Hey there!
We decided to take this out of the qualified state, because it's, in our opinion, not quite ready for the ranked yet. (If you can't understand english so good, we maybe have to find a translater)
The main reasons were:- Questionable rhythm, where you could've used a better one (red tick sliders, mostly)
- Placing could be more polished
- slight errors such as NCing
[Insane]
00:02:414 - About that rhythm here, you should try this:
http://puu.sh/bJqum.png It follow both the rhythm and the vocals better ! For the placement, you can use this if you have no idea:
http://puu.sh/bJqz5.png00:05:687 - Same here, you don't follow the rhythm really well: The big white tick (and other white ticks) are often STRONG beats, this means they should be CLICKABLE. And when you end a slider on it, it's not. Please take care of this!
00:07:869 (1) - You could make a neat pattern with 4 sliders here, for example. It looks a bit messy how it is now. Check out this:
http://puu.sh/bJqJB.png00:11:687 (7) - Move to 296 208 to get a better star pattern.
00:14:142 (6) - Same with the white tick, as above.
00:20:142 (5) - You should increase the spacing abit, because before you used a really big spacing for 1/2, and now it's really small.
00:22:596 (6) - I think you wanted to follow the vocals, but normally, you put the vocal slider starting on a red tick, to follow it better.
http://puu.sh/bJqQY.png Try this, it sounds a lot more fitting to the song.
00:26:142 (4) - Same as above. (don't end it on white tick)
00:35:142 - I think a triplet plays really bad here. Try a 1/4 repeat slider.
00:37:051 (2,3,4) - Bad spacing; First you have 1/2, then 1/4, but the distance is the same. Try that one?
http://puu.sh/bJqX7.png00:41:005 (2) -
00:41:278 (3) -
00:41:551 (4) -
00:41:824 (5) - Those 4 really play weird imo. Please apply CTRL + G on ALL of them, to support the flow.
00:47:960 (2,3,4,5) - make the spacing equal? Right now it seems really random to me.
00:53:687 (5) - NC should be here
00:53:961 (1) - remove NC
00:59:960 (8,1) - Red tick slider, please find another rhythm, as suggested above!
01:13:052 (8) - ^
Well, that's probably most pointed out, there are more red tick sliders, but they didn't appear ~that~ bad to me. It would still be nice if you could get more structure in your rhythm tho!
[Hard]
00:53:414 (6) - Please don't indicate the kiai with a red tick slider, the effect is really lost if the kiai start isn't clickable.
That's all I have to say, if you have questions please don't hesitate asking me! After you applied it, you can ask me for a little in game recheck, but 2 NEW BATS have to get this to the requalified state again.
Good luck!