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Wow this map has inspired me to ♦N╚ÚÌ╚██▓»û«4Ñ▓æÿ┌☼▓○R©!
Great Job!
Great Job!
Really Nice Map Hikki 
And awesome Background
And awesome Background
Futsuu:
00:08:609 : Awkward slider, consider replacing it.
00:23:609 : Are these large notes really necessary?
00:31:823 to 00:33:430 : It feels like it doesn't match the song, but that's up to you I guess.
00:53:251 : This short slider feels really out of place here.
01:01:109 to 01:02:894 : Feels like you got lazy, but it's probably fine how it is.
01:10:751 to 01:16:466 : You definitely got lazy here, you should be able to find something proper to fill this space with.
01:43:609 : You can think of something to replace this ridiculous slider.
01:49:680 : Once again, it fits but it feels a bit odd to me.
02:09:501 : You should probably look into replacing this slider.
02:10:930 : ^
00:08:609 : Awkward slider, consider replacing it.
00:23:609 : Are these large notes really necessary?
00:31:823 to 00:33:430 : It feels like it doesn't match the song, but that's up to you I guess.
00:53:251 : This short slider feels really out of place here.
01:01:109 to 01:02:894 : Feels like you got lazy, but it's probably fine how it is.
01:10:751 to 01:16:466 : You definitely got lazy here, you should be able to find something proper to fill this space with.
01:43:609 : You can think of something to replace this ridiculous slider.
01:49:680 : Once again, it fits but it feels a bit odd to me.
02:09:501 : You should probably look into replacing this slider.
02:10:930 : ^
Topic Starter
Cethin wrote:
Futsuu:
00:08:609 Awkward slider, consider replacing it.
00:23:609 Are these large notes really necessary?
00:31:823 to 00:33:430 It feels like it doesn't match the song, but that's up to you I guess.
00:53:251 This short slider feels really out of place here.
01:01:109 to 01:02:894 Feels like you got lazy, but it's probably fine how it is.
01:10:751 to 01:16:466 You definitely got lazy here, you should be able to find something proper to fill this space with.
01:43:609 You can think of something to replace this ridiculous slider.
01:49:680 Once again, it fits but it feels a bit odd to me.
02:09:501 You should probably look into replacing this slider.
02:10:930 ^
thanks brah, ill look into all of those
Topic Starter
thanks! (:HolyNightmare wrote:
Really Nice Map Hikki
And awesome Background
yo mang i feel like theres something shady goin on here yo, but mang you is a good man so i believe you ain't in to those shady stuff yo.
Kantan:
00:06:466 - 00:25:751 Could definitely use some more notes to emphasize the song.
01:20:930 - 01:30:751 Break not necessary, prime time for sum more drummin'.
01:48:966 - 01:51:823 Could do with some more notes to keep the flow going.
02:03:251 - 02:09:323 Large notes could be placed around here, song could use some more to emphasize "larger beats"
00:28:519 - 00:35:037 Great portion, would love to see more of this.
00:56:109 - 01:03:251 Sounds great, maybe couple notes could improve the experience.
Great map, but more potential could be unlocked~.
00:06:466 - 00:25:751 Could definitely use some more notes to emphasize the song.
01:20:930 - 01:30:751 Break not necessary, prime time for sum more drummin'.
01:48:966 - 01:51:823 Could do with some more notes to keep the flow going.
02:03:251 - 02:09:323 Large notes could be placed around here, song could use some more to emphasize "larger beats"
00:28:519 - 00:35:037 Great portion, would love to see more of this.
00:56:109 - 01:03:251 Sounds great, maybe couple notes could improve the experience.
Great map, but more potential could be unlocked~.
Topic Starter
00:06:466 - 00:25:751 Added extra notesMercuryhammer wrote:
Kantan:
00:06:466 - 00:25:751 Could definitely use some more notes to emphasize the song.
01:20:930 - 01:30:751 Break not necessary, prime time for sum more drummin'.
01:48:966 - 01:51:823 Could do with some more notes to keep the flow going.
02:03:251 - 02:09:323 Large notes could be placed around here, song could use some more to emphasize "larger beats"
00:28:519 - 00:35:037 Great portion, would love to see more of this.
00:56:109 - 01:03:251 Sounds great, maybe couple notes could improve the experience.
Great map, but more potential could be unlocked~.
01:20:930 - 01:30:751 Got rid of break(nice addition)
01:48:966 - 01:51:823 Added more notes, to get that flow goin'.
02:03:251 - 02:09:323 The Large notes are alive and breathin' my man.
00:28:519 - 00:35:037 Added this portion around the map, I feel the same way as you.
00:56:109 - 01:03:251 Added more notes to improve the experience, whats your input on them?
Topic Starter
00:08:609 : Removed slider, added cool beats'.Cethin wrote:
Futsuu:
00:08:609 : Awkward slider, consider replacing it.
00:23:609 : Are these large notes really necessary?
00:31:823 to 00:33:430 : It feels like it doesn't match the song, but that's up to you I guess.
00:53:251 : This short slider feels really out of place here.
01:01:109 to 01:02:894 : Feels like you got lazy, but it's probably fine how it is.
01:10:751 to 01:16:466 : You definitely got lazy here, you should be able to find something proper to fill this space with.
01:43:609 : You can think of something to replace this ridiculous slider.
01:49:680 : Once again, it fits but it feels a bit odd to me.
02:09:501 : You should probably look into replacing this slider.
02:10:930 : ^
00:23:609 : I agree with you, large notes = removed.
00:31:823 to 00:33:430 : Fixed it to go with the pace of the song, thanks.
00:53:251 : Removed.
01:01:109 to 01:02:894 : Nope, I definitely got lazy there. fixed.
01:10:751 to 01:16:466 : I found something that I feel as though fits to go in there.
01:43:609 : Replaced.
01:49:680 : Definitely is odd, fixed.
02:09:501 : Replaced.
02:10:930 Replacerino'd.
Topic Starter
dog you the shady one my brothadeween wrote:
yo mang i feel like theres something shady goin on here yo, but mang you is a good man so i believe you ain't in to those shady stuff yo.
Topic Starter
Would appreciate if anyone could mod the Muzukashii! I feel as though its not up to snuff' mayne.
Hikki Hachiman wrote:
00:06:466 - 00:25:751 Added extra notesMercuryhammer wrote:
Kantan:
00:06:466 - 00:25:751 Could definitely use some more notes to emphasize the song.
01:20:930 - 01:30:751 Break not necessary, prime time for sum more drummin'.
01:48:966 - 01:51:823 Could do with some more notes to keep the flow going.
02:03:251 - 02:09:323 Large notes could be placed around here, song could use some more to emphasize "larger beats"
00:28:519 - 00:35:037 Great portion, would love to see more of this.
00:56:109 - 01:03:251 Sounds great, maybe couple notes could improve the experience.
Great map, but more potential could be unlocked~.
01:20:930 - 01:30:751 Got rid of break(nice addition)
01:48:966 - 01:51:823 Added more notes, to get that flow goin'.
02:03:251 - 02:09:323 The Large notes are alive and breathin' my man.
00:28:519 - 00:35:037 Added this portion around the map, I feel the same way as you.
00:56:109 - 01:03:251 Added more notes to improve the experience, whats your input on them?
Looks great, love the style so far, keep it up. Great use of sliders to emphasize certain sections as well. Improvements making it sound and feel a lot better, the flow is definitely as smooth as it could be~!
[Muzukashii]
00:01:287 (4) - Change to k
00:01:466 (5) - Change to d
00:01:644 (6) - Change to k
00:03:251 - Add a d here.
00:05:394 - ^
00:07:716 - Add a k here
00:07:894 - Add a d here
00:08:251 - ^
00:09:144 - Add a k here
00:09:412 - Change to d
00:09:680 - Add a k here
00:11:287 - Change to k
00:11:466 - Change to d
00:12:180 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - I recommend to change this to http://puu.sh/algc8/f5d9a9e300.png because ddk is kinda hard for a Muzu. (it's just a suggestion. If you change it, you have to change this one too : 00:13:609 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) -)
00:15:573 (67,68) - Delete these sliders and add a d at 00:15:573 - and a k at 00:15:751 -. It looks better in my opinon
00:16:287 (70) - Change K to k
00:17:180 (75) - ^
00:23:073 - Add a d here
00:24:323 to 00:25:394 - http://puu.sh/alikT/44e8ed804a.png Maybe that?
00:26:733 - Change to d
00:27:001 - Change to k
00:27:537 - Change to d
00:27:716 - Change to k
00:28:161 - Change to d
00:28:430 - Change to k
00:31:287 (144,145,146,147,148,149) - k d k d k d
00:33:430 (153 Move to 00:33:251 -
00:33:609 - - And add a d here
00:33:976 - ^
00:34:501 (157,158) - Remove these
00:34:501 - Then add a d here
00:35:304 - Change to d
00:35:573 - Change to k
00:36:108 - Same than 00:35:304 and 00:35:573
00:36:287 - ^
00:36:466 - Add a d here
00:36:644 - Change to k
00:36:734 - Remove
00:37:448 - Change to d
00:37:715 - Change to k
00:37:894 - Add a k here
will continue later o/
btw ; try to change some things by yourself with tips I gave you. o/
00:01:287 (4) - Change to k
00:01:466 (5) - Change to d
00:01:644 (6) - Change to k
00:03:251 - Add a d here.
00:05:394 - ^
00:07:716 - Add a k here
00:07:894 - Add a d here
00:08:251 - ^
00:09:144 - Add a k here
00:09:412 - Change to d
00:09:680 - Add a k here
00:11:287 - Change to k
00:11:466 - Change to d
00:12:180 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - I recommend to change this to http://puu.sh/algc8/f5d9a9e300.png because ddk is kinda hard for a Muzu. (it's just a suggestion. If you change it, you have to change this one too : 00:13:609 (56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63) -)
00:15:573 (67,68) - Delete these sliders and add a d at 00:15:573 - and a k at 00:15:751 -. It looks better in my opinon
00:16:287 (70) - Change K to k
00:17:180 (75) - ^
00:23:073 - Add a d here
00:24:323 to 00:25:394 - http://puu.sh/alikT/44e8ed804a.png Maybe that?
00:26:733 - Change to d
00:27:001 - Change to k
00:27:537 - Change to d
00:27:716 - Change to k
00:28:161 - Change to d
00:28:430 - Change to k
00:31:287 (144,145,146,147,148,149) - k d k d k d
00:33:430 (153 Move to 00:33:251 -
00:33:609 - - And add a d here
00:33:976 - ^
00:34:501 (157,158) - Remove these
00:34:501 - Then add a d here
00:35:304 - Change to d
00:35:573 - Change to k
00:36:108 - Same than 00:35:304 and 00:35:573
00:36:287 - ^
00:36:466 - Add a d here
00:36:644 - Change to k
00:36:734 - Remove
00:37:448 - Change to d
00:37:715 - Change to k
00:37:894 - Add a k here
will continue later o/
btw ; try to change some things by yourself with tips I gave you. o/
Topic Starter
Shina wrote:
[Muzukashii]
```````````````````````````````````
00:01:287 (4) - Changed to k
00:01:466 (5) - Changed to d
00:01:644 (6) - Changed to k
00:03:251 - Added a d here.
00:05:394 - Added
00:07:716 - Added a k here
00:07:894 - Added a d here
00:08:251 - Added
00:09:144 - Added a k here
00:09:412 - Changed to d
00:09:680 - Added a k here
00:11:287 - Changed to k
00:11:466 - Changed to d
00:12:180 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55) - Changed this pattern around the map.
00:16:287 (70) - Changed K to k
00:17:180 (75) - Done
00:23:073 - Added a d here
00:24:323 to 00:25:394 - http://puu.sh/alikT/44e8ed804a.png Maybe that? I don't see the difference :>
00:26:733 - Changed to d
00:27:001 - Changed to k
00:27:537 - Changed to d
00:27:716 - Changed to k
00:28:161 - Changed to d
00:28:430 - Changed to k
00:31:287 (144,145,146,147,148,149) - k d k d k d: Added
00:33:430 (153 Move to 00:33:251 -
00:33:609 - - added a d here
00:33:976 - added
00:34:501 (157,158) - Removed
00:34:501 - added a d here
00:35:304 - Changed to d
00:35:573 - Changed to k
00:36:108 - Done.
00:36:287 - ^
00:36:466 - Added a d here
00:36:644 - Changed to k
00:36:734 - Removed.
00:37:448 - Changed to d
00:37:715 - Changed to k
00:37:894 - Added a k here
Hi from #taiko and #modreqs
I'm not done but might as well post anyways
d - Don "Pon"
k - Kat "Pata"
D - Big Don "Pon!"
K - Big Kat "Pata!"
_ - Intentional rest
[General]
Slider properties adjustment: posting later
Side note: The entire song is cheerful in nature. Try to have fun messing with beat harmonics and such. You should make your map as lively as the song to guarantee player enjoyment!
[Kantan]
Starting with things that really stood out to me
- All the sliders that are 1/4 long should be removed, it's too advanced for a Kantan map at this BPM(in the BPM+length+Taiko consideration)
00:23:253 - Change from k to K for more sense.
00:23:609 - Turn the entire measure starting here into one huge slider (it fits well)
00:26:466 - , 00:26:109 - Invert the note type (d->k,k->d)
00:26:734 - add k here
Move 00:27:180 - to 00:27:448 - and do:
00:29:859 - The sliders that last 1/2 a beat don't really do much unless you make more ticks in the slider. Either way the BPM and speed of the map don't suit short Taiko sliders.
00:33:966 - The timing of the notes are pretty off. I advise you move the note here back 2 ticks:
00:33:787 - As an addition to the above note, make the rhythm dk_kd, like so:
Adding the _kd makes it more harmonic in a fun way.
00:41:466 - Try adding don here just for the sake of keeping the rhythmical flow alive.
00:44:680 - Change from kat to don to give it more sense.
00:48:251 - Try adding don for a consistence,
00:48:609 - Change from d to K
I'm not done but might as well post anyways
d - Don "Pon"
k - Kat "Pata"
D - Big Don "Pon!"
K - Big Kat "Pata!"
_ - Intentional rest
[General]
Slider properties adjustment: posting later
Side note: The entire song is cheerful in nature. Try to have fun messing with beat harmonics and such. You should make your map as lively as the song to guarantee player enjoyment!
[Kantan]
Starting with things that really stood out to me
- All the sliders that are 1/4 long should be removed, it's too advanced for a Kantan map at this BPM(in the BPM+length+Taiko consideration)
00:23:253 - Change from k to K for more sense.
00:23:609 - Turn the entire measure starting here into one huge slider (it fits well)
00:26:466 - , 00:26:109 - Invert the note type (d->k,k->d)
00:26:734 - add k here
Move 00:27:180 - to 00:27:448 - and do:
00:29:859 - The sliders that last 1/2 a beat don't really do much unless you make more ticks in the slider. Either way the BPM and speed of the map don't suit short Taiko sliders.
00:33:966 - The timing of the notes are pretty off. I advise you move the note here back 2 ticks:
00:33:787 - As an addition to the above note, make the rhythm dk_kd, like so:
Adding the _kd makes it more harmonic in a fun way.
00:41:466 - Try adding don here just for the sake of keeping the rhythmical flow alive.
00:44:680 - Change from kat to don to give it more sense.
00:48:251 - Try adding don for a consistence,
00:48:609 - Change from d to K
Topic Starter
I'll edit the more you edit! hahadrum drum wrote:
[Kantan]
-All short sliders removed
00:23:253 - Changed from k to K for more sense.
00:23:609 - Turn the entire measure starting here into one huge slider (it fits well) hmmmm
00:26:466 - , 00:26:109 - Inverted.
00:26:734 - Added
00:27:180 - to 00:27:448 - Blue ticks seem off-beat to me.
00:29:859 - Removed short sliders (r.i.p)
00:33:966 - Moved.
00:33:787 - Like before, I think putting notes on blue makes it feel off-beat.
00:41:466 - Added don
00:44:680 - Changed from kat to don to give it more sense.
00:48:251 - Added don for a consistency,
00:48:609 - Changed from d to K
suite :
00:15:037 (65) - change to d
00:23:609 (107) - change K to k
00:27:894 (132) - change D to d
00:38:608 (187) - change K to k
00:39:323 (192) - change D to d
00:42:894 (215) - ^
00:42:001 (209) - change to d
00:42:180 (210) - add a k
00:58:609 (279) - change to d
01:32:537 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/amYXD/6520b67cdb.png this part is weird, maybe change to http://puu.sh/amZ9p/e21a054d35.jpg ?
I guess that's all for the moment?
GL~
00:15:037 (65) - change to d
00:23:609 (107) - change K to k
00:27:894 (132) - change D to d
00:38:608 (187) - change K to k
00:39:323 (192) - change D to d
00:42:894 (215) - ^
00:42:001 (209) - change to d
00:42:180 (210) - add a k
00:58:609 (279) - change to d
01:32:537 (2,3,4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/amYXD/6520b67cdb.png this part is weird, maybe change to http://puu.sh/amZ9p/e21a054d35.jpg ?
I guess that's all for the moment?
GL~