glad to hear this >.<ac585318 wrote:
A really enjoyable song / beatmap to play
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Nagarekawa Girls - Mirai Shoujotachi
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Topic Starter
Verlaren
From Aincrad's modding queue.
Sorry for the delay.
Easy:
00:13:559 (3) - remove whistle
00:17:845 (1) - remove whistle and clap
01:06:416 (1) - remove finish
01:07:666 (3) - remove finish from slider's end
Normal:
00:14:452 (6) - remove clap from slider's start
00:14:988 (7) - remove whistle?
01:26:059 (1) - remove finish from slider's start
Fycho's hard:
no comments, good job
Locodol:
01:26:059 (1) - add whistle, but remove finish
Good map, gl
Sorry for the delay.
Easy:
00:13:559 (3) - remove whistle
00:17:845 (1) - remove whistle and clap
01:06:416 (1) - remove finish
01:07:666 (3) - remove finish from slider's end
Normal:
00:14:452 (6) - remove clap from slider's start
00:14:988 (7) - remove whistle?
01:26:059 (1) - remove finish from slider's start
Fycho's hard:
no comments, good job
Locodol:
01:26:059 (1) - add whistle, but remove finish
Good map, gl
Topic Starter
fix some~Verlaren wrote:
From Aincrad's modding queue.
Sorry for the delay.
Easy:
00:13:559 (3) - remove whistle
00:17:845 (1) - remove whistle and clap
01:06:416 (1) - remove finish
01:07:666 (3) - remove finish from slider's end
Normal:
00:14:452 (6) - remove clap from slider's start
00:14:988 (7) - remove whistle?
01:26:059 (1) - remove finish from slider's start
Fycho's hard:
no comments, good job
Locodol:
01:26:059 (1) - add whistle, but remove finish
Good map, gl
thanks for mod
Cool. Just some suggestions before we get this going.
[General]
- Please don't use a negative offset. I don't see harm in setting it at 702.
[Locodol]
- The chorus is really overmapped ;_; I hear 1/4's where there aren't supposed to be 1/4's.
- 00:02:131 (3) - A better flowing pattern would be if you place this near the tail of (2). That way, (2) will flow into (3) which makes the play smoother. Up to you though if you want to follow. (You may have to reposition your next combo though). http://puu.sh/bbpKb/3f2e55fb5d.jpg
- 00:04:988 (1,2) - There's really no music at 00:05:434, yet I can hear faint music at 00:05:345-. It would be better if you ended (1) here at 00:05:345- instead. The 3/4 slider doesn't really fit here.
- 00:06:059 (3) - IMO it would play smoother if you make the previous slider point towards this note.
- 00:08:916 (2) - Just a personal preference, but placing this above (1) and (3) instead of below, complements the fact that it's positioned on the upper side of the playscreen. (Better aesthetic IMO). https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976345
- 00:11:595 (1) - Sorry but slider looks ugly ;_;
- 00:30:345 (3,4,1) - This feels kind of sudden IMO on the first play. Move (4) closer to (3) at least, so they it doesn't stack with (1). You can use spacing similar to 00:35:345 (2)-.
- 00:36:059 (4,1) - Position this so that (4) is in the middle of (1). It looks better aesthetically.https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976358
- 00:36:952 (3,4,5,6) - I was expecting a perfect triangle here (at least with (3,4,5).)
- 00:38:381 (3) - The overlapping here looks bad IMO. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976367
- 00:38:916 (4,1) - Move (4) just a little bit closer to (1) so that it'll be consistent with your spacing at 00:37:845 (1,2) - .
- 00:48:381 (1) - Why the sudden slider velocity change? Make it more subtle if you really want one, maybe 1.25x?
- 01:04:809 (1,2,3,4,1) - The 1/4 here all have inconsistent spacing! (1,2) have different spacing from (3,4), from (4,5) and (4,1). Pick one spacing and stick with it.
- 01:06:773 (4,5) - Big jump here IMO. Tone it down? http://puu.sh/bbqUW/0e7b43d46c.jpg
- 01:14:184 (3,4) - Space this normally instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976412
- 01:26:059 (1,2) - I was expecting a big jump here
Hard also had a stack and I was expecting something more difficult.
[Fycho's Hard]
- Perfect!
[Normal]
- 00:02:845 (4,1,2,3,4) - The current combo doesn't really flow nicely from previous slider. May I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976445
- 00:50:702 (4,5,6,7,1) - May I suggest this pattern for better oval flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976458
- 00:59:273 (3,4,5) - The flow isn't that nice. May I suggest this pattern instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976460
[Easy]
- 00:13:916 (4,5) - Adjust (4) upwards a bit for better flow. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976463
For [Locodol], I would suggest you get an opinion of a QAT first if he thinks it is overmapped. (Just asking for a test play is fine.)
Other than that, other diffs are ready already IMO. (Easy and Normal are in the more difficult spectrum of their respective classifications, but fair enough IMO.)
[General]
- Please don't use a negative offset. I don't see harm in setting it at 702.
[Locodol]
- The chorus is really overmapped ;_; I hear 1/4's where there aren't supposed to be 1/4's.
- 00:02:131 (3) - A better flowing pattern would be if you place this near the tail of (2). That way, (2) will flow into (3) which makes the play smoother. Up to you though if you want to follow. (You may have to reposition your next combo though). http://puu.sh/bbpKb/3f2e55fb5d.jpg
- 00:04:988 (1,2) - There's really no music at 00:05:434, yet I can hear faint music at 00:05:345-. It would be better if you ended (1) here at 00:05:345- instead. The 3/4 slider doesn't really fit here.
- 00:06:059 (3) - IMO it would play smoother if you make the previous slider point towards this note.
- 00:08:916 (2) - Just a personal preference, but placing this above (1) and (3) instead of below, complements the fact that it's positioned on the upper side of the playscreen. (Better aesthetic IMO). https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976345
- 00:11:595 (1) - Sorry but slider looks ugly ;_;
- 00:30:345 (3,4,1) - This feels kind of sudden IMO on the first play. Move (4) closer to (3) at least, so they it doesn't stack with (1). You can use spacing similar to 00:35:345 (2)-.
- 00:36:059 (4,1) - Position this so that (4) is in the middle of (1). It looks better aesthetically.https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976358
- 00:36:952 (3,4,5,6) - I was expecting a perfect triangle here (at least with (3,4,5).)
- 00:38:381 (3) - The overlapping here looks bad IMO. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976367
- 00:38:916 (4,1) - Move (4) just a little bit closer to (1) so that it'll be consistent with your spacing at 00:37:845 (1,2) - .
- 00:48:381 (1) - Why the sudden slider velocity change? Make it more subtle if you really want one, maybe 1.25x?
- 01:04:809 (1,2,3,4,1) - The 1/4 here all have inconsistent spacing! (1,2) have different spacing from (3,4), from (4,5) and (4,1). Pick one spacing and stick with it.
- 01:06:773 (4,5) - Big jump here IMO. Tone it down? http://puu.sh/bbqUW/0e7b43d46c.jpg
- 01:14:184 (3,4) - Space this normally instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976412
- 01:26:059 (1,2) - I was expecting a big jump here
Hard also had a stack and I was expecting something more difficult.[Fycho's Hard]
- Perfect!
[Normal]
- 00:02:845 (4,1,2,3,4) - The current combo doesn't really flow nicely from previous slider. May I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976445
- 00:50:702 (4,5,6,7,1) - May I suggest this pattern for better oval flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976458
- 00:59:273 (3,4,5) - The flow isn't that nice. May I suggest this pattern instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976460
[Easy]
- 00:13:916 (4,5) - Adjust (4) upwards a bit for better flow. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976463
For [Locodol], I would suggest you get an opinion of a QAT first if he thinks it is overmapped. (Just asking for a test play is fine.)
Other than that, other diffs are ready already IMO. (Easy and Normal are in the more difficult spectrum of their respective classifications, but fair enough IMO.)
Topic Starter
easy and normal diff all fixedNoHitter wrote:
Cool. Just some suggestions before we get this going.
[General]
- Please don't use a negative offset. I don't see harm in setting it at 702. okay fixed! just because I dont know if it can work when red line and green line stack
[Locodol]
- The chorus is really overmapped ;_; I hear 1/4's where there aren't supposed to be 1/4's.
- 00:02:131 (3) - A better flowing pattern would be if you place this near the tail of (2). That way, (2) will flow into (3) which makes the play smoother. Up to you though if you want to follow. (You may have to reposition your next combo though). http://puu.sh/bbpKb/3f2e55fb5d.jpg Amm the current flow is okay imo.(a liittle lazy to change all the pattern after>.<)
- 00:04:988 (1,2) - There's really no music at 00:05:434, yet I can hear faint music at 00:05:345-. It would be better if you ended (1) here at 00:05:345- instead. The 3/4 slider doesn't really fit here. yes here has no music, thats why I use 5% volum. and I use 3/4 slider just to express the "me" sorry I want to keep this >.<
- 00:06:059 (3) - IMO it would play smoother if you make the previous slider point towards this note. sure
- 00:08:916 (2) - Just a personal preference, but placing this above (1) and (3) instead of below, complements the fact that it's positioned on the upper side of the playscreen. (Better aesthetic IMO). https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976345 the flow here is something like this .feel better imo when I testplay>.<
- 00:11:595 (1) - Sorry but slider looks ugly ;_; 0.0 let me consider another one
- 00:30:345 (3,4,1) - This feels kind of sudden IMO on the first play. Move (4) closer to (3) at least, so they it doesn't stack with (1). You can use spacing similar to 00:35:345 (2)-. okay~fixed (though I think this appearred normally in recently map
- 00:36:059 (4,1) - Position this so that (4) is in the middle of (1). It looks better aesthetically.https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976358 okay fixed
- 00:36:952 (3,4,5,6) - I was expecting a perfect triangle here (at least with (3,4,5).) okay~fixed
- 00:38:381 (3) - The overlapping here looks bad IMO. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976367 I want to keep this, I like this overlapping!
- 00:38:916 (4,1) - Move (4) just a little bit closer to (1) so that it'll be consistent with your spacing at 00:37:845 (1,2) - .
- 00:48:381 (1) - Why the sudden slider velocity change? Make it more subtle if you really want one, maybe 1.25x? just because the music "chu"~1.5x is not hard here
- 01:04:809 (1,2,3,4,1) - The 1/4 here all have inconsistent spacing! (1,2) have different spacing from (3,4), from (4,5) and (4,1). Pick one spacing and stick with it. because same spacing is really boring for insane diff. and I think these 1/4 slider jump is easy to play.
- 01:06:773 (4,5) - Big jump here IMO. Tone it down? http://puu.sh/bbqUW/0e7b43d46c.jpg If turn it down, the next jumo will be hard to play. this slider jump is easier than next note jump and harder than prev. it will be smooth transition
- 01:14:184 (3,4) - Space this normally instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976412 this pattern doesn't fit this music and harder to play imo
- 01:26:059 (1,2) - I was expecting a big jump here
[Fycho's Hard]
- Perfect!
[Normal]
- 00:02:845 (4,1,2,3,4) - The current combo doesn't really flow nicely from previous slider. May I suggest: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976445
- 00:50:702 (4,5,6,7,1) - May I suggest this pattern for better oval flow? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976458
- 00:59:273 (3,4,5) - The flow isn't that nice. May I suggest this pattern instead? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976460
[Easy]
- 00:13:916 (4,5) - Adjust (4) upwards a bit for better flow. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1976463
For [Locodol], I would suggest you get an opinion of a QAT first if he thinks it is overmapped. (Just asking for a test play is fine.)
Other than that, other diffs are ready already IMO. (Easy and Normal are in the more difficult spectrum of their respective classifications, but fair enough IMO.)
sorry for refuse so many suggestion in insane diff
about [Locodol]. I have already ask for many players testplay. and they said those overmapped is okay for play.(just like guy's map >,<)
If you think neccessary I will find a QAT
really thanks for mod!
I'd consider this amount of overmapping fine, didn't bother me personally
recommended some setting changes though
Offset should be the same
recommended some setting changes though
- Easy OD -1
- Fycho's OD +1 or +.5
- Locodol OD +1
Offset should be the same
Topic Starter
really thanks for mp3 file >.<captin1 wrote:
I'd consider this amount of overmapping fine, didn't bother me personally
recommended some setting changes thoughThe mp3 quality is also an issue, I did some working around and came up with this http://puu.sh/bclst.mp3
- Easy OD -1 fixed
- Fycho's OD +1 or +.5 fycho said he want to keep this
- Locodol OD +1 fixed
Offset should be the same
A bunch of minor suggestions.
Good luck
SPOILER
09:57 KSHR: check Normal diff
09:57 KSHR: you will shout "WTF"
09:58 kamisamaaa: ?
09:58 kamisamaaa: what happened
09:58 KSHR: 00:00:702 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
09:59 kamisamaaa: 0.0
09:59 kamisamaaa: a mistake
09:59 kamisamaaa: just add 4ms on frist green line
09:59 KSHR: oh, finally noticed!
10:00 kamisamaaa: because I change the red line yesteday >.< and forget to fix this greenline
10:00 KSHR: 00:18:202 (1) - too soon after a spinner
10:01 KSHR: you can fix this easily by deleting this note imo
10:02 kamisamaaa: others told me 1/1 is okay for a normal diff>.<
10:02 KSHR: nope.
10:02 KSHR: actually I desqualified a map for this reason
10:02 KSHR: I'm sure it's an unrankable issue
10:03 kamisamaaa: okay delete that note
10:03 kamisamaaa: sounds a little strange haha
10:03 KSHR: not really to me :p
10:03 KSHR: Easy and Normal are difficulties for beginners, then there should be enough recovery after each spinner :p
10:04 KSHR: and definitely 1/1 beat in this BPM is not enough
10:05 kamisamaaa: 00:18:916 (2) - maybe I should also delete this note?
10:06 KSHR: or,
10:07 KSHR: 00:15:166 (1) - move this spinner end to 00:17:130 - , and add an extra note at 00:17:844 - ? This also will work imo
10:07 kamisamaaa: yes! this is better
10:08 KSHR: dont forget to change a hitsound on the spinner end :p
10:09 kamisamaaa: :D
10:09 KSHR: 01:26:059 (1) - Hmmmmmmmmm
10:09 KSHR: lol
10:10 kamisamaaa: 0.0
10:11 kamisamaaa: same with above
10:11 kamisamaaa: end spinner 01:24:987
10:11 kamisamaaa: 01:24:987
10:11 kamisamaaa: and add a note
10:12 KSHR: where will you add at?
10:12 kamisamaaa: 01:25:701
10:12 kamisamaaa: add a note here
10:12 KSHR: I got another idea
10:13 KSHR: just shorten this spinner by 1/1 beat, and can follow the drum line
10:13 kamisamaaa: good idea
10:14 KSHR: probably I should check Easy as well?
10:14 KSHR: lol
10:14 kamisamaaa: can I also use this in easy?
10:15 kamisamaaa: If you have time >.<
10:15 KSHR: hmmm, 2/1 is a bit short for Easy diffs imo
10:17 KSHR: 00:26:416 (1,2,3) - kidna sounds awkward to me
10:18 KSHR: http://puu.sh/bdsRH/0c73db1dde.jpg
10:18 KSHR: try this once^
10:18 KSHR: dunno if it suits you though
10:18 kamisamaaa: let me try this frist
10:19 KSHR: hmm, mine also sounds..awkward....
10:19 KSHR: why I suggested it lol
10:20 kamisamaaa: \o/
10:20 KSHR: ohhhhh 2nd suggestion http://puu.sh/bdt0P/d6c5bdfcc6.jpg
10:22 kamisamaaa: sounds better
10:22 kamisamaaa: :D
10:23 KSHR: wow there is no note that is too soon after a spinner
10:23 KSHR: nice
10:24 kamisamaaa: because there is no note after a spinner
10:24 kamisamaaa: lol
10:24 KSHR: yeah lol
10:24 KSHR: I have enough time to check the hardest one as well :3
10:25 kamisamaaa: lucky~
10:26 KSHR: yay
10:26 KSHR: 00:04:988 (1) - this should be 1/1 considering the vocal ends at around a white tick?
10:26 KSHR: 00:06:416 (1) - ^
10:27 kamisamaaa: just want to express the long vocal
10:28 kamisamaaa: 00:06:862- you can hear this "do" continue to the blue line
10:28 kamisamaaa: 00:06:862
10:28 KSHR: *to
10:28 kamisamaaa: 00:06:862-
10:28 kamisamaaa: 00:06:862-
10:29 kamisamaaa: ??
10:29 kamisamaaa: why this time cant become a link...
10:29 KSHR: lol
10:30 KSHR: 00:11:595 (1) - I wonder who can expect this slider change..
10:30 KSHR: considering anti-spacing is used at 00:10:523 (1,2,3) - , this sldier speed also should get toned down?
10:30 kamisamaaa: I cant distinguish 'to' and 'do' in Japanese >.<
10:30 KSHR: the rhythm itself is nice though
10:31 KSHR: you will get used to hear someday ;p
10:32 KSHR: 00:11:594 (4) - personally I think this also can be placed in 0.50x speed
10:32 kamisamaaa: yes
10:32 kamisamaaa: I change to 0.5x slider now
10:32 KSHR: cool
10:33 KSHR: 00:36:059 (4) - this is currently against the flow!
10:34 KSHR: Ctrl+G will work well imo
10:34 kamisamaaa: ctrl+G this because of the HW's mod
10:34 kamisamaaa: lol
10:34 KSHR: WTF!?
10:34 kamisamaaa: and I testplay it . it's okay for play
10:35 KSHR: 00:46:773 (3) - but this one..!
10:35 kamisamaaa: haha
10:35 KSHR: I guess you wanted to follow the song?
10:35 kamisamaaa: this is just for fun
10:35 kamisamaaa: yes
10:36 kamisamaaa: 00:46:773 (3,4) - and 00:46:416 (1,2) -
10:36 kamisamaaa: these two is different group
10:36 KSHR: hmm.. then you can rearrange these slider's directions like ↑↑↓↓
10:36 KSHR: oops *↓↓↑↑
10:37 kamisamaaa: 0.0
10:37 KSHR: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981651
10:37 KSHR: like this-
10:37 KSHR: ^*
10:38 KSHR: this can also follow the song, right?
10:38 kamisamaaa: yes
10:38 kamisamaaa: you are right
10:41 KSHR: 01:15:345 (2) - this kinda sounds strange to me
10:41 KSHR: maybe 1 note will work much better?
10:41 KSHR: I mean http://puu.sh/bduiQ/e7bf1f5ab6.jpg
10:43 KSHR: 01:26:059 (1,2) - If these notes were placed on the left character's boobs, I would like this difficulty more. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1981670
10:43 kamisamaaa: hmmm just because I like this kind of rhythm
10:43 kamisamaaa: vocal is still continue at 01:15:434
10:43 kamisamaaa: slider head follow the drum and body express the vocal
10:44 KSHR: yeah, it's up to you whether or not to change ;p
10:44 KSHR: I will never force to fix unless it is an unrankable issue
10:44 kamisamaaa: I see. just give you the reason why I keep this
10:45 kamisamaaa: :D
10:45 KSHR: nice :3
10:45 kamisamaaa: 01:26:059 (1,2) - whats your mean of these notes?
10:46 KSHR: that's just a joke!
10:46 KSHR: read carefully!
10:46 kamisamaaa: 0.0
10:46 KSHR: you know what boobs mean?
10:46 kamisamaaa: OH i understood ......
10:46 kamisamaaa: yes
10:46 KSHR: wwwww
10:47 kamisamaaa: wwwww
10:47 KSHR: as I said,
10:47 kamisamaaa: move these notes between two girls mouth~
10:47 KSHR: it's up to you whether or not to change
10:47 kamisamaaa: http://puu.sh/bduEM/d8bbd6b0ec.jpg
10:47 kamisamaaa: haha
10:48 KSHR: THAT ALSO WOULD BE GREAT
10:48 kamisamaaa: maybe this will be better
10:48 KSHR: well that's all I can point out "for now"
10:49 KSHR: Melophobia poking me so much.. w
10:49 kamisamaaa: really thank you >.<
10:49 KSHR: anytime :3
10:49 kamisamaaa: :D
Good luck
Fair enough.
Topic Starter
thank you NoHitterNoHitter wrote:
Fair enough.
Shohei Ohtani
MOM WATCH OUT, YOU'RE GONNA HIT THAT MEME!!
Insane:
00:18:202 (1,2,3) - This flow is kind of weird since I'm forcibly jerking backwards, which is no fun
00:46:416 (1,2,3,4) - N. . . nah.
00:48:381 (1) - FRIEND IT IS OK YOU DO NOT NEED TO GO THIS FAST THERE IS A SPEED LIMIT
00:55:345 (1,1,1) - Not sure you need these NCs
01:15:523 (3) - rip slidertrains no fun
Hard:
00:46:773 (2,3) - now this makes like 0 sense
00:48:202 (2,3) - ^
00:49:631 (3,4) - ^
Normal:
ye
Easy:
00:27:666 (2) - Lower these points so it's more of a ~ shape. Right now its angling way too much upward
It's a pretty ok map and it's a shame that it took this long for someone to come and fix stuff.
Unless there's something I'm missing. Which I hope not.
Insane:
00:18:202 (1,2,3) - This flow is kind of weird since I'm forcibly jerking backwards, which is no fun
00:46:416 (1,2,3,4) - N. . . nah.
00:48:381 (1) - FRIEND IT IS OK YOU DO NOT NEED TO GO THIS FAST THERE IS A SPEED LIMIT
00:55:345 (1,1,1) - Not sure you need these NCs
01:15:523 (3) - rip slidertrains no fun
Hard:
00:46:773 (2,3) - now this makes like 0 sense
00:48:202 (2,3) - ^
00:49:631 (3,4) - ^
Normal:
ye
Easy:
00:27:666 (2) - Lower these points so it's more of a ~ shape. Right now its angling way too much upward
It's a pretty ok map and it's a shame that it took this long for someone to come and fix stuff.
Unless there's something I'm missing. Which I hope not.
Topic Starter
thank you and wait for fychoCDFA wrote:
MOM WATCH OUT, YOU'RE GONNA HIT THAT MEME!!
Insane:
00:18:202 (1,2,3) - This flow is kind of weird since I'm forcibly jerking backwards, which is no fun okay changed
00:46:416 (1,2,3,4) - N. . . nah.
00:48:381 (1) - FRIEND IT IS OK YOU DO NOT NEED TO GO THIS FAST THERE IS A SPEED LIMIT just want to express the feel on "yo~" in music:D I have tried 1.0X speed but feel1,5X is much better
00:55:345 (1,1,1) - Not sure you need these NCs haha just want to make them a little beautful..because there have finish on every slider..
01:15:523 (3) - rip slidertrains no fun dont know how to set them..and use slidertrains..
Hard:
00:46:773 (2,3) - now this makes like 0 sense
00:48:202 (2,3) - ^
00:49:631 (3,4) - ^
Normal:
ye
Easy:
00:27:666 (2) - Lower these points so it's more of a ~ shape. Right now its angling way too much upward fixed..I'm not good at use slide haha
It's a pretty ok map and it's a shame that it took this long for someone to come and fix stuff.
Unless there's something I'm missing. Which I hope not.
it's just to make a direction of the two stacked circles, of course it doesn't affect the playing at all, so no change thanks.
Shohei Ohtani
Topic Starter
CDFA wrote:
A few things before I decide to rank this
1) The video is missing from Insane and Easy (At least on my end. Which are ironically enough the only diffs that were updated) my vedio file is lost and I doesnt noticed...
2) Maybe try 1.25x for the fast slider instead? okay
Ye
Shohei Ohtani
过了那么久，终于rank了
恭喜~
恭喜~
Grats!