ljqandylee wrote:

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00:08:092 (8092|0) - 移到3？一方面有很强的连续鼓点，一方面也给连点发狂段做个警示（啥 太棒
01:24:035 - 加个note，有个snare音 Added
01:24:463 - 如果写的是鼓点的话这里也有音，而且写完一整个小节比较好 改了一些
01:26:520 - LN交接点在这，后面也全都是在蓝线处,不一一列举了，如果是刻意想在白线处接续的话，01:36:120 和01:41:692 需要改掉，不过建议还是全部改到蓝线，除非是像01:47:006这种有其他note在的情况，考虑到手感可以不改 我明天睡起來再重搞一次

其实我来骗kds的

Icing_wind wrote:

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01:11:645 - 漏音 真漏了，抱歉
01:14:378 - ↑ Fixed

太湿了 我摸不动QAQ 人形打桩机hhhhhhh

纳米姐，间谍哥 幸苦了 反正我开50%从头看到尾目光已经呆滞

CrazyStar wrote:

Discuss for some patterns

[Spy]
為什麼一開始那一節白線是放double，後面卻變成single了 更動了一下
02:47:092 (167092|2,167177|3,167349|2) - 3換成4，4換成3 Done
05:20:863 (320863|2) - 和前面幾段一樣不要和接下來的三鍵黏著吧 Done
06:07:920 (367920|1,367920|0) -
06:08:777 (368777|2,368777|3) -
我覺得可以以這音效做為雙亂的開頭和結尾
所以06:08:863 (368863|1,368863|2) - 把這邊的一顆刪掉
不然就從06:07:577 (367577|2,367577|0) - 這裡就開始放雙亂吧 我這裡是定拍加節奏，不是無腦的雙亂，這幾個都deny

題外話:我還是希望1/4的定拍可以做成交錯 交錯到沒梗了

[Nami]
00:38:777 (38777|0,38777|5) -
00:39:463 (39463|0,39463|5) -
這兩個點可以跟前面一樣寫3notes

有需要可以再找我補充

Zillah wrote:

詩譜是怎樣煉成的..
我拋下一堆建議，有沒有用就隨你們決定了

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刪
03:37:663


00:50:777 (50777|2) - 建議移去4，表達kick和effect的分別


01:26:606 (86606|2) - LN在01:26:549開始
01:27:920 (87920|1) - 01:27:920
01:30:549 (90549|3) - 01:30:663
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01:38:777 (98777|1) - 01:38:892
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01:42:892 (102892|2) - 01:42:949
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01:48:377 (108377|2) - 01:48:492
01:49:749 (109749|1) - 01:49:863
01:52:663 (112663|3) - 01:52:577
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02:05:006 (125006|2) - 02:04:920
02:06:206 (126206|1) - 02:06:292
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04:17:863 (257863|1) - 04:17:949

victorica_db wrote:

spy
00:00:120 (120|0,463|1,806|0) - this three is unnecessary.. Fixed
00:01:663 - add a note Fixed
and the snare drum i think double is better as the former
00:05:777 - add a note Fixed
00:07:149 - ^Fixed
00:08:092 - no double note just surprised me.. i think spy is always a Livestock man~ No
00:08:520 - add Fixed
00:08:863 - 00:13:749 - add miss sound Fixed
00:13:749 - 00:16:492 - make it mess like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986755 Done
00:16:492 - 00:17:863 - just your style... much sudden..i think you wont change ..kill others is nice hhhh Yes,my style
00:30:206 (30206|3,30549|3,30892|3,31235|3,31577|3) - double No
00:35:692 - like the 00:13:749 - 00:16:492 - Done
00:39:720 (39720|1,39720|3,39806|2,39849|1,39892|0) - make a little change let 00:39:806 (39806|2) - at 4 than start stair Done
00:41:863 - adda note No
00:44:606 - ^ No
00:51:977 (51977|1) - move to 1 Done
00:55:571 - add a note No
01:03:120 (63120|1) - move to 4.. Done
01:46:320 (106320|0,106492|3,106663|2,106835|3) - 4313 Fixed
01:47:006 (107006|3,108463|2,109835|1) - move left by one Done
01:49:749 (109749|0) - move to 3 .....3 is LN
02:00:720 (120720|0) - hmm it is not comfortable here OK then,I extended LN
02:06:292 (126292|1) - end at 02:07:577 - Done
02:30:892 - delete LN will make the pattern much more clean and nice so i suggest you to do that No
02:41:863 - 02:47:349 - i suggest to catch the main sound and drum .. because the music is changing from light to heavy Isn't it ?
02:47:349 - drum all double No,too full
02:51:463 (171463|3,171977|3) - not really clearly... if i do ,maybe i will catch vocal No
03:03:806 (183806|0,183806|3,183806|2) - needn't treble OK
03:14:777 (194777|2) - move to 1 Done
03:25:749 (205749|0,205749|3,205749|2) - needn't treble OK
03:35:349 - use the normal pattern for 1/8...now is too stupid... Change some
03:39:720 (219720|1) - delete Done
03:40:235 (220235|2) - move to 03:40:406 - Done
03:41:606 (221606|1) - delete Done
03:42:977 (222977|0) - ^ Done
03:45:206 (225206|0) - move to 03:45:377 - Done
03:47:092 (227092|1) - delete Done
03:51:377 - add a note Done
03:58:663 (238663|3) - delete all LNs these ln is not really necessary and then you can catch another sound here 04:20:606 - Done
04:31:577 - like 02:41:863 - 02:47:349 - No
04:53:520 (293520|0,293520|2,293520|3) - delete one Done
05:03:120 - 你这里前面一阵2乱。 没必要在1/8在换成这样的排列。。比较难受，我觉的还是直接的高速滑梯比较好。。i原来的那种虽然也不太容易miss。但是打起来不太顺 我自己打過了，這樣也不會太難打
05:15:463 (315463|0,315463|3,315463|2) - delete one Done
05:25:063 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986864 。。。本來我也放這樣，納米姐叫我打散，還是改回來好了
05:38:777 (338777|0,339292|0) - you didnt catch formal so i think you neednt do this here i suggest to emphasis the drum 前後都是一樣的抓音，沒理由只有這裡不行，deny
05:38:777 (338777|0,339292|0,360720|0,361063|0,361406|0,361749|0) - double Why ? no need
06:02:777 - white line heavy drum all double No




wocao tai ta ma de chang le gui

ExPew wrote:

hi onee-chan

Lieselotte wrote:

ExPew wrote:

hi onee-chan

hi onee-sama

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

lol, so fast o.o
Good luck on ranking >w< Love that song
but don't quit pls ;w;

Spy wrote:

Wocao what happened 23333

Lieselotte wrote:

Spy wrote:

Wocao what happened 23333

nimabe unsnaped

Simple_Star wrote:

Hi.Check map as Namisister's request.

[Spy's 4K Extra]
00:03:720 - Here has vibrato sound what you catched.Add a Note at 4

01:06:120 (66120|0) - This sound is not Background sound.It is guitar sound.You need delete this

01:08:606 (68606|2) - Move to 01:08:777 - You can understand my meaning

01:11:606 (71606|2) - The same likes^

01:13:406 (73406|2) - You need move to 01:13:492 - According you catch these sounds.

01:14:349 (74349|1) - Delete this.Likes ^

01:17:092 (77092|0) - ^

01:17:092 (77092|0) - ^Also the same problems

01:24:292 - If you catch 1/4 you should start at here.

02:08:092 - Here has Bass Snare and Piano sound.Seems you 02:07:920 - Double Notes.You need double there too.

02:51:977 (171977|3) - Already said this problem in IRC.But still..This Hold should be start at 02:52:149 -

03:31:749 (211749|3,211920|0) - Exchange

03:58:663 - At least need Double Notes here.1 Pattern end and it is heavy beat.The Snare sound is powerful and clrealy. Is crash instead of snare.

03:58:835 - Seems here you not use LongNote any more.Also you can not use LongNote before. Change ways to write those parts.

04:41:863 - The same problems here. ↑

[7K Lv.40]
Too powerful.I can't find problems

If finish fix mod please call me back