xxdeathx wrote:

Remember posting in my modding queue?

[General]
nothing i guess

[Easy]

1. 00:19:132 (3,1) - the blanket is off. go to the time at the end of (3) and observe that the approach circle doesn't go nicely with the the slider curve. http://puu.sh/aP5fQ/0ee7dcc60d.png try to blanket around the approach circle to be precise.
2. 00:26:968 (1,2) - slider end points can be closer for blanket
3. 00:46:446 (1) - i'd put an object on this tick and start the spinner later so the player can have a keypress on the last strong note before the spinner

[Normal]

1. 01:04:580 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/aP58Y/936a1ebf0b.png blanket the approach circle same way i said in easy Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:17:341 (5,6) - not the same x coordinate Fixed
2. 00:17:789 (1) - i don't like the antiflow here, please try to do something like http://puu.sh/aP4Q2/1fb544bbb6.png
3. 00:24:058 (2,1) - blanket can still be improved. middle point of (2) slider is too close Fixed
4. 00:48:908 (2,1,2,1) - try spacing the 1 beat notes close like http://puu.sh/aP4Yq/d4b816b6ea.png to fit the music
5. 01:05:923 (4,1) - drag end point of (1) further for blanket Fixed

Your easy mapping style with the frequent curvy sliders and use of good blankets especially reminds me of my first ranked map's style. Good luck on your first ranked too! Thanks

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Hard

1. 00:29:879 (2,3) - ctrl+g? Good Idea, Fixed
2. 00:30:774 (1,2) - ^ I think it's too far from previous note
3. 01:05:923 (4,1) - blanket stuffs like this, there're lots of them in this diff
4. simply nothing wrong, but maybe just still lack of patterns... u may give more vivid rhythm style if u follow both drum and vocal track in the same time... just my opinion

Normal

1. 00:09:058 (2,3) - blanket, details liket this r important in lower diffs imo (lots of issues like this, check them by urself
2. 01:00:326 this vocal beat should be followed Fixed
3. 01:15:102 (2) - arrange ds a bit Fixed
4. 01:18:013 (3) - 3/4 repeating slider here to follow the vocal? um... I mapped follow the rhythm sry

Easy

1. this diff has got the best organization in ur mapset, and it's in highest quality as well. give some stuffs like this may be ur better way to map things imo

idk how much hardworking u have spent on this, but i think it can get better in various meanings. try to mod more others' maps, u'll improve soon imo.

good luck Thanks

Genocide wrote:

general
01:02:789 (1) - end kiai Fixed
01:04:580 second kiai Fixed


[hard]
00:03:461 (1) - move to x400 y176 http://puu.sh/b30Ri/d7cd66085e.png I think it don't need to move sry.
00:33:237 (2) - last hit use clap nope
01:05:923 (4) - use circle
and same as 5 http://puu.sh/b30Yf/4211516494.png Fixed

[easy]
00:53:834 (5) - use circle same as (6) http://puu.sh/b317c/92fc79e943.png nope
5=x176 y88 whistle
6=x80 y120 clap
00:54:729 (1) - nc nope

No KD are you sure ? I think it can shoot KD (If you change your mind, you can send PM. to me)

Aka wrote:

hi


normal

・overall i'd recommend to use 1.0x DS for 1/2 overlaps. 1.2 for such a low bpm in this diff feels and looks not good. exactly on such patterns as you have there 00:56:744 (3,4,5,1) - and 01:00:326 (2,3,4) - there, it feels huge um... i think DS 1.0x is too easy for normal diff.
・00:09:058 (2,3) - nazi perfect blanket there or such curve is on purpose? Fixed
・00:10:625 (1) - the spinner suits the sound prefectly but pretty short and its hard to get 1k there a bit. mmmind replacing it with a slider? yes it could be slider but i have no idea to draw slider to snap next note
・00:14:879 (4,5) - nazi blanket this one better by using sliderfollowcircle thing
・00:28:759 (1,1) - this overlap is visible while gameplay due to low ar. you could rotate the slider ~30゜ to aviod this Fixed in another way
・00:53:834 (1) - mind moving this a bit up for smoother flow after (3)? Fixed

SPOILER

・ you have a bunch of 1/2 notes in the kiai and completely forgot about 1/2 sliders >: this part is pretty stressful imo. consider diluting it by replacing these 01:14:879 (1,2) - 01:05:923 (3,4) - as sliders um... i think it's make them easier but it's not beautiful, if the other modder say this i'll fix it


easy

・00:10:177 (1) - i have the same feeling about the spinner in your normal diff ;_; Fixed
・00:26:296 (4) - such a kick-slider is fitting perfectly there 00:17:565 (1) - . while this one starts on a pretty quiet sound
・01:16:446 (2) - u've never skipped a beat like there in the middle of this slider. consider replacing this with a 1/2 reverse one? Fixed


hard

・00:30:326 (4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - just a suggestion but this part is pretty straight and plays in a sharp way. some curve wouldnt hurt? nice idea, fixed

SPOILER

・01:03:237 (3,4) - 00:56:744 (4,5,6) - honestly i start worrying about the difficulty gap when you make such jumps lol could you lower spacing a bit there? ok, lower space in 00:56:744 (4,5,6)
・01:05:252 (2,3) - blanket? Fixed
・01:11:744 (1) - the arch of this slider goes not PERFECTLY smooth after the stream. >: what about moving the 2nd anchor point to 229|51 and last on 296|53 Fixed


thats all from me owo pretty clean mapset ww
good luck~

1. The mp3 you are using has a cut from the end of the anime at the very beginning before the music starts. It sounds bad, we should try and find a different one to use before ranking.

1. 00:06:147 (3,1) - I didn't feel like the anti-jump worked very well here. Can I suggest to stack the 1 under the 3? I like having no movement at all to the 1, try it and see if you agree.
   
   Example

   
2. 00:33:685 (4) - Drum clap fits really well here.
   
3. 00:36:595 (4) - Try a whistle on the head to follow with the vocals like at 00:40:177 (4).
   
4. 00:37:117 (5) - How about a drum finish on the end instead of whistle? Fits better with the music imo.
   
5. 00:40:625 - Add a green line and change the sample set to S:C1 so the whistle on 00:40:849 (5) is your custom one.
   
6. 00:47:789 (5) - Try this at (256,208) for a better staircase effect into 1. See if you like it better.
   
   Example

   
7. 01:11:296 (2,3,4,5) - Four claps is too much here imo. It will fit nicer with the music if you remove the claps from 4 and 5 and add a whistle to 4. Try it and see if you agree.
   
8. 01:13:983 (2,3,4) - Make sure to fix the spacing in this triplet and make it even.
   
9. 01:23:833 (3,4,5) - Three claps in a row is too loud imo. I recommend removing the claps from 4 and 5 and adding a whistle to 5. Try it.

1. 00:28:088 (2) - Since this is a new measure here maybe you can use a different rhythm than the previous combo. I suggest to remove the repeat from this slider, that will follow the music better imo. Maybe you can try like this:
   
   Example

   
2. 00:33:237 (4) - You can try a drum clap on the end here.
   
3. 00:34:132 (1,2,3,4) - Adjust the placements to have a more even half circle here:
   
   Example

   
   1 - (267,333)
   2 - (168,264)
   3 - (168,144)
   4 - (260,68)
4. 00:37:267 (3) - Try a drum finish.
   
5. 00:44:431 (3) - Try a whistle on the end, I think more sound here would be better.
   
6. 01:02:789 - Add a green line and end the kiai here to match the Hard difficulty. They need to be the same.

1. 00:10:177 (3) - I'd like for the slider to start at 00:10:625. I think it could follow the music much nicer. Maybe you can try this rhythm:
   
   Example

   
   With the 2 at 00:09:729.
2. 00:33:013 (3) - Drum clap on the end is nice.
   
3. 00:35:923 (3) - Drum finish on the end is nice as well.
   
4. 00:50:252 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Too many 1/1 sliders in a row imo, it can be easy to lose a feel for the beat. I think you could replace one of the sliders with two circles, maybe 00:52:938 (4).
   
5. 01:02:789 - Add a green line and end the kiai here to match the Hard difficulty. They need to be the same.

Loneight wrote:

Hi o/
Request from My googledoc.

• 
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. inconsistency in kiai times, plz check it Oh! my fault, fixed
   
   kiai time

   Easy :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:252, ends on 01:03:237
   Normal :
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:252, ends on 01:03:237
   Hard:
   Kiai #1: Starts on 00:50:252, ends on 01:02:789

[Easy]

1. 00:10:177 (3) - a little weird, though you use this slider to follow the vocal, it starts at 00:10:625 - would be more suitable for the long tone Fixed
2. 00:26:968 (1) - a nazi suggestion, try to move it or move 00:28:759 (3) - to avoid overlap Fixed
3. 01:09:953 (3) - a nazi suggestion, move the last point to 368|264 to make the blanket perfect Fixed

~

[Normal]

1. 00:01:894 (1,2) - I find this is same as Easy's 00:01:894 (1,2) - , how about make them different? www umm... I have no idea to map this part but i make them different now lol ~
2. 00:37:267 (3) - don't make it under the slider with a stack, it's hard for newbie to read. And 00:40:849 (3) - same as here Fixed
3. 01:05:028 (2) - a nazi suggestion, move to 452|196, would be more pretty for blanket IMO Fixed

~

[Hard]

1. 00:45:774 (5) - the speed suddenly appear, I can't get any prompt for it, try to NC? [/color]
2. 00:49:356 (1,2,1) - how about make a anti-jump? it'd be more fun and suitable to play, just 00:49:356 (1) - move to 240|40, and 00:49:804 (2) - to 248|72 Fixed
3. 01:14:319 (3,4) - plz make consistency in distance, or you're deliberately? lol It's not deliberately it's my mistake lol, Fixed

~

that's all
seems you had found a lot of mods, though I think you can improve your arrangement, anyway, great job Thanks

call me back after you check mine and UnitedWesin's :3

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey there. From #modreq.

Well I was doing the mod and then Loneight posted, so I'll just leave mine here as well. Not the first time this has happened to me orz.

[General]

1. The mp3 you are using has a cut from the end of the anime at the very beginning before the music starts. It sounds bad, we should try and find a different one to use before ranking.

[Hard]

1. 00:06:147 (3,1) - I didn't feel like the anti-jump worked very well here. Can I suggest to stack the 1 under the 3? I like having no movement at all to the 1, try it and see if you agree. I think it's a bit too hard to read in this diff.? IMO
   
   Example

   
2. 00:33:685 (4) - Drum clap fits really well here. umm... I think the sound is too weird, sry
   
3. 00:36:595 (4) - Try a whistle on the head to follow with the vocals like at 00:40:177 (4). Fixed
   
4. 00:37:117 (5) - How about a drum finish on the end instead of whistle? Fits better with the music imo. Fixed
   
5. 00:40:625 - Add a green line and change the sample set to S:C1 so the whistle on 00:40:849 (5) is your custom one. Fixed
   
6. 00:47:789 (5) - Try this at (256,208) for a better staircase effect into 1. See if you like it better. sounds good, Fixed
   
   Example

   
7. 01:11:296 (2,3,4,5) - Four claps is too much here imo. It will fit nicer with the music if you remove the claps from 4 and 5 and add a whistle to 4. Try it and see if you agree. Fixed
   
8. 01:13:983 (2,3,4) - Make sure to fix the spacing in this triplet and make it even. Fixed
   
9. 01:23:833 (3,4,5) - Three claps in a row is too loud imo. I recommend removing the claps from 4 and 5 and adding a whistle to 5. Try it. I only change 5 to whistle because sound better than remove 4 and 5 IMO

[Normal]

1. 00:28:088 (2) - Since this is a new measure here maybe you can use a different rhythm than the previous combo. I suggest to remove the repeat from this slider, that will follow the music better imo. Maybe you can try like this: Fixed
   
   Example

   
2. 00:33:237 (4) - You can try a drum clap on the end here. same at hard, sry
   
3. 00:34:132 (1,2,3,4) - Adjust the placements to have a more even half circle here: Fixed
   
   Example

   
   1 - (267,333)
   2 - (168,264)
   3 - (168,144)
   4 - (260,68)
4. 00:37:267 (3) - Try a drum finish. Fixed
   
5. 00:44:431 (3) - Try a whistle on the end, I think more sound here would be better. Fixed
   
6. 01:02:789 - Add a green line and end the kiai here to match the Hard difficulty. They need to be the same. i fixed in hard

[Easy]

1. 00:10:177 (3) - I'd like for the slider to start at 00:10:625. I think it could follow the music much nicer. Maybe you can try this rhythm: Fixed
   
   Example

   
   With the 2 at 00:09:729.
2. 00:33:013 (3) - Drum clap on the end is nice. same at hard sry.
   
3. 00:35:923 (3) - Drum finish on the end is nice as well. Fixed
   
4. 00:50:252 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Too many 1/1 sliders in a row imo, it can be easy to lose a feel for the beat. I think you could replace one of the sliders with two circles, maybe 00:52:938 (4). Fixed
   
5. 01:02:789 - Add a green line and end the kiai here to match the Hard difficulty. They need to be the same. same at normal

Pretty good map, I wouldn't have thought it was your first for ranking.
Of course I'll leave the bubble to Loneight.

Loneight wrote:

recheck
no kd plz

• 
  Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
  Blue is recommended to fix
  red is unrankable issue

[general]

1. oops...my mistake, disable the widescreen support, it's stroryboard-only feature Fixed
2. the bitrate of a beatmap's audio file must be no higher than 192kbps. try to get it to 192kbps my mistake again i forgot to converse mp3 file sry, Fixed

[Easy]

1. 01:03:505 (2) - I miss it... maybe fix the distance? seems they almost touch each other oh Fixed

call me back after fix these

Loneight wrote:

ok! there we go~ ヽ( ･д･´)
enjoy your first bubble!

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hey.
Can you try this timing? I think it's more accurate.

Timing

1821,447.761194029851,4,2,1,40,1,0
12546,447.761194029851,4,2,1,50,1,0
86017,447.761194029851,4,2,1,50,1,0

No KD. Try it, I can rebubble for you. Don't forget to resnap your timing sections and your preview point. Also adjust the video offset if you need.

UnitedWeSin wrote:

Bubble repair~

Oh, I'll check it tomorrow because i have a university class in the morning and i need to rest now, sorry to keep you waiting.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ - H i N a - ~

Random modding ~

[Hard]

1. 00:24:853 - How about add a note to here? it's followed vocal. I think it don't need to add a note because the sound is ok now and i want 00:20:375 (2,1) and 00:23:957 (2,1) in the same style, sorry for not change

That's all ~ nice realax map ~ Thanks

Call me back ~

Rule wrote:

Do not rank two maps for same song in a week period.

Kawayi Rika wrote:

ok sorry my misstake, call me back later.

Nwolf wrote:

I think it would be better to wait for the taiko set first that has been unqualified for minor issues, it seems unfair that it has to wait for two standard sets before a BAT is able to rerank it (which he already tried but there's the other qualified set now)

Kawayi Rika wrote:

back for qualifly ~

Sellenite wrote:

good

xxdeathx wrote:

congratz for real on your first ranked map!

Karia wrote:

Oh, gratz! xD

Rumia- wrote:

congratz ! ! love this map ww

Genocide wrote:

good
gratz! HiNa

KantoKun wrote:

ในที่สุดก็แรงค์ :3

congtraz for first rank XD!!

KantoKun wrote:

ในที่สุดก็แรงค์ :3

congtraz for first rank XD!!

HabiHolic wrote:

KantoKun wrote:

ในที่สุดก็แรงค์ :3

congtraz for first rank XD!!