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Amane - Space Time (Amane Hardcore Remix) [OsuMania]

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Spy
3rd day.
Fullerene-

Spy wrote:

3rd day.
Oops. Kinda forgot about it for a second, get mad now.

Sorry if this mod is useless (it probably is), I did this really quick in about an hour so it's not as in-depth as I intended it to be. Oh well.

Columns:
|1|2|3|4|
Chords are represented with brackets around them. [12][34] would indicate a chord on 1st and 2nd column, followed by a chord on 3rd and 4th column. [123]1 is a chord on 1st, 2nd and 3rd columns, followed by a single note on 1. [1234] means a 4 note chord of those columns.

Please note that I'm NOT going to list every instance in the points I raise, otherwise the mod post would be 4x longer than it should be. This is a somewhat repetitive song, so I shouldn't have to reiterate a point where it repeats in the song.

[General]
- What are the 2 extra timing points for? The song doesn't become offsync, it's 175 BPM constant throughout the entire song. Remove the points, they're unnecessary
Edit: After reading Rumia-'s suggestion, all you really had to do was just snap to 1/24 from the F6 timing menu and all the 1ms unsnapped notes would be fixed. No extra unnecessary timing points.
- 33 offset seems closer than 35 to me

[Spy's 4K Extra]
00:00:635 (635|1) - The sound here is a hi-hat being closed, which mutes the hit. You could compare that do releasing an LN, so placing a note to that sound forces the opposite effect. In addition, in many other spots where this sequence is repeated, a note isn't placed in this spot like 00:02:006 - and 00:03:377 - . I'd remove this and in other places it repeats and a note is present for consistency.
00:02:177 - There is a 1/4 fill that plays until 00:02:606 - . Up to you whether to map it or not
00:03:035 - Add note to vocal sample which is mapped in other areas
00:08:263 - You could further differentiate this section from the previous one by making every 1/1 a double, which would also make the 1/2 and 1/4 snare hits have consistent layering. Up to you.
00:08:863 (8863|1) - Remove, as this is a hi-hat mute as with before
00:16:920 (16920|2,17006|2,17177|2,17263|2,17435|3,17520|3) - Right hand bias in this minijacks makes this transition a bit uncomfortable. Spread out the hands that each minijack hits on so that it flows smoothly. Move 00:17:263 (17263|2,17349|0,17435|2) - so that the arrangement is [14][23][14] like so

00:18:849 - There's a 1/8 snare hit here that you missed. Add a note here
00:19:235 - Since this is a new section of the song, you could put down a triple chord here to differentiate it (kick, bassline, crash)
00:19:320 - Add note here since you are mapping the synth in this section. The rhythm for this is actually a 1/4 note before the 1/1, and another after, so you're missing half of the sounds you are intending to map. A correct rhythm would look like this

00:29:092 (29092|1) - Remove this, the synth is on the 1/4 note before at 00:28:920 -
00:29:435 - Likewise, add a note here and at 00:29:606 - as the synth plays at this point.
00:30:120 (30120|1) - Moving this to 1 would be consistent with other parts of the map where this 1/4 kick is expressed with a minijack
00:30:206 - Any reason to reduce the layering to only singles on the 1/1? It feels a bit random considering the tone hasn't changed; in fact, it's actually stronger since the snares build up to 1/8 speed.
00:31:835 - Add a note here since you seem to be mapping the vocal samples again. Same at 00:34:577 -
00:38:606 (38606|1,38692|1,38863|0,38949|0,39120|0,39206|0) - Very heavy left hand bias. Spread the minijacks out. A pattern like this flows a lot better because the hand bias is reduced, and this creates a smooth transition into the 1/8 stream after.

00:40:192 (40192|1,40277|1,40320|2,40406|2,40620|1,40706|1,40749|2,40835|2,41049|1,41135|1) - Here is where all of the complaints about this map came from when this was qualified. You have many of 1/4 minijacks and one handed triplets here that face outwards in the stream, and all of them are focused on the middle two columns. Re-pattern ALL of the 1/8 streams to remove any instances of 1/4 minijacks inside them, and they become a lot more manageable. I VERY HIGHLY RECOMMEND THAT YOU FIX THIS, it will 100% make the map a lot better. Example:

00:41:263 - Add a note here and on other places since it is part of the lead synth you're mapping.
00:41:435 (41435|1) - I hear what sound you're mapping this note to, but it's almost inaudible at 100% speed and only really noticeable after you slow it down. It'd be better to remove it so the note doesn't feel random.
00:47:606 (47606|1) - In other spots in this section until 00:47:606 (47606|1) - , you're not mapping the vocal samples, so why do it here? Add them all in, or remove instances where you mapped it to keep consistency.
01:00:377 - 01:01:749 - as before, spread out the 1/4 minijacks in the doubles, and remove any of them in the 1/8 streams
01:03:120 - Add the 1/4 lead synth here, it's missing
01:07:920 - You could map the 1/4 fill here if you want, but it's fine as it is now.
01:11:349 (71349|3) - The sound you map here is clear, but it'd be better to split it off and leave these added notes to the quieter sounds for the 2nd repeat of this section, leaving the louder ones in for the first half. Up to you.
01:11:863 (71863|2) - Remove this to keep it consistent, as you only place normal notes to the lead synth in this section
01:14:349 - here you could add the extra quieter notes if you want and in other repeats
01:17:092 - there's actually another quieter note that plays here that you should add
01:24:592 - add a note to the 1/8 snare here
01:25:063 - add a note on 1 since the crash plays, as well as this being a new section
01:25:063 (85063|3,86520|2,87892|1) - have you considered mirroring this (ctrl+h) so that it follows the pitch correctly? right now it's the reverse of the correct pitch of the bassline.
01:47:006 (107006|0) - make this a double to call more attention and differentiate this note from the others since there is a sustained clap
01:52:749 (112749|3) - this LN is a 1/2 late. move it to 01:52:577 - and shorten the LN on 01:49:835 (109835|0) - to release at the same point as well
01:55:749 (115749|3) - move this to 1 to follow pitch better
02:00:720 (120720|0,120892|3) - ctrl+h this for pitch as well
02:06:377 (126377|2) - move this note out of the way of the LN release
02:08:563 (128563|0) - remove this note, there is no snare hit here.
02:08:606 (128606|1) - move to either 3 or 4 to prevent unnecessary tension because of the 1/4 minijack
02:08:949 - add a note here since this is an intense point
02:20:092 - background sound here that you could add a note to
02:50:777 (170777|0,170777|2,170863|3,170863|1,170949|0,170949|2,171035|1,171035|3) - the 1/4 double gluts here would flow a lot better if you ctrl+h'd this
02:52:363 - another 1/8 snare you could add here
02:52:835 - I'm really not sure why you randomly omit notes in this entire section, but this should be an unbroken stream since the 1/4 melody is exactly the same as the section before. Consider layering in the higher synth melody as well.
03:14:777 - consider making the layering in this repeat heavier, as more piano notes are added. You don't have to follow those extra piano notes specifically, but it would be nice to see some progression in the map
03:50:863 (230863|3) - 03:52:235 (232235|2) - remove, there's no sound going to this
03:57:120 (237120|2,237120|0,237206|1,237206|3) - make these chords [12][34] and adjust the others accordingly. better transition this way. do this for others as well
03:58:835 - it'd be nice to have these piano notes follow pitch correctly, since you have the room of all 4 columns and no LNs here
04:28:404 - add note here
04:37:061 - adding all the missing 1/4 notes here would create a nice buildup to the last chorus
04:42:075 - add 1/8 here as well
04:42:547 - make this an unbroken stream as well to be consistent. having the ending climax follow the same structure as before, but with heavier layering would be nice to see, but is optional
05:04:488 (304488|1) - move to 3
05:26:433 - same as in the beginning of the map, add a 1/4 note after the 1/1 where the synth plays
05:27:204 - optionally, you could add a note to this hihat 1/4 rhythm also, to differentiate it from the same patterned section as before
05:37:317 (337317|1) - move to 1?
05:59:345 (359345|2) - i'd move this to 4 as this is a bit more comfortable
06:04:834 - you could add a double for every 1/2 to keep layering consistency
06:07:660 (367660|1,367831|2) - no double note chords here? add a note because you do that right after
06:10:233 (370233|2,370318|1) - remove these notes, they are echoes of the previous sounds

Good luck.
Psychodic
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Kamikaze

Psychodic wrote:

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Spy

Fullerene- wrote:

Spy wrote:

3rd day.
Oops. Kinda forgot about it for a second, get mad now.

Sorry if this mod is useless (it probably is), I did this really quick in about an hour so it's not as in-depth as I intended it to be. Oh well.

Columns:
|1|2|3|4|
Chords are represented with brackets around them. [12][34] would indicate a chord on 1st and 2nd column, followed by a chord on 3rd and 4th column. [123]1 is a chord on 1st, 2nd and 3rd columns, followed by a single note on 1. [1234] means a 4 note chord of those columns.

Please note that I'm NOT going to list every instance in the points I raise, otherwise the mod post would be 4x longer than it should be. This is a somewhat repetitive song, so I shouldn't have to reiterate a point where it repeats in the song.

[General]
- What are the 2 extra timing points for? The song doesn't become offsync, it's 175 BPM constant throughout the entire song. Remove the points, they're unnecessary
Edit: After reading Rumia-'s suggestion, all you really had to do was just snap to 1/24 from the F6 timing menu and all the 1ms unsnapped notes would be fixed. No extra unnecessary timing points. Removed.
- 33 offset seems closer than 35 to me

[Spy's 4K Extra]
00:00:635 (635|1) - The sound here is a hi-hat being closed, which mutes the hit. You could compare that do releasing an LN, so placing a note to that sound forces the opposite effect. In addition, in many other spots where this sequence is repeated, a note isn't placed in this spot like 00:02:006 - and 00:03:377 - . I'd remove this and in other places it repeats and a note is present for consistency. No,I feel it is ok enough.
00:02:177 - There is a 1/4 fill that plays until 00:02:606 - . Up to you whether to map it or not OK.
00:03:035 - Add note to vocal sample which is mapped in other areas OK.
00:08:263 - You could further differentiate this section from the previous one by making every 1/1 a double, which would also make the 1/2 and 1/4 snare hits have consistent layering. Up to you. No.
00:08:863 (8863|1) - Remove, as this is a hi-hat mute as with before No
00:16:920 (16920|2,17006|2,17177|2,17263|2,17435|3,17520|3) - Right hand bias in this minijacks makes this transition a bit uncomfortable. Spread out the hands that each minijack hits on so that it flows smoothly. Move 00:17:263 (17263|2,17349|0,17435|2) - so that the arrangement is [14][23][14] like so
OK.
00:18:849 - There's a 1/8 snare hit here that you missed. Add a note here OK.
00:19:235 - Since this is a new section of the song, you could put down a triple chord here to differentiate it (kick, bassline, crash) No.
00:19:320 - Add note here since you are mapping the synth in this section. The rhythm for this is actually a 1/4 note before the 1/1, and another after, so you're missing half of the sounds you are intending to map. A correct rhythm would look like this I'm sure it is no sound here,then I checked other place,and added notes.

00:29:092 (29092|1) - Remove this, the synth is on the 1/4 note before at 00:28:920 - No.
00:29:435 - Likewise, add a note here and at 00:29:606 - as the synth plays at this point. OK.
00:30:120 (30120|1) - Moving this to 1 would be consistent with other parts of the map where this 1/4 kick is expressed with a minijack Make a little change.
00:30:206 - Any reason to reduce the layering to only singles on the 1/1? It feels a bit random considering the tone hasn't changed; in fact, it's actually stronger since the snares build up to 1/8 speed. I didn't catch background music here.
00:31:835 - Add a note here since you seem to be mapping the vocal samples again. Same at 00:34:577 - Fixed.
00:38:606 (38606|1,38692|1,38863|0,38949|0,39120|0,39206|0) - Very heavy left hand bias. Spread the minijacks out. A pattern like this flows a lot better because the hand bias is reduced, and this creates a smooth transition into the 1/8 stream after.
Make a little change.
00:40:192 (40192|1,40277|1,40320|2,40406|2,40620|1,40706|1,40749|2,40835|2,41049|1,41135|1) - Here is where all of the complaints about this map came from when this was qualified. You have many of 1/4 minijacks and one handed triplets here that face outwards in the stream, and all of them are focused on the middle two columns. Re-pattern ALL of the 1/8 streams to remove any instances of 1/4 minijacks inside them, and they become a lot more manageable. I VERY HIGHLY RECOMMEND THAT YOU FIX THIS, it will 100% make the map a lot better. Example:
Acutally I've asked much players to test play this part,and some can pass it without any miss,I don't think it should be fix.
00:41:263 - Add a note here and on other places since it is part of the lead synth you're mapping. OK.
00:41:435 (41435|1) - I hear what sound you're mapping this note to, but it's almost inaudible at 100% speed and only really noticeable after you slow it down. It'd be better to remove it so the note doesn't feel random. Fixed.
00:47:606 (47606|1) - In other spots in this section until 00:47:606 (47606|1) - , you're not mapping the vocal samples, so why do it here? Add them all in, or remove instances where you mapped it to keep consistency. Missed notes before that,fixed.
01:00:377 - 01:01:749 - as before, spread out the 1/4 minijacks in the doubles, and remove any of them in the 1/8 streams No,I didn't follow it.
01:03:120 - Add the 1/4 lead synth here, it's missing No.
01:07:920 - You could map the 1/4 fill here if you want, but it's fine as it is now. Just keep it.
01:11:349 (71349|3) - The sound you map here is clear, but it'd be better to split it off and leave these added notes to the quieter sounds for the 2nd repeat of this section, leaving the louder ones in for the first half. Up to you. No,it will be uncomfortable.
01:11:863 (71863|2) - Remove this to keep it consistent, as you only place normal notes to the lead synth in this section Fixed.
01:14:349 - here you could add the extra quieter notes if you want and in other repeats OK.
01:17:092 - there's actually another quieter note that plays here that you should add OK.
01:24:592 - add a note to the 1/8 snare here OK.
01:25:063 - add a note on 1 since the crash plays, as well as this being a new section No.
01:25:063 (85063|3,86520|2,87892|1) - have you considered mirroring this (ctrl+h) so that it follows the pitch correctly? right now it's the reverse of the correct pitch of the bassline. OK.
01:47:006 (107006|0) - make this a double to call more attention and differentiate this note from the others since there is a sustained clap I only follow piano here,add crash to the note just make it suitable.
01:52:749 (112749|3) - this LN is a 1/2 late. move it to 01:52:577 - and shorten the LN on 01:49:835 (109835|0) - to release at the same point as well Fixed.
01:55:749 (115749|3) - move this to 1 to follow pitch better OK.
02:00:720 (120720|0,120892|3) - ctrl+h this for pitch as well OK.
02:06:377 (126377|2) - move this note out of the way of the LN release No.
02:08:563 (128563|0) - remove this note, there is no snare hit here. OK.
02:08:606 (128606|1) - move to either 3 or 4 to prevent unnecessary tension because of the 1/4 minijack Keep putting on 1.
02:08:949 - add a note here since this is an intense point OK.
02:20:092 - background sound here that you could add a note to No.
02:50:777 (170777|0,170777|2,170863|3,170863|1,170949|0,170949|2,171035|1,171035|3) - the 1/4 double gluts here would flow a lot better if you ctrl+h'd this OK.
02:52:363 - another 1/8 snare you could add here OK.
02:52:835 - I'm really not sure why you randomly omit notes in this entire section, but this should be an unbroken stream since the 1/4 melody is exactly the same as the section before. Consider layering in the higher synth melody as well. Fixed some missing notes.
03:14:777 - consider making the layering in this repeat heavier, as more piano notes are added. You don't have to follow those extra piano notes specifically, but it would be nice to see some progression in the map Fixed some.
03:50:863 (230863|3) - 03:52:235 (232235|2) - remove, there's no sound going to this Fixed.
03:57:120 (237120|2,237120|0,237206|1,237206|3) - make these chords [12][34] and adjust the others accordingly. better transition this way. do this for others as well OK.
03:58:835 - it'd be nice to have these piano notes follow pitch correctly, since you have the room of all 4 columns and no LNs here Actually just give break time here.
04:28:404 - add note here OK.
04:37:061 - adding all the missing 1/4 notes here would create a nice buildup to the last chorus OK.
04:42:075 - add 1/8 here as well OK.
04:42:547 - make this an unbroken stream as well to be consistent. having the ending climax follow the same structure as before, but with heavier layering would be nice to see, but is optional No.
05:04:488 (304488|1) - move to 3 OK.
05:26:433 - same as in the beginning of the map, add a 1/4 note after the 1/1 where the synth plays OK.
05:27:204 - optionally, you could add a note to this hihat 1/4 rhythm also, to differentiate it from the same patterned section as before Make a little change here.
05:37:317 (337317|1) - move to 1? OK.
05:59:345 (359345|2) - i'd move this to 4 as this is a bit more comfortable No,I feel it is better
06:04:834 - you could add a double for every 1/2 to keep layering consistency Double notes here just for snare and main melody.
06:07:660 (367660|1,367831|2) - no double note chords here? add a note because you do that right after Added.
06:10:233 (370233|2,370318|1) - remove these notes, they are echoes of the previous sounds No.

Good luck.
Thanks for mod.
ExPew
tonight 233
Akasha-


Amane - Space Time [Osu!Mania Modding]

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From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Spy


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


[Spy's 4K Extra]

SPOILER
  1. 00:00:035 (35|2,720|2) - move to 1 for like the pattern
  2. 00:17:777 - in here, the before part, only change the stream pattern after 3 lines of double notes, I suggest in here should change too, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315484
  3. 00:23:949 - add a note
  4. 00:25:320 - ^
  5. 00:26:692 - ^
  6. 00:28:063 - ^
  7. 00:39:806 - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315532
  8. 00:51:977 - I think should do the jackhammer like the preview parts
  9. Suggest pattern: In 01:00:377 - to 01:00:806 - you do this pattern, so in 01:00:892 - to 01:01:320 - do the mirror with it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315539 and 01:01:406 - to 01:01:663 - , do it like the begin
  10. 01:01:749 - try this, fun for hand: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315545
  11. In 01:05:692 - you add single notes, why not do in 01:03:120 - the same, it will not be surpising when that part come
  12. From 01:30:635 - to 01:47:092 - I think it have the same sound, suggest to move those hold to 1,2,3 column like the preview part
  13. 01:47:092 (107092|2) - should move to 01:47:006 - cause have to catch beat in here when have a note in 01:47:006 (107006|0) - , if this part is following piano and crash's sound only
  14. 02:08:949 - to 02:30:892 - nothing to do here, I love this part with your's patterns so much ~~
  15. 02:55:063 - you forgot a note
  16. 03:03:635 - change to jackhammer? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315573
  17. 03:17:006 - have sound in here
  18. If you do jackhammer before, so change 03:25:577 - to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315582
  19. 03:33:977 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315592
  20. 03:47:520 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315598
  21. 03:55:920 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315618
  22. 03:58:663 - not have the long note like 01:25:063 - ? suggest add like it
  23. 04:06:892 - the piano's sound is high up, suggest this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315624
  24. 04:37:406 - 04:37:577 - 04:37:749 - 04:38:263 - 04:38:435 - 04:38:949 - 04:39:635 - forget a note, should add before like before
  25. 04:41:006 - suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315635
  26. 04:53:349 - jackhammer? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315639
  27. 05:02:949 (302949|2) - move to 2 and move 05:03:035 (303035|1) - to 3 before like the preview parts, you change the stream pattern every 4 lines, should change like it too
  28. 05:06:720 - forgot a note
  29. 05:15:377 (315377|2) - move to 4
  30. 05:23:692 - suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315675 , I use the pattern every 1/2, don't know to explain, first change the pattern to it, after that press those notes link: 05:23:692 (323692|2,323692|0,323863|1,323863|3,324035|2,324035|0,324206|3,324206|1) - and 05:23:777 (323777|0,323777|1,323949|3,323949|2,324120|0,324120|1,324292|3,324292|2) - and 05:24:377 (324377|0,324377|1,324549|3,324549|2,324720|0,324720|1,324892|3,324892|2) - and 05:24:463 (324463|3,324463|0,324635|1,324635|2,324806|3,324806|0,324977|1,324977|2) -
    and if you don't like it, change back to the old: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315682
  31. 05:46:920 (346920|0) - move to 4 because of 05:46:663 (346663|3,346663|2,346749|0,346749|1,346835|2,346835|3) - (change pattern every 3 lines)
  32. 05:57:977 (357977|2,358320|2) - delete this? the beat not this strong
  33. 05:58:063 - change to this if apply ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315690
  34. 05:59:177 - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315695
  35. 05:59:349 - to 06:00:720 - have double notes every 1/1, suggest 06:01:063 - 06:01:406 - 06:01:749 - 06:02:777 - 06:03:120 - 06:03:806 -
  36. 06:04:149 - 06:04:492 - 06:05:520 - 06:06:206 - 06:06:377 - 06:06:549 - 06:06:720 - 06:06:892 - 06:07:063 - add a note
  37. 06:07:577 - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315712
  38. In Lv.40, it's end at 06:10:149 - maybe should ends like it too
    Nice diff ~ I got A ~ I love the charts you made :3

[7K Lv.40]

SPOILER
  1. In 01:25:063 - to 01:41:606 - you can break by long notes, if 4k do it, should 7k too
  2. 02:51:463 (171463|3) - move to 5?
  3. 03:01:406 - delete a note in here, the other only take 3 notes
  4. 04:38:777 (278777|0) - remove this hitsound, it's still counting when still have the hitsound's name "snare.wav"
  5. Amazing, Not much to do here, it's totally awesome, I love your charts so much ~
[Comment]

I love this map and this song so much, pls go to rerank this

Good luck ~
konekokittenzzz
wish this was ranked again

i like this chart :(
ExPew
finale

[7K]

01:24:892 - something wrong on drum rhythm (refer like this 02:08:435 -

01:24:035 - missing snare?
01:24:463 (84463|1) - remove no sound
01:24:806 (84806|1) - ^

01:24:977 - add a note


[4K]

01:24:035 - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2346592
02:07:920 - ^ same rhythm drumset (re arrange new pattern)
Spy

Kuo Kyoka wrote:



Amane - Space Time [Osu!Mania Modding]

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From Kuo Kyoka's osu!mania Modding Queue

Mod Requested by Spy


[Generals]
- BPM: Okay
- Offset: Okay
- AiMod: No Problem
- Tags: Okay
- BG: Okay
- Kiai: Okay

Column
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 |


[Spy's 4K Extra]

SPOILER
  1. 00:00:035 (35|2,720|2) - move to 1 for like the pattern No
  2. 00:17:777 - in here, the before part, only change the stream pattern after 3 lines of double notes, I suggest in here should change too, https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315484 Keep original
  3. 00:23:949 - add a note OK
  4. 00:25:320 - ^ OK
  5. 00:26:692 - ^ OK
  6. 00:28:063 - ^ OK
  7. 00:39:806 - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315532 No,I was use similar patterns and got much complains
  8. 00:51:977 - I think should do the jackhammer like the preview parts It is ok
  9. Suggest pattern: In 01:00:377 - to 01:00:806 - you do this pattern, so in 01:00:892 - to 01:01:320 - do the mirror with it: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315539 and 01:01:406 - to 01:01:663 - , do it like the begin Thanks but I've change patterns in such parts much time,I will keep it then
  10. 01:01:749 - try this, fun for hand: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315545 OK then
  11. In 01:05:692 - you add single notes, why not do in 01:03:120 - the same, it will not be surpising when that part come OK
  12. From 01:30:635 - to 01:47:092 - I think it have the same sound, suggest to move those hold to 1,2,3 column like the preview part Actually I was put those LNs as you said,but I changed a bit
  13. 01:47:092 (107092|2) - should move to 01:47:006 - cause have to catch beat in here when have a note in 01:47:006 (107006|0) - , if this part is following piano and crash's sound only I used normal note to follow the crash sound
  14. 02:08:949 - to 02:30:892 - nothing to do here, I love this part with your's patterns so much ~~ Thanks :)
  15. 02:55:063 - you forgot a note Thanks
  16. 03:03:635 - change to jackhammer? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315573 OK
  17. 03:17:006 - have sound in here OK
  18. If you do jackhammer before, so change 03:25:577 - to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315582 OK
  19. 03:33:977 - try this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315592 No
  20. 03:47:520 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315598 Change some
  21. 03:55:920 - try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315618 No
  22. 03:58:663 - not have the long note like 01:25:063 - ? suggest add like it I added before you said,but finally removed
  23. 04:06:892 - the piano's sound is high up, suggest this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315624 Change some
  24. 04:37:406 - 04:37:577 - 04:37:749 - 04:38:263 - 04:38:435 - 04:38:949 - 04:39:635 - forget a note, should add before like before OK
  25. 04:41:006 - suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315635 Change some
  26. 04:53:349 - jackhammer? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315639 OK
  27. 05:02:949 (302949|2) - move to 2 and move 05:03:035 (303035|1) - to 3 before like the preview parts, you change the stream pattern every 4 lines, should change like it too OK
  28. 05:06:720 - forgot a note Thanks
  29. 05:15:377 (315377|2) - move to 4 OK
  30. 05:23:692 - suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315675 , I use the pattern every 1/2, don't know to explain, first change the pattern to it, after that press those notes link: 05:23:692 (323692|2,323692|0,323863|1,323863|3,324035|2,324035|0,324206|3,324206|1) - and 05:23:777 (323777|0,323777|1,323949|3,323949|2,324120|0,324120|1,324292|3,324292|2) - and 05:24:377 (324377|0,324377|1,324549|3,324549|2,324720|0,324720|1,324892|3,324892|2) - and 05:24:463 (324463|3,324463|0,324635|1,324635|2,324806|3,324806|0,324977|1,324977|2) -
    and if you don't like it, change back to the old: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315682 Changed a bit
  31. 05:46:920 (346920|0) - move to 4 because of 05:46:663 (346663|3,346663|2,346749|0,346749|1,346835|2,346835|3) - (change pattern every 3 lines) No
  32. 05:57:977 (357977|2,358320|2) - delete this? the beat not this strong It is background music,beats are in 1
  33. 05:58:063 - change to this if apply ^ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315690
  34. 05:59:177 - try this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315695 OK
  35. 05:59:349 - to 06:00:720 - have double notes every 1/1, suggest 06:01:063 - 06:01:406 - 06:01:749 - 06:02:777 - 06:03:120 - 06:03:806 -
  36. 06:04:149 - 06:04:492 - 06:05:520 - 06:06:206 - 06:06:377 - 06:06:549 - 06:06:720 - 06:06:892 - 06:07:063 - add a note No
  37. 06:07:577 - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2315712 No
  38. In Lv.40, it's end at 06:10:149 - maybe should ends like it too No,it is ok
    Nice diff ~ I got A ~ I love the charts you made :3

[Comment]

I love this map and this song so much, pls go to rerank this

Good luck ~
Thanks for mod :D

ExPew wrote:

finale

[7K]

01:24:892 - something wrong on drum rhythm (refer like this 02:08:435 -

01:24:035 - missing snare? Added
01:24:463 (84463|1) - remove no sound
01:24:806 (84806|1) - ^

01:24:977 - add a note


[4K]

01:24:035 - how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2346592 No,actually I follow drums and piano here
02:07:920 - ^ same rhythm drumset (re arrange new pattern) Keep remaining
Thanks PewPew :)
Rumia-
lets get this back to its place . #1
wheb to update 233
Spy
Woc I'm not update yet :(
ExPew

Rumia- wrote:

lets get this back to its place . #1
wheb to update 233
idiot xD
konekokittenzzz
wow this map got updated

there's still hope :)
AncuL
Rip in peace i guess?

i really want to get this ranked again!!!!111!!oneoneone!!
Rumia-
bubble time ! #1
Fullerene-
!!!
Starry-
:O go!
PyaKura
O.O
Spy
woc2015
Kamikaze
S P A C E T I M E
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Kyousuke-
yay qualify time! xD
PyaKura

-Kamikaze- wrote:

E E
M M
I I
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E E
C C
A A
P P
S P A C E T I M E
P P
A A
C C
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T T
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fixd

edit : fug, not fixd, useless blanks are deleted :c
Ayachi-
requested

[7K]
00:08:435 - add a note 聽起來好像放屁聲阿233
00:41:092 - 01:03:035 - 03:14:692 - add
03:31:235 - add a note
03:31:920 - 03:36:635 - ^
03:48:377 - 03:49:749 - 05:04:406 - 05:26:349 - 05:48:292 - add
01:41:606 (101606|1,102977|3) - volume 8%
02:05:349 (125349|6) - this too lol

[4K]
01:15:206 - 01:05:606 - 01:06:977 - 01:09:720 - 01:12:463 - 01:15:206 - 01:16:577 - 01:17:949 - 01:20:692 - 01:22:063 - 01:23:435 -
add a note
不覺得卡手 所以只找出這些很帥但是沒加的聲音了

看完叫我
Spy

[ S a k u r a ] wrote:

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[7K]
00:08:435 - add a note 聽起來好像放屁聲阿233 hhhh
00:41:092 - 01:03:035 - 03:14:692 - add
03:31:235 - add a note
03:31:920 - 03:36:635 - ^
03:48:377 - 03:49:749 - 05:04:406 - 05:26:349 - 05:48:292 - add
01:41:606 (101606|1,102977|3) - volume 8% Fixed
02:05:349 (125349|6) - this too lol Fixed

[4K]
01:15:206 - 01:05:606 - 01:06:977 - 01:09:720 - 01:12:463 - 01:15:206 - 01:16:577 - 01:17:949 - 01:20:692 - 01:22:063 - 01:23:435 -
add a note 不打算再加了,整張圖的note都快比7K多了
不覺得卡手 所以只找出這些很帥但是沒加的聲音了

看完叫我
Thanks for mod :D
Ayachi-
Bubble #2
1000th post.
Spy
Thanks :D
Rumia-
the hype is real
ExPew
okay im gonna take this

brb
Kayano
gogogo
Ayachi-

Rumia- wrote:

the hype is real
Akasha-
The time for space is real


(owo)b go rank it nao ~ pls, this is so amazing
puxtu

PyaKura wrote:

-Kamikaze- wrote:

E E E
M M M
I I I
T T T

E E E
C C C
A A A
P P P
E M I T E C A P S P A C E T I M E
P P P
A A A
C C C
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T T T
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edit : fug, not fixd, useless blanks are deleted :c
what am I doing
PyaKura
-------------------E----------------------------------------------
---------------------C------------T-------------E----------------
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-------------------S-------------E-------------H-----------------
-----------------P--------------M------------Y-------------------
---------------A-----------------I-----------P--------------------
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puxtu

PyaKura wrote:

-------------------E----------------------------------------------
---------------------C------------T-------------E----------------
-----------------------A------------I-------------P---------------
----------------------P------------M------------Y----------------
-------------------S-------------E-------------H-----------------
-----------------P--------------M------------Y-------------------
---------------A-----------------I-----------P--------------------
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it's not even readable lol
PyaKura
who cares ;c
Tidek
Shame that fullerene suggestion about burst patterns on 4k was rejected, but atleast chord streams looks better. ExPew, gogo ;;
Marirose
gogo on road! :)
ExPew
[4K]

---hitsounds check---

00:42:549 - missing kick
00:42:892 - ^
00:43:920 - ^
00:43:920 - ^
00:45:292 - ^
00:45:977 - ^
00:45:977 - ^
00:46:320 (46320|1,46320|0) - remove kick hitsound once of them
00:46:663 - missing kick
00:48:035 - ^
00:48:720 -
00:49:406 -
00:50:092 -
00:50:777 -
00:51:463 -
00:51:977 (51977|0,52063|1) - add kick hitsounds
00:53:520 - missing kick
00:54:892 -
00:56:263 -
02:30:892 (150892|3) - swap hitsounds
02:36:377 (156377|0) - missing snare
02:39:120 (159120|0) - ^
02:39:120 (159120|0) - ^
02:39:120 (159120|0) - ^
02:39:120 (159120|0) - ^
02:59:349 (179349|2) - remove kick hitsound
03:04:492 (184492|2) - ^
03:10:835 (190835|2) - ^
03:12:720 - missing kick
03:12:806 -
03:12:977 -
03:13:063 -
03:25:577 -
03:25:663 -
03:31:749 - remove kick hitsound
03:34:406 - missing kick
03:34:835 -
03:35:349 (215349|3) - remove kick hitsound
03:55:920 (235920|2) - ^
04:20:949 (260949|3) - swap hitsound
04:21:977 (261977|0) - missing snare
04:23:349 (263349|3) - ^
04:26:092 (266092|0) - ^
04:27:463 (267463|3) - ^
04:28:835 (268835|3) - ^
04:38:777 (278777|2) - remove snare hitsounds
04:41:177 (281177|3) - swap hitsound
05:02:520 (302520|1) - renive kick hitsounds
05:16:492 (316492|3) - swap hitsound
05:18:892 (318892|1) - ^
05:26:435 (326435|2) - missing kick
05:46:320 - ^
05:46:406 - ^
05:46:577 - ^
05:46:663 - ^
05:49:749 (349749|3) - swap hitsounds
05:55:235 (355235|3) - ^
05:55:235 (355235|3) - missing snare
06:06:720 (366720|3) - swap hitsounds
06:07:406 (367406|3) - ^

----modding---

00:12:892 - add a note
00:17:863 (17863|3) - 'space vocal' note?? if yes the hold should be here 00:18:035 and end 00:18:206 - here
00:47:349 (47349|2) - remove

01:11:349 (71349|3) - according from 7K there is no note(will decide on check 7K)
01:14:092 (74092|2) - ^
01:16:835 (76835|2) - ^
01:19:577 (79577|0) - ^
01:22:320 (82320|1) - ^



01:24:592 (84592|1) - remove re-add 1/8 ( now i got the headphone, if you removed. please re-add )
02:08:477 (128477|2) - ^
02:52:363 (172363|1) - ^
04:42:077 (282077|1) - ^
06:07:149 (367149|2) - ^

03:52:577 (232577|1) - remove this note have no sound
03:49:320 (229320|1) - ^
06:07:149 (367149|2) - ^

06:10:235 (370235|2,370320|1) - not sure about this note 'fade out sounds'

05:37:235 - add double jack like you did before.

06:10:235 (370235|2,370320|1) - remove

[7K]


---hitsound check---

-clear

---modding---

01:24:977 - add a note on 3rd line

03:52:577 (232577|5) - remove
03:49:320 (229320|2) - ^

03:51:720 - add a note
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