1. Easy (1.09 stars, 70 notes)
2. Hard (2.1 stars, 159 notes)
3. HOS' Insane (2.84 stars, 188 notes)
4. Normal (1.69 stars, 122 notes)

truonant wrote:

Hello M4M~ from my Mod Queue

Turn off countdown on Hard difficulty Fixed
Could use more hit sounds. You can try adding some hit sounds on: 00:25:227 (5) - , 00:28:227 (3) – , 00:31:227 (5) and etc. And some more custom hitsounds for the piano Added more hitsounds
You don’t need the Strike the Blood ED 2 in the title. Just use Signal Removed 'Strike the Blood ED 2' and added 'TV Size'.
Within the source, capitalize the ‘B’ in ‘Strike the blood’ Fixed


00:06:352 (1) – move to 00:06:290 – and reduce by 1 reverse Fixed
00:06:727 (1) – end on 00:08:165 Fixed
00:09:138 – is this timing point needed? Removed the timing point
00:12:477 (3) – could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak1SE/bba3bf5467.jpg Tried to blanket the slider better, but don't notice much of a difference then before.
00:18:477 (3) – try stacking slider tail on 00:16:227 (2,3,4) Ok
00:23:352 (2) – try stacking slider head on slider head of 00:21:477 (5) – Ok
00:36:477 (3) – could be blanketed better on 00:35:727 (1) – Tried to blanket it better
00:41:352 (2) – could be blanketed better on 00:40:227 (1,2,3) – Tried to blanket it better, but I don't see much of a difference
00:44:351 (2) – perhaps stack on 00:41:352 (2) – & blanket on 00:46:226 (3) – Stacked and blanketed
00:50:726 (3) – move left a bit to: x:72 y:80 for better blanket Fixed
01:04:976 (1) – the hitsound here is really loud. Consider lowering the volume & could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak2A3/1a5e854dcb.jpg Lowered the volume and tried to blanket better
01:09:476 (5) – copy this slider: 01:08:726 (4) – and ctrl+h Fixed
01:11:726 (2) – blanket on 01:10:976 (1) – Blanketed and changed some other things as well
01:14:726 (2) - blanket - http://puu.sh/ak2PB/9e909b3685.jpg Changed it a bit differently
01:15:476 (3,4) – move up so that slider head of 01:16:226 (4) – stacks on slider tail of 01:14:726 (2) – Made other changes
01:16:976 (1) – really loud hitsound. Reduce volume Fixed
01:17:726 (2) - could be blanketed better. Make head and tail align horizontally - http://puu.sh/ak2YN/75eeec3231.jpg Fixed
01:17:726 (2) – However this reverse slider doesn’t seem to fit with the music. Try this: http://puu.sh/ak38i/3413394f41.jpg Yes, I like it; changed.


00:20:728 (4) – could be blanketed better Tried to blanket better, but I don't see much change
00:24:478 (2) – this slider doesn’t seem to fit the music. Try just using a 1/1 slider: http://puu.sh/ak3DR/578e491d7b.jpg Changed
00:27:103 – add a circle here No, I think it will then be too hard
00:33:478 (5) – same as 00:24:478 (2) Fixed
00:33:478 (5,1) – avoid this unessessary overlap. It can be confusing for new players and it doesn’t look good No overlapping
00:42:478 (3,4) – could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak3U2/33d9cb8556.jpg I think it's better blanketed now
00:58:978 (1) - could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ak457/645e33ac62.jpg Had a bit of trouble with that, but I think it looks better now
00:58:978 (1) loud hitsound, lower volume Lowered the volume
01:01:978 (1) – ctrl + h on 00:58:978 (1) Fixed it. Looks much better now
01:07:978 (4) – better blanket - http://puu.sh/ak4hl/75ad210573.jpg I want the slider to compliment this slider: 01:06:478. Didn't make a change.
01:09:290 (5) – doesn’t match music. Try this: http://puu.sh/ak4mY/4f8f60c56a.jpg Changed it
01:12:478 (3) - doesn’t match music. Try a 1/1 slider Changed
01:15:478 (3) - ^ Changed
01:21:478 (5) - ^ same as 01:09:290 (5) Changed
01:24:478 (3) - ^ try: http://puu.sh/ak4E0/054782eade.jpg Changed
01:24:478 (3) - better blanket - http://puu.sh/ak4zI/85d7872cc8.jpg Did something else

Good luck with your map!~ Thanks!

Wow, I made alot of changes.
Thanks for the mod.

hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

Hi~ Passing by ^^
Random mod :3

[General]

1. I think you should add normal difficulty for diff spread Will definitely consider it; I might ask someone else for a GD.
2. The "Strike the Blood ED 2" on title is unnecessary, remove it, and add "TV Size" maybe Changed
3. "strike the blood" and "signal" is unnecessary on tags because its already mentioned on title and source Removed them
4. I think the preview point should be here 01:04:603 So the word "Kami-Sama" would not be cut off Fixed. (Thanks for that)

[Easy]

1. 00:19:228 (3,4) - Mirror these sliders perfectly, and maybe you can add a little modification so it would blanket perfectly with 00:22:228 (5) - I'm satisfied with how it is now, but I did try to make the blanket better
2. 00:33:478 (5,1) - These sliders are overlapped poorly, it looks ugly imo :/ maybe change it a little? http://puu.sh/akxHc/a87f812c4c.jpg I changed it differently by also changing one of the slider's shape
3. 00:52:978 (1) - this slider looks weird :/ modificate it a little maybe? http://puu.sh/akxNT/0c3e2a595b.jpg and then mirror this slider 00:54:478 (2) - Changed it and also mirrored it; it looks much better now
4. 00:58:228 (4,1) - Blanket this perfectly and mirror this 01:01:978 (1) - I tried my best to blanket and mirror them properly

[Hard]

1. 00:06:352 (1) - Check AiMod, object end is not snapped, add one more repeat and move the spinner backward so it start on red line http://puu.sh/aky5j/c89551f60f.jpg Fixed
2. 00:40:227 (1,2,3,2) - Blanket this? Tried to blanket it as best I can
3. 00:50:726 (3,4) - mirror these sliders maybe? I like how it is now
4. 01:07:413 (4,5,1) - this part looks confusing :/ change it to 1/4 repeat slider maybe? http://puu.sh/akyeX/d490f29bd0.jpg or just spread the circles like this http://puu.sh/akyhI/de4be451e5.jpg I spreaded the circles (Thanks for that advice)
5. 01:16:976 (1,2) - Blanket this perfectly I did something else there
6. 01:31:975 (1) - maybe this should be moved like this http://puu.sh/akyoK/c58a6fd4fb.jpg to make it to a straight line Fixed
7. 01:34:225 (1) - Remove NC here Fixed

Well, pretty short mod eh :3 nice map thanx but I think the offset somehow wrong :/
Maybe you will need two inherited timing points, one for the first piano part so that the notes (especially on easy) won't start on the blue line, and the second one on the start of the vocal
I can't seem to find the right offset, maybe you should consult to some experienced mapper I'll wait and see what other modders suggest; so I'll keep the same offset for now.
Improve your note placement, blanket, NC, mirroring, etc Did as much improving as I can.

Thanks so much for the mod, hanyuu!
I really appreciate it.

Rad- wrote:

Hey there!

General:
- Your video has too large dimensions, by rule it must not exceed 1280x720, and it still has sound, which is increasing the file size. Also since its smaller than the song, drag the slider video offset maximum to the right, as it would fit at the spot it should i think. I'm searching for a better video
- Your background also should have either a 4:3 (1024x768) or a 16:9 (1366x768) dimension. Will replace the background
- Offset is 483 Fixed
- I noticed how Easy and Hard have the same slider velocity, not that important, but just wanted to point that out, and how the spacing wasnt very consistent to that, as you used 0,8x spacing on easy for example.
- 01:40:230 - Add a low volume inherited point here Fixed

Easy

- 00:08:545 (1) - Make the spinner end at 00:10:983 and add a whistle to it, then drag 00:10:983 (1) - slider to 00:11:733 , take out its reverse arrow and use ''reverse selection'' on it so it starts at the end. Fixed;I did apply a hitsound but not a whistle though (I don't really like the whistle sound)
- 00:16:233 (1) - I reccomend here instead of using drum hitsounds, change to soft and add whistle on the end of this slider. Changed
- 00:27:483 (1) - Remove NC Ok
- 00:34:983 (6) - NC Ok
- 00:35:358 (1) - Remove NC Ok
- 01:18:483 (3,4) - Use only one slider point on these so that they will look nicer, redo them if you have to as long as they look more round. I like how they are now

Hard

- No idea why you did this in the first place, but delete all the repeating inherited points at the same spot. And delete all the ones that go to 80% volume as the volume of those whistle are suddenly too loud, and change those that are too low volume, as you can barely hear them, and i am talking about the ones in the kiai time as well, keep it all at the same volume so it gives the player a good feedback when clicking. Deleted the repeating points; I think my hitsounds are okay now

- 00:06:295 (1) - Make it only repeat once, and drag it to 00:06:389 Yeah, I like this; done
- 00:40:982 (1) - Add a Finish Added
- 00:43:981 (4,1) - Instead of doing this the same way as before, why not switch the objects on the timeline? I think I'm gonna keep it as it is now
- 01:01:231 - Place a circle here to fill the empty space Fixed
- 01:07:793 (1) - Remove NC and add NC here 01:07:981 (7) Fixed
- 01:31:230 (1) - Remove NC Fixed

Hope it helps ^^ It did. Thank you very much!

Thanks for the mod!

Jaltzu wrote:

So, I happened to have time now... Here we go, double m4m!
I'll be nitpicking about stacking and blanketing, so please don't get too irritated because of that.
Maybe add a normal diff? Totally optional, ofc.

EASY

00:06:665 (4) - NC? Ok
00:10:978 (1,2,3) - Double blanket? Ok
00:20:728 (4,5) - Fix blanket I don't really see anything wrong with it.
00:40:603 - Add a circle No
00:41:728 (2,3) - ↑↑ Fixed
00:58:978 (1,2,1) - Fix this as a double blanket? (It's still good as it is now. Just a personal preference.) I'm gonna keep it as it is now
01:07:978 (4,5) - Fix blanket. I again don't really see what's wrong with it
01:09:478 (5) - Replace with a 1/2 tic long reverse slider. No change
01:11:728 (2,3) - Fix blanket Don't see anything wrong with it
01:12:478 (3,1) - ↑↑ Fixed
01:18:478 (3) - Reverse slider again? No change
01:21:478 (5) - Move 1/2 tic backwards ( to last red tic) and add a circle to 01:22:228 No, sorry. I like what I've done better
01:34:228 - Add a circle Added

Hard

AR6
Kiai isn't snapped. (Check AiMod...) Fixed
00:06:290 (1) - Consider moving this a bit closer to play screen center, so it would flow better to the next spinner. Moved it a bit closer
00:11:727 (2,3) - Fix blanket Moved it a little bit
00:17:540 - Add a circle Added
00:21:477 (5) - Try stacking with one of 00:19:602 (1,2) - circles, or don't overlap at all. (If you change this, remember to check that 00:22:602 (1) - is still stacked) Fixed
00:24:102 (3,4) - Suggestion: replace with a circle at 00:24:102 and a slider 00:24:289 - 00:24:852. No, I'm gonna keep it as it is now
00:36:289 - Add a circle No
00:38:352 (3,4) - Fix blanket (slider slightly too curved) Curved it less
00:40:602 (3,2) - Maybe make these a proper blanket too? I don't see anything wrong
00:44:351 (2,3) - ↑↑
00:51:476 (4) - Replace with 3 circles OR short reverse slider. No change
00:57:851 (1,2) - Maybe stack with 00:55:601 (6)? Fixed
01:06:663 - Music suggests there should be a note here. No change
01:09:663 - ↑↑
01:12:663 - ↑↑
01:10:976 (1,2) - Fix blanket Tried to fix it a bit
01:11:726 (2,3) - ↑↑
01:18:101 (3,4) - Stack properly with 01:16:976 (1) - tail I tried to stack it better, but for some reason it doesn't really want to
01:21:288 - Add a circle Added
01:24:288 - ↑↑
01:25:975 (2) - Replace with a reverse slider. No change
01:27:850 (6,1) - Blanket? Not much change but did try to improve it a bit
01:31:225 (1) - No NC Fixed

M4M

M4M request:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/194173
Thanks!

Thanks for the mod!

- H i N a - wrote:

Hi M4M~

Easy

00:27:478 (1) - delete 00:28:978 (2) and do like this for better sound Ok

SPOILER

00:28:228 - If you follow my suggestion you can add whistle here Done
00:48:478 (2,3) - i think do like this is better Ok

SPOILER

00:49:228 - If you follow my suggestion you can add whistle here Done
01:01:228 (2) - add whistle ? Done
01:04:978 - 01:28:228 - turn down volume to 35-40% Turned it down to 35%
01:34:978 (1) - do like this for better sound Done

SPOILER

Hard

00:34:602 (4) - I think this slider is not beautiful, try this ? Changed it a bit

SPOILER

00:57:851 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think it's too hard try to make it easier ? Made it easier
01:29:350 (1) - add whistle in the end slider ? Done
01:31:975 (1) - ^ Done
01:34:975 (1) - ^ Done


I hope it help you It definitely helped me. Thank you so much!

Good Luck Thanx!

Thanks for the mod

• 
  [in general]

1. nice song
2. Hmm...offset is so weird, map with Reasonable offset is hard to rank.you should have two time points i guess... or some other better choices.
   [easy]
3. 00:30:483 (2,3,4) - maybe it is a little hard to read for the beginners;
4. 00:40:983 (1,2) - avoid the stack in easy diff;
5. 00:55:983 (3,4) - ^
   [hard]
6. 00:00:670 (1) - you missed a lot of rhythms here . drag slider with the piano voices is not a wise choice i guess;
   maybe.. change this part like...
7. 00:06:295 (1) - you didn't follow the rhythm well. remove it, only spinner here.
8. 00:24:107 (3) - only copy and past? ctrl+H ctrl+G then put it in its place.
9. 00:38:732 (4,5) - ^
10. 00:25:607 (1,2,3,4) - stack them is better.
11. 00:32:357 (1,2,3) - better?
12. 00:41:356 (2) - is same as 00:44:356 (2) - ,,hmm..maybe you should have other patterns to make this part more varieties.
13. 01:04:981 (1,3) - symmetric pattern?but not in one horizontal line;
14. 01:08:731 (3,4) - ^
15. 01:19:981 (1,2) - ^ btw,,plz copy and past ,,then do some fix with your ctrl;
16. 01:34:980 (1) - ugly slider :\

pandorawindy wrote:

hi at your m4m request, i come here give you some suggestions just me.

• 
  [in general]

1. nice song Thanks
2. Hmm...offset is so weird, map with Reasonable offset is hard to rank.you should have two time points i guess... or some other better choices. Ugh, I hate Offset. I never get it right. Gonna keep it as it is for now.
   [easy]
3. 00:30:483 (2,3,4) - maybe it is a little hard to read for the beginners Made it easier (Moved the slider)
4. 00:40:983 (1,2) - avoid the stack in easy diff Fixed
5. 00:55:983 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
   [hard]
6. 00:00:670 (1) - you missed a lot of rhythms here . drag slider with the piano voices is not a wise choice i guess Changed it as you suggested
   maybe.. change this part like...
7. 00:06:295 (1) - you didn't follow the rhythm well. remove it, only spinner here. Wow! Yeah, that sounds bad. Changed it to a spinner
8. 00:24:107 (3) - only copy and past? ctrl+H ctrl+G then put it in its place. Fixed
9. 00:38:732 (4,5) - ^ Changed
10. 00:25:607 (1,2,3,4) - stack them is better. No, I like more how it is now
11. 00:32:357 (1,2,3) - better? Changed
12. 00:41:356 (2) - is same as 00:44:356 (2) - ,,hmm..maybe you should have other patterns to make this part more varieties. Changed this slider: 00:44:356
13. 01:04:981 (1,3) - symmetric pattern?but not in one horizontal line Changed it, but I copy and pasted to make both sliders identical
14. 01:08:731 (3,4) - ^ Made a very small change
15. 01:19:981 (1,2) - ^ btw,,plz copy and past ,,then do some fix with your ctrl Fixed
16. 01:34:980 (1) - ugly slider :\ Straightened the slider

good luck with you ! Thanks

Thanks so much for the mod!

1. 00:12:482 (3) - blanket better
2. 00:43:231 (3) - don't overmap，just one circle on 00:43:231 is enough
3. 01:29:355 (2) - cancel NC

1. 00:20:733 (4) - blanket
2. 00:25:983 (3) - move this away，don't overlap with 00:24:483 (2) -
3. 01:12:483 (3) - blanket
4. 01:31:983 (1) - change to end at 01:32:733,then 01:33:108 add a circle

sheela901 wrote:

Hey.

General

1. It needs a normal difficulty in order to rank the map. Ok, I'll make sure to get a Normal diff.
2. In the Ranking Criteria, you can't alter the title (TV Size, Short Ver.) unless it's official. In the ending video, there's no (TV size) in the title, so you should remove it. http://puu.sh/aEpuQ/9c5ec6babc.jpg Removed
3. The title is "signal", with no "s" in capital. Removed capital
4. In the artist, it should be 分島花音. The artist is used for the original name. Romanised is use for the English of the artist, which is Kanon Wakeshimi. Fixed
5. The "anime" in the tags is no need, since it'll mark when it's rank. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/167252 Removed "anime"
6. The file size of the video is too big. Replace the video by this one: http://puu.sh/aErAp/b7e566313d.avi Thanks so much for the video; your video added
7. In your .osu files, when you see "Video,3000,"Strike The Blood ED 2 [Full HD].avi", replace 3000 by 10983, since the video should start here. Fixed
8. 00:00:670 - The timing point should be here and remove the previous two green points. Fixed
9. 00:10:982 - Add a timing point here. Added
10. The preview point isn't snap. It is snapped?

Easy

1. 00:11:733 (1,2) - Make a better blanket: Tried to improve the blanket
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:13:233 (2,3) - ^ Tried to improve it as well
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:16:233 (1) - Stack it with the previous and move the last point to x:433 y:55. After, move 00:17:733 (1) to x:425 y:259 and move 00:18:483 (2) to x:313 y:251. I did stack it and I moved the two hitcircles
4. 00:19:233 (3,4) - Make a symmetric pattern: Ok
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 00:25:983 (3) - The flow to the previous isn't good and it's overlapped by the previous slider. Try this pattern: Ok
   
   SPOILER

   
   After, move 00:29:733 (1) to x:184 y:224, 00:30:483 (2) to x:280 y:281, 00:31:233 (3) to x:366 y:209, and 00:31:983 (4) to x:438 y:123, and a blanket with 00:31:233 (3) . Also, remove the repeat, and end the slider at 00:32:733 ; blue ticks aren't use in easy difficulties. Also, you need to do something with 00:33:483 (5) . Maybe copy and paste 00:31:983 (4) , rotate it by 45°, and move it to x:438 y:123. It makes the pattern better. And be careful with 00:34:983 (1,2,3) . I moved the hitcircles, blanketed, removed the repeat and made that slider longer.
6. 00:29:733 (1) - Remove the new combo, and add it to 00:30:483 (2) Ok
7. 00:37:983 (5) - Add a new combo. Ok
8. 00:40:983 (1) - If the circle is moved to x:390 y:108, the flow is better to the previous slider. Still, you have to do something about 00:41:733 (2,3) . You can move 00:41:733 (2) to x:288 y:59, 00:42:483 (3) Ctrl + G and move it to x:189 y:31, and 00:44:733 (4) to x:180 y:142. Be careful with the distance for 00:46:983 (1) . Fixed
9. 00:50:733 (3,4) - Make a blanket. Blanket should be better. Ok
10. 00:58:233 (4,1) - Make a better blanket; for the slider, move the first point (the one on the head) to x:196 y:287, the second to x:261 y:217, and last to x:182 y:76. Struggled with this but tried to improve it still
11. 01:01:233 (2) - Move this to x:156 y:184. Moved
12. 01:01:983 (1) - Copy and paste 00:58:983 (1) , Ctrl + J, Ctrl + H, Ctrl + G, and move it to x:115 y:80. I copy and pasted but moved it to another spot
13. 01:11:733 (2,3) - Make a better blanket. Use the approach circle of the circle to help. I hope my blanket looks better now
14. 01:34:983 (1) - Loosen the curve and make a blanket with 01:34:233 (2) . Ok

Hard

1. 00:12:482 (3) - Move the last point to x:268 y:375 to perfect the blanket pattern. I tried to perfect the blanket
2. 00:16:982 (1,3) - Loosen the curve; too much is ugly. Loosened the curve a bit
3. 00:23:357 (2) - Ctrl + J for a better flow. Ok
4. 00:40:607 (3,2) - Try perfecting the blanket. Did my best to perfect it
5. 00:58:981 (1) - Move this to x:70 y:165. The distance was too small. Moved the slider
6. 01:11:731 (2,3) - Loosen the curves. Fixed
7. 01:13:981 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
8. 01:25:230 (1) - Loosen the curve in order to move up the curve, since it was outside of the grid map. Did something else

Well, that's all. Any questions can be ask via PM or in-game. Good Luck on ranking this map. Thanks!

Thank you for the mod! It really helped me.

Sellenite wrote:

Hi！m4m

[Hard]

1. 00:12:482 (3) - blanket better Fixed
2. 00:43:231 (3) - don't overmap，just one circle on 00:43:231 is enough I'm gonna keep it as it is for now. If someone else also complains then I'll consider changing it
3. 01:29:355 (2) - cancel NC Ok

[Easy]

1. 00:20:733 (4) - blanket Ok
2. 00:25:983 (3) - move this away，don't overlap with 00:24:483 (2) - Fixed
3. 01:12:483 (3) - blanket Ok
4. 01:31:983 (1) - change to end at 01:32:733,then 01:33:108 add a circle Ok

nothing serious，but perhaps hard is lack of hitsound I'm not so good with hitsounds and I don't like it if there is too many hitsounds.
good luck Thanks!

Thanks alot for the mod!