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spy
00:00:120 (120|0,463|1,806|0) - this three is unnecessary..
00:01:663 - add a note
and the snare drum i think double is better as the former
00:05:777 - add a note
00:07:149 - ^
00:08:092 - no double note just surprised me.. i think spy is always a Livestock man~
00:08:520 - add
00:08:863 - 00:13:749 - add miss sound :(
00:13:749 - 00:16:492 - make it mess like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986755
00:16:492 - 00:17:863 - just your style... much sudden..i think you wont change ..kill others is nice hhhh
00:30:206 (30206|3,30549|3,30892|3,31235|3,31577|3) - double
00:35:692 - like the 00:13:749 - 00:16:492 -
00:39:720 (39720|1,39720|3,39806|2,39849|1,39892|0) - make a little change let 00:39:806 (39806|2) - at 4 than start stair
00:41:863 - adda note
00:44:606 - ^
00:51:977 (51977|1) - move to 1
00:55:571 - add a note
01:03:120 (63120|1) - move to 4..
01:46:320 (106320|0,106492|3,106663|2,106835|3) - 4313
01:47:006 (107006|3,108463|2,109835|1) - move left by one
01:49:749 (109749|0) - move to 3
02:00:720 (120720|0) - hmm it is not comfortable here
02:06:292 (126292|1) - end at 02:07:577 -
02:30:892 - delete LN will make the pattern much more clean and nice so i suggest you to do that
02:41:863 - 02:47:349 - i suggest to catch the main sound and drum .. because the music is changing from light to heavy
02:47:349 - drum all double
02:51:463 (171463|3,171977|3) - not really clearly... if i do ,maybe i will catch vocal
03:03:806 (183806|0,183806|3,183806|2) - needn't treble
03:14:777 (194777|2) - move to 1
03:25:749 (205749|0,205749|3,205749|2) - needn't treble
03:35:349 - use the normal pattern for 1/8...now is too stupid...
03:39:720 (219720|1) - delete
03:40:235 (220235|2) - move to 03:40:406 -
03:41:606 (221606|1) - delete
03:42:977 (222977|0) - ^
03:45:206 (225206|0) - move to 03:45:377 -
03:47:092 (227092|1) - delete
03:51:377 - add a note
03:58:663 (238663|3) - delete all LNs these ln is not really necessary and then you can catch another sound here 04:20:606 -
04:31:577 - like 02:41:863 - 02:47:349 -
04:53:520 (293520|0,293520|2,293520|3) - delete one
05:03:120 - 你这里前面一阵2乱。 没必要在1/8在换成这样的排列。。比较难受,我觉的还是直接的高速滑梯比较好。。i原来的那种虽然也不太容易miss。但是打起来不太顺
05:15:463 (315463|0,315463|3,315463|2) - delete one
05:25:063 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986864
05:38:777 (338777|0,339292|0) - you didnt catch formal so i think you neednt do this here i suggest to emphasis the drum
05:38:777 (338777|0,339292|0,360720|0,361063|0,361406|0,361749|0) - double
06:02:777 - white line heavy drum all double




wocao tai ta ma de chang le gui :o
Spy

victorica_db wrote:

spy
00:00:120 (120|0,463|1,806|0) - this three is unnecessary.. Fixed
00:01:663 - add a note Fixed
and the snare drum i think double is better as the former
00:05:777 - add a note Fixed
00:07:149 - ^Fixed
00:08:092 - no double note just surprised me.. i think spy is always a Livestock man~ No
00:08:520 - add Fixed
00:08:863 - 00:13:749 - add miss sound :(Fixed
00:13:749 - 00:16:492 - make it mess like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986755 Done
00:16:492 - 00:17:863 - just your style... much sudden..i think you wont change ..kill others is nice hhhh Yes,my style
00:30:206 (30206|3,30549|3,30892|3,31235|3,31577|3) - double No
00:35:692 - like the 00:13:749 - 00:16:492 - Done
00:39:720 (39720|1,39720|3,39806|2,39849|1,39892|0) - make a little change let 00:39:806 (39806|2) - at 4 than start stair Done
00:41:863 - adda note No
00:44:606 - ^ No
00:51:977 (51977|1) - move to 1 Done
00:55:571 - add a note No
01:03:120 (63120|1) - move to 4.. Done
01:46:320 (106320|0,106492|3,106663|2,106835|3) - 4313 Fixed
01:47:006 (107006|3,108463|2,109835|1) - move left by one Done
01:49:749 (109749|0) - move to 3 .....3 is LN
02:00:720 (120720|0) - hmm it is not comfortable here OK then,I extended LN
02:06:292 (126292|1) - end at 02:07:577 - Done
02:30:892 - delete LN will make the pattern much more clean and nice so i suggest you to do that No
02:41:863 - 02:47:349 - i suggest to catch the main sound and drum .. because the music is changing from light to heavy Isn't it ?
02:47:349 - drum all double No,too full
02:51:463 (171463|3,171977|3) - not really clearly... if i do ,maybe i will catch vocal No
03:03:806 (183806|0,183806|3,183806|2) - needn't treble OK
03:14:777 (194777|2) - move to 1 Done
03:25:749 (205749|0,205749|3,205749|2) - needn't treble OK
03:35:349 - use the normal pattern for 1/8...now is too stupid... Change some
03:39:720 (219720|1) - delete Done
03:40:235 (220235|2) - move to 03:40:406 - Done
03:41:606 (221606|1) - delete Done
03:42:977 (222977|0) - ^ Done
03:45:206 (225206|0) - move to 03:45:377 - Done
03:47:092 (227092|1) - delete Done
03:51:377 - add a note Done
03:58:663 (238663|3) - delete all LNs these ln is not really necessary and then you can catch another sound here 04:20:606 - Done
04:31:577 - like 02:41:863 - 02:47:349 - No
04:53:520 (293520|0,293520|2,293520|3) - delete one Done
05:03:120 - 你这里前面一阵2乱。 没必要在1/8在换成这样的排列。。比较难受,我觉的还是直接的高速滑梯比较好。。i原来的那种虽然也不太容易miss。但是打起来不太顺 我自己打過了,這樣也不會太難打
05:15:463 (315463|0,315463|3,315463|2) - delete one Done
05:25:063 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986864 。。。本來我也放這樣,納米姐叫我打散,還是改回來好了
05:38:777 (338777|0,339292|0) - you didnt catch formal so i think you neednt do this here i suggest to emphasis the drum 前後都是一樣的抓音,沒理由只有這裡不行,deny
05:38:777 (338777|0,339292|0,360720|0,361063|0,361406|0,361749|0) - double Why ? no need
06:02:777 - white line heavy drum all double No




wocao tai ta ma de chang le gui :o
謝謝mod :)
長到沒朋友,害我犧牲睡覺時間看還被罵 :o
ExPew
hi onee-chan
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

ExPew wrote:

hi onee-chan
hi onee-sama
ExPew

Lieselotte wrote:

ExPew wrote:

hi onee-chan
hi onee-sama
nee-chan,

fixed unsnapped spy diff

okay here #1

as i expected, you're my rival mapper
Topic Starter
Lieselotte
lol,Thanks,onee pew sama :D
Kuo Kyoka
lol, so fast o.o
Good luck on ranking >w< Love that song
but don't quit pls ;w;
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

lol, so fast o.o
Good luck on ranking >w< Love that song
but don't quit pls ;w;
Thanks
Although I don't want to quit,but I like malody more than osumania
Spy
Wocao what happened 23333
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

Spy wrote:

Wocao what happened 23333


nimabe unsnaped
Spy

Lieselotte wrote:

Spy wrote:

Wocao what happened 23333
nimabe unsnaped
Where ?
You fixed ?
Topic Starter
Lieselotte
fixed
Spy
Ok
Bruce
Hi.Check map as Namisister's request.

[Spy's 4K Extra]
00:03:720 - Here has vibrato sound what you catched.Add a Note at 4

01:06:120 (66120|0) - This sound is not Background sound.It is guitar sound.You need delete this

01:08:606 (68606|2) - Move to 01:08:777 - You can understand my meaning

01:11:606 (71606|2) - The same likes^

01:13:406 (73406|2) - You need move to 01:13:492 - According you catch these sounds.

01:14:349 (74349|1) - Delete this.Likes ^

01:17:092 (77092|0) - ^

01:17:092 (77092|0) - ^Also the same problems

01:24:292 - If you catch 1/4 you should start at here.

02:08:092 - Here has Bass Snare and Piano sound.Seems you 02:07:920 - Double Notes.You need double there too.

02:51:977 (171977|3) - Already said this problem in IRC.But still..This Hold should be start at 02:52:149 -

03:31:749 (211749|3,211920|0) - Exchange

03:58:663 - At least need Double Notes here.1 Pattern end and it is heavy beat.The Snare sound is powerful and clrealy.

03:58:835 - Seems here you not use LongNote any more.Also you can not use LongNote before.

04:41:863 - The same problems here.

[7K Lv.40]
Too powerful.I can't find problems

If finish fix mod please call me back
Spy

Simple_Star wrote:

Hi.Check map as Namisister's request.

[Spy's 4K Extra]
00:03:720 - Here has vibrato sound what you catched.Add a Note at 4

01:06:120 (66120|0) - This sound is not Background sound.It is guitar sound.You need delete this

01:08:606 (68606|2) - Move to 01:08:777 - You can understand my meaning

01:11:606 (71606|2) - The same likes^

01:13:406 (73406|2) - You need move to 01:13:492 - According you catch these sounds.

01:14:349 (74349|1) - Delete this.Likes ^

01:17:092 (77092|0) - ^

01:17:092 (77092|0) - ^Also the same problems

01:24:292 - If you catch 1/4 you should start at here.

02:08:092 - Here has Bass Snare and Piano sound.Seems you 02:07:920 - Double Notes.You need double there too.

02:51:977 (171977|3) - Already said this problem in IRC.But still..This Hold should be start at 02:52:149 -

03:31:749 (211749|3,211920|0) - Exchange

03:58:663 - At least need Double Notes here.1 Pattern end and it is heavy beat.The Snare sound is powerful and clrealy. Is crash instead of snare.

03:58:835 - Seems here you not use LongNote any more.Also you can not use LongNote before. Change ways to write those parts.

04:41:863 - The same problems here.

[7K Lv.40]
Too powerful.I can't find problems

If finish fix mod please call me back
OK fixed,thanks for mod :)
Bruce
OK Time to #2 Bubbled
Rumia-
best 2014 map
Kuo Kyoka
lol, so fast
Grats Lieselotte and Spy \(owo)/ nice song and a good map~
Topic Starter
Lieselotte

Rumia- wrote:

best 2014 map

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

lol, so fast
Grats Lieselotte and Spy \(owo)/ nice song and a good map~
Nya~~Thanks ;)
ExPew

Rumia- wrote:

best 2014 map
omedetou nee-chan


i guess this is fastest approved map in mania
Kuo Kyoka

ExPew wrote:

Rumia- wrote:

best 2014 map
omedetou nee-chan


i guess this is fastest approved map in mania
lol, I think this is 2nd map cause Rumia has one map and approved in 24 days, but only one diff
but maybe the fastest approved map with 2 hard-diffs~
Spy
臺灣人民發來核電
IamKwaN

Spy wrote:

臺灣人民發來核電
Kuo Kyoka

Spy wrote:

臺灣人民發來核電
lol, what does it mean :v just quote for fun :3
Rumia-

Spy wrote:

臺灣人民發來核電
Kiiwa
gratz 8-)
richardfeder

Spy wrote:

臺灣人民發來核電
Bruce

Spy wrote:

臺灣人民發來核電
IamKwaN

Kiiwa wrote:

gratz 8-)
Infected Kiiwa - The Combo Breaker
Sky_Demon

Spy wrote:

臺灣人民發來核電
asd123iii

Spy wrote:

臺灣人民發來核電
Ayachi-

Spy wrote:

臺灣人民發來核電
啥?
Yuzeyun
Feedback barely audible, am I the only one? :v
Spy

_Gezo_ wrote:

Feedback barely audible, am I the only one? :v
You can point out if you have any problem.
Yuzeyun
I'd rather have confirmation because I just might hallucinate; but most hitsounds are barely different from the soft hs you put as general feedback hs.
While at some moments you can tell the difference, only the snare seems to be perceived properly; idk if that's just me. What I really feel is that there's not enough hsing >...<
Spy

_Gezo_ wrote:

I'd rather have confirmation because I just might hallucinate; but most hitsounds are barely different from the soft hs you put as general feedback hs.
While at some moments you can tell the difference, only the snare seems to be perceived properly; idk if that's just me. What I really feel is that there's not enough hsing >...<
Hmm,well,mania is not like as Standard,hitsound is use for similar sounds,instead of use for making new rhythm..etc.
I don't know whether you understand it or not.
But it is easy to understand,just use hitsounds for following original music. :)
liaoxingyao

Spy wrote:

臺灣人民發來核電
Loctav
Hi Lieselotte,

This map set has been determined to be not ready for ranked status yet, therefore we must disqualify this beatmap and return it to WIP. Please keep in mind that disqualified maps are handled by the Beatmap Appreciation Team and will be re-qualified by them. The Quality Assurance Team is not responsible for sending your beatmap back to Qualified.

This beatmap will be disqualified for the following reasons brought up by myself and PROGUY:

[Spy's 4K]

  1. We localized patterns that are specifically made for an Extra difficulty, whereas the majority of the remaining difficulty is actually an Insane. Therefore, the jackhammer sections in 01:01:749 and similiar have been deemed as unneeded difficulty spike that must be readjusted. It peaks heavily out of the remaining difficulty. At 00:16:492 and similiar we recommend to replace the sections with drumrolls (1212) or stair-styled jackhammers (1122). For 01:01:749 we recommend using either stairs (12341234) or a hold.


[7K]

  1. We think that at 01:01:749 a zig-zag pattern would play way more better (1234567654321). Waves can also work (1234567), but this up to your discretion


Since we were not satisfied with the turnout of this set, we can not let it move forward as it is. It is your responsibility to now fix the concerns listed above and find modders and BATs to help you getting this to Qualified again. We always recommend you to receive further revision by the modding community before pushing this for Qualified again.
CrazyStar
Bye,best 2014 map

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akebono
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