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ZZHBOY
嘛的 新人群终于出了一个rank了
Sellenite
恭喜~
Meg
gratz #1ranked~
xxdeathx

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gratz #1ranked~
HabiHolic
Good Job your 1st Ranked!
yf_bmp
Rank了啊 恭喜恭喜
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TtmnZk
thxs !!!! :) :)
Irreversible
Hey there!

We decided to take this out of the qualified state, because it's, in our opinion, not quite ready for the ranked yet. (If you can't understand english so good, we maybe have to find a translater)

The main reasons were:

- Questionable rhythm, where you could've used a better one (red tick sliders, mostly)
- Placing could be more polished
- slight errors such as NCing

[Insane]

00:02:414 - About that rhythm here, you should try this: http://puu.sh/bJqum.png It follow both the rhythm and the vocals better ! For the placement, you can use this if you have no idea: http://puu.sh/bJqz5.png
00:05:687 - Same here, you don't follow the rhythm really well: The big white tick (and other white ticks) are often STRONG beats, this means they should be CLICKABLE. And when you end a slider on it, it's not. Please take care of this!
00:07:869 (1) - You could make a neat pattern with 4 sliders here, for example. It looks a bit messy how it is now. Check out this: http://puu.sh/bJqJB.png
00:11:687 (7) - Move to 296 208 to get a better star pattern.
00:14:142 (6) - Same with the white tick, as above.
00:20:142 (5) - You should increase the spacing abit, because before you used a really big spacing for 1/2, and now it's really small.
00:22:596 (6) - I think you wanted to follow the vocals, but normally, you put the vocal slider starting on a red tick, to follow it better. http://puu.sh/bJqQY.png Try this, it sounds a lot more fitting to the song.
00:26:142 (4) - Same as above. (don't end it on white tick)
00:35:142 - I think a triplet plays really bad here. Try a 1/4 repeat slider.
00:37:051 (2,3,4) - Bad spacing; First you have 1/2, then 1/4, but the distance is the same. Try that one? http://puu.sh/bJqX7.png
00:41:005 (2) -
00:41:278 (3) -
00:41:551 (4) -
00:41:824 (5) - Those 4 really play weird imo. Please apply CTRL + G on ALL of them, to support the flow.
00:47:960 (2,3,4,5) - make the spacing equal? Right now it seems really random to me.
00:53:687 (5) - NC should be here
00:53:961 (1) - remove NC
00:59:960 (8,1) - Red tick slider, please find another rhythm, as suggested above!
01:13:052 (8) - ^

Well, that's probably most pointed out, there are more red tick sliders, but they didn't appear ~that~ bad to me. It would still be nice if you could get more structure in your rhythm tho!

[Hard]

00:53:414 (6) - Please don't indicate the kiai with a red tick slider, the effect is really lost if the kiai start isn't clickable.

That's all I have to say, if you have questions please don't hesitate asking me! After you applied it, you can ask me for a little in game recheck, but 2 NEW BATS have to get this to the requalified state again.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
ALL DONE
I try my best to fix
Irreversible
Hi again! Glad to see that you've already tried to improve your map, and it's definitely better already!

[Insane]

Let me help you to get some additional polishment.

00:02:415 (3) - try to blanket, so it will look even nicer: http://puu.sh/bKXYP.png Take care of this in your whole map!
00:12:233 (1) - try to stack, and blanket: http://puu.sh/bKY1T.png
00:23:687 (3) - move a bit more to the right (maybe 228 64)
00:30:233 (3) - blanket
00:35:142 (3,4,5) - The flow isn't so good here. Try: http://puu.sh/bKYah.png ?
00:38:960 (1) - more spacing needed
00:57:096 (5,6) - this triplet sounds weird, it's so overmapped. Please remove it!
01:00:233 (9) - NC?
01:11:278 - move this slider to 01:11:005 - , to Support the rhythm! (you should always put a triplet on a red tick, to a White tick, well, mostly)
01:11:414 (2) - red tick slider

After these things, your map is really better! Good job, and good luck!
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
ALL DONE
I think i can go to find the bat now :) :)
IamKwaN
[General]
  1. Uncheck Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks for all diffs.
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:505 (5,1) - Swap NC.
  2. 00:05:687 (6) - NC? 我想不通為何有些NC是every downbeat 有些是every two downbeats.
  3. 00:08:960 (1) - 這NC是幹嘛的?
  4. 00:14:414 (7,1) - Swap NC.
  5. 00:22:596 (1,2) - ^ Same for 00:36:505 (6,1) - 01:13:324 (8,1) - 01:19:868 (7,1) - 01:22:050 (6,1) -
  6. 00:44:142 - Volume starting here should be lowered, say, 30%, as it's approaching to the climax.
  7. 00:52:051 - ^ That's quite non-sense with the volume here even higher than the kiai.
  8. 00:50:142 (1,2) - I feel like the stresses here are misplaced, I hear something at white and blue ticks like this: http://puu.sh/bSkrG/3d76d9857b.jpg
  9. Hitsounds in Hard are better imo, especially usage of whistles in the kiai. I'd highly recommended you not to use whistles in the kiai. 如果真的不用那就無視了以下whistle的建議 我感覺不加whistle更舒服
  10. 01:01:324 (3,4) - Whistle放錯地方了吧 不是第三拍whistle? Same for 01:11:960 (4,5) - 01:12:778 (7) - 01:14:414 (3,4) - . 明明前半的kiai都是13的,怎麼來到後半部分變成了別的pattern
  11. 01:05:278 (3) - Delete this, as it's quite weird to play with no drum in the music and deleting it follows straight the vocal. Also stack 01:05:143 (2,4) perfectly.
  12. 01:06:779 (1) - Remove this finish, since the vocal is at quite a lower pitch. Same for 01:15:505 (1).
  13. 01:12:505 (6,8) - Stack. Same for 01:17:960 (1,2,3) - 01:19:868 (7,3) - 01:27:369 -
  14. 01:15:505 (1,2,3) - Triplets seldom end on the upbeat end, and 01:15:914 got a gentle sound instead of 01:15:642. So, you may try this, http://puu.sh/bSkFn/171c22a7e7.jpg
  15. 01:16:596 (5) - Whistle and delete clap.
  16. 01:18:233 (3) - Remove whistle on tail.
  17. 01:18:778 - ^
  18. 01:19:324 (6) - Remove the finish on tail and add it on 01:19:869 (7) where the cymbal lies on. And also, remove the clap on (7).
  19. 01:24:233 (7) - Remove clap.
  20. 01:27:369 - The drum here is ignored while I think 01:27:233 - 01:27:914 should be treated as a group, maybe http://puu.sh/bSkN9/71206200a3.jpg ?
[Hard]
  1. The HP setting for the whole set is quite high, especially lower diffs, so I can't figure out the reason why Hard has a special low HP value, increase HP by 1 to 6 please.
  2. 00:13:460 (5) - Delete this to keep track on the vocal.
  3. 00:35:414 (7) - Remove finsh on tail.
  4. 00:36:233 - Lower volume as mentioned in Insane until the kiai.
  5. 00:52:051 - Remove the finish.
  6. 00:53:687 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/bSlP2/20f96a66ef.jpg
  7. 00:56:687 (2,3,4,5) - By listening carefully to the music, triplets should start at 00:56:687 like http://puu.sh/bSlSC/b649aa9713.jpg
  8. 00:56:960 (3,4,3) - Give them a perfect stack. Same applies on 01:21:505 (5,2) .
  9. 00:59:278 (5) - Delete this, try to follow the music correctly.
  10. 01:00:505 (2) - Slider starting here more or less messes up the clap pattern, I prefer switching position of 01:00:505 (2,3) and removing the finish on (3).
  11. 01:02:278 (2) - Remove the whistle on middle node. Better don't use any whistles for consistency. Same for tail of 01:05:414 (3) -
  12. 01:06:778 - Remove finish as mentioned in Insane. Instead, add a whistle.
  13. 01:15:505 - ^
  14. 01:19:596 (6) - Mentioned in Insane, place the finish at 01:19:869 .
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:596 - Lower the volume until the kiai.
  2. 00:51:233 (3) - NC
  3. 00:51:233 (3,4,5) - DS
  4. 01:02:142 (4) - Change this slider to a reversed one such that finish isn't missed at 01:02:414. It feels hollow without any finishes when a new stanza starts.
  5. 01:06:778 - Remove finish.
  6. 01:15:505 - ^
  7. 01:16:596 (1) - Remove NC.
  8. 01:19:596 - Remove finish.
  9. 01:24:233 - ^
[Easy]
  1. 00:35:687 - Why finish?
  2. 00:36:233 - Volume should be lowered until the kiai, as compared to the prelude, it's much more calmful.
  3. 01:06:778 - Remove the finish.
  4. 01:15:505 - ^
  5. 01:19:869 - ^
God x.x
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
@IamKwaN
HD IN ALL FIXED

will then fix NM EZ
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
ALL FIXED
IamKwaN
Beep.
Topic Starter
TtmnZk

IamKwaN wrote:

Beep.
thxs! :) :)
captin1
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:233 (2) - skipping the snare on 00:33:505 - isn't good imo, try a 1/2 repeat slider
  2. 00:36:233 - why is this a break? it's mapped in every other difficulty
  3. 00:58:869 - changing this to Custom 1 would be better, so you don't have slider sound
  4. 01:23:414 (3) - this is possibly not a good overlap, since it may cover some of the repeat arrow. would be best to avoid the overlap to be safe
  5. 01:25:051 - same as before
[Hard]
  1. 00:21:778 (3,5) - stacking properly would look nicer
  2. 00:25:869 (1,2,3) - I think a triple would sound better at 00:26:414 (3,4) - instead, since I hear it more in the music here
  3. 00:41:142 - I see that you're following only vocal here, but this doesn't sound good with this large break, try to map this
[Insane]
  1. 00:42:096 - sounds like you skip a note here, try adding it by stacking it on 00:42:233 (6) - and moving them closer
  2. 00:44:142 (5) - if you end this at 00:44:551 - it will match the piano
  3. 00:49:051 (6) - NC here for consistency
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
:) Oh! captin1 ! big thxs! i will fix it at night :)

edit : 3 hours later
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
@captin1 All finished ;D
captin1
one last thing, in Hard 00:40:596 (5) - would be better with a NC since the new notes make the combo a bit long

edit: alright looks good
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
!!!!!!!YEAH!!!!!!!
Crystal
congratz!
Knotts
Congrats :D
KSHR
gratz on 1st ranked!

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Sellenite
怎么拖那么久才re。。
Topic Starter
TtmnZk

Sellenite wrote:

怎么拖那么久才re。。
找不到人呐QAQ
Tsumetaku
挖 之前都沒看到><

TTM桑恭喜1st 阿XD!!
Topic Starter
TtmnZk

Tsumetaku wrote:

挖 之前都沒看到><

TTM桑恭喜1st 阿XD!!
谢谢凛桑><
Koiyuki
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Rakuen
Grats ;)
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kudocksenju
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