Giralda wrote:

Hey! From the Strawberry Mousse Modding Team
Sorry for the late mod, I've been really busy as of late.
oh..i dont mind.
Let's go!

[General]

Metadata:
Correct Title is: Proud of You

Your "Y" in "You" needs to be capitalized. fixed
Source: http://www.yesasia.com/global/a-little- ... /info.html (Track 11)


[Beginner]
00:42:638 (1) - Add a finish on the slider head to maintain consistency with the rest of the kiai time.
00:45:565 (1) - Adding a whistle to the slider end sounds nice
01:35:321 (1) - A clap here could be used for vocal emphasis and fits really nicely.
01:29:467 (2) - Adding a clap here would provide really strong vocal emphasis going into 01:30:931 (1) and would sound really good afterwards if you added a clap at 01:32:394 (2) too! Try it! Don't forget to change your storyboard pulses if you do~
01:38:248 (1) - How about a finish and a clap on the tail? You already have a pulse animation in the storyboard, so you should make use of that and use the clap rhythm there, in addition to a stronger chimes sound with the finish.
01:57:272 (1) - I was expecting a clap here since the piano is much stronger at this point and you can use the clap to emphasize that feeling
honest to say , in my map,i just use the whistle to be my metronome..finish and clap in order to emphasis something but clap is too loud..so i have no plan to add too much clap..
[Standard]
If you took any hitsounding suggestions from Beginner, remember to add them over to here
00:41:175 (4) - Ctrl+G flows better, and it's similar to 00:43:370 (3,4) but would break your snap. Up to you. fixed
00:40:443 (4,1) - Doesn't flow very well for new players since 4 is coming off the left side and 1 starts on the right. You could Ctrl+H to make it easier for new players to catch it. It will break your snap though, up to you.
00:55:077 (4) - You could rotate this 27 degrees selection centre to make a nice double blanket fixed

SPOILER

01:24:346 (5,5,5) - This is a little awkward since there isn't anything at 01:24:528 that would need a repeat or any sort of hit to be done there. I suggest making it simple and keeping it a 1/2 slider so you can be consistent with your first kiai. no..all diffs have one common ground is last kiai harder than first kiai..ps: i follow vocal here..

SPOILER

01:45:565 (1) - Bring this a little closer to the left so the overlap looks nicer ok

[Wings]
00:22:150 (5) - Lower the red slider anchor a little more so it looks nicer not very necessary i guess
00:45:199 (1) - Add a whistle to the slider end and remove the whistle on 00:45:931 (2). Sounds nicer that way imo. ok

Not much to say other than the fact that you did a really nice job! Sometimes hitsounds require you to emphasize the feeling in the song rather than just hitsounding to the musical instruments. Keep up the great work and good luck~thank you for playing and modding

jinhang_ang wrote:

From my queue.

OMG I love your SB so much (and it stops me from looking at notes I just watch the SB LOL what I'm doing) LOL..I ll make more better sb if you like..

And I'm not sure if it's your song's short length or your mapping skills that make me find almost no defects here!

Anyway here's my mod -

[Easy]
1. 00:14:833 (2,1) - This blanket looks strange. ok i adjusted it a little.

Use the approach circle to guide you in drawing blankets

[Normal]
1. 00:40:443 (4,1) - It should look like this. The circle should fit in the slider path. looks good. fixed

Sample

[Wings]
1. 01:29:285 (2,3) - See what I wrote in Normal. This time it exceeds the slider path. ok
2. 01:47:028 (1) - Alright I know that you spent some time drawing this slider but can you move the two ends of it so that they don't overlap? fixed

I might go the opposite direction because they looks like connected ==

oh god , i waited for a long time to wanna know wht is it in this box...its Noting!!
Done my shortest mod post ever. Only 5 non-critical-errors?! Yes that's your map. Good luck for getting ranked!thx for modding and playing .

IamKwaN wrote:

Hi 來得比較遲 看了數眼你的圖 沒啥好說的典型對稱圖 與其全都是nazi不如不摸
但skin不齊全是unrankable,詳細看https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
現在缺的是Spinner set還有Hitbursts Set的hit300g.png:

SPOILER

Spinner set
spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png 現在只有這個,需要補上另外三個
spinner-approachcircle.png
spinner-metre.png

不用給我KD O.< Good luck!
(ノ・ω・)ノ
已经全部加上了,谢谢kwan

yf_bmp wrote:

don't move to graveyard

1. Please check BG size :3 You must use 1108 x 768
2. and AIBat says this :
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:11:907 (1) - You must use same spacing about x0.8
2. 01:59:550 (3) - Same as Wings diff.

1. 01:44:833 (5) - Please add a short Break time for beginners.
2. 01:59:550 (5) - Same as Wings diff.

1. HPDrain Rate +1 for nice spread.
2. 00:26:175 (2) - How about moving this note around here ?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:199 (1,2) - I feel this part looks crowded please put more distance to each other.
4. 00:36:419 (1) - no need to add new combo here. You should consider removing this from here, and I agree your patterns of new combo here 00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - So please use same patterns around here 00:38:248 (4,1,2,3,4) -
5. 01:52:882 (3) - I'm worry about this slider will catch this rule. I hope you remake this slider.
   ~ Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider. ~
6. 01:59:550 (5) - I recommend you to add a new combo here for different rhythm.

alacat wrote:

Hey from #modreqs

[General]

1. Please check BG size :3 You must use 1108 x 768 ok fixed..
2. and AIBat says this :
   
   SPOILER

   
   all fixed

[Beginner]

1. 00:11:907 (1) - You must use same spacing about x0.8 fixed
2. 01:59:550 (3) - Same as Wings diff. fixed

[Standard]

1. 01:44:833 (5) - Please add a short Break time for beginners. sorry , i didn't really get the meaning of what you wanna me do it..remove 01:44:833 (5,1,2,3) and add one break time?
2. 01:59:550 (5) - Same as Wings diff. fixed

[Wings]

1. HPDrain Rate +1 for nice spread. fixed
2. 00:26:175 (2) - How about moving this note around here ? good idea ..
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:199 (1,2) - I feel this part looks crowded please put more distance to each other. ok .. the spacing has been adjusted..
4. 00:36:419 (1) - no need to add new combo here. You should consider removing this from here, and I agree your patterns of new combo here 00:47:028 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - So please use same patterns around here 00:38:248 (4,1,2,3,4) - ok fixed
5. 01:52:882 (3) - I'm worry about this slider will catch this rule. I hope you remake this slider.
   ~ Slider anchors/nodes must not be used to manipulate slider speeds (whether they are normal nodes or red ones). Using extra nodes to make a slider "wiggle" is usually fine, but using so many that the slider gets scrunched up (which also makes the sliderball go crazy) or become a "hold slider" is abuse of the hitobject's intended use and is not allowed. AIMod (shortcut ctrl+shift+a) will also point out sliders that move in an "abnormal" way, so make sure to check that if you're unsure of a slider. ~ i think this part is unreasonable either..i have changed this pattern and added two red lines here to catch more accurate timing..of course , beginner and standard have been changed too..what do you think about this change?
6. 01:59:550 (5) - I recommend you to add a new combo here for different rhythm.fixed

Sorry I'm late ._. Call me back okay, thank you alacat

I made some other maps Before you checked this map, i learned more mapping skill and i have some personal idea about this map.
[Wings]

1. 01:32:943 (2) - you know i silent some sliders' ticksounds in this diff. and i silent all slider slide sounds. some people said i cant slient both of them at the same time..so should i fix it?
2. 01:32:394 (1,2) - this part..hmm.. if you listen it carefully you ll find i missed one instrument sound in 01:33:126 - so i made one new pattern here but i didn't update it.. so i m waiting for your opinion
   
   new pattern

   
3. about the maps' tags..do you think "heart" and "feather" r necessary? i plan add "Feng Xi Yu" , it is Fiona Fung s Chinese name ,i m waiting for your opinion..

pandorawindy wrote:

[Wings]

1. 01:32:943 (2) - you know i silent some sliders' ticksounds in this diff. and i silent all slider slide sounds. some people said i cant slient both of them at the same time..so should i fix it? orz yes you must fix this point.
2. 01:32:394 (1,2) - this part..hmm.. if you listen it carefully you ll find i missed one instrument sound in 01:33:126 - so i made one new pattern here but i didn't update it.. so i m waiting for your opinion yeah, I agreed your new rhythm!
   
   new pattern

   
3. about the maps' tags..do you think "heart" and "feather" r necessary? i plan add "Feng Xi Yu" , it is Fiona Fung s Chinese name ,i m waiting for your opinion.. mmm.. I think "heart" and "feather" are unnecessary then, agreed you will add Chinese name :3

alacat wrote:

[Wings]

1. 01:32:943 (2) - you know i silent some sliders' ticksounds in this diff. and i silent all slider slide sounds. some people said i cant slient both of them at the same time..so should i fix it? orz yes you must fix this point.
2. 01:32:394 (1,2) - this part..hmm.. if you listen it carefully you ll find i missed one instrument sound in 01:33:126 - so i made one new pattern here but i didn't update it.. so i m waiting for your opinion yeah, I agreed your new rhythm!
   
   new pattern

   
3. about the maps' tags..do you think "heart" and "feather" r necessary? i plan add "Feng Xi Yu" , it is Fiona Fung s Chinese name ,i m waiting for your opinion.. mmm.. I think "heart" and "feather" are unnecessary then, agreed you will add Chinese name :3

alacat wrote:

fixed kiai sections ~

Good luck for your first rank

Bubbled

CDFA wrote:

EASY:
01:53:649 (1) - SWEET JESUS CHRIST I WAS LITERALLY ABOUT TO HIT THE RANK BUTTON BUT THEN LIKE WHY THIS NC

literally crying rn

but good otherwise

Zero__wind wrote:

ahoh I'm late

CDFA wrote:

we did!!!!

Time- wrote:

Nice song
Congrats~

Bass wrote:

Fuck
I thought they ranked deepsea's map

Congratz anyway

XinCrin wrote:

OMGGG FINALLY!.
Congrats pandi /

Minakami Yuki wrote:

gratz for ur 1st ~

Bass wrote:

Fuck
I thought they ranked deepsea's map

Congratz anyway

alacat wrote:

aaaaaaaaaaaaa gratz!!!!!!!!

inverness wrote:

Hey, I remember modding this back then. Congratulations for the first rank. You had potential!

Gameplay elements must be visible. You cannot make any element that will impair the playability of the map invisible as it will make the map unintuitive or even impossible to play.

Hitbursts must be clearly distinguishable from each other (e.g. 300/100). The best way to ensure this is to use a different color for each hitburst. Otherwise, the player won't know if they're hitting beats accurately.

Do not make any essential gameplay elements larger than template skin dimensions (especially for combobursts). Larger elements may effect gameplay performance, and thus should be avoided. However, any elements that do not directly effect gameplay (e.g. pause-back, play-skip, etc.) may be slightly larger if a legitimate reason is given.

When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file).

Aleks719 wrote:

Hey guys, party pooper is coming (/ovo)/

Hello, i'm sorry about it, but this map contains unrankable stuff, that's why i'm here

Skinning

Gameplay elements must be visible. You cannot make any element that will impair the playability of the map invisible as it will make the map unintuitive or even impossible to play.

Your 300 hitbursts are invisible.

Hitbursts must be clearly distinguishable from each other (e.g. 300/100). The best way to ensure this is to use a different color for each hitburst. Otherwise, the player won't know if they're hitting beats accurately.

50, 100k and 100g look same. more than that they are totally not informative. with low proсent of dimming they are almost invisible too. Add here your flashes and effects in SB and hitbursts are unreadable at all.

Do not make any essential gameplay elements larger than template skin dimensions (especially for combobursts). Larger elements may effect gameplay performance, and thus should be avoided. However, any elements that do not directly effect gameplay (e.g. pause-back, play-skip, etc.) may be slightly larger if a legitimate reason is given.

Actually 50/100k/100g hitbursts are larger than notes and it's unrankable too.

I spend a long time to make other bursts img to replace previous stuff.but i really hard to get better choice to fit my skin.so i decided to remove all hitbursts . default bursts r good for me.

When skinning gameplay elements, complete sets of elements must be skinned. For instance, if you skin hitcircles, you must include a hitcircle.png, hitcircleoverlay.png, approachcircle.png, and a slider border color (this can be done by adding the line "SliderBorder: 255,255,255" (using RGB values) under the [Colours] section of each .osu file).

Where is "SliderBorder" line? you missed it.

ok i added..

You use pure white combo colour(255,255,255), which is still unrankable.

fixed


For breaking 5 rules (meh), i sadly have to disqualify this map. Rest of suggestions will be added later to this post.

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Addition:

SB
your SB can be tweaked. now it has overloads, it can cause problems to users with weak machines. These overloads are not so big, but if you have time, try to turn off unused layers in critical moments. Thank you~

yeah i have ever decrease the sb load when i started map it.I removed a lot effects and adjusted most of the img s size at that time.I think there r no unused layers in my map now.. sorry i dont want to give up the cool effects just for decrease sb load..

00:00:199 - huh, i think this movement is not supposed to be here

fixed

Beginner
01:52:882 (2,3,1) - i'm not sure it's the best way of mapping for part, where timing changes. Sliders are more "freindly", i'd recommend to use sliders here.
Standard
01:53:649 (1,2) - same as in Beginner, hardest place mapped by notes. Up to you of course.

ok i accepted. how about now ..friendly enough? thank you for reminding me.I learned so much. btw, this not an instrumental map , plz fix the genre

CDFA wrote:

Jesus Christ I'm a shitty BAT

Aleks719 wrote:

Hi~
only 2 things:
1. You have fixed combo colour only in one diff, another (Beg and Stand) still have pure white colour.
2. SB is still overload somewhere, bit it's not so bad as i told before.
3. I dunno why did you put hitcircleselect.png to the folder. It is for editior only, but if you need it, fine then.

1.oh my bad.. i forgot them.. fixed!!
2.yeah ,, i fixed the light.png and sb1.png s size. i am so sorry i havent decreased sb load under 5*. i really really want to keep the effects.So ppppppplz..
3.oops..removed
thank you for your time and testing