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TtmnZk
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A i k a

A i k a wrote:

你好～


[Hard]
在这里问题不多。
把Stack Leniency改成3，这样的话overlap会好看一点。不然它会自动向右下移动一点。你仔细看看变化吧。好

[Insane]
01:11:404 (7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1,2,3) - 这里hitsound过度了，太多了。这首歌不是快歌所以这里听起来感觉太快了。恩，再看看
其他就没问题了吧。

imoutosan

imoutosan wrote:

From queue

[Hard]
00:20:951 (3,4,5) - 白线三连？再考虑考虑
00:23:951 (2,4) - 叠上了 不好
00:38:133 (2,4) - 叠好
00:53:404 (4) - 进了kiai不加个nc吗
01:12:223 (4,5) - 5去掉 4掉个头加reverse的flow似乎好一点

[Insane]
00:35:132 (1,2,3,4) - 这里玩antijump还是加nc吧
00:44:132 (4) - 叠好

好好做其他diff啊 看I又不是不会作图
all fixed

Narcissu

Narcissu wrote:

M4M ： http://osu.ppy.sh/s/208719

BG好像是要 1024*768 / 1366*768 ……好像1366是有SB……fixed

刪掉文件夾裏面的osb文件^

建議選用一組可愛的自定義顏色 恩

[insane]

SV從0.85*到1.5*變動有點大，而且最高難度的SV最低建議不要低於默認的1.4 ，低SV帶跳是滑條斷尾的元兇之一

00:01:314 - 規則上要求同一時間的紅綠線使用相同的設置為了避免一些冷門的bug，另外實際上系統會默認使用綠線的設置

低難度中的1/4滑條最好是低DS的用法，因為對於不熟悉的新人來說會可能看傻掉 我感覺insane已經不算面向新人了，雖說star只有3.15...

00:17:677 (5,6) - 這種遮擋梗對整體風格影響很大，建議要麼常用要麼不用 好

00:35:404 (3,4) - 建議分開恩

00:35:677 - clap fixed

00:36:768 - 這一段降SV的部分應該是為了讓玩家放鬆的，所以那些跳的DS建議降 降了版面不好了再三考慮還是決定版面要緊

00:41:132 (1,2,3) - 這梗的難度略超標 還可以的感覺 先保留

00:43:314 (1,2,3) - ^^

00:50:677 (2,3) - NC 提示 fixed

00:52:041 - delete nc OK

00:56:677 (3,4,5) - 滑條接連打是低bpm圖導致acc墜毀的元兇之一 交給玩家吧 :) :)

01:04:041 (4,5) - 因為太遠了會引起誤讀 感覺還行

01:04:314 (5,6) - 滑條尾疊1/2的note也是導致acc墜毀的元兇之一^

01:08:950 (4,5,6,7,8) - 建議疊 ok

額……當然如果是為了更有趣而不是更刷分，那我這些就都是廢話【喂 :) :)

[hard]

其實這個diff和insane的實際難度差不了多少，insane難在1/2單點跳，hard有小型的讀圖梗，其他的就完全一樣。而且hard的話是不建議設置讀圖梗的

00:02:404 (5,1,2,3,4) - 首先不建議掉頭疊，維持行進的感覺會更適合hard，然後hard不建議滑條接連打

00:23:951 (2,4) - 建議分開避免微小的覆蓋

01:13:041 (6,1) - slider覆蓋note嚴重影響讀圖
都改了

insane 挺不錯……加油√ 谢谢
Edit ：想了想還是換一張打算 rank 的…… M4M ： http://osu.ppy.sh/s/208601


will remap NM EZ again,thxs :) :) :) :)
TtmnZk
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OK, DONE updated
Chaoslitz
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NM from my queue

Easy
00:25:859 (1) - Move it upper for a better flow
01:04:041 (7) - Change the shape for a better flow also
01:23:677 (4,1,2) - Same^ :3

Hard
00:26:677 (5) - Not flow >_> Change this

00:40:315 (2) - Shorten the slider-

Insane
00:17:677 (5) - Change to this?


Not really long, because I like it :3
Lanturn
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Quick JMQ. No KD please.

Romanized Artist & Artist: SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki

Romanized Title & Title: A/Z (TV size)

http://www.sh-nzk.net/artist/sawanohiro ... /DFCL-2083



or you can use

A/Z(TV size) from Sonymusicjp (defstar links to this.)


I highly suggest using "A/Z (TV size)" as the title. as it is better presented on Sawano Hiroyuki's site.

Source: ALL.CAPTIALS -> ALDNOAH.ZERO | or use アルドノア・ゼロ

Tags:
アルドノア・ゼロ | Aldnoah Zero in Japanese.
Ending ED as this is the ending to the show (or one of them at least)

Remove Tags:
SawanoHiroyuki a/z Aldnoah.Zero as they're already in the source/title/artist.

cool song. Looking forward to seeing this, and aLIEz ranked one day :3
GGFFQQ55
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GGFFQQ55
摸一下Ins好了。。。h和n感觉没啥好摸的orz

general

感觉总体已经很不错了，有些节奏可以下的更好玩的(kiai有点空

HP-1？感觉对于这难度来讲HP7高了点

唔，感觉开头一段音效大了一些，试试-15%

音效

总体音效声音有点大，盖过曲子的感觉

00:50:132 (1,2) - 这里声音可以小些

01:19:586 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里段的finish有点违和，试着改改看

节奏

00:10:041 从这里开始有背景开始有一段电子乐感觉的音轨，Ins的话可以跟这根，会有趣很多

01:03:495 (3,4) - 这两个中间可以加个Note

01:10:041 (1,2,3,4) - 这里试试二连节奏，比单点好玩一些

01:11:950 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里太空了



节奏其他好像都可以，但是感觉整体都可以更有趣一点。。。

排列

00:07:859 (1,2) - blanket?

00:47:132 (4) - 给这根加个弧度吧

00:47:950 (5,6,7,8) - 钝角跳有点不太好看。。。

00:54:223 (1,2) - 这个滑条组排列不好看0.0

01:01:041 (8,1,2,3) - 四方跳有点无聊，问题不大啦

01:19:041 (2,3) - 间距有点挤

01:22:859 (3,1) - 这里的blanket有点歪了。。。

01:27:768 (2,3) - flow不太好

conclusion

图问题不大，但我觉得可以试着做的有意思一些

音效大部分很棒呢;w;

排列感觉风格很一致，但是就是太普通了。。。唔，可以尝试一些新鲜的摆法，节奏也是一样

good map!
TtmnZk
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Oh! thxs Lanturn

Fxed

GGFFQQ55

GGFFQQ55 wrote:

摸一下Ins好了。。。h和n感觉没啥好摸的orz

general

感觉总体已经很不错了，有些节奏可以下的更好玩的(kiai有点空

HP-1？感觉对于这难度来讲HP7高了点 OK

唔，感觉开头一段音效大了一些，试试-15% 好

音效

总体音效声音有点大，盖过曲子的感觉

00:50:132 (1,2) - 这里声音可以小些 好



01:19:586 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 这里段的finish有点违和，试着改改看 在 try try

节奏

00:10:041 从这里开始有背景开始有一段电子乐感觉的音轨，Ins的话可以跟这根，会有趣很多

01:03:495 (3,4) - 这两个中间可以加个Note

01:10:041 (1,2,3,4) - 这里试试二连节奏，比单点好玩一些

01:11:950 (9,1,2,3,4,5) - 这里太空了


节奏其他好像都可以，但是感觉整体都可以更有趣一点。。。

节奏我觉得还是这样吧，因为动了的话改动比较大 跟了电音的话控不住容易做坏

排列

00:07:859 (1,2) - blanket? 因为接的是五角星跳还是不改了 :(


00:47:132 (4) - 给这根加个弧度吧 不了

00:47:950 (5,6,7,8) - 钝角跳有点不太好看。。。 我觉得还行啊 :)

00:54:223 (1,2) - 这个滑条组排列不好看0.0 ^

01:01:041 (8,1,2,3) - 四方跳有点无聊，问题不大啦 :D

01:19:041 (2,3) - 间距有点挤 还好 :D

01:22:859 (3,1) - 这里的blanket有点歪了。。。fixed

01:27:768 (2,3) - flow不太好...

conclusion

图问题不大，但我觉得可以试着做的有意思一些

音效大部分很棒呢;w;

排列感觉风格很一致，但是就是太普通了。。。唔，可以尝试一些新鲜的摆法，节奏也是一样

因为跟了电音的话,做图难度较大,所以普通点也没什么拉 :)


good map!

Chaoslitz

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NM from my queue

Easy
00:25:859 (1) - Move it upper for a better flow
01:04:041 (7) - Change the shape for a better flow also
01:23:677 (4,1,2) - Same^ :3

thxs but i think EZ flow good enough sorry :(
Hard
00:26:677 (5) - Not flow >_> Change this OK

00:40:315 (2) - Shorten the slider- i know but not well

Insane
00:17:677 (5) - Change to this? ^


Not really long, because I like it :3

Thx for guys mod!
Lanturn
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Since you removed ALDNOAH.ZERO from the source, you can put it back in the tags and remove アルドノア・ゼロ :)

When it comes to Tags, you don't want any duplicates of the Title/Artist/Source/Genre in it ;)

Everything else looks good though. Good luck on this set!
TtmnZk
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OK FIXED :) :) :)
sodarose
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[Normal]
打起来非常不舒服！
间距有点怪，我在AImod里看到有些奇怪的间距
4围太高了，OD比AR还高什么情况，OD5开DTHR后是OD9了 :x
TtmnZk
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sodarose wrote:

[Normal]
打起来非常不舒服！
间距有点怪，我在AImod里看到有些奇怪的间距 我觉得没什么事
4围太高了，OD比AR还高什么情况，OD5开DTHR后是OD9了 OD改3了 :x
thxs :) :)
wcx19911123
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[General]
offset need to be about 1324(+10), the current one is not that accurate

[Easy]
01:19:859 - finish?
01:24:223 - ^
01:28:314 - I strongly suggest to end this slider at here, it would fit the song much better imo

[Normal]
00:07:586 - end at here to follow the vocal? if you accepted this, don't forget to fix the spacing to the next note too
00:53:677 (2,3,4) - these anti-jumps are really hard to read for newbies, it's confusing, better to use normal spacing here
01:02:950 (1,2) - ^
01:17:404 - same as 00:07:586 -
01:26:950 (3,4) - same as 00:53:677 (2,3,4) -

[Hard]
00:44:950 (4) - how about changing it to a 3/4 slider to follow the music better? don't forget to fix the spacing to the next note if you accepted this
01:06:768 - finish?
01:15:495 - ^
01:19:859 - ^

[Insane]
00:22:041 (4,5) - switch them? flow would be a bit better imo
00:42:495 - if you want to follow the music accurately here, why not try this kind of rhythm? http://puu.sh/bAedk/1f83391fa6.jpg they fit the heavy beats
better
01:04:314 (5,6,1) - I'd like you to move the (6) away, let here be the normal spacing of jump, would play better imo
01:28:314 - use S:C1 for the last 2 green sections, it would sound much better

音效还有待改进
S2部分听上去比S1大声很多，虽然为了合曲，不过感觉过头了，建议考虑整体缩小S2的音量
之后就是我提的那几个finish，对全diff都适用，顺带I的01:19:586 - 01:22:859 - 这一段也要考虑去掉点finish
顺带我建议使用slidertick音效补足clap
自己琢磨改改就好，之后叫我吧
TtmnZk
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wcx19911123 QWQ

wcx19911123 wrote:

[General]
offset need to be about 1324(+10), the current one is not that accurate OK

[Easy]
01:19:859 - finish?
01:24:223 - ^
01:28:314 - I strongly suggest to end this slider at here, it would fit the song much better imo
all fixed

[Normal]
00:07:586 - end at here to follow the vocal? if you accepted this, don't forget to fix the spacing to the next note too
00:53:677 (2,3,4) - these anti-jumps are really hard to read for newbies, it's confusing, better to use normal spacing here
01:02:950 (1,2) - ^
01:17:404 - same as 00:07:586 -
01:26:950 (3,4) - same as 00:53:677 (2,3,4) -
done

[Hard]
00:44:950 (4) - how about changing it to a 3/4 slider to follow the music better? don't forget to fix the spacing to the next note if you accepted this
01:06:768 - finish?
01:15:495 - ^
01:19:859 - ^
OK
[Insane]
00:22:041 (4,5) - switch them? flow would be a bit better imo
00:42:495 - if you want to follow the music accurately here, why not try this kind of rhythm? http://puu.sh/bAedk/1f83391fa6.jpg they fit the heavy beats
better
01:04:314 (5,6,1) - I'd like you to move the (6) away, let here be the normal spacing of jump, would play better imo
01:28:314 - use S:C1 for the last 2 green sections, it would sound much better
all done
音效还有待改进
S2部分听上去比S1大声很多，虽然为了合曲，不过感觉过头了，建议考虑整体缩小S2的音量 都减小了 ;)
之后就是我提的那几个finish，对全diff都适用，顺带I的01:19:586 - 01:22:859 - 这一段也要考虑去掉点finish 嗯嗯 ;)
顺带我建议使用slidertick音效补足clap
自己琢磨改改就好，之后叫我吧
thxs! :) :)
TtmnZk
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DONE updated
wcx19911123
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N少了video
顺带音效感觉还是不够好，主要是finish太少了，试试参照这个改一下
TtmnZk
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DONE
wcx19911123
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删掉.osb文件。。
实在抱歉每次都看漏东西，不过这次应该没问题了。。
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DONE
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we fixed many little things, bubbled
TtmnZk
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wcx19911123 wrote:

we fixed many little things, bubbled
thxxxxxs :) :) :) :)
mintong89
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Hi.

[General]
每个diff的 Kiai Time 开始点和结束点不同.
建议大白线一次NC一次 你现在的NC摆放很乱.
有很多Nazi...比如说没包好啊什么的我没有一一举例下来 你再看清楚吧
00:01:324 - => 00:18:505 - 这里的音效音量再稍微小声点吧, 还是有点太大声的感觉.

[Insane]

00:17:687 (5,6) - 这个包好吧.
00:25:869 (1) - 这NC太短了吧, 建议去掉这个NC然后 00:25:324 (6) - 加这里一个.00:26:687 (1) - 然后去掉这个 然后 00:27:505 (1) - 加这里一个.

[Hard]

00:06:233 (1,2) - 这两个note没叠好.
01:25:051 (6,7) - 包好.

弄好叫我.
TtmnZk
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ALL FIXED
mintong89
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作为新人是个不错的图了

Ranked!

Edit: Oh wait is this beatmap even have video? omg. I'm sorry!
PuttyoU
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おめでとう :)
Frostmourne
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sorry sorry,
unqualifying due to video isn't added in some diff.
Get it fixed and re-qualified real quick~
mintong89
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Sorry for my mistake!
and...

Reranked!
ZZHBOY
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嘛的 新人群终于出了一个rank了
Sellenite
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恭喜~
Meg
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gratz #1ranked~
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iMage-- wrote:

gratz #1ranked~
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Good Job your 1st Ranked!
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Rank了啊 恭喜恭喜
TtmnZk
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thxs !!!! :) :)
Irreversible
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Irreversible
Hey there!

We decided to take this out of the qualified state, because it's, in our opinion, not quite ready for the ranked yet. (If you can't understand english so good, we maybe have to find a translater)

The main reasons were:

- Questionable rhythm, where you could've used a better one (red tick sliders, mostly)
- Placing could be more polished
- slight errors such as NCing

[Insane]

00:02:414 - About that rhythm here, you should try this: http://puu.sh/bJqum.png It follow both the rhythm and the vocals better ! For the placement, you can use this if you have no idea: http://puu.sh/bJqz5.png
00:05:687 - Same here, you don't follow the rhythm really well: The big white tick (and other white ticks) are often STRONG beats, this means they should be CLICKABLE. And when you end a slider on it, it's not. Please take care of this!
00:07:869 (1) - You could make a neat pattern with 4 sliders here, for example. It looks a bit messy how it is now. Check out this: http://puu.sh/bJqJB.png
00:11:687 (7) - Move to 296 208 to get a better star pattern.
00:14:142 (6) - Same with the white tick, as above.
00:20:142 (5) - You should increase the spacing abit, because before you used a really big spacing for 1/2, and now it's really small.
00:22:596 (6) - I think you wanted to follow the vocals, but normally, you put the vocal slider starting on a red tick, to follow it better. http://puu.sh/bJqQY.png Try this, it sounds a lot more fitting to the song.
00:26:142 (4) - Same as above. (don't end it on white tick)
00:35:142 - I think a triplet plays really bad here. Try a 1/4 repeat slider.
00:37:051 (2,3,4) - Bad spacing; First you have 1/2, then 1/4, but the distance is the same. Try that one? http://puu.sh/bJqX7.png
00:41:005 (2) -
00:41:278 (3) -
00:41:551 (4) -
00:41:824 (5) - Those 4 really play weird imo. Please apply CTRL + G on ALL of them, to support the flow.
00:47:960 (2,3,4,5) - make the spacing equal? Right now it seems really random to me.
00:53:687 (5) - NC should be here
00:53:961 (1) - remove NC
00:59:960 (8,1) - Red tick slider, please find another rhythm, as suggested above!
01:13:052 (8) - ^

Well, that's probably most pointed out, there are more red tick sliders, but they didn't appear ~that~ bad to me. It would still be nice if you could get more structure in your rhythm tho!

[Hard]

00:53:414 (6) - Please don't indicate the kiai with a red tick slider, the effect is really lost if the kiai start isn't clickable.

That's all I have to say, if you have questions please don't hesitate asking me! After you applied it, you can ask me for a little in game recheck, but 2 NEW BATS have to get this to the requalified state again.

Good luck!
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ALL DONE
I try my best to fix
Irreversible
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Hi again! Glad to see that you've already tried to improve your map, and it's definitely better already!

[Insane]

Let me help you to get some additional polishment.

00:02:415 (3) - try to blanket, so it will look even nicer: http://puu.sh/bKXYP.png Take care of this in your whole map!
00:12:233 (1) - try to stack, and blanket: http://puu.sh/bKY1T.png
00:23:687 (3) - move a bit more to the right (maybe 228 64)
00:30:233 (3) - blanket
00:35:142 (3,4,5) - The flow isn't so good here. Try: http://puu.sh/bKYah.png ?
00:38:960 (1) - more spacing needed
00:57:096 (5,6) - this triplet sounds weird, it's so overmapped. Please remove it!
01:00:233 (9) - NC?
01:11:278 - move this slider to 01:11:005 - , to Support the rhythm! (you should always put a triplet on a red tick, to a White tick, well, mostly)
01:11:414 (2) - red tick slider

After these things, your map is really better! Good job, and good luck!
TtmnZk
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ALL DONE
I think i can go to find the bat now :) :)
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[General]
  1. Uncheck Widescreen Support and Letterbox during breaks for all diffs.
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:505 (5,1) - Swap NC.
  2. 00:05:687 (6) - NC? 我想不通為何有些NC是every downbeat 有些是every two downbeats.
  3. 00:08:960 (1) - 這NC是幹嘛的?
  4. 00:14:414 (7,1) - Swap NC.
  5. 00:22:596 (1,2) - ^ Same for 00:36:505 (6,1) - 01:13:324 (8,1) - 01:19:868 (7,1) - 01:22:050 (6,1) -
  6. 00:44:142 - Volume starting here should be lowered, say, 30%, as it's approaching to the climax.
  7. 00:52:051 - ^ That's quite non-sense with the volume here even higher than the kiai.
  8. 00:50:142 (1,2) - I feel like the stresses here are misplaced, I hear something at white and blue ticks like this: http://puu.sh/bSkrG/3d76d9857b.jpg
  9. Hitsounds in Hard are better imo, especially usage of whistles in the kiai. I'd highly recommended you not to use whistles in the kiai. 如果真的不用那就無視了以下whistle的建議 我感覺不加whistle更舒服
  10. 01:01:324 (3,4) - Whistle放錯地方了吧 不是第三拍whistle? Same for 01:11:960 (4,5) - 01:12:778 (7) - 01:14:414 (3,4) - . 明明前半的kiai都是13的,怎麼來到後半部分變成了別的pattern
  11. 01:05:278 (3) - Delete this, as it's quite weird to play with no drum in the music and deleting it follows straight the vocal. Also stack 01:05:143 (2,4) perfectly.
  12. 01:06:779 (1) - Remove this finish, since the vocal is at quite a lower pitch. Same for 01:15:505 (1).
  13. 01:12:505 (6,8) - Stack. Same for 01:17:960 (1,2,3) - 01:19:868 (7,3) - 01:27:369 -
  14. 01:15:505 (1,2,3) - Triplets seldom end on the upbeat end, and 01:15:914 got a gentle sound instead of 01:15:642. So, you may try this, http://puu.sh/bSkFn/171c22a7e7.jpg
  15. 01:16:596 (5) - Whistle and delete clap.
  16. 01:18:233 (3) - Remove whistle on tail.
  17. 01:18:778 - ^
  18. 01:19:324 (6) - Remove the finish on tail and add it on 01:19:869 (7) where the cymbal lies on. And also, remove the clap on (7).
  19. 01:24:233 (7) - Remove clap.
  20. 01:27:369 - The drum here is ignored while I think 01:27:233 - 01:27:914 should be treated as a group, maybe http://puu.sh/bSkN9/71206200a3.jpg ?
[Hard]
  1. The HP setting for the whole set is quite high, especially lower diffs, so I can't figure out the reason why Hard has a special low HP value, increase HP by 1 to 6 please.
  2. 00:13:460 (5) - Delete this to keep track on the vocal.
  3. 00:35:414 (7) - Remove finsh on tail.
  4. 00:36:233 - Lower volume as mentioned in Insane until the kiai.
  5. 00:52:051 - Remove the finish.
  6. 00:53:687 (5,6,1) - http://puu.sh/bSlP2/20f96a66ef.jpg
  7. 00:56:687 (2,3,4,5) - By listening carefully to the music, triplets should start at 00:56:687 like http://puu.sh/bSlSC/b649aa9713.jpg
  8. 00:56:960 (3,4,3) - Give them a perfect stack. Same applies on 01:21:505 (5,2) .
  9. 00:59:278 (5) - Delete this, try to follow the music correctly.
  10. 01:00:505 (2) - Slider starting here more or less messes up the clap pattern, I prefer switching position of 01:00:505 (2,3) and removing the finish on (3).
  11. 01:02:278 (2) - Remove the whistle on middle node. Better don't use any whistles for consistency. Same for tail of 01:05:414 (3) -
  12. 01:06:778 - Remove finish as mentioned in Insane. Instead, add a whistle.
  13. 01:15:505 - ^
  14. 01:19:596 (6) - Mentioned in Insane, place the finish at 01:19:869 .
[Normal]
  1. 00:43:596 - Lower the volume until the kiai.
  2. 00:51:233 (3) - NC
  3. 00:51:233 (3,4,5) - DS
  4. 01:02:142 (4) - Change this slider to a reversed one such that finish isn't missed at 01:02:414. It feels hollow without any finishes when a new stanza starts.
  5. 01:06:778 - Remove finish.
  6. 01:15:505 - ^
  7. 01:16:596 (1) - Remove NC.
  8. 01:19:596 - Remove finish.
  9. 01:24:233 - ^
[Easy]
  1. 00:35:687 - Why finish?
  2. 00:36:233 - Volume should be lowered until the kiai, as compared to the prelude, it's much more calmful.
  3. 01:06:778 - Remove the finish.
  4. 01:15:505 - ^
  5. 01:19:869 - ^
God x.x
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
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TtmnZk
@IamKwaN
HD IN ALL FIXED

will then fix NM EZ
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
597 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
TtmnZk
ALL FIXED
IamKwaN
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IamKwaN
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