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Rirakusu
From my queue.

OMG I love your SB so much (and it stops me from looking at notes I just watch the SB LOL what I'm doing)

And I'm not sure if it's your song's short length or your mapping skills that make me find almost no defects here!

Anyway here's my mod -

[Easy]
1. 00:14:833 (2,1) - This blanket looks strange.

[Normal]
1. 00:40:443 (4,1) - It should look like this. The circle should fit in the slider path.

[Wings]
1. 01:29:285 (2,3) - See what I wrote in Normal. This time it exceeds the slider path.
2. 01:47:028 (1) - Alright I know that you spent some time drawing this slider but can you move the two ends of it so that they don't overlap?

Done my shortest mod post ever. Only 5 non-critical-errors?! Yes that's your map. Good luck for getting ranked!
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pandorawindy

jinhang_ang wrote:

From my queue.

OMG I love your SB so much (and it stops me from looking at notes I just watch the SB LOL what I'm doing) LOL..I ll make more better sb if you like.. :)

And I'm not sure if it's your song's short length or your mapping skills that make me find almost no defects here!

Anyway here's my mod -

[Easy]
1. 00:14:833 (2,1) - This blanket looks strange. ok i adjusted it a little.

[Normal]
1. 00:40:443 (4,1) - It should look like this. The circle should fit in the slider path. looks good. fixed

[Wings]
1. 01:29:285 (2,3) - See what I wrote in Normal. This time it exceeds the slider path. ok
2. 01:47:028 (1) - Alright I know that you spent some time drawing this slider but can you move the two ends of it so that they don't overlap? fixed
oh god , i waited for a long time to wanna know wht is it in this box...its Noting!! :o
Done my shortest mod post ever. Only 5 non-critical-errors?! Yes that's your map. Good luck for getting ranked!thx for modding and playing . :)
IamKwaN
Hi 來得比較遲 看了數眼你的圖 沒啥好說的典型對稱圖 與其全都是nazi不如不摸
但skin不齊全是unrankable,詳細看https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
現在缺的是Spinner set還有Hitbursts Set的hit300g.png:
Spinner set
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png 現在只有這個,需要補上另外三個
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png

不用給我KD O.< Good luck!
(ノ・ω・)ノ
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi 來得比較遲 看了數眼你的圖 沒啥好說的典型對稱圖 與其全都是nazi不如不摸
但skin不齊全是unrankable,詳細看https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
現在缺的是Spinner set還有Hitbursts Set的hit300g.png:
Spinner set
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png 現在只有這個,需要補上另外三個
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png

不用給我KD O.< Good luck!
(ノ・ω・)ノ
已经全部加上了,谢谢kwan :D
yf_bmp
don't move to graveyard
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

yf_bmp wrote:

don't move to graveyard
好的 抽空找个mod更新一下 :D 谢谢关心~
alacat
Hey from #modreqs

[General]
  1. Please check BG size :3 You must use 1108 x 768
  2. and AIBat says this :


[Beginner]
  1. 00:11:907 (1) - You must use same spacing about x0.8
  2. 01:59:550 (3) - Same as Wings diff.


[Standard]
  1. 01:44:833 (5) - Please add a short Break time for beginners.
  2. 01:59:550 (5) - Same as Wings diff.


[Wings]
  1. HPDrain Rate +1 for nice spread.
  2. 00:26:175 (2) - How about moving this note around here ?
  3. 00:30:199 (1,2) - I feel this part looks crowded please put more distance to each other.
  4. 00:36:419 (1) - no need to add new combo here. You should consider removing this from here, and I agree your patterns of new combo here 00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - So please use same patterns around here 00:38:248 (4,1,2,3,4) -
  5. 01:52:882 (3) - I'm worry about this slider will catch this rule. I hope you remake this slider.
    ~ Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider. ~
  6. 01:59:550 (5) - I recommend you to add a new combo here for different rhythm.


Sorry I'm late ._. Call me back ;)
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

alacat wrote:

Hey from #modreqs

[General]
  1. Please check BG size :3 You must use 1108 x 768 ok fixed..
  2. and AIBat says this :
    all fixed


[Beginner]
  1. 00:11:907 (1) - You must use same spacing about x0.8 fixed
  2. 01:59:550 (3) - Same as Wings diff. fixed


[Standard]
  1. 01:44:833 (5) - Please add a short Break time for beginners. sorry , i didn't really get the meaning of what you wanna me do it..remove 01:44:833 (5,1,2,3) and add one break time?
  2. 01:59:550 (5) - Same as Wings diff. fixed


[Wings]
  1. HPDrain Rate +1 for nice spread. fixed
  2. 00:26:175 (2) - How about moving this note around here ? good idea ..
  3. 00:30:199 (1,2) - I feel this part looks crowded please put more distance to each other. ok .. the spacing has been adjusted..
  4. 00:36:419 (1) - no need to add new combo here. You should consider removing this from here, and I agree your patterns of new combo here 00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - So please use same patterns around here 00:38:248 (4,1,2,3,4) - ok fixed
  5. 01:52:882 (3) - I'm worry about this slider will catch this rule. I hope you remake this slider.
    ~ Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider. ~ i think this part is unreasonable either..i have changed this pattern and added two red lines here to catch more accurate timing..of course , beginner and standard have been changed too..what do you think about this change?
  6. 01:59:550 (5) - I recommend you to add a new combo here for different rhythm.fixed


Sorry I'm late ._. Call me back ;) okay, thank you alacat :)

I made some other maps Before you checked this map, i learned more mapping skill and i have some personal idea about this map.
[Wings]
  1. 01:32:943 (2) - you know i silent some sliders' ticksounds in this diff. and i silent all slider slide sounds. some people said i cant slient both of them at the same time..so should i fix it?
  2. 01:32:394 (1,2) - this part..hmm.. if you listen it carefully you ll find i missed one instrument sound in 01:33:126 - so i made one new pattern here but i didn't update it.. so i m waiting for your opinion ;)
  3. about the maps' tags..do you think "heart" and "feather" r necessary? i plan add "Feng Xi Yu" , it is Fiona Fung s Chinese name ;) ,i m waiting for your opinion..
alacat

pandorawindy wrote:

[Wings]
  1. 01:32:943 (2) - you know i silent some sliders' ticksounds in this diff. and i silent all slider slide sounds. some people said i cant slient both of them at the same time..so should i fix it? orz yes you must fix this point.
  2. 01:32:394 (1,2) - this part..hmm.. if you listen it carefully you ll find i missed one instrument sound in 01:33:126 - so i made one new pattern here but i didn't update it.. so i m waiting for your opinion ;)yeah, I agreed your new rhythm!
  3. about the maps' tags..do you think "heart" and "feather" r necessary? i plan add "Feng Xi Yu" , it is Fiona Fung s Chinese name ;) ,i m waiting for your opinion.. mmm.. I think "heart" and "feather" are unnecessary then, agreed you will add Chinese name :3
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

alacat wrote:

[Wings]
  1. 01:32:943 (2) - you know i silent some sliders' ticksounds in this diff. and i silent all slider slide sounds. some people said i cant slient both of them at the same time..so should i fix it? orz yes you must fix this point.
  2. 01:32:394 (1,2) - this part..hmm.. if you listen it carefully you ll find i missed one instrument sound in 01:33:126 - so i made one new pattern here but i didn't update it.. so i m waiting for your opinion ;)yeah, I agreed your new rhythm!
  3. about the maps' tags..do you think "heart" and "feather" r necessary? i plan add "Feng Xi Yu" , it is Fiona Fung s Chinese name ;) ,i m waiting for your opinion.. mmm.. I think "heart" and "feather" are unnecessary then, agreed you will add Chinese name :3
OK , all have been fixed , :3
alacat
I guess you forgot to add kiai section on Wings diff to here 01:39:711 - others fine to me :3

Let me know ~
alacat
fixed kiai sections ~

Good luck for your first rank :)

Bubbled
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

alacat wrote:

fixed kiai sections ~

Good luck for your first rank :)

Bubbled
thank you very much :)
liaoxingyao
sad 你们的图都能被泡
这图看得我一股尿
CDFA
EASY:
01:53:649 (1) - SWEET JESUS CHRIST I WAS LITERALLY ABOUT TO HIT THE RANK BUTTON BUT THEN LIKE WHY THIS NC

literally crying rn

but good otherwise
Zero__wind
ahoh I'm late
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

CDFA wrote:

EASY:
01:53:649 (1) - SWEET JESUS CHRIST I WAS LITERALLY ABOUT TO HIT THE RANK BUTTON BUT THEN LIKE WHY THIS NC

literally crying rn

but good otherwise
Oh..IDK if it s necessary to set NC behind one red line . but i have fixed it , i m a real noob with no experience.. :( Thank you for your reminding. :D

other things i have fixed: 1. I removed all my bookmarks ' lines.(only two lines per diff :oops: )

hmm.. should i give you the kud? :?:

Zero__wind wrote:

ahoh I'm late
:) hi zero_wind .. i always curious about you and lan wings ' relation :D
CDFA
we did!!!!
Time-
Nice song :)
Congrats~
Bass
Fuck
I thought they ranked deepsea's map :(

Congratz anyway
XinCrin
OMGGG FINALLY!.
Congrats pandi :D/
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

CDFA wrote:

we did!!!!
Thank you !! my first ranked map.. :)

Time- wrote:

Nice song :)
Congrats~
thanks :D

Bass wrote:

Fuck
I thought they ranked deepsea's map :(

Congratz anyway
deepsea ? who..

XinCrin wrote:

OMGGG FINALLY!.
Congrats pandi :D/
thank you xin I cant rank this without your mod at that time.
Koiyuki
gratz for ur 1st ~
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

Minakami Yuki wrote:

gratz for ur 1st ~
谢谢 :)
Sellenite
good song
Zero__wind

Bass wrote:

Fuck
I thought they ranked deepsea's map :(

Congratz anyway
feel just the same

and congratz~
KaedekaShizuru
恭喜! 1st~!
alacat
aaaaaaaaaaaaa gratz!!!!!!!!
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pandorawindy
Thank you guys !

alacat wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaaaa gratz!!!!!!!!
hah..thank you again cat .. its my first bubble , I love u !!! :)
69653863
Hey, I remember modding this back then. Congratulations for the first rank. You had potential!
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

inverness wrote:

Hey, I remember modding this back then. Congratulations for the first rank. You had potential!
oh .. i love your bonfire , pretty cool map.. and thank you for your suggestions about my sb.. it improved mine a lot.. :)
Edogawa Conan
congratz~
PatZar
omg
chinese ver please :<
Aleks719
Hey guys, party pooper is coming (/ovo)/

Hello, i'm sorry about it, but this map contains unrankable stuff, that's why i'm here

Skinning

Gameplay elements must be visible. You cannot make any element that will impair the playability of the map invisible as it will make the map unintuitive or even impossible to play.
Your 300 hitbursts are invisible.

Hitbursts must be clearly distinguishable from each other (e.g. 300/100). The best way to ensure this is to use a different color for each hitburst. Otherwise, the player won't know if they're hitting beats accurately.
50, 100k and 100g look same. more than that they are totally not informative. with low proсent of dimming they are almost invisible too. Add here your flashes and effects in SB and hitbursts are unreadable at all.

Do not make any essential gameplay elements larger than template skin dimensions (especially for combobursts). Larger elements may effect gameplay performance, and thus should be avoided. However, any elements that do not directly effect gameplay (e.g. pause-back, play-skip, etc.) may be slightly larger if a legitimate reason is given.
Actually 50/100k/100g hitbursts are larger than notes and it's unrankable too.

When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file).
Where is "SliderBorder" line? you missed it.


You use pure white combo colour(255,255,255), which is still unrankable.


For breaking 5 rules (meh), i sadly have to disqualify this map. Rest of suggestions will be added later to this post.

_____________________________
Addition:

SB
your SB can be tweaked. now it has overloads, it can cause problems to users with weak machines. These overloads are not so big, but if you have time, try to turn off unused layers in critical moments. Thank you~
00:00:199 - huh, i think this movement is not supposed to be here

Beginner
01:52:882 (2,3,1) - i'm not sure it's the best way of mapping for part, where timing is changed. Sliders are more "freindly", i'd recommend to use sliders here.
Standard
01:53:649 (1,2) - same as in Beginner, hardest place mapped by notes. Up to you of course.
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

Aleks719 wrote:

Hey guys, party pooper is coming (/ovo)/

Hello, i'm sorry about it, but this map contains unrankable stuff, that's why i'm here

Skinning

Gameplay elements must be visible. You cannot make any element that will impair the playability of the map invisible as it will make the map unintuitive or even impossible to play.
Your 300 hitbursts are invisible.

Hitbursts must be clearly distinguishable from each other (e.g. 300/100). The best way to ensure this is to use a different color for each hitburst. Otherwise, the player won't know if they're hitting beats accurately.
50, 100k and 100g look same. more than that they are totally not informative. with low proсent of dimming they are almost invisible too. Add here your flashes and effects in SB and hitbursts are unreadable at all.

Do not make any essential gameplay elements larger than template skin dimensions (especially for combobursts). Larger elements may effect gameplay performance, and thus should be avoided. However, any elements that do not directly effect gameplay (e.g. pause-back, play-skip, etc.) may be slightly larger if a legitimate reason is given.
Actually 50/100k/100g hitbursts are larger than notes and it's unrankable too.

I spend a long time to make other bursts img to replace previous stuff.but i really hard to get better choice to fit my skin.so i decided to remove all hitbursts . default bursts r good for me.

When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file).
Where is "SliderBorder" line? you missed it.

ok i added..

You use pure white combo colour(255,255,255), which is still unrankable.

fixed


For breaking 5 rules (meh), i sadly have to disqualify this map. Rest of suggestions will be added later to this post.

_____________________________
Addition:

SB
your SB can be tweaked. now it has overloads, it can cause problems to users with weak machines. These overloads are not so big, but if you have time, try to turn off unused layers in critical moments. Thank you~

yeah i have ever decrease the sb load when i started map it.I removed a lot effects and adjusted most of the img s size at that time.I think there r no unused layers in my map now.. sorry i dont want to give up the cool effects just for decrease sb load..

00:00:199 - huh, i think this movement is not supposed to be here

fixed

Beginner
01:52:882 (2,3,1) - i'm not sure it's the best way of mapping for part, where timing changes. Sliders are more "freindly", i'd recommend to use sliders here.
Standard
01:53:649 (1,2) - same as in Beginner, hardest place mapped by notes. Up to you of course.

ok i accepted. how about now ..friendly enough? thank you for reminding me.I learned so much. btw, this not an instrumental map , plz fix the genre ;)
CDFA
Jesus Christ I'm a shitty BAT
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

CDFA wrote:

Jesus Christ I'm a shitty BAT
OOOOOOOPS... I carelessly hit this kud giving button !!!!! MY bad !! Plz deduct it :cry:

hi CDFA , I dont mind the disqualify. really !! it is not your false . I am a newb , I have a lot of things to learn..and you r the great bat .. take it easy.. :):)
Aleks719
Hi~
only 2 things:
1. You have fixed combo colour only in one diff, another (Beg and Stand) still have pure white colour.
2. SB is still overload somewhere, bit it's not so bad as i told before.
3. I dunno why did you put hitcircleselect.png to the folder. It is for editior only, but if you need it, fine then.
Topic Starter
pandorawindy

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi~
only 2 things:
1. You have fixed combo colour only in one diff, another (Beg and Stand) still have pure white colour.
2. SB is still overload somewhere, bit it's not so bad as i told before.
3. I dunno why did you put hitcircleselect.png to the folder. It is for editior only, but if you need it, fine then.

1.oh my bad.. i forgot them.. :| fixed!!
2.yeah ,, i fixed the light.png and sb1.png s size. i am so sorry i havent decreased sb load under 5*. i really really want to keep the effects.So ppppppplz..
3.oops..removed :oops:
thank you for your time and testing :)
Aleks719
i think one more checking will not hurt. so, bubbled back
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