1. Easy (1.38 stars, 97 notes)
2. Hard (2.66 stars, 214 notes)
3. Insane (3.17 stars, 246 notes)
4. Normal (1.7 stars, 122 notes)

ALDNOAH.ZERO

• 
  bg美丽，然后仔细一看发现bg文件名乱码了……丢bg就改个bg.jpg之类的名字吧

• 
  00:02:176 (2,3) - 间距太大
  00:17:121 (4,5) - ^，这个试试直接把5放在下面6放到上面去
  00:20:661 (5,1) - stack
  00:22:843 (2,4) - 2的末尾试着和4的中间一拍对齐
  00:27:479 (5,6,7,8) - 有点……丑…… 你看00:30:752 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个就很漂亮
  00:35:661 (8,1) - 没stack好
  00:39:206 (2) - 用个弧形的去blanket这个00:40:297 (4) -
  00:43:570 (1,1,1) - 这就没必要一个note一个NC了，然后黄色的那个和1的末尾stack上
  00:58:570 (1,2,3,4) - 4是不是摆歪了……有点丑……
  01:03:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - 注意间距，弄成等间距的更好看
  01:05:115 (1,2) - 摆歪了？
  01:09:479 (1) - 摆个note吧，否则间距太大
  01:09:752 (1,4) - 注意stack
  01:11:388 (3,4,6) - 这三个是不是摆歪了？
  01:12:206 (5) - 前后间距不同……不是故意的话就改一下吧
  01:15:752 (1,2,3,4) - 不漂亮……组成个梯形试试
  01:26:661 (5) - 可以适当拉大一些间距
  01:25:843 (1,7) - stack
  然后我看了hard后感觉insane还是难度偏低，而且排列有点散

• 
  感觉做的比in好……整体看上去漂亮多了
  00:30:207 (1,3) - 没blanket好
  00:34:025 (4,6) - 挤在一起了，4摆开一点试试
  00:35:389 (4,5,1) - ^，都摆开一点
  01:05:116 (1,2,3,4) - 整体往右摆一点
  01:05:389 (2,4) - stack
  01:07:571 (7,2) - 没包好，不过我感觉2直接stack7的头，然后3改下位置弄个大三角形比较漂亮
  01:08:934 (1,3) - stack或者把3向左摆开些
  01:13:025 (2,1) - 没stack好
  01:14:662 (2,4) - 没包好
  01:16:024 (1) - 包上2的头试试
  01:19:298 (3,4) - 没包好
  01:19:298 (3,1) - stack
  01:20:662 (3,2) - ^，然后1向左拉一点
  01:21:753 (3,3) - 没stack好
  01:22:842 (3,1) - stack
  01:23:934 (3,4) - blanket

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

1. Change the preview time to 00:53:661 -
2. On your mapset folder, there's a BG, so why you doesn't use it?
   
   1. Go to Design tab, choose 'Background Image / Video', and choose '7îÄüuAldnoah.ZeroüvOP+ED TV.Sizeüy720Püz[1282679][2]_2014714152735.jpeg'
3. Based on this, it's show that the Artist name is 'SawanoHiroyuki[nZk]:mizuki' and the Title name is 'A/Z'
   
4. Fill the Source with 'Aldnoah.Zero' since this ED song is on that anime
5. And remove all tags because all of that are already used
   
   Timing Point
6. 18752,545.454545454546,4,2,1,60,1,0 Remove this timing point
7. 36206,-117.647058823529,4,2,1,100,0,0 Change the volume to 70%, because 100% is too loud
8. 51206,-117.647058823529,4,2,1,100,0,0 ^
9. 52570,-66.6666666666667,4,2,2,100,0,1 ^
10. 88297,-66.6666666666667,4,2,2,100,0,0 ^
11. Start Kiai on 00:53:661 -

1. 00:29:661 (1,2) - change this into slider
2. 00:46:570 (1,1,1,1) - change all colour to same as 00:44:933 (2) -

1. Change OD to 5

1. 01:09:342 - add circle
2. 01:09:888 - ^
3. 01:10:161 - ^
4. 01:18:753 (1,2) - change to slider
5. 01:24:480 (4) - new colour

1. 00:06:252 (1,2,3) - CTRL + G
2. 00:25:024 (6) - New colour
3. 00:50:661 - add circle
4. 01:10:161 - 01:10:433 - ^

- H i k a r i - wrote:

渣摸from qq群

[General]

• 
  bg美丽，然后仔细一看发现bg文件名乱码了……丢bg就改个bg.jpg之类的名字吧 不出现中文就没事，载完图直接扔没看到

[Insane]

• 
  00:02:176 (2,3) - 间距太大 改了
  00:17:121 (4,5) - ^，这个试试直接把5放在下面6放到上面去 改了发现不错 赞一个！
  00:20:661 (5,1) - stack OK
  00:22:843 (2,4) - 2的末尾试着和4的中间一拍对齐 OK
  00:27:479 (5,6,7,8) - 有点……丑…… 你看00:30:752 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个就很漂亮 改来改去最后改了2x等腰三角形
  00:35:661 (8,1) - 没stack好OK
  00:39:206 (2) - 用个弧形的去blanket这个00:40:297 (4) - 好
  00:43:570 (1,1,1) - 这就没必要一个note一个NC了，然后黄色的那个和1的末尾stack上 改了
  00:58:570 (1,2,3,4) - 4是不是摆歪了……有点丑…… 改了
  01:03:479 (1,2,3,4,5) - 注意间距，弄成等间距的更好看 猴！
  01:05:115 (1,2) - 摆歪了？ ...eh 算是吧 改啦
  01:09:479 (1) - 摆个note吧，否则间距太大 恩
  01:09:752 (1,4) - 注意stack OK
  01:11:388 (3,4,6) - 这三个是不是摆歪了？ 改成等DS了
  01:12:206 (5) - 前后间距不同……不是故意的话就改一下吧 ^
  01:15:752 (1,2,3,4) - 不漂亮……组成个梯形试试 OK
  01:26:661 (5) - 可以适当拉大一些间距 OK
  01:25:843 (1,7) - stack OK
  然后我看了hard后感觉insane还是难度偏低，而且排列有点散 bpm底的图不怎么会做高一点难度..

[Hard]

• 
  感觉做的比in好……整体看上去漂亮多了
  00:30:207 (1,3) - 没blanket好 恩
  00:34:025 (4,6) - 挤在一起了，4摆开一点试试 OK
  00:35:389 (4,5,1) - ^，都摆开一点^
  01:05:116 (1,2,3,4) - 整体往右摆一点 OK
  01:05:389 (2,4) - stack OK
  01:07:571 (7,2) - 没包好，不过我感觉2直接stack7的头，然后3改下位置弄个大三角形比较漂亮 那样间距有点大，而且很突然，不了
  01:08:934 (1,3) - stack或者把3向左摆开些 换了排列
  01:13:025 (2,1) - 没stack好 嗯
  01:14:662 (2,4) - 没包好 嗯
  01:16:024 (1) - 包上2的头试试 感觉不是很好，不了
  01:19:298 (3,4) - 没包好 OK
  01:19:298 (3,1) - stack OK
  01:20:662 (3,2) - ^，然后1向左拉一点 OK
  01:21:753 (3,3) - 没stack好 OK
  01:22:842 (3,1) - stack OK
  01:23:934 (3,4) - blanket OK

5eania wrote:

Kudos shoot

[Easy]
00:41:678 ~ - insert break time OK
00:52:042 - add circle good idea!
00:54:770 (2) - you can looks like better. like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837088 OK

[Hard]
01:08:951 ~ 01:09:496 - 5 stream is better But i think so many circles in disagreement with H diff

[Insane]
00:04:314 (2) - move to up 4~5 grid feel not well
00:06:633 (2,3) - don't completely stack OK
00:14:405 ~ 00:14:951 - 5 stream tried,crowded
00:58:451 - add note I think my flow is btter
01:10:178, 01:10:246, 01:10:451 - add circle ....
01:27:496 ~ 01:28:587 - suggest : http://cl.ly/Weho/img.png tried, good

1. Change your source: the name of this anime is Aldnoah.Zero with a period.
2. Also add Aldnoah Zero (with a space in between) to tags
3. timing: your red uninherited timing section should start at 00:01:314 because that's where the first note is and the start of the first measure. not abiding by this causes a host of problems, like not knowing where to new combo. i'm already seeing a lot of new combo issues in your insane.

1. 00:02:133 (2) - move closer to (3) and further from (1) because of time distance spacing rule
2. 00:09:769 (4) - you should reverse this to go better with the flow
3. 00:28:861 (3,4) - maybe blanket these
4. 00:31:315 (3,5) - ^
5. 00:41:406 (1,1,1) - remove the new combos, dont' need them
6. 01:19:588 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - ^
7. 01:28:315 (9) - remove finish

xxdeathx wrote:

Hello, modding your ending song of Aldnoah Zero as per your PM request.

[General]

1. Change your source: the name of this anime is Aldnoah.Zero with a period. OK
2. Also add Aldnoah Zero (with a space in between) to tags OK
3. timing: your red uninherited timing section should start at 00:01:314 because that's where the first note is and the start of the first measure. not abiding by this causes a host of problems, like not knowing where to new combo. i'm already seeing a lot of new combo issues in your insane. thxs teach me a lots

This map has quite a few overall issues that I can see are mostly attributed to a lack of mapping and modding experience. I looked at your profile; you have several beatmaps but almost no kudosu earned at all. The best way to improve your own mapping skills is to go out and mod other people's maps. That way you can see what makes a good map and remember it for your own map. It's impossible for you to make a map whose quality is good enough for bubble/rank without modding stuff yourself. Waiting in the modding queues forum for free mods won't help your map get much better in the long run. You can try to offer M4Ms with just about any mapper and that helps both ways: if they're a good mapper, you get to see their good map and your map gets a good mod. Basically, don't expect to get your first map ranked off other people's mods alone. sure, i'm not a lot such kudosu mods,last year i start my mapping until now.in fact done more than 13.(under1:30 has 2 lots of are not submitted) i see ranked beatmaps and want to get lots good experience fo me
5 months later.get to others mapper my first GD https://osu.ppy.sh/s/160126 , this one and updated 3 EastNewSound in my pending map I like them ,so i efforts to complete,hope ranked just want to people konw them like them

[Insane]

1. 00:02:133 (2) - move closer to (3) and further from (1) because of time distance spacing rule OK
2. 00:09:769 (4) - you should reverse this to go better with the flow sure
3. 00:28:861 (3,4) - maybe blanket these OK
4. 00:31:315 (3,5) - ^ i think my flow is better
5. 00:41:406 (1,1,1) - remove the new combos, dont' need them OK
6. 01:19:588 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - ^ OK
7. 01:28:315 (9) - remove finish like this? http://puu.sh/akuuj/b0399c1394.jpg

I already mentioned timing, but I'll elaborate more on it here. Almost all songs, this one included, can be separated into measures by the long white ticks, which occur every 4 beats. Every beat is a white tick. The measures are good for telling apart sections of the music, and as a result setting new combos every 1 or 2 measures (depending on the difficulty) is a simple style for new combos. Doing new combos too frequently is usually wrong. thxs thach me this

Timing sections and measures go hand-in-hand with consistency, which is about having similar rhythm and object patterns for similar parts of the song, lines that correspond to each other. thxs

Another important part of mapping (and something I still know almost nothing about) is hitsounding...I didnt pick out anything about this except the finish at the end which was obviously out of place, but here's what I know: Claps go where you hear a regular drum hit, usually every beat or 2 beats. Certain sections of the song won't have claps and others will. Finishes go where you hear the sound of cymbals, it's called finish because it usually signals the end of a section. I said remove finish at the end of your song because the music ended softly, not the kind of end that needs a finish. Whistles...don't ask me what they're for, I don't know either. Your claps seem to be mostly good but you have too many finishes in places that don't need them.i will try,so nice mods!

I looked at your other difficulties too and they have similar problems to your insane. I suggest fixing them first, because they go a long way toward the base quality of your mapset, especially consistency.OK，i will do it,

I picked up a lot，big thxs,xxdeathx you are good moder!

Jaltzu wrote:

GENERAL

COLOURS
*Suggestions: http://puu.sh/akzSR/872f0d72b7.jpg
*http://puu.sh/akzVr/97fd8f72ae.jpg
*http://puu.sh/akzY2/259c060ebe.jpg
*http://puu.sh/akzZy/a7d0818686.jpg

OK

EASY

00:13:314 (1,2) - Fix blanket OK
00:16:314 (1) - Move this a bit away from 00:14:405 (2) and remove NC OK
00:14:405 (2) - Fix blanket OK
00:33:497 (2,3) - You could make these a blanket, too OK
00:48:224 (5) - NC. Remove NC from 00:48:770 (1) :)
00:52:042 (2) - NC ^K
00:53:679 (1) - Curve this to left OK
01:08:406 (1) - Center this better with 01:07:315 (5) OK
01:11:133 (4) - Curve this and make a blanket with 01:10:042 (3) OK
01:19:860 (1) - Remove NCOK
01:21:770 (1) - ↑↑ ^
01:23:406 (1) - ↑↑ ^
01:24:224 (1) - ↑↑ ^
You are overusing clap sound at the endfixed

NORMAL

OD4
Use DS1,0
00:04:587 (1) - Delete NC OK
00:08:951 (1) - ↑↑^
00:15:224 (1) - ↑↑^
00:17:405 (4) - Add NC OK
00:24:769 (1) - Remove NC OK
00:37:587 (1) - ↑↑^
00:39:496 (1) - ↑↑^
00:36:224 - 00:41:678 - Distance snap correctly! If you want slower pace, change SV multiplier to x0,75. (From timing setup)you right
00:47:951 (4) - Add NC OK
00:51:224 (1) - Replace with a normal slider of same lenght OK
00:55:588 (1) - No nC^
00:57:224 (1,1) - Remoce NC ^
00:59:951 (5,6) - Make first slider longer, till 01:00:496. Delete clap sound from it. Delete the next slider 01:01:042 (7) and add a circle to 01:01:314. Add a clap to that circle. OK.done
01:02:679 (1) - No NC OK
01:26:406 (4) - Add Nc OK

HARD

I like this.thxs
00:22:860 (7) - Remove whistle from headOK
00:23:951 (2) - ↑↑ ^
00:39:224 (6,2) - Stack properlyOK
00:52:042 (1) - Remove NC OK
01:14:951 (3,4) - Make a blanket ^
01:19:315 (3,1) - Stack fully or not at all OK
01:20:679 (3,2) - ↑↑^

I'm a bit busy now, so I don't have time to mod more... Sorry. big thxs !As long as you mod my map , i will be very happy

yf_bmp wrote:

Hihi

我就基于insane难度说吧

[Hitsounds]
00:18:769 - 这之前的音效配的有点乱 这一段的话我建议每两个小节的开始放一个finish 每一小节第3拍放clap 然后2,4 whistle 这样有规律会整齐很多 OK 真的干净整齐了许多
00:18:769 (1) - finish OK
00:27:495 (5) - finish OK
00:35:677 (8) - 尾去掉finish OK
00:52:586 (1,2,3,4) - 建议还是基于默认的低音 OK
00:52:586 (1) - 头去掉finish OK
00:53:677 (5) - finish OK
01:02:404 (7) - 头finish OK
01:06:769 (1) - finish OK
01:09:495 (8) - clap OK
01:09:768 (1) - 头去掉finish OK
01:28:314 (4) - 头去掉finish 尾5%静音 OK

MP3的声音可以再放大些 恩

图还要加油 好的
Ganbare! Haidesu,ryoukaidesu!

PuttyoU wrote:

from my mod queues

Insane

1. 00:44:950 (2) - NC OK
2. 00:44:950 (2) - finish OK
3. 01:23:404 (7) - NC fix

Hard

1. 01:22:859 (3) - finish続きfinishと近すぎと思います。

Normal

1. 01:00:768 (6) - このような配置にしてみてはいかがでしょうか？はい、いいですよOK
   
   png

   
   

   180,168,60768,2,0,L|124:132,2,65,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Easy

1. 00:48:769 (2) - こうしたほうが音取りがいいと思います確かに
   
   png

   
   

   112,172,48769,2,0,P|116:224|140:264,2,97.50000371933,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

とてもいい譜面ででした！
hitsoundが素晴らしいと思います！いやいや、まだ勉強している階段ですよ、褒めてくれるのは早いですよ。

sodarose wrote:

来骗kud ;w;

[Easy]
00:25:859 (1) - 这个滑条看起来有点怪啊 修了一下

[Normal]
01:07:041 (1,2) - 这两个的间距和后面的不同啊 3 4 开始VOACL有高音，衬托一下

[Hard]
00:14:678 (6) - 这个换成滑条拉到00:14:950 候候候
[Insane]
00:01:177 这里加个note会不会好一些啊 没音啊
00:27:495 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - 这里形成一个五角星貌似好看一些 great！！soda神modder（逃
01:22:313 (4) - NC OK

渣摸见谅

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

no kds

Insane

1. u didn't follow all of the song's beat right? ok... thou i think some of those beats can't be missed like electrical beats at 01:01:040 (1,2) - or something in an insane diff lol. and as for those composing, i know ur feeling to this map, but it'll be just a bit too random with those random jump and 1/2 slider-notes patterns... try to mod and map more and see others how to map songs, learn some composing from them, maybe u'll improve a bit.

actually i love this song very much, hope u can do better

good luck