TT Mouse wrote:

Mod from Paper modding team

[Hard]

00:20:191 (4) - add whistle Fixed

00:21:013 (7) -^ Fixed

00:22:246 (3,2,4) - ^ Fixed

00:37:657 (7,1) - 建议分开。因为前面是同步歌词的小跳，那到（7）时前都应保持小跳来体现。这样会很突然。 Fixed,你书得对

00:51:835 (4,5,6,7,1) - 建议整体向下弯曲弧度来充实版面。是的

00:55:739 (6,7,1) - flow不顺的感觉 flow，是什么能吃吗？尝试改了一下

01:06:835 (7) - （420,196）→ (417,196) Nazi！！！

音效感觉没做好？ 很多地方空缺，以及kiai部分C W 没有用。其实我是觉得做好了，因为但是我觉得我的cw不好听，加上去也不行的感觉

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  sorry，i mistook your naiton at first and have changed my modding into English

1. 00:13:410 (1,2,3,4) - make it more regular
2. 00:16:698 (1) - cut down the slider to 00:17:520，and aid a note on 00:18:071？
3. 00:24:917 (2) - try this http://puu.sh/aUOa6/ac2523780c.jpg
4. 00:47:931 (2) - move to 00:47:725 ，there is no sound on 00:47:931
5. 00:49:575 (3) - no sound on 00:51:218，try this http://puu.sh/aVNRE/c94acf615e.jpg
6. 01:10:123 (2,3,4,5,6) - more regular
7. 01:24:095 (3) - move it to 01:24:173
8. 00:16:698 (1) - fix it，like this http://puu.sh/aUOFp/10cbb0d945.jpg
9. 00:27:383 (2,3) - use ctrl+c&v and ctrl+h&j to make 3 the same shape as 2
10. i think use a regular DS is important for a Easy diff

1. 00:08:068 (1,2) - increase two deserve on 1 instead?
2. 00:24:506 (5,6) - change 5 to 00:24:712 and change 6 to 00:25:904?
3. 01:18:136 (3) - change into a deserve?
4. 01:23:173 (3) - change into a note?
   very sorry for my poor English so that i cant express the reason i think

1. 00:33:136 (1) - finish
2. 00:37:862 (1) - finish
3. 00:41:664 (3,4,5) - 3放到(256,210)上，然后45摆21对称，这样应该好看点
4. 00:44:849 (2) - 换到后面的蓝线上吧，红线上没音
5. 00:45:054 (3) - 拉到白线是不是更好，感觉有点漏音
6. 00:46:081 (1) - finish
7. 00:47:725 (3,4,5) - 5的头上没音尾巴音比较重感觉不太适合滑条尾，整个换成一头朝下的个折返试试
8. 00:54:506 (2) - kiai的开头放这里是不是更好
9. 00:59:849 (3) - finish这样子的地方好像挺多的，你check一下
10. 01:06:013 (1) - finish

1. change the beginning of kiai to 00:54:506 (2)，i think it will be better
   nearly perfect diff

Hyasalia wrote:

[Mecon'S Normal]

1. 00:08:068 (1,2) - increase two deserve on 1 instead?
2. 00:24:506 (5,6) - change 5 to 00:24:712 and change 6 to 00:25:904?
3. 01:18:136 (3) - change into a deserve?
4. 01:23:173 (3) - change into a note?
   very sorry for my poor English so that i cant express the reason i think

关于你这个5和6,我是没弄明白你什么意思.最重要的是00:25:904你是怎么找出来的我不清楚 我开了1/16都没有找到你要的那个时间点.而且把5放在你说的那个地方.听起来完全怪怪的.所以这个mod不接受.

感觉换完note是好...但是我认为划条可以衬托那个钢琴的长音.这样更好.所以我没有修改.

Hyasalia wrote:

Random Modding from a Rookie mapper
[Hard]

1. 00:33:136 (1) - finish 好的
2. 00:37:862 (1) - finish 好的
3. 00:41:664 (3,4,5) - 3放到(256,210)上，然后45摆21对称，这样应该好看点 Nice！
4. 00:44:849 (2) - 换到后面的蓝线上吧，红线上没音 直接删了，感觉不好加
5. 00:45:054 (3) - 拉到白线是不是更好，感觉有点漏音 保持原样，感觉延长了反而不好玩
6. 00:46:081 (1) - finish 好的
7. 00:47:725 (3,4,5) - 5的头上没音尾巴音比较重感觉不太适合滑条尾，整个换成一头朝下的个折返试试 改了，感觉可以
8. 00:54:506 (2) - kiai的开头放这里是不是更好 打算再看看别人的说法
9. 00:59:849 (3) - finish这样子的地方好像挺多的，你check一下 我把kiai里非大白线的finish删了，补上了大白线的finish
10. 01:06:013 (1) - finish

摸图实力有限，希望能有帮助。如果有时间的话，希望能摸下这张图https://osu.ppy.sh/s/197145。顺便求个mu 已mu~，摸图没时间orz
GL

Mei wrote:

我来凑分

[hard]

1. 00:01:287 这里介意建议加上note 好啊，好啊
   
2. 00:02:931 ^而且感觉stack就行 好啊，好啊
   
3. 00:12:383 (4,5) - 这个和23叠感觉难打，不如拉倒下面。。或者换梗换成23叠一起，45叠一起那种 你输得对，23叠 45叠了
   
4. 00:13:616 绿线狂魔（stress 曾经有过一些想法，不过没啥用，放弃了orz
   
5. 00:20:807 (6,7,8,1) - 7，8稍微抬高点，好打些 稍微太高了一点，不知道效果怎么样
   
   Picture

   
6. 00:36:013 (1,3) - 换nc 呀！！！
   
7. 00:38:684 (5,6,7) - 这滑条尾我感觉是五连 感觉都行，Insane里其实连连打都不是
   
8. 00:58:410 (2) - x376 y268

好啊，好啊

你就做了个hard么一拳打爆 下次绝对不会这样了！！！！
laurier好厉害，你们都有神麻婆相助 你就是神麻婆啊！

fm4a93au04 wrote:

From my queue .
万万没想到，我可以竟然接到了这么认真的一个mod，比较一下其他人的mod无论是bat还是pro mapper，他们呢也是很少能给出这么长的mod，你的努力程度绝对不是一颗kudos就能够体现的。真是有感慨现在论坛制度有点不合理

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

Hard

額額額額額額額 ( 你有先看過Normal的話我就直接進場不廢話了 ) .

…… =ㄦ=” .

好 , 進場 .

Hard 我就不提排版了 , 給你我的主觀意見好了 . 你的排版挺讚 , 節奏改一下就好嚕 .

前面要不要弄個 x0.5 (用綠線去調的那個喔 , 不是距離改x0.5 ) ? 你的默認距離為x1.2 , 用個 x0.5 然後距離改成 x2.4 之類的 , 像 …… 這張好了 :

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/151904 < - Vicho's Hard

開頭物件間距為 x1.4 ~ x2.5 , 但因為綠線 x0.5 所以是正常狀況下( 綠線x1.0 ) 的一半 , x0.7 ~ x1.25 完全合法 . 這只是個建議啦 ……

從開頭一直到 00:09:506 都可以加 , 到這裏接下去直接轉 x1.0 . 这个我觉得大可不必啊，有点故意弄麻烦的感觉

00:10:123 – 我會選擇漸升音效最後升到更高 ( 70% ) . 原先白色區段的音效不太明顯 , 到藍區段突然變大 , 有點怪 …… 只是我的感覺 . 蓝色note开始出现了比较重的鼓声，然后我就从40提到了50，之前一直保持40是因为我觉得背景音还是没什么太大的变化

00:17:520 (5,6,7,8) – 乾脆擺個斜的正方形吧 . 8 好像歪了一點 . 我感觉5歪了点，移了移5www

00:20:396 (5,6,7,8) – 把6跟5對調然後把7跟8合成一個短滑條試試 . 更改之後 , 4和5就是兩個圈 . 看是要分開還是overlap ( 不喜歡按ctrl+z 倒帶吧 ) .用了你的节奏，我自己排了一下

00:22:246 (3,4) – 如果後面這藍色區域00:22:862 (1,2,3,4) 要對vocal的話 , 那就把這兩個合成一個滑條吧 . 原先這裡讓人期待要跟主旋律 , 但後面馬上跟vocal好像有點被打臉 ……这里保持原样，因为我不知道怎么改，感觉现在还是挺好的

00:24:712 (7) – 延長到 00:25:123 (1) 並考慮減速 ( 綠線 x0.75 ) . 後面正方形有點歪 , 擺正一下 .保持原样，这里刚好从vocal转到ins上，是一个很明显的转变，用NC区分了出来，我想应该打起来更有意思

00:27:383 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – 這邊卡卡的 . 後面那個三連發 ” 燈燈燈 ” 改成三個短的折返滑條 , 看圖好了 ( 我亂擺的看看就好 . 重點是節奏為主 ) : 我把三连合在一起了，弄了个5连+1note 再改了NC，其实燈燈燈没有对上ins的节奏




個人覺得看圖比較好懂 =..=“ .

00:33:136 (1,2,3,4) – 1和2換 , 3和4拿掉換成兩個半拍的滑條 .GJ

就會變成 大 丈 --------- 夫 --- Na-n -- Da------- ……
-----------------( 滑條 ) ( 點 ) ( 滑條 ) ( 滑條 ) ……

不懂行話只能用比較笨的方式說明 . 看圖好了 ( 一樣只是亂擺 ) :




00:34:575 (5,6) – 5和6好像可以互換 , 這樣就可以跟前面兩個滑條排成類似花的圖案 ( 複製後轉120度 ) . 6和7這兩個點就可能 …… 作一個小跳跳過5的中間 ( 這些都是當下想到的 , 不知有無幫助 , 這圖也是隨意擺放的 ) . 保持不变，感觉现在的很好，不是很想摆很多图案



00:37:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) – 把音效降到 5% 之後 , 我才知道你在對甚麼音效=ㄦ=” . 那個有點拎拎又嗡嗡嗡的聲音嗎 ? 我覺得對那個不如這樣改 :

00:37:862 – 延長至 00:38:273 並減速此滑條 ( 綠線x0.75之類的 ) ,
00:38:376 – 加點 ( 圈 ) . 後面再加一個圈形成3連發 .
00:38:684 – 3連發 . 最後一個圈會再 00:38:890 .
00:39:095 – 5連發 . 最後一個剛好接 vocal . 連發之間的距離可設定為 x0.6 . 保持不变，我觉得现在节奏很好，而且变速没有必要

00:39:712 (2,3) – 這兩個感覺可以合成一個滑條 , 然後設一個小跳在這裡( x1.5~7 之類的 ) . 不過後面也有1組白的是3個點 …… 所以還是不要好了 .2333333

00:41:355 (2,3,4) – 要不要排成直線 ? …… 不知為何這3個圈的時間差讓我想起這張圖 https://osu.ppy.sh/s/148092 Advence 裡的梗 ( 最後一段 , 頗明顯 ) , 感覺不錯試試吧 . 不想要就別點了 ( 不用擔心都是官網的載點啦 , 有毒那全世界都完啦 >< “ ) .No,这样已经很美观，而且间距正好可以表现出来。因为3是在蓝线上，不用过间距的话很难察觉到区别

00:42:383 ~ 00:49:164 這一段怎麼聽 , 怎麼怪 我拭著做了一些調整 . 用講的不清楚( 前面也是講了一堆還是得放圖 , 這裏索性先放圖了 = = 後面再來一一解釋 . 一樣是亂擺的 , 有個概念就好 ) :



00:42:383 – 滑條到 00:42:588 .
00:42:794 – 點 ( 沒啥好說 ) .
00:42:999 – 折返一次的滑條到 00:43:616 .
00:43:821 – 滑條到 00:44:027 .
00:44:129 – 點 ( 沒啥好說 ) . 與前後滑條間距x0.6 .
00:44:232 – 滑條到00:44:438 .
00:44:643 – 懶得想所以轉盤帶過 …… 到00:45:876 ( 我覺得還可以 …… ) .

00:46:081 (1,2,3,4,5) – 全˙部˙打˙爛 ~~~~~~~~ ! ! ! ! < - 失智中 …… 我重新听了，的确是漏音严重，把节奏加上雀羚，排列改了

別跟人聲了 !! 這裡幽談轉輕換了輕音樂 ( 第一段重音預備 , 這裏接近副歌用輕快音加速帶過 , 後面就是咚咚咚咚 …… 然後停一下 , 進副歌 ) 為何不跟 ? 記得音效也要換輕的 .

- 從 00:46:081 開始 -

舉例 : 搭~~~搭-搭 -搭~~~搭 --搭 -搭~~~搭 -搭 -搭 -東東東
-----------( 滑條 ) 點 ( 滑條 ) 點 ( 滑條 ) ---點 -點 -3連發 改了一些，按照个人理解

上面這一串 …… 額 , 把編輯器調到 75% 速度播放會很明顯 . 還是看不懂就PM我 .

後面跟鼓就還不錯 .

00:49:164 – 加個圈吧 , 這裏感覺突然被冷到 …… ( 沒有東西按有點空虛 ) . 剛才那個不想要就別理我但這裡一定要有個東西 ( 多聽幾遍之後感覺對vocal也是不錯 ) . Fixed

00:49:369 (1,2,3) – 我會在 00:49:369 放圈 , 後面放3個一拍的滑條 , 然後各轉120度擺成像花的形狀並且作大跳 ( 這圖前面好像擺過 …… 再擺一次 ) : 没有采用



00:51:013(1) – 這裡我想建議這種滑條 ( 滑到00:51:629 ) : 没有采用



2跟3就刪掉了 .

00:51:835 (4) – 這改成2個圈 .

00:52:862 (1,2,3,4) – 這裏感覺可以大跳 , 4 直接擺中間 . 一點點間距改變無傷大雅但擺中間比較好看 .没有采用

後面副歌 …… 我累了 = = ( 從昨天下午到現在扣除睡覺6小時……多久 …… 打超久的 ) , 況且這種快歌我也不常做 ( 只有一首初音的 < 世界第一的公主殿下 > 殿下 高BPM而已 ……只是作好玩的 , 沒放上來別去找@@" . 做得很爛 , 況且那也有人做了 …… ) , 所以副歌就交給其他人吧 …… 这也太辛苦了，真的没有必要这么累的，一定要把身体放在第一位啊！！！！

當然如果你喜歡我的mod歡迎私信或是加好友 , 我有空就會幫忙 . < - 喜歡mod卻懶的作圖的怪人 好友已加=w=

等等 ~~~~~ !

01:07:657 (2) – 感覺可以拉成滑條到01:07:965 . 01:07:862 (3) 移到 01:08:068 . 4就直接刪了 . 對背景音也對 vocal . 會變成 :

啦~~啦啦 啦ˋ 啦~~啦啦 啦ˊ 的感覺 . 試著把我剛剛提到的東西複製到 01:08:479 , 我感覺挺好 . 老实说啊，副歌部分我是最不想改节奏的，因为我觉得这样已经很好了

就這樣囉 , Good luck to your map ~~ !

Good luck to your map , and sorry for my late and bad mod .

fm4a93au04 wrote:

From my queue .

fm4a93au04's standard modding queue

Ignore this

我第一次 mod 這種有 GD 圖 . 在開始之前 , 本麵想新確認幾件事情 :

Easy – English .

Normal – 中文 .

Hard – 中文 .

Insane - … As my rule , I can’t tell you something constructive word .

無意冒犯 , 只是提醒自己 , 不要打錯語言 = = ( 用中文打 Easy 難度的 mod 怕對方看不懂 ) .

說到麵 , 就不得不提 :

1. 本人英文超爛 . 如果遇到無論如何都不知道怎麼用英文來表達的狀況時 , 我就會用中文說 . 煩請替我轉告對方 , 謝謝 ><" ( 當然我會極力避免 , 多虧有了谷歌翻譯 ) .

2. fm4a94au04 -> ㄑㄩˋ ㄇㄞˇ ㄇㄧㄢˋ -> 去買麵 .

開始吧 ! 對了 , 上面那一串請無視掉 .

好緊張喔手腳會抖欸對了原來是這樣 ... 我一緊張就會講很多廢話 ...

Mecon's Normal

終於可以 , 使用中文 …… . 開頭讓我透透氣閒聊一下吧@@” .

我在mod Easy的時候本來建議他可以每隔一拍放置一個物件 , 我舉了一個BPM 90 的歌來說明兩拍放一個物件有多慢 ( 那首歌是每格一拍放一個物件 , 偶而有半拍的 , 每分鐘點擊頻率大約90 . 而如果這首歌是照兩拍放一個物件的話點擊率就等於73比90還慢害我打圖打到快睡著 ZZZ …… ) , 結果等看到Normal就整個打臉 …… = = 因為Normal就是每隔一拍放一個物件 …… .

我後來建議他對著人聲去下 , 就算慢但如果有對到人聲的話那也還是算合理( 而且這首歌也有很多對到人聲的樂器 重音 ) . 我還因此重打了 Easy 一遍 = = . 學一次教訓唄 , 下次要把圖都看完再打 mod .

好吧 , 開始 ……

首先 , 是距離問題 .

相較於初學者 , 玩過一陣子的人比較能夠應付中頻率連擊 ( 例如間格半拍的滑條 - 點 - 滑調 ) , 可是對點擊時機的判斷還是仰賴物件間距 , 除非你的物件時間差非常大 , 大到會讓你的物件飛出場外 ( 大約2~3拍或以上 ) , 而且玩家也有足夠時間反應 , 才能做變動 .

像這首我超愛的歌 :

https://osu.ppy.sh/b/58323

Relaxing ( 就是Normal阿= = )難度開場沒多久 , 有兩根大滑條占據在兩側 ( 綠色的兩根 ) , 因為時間差夠大 , 所以從x1.2 改為x1.5 , 無傷大雅 . 一部分也是為了對稱梗 , 總之參考看看 .

我有注意到一些地方間距的變動 , 像是 00:05:807 (4) 應該是為了三角型梗間距由x1.0改為x0.7 . 搭咩得斯 ( 不可以的呦 ) ~~ 玩家會以為是隔一拍的物件然後按下去 , 然後就FK造口業了 …… 就算是 Hard , 類似這種地方我應該也會建議 Anti-jump ( 而且是類似放得很近像要黏在一起之類的 , 因為沒有明顯的高漲節奏 . 範例 : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/168080 這首的Hard 中間過場的地方 ) . 所以 , 間距還請注意一下 , 拜託了 .

以上連結都是官方網頁 , 沒有釣魚啥的 . 官網也中毒 , 那我也只能鳥巢天哪 ~~

接下來都不談間距了 , 而是節奏或音效等的建議 . 因為是建議馬上就變得阿諾阿諾的 ( 費柴男主角樣 ) …… 總之間距應該算是硬性規定 , 接下來的看你要不要 .

要就嘗試弄得比我更好 ( 想要照用也可以啦 , 看你 ) ; 不要的話 , 請告訴我原因以及您的堅持 , 下次 mod 的時候就能夠有個參考避免誤觸他人地雷. 感謝萬分 .

創作的人是你 , 你絕對可以拒絕或無視我的建議 .

打中文怎麼那麼暢快阿 ~~~ XD ~~~ 附帶一提歌很好聽 . 是不是 < 花間少女 > 的片尾 ? 總之mp3. 我收下嚕 =W=” ( 開queue的真正目的 ) .

拿了 mp3. 就得辦事 . 欸 , 怎麼講了一堆廢話阿我 = = .

00:00:260 (1) – 延展到 00:00:876 然候考慮Blanket .



00:01:903 (2) – 將藍色1 00:00:260 (1) 複製到這裡 , 然後旋轉角度作一次折返 .



00:05:191(3,4) – 要不要乾脆滑條 ? 然後包住紅色2的尾巴 ?



00:06:218 ~ 00:09:301 – 這邊好怪 …… 節奏卡卡 .

首先 , x0.75 的話 , 距離就可以乘上 x1.33 ( 0.75 = 3/4 , 4/3 = 1.3333 …… = 1.3 ) . 提一下 , 以免自己老人癡呆 …… 請看圖 :




我把我下的物件都打在下面 , 配合圖片一起參考看看吧 ( 座標就不打了 . 我只是給你我的想法 . 我也不知道這樣是否真的更好 , 但相信你定能排得比我好 ) :

00:06:218 – 這個沒有變 , 轉角度而已 .

00:06:835 – 從折返一次滑條變成單次滑條至00:07:451 . 頭加上S finish ( 默認的那一組 ) .

00:08:068 – 一個點 . 建議加上鼓聲例如 : https://osu.ppy.sh/b/260795 Hard 最後曇花一現的鼓聲S:C5 Clap ( 沒試過但感覺好像可以 ...... ) , 這音效在很多圖都看過 , 應該沒有侵權問題 . 或乾脆N normalhit ( 默認的那一組 ) .

00:08:479 – 把 00:06:835複製作對稱 . 頭加N finish .

…………………………..分隔線…………………………

00:09:712 (1,2) – 我會把他們換成折返一次的滑條 , 然後這邊00:11:355 (1) 配合他們 " 燈燈燈 “ 節奏拆成滑條加轉盤 00:11:766 ~ 00:12:794 或到00:12:999 . 看圖吧 , 用講的怕不清楚 :




先這樣好了 , 感覺要改改不完 …… 跟你分享一件事吧0.0 .

我自己也有做圖 , Perfume 的歌 , 我一直對我的圖超有自信 , 直到有一天 , 有位經驗老到的 mapper 跟我說 :

“ You can improve your map a lot ~~ I save a ticket from my quene , when you do this , then call me again . “ ( 在我圖的Page 1 你可以自己去看 = = )

其實意思是婉轉的教你重做啦 …… 這是重製前的 : t/154997 , 這是後來玩這遊戲更久之後重製的 : https://osu.ppy.sh/s/201077 . 橫著看 , 重製的也比較有意思吧 @@” ( 想看自己載回去看吧 …… 純分享自身經驗無推銷的意思 ) .

要我來說 , 我也會建議乾脆重做比較快 . 看似麻煩 , 但有些東西你在第一次做的時候已經摸的很熟 , 再做會快很多 , 駕輕就熟 , 也因為如此你可以注意到更多第一次作圖時沒有注意到的地方 ( 畢竟第一次光摸節奏就快被搞爛了吧 …… 只有我這樣嘛 0.0” ) . 況且中途要改 , 很多新東西都會被舊的影響以致於陷身泥淖 ( 難道又只有我嘛 …… ) . 舊的不去 , 新的不來 ~~ .

Modder也是 . 如果他又要顧間距又要顧排版一大堆問題 , 還指望人家給甚麼 ? 他連這首歌曲的精華都碰不到 , 就快被一層層的洋蔥皮薰死了 …… ( 不是在間接說你這只是比喻@@” , 也有可能是modder本身太腦爛 , 我現階段應該屬於後者=ㄦ=” )

總之加油摟 . 如果你喜歡我的 mod , 給我私信吧 , 有空就會幫你 ~~ .

< - 如果不喜歡 , 就當我在自嗨 ( 在台灣意思是情緒高亢陷入失智狀態 )

Good luck to your map , and sorry for my late and bad mod .

TheDizzeY wrote:

From rakutenshii mod que~~

Hard

00:04:369 (1,2,3) - Seperate them Kept

Meconopsis wrote:

TheDizzeY wrote:

From rakutenshii mod que~~

Mecon's Normal

00:03:547 (4) - Make it end to a red thick
00:18:753 (5,6,7) - Move them to a little closer to the slider
00:24:506 (5) - Stack it with 2 00:23:273 (2) -
00:24:917 (6) - Stack it with 300:23:684 (3) -

thanks for your mod!
But I've made a new one on the new difficulties, hope you can check it again:)

New GD

osu file format v13

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1. add "hanayamata ending" to tags

1. Please map the song from the start like everyone else. Difficulties having the same start and end points is part of the ranking guidelines and not doing so can imply laziness. It's only okay to skip the beginning of a song if it's quiet or slow compared to the rest, which this isn't.
2. This is a relatively low BPM song so 0.50 base SV is way too slow. Try at least 0.8.
3. AIMod says object is unsnapped
4. 00:15:876 (4,1) - improve blanket
5. 00:26:561 (1,2,3,4) - blanket
6. I'll stop mentioning blankets here but please go through and try to fix them. one way is to scroll through the timeline until you arrive at a point where you can blanket the approach circle like http://puu.sh/b2SlX/a356899bc1.png
7. 01:18:342 (1,1) - remove NC, don't need
8. 01:24:095 (1) - check if this note goes 01:24:173

1. 00:01:492 (1) - move slider repeat side to 384, 60 for blanket
2. 00:01:492 (1,2) - current rhythm doesn't fit music, try http://puu.sh/b2Sad/b62307c0ba.png
3. 00:03:136 (2,1) - improve blanket
4. 00:14:232 (2,3,4,1) - avoid stacking so much, it can be hard to read. i'll stop mentioning them because you know where they are.
5. 00:22:451 (1,2) - blanket
6. 00:23:684 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:26:972 (1,2) - ^, middle point is too far
8. 00:29:232 (1,2) - your blankets need a lot of improvement, i'll stop mentioning them but go through and fix the sliders until every point is equidistant from the object they blanket. one way is to scroll through the timeline until you arrive at a point where you can blanket the approach circle like http://puu.sh/b2SlX/a356899bc1.png
9. 00:42:999 (1,2,3,4) - this organization is pretty boring with the straight angles and stuff. try mixing it up
10. 00:57:794 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this, it's ugly
11. 01:01:492 (1,2) - i'll reiterate the stacking thing here; next to the stuff after it, it may get confusing
12. 01:12:999 (3,4) - same thing about overlaps
13. 01:23:121 (4) - don't use a slider here because there's no music for it to end on

1. 00:02:725 (3,4) - i feel they should be spaced away from 00:02:109 (2) - like you did 00:01:287 (4,5) -
2. 00:06:013 (5,6,7,8,9) - four 1/4 circles after a slider is too hard to play
3. 00:38:684 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
4. 00:46:903 (3) - moving it down here flows better from previous object http://puu.sh/b2RXH/19b1a86799.png

1. 00:45:876 (5,1) - try to use consistent time-distance spacing with 00:45:054 (2,3) -
2. 00:53:684 (4) - NC again because going back to 1/2

1. Inconsistency in Tags
2. BG.png is 1.19 mb I guess you can easy reduce the file size without lossing quality, since less size is better.

1. 00:04:369 (3) - according to the music this slider should end in 00:04:575 - since there is where the music it, just like you did before.
2. 00:06:218 (4,5,6) - nazi, this is not properly stacked, also in 00:09:917 (6,7,1) -
3. 00:21:116 (4) - there is nothing in the music, should be better if you remove it for consistency with the music
4. 00:23:684 (2,3,4) - why this pattern is so close? since is not like your others ones, for example 00:12:177 (2,3,4) -
5. 00:36:732 why you didn't map this beat? since you mapped the before stream, will be nice to have one here too
6. 00:51:013 (1,2,3) - same as 00:06:218
7. 01:15:054 (3) - do you mind moving this 1 or 2 grids to the right? for readability purposes, since is hidden under the slider body
8. 01:21:733 why are you ignoring this one?

1. for moments I feel this is a soft insane, but due to the low bpm should be ok, I guess.
2. 00:00:465 (2) - there is nothing in the music starting with this slider, take a look to the rhythm in the insane diff and do something similar, maybe like this:
   
   
   or
   
   
3. 00:02:109 (2) - similar as above
4. 00:06:013 (5) - ending sliders in stong beats like the one in 00:06:218 is not ok IMO, since those strong beats need click actions to represent the song better.
5. 00:06:218 missing finish here too
6. 00:08:479 (3) - same as above
7. 00:10:123 (1) - ^
8. 00:13:410 (1) - ^
9. 00:12:794 (6) - ^
10. 00:19:986 same as 00:06:013 that's why the next slider play a bit weird for me, since is not fitting with the song, consider changing the rhythm in this part
11. 00:24:712 (7) - this kind of extended slider are not suitable for a hard diff IMO, also if you listen careful there is nothing in the music at 00:25:020 but yes in 00:24:917
12. 00:28:205 (7) - look like you are missing a NC here, since u was using them every 1 stanza
13. 00:29:027 (1,2) - swap NC to ft the vocals better?
14. 00:37:862 (1,2,3) - 00:38:684 (5,6,7,8,9) - them are a bit confused for a hard diff, since them look like the same, but 1 have more circles, try a different pattern ? so the player can read this better
15. 00:42:177 (5,6) - use just 1 repeat slider like you did before for consistency
16. 00:46:081 (1,2,3) - spacing, even if the distance is correctly they dont look the same visually talking
17. 00:56:150 (1,3) - try to avoid the overlap and stack 1 head with 3 head
18. 01:09:300 (1,3) - ^
19. Add a spinner or slider ending here 01:25:839 for consistency with the insane
20. check hitsounds, since you are missing some

1. 00:00:260 (1) - missing finish in the head
2. 00:00:260 (1) - If you want to folllow the music correctly is better if you end this slider in 00:00:876 were the music is
3. 00:01:492 (1) - similar as above why this have the repeat in 00:02:109 were is nothing in the music? is much better having it in 00:01:903
4. 00:03:136 (2,1,1) - try to dont spam combos like this, since they are not necesary and just mess up the overall HP drain in al the diff
5. 00:06:424 (3) - this is the same issue as hard in 00:06:013 -, also add finish in 00:06:835
6. 00:07:246 (1,1) - the head is overlaped, try to blank this better
7. 00:08:479 missing finish here too, I suggest you to take a look at the other diffs hitsounds (maybe the insane one) since you are missing a lot
8. 00:19:575 (1) - same as 00:06:424 -,try to dont end sliders in strong beats, also there should be a finish sound too
9. 00:26:561 this beat should be mapped, since is really strong and there is a cymbal, so if you add a circle here add finish too
10. 00:32:520 (1,1) - same as 00:03:136
11. 00:37:040 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this part is too hard compared to the rest of the diff, this can be an issue IMO, try to reduce the note density there
12. 00:41:150 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ similar as above, since you dont have to map every beat in a normal diff, but the important ones.
13. 00:46:081 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is not consistent with previous similar parts
14. 00:57:794 (1,2) - this kinds overlaps doesn't look good, try to clean up this part a bit
15. 01:23:433 Unsnapped

1. 00:00:260 (1) - mmm you should start mapping from here like the others diffs do
2. 01:17:520 (1,1,1) - don't spam combos pls, as I explain in hard this just mess up the HP drain.
3. 01:24:095 (1) - Unsnapped
4. technically is fine but it doesn't follow the music as it can, try to fix some blankets and nazi thinks also for better design, but yeah working a bit more to improve the rhythm will be really nice.

xxdeathx wrote:

Man how many of these Hanayamata songs have I modded so far yeah dudu,That's a lot of Hanayamata songs in pending and ranked XDDD And this one may be the next one

[General]

1. add "hanayamata ending" to tags

Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:02:725 (3,4) - i feel they should be spaced away from 00:02:109 (2) - like you did 00:01:287 (4,5) - Fixed
2. 00:06:013 (5,6,7,8,9) - four 1/4 circles after a slider is too hard to play Well,Considering the low BPM,I think it is fine for players
3. 00:38:684 (5,6,7,8,9) - ^
4. 00:46:903 (3) - moving it down here flows better from previous object http://puu.sh/b2RXH/19b1a86799.png

wow Fixed XDD

Hard and insane are pretty decent, but Easy and Normal have a lot to improve. Good luck!

Natsu wrote:

As requested

General:

1. Inconsistency in Tags Fixed
2. BG.png is 1.19 mb I guess you can easy reduce the file size without lossing quality, since less size is better.

Considering there is Alpha Channel in the BG,and making it to .Jpg will get it cut which makes the BG bad to look at.I didn't change it. And I think it won't add too much pressure to bancho and players XDDDD

Hard

1. for moments I feel this is a soft insane, but due to the low bpm should be ok, I guess.
2. 00:00:465 (2) - there is nothing in the music starting with this slider, take a look to the rhythm in the insane diff and do something similar, maybe like this:
   
   
   or
   
   You're right.That is a serious mistake!
3. 00:02:109 (2) - similar as above ^
4. 00:06:013 (5) - ending sliders in stong beats like the one in 00:06:218 is not ok IMO, since those strong beats need click actions to represent the song better. I did some test plays and I feel it is fine.So,This part Won't change
5. 00:06:218 missing finish here too
6. 00:08:479 (3) - same as above
7. 00:10:123 (1) - ^
8. 00:13:410 (1) - ^
9. 00:12:794 (6) - ^Wow,so many Finish problems.I can't make sure the right way to add finish.Hoping somebody teach me!
10. 00:19:986 same as 00:06:013 that's why the next slider play a bit weird for me, since is not fitting with the song, consider changing the rhythm in this part
11. 00:24:712 (7) - this kind of extended slider are not suitable for a hard diff IMO, also if you listen careful there is nothing in the music at 00:25:020 but yes in 00:24:917For this part,I made the slider like that is because II want to make a transition from vocal 'ji' to the ins.And the New combo here is to tell players that is a new part.
12. 00:28:205 (7) - look like you are missing a NC here, since u was using them every 1 stanza Fixed!
13. 00:29:027 (1,2) - swap NC to ft the vocals better? Fixed!
14. 00:37:862 (1,2,3) - 00:38:684 (5,6,7,8,9) - them are a bit confused for a hard diff, since them look like the same, but 1 have more circles, try a different pattern ? so the player can read this better Good idea!
15. 00:42:177 (5,6) - use just 1 repeat slider like you did before for consistency I don't know how to do,Everytime I try I just can't make a good pattern.So kept as long as New idea comes!
16. 00:46:081 (1,2,3) - spacing, even if the distance is correctly they dont look the same visually talking Tried
17. 00:56:150 (1,3) - try to avoid the overlap and stack 1 head with 3 head Fixed,But I stacked 1's end with 3's head
18. 01:09:300 (1,3) - ^ ^
19. Add a spinner or slider ending here 01:25:839 for consistency with the insane Sorry,I think it is fine.Since they are not created by same mapper
20. check hitsounds, since you are missing some

Yeah,It's sad to make bad hitsounds




Good Luck

Gaia wrote:

From my giving back queue
thanks for modding my map before~ 3Q for remembering me！

[General]
Something is definitely wrong with your offset near the end, none of the notes should be unsnapped. If i were a offset mastur i'd help u myself but i cant so sry

Correct me if I'm wrong but this is (TV size) is it not? Wow,I will edit if some one else tell me again.Cuz I don't like tv size


[Hard]

?????????????????????????

当时我是这里是为了换音效，Normal和soft不停地切换。但是现在感觉一些地方只用soft好像也可以。不过现在听起来也没什么问题，所以没改
00:01:903 (1) - 遠一點, spacing 會讓人以為這是1/2 但其實是1/1Fixed
00:04:986 (2,3) - spacing No，I think it's fine to read
00:08:068 (2) - overlap不好看稍微移了移
00:21:424 (1) - whistle o-o 没有看懂你的意思.-.
00:28:205 (1) - 00:30:054 (4) - stack? Fixed!
00:40:328 (1,2) - spacing. ctrl+g 改动了
00:56:972 (3) - stack 可以更好 尝试啧改了下
01:02:725 (1) - http://puu.sh/b3ITN/28dd2478f5.jpg Wow，another serious mistake。。。
01:10:122 (3) - stack 保持原样
01:17:931 (1) - spacingNo，It's fiine now
01:24:089 (2) - LOL?? 我無言了 Insane里也有这个节奏，而且这只是相当于一个单点，不会增加难度吧



Good luck!

CPLs wrote:

wow this is nice, keep it up

too bad all slots have been taken

edit: can I still try to make a gd? if you allow

xxdeathx wrote:

Man how many of these Hanayamata songs have I modded so far

[Normal]

1. 00:01:492 (1) - move slider repeat side to 384, 60 for blanket
2. 00:01:492 (1,2) - current rhythm doesn't fit music, try http://puu.sh/b2Sad/b62307c0ba.png
3. 00:03:136 (2,1) - improve blanket
4. 00:14:232 (2,3,4,1) - avoid stacking so much, it can be hard to read. i'll stop mentioning them because you know where they are.
5. 00:22:451 (1,2) - blanket
6. 00:23:684 (4,5) - ^
7. 00:26:972 (1,2) - ^, middle point is too far
8. 00:29:232 (1,2) - your blankets need a lot of improvement, i'll stop mentioning them but go through and fix the sliders until every point is equidistant from the object they blanket. one way is to scroll through the timeline until you arrive at a point where you can blanket the approach circle like http://puu.sh/b2SlX/a356899bc1.png
9. 00:42:999 (1,2,3,4) - this organization is pretty boring with the straight angles and stuff. try mixing it up
10. 00:57:794 (1,2) - avoid overlap like this, it's ugly
11. 01:01:492 (1,2) - i'll reiterate the stacking thing here; next to the stuff after it, it may get confusing
12. 01:12:999 (3,4) - same thing about overlaps
13. 01:23:121 (4) - don't use a slider here because there's no music for it to end on

Hmm diff could use a lot more work, especially with neatness and rhythm.

1. tags suggetion:
   yuuyu

1. 00:00:260 (1,2) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest to stack
2. 00:01:492 (5,1) - increase DS more. so confusing
3. 00:02:212 (2,3) - decrese DS
4. 00:06:321 (6,7,8,9) - I prefer to use reverse slider
5. 00:24:712 (7,1) - it is better to conbine into 1 slider
6. 00:41:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - in this part, only circle pattern is hard to find rhythm. I suggest to use slider
7. 00:51:013 (1,2) - how about combining into 1 slider in order to suit to vocal
8. 00:54:506 (2,3) - I prefer to suit to vocal like this
   
9. 01:07:657 (2,3) - ^
10. 01:09:302 (1,3) - stack correctly
11. 01:14:231 (1,2,3) - this triplet is not suitable for music
12. 01:15:876 (1) - I hear the 1/4 drum sound. just a suggetion~
    
13. 01:17:520 (2,1) - DS is too short. how about exchanging the positions of 01:17:931 (1) - and 01:18:753 (1) - ?

1. because of short song, I recommend to start mapping from at least 00:06:835
2. I prefer to increase SV a little more
3. 00:24:917 (2) - start at 00:24:712
4. 00:37:862 (4,5) - combine into 1 slider?
5. 00:45:465 (2,2) - stack correctly and check blanketting
6. 00:49:575 (3) - rhythm suggetion~
   
7. 01:00:259 (4,2) - stack correctly

1. 00:06:424 (3,1) - it is better not to stack
2. 00:07:246 (1,1) - check DS (and I prefer not to blanket. it's so difficult to remaining good shape and flow)
3. 00:12:588 (4,1) - stack slider's heads correctly
4. 00:14:232 (2,3) - it is better not to stack
5. 00:17:931 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:22:451 (1,4) - stack correctly
7. 00:17:931 (3,4) - I suggest 1/2 slider
   
8. 00:29:232 (1,1,2,1) - it is better not to suit to vocal (red line pattern) but to make 1/1 rhythm (set notes on white line)
9. 00:32:520 (1,2) - avoid overlapping
10. 00:41:150 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm suggetion
    
11. 00:44:643 (2) - end at 00:45:465
12. 00:50:191 (4) - end at 00:50:602
13. 01:01:903 (2,3,4,5,6) - very difficult for normal
14. 01:14:643 (2,3) - avoid this overlapping. hard to see...
15. 01:15:876 (3) - end at 01:15:876 (3) - for following piano

1. 00:08:273 (4,4) - stack correctly
2. 00:50:396 (3) - circle x2 の方が良いような気がしました

Natsu wrote:

As requested

General:

1. Inconsistency in Tags
2. BG.png is 1.19 mb I guess you can easy reduce the file size without lossing quality, since less size is better.

Normal:

1. 00:00:260 (1) - missing finish in the head
2. 00:00:260 (1) - If you want to folllow the music correctly is better if you end this slider in 00:00:876 were the music is
3. 00:01:492 (1) - similar as above why this have the repeat in 00:02:109 were is nothing in the music? is much better having it in 00:01:903
4. 00:03:136 (2,1,1) - try to dont spam combos like this, since they are not necesary and just mess up the overall HP drain in al the diff
5. 00:06:424 (3) - this is the same issue as hard in 00:06:013 -, also add finish in 00:06:835
6. 00:07:246 (1,1) - the head is overlaped, try to blank this better
7. 00:08:479 missing finish here too, I suggest you to take a look at the other diffs hitsounds (maybe the insane one) since you are missing a lot
8. 00:19:575 (1) - same as 00:06:424 -,try to dont end sliders in strong beats, also there should be a finish sound too
9. 00:26:561 this beat should be mapped, since is really strong and there is a cymbal, so if you add a circle here add finish too
10. 00:32:520 (1,1) - same as 00:03:136
11. 00:37:040 (1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - this part is too hard compared to the rest of the diff, this can be an issue IMO, try to reduce the note density there
12. 00:41:150 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - ^ similar as above, since you dont have to map every beat in a normal diff, but the important ones.
13. 00:46:081 (1,2,3) - the rhythm is not consistent with previous similar parts
14. 00:57:794 (1,2) - this kinds overlaps doesn't look good, try to clean up this part a bit
15. 01:23:433 Unsnapped

Good Luck

Gaia wrote:

From my giving back queue
thanks for modding my map before~

[General]
Something is definitely wrong with your offset near the end, none of the notes should be unsnapped. If i were a offset mastur i'd help u myself but i cant so sry

Correct me if I'm wrong but this is (TV size) is it not?

[Mecon's Normal]
00:01:081 (2,1) - blanket is off
00:03:136 (2,1) - ^
00:03:547 (1,1) - ^ ima stop here.
00:07:246 (1) - stacking at the end of sliders is not allowed in normal i dont think
00:07:246 (1,1) - bad blanket slider bow
00:21:629 (4) - move a bit down to stack with 00:19:575 (1) -
00:23:684 (4) - dont stack this one.
00:31:698 (4,1) - actually this sounds a lot better to me

SPOILER

OR

00:32:520 (1) - no nc
00:41:355 (2) - http://puu.sh/b3I5f/80333eee7a.jpg
00:50:191 (4) - follow vocal sounds better, 1/2 shorter pls
00:52:862 (1,1) - overlap doesnt look good
00:57:794 (1,2) - ^ try this rhythm http://puu.sh/b3Ifb/85a2f1d5e0.jpg
01:01:903 (2,3,4,5) - things feel rushed.. simplify the rhythm more?
01:16:698 (6) - 01:17:931 (2) - use the same shape. also blanket is off
01:23:121 (4) - 1 circle sounds better, extra 4th note doesnt exist in the actual music

Rhythm can be improved if you ask me.


Good luck!

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   yuuyu

[Mecon's Normal]

1. 00:06:424 (3,1) - it is better not to stack
2. 00:07:246 (1,1) - check DS (and I prefer not to blanket. it's so difficult to remaining good shape and flow)
3. 00:12:588 (4,1) - stack slider's heads correctly
4. 00:14:232 (2,3) - it is better not to stack
5. 00:17:931 (3,4) - ^
6. 00:22:451 (1,4) - stack correctly
7. 00:17:931 (3,4) - I suggest 1/2 slider
   
8. 00:29:232 (1,1,2,1) - it is better not to suit to vocal (red line pattern) but to make 1/1 rhythm (set notes on white line)
9. 00:32:520 (1,2) - avoid overlapping
10. 00:41:150 (1,2,3,4) - rhythm suggetion
    
11. 00:44:643 (2) - end at 00:45:465
12. 00:50:191 (4) - end at 00:50:602
13. 01:01:903 (2,3,4,5,6) - very difficult for normal
14. 01:14:643 (2,3) - avoid this overlapping. hard to see...
15. 01:15:876 (3) - end at 01:15:876 (3) - for following piano

YOSAKOI!
~Good Luck~

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Mecon's Normal

1. 00:00:260 (1,2,1) - blanket, and almost all of the map, i think they r better in blankets composing. check and fix them by urself
2. 00:07:246 (1,1) - perfect blanket like this, and also, overlap like this's not that recommended in normal diff
3. 00:22:451 (1,4) - stack
4. 00:34:575 (5,1) - change this overlap
5. 01:15:876 (3,4) - ^
6. following vocal beats is not ur only choice. and watch out the composing in low diff as well

good luck

[Seraphin] wrote:

hollow wings ninja attempt
no kd
no kd

feel free to ignore these, just nazi

[normal]
i think is really hard )?
00:07:246 (1) - adjust to blanket head of next note (?)
00:08:479 (1) - why NC?
00:26:561 (1) - end point up1
00:46:081 (1) - right 1
00:50:191 (4) - x268y92
00:53:684 (2) - down 1

nice map
gl

Ryuuka Toki wrote:

CPLs wrote:

wow this is nice, keep it up

too bad all slots have been taken

edit: can I still try to make a gd? if you allow

Thank you!
But,It don't need more GDs imo.May be next time

RandomEffect wrote:

From my queue~ HiHI!

[General]

1. tags suggetion:
   yuuyu

Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:00:260 (1,2) - hard to find rhythm. I suggest to stack Fixed
2. 00:01:492 (5,1) - increase DS more. so confusing Fixed
3. 00:02:212 (2,3) - decrese DS Fixed
4. 00:06:321 (6,7,8,9) - I prefer to use reverse slider Sorry,I think tapping all the beats is not here is fun and won't be too difficult
5. 00:24:712 (7,1) - it is better to conbine into 1 sliderNo Change,There is a transition form vocal to ins
6. 00:41:150 (1,2,3,4,5) - in this part, only circle pattern is hard to find rhythm. I suggest to use slider I think it's fine.As long as it will be easily FCed the second time www
7. 00:51:013 (1,2) - how about combining into 1 slider in order to suit to vocal I can't find a good pattern to make that change sad
8. 00:54:506 (2,3) - I prefer to suit to vocal like this Fixed!
   
9. 01:07:657 (2,3) - ^ Fixed!
10. 01:09:302 (1,3) - stack correctly Fixed imo
11. 01:14:231 (1,2,3) - this triplet is not suitable for music It is kinda overmapped.But that should be fine imo
12. 01:15:876 (1) - I hear the 1/4 drum sound. just a suggetion~ Fixed!
    
13. 01:17:520 (2,1) - DS is too short. how about exchanging the positions of 01:17:931 (1) - and 01:18:753 (1) - ? Fixed!

YOSAKOI!
~Good Luck~

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Hard

1. 00:09:506 (4) - i highly recommend u change this into two notes here, to follow that really heavy drum beats Fixed!
2. 00:45:876 add note Fixed!
3. thou u mainly follow the vocal track, some of special parts still missed like 00:54:712 (3) - or other things which can be mapped with interesting patterns imo. and follow other instru's track r good idea as well when the map isn't only singing, but also beating rhythms 0.0

这图做成这样的原因，一方面是我不太敢用pattern，大部分都在绕圈而已。第二有些节奏是我真的没有听出来orz，你提到的那个missed部分，上一个人的mod里提到了，我真是羞愧难当。。。感觉耳朵还需要修炼

actually this is a song really easy to be mapped because of its special rhythms imo, various tracks can be followed to set objs 0.0

good luck

Ryuuka Toki wrote:

okay, goodluck then

oh, by the way, the title only capitalizes the first word, the "Yuki" doesn't need to be capitalized Ok,I will change it in the next update

and... the video is off-synced, try moving the video offset to 0 or negative number

I find the video offset is better at -350 ~ -360, try it

xLoupGarou wrote:

Yo~ I saw all your mods and majority says that x0.5 is too slow so I decided to re-map my GD if its ok with Ryuuka Toki but I'm not really sure when can I finish it because I got a big list of mods

1. 你可以考慮tag ゆうゆ 就是那個編曲者的名子
2. Garou's Easy diff doesn't contain the video, please add the video in it.
3. 我感覺normal-sliderwhistle.wav可以去掉 既然他是靜音的那就沒必要在滑條上+whistle了吧

1. AR9 seems too fast for me, how about change it to AR8? The rhythm you've put aren't that complex, and the placement are kind of easy to beat, so ar8 might fit better I think.
2. 00:19:164 (3,4,5) - A bit nazi, but the distance among (3,4), (4,5), and (5,3) should be same, and the triangle would be looked much more nicer I think.
3. 00:44:643 (1,2) - This sounds a bit empty, I'd suggest you to follow the vocal by changing the rhythm like this:
   

1. 00:28:410 (2) - 這非常的詭異 你整張map看起來只有在擺1/2跟一些follow vocal的1/1, 這個突然出現就怪怪的. 建議你改成1/2 slider然後帶個折返就好
2. 00:39:917 (3,1) - 這兒的spacing太小了啊 明明是隔著1/1拍卻跟1/2差不多distance (同理00:40:739 (3,1) - )
3. 00:43:205 (2) - 這裡跟vocal跟的太水了 我想是因為你00:42:999 - 擺了個sliderend所以這裡跟前面沒有連貫性的原因 我建議你在加個折返聽起來還好聽點
4. 00:44:438 (1,2) - 這裡跟^一樣也是跟的很突然 我建議你把00:44:438 (1,2) - 這兩個都刪了 然後再00:44:438 - 加個note, 00:44:643 - 加個3/4 slider就行
5. 01:01:081 (1,2,3) - 這3連啥都沒跟到吧 改成1/2滑條好點 (或者你要3/4也行)
6. 01:14:231 (1,2,3) - 同^
   整體來說排的有點隨便...不過節奏大致上都還不錯, 就是有些聽起來彆扭. 至於排版問題你可能還得找更多mod, 不然就是自己重新看一遍然後以一個modder的角度看看你這個diff

1. 00:00:260 (1,1) - 這spacing怎麼回事
2. 00:01:492 (1) - 這個沒有跟到音啊 00:02:109 - 這裡根本沒啥音 而且00:01:903 - 這裡有個好明顯的音
3. 00:05:191 - 這裡也有個音沒跟到
   總結這上面三個我會推薦你這種改法: 把00:01:492 (1) - 刪了然後在00:00:260 (1) - 加個折返 -> 從 00:01:903 - 開始做個2/1的滑條 -> 把 00:04:369 (1) - 的折返去掉 -> 在 00:05:191 - 加個1/1滑條
   這個排法會比較follow vocal一點
4. 00:06:835 (3,1,2) - 這距離可以再拉開一點 這樣擠擠的不但醜而且可能讀錯 大概增加到1.2x
5. 00:18:136 - 這個vocal聲還滿重的, 我建議你可以跟一下. 把(3)縮短成1/1然後搬到00:18:136 -, 之後00:17:931 - 補個note
6. 00:24:712 - ?!?!?!?!?!?怎麼突然沒東西...這音超明顯不跟略詭異啊. 比較直接的改法就是00:24:712 - 從這裡拉個滑條到 00:25:328 - , 然後後面那兩根白線個擺一個note(也可以兩個note合成一個1/1滑條)
7. 00:26:561 (5) - 這個nc你懂
8. 00:27:999 (8) - 這個在往後延長到紅線 聽起來怪怪的跟後面的00:29:232 (1) - 接不太上
9. 00:37:040 (1) - 這聽起來就像是應該要擺在00:37:246 - 啊 白線的音基本上比紅線的音重的多
10. 00:46:081 (1,2) - 這裡也跟00:42:794 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 一樣啊為什麼空著? 聽起來超空
11. 00:48:753 (5) - 00:48:958 - 這裡沒音啊為甚麼在這裡停下來 還不如往後拉一點到00:49:164 - 跟那個鼓點
12. 01:01:903 (2,3,4,5,6) - 這太明顯了是為了擺花而擺的吧...仔細聽聽這裡根本沒五個連音的節奏啊...
13. 01:16:698 (4,2) - 這絕對讀不到 你可不是在坐Insane啊
    我感覺你的節奏部分還有待加強 有點缺乏組織性啊 排版到是還好因為只是個normal基本不會太大問題 但要是連normal的節奏都下不好就還得回去重新磨練一下

1. 00:21:629 (2,1) - wtf noooooo spacing-san where are you
2. 00:37:862 (4) - I know you're on purpose to place this note at red tick, so I think you have to do something to make the players know the rhythm is changing here. Add a new combo perhaps?
3. 01:06:013 (4,1) - Overlap (4) and (1)'s sliderhead please.