heyhey captin so im here
luv u to death Koinuri
[General]
beautiful song
jaw dropping sb
god mapping
i r8 111/10
maybe it's just me but I thought 30% vol at the beginning was a bit loud maybe changing from beginning to 00:53:531 - to 20~25%?
okie01:12:590 - should kiai here too imo
nah, would like the second half to have more emphasisthe song completely fades out at around 04:25:825 so u have like 5 seconds of silence// consider cutting ur mp3
eh nbd imo@Koinuri
01:46:472 - 03:02:708 - 04:23:002 - can u maybe make the ring that's behind the girl not visible? it looks weird seeing through the girl's body >:
01:46:472 to 01:59:178
did u get lazy here lol. black bg works in the normal since there's a break, but in the hard it doesn't because players still have to keep playing so it doesnt make sense for there to be black bg
so um fav part of the storyboard is 00:00:000 - to 04:30:733
[Normal]
00:57:413 (1,2) - easiest diff so shouldn't stack 01:05:884 (1,2) - too and so on..
imo this works better stacked, and it's also very low bpm so I think it'll work01:00:237 (5) - this feels wrong cuz there's a note on literally every 1/4 beat in the entire beat so i'd suggest sticking to pianos here// the piano at 01:00:942 - is a lot louder too
http://puu.sh/bF6EM/7f511a11d9.jpg sure01:29:884 - important note imo, the sb is also the brightest here so no reason to leave it unmapped
mmk01:32:354 (3,4) - same shape?
^02:16:120 (1,2) - 02:20:355 (1,2,1,2,3) - the difficulty difference is too big >: the rhythm is the same and yet the latter is clearly more mapped out than the beginning
it's intentional, so that they can hear the change in rhythm during the first slider, and then play it out in the second part02:42:943 (3,1) - woah is that a blanket issue i c
maybe02:55:649 (3,1) - ^
a03:23:884 (1,3) - they look really similar so suggesting this
nice03:29:531 (3) - 03:31:649 (3) - maybe make it so like it's a slider bow?
kinda is already, moving things around would mess up too many patterns so it's fine imo03:42:237 (3,1) - mm blankets
eh, these two are fine for me03:58:472 (2,3) - ^
there might be other blankets i didnt say (?)
[Hard]
00:38:707 (2) - as a whole do u find this attractive ;w;
http://puu.sh/bF7WB/211854f869.jpg doesn't really matter in play since they're so far apart in the timeline00:45:060 (1,2) - so the idea is that 1 blankets 2 right?
http://puu.sh/bF7ZV/c49bffe296.jpg ctrl+g the 2 ofc
nah i like mine01:16:825 (1,3) - why no blankie
not needed01:25:295 (1) - 01:26:707 (4) - idea is blanket?
http://puu.sh/bF8p5/20093aee1e.jpg fine as is imo01:30:237 (3,4) - same shape?
why not01:34:472 (3,5) - how cool would it be if they were blanketed
:P no thanks01:35:884 (1) - not digging the straight slider and shift a bit to the left too o:
http://puu.sh/bF8yL/3346c5d406.jpg straight slider is fine imo, adjusted the pattern tho01:49:295 (2) - calm section should nerf spacing
spacing is smaller because sv is lower01:54:942 (1) - personally dont like the straight
i do 02:11:884 (1,2,3) - same shape?
close enough w02:20:355 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - kinda surprised u didnt do the almost stack thing here lol.
o ya nice02:25:649 (4) - 02:28:120 (4) - 02:30:590 (6) - dont really see the pattern for these whistles so i'd say remove for the rhythm change section
they're with instruments in the music (remove the notes and you'll hear them)02:26:708 (1) - should nerf spacing a bit and move a bit to the left
http://puu.sh/bF8Q5/f6f42202c8.jpg ehh it's fine02:40:825 (4,5,6) - ouch such spacing
02:49:296 (1,2,1) - mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ok approved
02:50:708 (3,4) - yeah im suggesting copy and paste again
pretty sure i did LOL just not perfect rotation02:53:531 (5) - doesnt blanket 02:54:590 (2) - well
closeenough03:02:002 (4) - move to (312,44) and change (3) a bit for a nice blanket pattern yaay
yay03:27:413 (4,5,6) - ouch
03:30:237 (1) - bend other way instead?
http://puu.sh/bF93j/1c21ef192e.jpg sure03:44:355 (3,4,5,1) - mmmmm
03:51:413 (1,2,3) - wwwwwwww
04:15:413 (3,4) - why not stack the ends? slider end overlaps dont look to me
because spacing lol04:18:943 (1) - judging from ur previous spacings people will prolly think it's another 1/4 its nc'd but to be safe o-o
moved a bit, idk we'll see@ouch spacing: just instead of 1.4x DS use something a bit more forgiving lol it's 2.5 stars after all
it's also supposed to be a hard diff, just has low star rating from the bpm and slider useokey im just guna save this mp3 dont mind me
star?
yup good luck have fun!~ C: