fine.
00:36:789 - add note
01:17:922 - suggest :http://cl.ly/Wkbb
Thank you for the great mods! I think I've fixed everything you've said. Although the easy diff. has kinda become a bit too hard XD Ty regardless :)
Jaltzu
General
Decrease hitsound volume.
Too much SV changes
You have 2 different inheriting sections at 00:40:198. Remove one of those.
Add custom combo colours.
Offset 656. I think 5eania meant you have to decrease your offset by 25, which would have made it 656.

EASY
Decrease slider velocity.
You have to use DS ALL THE TIME in easy & normal diffs.
Delete most of SV changes. I would allow 00:09:745 - 00:10:882 and 01:09:741 - 01:10:650 to remain.
00:20:654 (1) - No NC
00:20:654 (1,1) - Don't make these overlap
00:22:245 (1,2) - Make a blanket
00:27:471 (1) - No NC
00:28:835 (1) - ↑↑
00:29:744 (2) - NC
00:30:426 - Add circle
00:34:062 (1) - No NC
00:35:880 (1) - ↑↑
00:40:652 (1) - Move closer to screen center, so it's easier to begonners to jump from spinner to slider.
00:44:061 (2) - Make this open upwards (flip vertically)
00:45:879 (1) - No NC
00:49:970 (3,4,5) - Replace with repeat slider
00:57:469 (5,1) - ↑↑ (slider points: head 00:57:469 - repeat 00:57:696 - tail 00:57:924)
01:03:832 (1) - No NC
01:04:741 (1) - ↑↑
01:09:741 (1) - ↑↑
01:18:604 (2,1) - Don't stack notes in easy.
01:21:104 (5) - NC
01:22:013 (1,1) - No NC
01:25:422 (2,3,4) - Replace with repeat slider.

NORMAL
Consider lowering SV here too.
Too many SV changes
USE DS!!!!!!!!
00:05:883 (2) - Flip horizontally
00:19:291 (3) - NC
00:19:973 (1) - No NC
00:20:882 (2,3,4) - Move these 1/2 tic backwards (to last red tic). Add circle to 00:22:018
00:26:109 (1) - No NC
00:28:836 (1) - ↑↑
00:29:745 (2) - NC
00:29:745 (2,3,4) - These overlaps are REALLY bad. If you can't fix the overlap, then delete the heart and make something else.
00:34:063 (1) - No NC
00:35:881 (1) - ↑↑
00:44:062 (3) - Flip horizontally
00:46:335 (1,1) - No NC
00:47:471 (2) - NC
00:49:289 (1) - No NC
00:52:698 (1) - No NC
00:53:152 (3) - Flip vertically
00:54:061 (4) - NC
00:54:743 (5,7) - Remove overlap
00:55:425 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This whole pattern is too hard for normal diff.
01:01:106 (1,2) - Flip horizontally
01:02:924 (1) - No NC
01:04:515 (1) - ↑↑
01:07:015 (1) - ↑↑
01:07:697 (2) - Delete circle
01:08:151 (3) - NC
01:09:515 (1,1) - Delete circle and slider. Make another slider: 01:09:515 - 01:10:196
01:25:423 (1) - No NC
Ciyus Miapah
hello quickmod™ here

[Timing]
some timing didnt put correctly (i prefer not using some negative offset in this map) so offset is 2476, delete objects in 00:00:655 - (ignore it if you dont like it)

[General]
seems fortune didnt give sense in mapset, just delete them! cause fortune is my trademark ):< /me runs
[Hard Fortune]
why my name diff used for hard diff?
00:11:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern simple and so formal, maybe add some reverse in 00:12:019 (2) - , add 1/2 slider in 00:12:701 - and add circle in 00:13:155 -
00:26:791 - some new combo object should in here! new combo didnt give sense in 00:27:018 (1) -
00:28:609 - ^
00:30:427 (4,6) - bad overlap i think, try this one http://puu.sh/arc1A/e7cd057231.jpg
00:43:835 (4,1) - you should put circle in 00:43:835, then slider in 00:44:062 (New combo slider)
00:56:561 (4,1,2,3) - i got idea in here → New combo 4, release combo in 1 then new combo 3
01:00:424 - probably this time needs some looooooong slider (cause vocal i think)

okay, seems some pattern nice looking, have a nice day. dont forget give me some feedback like comments in my mod :)
Topic Starter
kumaapon

Jaltzu wrote:

General
Decrease hitsound volume.
Too much SV changes
You have 2 different inheriting sections at 00:40:198. Remove one of those.
Add custom combo colours.
Offset 656. I think 5eania meant you have to decrease your offset by 25, which would have made it 656.

EASY
Decrease slider velocity.
You have to use DS ALL THE TIME in easy & normal diffs.
Delete most of SV changes. I would allow 00:09:745 - 00:10:882 and 01:09:741 - 01:10:650 to remain.
00:20:654 (1) - No NC
00:20:654 (1,1) - Don't make these overlap
00:22:245 (1,2) - Make a blanket Sorry, I've read what Blanket combos mean, but still don't quite understand.
00:27:471 (1) - No NC
00:28:835 (1) - ↑↑
00:29:744 (2) - NC
00:30:426 - Add circle
00:34:062 (1) - No NC Sorry, I'd love to make this part colorful :)
00:35:880 (1) - ↑↑This part too <3
00:40:652 (1) - Move closer to screen center, so it's easier to begonners to jump from spinner to slider.
00:44:061 (2) - Make this open upwards (flip vertically)
00:45:879 (1) - No NC
00:49:970 (3,4,5) - Replace with repeat slider
00:57:469 (5,1) - ↑↑ (slider points: head 00:57:469 - repeat 00:57:696 - tail 00:57:924)
01:03:832 (1) - No NC I'd also prefer this part a bit colorful too XD
01:04:741 (1) - ↑↑ ^ same.
01:09:741 (1) - ↑↑
01:18:604 (2,1) - Don't stack notes in easy.
01:21:104 (5) - NC
01:22:013 (1,1) - No NC
01:25:422 (2,3,4) - Replace with repeat slider.

[box=NORMAL]Consider lowering SV here too.
Too many SV changes
USE DS!!!!!!!!
00:05:883 (2) - Flip horizontally
00:19:291 (3) - NC
00:19:973 (1) - No NC
00:20:882 (2,3,4) - Move these 1/2 tic backwards (to last red tic). Add circle to 00:22:018 Sorry, I don't quite understand this too, I mean they're already in a red tick.
00:26:109 (1) - No NC
00:28:836 (1) - ↑↑
00:29:745 (2) - NC
00:29:745 (2,3,4) - These overlaps are REALLY bad. If you can't fix the overlap, then delete the heart and make something else. Yeah I think so too XD It feels too much forced, I'd replace them with spinner.
00:34:063 (1) - No NC Prefer this part colorful :v
00:35:881 (1) - ↑↑ Same ^^
00:44:062 (3) - Flip horizontally
00:46:335 (1,1) - No NC
00:47:471 (2) - NC
00:49:289 (1) - No NC I'd love a new combo here.
00:52:698 (1) - No NC Same ^^
00:53:152 (3) - Flip vertically
00:54:061 (4) - NC
00:54:743 (5,7) - Remove overlap
00:55:425 (6,7,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - This whole pattern is too hard for normal diff. I've made it easier (I think)
01:01:106 (1,2) - Flip horizontally
01:02:924 (1) - No NC
01:04:515 (1) - ↑↑ I prefer here colorful too :)
01:07:015 (1) - ↑↑ same ^^
01:07:697 (2) - Delete circle Sorry, but why? I think it matches the beat perfectly...? (Please correct me if I'm wrong)
01:08:151 (3) - NC
01:09:515 (1,1) - Delete circle and slider. Make another slider: 01:09:515 - 01:10:196 Sorry, I think I prefer this one.
01:25:423 (1) - No NC
Thank you for the wonderful mod :) Everything except the one with red notes are fixed. Thank you very much!!! :x
Topic Starter
kumaapon

Fort wrote:

hello quickmod™ here

[Timing]
some timing didnt put correctly (i prefer not using some negative offset in this map) so offset is 2476, delete objects in 00:00:655 - (ignore it if you dont like it)

[General]
seems fortune didnt give sense in mapset, just delete them! cause fortune is my trademark ):< /me runs
[Hard Fortune]
why my name diff used for hard diff?
00:11:565 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern simple and so formal, maybe add some reverse in 00:12:019 (2) - , add 1/2 slider in 00:12:701 - and add circle in 00:13:155 -
00:26:791 - some new combo object should in here! new combo didnt give sense in 00:27:018 (1) -
00:28:609 - ^ Sorry, I don't quite understand this, the time point you gave is at an end of a slider, where do you want me to put a new NC?
00:30:427 (4,6) - bad overlap i think, try this one http://puu.sh/arc1A/e7cd057231.jpg Thanks I fixed it but that was quite a jump there so I modified it a bit.
00:43:835 (4,1) - you should put circle in 00:43:835, then slider in 00:44:062 (New combo slider)
00:56:561 (4,1,2,3) - i got idea in here → New combo 4, release combo in 1 then new combo 3
01:00:424 - probably this time needs some looooooong slider (cause vocal i think)

okay, seems some pattern nice looking, have a nice day. dont forget give me some feedback like comments in my mod :)
Thanks for the wonderful mod!!! It's really helpful! Everything except the ones with red texts are fixed. And I also changed the difficulty name XD -pokepoke-
Topic Starter
kumaapon
Ah I can't find delete post button o.o
Wisakedjak
Hello, from my queue

[General]
  1. You have an unnecessary file in your folder; "00AA_0005". You should delete it. Also I can't open your soft-sliderslide and soft-slidertick. Is there a problem with them?
  2. Why is the timing 132,01? 132,000 sounds great.
  3. I see that you are using the same slider velocity in all the diffs, that is unnecessary too. Make it slow in Normal, and slower in Easy. Slider velocity is for that, I see that you are using the multiplier for that, but... Still no.
[Easy]
  1. HP 4, AR 4 and OD 4. They are too much for an Easy diff. Make them all 2.
  2. Also like I said the sliders are a little fast here.
  3. Well, you have too many wrong distanced notes. Why don't you use the distance snap?
  4. 00:00:656 (1) - Here start with a slider so you won't lose the rhythm there.
  5. 00:02:474 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - At this part there are too many circles and it is hard for an Easy diff. Why don't you use some sliders there?
  6. 00:05:882 (3) - Remove this slider here, it is out of rhythm and you are losing a white tick there. Make a 1/2 slider starts at the white tick. Then make this slider even longer; end at 00:07:473 - And remove this note; 00:08:155 (5) - Instead add a slider starts at the white tick and end it at 00:08:609 - It goes like this;
  7. 00:10:655 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part again too much circles, you can use some sliders.
  8. 00:24:290 (3) - Too close to previous object, can be confusing. Use distance snap for that, and make the 4th note close to it.
  9. 00:33:380 (1) - Here it is too close to the spinner, the beginners need more time after the spinner so you shouldn't make it close like that in Easy diff.
  10. 00:49:288 (1) - Wrong snapping again, use distance snap. Then place the slider's reverse on the notes before. Like this;
  11. Also the kiai is a little long, think about finishing it somewhere eairlier.
  12. 00:51:106 (1) - Move them to y:160
  13. 01:22:922 (3) - Distance snap again.
  14. 01:26:558 (1) - This spinner feels unnecessary as the song ends. 01:26:558 (1) - Just a single note here and it is okay.
In Normal and Hard you have also wrong snaps. Use the distance snap and snap them again. Don't forget to the slider thing I said too. When you do them You can PM me and I will mod the Normal and Hard too.
Ichigaki
Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪


I'm sorry, but i'm forgot to use Bahasa here :(

[General]
  1. Change the metadata like below
    1. Artist : 小澤亜李
    2. Artist Unicode : Ari Ozawa
    3. Title : ウラオモテ・フォーチュン (TV Size)
    4. Title Unicode : Uraomote Fortune (TV Size)
    5. Source : 月刊少女野崎くん
    6. Tags : Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun Ending Chiyo Sakura (remove all first and change it like beside)
  2. Please remove '<3' from all diff name, no need to give it
    1. Easy <3 -> Easy
    2. Normal <3 -> Normal
    3. Hard <3 -> Hard
  3. Preview audio point isn't snapped, change to 00:39:516 -
  4. Change Audio Lead-in to 1000 ms in your osu folder for each diff
    Tutorial
    1. Click File on osu!editor
    2. Choose Open Song Folder
    3. Open all *.osu on your notepad
    4. Change the Audio Lead-in to 1000 ms
  5. Change the offset to 655
  6. Copy these code to your Timing and Control point for the Kiai Time
    40651,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,100,0,1
    53832,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,100,0,0
    55196,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,100,0,1
    69741,-200,4,2,1,100,0,0
    Tutorial
    1. Copy the code first
    2. Press F6
    3. Click the non-timing or blank timing (bottom part) to focus on the code, not the control point
    4. Copy the code on it
  7. The BG isn't suitable because you took it from the anime :o , i've some recommended BG for this mapset
#Note : seriously, on vgmdb.net for now, there's no information how 'TV Size' is written rightly
I hope you understand with it

[Easy <3]
  1. 00:08:608 - add circle here
  2. 00:09:064 (6) - stretch to 00:09:517 -
[Normal <3]
  1. 00:05:340 (1) - remove this
  2. 00:05:226 - copy 00:04:545 (4) - and move it to x:428 y:128
  3. 00:09:317 (5) - move to 00:09:544 -
  4. 00:13:408 (1) - remove this
  5. 00:13:408 - Copy 00:12:726 (4) - and paste it on here with coordinate x:320 y:96
  6. 00:31:361 (5) -change like this timeline
  7. 00:57:722 (5) - remove this
  8. 00:57:950 (1) - move this to 00:57:722 -
  9. 00:59:086 - how about like below?
  10. 01:04:540 (1) - remove this
  11. 01:07:722 (2) - remove this
  12. 01:07:040 (1) - add one reverse again on this slider
  13. 01:08:176 (1) - add NC
  14. 01:09:540 (1,1) - remove NC
  15. 01:10:676 (1) - remove this spinner
  16. from 01:10:676 - 01:13:630 - fill with something on there
  17. 01:26:470 (1) - Change the start point to 01:26:584 - and the change the end point to 01:26:470 (1) -
[Hard <3]
  1. Change CS to 4
  2. I'll skip this >:(
Good luck, sorry because i forget to use Bahasa :(
Ichigaki
Sorry dopost :o
Topic Starter
kumaapon

XavierJones wrote:

Hello, from my queue

[General]
  1. You have an unnecessary file in your folder; "00AA_0005". You should delete it. Also I can't open your soft-sliderslide and soft-slidertick. Is there a problem with them? I deleted it, thanks! and the soft-sliderslide sound is blank intentionally, I deleted the slidertick.
  2. Why is the timing 132,01? 132,000 sounds great. Correct me if I'm wrong, but Mixmeister says it's 132,01.
  3. I see that you are using the same slider velocity in all the diffs, that is unnecessary too. Make it slow in Normal, and slower in Easy. Slider velocity is for that, I see that you are using the multiplier for that, but... Still no.
Fixed just like what you said :)

[Easy]
  1. HP 4, AR 4 and OD 4. They are too much for an Easy diff. Make them all 2.
  2. Also like I said the sliders are a little fast here.
  3. Well, you have too many wrong distanced notes. Why don't you use the distance snap?
  4. 00:00:656 (1) - Here start with a slider so you won't lose the rhythm there.
  5. 00:02:474 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - At this part there are too many circles and it is hard for an Easy diff. Why don't you use some sliders there?
  6. 00:05:882 (3) - Remove this slider here, it is out of rhythm and you are losing a white tick there. Make a 1/2 slider starts at the white tick. Then make this slider even longer; end at 00:07:473 - And remove this note; 00:08:155 (5) - Instead add a slider starts at the white tick and end it at 00:08:609 - It goes like this;
  7. 00:10:655 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part again too much circles, you can use some sliders.
  8. 00:24:290 (3) - Too close to previous object, can be confusing. Use distance snap for that, and make the 4th note close to it.
  9. 00:33:380 (1) - Here it is too close to the spinner, the beginners need more time after the spinner so you shouldn't make it close like that in Easy diff.
  10. 00:49:288 (1) - Wrong snapping again, use distance snap. Then place the slider's reverse on the notes before. Like this;
  11. Also the kiai is a little long, think about finishing it somewhere eairlier.
  12. 00:51:106 (1) - Move them to y:160
  13. 01:22:922 (3) - Distance snap again.
  14. 01:26:558 (1) - This spinner feels unnecessary as the song ends. 01:26:558 (1) - Just a single note here and it is okay.
Sorry but I'd like a spinner here :(

In Normal and Hard you have also wrong snaps. Use the distance snap and snap them again. Don't forget to the slider thing I said too. When you do them You can PM me and I will mod the Normal and Hard too.
Thank you so much for the mod :) I've fixed every distance snapping problem and I managed to tidy all the sliders and circle in all difficulty so It won't look like placed randomly anymore. (I think...) Regardless, ty!!! 8-)

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :) I should be the one doing the thanking here XD
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪


I'm sorry, but i'm forgot to use Bahasa here :( Gpp kok XD pake inggris aja deh XD

[General]
  1. Change the metadata like below
    1. Artist : 小澤亜李
    2. Artist Unicode : Ari Ozawa
    3. Title : ウラオモテ・フォーチュン (TV Size)
    4. Title Unicode : Uraomote Fortune (TV Size)
    5. Source : 月刊少女野崎くん
    6. Tags : Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun Ending Chiyo Sakura (remove all first and change it like beside)
  2. Please remove '<3' from all diff name, no need to give it
    1. Easy <3 -> Easy
    2. Normal <3 -> Normal
    3. Hard <3 -> Hard
  3. Preview audio point isn't snapped, change to 00:39:516 -
  4. Change Audio Lead-in to 1000 ms in your osu folder for each diff
    Tutorial
    1. Click File on osu!editor
    2. Choose Open Song Folder
    3. Open all *.osu on your notepad
    4. Change the Audio Lead-in to 1000 ms
  5. Change the offset to 655
  6. Copy these code to your Timing and Control point for the Kiai Time
    40651,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,100,0,1
    53832,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,100,0,0
    55196,-133.333333333333,4,2,1,100,0,1
    69741,-200,4,2,1,100,0,0
    Tutorial
    1. Copy the code first
    2. Press F6
    3. Click the non-timing or blank timing (bottom part) to focus on the code, not the control point
    4. Copy the code on it
  7. The BG isn't suitable because you took it from the anime :o , i've some recommended BG for this mapset
I used this image since it features all the character XD ty though!
http://static.zerochan.net/Gekkan.Shouj ... 742019.jpg
#Note : seriously, on vgmdb.net for now, there's no information how 'TV Size' is written rightly
I hope you understand with it

[Easy <3]
  1. 00:08:608 - add circle here I've made a little changes here, I changed all the objects here into a slider.
  2. 00:09:064 (6) - stretch to 00:09:517 -
[Normal <3]
  1. 00:05:340 (1) - remove this
  2. 00:05:226 - copy 00:04:545 (4) - and move it to x:428 y:128
  3. 00:09:317 (5) - move to 00:09:544 -
  4. 00:13:408 (1) - remove this
  5. 00:13:408 - Copy 00:12:726 (4) - and paste it on here with coordinate x:320 y:96
  6. 00:31:361 (5) -change like this timeline
  7. 00:57:722 (5) - remove this
  8. 00:57:950 (1) - move this to 00:57:722 -
  9. 00:59:086 - how about like below?
  10. 01:04:540 (1) - remove this
  11. 01:07:722 (2) - remove this
  12. 01:07:040 (1) - add one reverse again on this slider
  13. 01:08:176 (1) - add NC
  14. 01:09:540 (1,1) - remove NC
  15. 01:10:676 (1) - remove this spinner
  16. from 01:10:676 - 01:13:630 - fill with something on there
  17. 01:26:470 (1) - Change the start point to 01:26:584 - and the change the end point to 01:26:470 (1) -
[Hard <3]
  1. Change CS to 4
  2. I'll skip this >:(
Good luck, sorry because i forget to use Bahasa :(
Thank you very much for the mod! I think I've fixed everything you listed. Thank you for the metadata!! It really helps a lot since I can't read japanese...
I've corrected all the D.S error I think XD Thanks again!!! >.<
Lunatic Raccoon
Sorry kumapoon T_T

Can't mod since this is osu!standard :(
KUURAhoshi
Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, kumaapon !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..
General : -26,454.511021892281,4,2,1,100,1,0 – change the offset to 00:02:473,
-25,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,100,0,0 – remove this,
00:31:109 (6) – trying to make Love shape ? Fix it.. Wrong on the right side..
Easy Fortune
00:00:655 (1,2) – remove this,
Check AiMod, and check the Distance Snap box,
00:26:562 (1) – you don’t need this New Combo,
HD|AR|OD too big for easy.. Try 2-3,
00:47:470 (1) – change the shape, bug on reversearrow,
Reduce stacking.
Normal Fortune
HD|AR too big.. Try 4-4.5
Check AiMod, Distance problem..
00:26:109 (1) – you don’t need this NC,
Reduce stacking,
Reduce bouncing slider -_- Too many..
Hard Fortune
Suggestion : CS 4 is better,
Checkout AiMod ,
Only that..
Additional : remove "Fortune" from the diff name.. Because, there's a user that use Fortune name as his/her GD.. (i mean Fort -_-)
That’s All kumaapon ! Good luck !
Topic Starter
kumaapon

Kazamastar11 wrote:

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, kumaapon !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..
General : -26,454.511021892281,4,2,1,100,1,0 – change the offset to 00:02:473, Is this for the easy one only? cause in other difficulties the beatmap starts at 00:00:655
-25,-133.333333333333,4,1,1,100,0,0 – remove this, Removed
00:31:109 (6) – trying to make Love shape ? Fix it.. Wrong on the right side.. Fixed as I could XD at least it looks more "heart-shaped" XD
Easy Fortune
00:00:655 (1,2) – remove this, removed
Check AiMod, and check the Distance Snap box,
00:26:562 (1) – you don’t need this New Combo, fixed
HD|AR|OD too big for easy.. Try 2-3, fixed changed to 2 all
00:47:470 (1) – change the shape, bug on reversearrow,
Reduce stacking.
changed to 4
Normal Fortune
HD|AR too big.. Try 4-4.5 fixed
Check AiMod, Distance problem..
00:26:109 (1) – you don’t need this NC, I prefer NC here :)
Reduce stacking,
Reduce bouncing slider -_- Too many..
XD
Hard Fortune
Suggestion : CS 4 is better, Changed.
Checkout AiMod ,
Only that..
Additional : remove "Fortune" from the diff name.. Because, there's a user that use Fortune name as his/her GD.. (i mean Fort -_-) Fixed some time ago already
That’s All kumaapon ! Good luck !
Ty very much!!

Thanks for the mod! Firstly, I think you've modded the old version of the beatmap XD The diff. names still contain "fortune" XD regardless of that, I've fixed some few things you've said, so again, thanks :)

I've also fixed all D.S AiMod problem in every difficulties.

huycoihn wrote:

Sorry kumapoon T_T

Can't mod since this is osu!standard :(
Woops, sorry then for making you waste your time here, really sorry x.x
Gaia
Q
N-N-N-Nozaki-kun! I-I've always
been your fan!

I-it's not like I w-watched episode 1 again for you or anything... y-you b-ba-baka!!!

Love this anime to the max because hnnnng Sakura >.<

[General]
Your kiai in Easy is different than in N/H
ur kiai in Easy make a lot more sense so follow that

[Easy]
because it's easy, keep your sv changes to a minimum- change by 0.25x each and only do it once or maybe twice (cuz beginners arent used to sv changes and they'll be like wtf?)
00:03:382 (3) - 00:05:200 (2) - stack
00:06:336 (4) - move so it doesnt overlap
00:10:654 (3) - don't stack a note right after another in an easy when u dont have to, its confusing
00:22:244 (1) - move it so it stacks with 00:24:289 (3) -
00:27:471 (2) - unneccessary overlap
00:30:766 (1) - start this on the red since its easy
00:37:697 (3) - i'd say end it on the white tick and start spinner after it
00:45:878 (1) - 00:47:469 (1) - bad overlap so stack
00:49:969 (3) - 00:51:787 (3) - avoid overlaps

[Normal]
yeah sv basically same thing as easy
00:05:881 (1) - this overlap :s
00:22:244 (1) - ends on a blue tick what??
00:23:380 (2) - end it on 00:25:198 (5) -
00:27:016 (1) - yeah in easy/normals you have to be really careful about ur overlaps. dont do it when u dont have to!
00:31:107 (1) - make this shorter cuz ur not giving people any room to react to next few notes
00:37:697 (3) - same as easy
00:40:651 (1,2,3,4) - it's kiai, u had this pattern since the beginning, maybe change it up a bit? try maybe this..? http://puu.sh/aAYaz/d2144f5fcc.jpg (just came up with it on the spot change it if u like)
00:50:196 (3) - dont stack this
00:51:560 (2) - people will click early cuz vocals so u should follow it
00:48:378 (2) -00:50:423 (4) - bad overlap
00:59:514 (3) - stack better
01:07:013 (2) - this instead http://puu.sh/aAYvu/5cbdcb747f.jpg
01:09:513 (3,4) - remove (3), move (4) to where 3 was and extend the slider length
01:23:603 (4) - doesnt match the music anymore. i'd remove the reverse on 01:22:921 (3) - and put a long slider at 01:23:376

[Hard]
ok u can have more SV changes here but still don't go by 0.5x each time go change to 0.25x each time
00:01:109 (2) - 00:02:700 (2) - stack
00:06:563 (5) - 00:07:927 (2) - ^
00:21:789 (5) - if ur guna stack, stack; if ur not guna stack, don't stack.
00:31:107 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/aAYPz/7f8d820235.jpg and then fix ur heart's length
00:40:651 (2) - 00:41:333 (4) - (and other parts) it's the same part of the song so i think u should have similar rhythm as well
01:20:648 (3) - 01:22:466 (1) - 01:24:512 (1) - stack
01:26:671 (1) - start and end on white tick

Hnng great anime, absolutely hilarious
>Good luck!
Rirakusu
From my queue

Easy
1. 00:04:291 (4,1,2) - I gotta say that I hate the idea of stacking in Easy diff...Move them away please.

2. 00:34:061 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Sliders please. They are quite fast for a Easy diff.

3. 00:45:878 (1,2,3) - Stacking again :/

4. 00:48:378 (2,3,1,2) and 00:51:105 (1,2) and 01:02:923 (1,2,1,2) - I recommend sliders, or at least you should make them move visible by NOT stacking them.

Normal
1. 00:28:834 (1,2) - This would look better. See what I edited in my screenshot.


2. 00:58:832 (2,3) - Don't stack them. This is confusing as they are quite spaced in the timeline.

Hard
1. 01:02:468 (2) - New combo please. It's not the part of the vocal.

I think that's all!
LordRaika
pls notice me again to mod this , since u got 2 mod before i got here XD
Topic Starter
kumaapon

Gaia wrote:

Q
N-N-N-Nozaki-kun! I-I've always
been your fan!

I-it's not like I w-watched episode 1 again for you or anything... y-you b-ba-baka!!!

Love this anime to the max because hnnnng Sakura >.<
IKR?!

HNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG >.< <3 <3

[General]
Your kiai in Easy is different than in N/H
ur kiai in Easy make a lot more sense so follow that OMG lol thanks for finding out that fatal mistake XD x.x I'm so ashamed XD

[Easy]
because it's easy, keep your sv changes to a minimum- change by 0.25x each and only do it once or maybe twice (cuz beginners arent used to sv changes and they'll be like wtf?)
00:03:382 (3) - 00:05:200 (2) - stack
00:06:336 (4) - move so it doesnt overlap
00:10:654 (3) - don't stack a note right after another in an easy when u dont have to, its confusing
00:22:244 (1) - move it so it stacks with 00:24:289 (3) -
00:27:471 (2) - unneccessary overlap
00:30:766 (1) - start this on the red since its easy
00:37:697 (3) - i'd say end it on the white tick and start spinner after it
00:45:878 (1) - 00:47:469 (1) - bad overlap so stack
00:49:969 (3) - 00:51:787 (3) - avoid overlaps
I've fixed the overlapping problems you've stated but I declined some of the stacking instruction you said, but I made sure they didn't overlap even without stacking.

[Normal]
yeah sv basically same thing as easy
00:05:881 (1) - this overlap :s
00:22:244 (1) - ends on a blue tick what??
00:23:380 (2) - end it on 00:25:198 (5) -
00:27:016 (1) - yeah in easy/normals you have to be really careful about ur overlaps. dont do it when u dont have to!
00:31:107 (1) - make this shorter cuz ur not giving people any room to react to next few notes
00:37:697 (3) - same as easy
00:40:651 (1,2,3,4) - it's kiai, u had this pattern since the beginning, maybe change it up a bit? try maybe this..? http://puu.sh/aAYaz/d2144f5fcc.jpg (just came up with it on the spot change it if u like)
00:50:196 (3) - dont stack this
00:51:560 (2) - people will click early cuz vocals so u should follow it
00:48:378 (2) -00:50:423 (4) - bad overlap
00:59:514 (3) - stack better
01:07:013 (2) - this instead http://puu.sh/aAYvu/5cbdcb747f.jpg
01:09:513 (3,4) - remove (3), move (4) to where 3 was and extend the slider length
01:23:603 (4) - doesnt match the music anymore. i'd remove the reverse on 01:22:921 (3) - and put a long slider at 01:23:376
I've fixed everything. Thank you!!!

[Hard]
ok u can have more SV changes here but still don't go by 0.5x each time go change to 0.25x each time
00:01:109 (2) - 00:02:700 (2) - stack
00:06:563 (5) - 00:07:927 (2) - ^
00:21:789 (5) - if ur guna stack, stack; if ur not guna stack, don't stack.
00:31:107 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/aAYPz/7f8d820235.jpg and then fix ur heart's length
00:40:651 (2) - 00:41:333 (4) - (and other parts) it's the same part of the song so i think u should have similar rhythm as well
01:20:648 (3) - 01:22:466 (1) - 01:24:512 (1) - stack
01:26:671 (1) - start and end on white tick

Fixed everything. :)

Hnng great anime, absolutely hilarious XD,TOMODA FTW -

>Good luck!
TY!!!

Thank you very much for the mod!!! I've fixed everything but I'll keep the SV changes to 0.50x cause 0.75x lack the impact >.< Ty very much btw :D

jinhang_ang wrote:

From my queue

Easy
1. 00:04:291 (4,1,2) - I gotta say that I hate the idea of stacking in Easy diff...Move them away please.

2. 00:34:061 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Sliders please. They are quite fast for a Easy diff.

3. 00:45:878 (1,2,3) - Stacking again :/

4. 00:48:378 (2,3,1,2) and 00:51:105 (1,2) and 01:02:923 (1,2,1,2) - I recommend sliders, or at least you should make them move visible by NOT stacking them.

Normal
1. 00:28:834 (1,2) - This would look better. See what I edited in my screenshot.


2. 00:58:832 (2,3) - Don't stack them. This is confusing as they are quite spaced in the timeline.

Hard
1. 01:02:468 (2) - New combo please. It's not the part of the vocal.

I think that's all!
Thank you very much! fixed everything :) I stacked the circles on easy in order to reduce the difficulty, but I guess that intention backfired me >///<
Fuuyu
From . . Miramono's Modding Team


Mod Starts Here
[ Easy]

00:09:063 (1) - Why not curving the slider, like this . .



00:20:653 (3) - How about doing it like this . . ( Pic. )



00:22:244 (1) - You don't need to overstretch your curve/s, maybe this will suffice . .



00:27:471 (2) - Don't give this a repeat, the flow of the notes will change . Maybe like this



00:36:788 (1) - ^ Same

[ Normal]

00:17:926 (2) - Suggestion :



00:31:107 (3,4) - Stack the object and the slider head properly . .

00:38:606 (1) - I guess your spinner should end here 00:40:197

00:53:151 (3) - Don't over stretch this too . .



There are some parts on this diff that did not follow the DS . . Kindly fix them, hue

[ Hard]

00:01:564 (3) - First you curve your slider like this



00:02:132 - then add a note in this tick

00:07:245 (6) - Add a note

00:37:015 (1) - Why not curve the slider like in 00:37:697 (2)

01:06:104 (4) - Add a note

01:25:421 (2) - Apply NC


That's All for me . . Good Luck~
LordRaika
Request Mod from Lightning Speed Mania Modding

osuu~ :)
sry for the delay , still having around 8 request in my queue ^^'
but... here is my mod as request :

Mod
[General]
And i've done some research... since i like this anime and the song..
i think the title is best written at
Ura-omote Fortune
Front/Back Fortune

suggest for the BG used...
try this
http://blog-imgs-65.fc2.com/d/g/d/dgdg8 ... 783992.jpg
or
http://www.gg-anime.com/wp-content/uplo ... ki-kun.jpg

since the current BG, sakura's and seo's face is kind a very awkward XD

[Easy]
00:03:382 (3) - the end of the slider, MISSING clap sound XD
double clicking the end of the slider and add clap ^^

00:05:654 (3) - add CLAP to start of the slider... same method as above...

since u mapped like normal hit , clap, normal hit , clap, and so on...
its weird if u skip them

00:09:063 (1) - make it a bit curve?

00:11:108 (3) - clap , 00:11:563 (4) - add clap at the end of slider
00:12:926 (2) - add clap, and so on... sounds very good for the basic rhythm itself

00:13:835 (4,1) - remove them but make a giant HEART slider....
and The lyrics at this point is "Heart" as well...
end the slider at 00:17:926 -

00:22:926 - same, add clap
00:23:835 - ^
00:24:744 - ^

00:28:834 (4) - make this one shape like this >>> 00:29:743 (1) - at the same position, blanket pattern looks good for this

00:40:651 (1,3) - only this have clap? and then the whole pattern doesnt have clap... so its missing, add them...

01:26:557 - PLEASE add new timing point with soft 5%
normal 90% for the spinner end sound is VERY VERY loud XD

[Normal]
u can make a STAR shaped pattern for this...
00:02:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - since they are 5 hit as well...
perfect star pattern require u to rotate them every 72 degree ^^

00:05:881 (1,2) - pls make them the same slider...

00:07:699 (1) - pls make this slider that ends at 00:08:154 -

00:10:654 (1,2,3) - try other pattern? overlapping slider is not a really good idea imo...
means that 1 slider that blocks the next slider that will appear...

00:31:107 (3,4) - place the 3 exactly the same place as start of 4

00:38:606 (1) - end it here 00:40:197 -

00:55:196 - from here, the clap hitsound pattern its kind a weird , try to readjust them?

01:26:557 - same, at timing point of soft 5% , to reduce the last spinner end sound

[Hard]
try this slider pattern? >>>> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1896428
and ofc, DONT stack them, its jst a screenshot for 5 combo of unique slider u can use ^^

00:10:654 - from here, its all normalhit, clap, normalhit , clap but 00:13:381 - normal hit normalhit and clap
sounds inconsistent imo

00:17:926 (4) - make it curve instead?

00:31:335 (8) - the left part seems unproportional, readjust the anchor to make them a perfect heart shape...

00:37:697 (2) - dont add finish at the end of this slider, remember , if u click one slider and ADD CLAP/finish
it means it will add clap to start of the slider, end of the slider and the sound of WHEN the slider slide...
so its best if u click one slider and select the beginning or end part and then add that hitsound ^^

00:38:379 (1) - add finish
spinner end will have this sound

01:26:557 - same

That's all ^^
GL for ranked...
such a cute song...
BTW pls feel free to ask me anything , especially when i'm online in-game
Want 2 Buy Avon
From my modding queue~
[Hard]
00:11:108 (3) - I wouldn't cover a note like this in a hard diff
00:31:335 (8) - This looks good but isn't mapped to anything
00:44:742 (3,5) - This overlap is kinda ugly looking
00:55:423 (1) - No nc
00:56:332 (1) - No nc
00:56:559 (2) - nc
00:57:241 (4) - nc

All I saw, Good luck~
ts8zs
aigoh
From modding queue-

[Easy]
00:30:652 (1) - move to 280, 164 so it looks nicer.
00:43:606 (1) - hard to hit. Overlap with (2)?
01:24:512 (1,2) - move to 01:24:285

[kakifly's Hard]
00:54:287 (2) - too far away and stuck in corner. Move slightly to right.
01:26:557 (1) - There are three notes, not four. Reduce one repeat.

[Ts8zs' Insane]
00:09:745 (1,2,3) - need distance snap, and move (2) to around 288, 336
00:22:132 (5) needs to be closer to (4)
00:44:973 (1) - I don't think you need to slow down the slider velocity here.
ts8zs

mangocurry wrote:

From modding queue-

[Ts8zs' Insane]
00:09:745 (1,2,3) - need distance snap, and move (2) to around 288, 336 changed
00:22:132 (5) needs to be closer to (4)fixed
00:44:973 (1) - I don't think you need to slow down the slider velocity here.no,keep same with 00:40:427 (1) -
code
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Uraomote fortune.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 39515
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 41312
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ura-omote Fortune (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ウラオモテ・フォーチュン (TV Size)
Artist:Ari Ozawa
ArtistUnicode:小澤亜李
Creator:kumaapon
Version:Ts8zs' Insane
Source:月刊少女野崎くん
Tags:Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun Ending Chiyo Sakura
BeatmapID:485500
BeatmapSetID:195469

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"ts8zs.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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312,64,12473,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Ichigaki
Please change the title to 'URAOMOTE FORTUNE' (with Caps-lock), read this for the album info ( http://vgmdb.net/album/46165 ), don't ignore this, you must change it. ..
Nines
Yahello~ from my modding queue!

[Ts8zs's Insane]
  1. 00:19:632 - Since you've been following the rhythm of the vocals, move 4 back to this spot. It feels right. Also, it feels better than having 4 where it is now. You'll also have to move 4 closer to 3 to compensate for moving it back to the right time.
  2. 00:22:018 - This jump catches me off guard. It's REALLY unexpected. Reduce the distance by half, that should be good enough. It's not unplayable, it's just a startling jump because the ONLY one of it's kind in this map (timing+spacing wise)
  3. 00:59:745 (1,2,3,4) - These overlapping sliders are confusing looking.
  4. 01:26:109 - Make the spinner end here.
  5. 01:26:564 - Add a circle here. It feels better playing it like this instead of extending the spinner all the way like how it is now.
  6. Lastly, make sure you apply the video to this difficulty.
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:655 (1,2) - These don't need to be so loud. Lower the volume to like, 70%, just like the rest of the song. It seems really odd that the loudest hitsounds be the quietest ones of the song.
  2. 00:02:245 (4) - The way that this is kind of overlapping with the 3's slider end looks really sloppy. Also, 3 itself looks kind of sloppy because one side of the wave has a sharper curve compared to the other. I suggest something like this.
  3. 00:31:107 (8,9) - Because of the way this is overlapping with 9, it's really hard to see the approach circle of 8 because 70-80% of the 8's approach circle is overlapping with 9.
  4. 01:14:513 - make this overlap more with 1
  5. 01:28:830 - this doesn't sound good. Get rid of the finish, and then add an inheriting point to change the hitsound to Soft and don't add any other hitsounds.
[kakifly's Hard]
  1. 00:00:655 (1,2) - Same with the other Hard, why are these so loud lol.
  2. 00:32:925 (5,1) - Line these up with each other, it looks sloppy when they aren't.
  3. 00:34:288 (2,3,4) - You'll have to fix the angle of these too to match 1's new angle.
  4. 00:46:446 - This doesn't feel right because there's no strong enough beat here for it to be this kind of slider combination. This slider, to be on beat, should actually be at 00:46:560
  5. 01:26:557 - Personally I would make this just a circle, but if you keep it like this, REMOVE one repeat. 3 hits sounds best.
[Normal]
  1. 00:00:655 (1,2) - RIP ears. (same as the other diff's)
  2. 00:44:742 - Make this blanket perfect. I'm sure you can tell that it's off.
  3. 01:25:421 - The combo colors here look so messy. For this bit, you should just keep them the same combo, so remove the NC of 01:25:648 and 01:25:875
  4. 01:28:830 - Get rid of the finish, and make it a 'soft-hitnormal,' same as your Hard diff.
[Easy]
I'm really not great at modding easy, but for the most part it seems fine. Here are some tiny things worth mentioning.
  1. Sliders like 00:14:290 are generally not a good a idea. Also, the slider ends in weird place rhythm wise, so I would've changed it to a spinner.
  2. 01:28:830 - Get rid of the finish, and make it a 'soft-hitnormal,' same as your Normal and Hard diff.
Good luck!
ts8zs
all fixed
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Uraomote fortune.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 39515
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.6
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 41312
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Ura-omote Fortune (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:ウラオモテ・フォーチュン (TV Size)
Artist:Ari Ozawa
ArtistUnicode:小澤亜李
Creator:kumaapon
Version:Ts8zs' Insane
Source:月刊少女野崎くん
Tags:Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun Ending Chiyo Sakura
BeatmapID:485500
BeatmapSetID:195469

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"ts8zs.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Topic Starter
kumaapon
Fixed all and updated ts8zs' GD. Ty for the mod :)
Hollow Wings
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Ts8zs' Insane

  1. timing sets conflict to other diffs
  2. 00:19:518 (3,4,5) - note+3/4 slider to follow the vocal and give various rhythm styles
  3. 00:22:700 (6,1) - swap nc setting
  4. 00:32:359 (1,2) - ^
  5. 00:26:563 (1,2) - maybe blanket
  6. 00:54:404 (2) - ctrl+g's more intresting
  7. too much same patterns imo

Hard

  1. 00:27:016 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this
  2. about rhythm: generally nothing wrong, thou u can even choose lots of other tracks to follow rather than always that main melodies. some stuffs like 00:54:060 (1,2,3) - or 01:08:604 (1,2,1,1) - think more about how to set rhythm to follow those special drum beats at this part
  3. about composing: still need more practice imo, and a bit of lack of patterns, forcing u give spreaded composing which's not organized well

kakifly's Hard

  1. 00:40:424 (1,1) - remove nc
  2. 01:24:285 (1) - ^
  3. 00:54:287 (2) - a bit offscreen
  4. 01:00:195 (4,2) - blanket?
  5. almost same words in Hard diff as well

Normal

  1. 00:02:927 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - remove all these nc and add nc at 00:05:881 (2) - , u won't need to give hard nc patterns to noobs in lower diffs imo
  2. 00:11:336 (1,1,1,1) - same as above
  3. 00:19:289 (3,1) - swap nc setting
  4. 00:22:244 (1,2) - ^ or 00:26:107 (7,1) - ^, give same style in nc is better
  5. 00:28:834 (1) - remove nc... well, other things r fine thou those nc settings r just confusing, check them by urself and fix into normal ones maybe

Easy

  1. 00:14:290 add note
  2. 00:24:289 (3,4) - perfect this blanket
  3. 00:27:471 (1) - nc spam again, fix them by urself in ur whole diff set
map and mod more, u'll improve in this best way. try to see other's map or ranked maps, it really helped to u in mapping imo.

good luck
ts8zs

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Ts8zs' Insane

  1. timing sets conflict to other diffs @creator I believe this one is right
  2. 00:19:518 (3,4,5) - note+3/4 slider to follow the vocal and give various rhythm styles changed
  3. 00:22:700 (6,1) - swap nc setting fixed
  4. 00:32:359 (1,2) - ^ fixed
  5. 00:26:563 (1,2) - maybe blanket fixed
  6. 00:54:404 (2) - ctrl+g's more intresting no,now is more intresting
  7. too much same patterns imo就算全是三角旋转也不一样啊……各种不一样的三角旋转……好吧还是三角旋转……感觉还好啦
good luck
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osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Uraomote fortune.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 39515
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
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[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:URAOMOTE FORTUNE
TitleUnicode:URAOMOTE FORTUNE
Artist:Ari Ozawa
ArtistUnicode:小澤亜李
Creator:kumaapon
Version:Ts8zs' Insane
Source:月刊少女野崎くん
Tags:Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun Ending Chiyo Sakura
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Moeri_old_1
From my modding queue~~

[Easy]
First of all, check the AIMod(Ctrl+Shift+A). You have to correct the timing issues and there is objects not distance snapped!
Generally I think there were too many spaces between notes, they should be more consistent, not out-splitted this way.
Also, distance snap not equaling with slider velocity is not very good either, it feels so fast when doing slider and then suddenly so slow in jumping from circle to circle. Stick to same distance snap throughout whole map.

00:02:473 (1,2,3) - Bad flow
00:07:927 (5,1) - ^
00:03:382 (3,4) - ^
00:06:336 (4,5) - Could be adjusted a bit to make it look better, x=228 is a good choice for start note of slider
00:07:927 (5,1) - Bad flow
00:09:745 (2) - Is this really necessary? To slow down BPM multiplier just for this slider?
00:19:745 (2,3,1) - Bad flow
00:27:473 (2,3) - ^
00:28:382 (3,4) - Slider direction can be improved for better flow
00:34:064 (1,2) - This might be very confusing for beginners; Overlaps are not recommended at all in Easy. Try to replace them with a slider instead
00:37:018 (2,3) - Bad positioning, making wierd flow
00:43:609 (1,2) - Sounds strange, wouldn't it be better if you make a slider instead of a circle for 00:43:609 (1)?
00:44:064 (2,3) - Bad flow
00:54:291 (1,2,1) - Bad direction on slider start and end, bad flow
01:03:836 (2,1) - Feels like bad flow here
01:22:927 (3,1) - ^

[Normal]
Start with AIMod here as well.
The distance snap/slider velocity issue here as well. I don't recommend using inconsistent in Easy and Normal.
And the distance snap is a bit too fast for 132 bpm. 0,6x-0,8x is suggested. Stick to same distance snap throughout whole map.

00:01:564 (3,1) - wierd distance here, confusing since it's so close.
00:09:291 (4,1) - ^
00:02:473 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - too far distance snap
00:06:791 (2,1) - bad flow
00:09:745 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - too far distance and semi-bad flow
00:16:336 (1,2) - bad flow and distance is too close
00:17:927 (2,1) - ^
00:19:291 (1,2) - too far
00:19:973 (2,3,4,5,6) - too far
00:22:245 (6,1) - bad flow
00:29:745 (1,2) - semi-bad flow
00:33:155 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - too far
00:36:109 (2,1) - too close
00:37:018 (2,3) - semi-bad flow

I think you already get the idea, the flow is not very good and the distance is very inconsistent and needs improvement.
Also, too many empty areas where no notes hit.

[Hard]
00:28:609 - why no note here? You should map to more than just voice.
00:45:200 - ^
00:49:745 - ^
00:38:382 - make circle here or something, after it can be spinner, since the spinner is actually not sounding anything in beginning, it feels empty to start it there.
01:14:064 (1,2,3,4) - This just sounds wierd, I'm not sure if you made a mistake there or not, if it's intended, it's not appropriate.

[kakifly's Hard]
00:09:290 (6,1) - maybe too close? Confusing.
00:40:197 (1,1,1) - New combo not necessary here.
00:46:106 (1,2) - sounds wierd.
01:17:467 (2,1) - a bit too close.

[Ts8zs' Insane]
AR 9 feels too fast in a 132 BPM song, I suggest AR 8.

00:02:473 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - this feels very repeating after like third time.
00:08:154 (4,1) - New combo here doesn't make sense.
00:10:654 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - also feels very repeating after third time.
00:44:063 (3,4,1,1,2,3,4) - too many sliders here.
00:51:109 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^, also repeating.
01:19:290 (2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - how many times are you using this pattern?

overall I think the patterns are repeating a lot, try making new patterns.


Thanks, that's all! Good luck. 你可以用中文回复。
kakifly

mangocurry wrote:

[kakifly's Hard]
00:54:287 (2) - too far away and stuck in corner. Move slightly to right. hmm alright
01:26:557 (1) - There are three notes, not four. Reduce one repeat.oh that really helped! thank you

Tsuchimikado wrote:

[kakifly's Hard]
  1. 00:00:655 (1,2) - Same with the other Hard, why are these so loud lol. lol wut
  2. 00:32:925 (5,1) - Line these up with each other, it looks sloppy when they aren't. alright;fixed
  3. 00:34:288 (2,3,4) - You'll have to fix the angle of these too to match 1's new angle.actually i only change 's angle xD
  4. 00:46:446 - This doesn't feel right because there's no strong enough beat here for it to be this kind of slider combination. This slider, to be on beat, should actually be at 00:46:560 your right; i changed it and put a circle in between
  5. 01:26:557 - Personally I would make this just a circle, but if you keep it like this, REMOVE one repeat. 3 hits sounds best. fixed from prev mod but thanks; kept slider

Hollow Wings wrote:

kakifly's Hard

  1. 00:40:424 (1,1) - remove nc okay
  2. 01:24:285 (1) - ^ sorry gonna keep it there
  3. 00:54:287 (2) - a bit offscreen fixed in prev mod
  4. 01:00:195 (4,2) - blanket? lol why not? fixed
  5. almost same words in Hard diff as well
okay ill keep in mind about the rhythm; might even remap some parts ><

A i k a wrote:

[kakifly's Hard]
00:09:290 (6,1) - maybe too close? Confusing. because of SV change there is no need to change its distance
00:40:197 (1,1,1) - New combo not necessary here. fixed
00:46:106 (1,2) - sounds wierd. fixed in prev mod
01:17:467 (2,1) - a bit too close. again; SV change
thanks for all your mods everyone <3

also made some changes on my own accord; heres the update~

SPOILER
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TitleUnicode:URAOMOTE FORTUNE
Artist:Ari Ozawa
ArtistUnicode:小澤亜李
Creator:kumaapon
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Source:月刊少女野崎くん
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163,276,45651,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,276,45878,1,0,0:0:0:0:
39,265,46106,6,0,P|55:216|34:174,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,165,46446,2,0,L|125:128,1,127.5
242,131,47015,2,0,L|257:86,2,42.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
351,177,47469,2,0,P|390:187|437:171,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,249,47924,5,2,0:0:0:0:
417,317,48151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,303,48378,2,0,P|283:293|217:318,1,102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,344,48833,2,0,L|169:250,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,182,49287,1,2,0:0:0:0:
243,114,49514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,85,49742,6,0,P|380:83|417:106,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,185,50196,2,0,P|396:187|359:164,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,143,50651,2,0,P|240:110|144:117,1,136,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
75,157,51332,1,0,0:0:0:0:
97,249,51560,2,0,L|161:280,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
221,207,52014,2,0,L|293:239,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
365,266,52469,2,0,B|370:231|405:211|405:211|381:150|413:123,1,136,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,67,53151,1,0,0:0:0:0:
352,69,53378,6,0,P|301:86|212:59,1,136,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
2,13,54287,2,0,P|-8:85|13:121,1,85,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
60,193,54741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
168,267,54969,1,0,0:0:0:0:
286,259,55196,6,0,L|365:224,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,147,55650,2,0,L|194:182,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,267,56105,2,0,P|181:311|225:346,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,305,56559,2,0,P|82:253|59:224,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
130,136,57014,6,0,P|178:119|209:91,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,137,57468,2,0,P|321:178|344:213,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,259,57809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
431,293,57923,1,8,0:0:0:0:
353,383,58150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,333,58377,2,0,P|232:270|157:262,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,270,58832,6,0,L|248:144,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,110,59514,1,0,0:0:0:0:
471,138,59741,2,0,P|449:190|415:212,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
317,265,60195,2,0,L|227:336,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,274,60650,6,0,L|252:185,1,127.5,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,164,61104,2,0,P|346:158|391:187,1,85,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
471,231,61559,2,0,L|516:220,2,42.5,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,308,62013,6,0,P|352:320|288:291,1,136,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,214,62695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,214,62809,1,0,0:0:0:0:
233,214,62923,2,0,P|298:199|361:231,1,136,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,213,63604,1,0,0:0:0:0:
403,132,63832,2,0,P|356:141|318:119,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
265,72,64286,6,0,P|197:43|140:81,1,136,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,149,64968,1,0,0:0:0:0:
106,253,65195,2,0,L|171:297,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,222,65650,2,0,L|300:267,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,198,66104,6,0,L|414:208,2,34,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,102,66559,2,0,L|409:92,2,34,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,40,67013,2,0,L|317:10,2,34,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
189,39,67468,2,0,L|161:8,2,34,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
121,105,67922,5,2,0:0:0:0:
53,171,68149,1,0,0:0:0:0:
53,171,68263,1,0,0:0:0:0:
53,171,68377,2,0,P|43:222|50:262,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
107,305,68831,2,0,L|175:345,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,253,69286,2,0,L|288:304,1,68,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,264,69740,5,14,0:0:0:0:
424,139,70081,6,0,L|391:111,3,34,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
278,120,70649,6,0,P|226:138|193:105,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,90,71104,2,0,P|62:141|78:182,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
143,258,71558,2,0,L|219:312,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
303,230,72013,2,0,L|377:288,2,85,4|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
199,171,72694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
78,157,72922,2,0,P|103:93|125:72,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
226,46,73376,6,0,L|330:45,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,120,73831,2,0,L|259:120,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,123,74285,2,0,P|204:175|238:242,1,127.5,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,268,74740,2,0,P|324:301|332:341,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,348,75194,6,0,B|166:360|138:384|138:384|99:352|54:346,1,170,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
6,253,75876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
61,148,76103,2,0,B|96:143|135:111|135:111|163:135|213:147,1,170,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
329,170,76785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,258,77012,6,0,L|469:267,2,42.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
330,340,77467,2,0,L|352:379,2,42.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,302,77921,6,0,P|227:280|186:310,1,93.5000028533936,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,341,78603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
34,299,78830,6,0,P|12:249|22:206,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,115,79285,2,0,L|163:63,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,69,79739,2,0,L|201:131,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,210,80194,2,0,P|162:247|208:262,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
98,306,80648,2,0,P|67:263|29:248,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,333,81103,2,0,P|207:363|250:363,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
355,331,81557,2,0,L|444:285,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
410,174,82012,2,0,L|313:224,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
222,253,82466,5,4,0:0:0:0:
102,261,82694,1,0,0:0:0:0:
5,191,82921,1,4,0:0:0:0:
36,76,83148,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,76,83262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,76,83376,2,0,P|100:85|128:75,1,85,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,74,83830,2,0,L|288:55,2,42.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
266,191,84285,6,0,L|313:207,2,42.5,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84739,12,0,86103,0:0:0:0:
256,189,86557,6,0,L|256:156,3,28.3333333333333,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
sodarose
form:Paper modding team Queue!<STD><closed>

[Easy]
00:09:064 (1) - Cancel NC
00:09:745 (2) - Velocity changes Need NC
00:11:109 (3) - ^
00:24:291 (3,4) - This object is too far from the previous object.Easy difficulty try to keep equal Distance snap
00:37:018 (2,3) - Try to keep the Concise

[Normal]
AR :arrow: 4
00:10:655 (2) - Velocity changes Need NC
00:52:245 (4,1,2) - This arrangement is difficult to let the novice can understand
01:09:745 (4) - Velocity changes Need NC

[kakifly's Hard]
01:11:558 (3,4) - Made of Parallel
00:32:925 (5,1) - So that they become a straight line

[Hard]
00:28:609 add a note
00:52:473 (4,1) - At the beginning of the stack
01:02:473 (1) - Cancel NC
01:09:518 (1) - ^
01:12:927 (1) - Ugly

[Ts8zs' Insane]
Spinner stop to 01:26:109. 01:26:564 add a note

I hope it can help you :)
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