ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size ver.)

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Topic Starter
Gaia

HabiHolic wrote:



[Normal]

00:13:957 (1) - vocal flow batter. so slider increase 00:14:518 - this
00:18:443 (1) - same (^) 00:19:004 - increase
00:22:929 (1) - same (^) 00:23:490 - increase okie for all 3
00:53:490 (4,5) - note swap please. this good flow sure
00:58:817 (1) - finish sound very awkward I used finish on 1/3 and clap on 2/4 so kept for consistency
01:23:630 - this green line use?. if your not use delete please k

[Hard]

00:03:864 (4,5,6) - flow is 00:02:742 (1,2,3) - this er i'll keep for now and see what happens.
00:07:649 (2,3) - Here is my suggestion patten a bit weird imo I used something else now http://puu.sh/b1ueU/2f32ba717e.jpg

00:49:845 (1,2) - bad slider and patten like this? k used
Thank you for modding~
Indeed
Hello, from my Queue
Remember, all of these are suggestions. You do not have to change anything if you do not want to.

[General]

  1. Song too cute, I uguu'd all while modding it. Also, map too good, get a BAT


[Normal]

  1. 00:22:088 - watch out for flow here, it just goes in a circle and that's kinda boring
  2. 00:35:546 (4) - would change to two circles tbh, starting it on the red tick makes it too passive.
  3. 00:56:574 - something just feels off about this here. I changed it to this and it sounds a little better. Play around with it a little


[Hard]

  1. 00:47:602 (1) - just map this, the spinner is way too short


[Kibbleru's Insane]

  1. 00:49:705 - circle here
  2. 01:11:294 (6) - would place at x:336 y:196
  3. 01:13:817 (4) - would place at x:140 y:80


Good map :D Good luck on rank!
Topic Starter
Gaia

Indeed wrote:

Hello, from my Queue
Remember, all of these are suggestions. You do not have to change anything if you do not want to.

[General]

  1. Song too cute, I uguu'd all while modding it. Also, map too good, get a BAT ikr? c: and ya im trying :'c


[Normal]

  1. 00:22:088 - watch out for flow here, it just goes in a circle and that's kinda boring flow is fine, but well yeah its before the buildup so its alright to me
  2. 00:35:546 (4) - would change to two circles tbh, starting it on the red tick makes it too passive. prolly a personal thing but 4 circles in a row for normal is too hard for me
  3. 00:56:574 - something just feels off about this here. I changed it to this and it sounds a little better. Play around with it a little im following vocals


[Hard]

  1. 00:47:602 (1) - just map this, the spinner is way too short ill try k used 2 sliders



Good map :D Good luck on rank! thanksss
thx for modding!
Kibbleru
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osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Choucho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 49004
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 31901
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size)
TitleUnicode:夏の日と君の声
Artist:ChouCho
ArtistUnicode:ChouCho
Creator:Gaia
Version:Kibbleru's Insane
Source:グラスリップ
Tags:Glasslip Opening Kibbleru
BeatmapID:463135
BeatmapSetID:195103

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:2.3
SliderTickRate:4

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"Hnng Choucho.avi"
0,0,"lovepentagon.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Topic Starter
Gaia
okey time 2 stop stalking queues and stalk bats instead
Lavender
Red means it conflicts with the guideline, you must fix it.
Blue means some of my important suggestions, you can ignore it.
Black just means my comments.

Hi, request from my modding queue.
[Normal]
01:00:500 (5,1) - use circle+slider+cirlce to fix the vocal
01:03:864 (2,3) - ^ circle+slider
[Hard]
00:29:939 (2) - Move here is better.
Fine diff.
[Kibbleru's Insane]
00:13:116 (5,6) - try to make a better flow
00:35:126 (5) - move it to the end of 2
00:39:752 (5) - Ctrl+G?
00:57:415 (4) - Ctrl+G
01:11:154 (5,6,7,8) - Consider making a star like this.
Topic Starter
Gaia

[Teichan] wrote:

Red means it conflicts with the guideline, you must fix it.
Blue means some of my important suggestions, you can ignore it.
Black just means my comments.

Hi, request from my modding queue.
[Normal]
01:00:500 (5,1) - use circle+slider+cirlce to fix the vocal i changed another waay
01:03:864 (2,3) - ^ circle+slider its following vocals tho?
[Hard]
00:29:939 (2) - Move here is better. actually i think my flow right now is better. besides, you have a massive 1/4 jump from the slider to the circle
Fine diff.
thanks for modding~
Topic Starter
Gaia
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Frostings
Hi Gaia ~
holy fk I went to your userpage in order to get to this thread, and random music started playing and I got really scared I didn't know where it was coming from ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

[General]

wow ok I was going to mention that hitsounds sounded loud in the intro, but you're using 20% volume... are my ears just sensitive? I dunno. Raise mp3 volume by like 250% please

[Normal]

I can't even begin to fathom how this difficulty is under 2 stars
It honestly looks like a Hard difficulty disguised as a Normal with the use of low difficulty settings

The object density is so high that AR4 doesn't fit this map anymore. Really recommend either AR5 or trying to make density way lower than it currently is

00:06:528 (3,1) - shape here is really weird. It's not quite a line, nor is it a circle, and it's a little too straight to be considered one of those whatever-you-call-it (bump?) sliders

00:07:228 (1,2) - related to above. I really suggest you change these sliders in some way, because although the flow is good, there is no structure in these patterns

00:11:714 (1,2) - see, look! these look nice ^^

00:16:200 (1,2,3) - I suggest you make the shape better here


00:25:172 (1,2) - fix shape here (more circular or... something)

00:31:901 - holy this section 2fast2furious

00:33:584 (4,1) - same as I mentioned before

00:44:518 (4,1) - I guarentee like 90% of normal players will slidermiss... anti-jump + red tick start? You are literally Satan. that being said, I really like the butterfly(?)

00:49:845 (1,2) - senpai pls

00:52:369 (2,3,4,5,1) - [Nazi] This part really bothers me. The pattern starts off with 00:52:088 (1,2,3) - weeeee nice circular sharper angle patterns and then 00:52:929 (3,4,5,1) - the structure becomes a little lost with the use of wide obtuse angles :( [/Nazi]

01:14:518 (1,2) - ;w;


[Hard]

00:06:528 (5,6,1) - same thing I mentioned about structure in Normal

00:27:836 (2,3,4) - ^^^

\00:38:070 (4,1) - ;;

00:41:995 (3,4,1) - nice ~

00:43:677 (2,3,4) - o.o copy+paste one slider and rotate in 120degree intervals?

00:45:359 (1) - what happened to the butterfly slider ;~;

00:52:929 (3,4,5) - shape is weird . I suggest you rotate 00:53:210 (4,5) - clockwise a little bit also fix the blanket young kouhai

01:01:901 (2,3) - better shape for bonus structure points

01:14:518 (1,2,3) - wow this is like Normal

01:19:845 (2,3) - blanket fix ;w;


[Kibbleru's Insane]

I was panicking because I couldn't play this at all, and then I realized AR8
With AR8 anti-jumps like 00:04:985 (1,2) -, 00:49:285 (7,8,1) - become really awkward to read, and jump patterns like 01:10:873 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -, 01:13:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - become really difficult
Please AR9

00:03:864 (4,5) - wow pls this blanket is unrankable. I think you should make 00:04:285 (5) - curve a littttttle less and shift it left a little more

2pr04me
Topic Starter
Gaia

Frostings wrote:

Hi Gaia ~
holy fk I went to your userpage in order to get to this thread, and random music started playing and I got really scared I didn't know where it was coming from ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ baby dont hurt me

[General]

wow ok I was going to mention that hitsounds sounded loud in the intro, but you're using 20% volume... are my ears just sensitive? I dunno. Raise mp3 volume by like 250% please it sounds alright to me tho >:

[Normal]

I can't even begin to fathom how this difficulty is under 2 stars
It honestly looks like a Hard difficulty disguised as a Normal with the use of low difficulty settings

The object density is so high that AR4 doesn't fit this map anymore. Really recommend either AR5 or trying to make density way lower than it currently is

00:06:528 (3,1) - shape here is really weird. It's not quite a line, nor is it a circle, and it's a little too straight to be considered one of those whatever-you-call-it (bump?) sliders as for these shapes I have a nc to differentiate them all, so 1 and 2 would relate to eachother rather than 3 and 1 :s

00:07:228 (1,2) - related to above. I really suggest you change these sliders in some way, because although the flow is good, there is no structure in these patterns

00:11:714 (1,2) - see, look! these look nice ^^

00:16:200 (1,2,3) - I suggest you make the shape better here yeah it looks worse/much better now


00:25:172 (1,2) - fix shape here (more circular or... something) lol ;w;

00:31:901 - holy this section 2fast2furious fk me yeah i know this isnt good and should stay the same speed but if i change it my butterfly would get rekt

00:33:584 (4,1) - same as I mentioned before

00:44:518 (4,1) - I guarentee like 90% of normal players will slidermiss... anti-jump + red tick start? You are literally Satan. that being said, I really like the butterfly(?) look at ren-chon above

00:49:845 (1,2) - senpai pls

00:52:369 (2,3,4,5,1) - [Nazi] This part really bothers me. The pattern starts off with 00:52:088 (1,2,3) - weeeee nice circular sharper angle patterns and then 00:52:929 (3,4,5,1) - the structure becomes a little lost with the use of wide obtuse angles :( [/Nazi] :c my flow tho

01:14:518 (1,2) - ;w;


[Hard]

00:06:528 (5,6,1) - same thing I mentioned about structure in Normal so same for me i guess/ idrk how to fix this lol

00:27:836 (2,3,4) - ^^^

\00:38:070 (4,1) - ;;

00:41:995 (3,4,1) - nice ~

00:43:677 (2,3,4) - o.o copy+paste one slider and rotate in 120degree intervals? noice

00:45:359 (1) - what happened to the butterfly slider ;~; im sowwie senpai

00:52:929 (3,4,5) - shape is weird . I suggest you rotate 00:53:210 (4,5) - clockwise a little bit also fix the blanket young kouhai rotated, but but but my blanket is
http://puu.sh/b6lwK/84d2674e2e.jpg

01:01:901 (2,3) - better shape for bonus structure points define bettur shape/ its more circular now

01:14:518 (1,2,3) - wow this is like Normal yes it is lol

01:19:845 (2,3) - blanket fix ;w; okaaay
danks senpei
Zare
Had a quick check at this in IRC, nothing detailed.

23:07 Gaia: yooo
23:07 Zare: hello
23:07 Gaia: grats on red name team owo
23:07 Gaia: lel
23:08 Zare: thanks
23:08 Gaia: uhm
23:08 Gaia: >.<
23:09 Gaia: can u give my map a quick look
23:09 Gaia: i wanna know if its up to ur standards
23:11 Zare: well I can give it a test
23:11 Gaia: okie
23:11 Gaia: that'd be great
23:11 Gaia: :D
23:11 *Gaia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/463098 ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size)]
23:11 Zare: oh the glasslip OP
23:12 Gaia: you've seen it before?
23:12 Gaia: lol
23:12 Zare: i'm watching the anime
23:12 Gaia: oh
23:12 Gaia: every episode i watch
23:12 Gaia: i go wtf
23:12 Zare: do you want me to look at a certain diff?
23:12 Gaia: 2 much plot progression
23:12 Gaia: uhm
23:12 Zare: seeing how the Insane isnt yours
23:13 Gaia: i dont really mind
23:16 Zare: so if you ask me
23:16 Zare: whether this is "up to my standards"
23:16 Zare: then the anser would be no
23:17 Gaia: alright
23:17 Gaia: how so?
23:18 Zare: the sliderrhythms were unfitting at times
23:18 Gaia: for the insane?
23:18 Zare: yes
23:18 Gaia: ok
23:18 Zare: overall the slidershapes and visual aspects could be improved, too
23:18 Gaia: kk
23:19 Zare: what's almost most important for now is
23:19 Zare: tell Kibbleru to raise the AR
23:19 Zare: This map is technically a 214 BPM map
23:19 Gaia: alright
23:19 Zare: AR8 is just too low
23:19 Zare: Then again AR9 might feel too fast for such a calm song
23:19 Zare: so I'd recommend AR8.5
23:20 Zare: we have decimals now, why not use it
23:20 Gaia: a mod already asked him to raise ar tho
23:20 Gaia: lol
23:20 Gaia: well he didnt answer that mod yet so idk
23:20 Gaia: ill tell him tho
23:20 Zare: 00:34:565 (2) - and sliders like this are pretty unfitting
23:21 Zare: the beat it ends on is stronger than the beat it starts on
23:22 Zare: that feels unnatural because the playerinput, namely when the player clicks the object, is at the sliderhead
23:22 Gaia: yeah want the downbeats to be emphasized
23:22 Gaia: mm
23:25 Zare: The Hard feels a little awkward because it's switching between the layers a bit
23:25 Zare: it's hard to tell what it's following exactly
23:26 Gaia: so basically rhythm issues
23:26 Zare: yeah
23:26 Zare: but whenever you ask me to look at any map ever
23:26 Zare: i will always mainly care about rhythms
23:26 Zare: because you know, osu! is supposedly a rhythm game :D
23:26 Gaia: hm
23:26 Gaia: yeah lol
23:27 Gaia: but when u said switching layers
23:27 Gaia: u mean like
23:27 Gaia: 00:18:443 (1) -
23:27 Gaia: for example?
23:27 Zare: exactly
23:27 Zare: I know the drum is kinda strong there
23:27 Gaia: alright
23:27 Gaia: yeah im aware of that
23:27 Zare: but leaving the main layer, the vocals, out like that is kind of weird
23:28 Gaia: i had the same thing in normal but i changed to vocals
23:28 Gaia: i guess ill do the same in hard
23:28 Gaia: but the drum thing is only in the beginning
23:28 Zare: 00:22:929 (1,2,3) - these too
23:29 Zare: it's jumping between vocals and drums
23:29 Gaia: yeah
23:29 Gaia: i kno
23:29 Gaia: ill change them all
23:29 Gaia: cuz its only the part before 00:31:901 (1) -
23:29 Zare: 00:28:817 (4) - and this would feel better if it was two circles
23:29 Gaia: and after 00:13:957 (1) -
23:30 Gaia: and ok
23:31 Zare: 00:49:845 (1,2,3,4) - this is kind of boring, just four sliders meh
23:31 Zare: 00:53:630 (5) - this sliderrhythm is unfitting
23:32 Gaia: that slider goes with guitar tho o-o
23:32 Zare: 01:07:228 (4) - you're just too inconsistent with what to follow
23:32 Zare: sometimes it's the vocals
23:32 Zare: sometimes it's the drums
23:33 Zare: choose one and stick to it
23:33 Gaia: k
23:33 Zare: try to avoid conflicts like these
23:34 Gaia: ill go back and look at my rhythm again
23:34 Zare: obviously, if one of the layers is nonexistant for a measure or a few beats, then you switch to another one because you can't just map nothing
23:35 Gaia: yeah
23:35 Zare: or well, technically you can, old maps prove this. but these days, old maps aren't exactly appreciated anymore, unfortunately
23:35 Gaia: yup
23:35 Zare: the point is, pick a layer, usually the most dominant one, the one you'd go with when humming the song
23:35 Gaia: alrights
23:36 Gaia: but other than this is there anything else that stood out?
23:36 Zare: your idea's aren't bad, it just seems a bit indecisive for now
23:36 Gaia: okay c:
23:37 Zare: one more thing, idk whether the spread is really cool
23:37 Zare: Hard -> Insane seems like a somewhat huge gap
23:37 Gaia: oh
23:38 Gaia: true
23:38 Zare: looking at Normal
23:38 Zare: this looks more consistent
23:39 Gaia: okay :D
23:39 Zare: well there's issues in the kiai too
23:39 Zare: 01:19:845 (3,4) - and this isn't really good
23:39 Gaia: rhythm again?
23:39 Zare: rhythmwise, again
23:40 Gaia: alright
23:40 Zare: basically you just need to learn how to go with your sliders correctly
23:40 Gaia: hm ok
23:40 Zare: a lot of mappers don't realize it really makes a difference
23:40 Zare: but it's like the key to making a fitting map
23:40 Gaia: i can see how it makes a difference
23:41 Zare: let me do some self advertising
23:41 *Zare is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/403039 ETIA. - Claiomh Solais [Eternal]]
23:41 Zare: in this map
23:41 Zare: look at how i used sliders
23:42 Zare: they're consistently used on the same layers
23:43 Zare: not zexous' diff :p
23:43 Zare: well I guess it works too
23:43 Zare: he's a good, consistent mapper too
23:43 Gaia: whoops
23:43 Gaia: lol
23:43 Gaia: lol sry somehow didnt see
23:44 Gaia: omg deathstream and jumps
23:44 Gaia: and kicksliders
23:44 Gaia: xD
23:45 Zare: not the pooiiint
23:45 Gaia: but yeah it matches music
23:45 Zare: D:
23:45 Gaia: :p
23:47 Gaia: rip
23:47 Zare: yeah anyway
23:47 Gaia: hey
23:47 Zare: did I manage to convey my impression?
23:47 Gaia: ur gap from hard into insane
23:47 Gaia: http://puu.sh/b6qAo/3420ff6e2f.jpg
23:47 Gaia: is the same as mine pretty much
23:47 Gaia: so i should be fine?
23:48 Zare: Gaia-chan
23:48 Zare: recheck that.
23:48 Gaia: and yeah u did
23:48 Zare: my Hard has 3.5 stars
23:48 Zare: your Hard
23:48 Zare: has 2.5 stars
23:49 Zare: ~roughly
23:49 Gaia: oh what
23:49 Gaia: lol
23:49 Gaia: sht
23:49 Gaia: my bad
23:49 Gaia: lol
23:49 Zare: granted your insane is easier too
23:49 Zare: but I still feel like this could be unpleasant to the QAT
23:49 Gaia: its 1.4 difference
23:49 Gaia: aiya
23:54 Zare: my recommendation
23:54 Zare: add more stuff in the Hard
23:55 Zare: a few more 1/4 where they fit
23:55 Gaia: k
23:55 Zare: actually tbh i think kibbleru overdid their diff a bit
23:55 Gaia: lol :<
23:55 Zare: but i can understand that they wanted to make it somewhat interesting#
23:56 Gaia: it so fun with dt on
23:56 Gaia: :3
23:58 Zare: you should decide what you want to do, it's your set after all, but at this point, boosting the Hard seems like the best option
23:58 Zare: it's barely harder than the Normal anyway
23:58 Gaia: kk

main problems adressed: Slider rhythms and visuals, spread issues.
Topic Starter
Gaia

Zare wrote:

Had a quick check at this in IRC, nothing detailed.

23:07 Gaia: yooo
23:07 Zare: hello
23:07 Gaia: grats on red name team owo
23:07 Gaia: lel
23:08 Zare: thanks
23:08 Gaia: uhm
23:08 Gaia: >.<
23:09 Gaia: can u give my map a quick look
23:09 Gaia: i wanna know if its up to ur standards
23:11 Zare: well I can give it a test
23:11 Gaia: okie
23:11 Gaia: that'd be great
23:11 Gaia: :D
23:11 *Gaia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/463098 ChouCho - Natsu no Hi to Kimi no Koe (TV size)]
23:11 Zare: oh the glasslip OP
23:12 Gaia: you've seen it before?
23:12 Gaia: lol
23:12 Zare: i'm watching the anime
23:12 Gaia: oh
23:12 Gaia: every episode i watch
23:12 Gaia: i go wtf
23:12 Zare: do you want me to look at a certain diff?
23:12 Gaia: 2 much plot progression
23:12 Gaia: uhm
23:12 Zare: seeing how the Insane isnt yours
23:13 Gaia: i dont really mind
23:16 Zare: so if you ask me
23:16 Zare: whether this is "up to my standards"
23:16 Zare: then the anser would be no
23:17 Gaia: alright
23:17 Gaia: how so?
23:18 Zare: the sliderrhythms were unfitting at times
23:18 Gaia: for the insane?
23:18 Zare: yes
23:18 Gaia: ok
23:18 Zare: overall the slidershapes and visual aspects could be improved, too
23:18 Gaia: kk
23:19 Zare: what's almost most important for now is
23:19 Zare: tell Kibbleru to raise the AR
23:19 Zare: This map is technically a 214 BPM map
23:19 Gaia: alright
23:19 Zare: AR8 is just too low
23:19 Zare: Then again AR9 might feel too fast for such a calm song
23:19 Zare: so I'd recommend AR8.5
23:20 Zare: we have decimals now, why not use it
23:20 Gaia: a mod already asked him to raise ar tho
23:20 Gaia: lol
23:20 Gaia: well he didnt answer that mod yet so idk
23:20 Gaia: ill tell him tho
23:20 Zare: 00:34:565 (2) - and sliders like this are pretty unfitting
23:21 Zare: the beat it ends on is stronger than the beat it starts on
23:22 Zare: that feels unnatural because the playerinput, namely when the player clicks the object, is at the sliderhead
23:22 Gaia: yeah want the downbeats to be emphasized
23:22 Gaia: mm
23:25 Zare: The Hard feels a little awkward because it's switching between the layers a bit
23:25 Zare: it's hard to tell what it's following exactly
23:26 Gaia: so basically rhythm issues
23:26 Zare: yeah
23:26 Zare: but whenever you ask me to look at any map ever
23:26 Zare: i will always mainly care about rhythms
23:26 Zare: because you know, osu! is supposedly a rhythm game :D
23:26 Gaia: hm
23:26 Gaia: yeah lol
23:27 Gaia: but when u said switching layers
23:27 Gaia: u mean like
23:27 Gaia: 00:18:443 (1) -
23:27 Gaia: for example?
23:27 Zare: exactly
23:27 Zare: I know the drum is kinda strong there
23:27 Gaia: alright
23:27 Gaia: yeah im aware of that
23:27 Zare: but leaving the main layer, the vocals, out like that is kind of weird
23:28 Gaia: i had the same thing in normal but i changed to vocals
23:28 Gaia: i guess ill do the same in hard
23:28 Gaia: but the drum thing is only in the beginning
23:28 Zare: 00:22:929 (1,2,3) - these too
23:29 Zare: it's jumping between vocals and drums
23:29 Gaia: yeah
23:29 Gaia: i kno
23:29 Gaia: ill change them all
23:29 Gaia: cuz its only the part before 00:31:901 (1) -
23:29 Zare: 00:28:817 (4) - and this would feel better if it was two circles
23:29 Gaia: and after 00:13:957 (1) -
23:30 Gaia: and ok
23:31 Zare: 00:49:845 (1,2,3,4) - this is kind of boring, just four sliders meh
23:31 Zare: 00:53:630 (5) - this sliderrhythm is unfitting
23:32 Gaia: that slider goes with guitar tho o-o
23:32 Zare: 01:07:228 (4) - you're just too inconsistent with what to follow
23:32 Zare: sometimes it's the vocals
23:32 Zare: sometimes it's the drums
23:33 Zare: choose one and stick to it
23:33 Gaia: k
23:33 Zare: try to avoid conflicts like these
23:34 Gaia: ill go back and look at my rhythm again
23:34 Zare: obviously, if one of the layers is nonexistant for a measure or a few beats, then you switch to another one because you can't just map nothing
23:35 Gaia: yeah
23:35 Zare: or well, technically you can, old maps prove this. but these days, old maps aren't exactly appreciated anymore, unfortunately
23:35 Gaia: yup
23:35 Zare: the point is, pick a layer, usually the most dominant one, the one you'd go with when humming the song
23:35 Gaia: alrights
23:36 Gaia: but other than this is there anything else that stood out?
23:36 Zare: your idea's aren't bad, it just seems a bit indecisive for now
23:36 Gaia: okay c:
23:37 Zare: one more thing, idk whether the spread is really cool
23:37 Zare: Hard -> Insane seems like a somewhat huge gap
23:37 Gaia: oh
23:38 Gaia: true
23:38 Zare: looking at Normal
23:38 Zare: this looks more consistent
23:39 Gaia: okay :D
23:39 Zare: well there's issues in the kiai too
23:39 Zare: 01:19:845 (3,4) - and this isn't really good
23:39 Gaia: rhythm again?
23:39 Zare: rhythmwise, again
23:40 Gaia: alright
23:40 Zare: basically you just need to learn how to go with your sliders correctly
23:40 Gaia: hm ok
23:40 Zare: a lot of mappers don't realize it really makes a difference
23:40 Zare: but it's like the key to making a fitting map
23:40 Gaia: i can see how it makes a difference
23:41 Zare: let me do some self advertising
23:41 *Zare is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/403039 ETIA. - Claiomh Solais [Eternal]]
23:41 Zare: in this map
23:41 Zare: look at how i used sliders
23:42 Zare: they're consistently used on the same layers
23:43 Zare: not zexous' diff :p
23:43 Zare: well I guess it works too
23:43 Zare: he's a good, consistent mapper too
23:43 Gaia: whoops
23:43 Gaia: lol
23:43 Gaia: lol sry somehow didnt see
23:44 Gaia: omg deathstream and jumps
23:44 Gaia: and kicksliders
23:44 Gaia: xD
23:45 Zare: not the pooiiint
23:45 Gaia: but yeah it matches music
23:45 Zare: D:
23:45 Gaia: :p
23:47 Gaia: rip
23:47 Zare: yeah anyway
23:47 Gaia: hey
23:47 Zare: did I manage to convey my impression?
23:47 Gaia: ur gap from hard into insane
23:47 Gaia: http://puu.sh/b6qAo/3420ff6e2f.jpg
23:47 Gaia: is the same as mine pretty much
23:47 Gaia: so i should be fine?
23:48 Zare: Gaia-chan
23:48 Zare: recheck that.
23:48 Gaia: and yeah u did
23:48 Zare: my Hard has 3.5 stars
23:48 Zare: your Hard
23:48 Zare: has 2.5 stars
23:49 Zare: ~roughly
23:49 Gaia: oh what
23:49 Gaia: lol
23:49 Gaia: sht
23:49 Gaia: my bad
23:49 Gaia: lol
23:49 Zare: granted your insane is easier too
23:49 Zare: but I still feel like this could be unpleasant to the QAT
23:49 Gaia: its 1.4 difference
23:49 Gaia: aiya
23:54 Zare: my recommendation
23:54 Zare: add more stuff in the Hard
23:55 Zare: a few more 1/4 where they fit
23:55 Gaia: k
23:55 Zare: actually tbh i think kibbleru overdid their diff a bit
23:55 Gaia: lol :<
23:55 Zare: but i can understand that they wanted to make it somewhat interesting#
23:56 Gaia: it so fun with dt on
23:56 Gaia: :3
23:58 Zare: you should decide what you want to do, it's your set after all, but at this point, boosting the Hard seems like the best option
23:58 Zare: it's barely harder than the Normal anyway
23:58 Gaia: kk

main problems adressed: Slider rhythms and visuals, spread issues.
thanks again!!
Natteke desu
[Kibbleru's Insane]
Well, i'm don't really like how your overlaps looks with 8 ar. You need some work with them in general.
00:38:490 (9) - Well yea, vocals, but it stops too suddenly wich can't be enjoyable.
00:40:453 (8) - Yea, you should add circle or something
00:42:415 (6) - ^
00:46:341 (4) - again
00:57:696 (5,6,7,8) - this one feels nice, but try to increase a spacing a bit, for better emphasize, also add your custom finishes on slider heads
01:05:266 (7) - i don't really get this clap
01:10:873 (4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern looks too messy tbh
01:18:163 (7) - soft whistle on tail
01:21:528 (2,3,4,5) - flows kinda bad, try something like this :

Well, maybe it's your style, but these overlaps looks too messy, try to rethink them.

[Hard]
You needs some work with design. Rhytms is fine, hitsounds are simple but diff looks kinda messy.

[Normal]
00:11:014 (3) - :(
No real problems with Normal.

No kd for this, since it's not real mod post. Well, you guys need some work in general, in particular with design

Bug me again when you will check stuff, i'll come with real modpost
Topic Starter
Gaia
tried to clean some things up but idk lol i tried// i'll bug you again once i've cleared my doubts on some parts o:
Kibbleru

EvilElvis wrote:

[Kibbleru's Insane]
Well, i'm don't really like how your overlaps looks with 8 ar. You need some work with them in general. erm ar 9 helps maybe haha..
00:38:490 (9) - Well yea, vocals, but it stops too suddenly wich can't be enjoyable. I prefer to keep these as it is as I can't really find an alternative, I also think they work well enough.
00:40:453 (8) - Yea, you should add circle or something
00:42:415 (6) - ^
00:46:341 (4) - again
00:57:696 (5,6,7,8) - this one feels nice, but try to increase a spacing a bit, for better emphasize, also add your custom finishes on slider heads didn't add finish but I spaced out
01:05:266 (7) - i don't really get this clap its in the music I think listen more closely owo?
01:10:873 (4,5,6,7,8) - this pattern looks too messy tbh mmm increased ar shud be fine
01:18:163 (7) - soft whistle on tail fix
01:21:528 (2,3,4,5) - flows kinda bad, try something like this : oh I like this nice, fixed

Well, maybe it's your style, but these overlaps looks too messy, try to rethink them.

[Hard]
You needs some work with design. Rhytms is fine, hitsounds are simple but diff looks kinda messy.

[Normal]
00:11:014 (3) - :(
No real problems with Normal.

No kd for this, since it's not real mod post. Well, you guys need some work in general, in particular with design

Bug me again when you will check stuff, i'll come with real modpost
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Topic Starter
Gaia
um
ar9 is magic
fc 1st try GG
but then no more dt T^T ar8.5 pls
Natteke desu
Try 8.3 or 8.5 Gaia
Yea i'm still checking this thread
Zare
I'd also recommend AR8.5. Even if it's mapped on the 1/4 ticks and thus effectively doubled BPM, the song is still rather calm. So AR8.5 would be a good compromise and would also allow for DT plays without requiring 10.3 reading.
Topic Starter
Gaia
try playing it? ok

this is the playing from someone who cant read ar8 tho lol
i personally prefer ar8.5 more o:
Kibbleru
ill go with 8.5 then since 8.3 seems like a weird number to me haha~

change it for me pls
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