ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.)

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Gaia
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Frostings
Hi Gaia ~
holy fk I went to your userpage in order to get to this thread, and random music started playing and I got really scared I didn't know where it was coming from ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

[General]

wow ok I was going to mention that hitsounds sounded loud in the intro, but you're using 20% volume... are my ears just sensitive? I dunno. Raise mp3 volume by like 250% please

[Normal]

I can't even begin to fathom how this difficulty is under 2 stars
It honestly looks like a Hard difficulty disguised as a Normal with the use of low difficulty settings

The object density is so high that AR4 doesn't fit this map anymore. Really recommend either AR5 or trying to make density way lower than it currently is

00:06:528 (3,1) - shape here is really weird. It's not quite a line, nor is it a circle, and it's a little too straight to be considered one of those whatever-you-call-it (bump?) sliders

00:07:228 (1,2) - related to above. I really suggest you change these sliders in some way, because although the flow is good, there is no structure in these patterns

00:11:714 (1,2) - see, look! these look nice ^^

00:16:200 (1,2,3) - I suggest you make the shape better here


00:25:172 (1,2) - fix shape here (more circular or... something)

00:31:901 - holy this section 2fast2furious

00:33:584 (4,1) - same as I mentioned before

00:44:518 (4,1) - I guarentee like 90% of normal players will slidermiss... anti-jump + red tick start? You are literally Satan. that being said, I really like the butterfly(?)

00:49:845 (1,2) - senpai pls

00:52:369 (2,3,4,5,1) - [Nazi] This part really bothers me. The pattern starts off with 00:52:088 (1,2,3) - weeeee nice circular sharper angle patterns and then 00:52:929 (3,4,5,1) - the structure becomes a little lost with the use of wide obtuse angles :( [/Nazi]

01:14:518 (1,2) - ;w;


[Hard]

00:06:528 (5,6,1) - same thing I mentioned about structure in Normal

00:27:836 (2,3,4) - ^^^

\00:38:070 (4,1) - ;;

00:41:995 (3,4,1) - nice ~

00:43:677 (2,3,4) - o.o copy+paste one slider and rotate in 120degree intervals?

00:45:359 (1) - what happened to the butterfly slider ;~;

00:52:929 (3,4,5) - shape is weird . I suggest you rotate 00:53:210 (4,5) - clockwise a little bit also fix the blanket young kouhai

01:01:901 (2,3) - better shape for bonus structure points

01:14:518 (1,2,3) - wow this is like Normal

01:19:845 (2,3) - blanket fix ;w;


[Kibbleru's Insane]

I was panicking because I couldn't play this at all, and then I realized AR8
With AR8 anti-jumps like 00:04:985 (1,2) -, 00:49:285 (7,8,1) - become really awkward to read, and jump patterns like 01:10:873 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -, 01:13:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - become really difficult
Please AR9

00:03:864 (4,5) - wow pls this blanket is unrankable. I think you should make 00:04:285 (5) - curve a littttttle less and shift it left a little more

2pr04me
Topic Starter
Gaia

Frostings wrote:

Hi Gaia ~
holy fk I went to your userpage in order to get to this thread, and random music started playing and I got really scared I didn't know where it was coming from ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ baby dont hurt me

[General]

wow ok I was going to mention that hitsounds sounded loud in the intro, but you're using 20% volume... are my ears just sensitive? I dunno. Raise mp3 volume by like 250% please it sounds alright to me tho >:

[Normal]

I can't even begin to fathom how this difficulty is under 2 stars
It honestly looks like a Hard difficulty disguised as a Normal with the use of low difficulty settings

The object density is so high that AR4 doesn't fit this map anymore. Really recommend either AR5 or trying to make density way lower than it currently is

00:06:528 (3,1) - shape here is really weird. It's not quite a line, nor is it a circle, and it's a little too straight to be considered one of those whatever-you-call-it (bump?) sliders as for these shapes I have a nc to differentiate them all, so 1 and 2 would relate to eachother rather than 3 and 1 :s

00:07:228 (1,2) - related to above. I really suggest you change these sliders in some way, because although the flow is good, there is no structure in these patterns

00:11:714 (1,2) - see, look! these look nice ^^

00:16:200 (1,2,3) - I suggest you make the shape better here yeah it looks worse/much better now


00:25:172 (1,2) - fix shape here (more circular or... something) lol ;w;

00:31:901 - holy this section 2fast2furious fk me yeah i know this isnt good and should stay the same speed but if i change it my butterfly would get rekt

00:33:584 (4,1) - same as I mentioned before

00:44:518 (4,1) - I guarentee like 90% of normal players will slidermiss... anti-jump + red tick start? You are literally Satan. that being said, I really like the butterfly(?) look at ren-chon above

00:49:845 (1,2) - senpai pls

00:52:369 (2,3,4,5,1) - [Nazi] This part really bothers me. The pattern starts off with 00:52:088 (1,2,3) - weeeee nice circular sharper angle patterns and then 00:52:929 (3,4,5,1) - the structure becomes a little lost with the use of wide obtuse angles :( [/Nazi] :c my flow tho

01:14:518 (1,2) - ;w;


[Hard]

00:06:528 (5,6,1) - same thing I mentioned about structure in Normal so same for me i guess/ idrk how to fix this lol

00:27:836 (2,3,4) - ^^^

\00:38:070 (4,1) - ;;

00:41:995 (3,4,1) - nice ~

00:43:677 (2,3,4) - o.o copy+paste one slider and rotate in 120degree intervals? noice

00:45:359 (1) - what happened to the butterfly slider ;~; im sowwie senpai

00:52:929 (3,4,5) - shape is weird . I suggest you rotate 00:53:210 (4,5) - clockwise a little bit also fix the blanket young kouhai rotated, but but but my blanket is
http://puu.sh/b6lwK/84d2674e2e.jpg

01:01:901 (2,3) - better shape for bonus structure points define bettur shape/ its more circular now

01:14:518 (1,2,3) - wow this is like Normal yes it is lol

01:19:845 (2,3) - blanket fix ;w; okaaay
danks senpei
Zare
Had a quick check at this in IRC, nothing detailed.

23:07 Gaia: yooo
23:07 Zare: hello
23:07 Gaia: grats on red name team owo
23:07 Gaia: lel
23:08 Zare: thanks
23:08 Gaia: uhm
23:08 Gaia: >.<
23:09 Gaia: can u give my map a quick look
23:09 Gaia: i wanna know if its up to ur standards
23:11 Zare: well I can give it a test
23:11 Gaia: okie
23:11 Gaia: that'd be great
23:11 Gaia: :D
23:11 *Gaia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/463098 ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size)]
23:11 Zare: oh the glasslip OP
23:12 Gaia: you've seen it before?
23:12 Gaia: lol
23:12 Zare: i'm watching the anime
23:12 Gaia: oh
23:12 Gaia: every episode i watch
23:12 Gaia: i go wtf
23:12 Zare: do you want me to look at a certain diff?
23:12 Gaia: 2 much plot progression
23:12 Gaia: uhm
23:12 Zare: seeing how the Insane isnt yours
23:13 Gaia: i dont really mind
23:16 Zare: so if you ask me
23:16 Zare: whether this is "up to my standards"
23:16 Zare: then the anser would be no
23:17 Gaia: alright
23:17 Gaia: how so?
23:18 Zare: the sliderrhythms were unfitting at times
23:18 Gaia: for the insane?
23:18 Zare: yes
23:18 Gaia: ok
23:18 Zare: overall the slidershapes and visual aspects could be improved, too
23:18 Gaia: kk
23:19 Zare: what's almost most important for now is
23:19 Zare: tell Kibbleru to raise the AR
23:19 Zare: This map is technically a 214 BPM map
23:19 Gaia: alright
23:19 Zare: AR8 is just too low
23:19 Zare: Then again AR9 might feel too fast for such a calm song
23:19 Zare: so I'd recommend AR8.5
23:20 Zare: we have decimals now, why not use it
23:20 Gaia: a mod already asked him to raise ar tho
23:20 Gaia: lol
23:20 Gaia: well he didnt answer that mod yet so idk
23:20 Gaia: ill tell him tho
23:20 Zare: 00:34:565 (2) - and sliders like this are pretty unfitting
23:21 Zare: the beat it ends on is stronger than the beat it starts on
23:22 Zare: that feels unnatural because the playerinput, namely when the player clicks the object, is at the sliderhead
23:22 Gaia: yeah want the downbeats to be emphasized
23:22 Gaia: mm
23:25 Zare: The Hard feels a little awkward because it's switching between the layers a bit
23:25 Zare: it's hard to tell what it's following exactly
23:26 Gaia: so basically rhythm issues
23:26 Zare: yeah
23:26 Zare: but whenever you ask me to look at any map ever
23:26 Zare: i will always mainly care about rhythms
23:26 Zare: because you know, osu! is supposedly a rhythm game :D
23:26 Gaia: hm
23:26 Gaia: yeah lol
23:27 Gaia: but when u said switching layers
23:27 Gaia: u mean like
23:27 Gaia: 00:18:443 (1) -
23:27 Gaia: for example?
23:27 Zare: exactly
23:27 Zare: I know the drum is kinda strong there
23:27 Gaia: alright
23:27 Gaia: yeah im aware of that
23:27 Zare: but leaving the main layer, the vocals, out like that is kind of weird
23:28 Gaia: i had the same thing in normal but i changed to vocals
23:28 Gaia: i guess ill do the same in hard
23:28 Gaia: but the drum thing is only in the beginning
23:28 Zare: 00:22:929 (1,2,3) - these too
23:29 Zare: it's jumping between vocals and drums
23:29 Gaia: yeah
23:29 Gaia: i kno
23:29 Gaia: ill change them all
23:29 Gaia: cuz its only the part before 00:31:901 (1) -
23:29 Zare: 00:28:817 (4) - and this would feel better if it was two circles
23:29 Gaia: and after 00:13:957 (1) -
23:30 Gaia: and ok
23:31 Zare: 00:49:845 (1,2,3,4) - this is kind of boring, just four sliders meh
23:31 Zare: 00:53:630 (5) - this sliderrhythm is unfitting
23:32 Gaia: that slider goes with guitar tho o-o
23:32 Zare: 01:07:228 (4) - you're just too inconsistent with what to follow
23:32 Zare: sometimes it's the vocals
23:32 Zare: sometimes it's the drums
23:33 Zare: choose one and stick to it
23:33 Gaia: k
23:33 Zare: try to avoid conflicts like these
23:34 Gaia: ill go back and look at my rhythm again
23:34 Zare: obviously, if one of the layers is nonexistant for a measure or a few beats, then you switch to another one because you can't just map nothing
23:35 Gaia: yeah
23:35 Zare: or well, technically you can, old maps prove this. but these days, old maps aren't exactly appreciated anymore, unfortunately
23:35 Gaia: yup
23:35 Zare: the point is, pick a layer, usually the most dominant one, the one you'd go with when humming the song
23:35 Gaia: alrights
23:36 Gaia: but other than this is there anything else that stood out?
23:36 Zare: your idea's aren't bad, it just seems a bit indecisive for now
23:36 Gaia: okay c:
23:37 Zare: one more thing, idk whether the spread is really cool
23:37 Zare: Hard -> Insane seems like a somewhat huge gap
23:37 Gaia: oh
23:38 Gaia: true
23:38 Zare: looking at Normal
23:38 Zare: this looks more consistent
23:39 Gaia: okay :D
23:39 Zare: well there's issues in the kiai too
23:39 Zare: 01:19:845 (3,4) - and this isn't really good
23:39 Gaia: rhythm again?
23:39 Zare: rhythmwise, again
23:40 Gaia: alright
23:40 Zare: basically you just need to learn how to go with your sliders correctly
23:40 Gaia: hm ok
23:40 Zare: a lot of mappers don't realize it really makes a difference
23:40 Zare: but it's like the key to making a fitting map
23:40 Gaia: i can see how it makes a difference
23:41 Zare: let me do some self advertising
23:41 *Zare is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/403039 ETIA. - Claiomh Solais [Eternal]]
23:41 Zare: in this map
23:41 Zare: look at how i used sliders
23:42 Zare: they're consistently used on the same layers
23:43 Zare: not zexous' diff :p
23:43 Zare: well I guess it works too
23:43 Zare: he's a good, consistent mapper too
23:43 Gaia: whoops
23:43 Gaia: lol
23:43 Gaia: lol sry somehow didnt see
23:44 Gaia: omg deathstream and jumps
23:44 Gaia: and kicksliders
23:44 Gaia: xD
23:45 Zare: not the pooiiint
23:45 Gaia: but yeah it matches music
23:45 Zare: D:
23:45 Gaia: :p
23:47 Gaia: rip
23:47 Zare: yeah anyway
23:47 Gaia: hey
23:47 Zare: did I manage to convey my impression?
23:47 Gaia: ur gap from hard into insane
23:47 Gaia: http://puu.sh/b6qAo/3420ff6e2f.jpg
23:47 Gaia: is the same as mine pretty much
23:47 Gaia: so i should be fine?
23:48 Zare: Gaia-chan
23:48 Zare: recheck that.
23:48 Gaia: and yeah u did
23:48 Zare: my Hard has 3.5 stars
23:48 Zare: your Hard
23:48 Zare: has 2.5 stars
23:49 Zare: ~roughly
23:49 Gaia: oh what
23:49 Gaia: lol
23:49 Gaia: sht
23:49 Gaia: my bad
23:49 Gaia: lol
23:49 Zare: granted your insane is easier too
23:49 Zare: but I still feel like this could be unpleasant to the QAT
23:49 Gaia: its 1.4 difference
23:49 Gaia: aiya
23:54 Zare: my recommendation
23:54 Zare: add more stuff in the Hard
23:55 Zare: a few more 1/4 where they fit
23:55 Gaia: k
23:55 Zare: actually tbh i think kibbleru overdid their diff a bit
23:55 Gaia: lol :<
23:55 Zare: but i can understand that they wanted to make it somewhat interesting#
23:56 Gaia: it so fun with dt on
23:56 Gaia: :3
23:58 Zare: you should decide what you want to do, it's your set after all, but at this point, boosting the Hard seems like the best option
23:58 Zare: it's barely harder than the Normal anyway
23:58 Gaia: kk

main problems adressed: Slider rhythms and visuals, spread issues.
Topic Starter
Gaia

Zare wrote:

Had a quick check at this in IRC, nothing detailed.

23:07 Gaia: yooo
23:07 Zare: hello
23:07 Gaia: grats on red name team owo
23:07 Gaia: lel
23:08 Zare: thanks
23:08 Gaia: uhm
23:08 Gaia: >.<
23:09 Gaia: can u give my map a quick look
23:09 Gaia: i wanna know if its up to ur standards
23:11 Zare: well I can give it a test
23:11 Gaia: okie
23:11 Gaia: that'd be great
23:11 Gaia: :D
23:11 *Gaia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/463098 ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size)]
23:11 Zare: oh the glasslip OP
23:12 Gaia: you've seen it before?
23:12 Gaia: lol
23:12 Zare: i'm watching the anime
23:12 Gaia: oh
23:12 Gaia: every episode i watch
23:12 Gaia: i go wtf
23:12 Zare: do you want me to look at a certain diff?
23:12 Gaia: 2 much plot progression
23:12 Gaia: uhm
23:12 Zare: seeing how the Insane isnt yours
23:13 Gaia: i dont really mind
23:16 Zare: so if you ask me
23:16 Zare: whether this is "up to my standards"
23:16 Zare: then the anser would be no
23:17 Gaia: alright
23:17 Gaia: how so?
23:18 Zare: the sliderrhythms were unfitting at times
23:18 Gaia: for the insane?
23:18 Zare: yes
23:18 Gaia: ok
23:18 Zare: overall the slidershapes and visual aspects could be improved, too
23:18 Gaia: kk
23:19 Zare: what's almost most important for now is
23:19 Zare: tell Kibbleru to raise the AR
23:19 Zare: This map is technically a 214 BPM map
23:19 Gaia: alright
23:19 Zare: AR8 is just too low
23:19 Zare: Then again AR9 might feel too fast for such a calm song
23:19 Zare: so I'd recommend AR8.5
23:20 Zare: we have decimals now, why not use it
23:20 Gaia: a mod already asked him to raise ar tho
23:20 Gaia: lol
23:20 Gaia: well he didnt answer that mod yet so idk
23:20 Gaia: ill tell him tho
23:20 Zare: 00:34:565 (2) - and sliders like this are pretty unfitting
23:21 Zare: the beat it ends on is stronger than the beat it starts on
23:22 Zare: that feels unnatural because the playerinput, namely when the player clicks the object, is at the sliderhead
23:22 Gaia: yeah want the downbeats to be emphasized
23:22 Gaia: mm
23:25 Zare: The Hard feels a little awkward because it's switching between the layers a bit
23:25 Zare: it's hard to tell what it's following exactly
23:26 Gaia: so basically rhythm issues
23:26 Zare: yeah
23:26 Zare: but whenever you ask me to look at any map ever
23:26 Zare: i will always mainly care about rhythms
23:26 Zare: because you know, osu! is supposedly a rhythm game :D
23:26 Gaia: hm
23:26 Gaia: yeah lol
23:27 Gaia: but when u said switching layers
23:27 Gaia: u mean like
23:27 Gaia: 00:18:443 (1) -
23:27 Gaia: for example?
23:27 Zare: exactly
23:27 Zare: I know the drum is kinda strong there
23:27 Gaia: alright
23:27 Gaia: yeah im aware of that
23:27 Zare: but leaving the main layer, the vocals, out like that is kind of weird
23:28 Gaia: i had the same thing in normal but i changed to vocals
23:28 Gaia: i guess ill do the same in hard
23:28 Gaia: but the drum thing is only in the beginning
23:28 Zare: 00:22:929 (1,2,3) - these too
23:29 Zare: it's jumping between vocals and drums
23:29 Gaia: yeah
23:29 Gaia: i kno
23:29 Gaia: ill change them all
23:29 Gaia: cuz its only the part before 00:31:901 (1) -
23:29 Zare: 00:28:817 (4) - and this would feel better if it was two circles
23:29 Gaia: and after 00:13:957 (1) -
23:30 Gaia: and ok
23:31 Zare: 00:49:845 (1,2,3,4) - this is kind of boring, just four sliders meh
23:31 Zare: 00:53:630 (5) - this sliderrhythm is unfitting
23:32 Gaia: that slider goes with guitar tho o-o
23:32 Zare: 01:07:228 (4) - you're just too inconsistent with what to follow
23:32 Zare: sometimes it's the vocals
23:32 Zare: sometimes it's the drums
23:33 Zare: choose one and stick to it
23:33 Gaia: k
23:33 Zare: try to avoid conflicts like these
23:34 Gaia: ill go back and look at my rhythm again
23:34 Zare: obviously, if one of the layers is nonexistant for a measure or a few beats, then you switch to another one because you can't just map nothing
23:35 Gaia: yeah
23:35 Zare: or well, technically you can, old maps prove this. but these days, old maps aren't exactly appreciated anymore, unfortunately
23:35 Gaia: yup
23:35 Zare: the point is, pick a layer, usually the most dominant one, the one you'd go with when humming the song
23:35 Gaia: alrights
23:36 Gaia: but other than this is there anything else that stood out?
23:36 Zare: your idea's aren't bad, it just seems a bit indecisive for now
23:36 Gaia: okay c:
23:37 Zare: one more thing, idk whether the spread is really cool
23:37 Zare: Hard -> Insane seems like a somewhat huge gap
23:37 Gaia: oh
23:38 Gaia: true
23:38 Zare: looking at Normal
23:38 Zare: this looks more consistent
23:39 Gaia: okay :D
23:39 Zare: well there's issues in the kiai too
23:39 Zare: 01:19:845 (3,4) - and this isn't really good
23:39 Gaia: rhythm again?
23:39 Zare: rhythmwise, again
23:40 Gaia: alright
23:40 Zare: basically you just need to learn how to go with your sliders correctly
23:40 Gaia: hm ok
23:40 Zare: a lot of mappers don't realize it really makes a difference
23:40 Zare: but it's like the key to making a fitting map
23:40 Gaia: i can see how it makes a difference
23:41 Zare: let me do some self advertising
23:41 *Zare is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/403039 ETIA. - Claiomh Solais [Eternal]]
23:41 Zare: in this map
23:41 Zare: look at how i used sliders
23:42 Zare: they're consistently used on the same layers
23:43 Zare: not zexous' diff :p
23:43 Zare: well I guess it works too
23:43 Zare: he's a good, consistent mapper too
23:43 Gaia: whoops
23:43 Gaia: lol
23:43 Gaia: lol sry somehow didnt see
23:44 Gaia: omg deathstream and jumps
23:44 Gaia: and kicksliders
23:44 Gaia: xD
23:45 Zare: not the pooiiint
23:45 Gaia: but yeah it matches music
23:45 Zare: D:
23:45 Gaia: :p
23:47 Gaia: rip
23:47 Zare: yeah anyway
23:47 Gaia: hey
23:47 Zare: did I manage to convey my impression?
23:47 Gaia: ur gap from hard into insane
23:47 Gaia: http://puu.sh/b6qAo/3420ff6e2f.jpg
23:47 Gaia: is the same as mine pretty much
23:47 Gaia: so i should be fine?
23:48 Zare: Gaia-chan
23:48 Zare: recheck that.
23:48 Gaia: and yeah u did
23:48 Zare: my Hard has 3.5 stars
23:48 Zare: your Hard
23:48 Zare: has 2.5 stars
23:49 Zare: ~roughly
23:49 Gaia: oh what
23:49 Gaia: lol
23:49 Gaia: sht
23:49 Gaia: my bad
23:49 Gaia: lol
23:49 Zare: granted your insane is easier too
23:49 Zare: but I still feel like this could be unpleasant to the QAT
23:49 Gaia: its 1.4 difference
23:49 Gaia: aiya
23:54 Zare: my recommendation
23:54 Zare: add more stuff in the Hard
23:55 Zare: a few more 1/4 where they fit
23:55 Gaia: k
23:55 Zare: actually tbh i think kibbleru overdid their diff a bit
23:55 Gaia: lol :<
23:55 Zare: but i can understand that they wanted to make it somewhat interesting#
23:56 Gaia: it so fun with dt on
23:56 Gaia: :3
23:58 Zare: you should decide what you want to do, it's your set after all, but at this point, boosting the Hard seems like the best option
23:58 Zare: it's barely harder than the Normal anyway
23:58 Gaia: kk

main problems adressed: Slider rhythms and visuals, spread issues.
thanks again!!
Natteke desu
[Kibbleru's Insane]
Well, i'm don't really like how your overlaps looks with 8 ar. You need some work with them in general.
00:38:490 (9) - Well yea, vocals, but it stops too suddenly wich can't be enjoyable.
00:40:453 (8) - Yea, you should add circle or something
00:42:415 (6) - ^
00:46:341 (4) - again
00:57:696 (5,6,7,8) - this one feels nice, but try to increase a spacing a bit, for better emphasize, also add your custom finishes on slider heads
01:05:266 (7) - i don't really get this clap
01:10:873 (4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern looks too messy tbh
01:18:163 (7) - soft whistle on tail
01:21:528 (2,3,4,5) - flows kinda bad, try something like this :

Well, maybe it's your style, but these overlaps looks too messy, try to rethink them.

[Hard]
You needs some work with design. Rhytms is fine, hitsounds are simple but diff looks kinda messy.

[Normal]
00:11:014 (3) - :(
No real problems with Normal.

No kd for this, since it's not real mod post. Well, you guys need some work in general, in particular with design

Bug me again when you will check stuff, i'll come with real modpost
Topic Starter
Gaia
tried to clean some things up but idk lol i tried// i'll bug you again once i've cleared my doubts on some parts o:
Kibbleru

EvilElvis wrote:

[Kibbleru's Insane]
Well, i'm don't really like how your overlaps looks with 8 ar. You need some work with them in general. erm ar 9 helps maybe haha..
00:38:490 (9) - Well yea, vocals, but it stops too suddenly wich can't be enjoyable. I prefer to keep these as it is as I can't really find an alternative, I also think they work well enough.
00:40:453 (8) - Yea, you should add circle or something
00:42:415 (6) - ^
00:46:341 (4) - again
00:57:696 (5,6,7,8) - this one feels nice, but try to increase a spacing a bit, for better emphasize, also add your custom finishes on slider heads didn't add finish but I spaced out
01:05:266 (7) - i don't really get this clap its in the music I think listen more closely owo?
01:10:873 (4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern looks too messy tbh mmm increased ar shud be fine
01:18:163 (7) - soft whistle on tail fix
01:21:528 (2,3,4,5) - flows kinda bad, try something like this : oh I like this nice, fixed

Well, maybe it's your style, but these overlaps looks too messy, try to rethink them.

[Hard]
You needs some work with design. Rhytms is fine, hitsounds are simple but diff looks kinda messy.

[Normal]
00:11:014 (3) - :(
No real problems with Normal.

No kd for this, since it's not real mod post. Well, you guys need some work in general, in particular with design

Bug me again when you will check stuff, i'll come with real modpost
code

osu file format v13

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AudioFilename: Choucho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size).mp3
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[Metadata]
Title:Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size)
TitleUnicode:夏の日と君の声
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:Gaia
Version:Kibbleru's Insane
Source:グラスリップ
Tags:Glasslip Opening Kibbleru
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Topic Starter
Gaia
um
ar9 is magic
fc 1st try GG
but then no more dt T^T ar8.5 pls
Natteke desu
Try 8.3 or 8.5 Gaia
Yea i'm still checking this thread
Zare
I'd also recommend AR8.5. Even if it's mapped on the 1/4 ticks and thus effectively doubled BPM, the song is still rather calm. So AR8.5 would be a good compromise and would also allow for DT plays without requiring 10.3 reading.
Topic Starter
Gaia
try playing it? ok

this is the playing from someone who cant read ar8 tho lol
i personally prefer ar8.5 more o:
Kibbleru
ill go with 8.5 then since 8.3 seems like a weird number to me haha~

change it for me pls
Topic Starter
Gaia
okie done~
jyu
Hi, from queue :) reeeally late i'm sorry :')

[General]

  1. Your current bg is 1365x768 loooool you better fix to 1366x768
  2. noooooooooo http://puu.sh/bcsOl/23b539234f.png


[Normal]

  1. 00:25:172 (1,2) - i would suggest this rhythm to lessen the amount of clicking, even just a bit (it might be able to lower the star rating! idk usually works for me) but you have to adjust the ds for the next pattern http://puu.sh/bcoFq/8b2c6783f1.jpg
  2. 00:33:584 (4,1) - only suggestion to make the flow better http://puu.sh/bcoQr/95e8757bbd.jpg and i adjust the next pattern like this http://puu.sh/bcoYO/4f91073a92.jpg
  3. 00:45:079 (1,2) - well i wanted to point out these sliders since they don't really fit the song. but the slider art is cute ;w;
  4. 00:49:845 (1,2) - how about making them symmetrical? makes the appearance better http://puu.sh/bcp0L/8dee554014.jpg
  5. 00:59:939 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - we've gone full circle
  6. 01:01:060 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be better if they're symmetrical lol http://puu.sh/bcpdX/074f56572e.jpg
  7. 01:14:518 (1,2) - only suggestion for (2)'s shape http://puu.sh/bcpn4/55e5829eed.jpg copy paste (1) and then rotate by 23 degree
  8. 01:16:200 (3) - delete the middle square point. it's kinda useless. and if you follow the suggestion above, you might want to adjust this slider too

    idk the diff is fine. but the star rating might be a problem. well sometimes some bats just let it pass and rank it if it's deemed easy enough but idk it's kinda rare. i suggest to make the rhythm more simple at kiai, since there are lots of 1/4 sliders. i suggest to make it a 1/2 slider, or just make it a reversed slider. some small suggestions:
  9. 00:04:985 (1,2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/bcq2G/f988e3cd40.jpg
  10. 00:52:088 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/bcpa0/1a86fd876e.jpg
  11. 01:01:060 (1,2,3,4) - ^


[Hard]

  1. 00:36:387 (1) - whistle at slider's tail
  2. 00:44:238 (3,4) - the gap is too big and kinda difficult for hard
  3. 00:55:733 (4) - why is this slider a bit off from the others? i suggest to make it same like 00:55:453 (3,5,6) -
  4. 01:09:191 - missing a whistle?

    well the structure is kinda random, like 00:22:929 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - but people have different preferences anyway


[Kibbleru's Insane]

  • nice. nothing to complain. but it's kinda hard to read the AR at kiai so i suggest AR8.7 but meh it's up to you


that's all. you can do it :D
goodluck~
Topic Starter
Gaia

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Hi, from queue :) reeeally late i'm sorry :') lool no problem~

[General]

  1. Your current bg is 1365x768 loooool you better fix to 1366x768 ah, seriously? :[
  2. noooooooooo http://puu.sh/bcsOl/23b539234f.png this is rankable actually lol.


[Normal]

  1. 00:25:172 (1,2) - i would suggest this rhythm to lessen the amount of clicking, even just a bit (it might be able to lower the star rating! idk usually works for me) but you have to adjust the ds for the next pattern http://puu.sh/bcoFq/8b2c6783f1.jpg I'm all for decreasing star ratings/ though it didnt change anything lol. cool tho so used
  2. 00:33:584 (4,1) - only suggestion to make the flow better http://puu.sh/bcoQr/95e8757bbd.jpg and i adjust the next pattern like this http://puu.sh/bcoYO/4f91073a92.jpg cool cool
  3. 00:45:079 (1,2) - well i wanted to point out these sliders since they don't really fit the song. but the slider art is cute ;w; the singer is ChouCho, which means butterfly in Japanese. I think it fits :]
  4. 00:49:845 (1,2) - how about making them symmetrical? makes the appearance better http://puu.sh/bcp0L/8dee554014.jpg I was thinking more about flow when i made these sliders. I'll give more consideration tho
  5. 00:59:939 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - we've gone full circle i like me the circle flows QAQ
  6. 01:01:060 (1,2,3,4,5) - would be better if they're symmetrical lol http://puu.sh/bcpdX/074f56572e.jpg same as previous
  7. 01:14:518 (1,2) - only suggestion for (2)'s shape http://puu.sh/bcpn4/55e5829eed.jpg copy paste (1) and then rotate by 23 degree ^
  8. 01:16:200 (3) - delete the middle square point. it's kinda useless. and if you follow the suggestion above, you might want to adjust this slider too actually, it does make a difference/ i like it like this more tbh

    idk the diff is fine. but the star rating might be a problem. well sometimes some bats just let it pass and rank it if it's deemed easy enough but idk it's kinda rare. i suggest to make the rhythm more simple at kiai, since there are lots of 1/4 sliders. i suggest to make it a 1/2 slider, or just make it a reversed slider. some small suggestions:
  9. 00:04:985 (1,2,1,2) - http://puu.sh/bcq2G/f988e3cd40.jpg ahh i don't really wanna change this cuz i like how it looks :v
  10. 00:52:088 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/bcpa0/1a86fd876e.jpg this is to emphasize the guitar :U
  11. 01:01:060 (1,2,3,4) - ^ same


[Hard]

  1. 00:36:387 (1) - whistle at slider's tail intentional, wanted whistles to be on vocals only
  2. 00:44:238 (3,4) - the gap is too big and kinda difficult for hard closer a bit
  3. 00:55:733 (4) - why is this slider a bit off from the others? i suggest to make it same like 00:55:453 (3,5,6) - i like it ;w;
  4. 01:09:191 - missing a whistle? not at the head, i want whistle on vocals which is at the slider end.

    well the structure is kinda random, like 00:22:929 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - but people have different preferences anyway aha.ha.. this was changed cuz i originally had something else but rhythm wise it wasn't very good :\ I need some cool patters :x


that's all. you can do it :D
goodluck~
Thank you for the mod!

btw i play SIF too and im proud of it :I
guineaQ
Okkkkkkkk nazi mod lets dothis

No KDS since I didn't finish this

It's been too long since I last modded, so you've been warned


italics are just comments, ignore them

[Kibbleru's Insane Not insane enuff]
  1. 00:05:406 (3,5) -
  2. 00:08:771 (6,7,1) - you can try stacking this if somebody keeps qqing at this for being "ugly"
  3. 00:14:378 (2,3) - yo this felt really awkward since there is sudden 1/4 break in between them, don't really have a solution for it thou and "ugly" overlap
  4. 00:15:500 (4) - would have made it 1/4 reverse slider personally
  5. 00:16:901 (2) - YO HIDDEN PLAYERS WILL HATE YOU FOR THIS
  6. 00:17:742 (4) - again, would have made it 1/4 reverse slider personally
  7. 00:17:742 (4,1) - so I guess ppl qq at you for this being "ugly"
    don't forget to move 00:18:864 (2) - if you applied (for w/e reason) the above
  8. 00:19:985 (4) - same as 00:15:500 -
  9. 00:20:406 (5) - if you want to make it less "messy" or more messy cus of the complaints, than try
    lel this looks more ugly
  10. 00:22:929 (1,3) - this bothers me so much (aka FIX THIS BLANKET OR ILL EAT YOUR FACE)


gonna come back and finish this later
No_Gu
from my M4M queue,no bubble round.

are you sure of this title?if so,add (TV size) to the Japanese title.if not,delete (TV size) in the romanised one

[Normal]
00:00:500 (1,2,1,2) - maybe a slider rotate 90° 3 times?but the present pattern is ok as well
00:06:107 (2,3) - I don't suggest 1/4 in the lowest diff.though normal with 107 BPM
00:49:845 (1,2) - try sth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981797
a bit hard as a lowest diff.I think you should add an easy diff
and maybe remove some whistle.your whistle set sounds noisy
you can improve this with more beautiful slider

[Hard]
00:29:658 (1) - same spacing?
00:36:247 (6,1) - a better blanket
00:37:509 (3,4,5) - sth like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981815
more like an insane diff than a hard..though the song is slow
same thing about slider shape and whsitles with normal

[Insane]
00:14:378 (2) - stop at 00:14:658 sounds better.a quick stop gives me a break sense
00:14:799 (3) - a little overlap
00:51:668 (6) - same spacing?
00:22:929 (1,3) - you know how to fix this lol
flow and sliders are good.but It is a pity for me that you overmapped

imo diff spread is bad,normal is like hard.hard is like insane.and Insane is overmapped.
Topic Starter
Gaia

No_Gu wrote:

from my M4M queue,no bubble round.

are you sure of this title?if so,add (TV size) to the Japanese title.if not,delete (TV size) in the romanised one oh whoops added in japanese title

[Normal]
00:00:500 (1,2,1,2) - maybe a slider rotate 90° 3 times?but the present pattern is ok as well sorry if i do this it'll kill my blanket on 00:04:985 (1) - which blankets 00:06:107 (2) - lol
00:06:107 (2,3) - I don't suggest 1/4 in the lowest diff.though normal with 107 BPM yeah i know but nothing else i can do really otherwise my rhythm would suck
00:49:845 (1,2) - try sth like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981797 done
a bit hard as a lowest diff.I think you should add an easy diff idk really owo
and maybe remove some whistle.your whistle set sounds noisy T^T
you can improve this with more beautiful slider made some changes :o not sure if its better now tho QQ

[Hard]
00:29:658 (1) - same spacing? yup
00:36:247 (6,1) - a better blanket fixed
00:37:509 (3,4,5) - sth like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981815 alright, but didnt move the 3rd one cuz i wanted some differentiation between the combos
more like an insane diff than a hard..though the song is slow this feels pretty easy tho owo
same thing about slider shape and whsitles with normal

imo diff spread is bad,normal is like hard.hard is like insane.and Insane is overmapped.
thank you for modding!!
Kibbleru

No_Gu wrote:

from my M4M queue,no bubble round.

are you sure of this title?if so,add (TV size) to the Japanese title.if not,delete (TV size) in the romanised one

[Insane]
00:14:378 (2) - stop at 00:14:658 sounds better.a quick stop gives me a break sense k somewhat fixed
00:14:799 (3) - a little overlap I like this :<
00:51:668 (6) - same spacing? ^
00:22:929 (1,3) - you know how to fix this lol ^
flow and sliders are good.but It is a pity for me that you overmapped mm I approached this map as tick 4 so it turned out like this lol :<

imo diff spread is bad,normal is like hard.hard is like insane.and Insane is overmapped. I disagree, insane is overmapped but hard plays like hard and normal plays like a normal
fixed first suggestion from q chan

osu file format v13

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112,92,73817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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236,340,74939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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248,100,76200,2,0,L|240:32,1,66.1250012612343,14|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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460,280,77883,1,6,0:0:0:0:
424,176,78023,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,296,78163,2,0,P|358:328|355:361,1,66.1250012612343,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,320,80686,2,0,P|348:304|420:312,1,132.250002522469,14|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,204,81948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,120,82088,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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