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Topic Starter
Avena

Jenny wrote:

Kaoru wrote:

Priti is gay. JK this map is fun and i luv it
..but he is
does that mean I'm straight.
Ulysses
I can't believe that it's work of Jenny.Luv it
Myxo
I'm very sorry to tell you, but from what I can tell this mapset is unrankable.

Although the main source of this song is obviously REFLEC BEAT, it also appeared as a sort of "Guest Song" in Beatmania IIDX 18 Resort Anthem. The most trustworthy source, which lists the appearances of all BEMANI songs ( http://vjarmy.com/wiki/index.php/Main_Page ) is currently not working, so I am not 100% sure. But if you can trust wikipedia ( http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beatmania_ ... ort_Anthem ), it is listed under "Lincle Link Unlocks", which means that these several REFLECT BEAT-songs can be unlocked in the game. Therefore, this mapset is unrankable.
Zare
it's not tagged "Beatmania" or "IIDX" tho :^)
Myxo

Zare wrote:

it's not tagged "Beatmania" or "IIDX" tho :^)
And what does that change?
Konami does have the rights on this song, and it appeared in a IIDX game, so I definitely won't take the risk and bubble it, and no other BAT should do it either.
Jenny
No BAT should rank any song whatsoever because everything is copyrighted one way or another - RIP osu!, shutdown in 10, 9, 8..
Topic Starter
Avena
That's like saying scanter can't rank Mane Mane Psychotropic because it appears on SDVX, Give me a break >_>
Krah
If a BAT want to rank it he can.
Only the uploader will be blamed if there is some issues later.

https://osu.ppy.sh/p/copyright
Satella
vrooooom
Secretpipe
then RIP ?
Topic Starter
Avena

Secretpipe wrote:

then RIP ?
No, it's just that it has a Jenny diff.
Secretpipe
ahah
Topic Starter
Avena
ffs revived
Topic Starter
Avena
AGAIN
Raging Bull
my favorite candy rave song :o
Sonnyc
[Aka's Normal]
00:03:659 (1) - Please make the hitsound consistent with 00:09:208 (1).

[Pritiversible's Advanced]
00:14:411 (5) - Mind placing at (108,108) to make the placement less random?

[Zare's Hyper]
00:14:064 (6) - I guess a hitsound is missing at the end.
00:36:260 (6,7) - Meh,, Giving a pause suits because of the music, but this kind of distance is highly doubtful.
01:06:434 (5) - Starting the combo from here would make the distance more readable.
01:28:630 - I strongly think here needs a note.

[Another]
00:36:260 (1) - I don't think it's a good idea to reduce the slider as the same length with the previous one...
01:13:630 (4) - This note seems to break consistency imo. 2 1/4 jumps in a row hasn't appeared previously.

[Elvis' Extra]
00:41:809 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - This looks way too random. At least please make 00:41:809 (1,1) these two notes touch each other.
-- This diff should have to get approved instead of ranked imo lol

[Jenny's Extreme]
01:16:145 (5,9,10) - Mind NCing each to distribute streams?
Topic Starter
Avena

Sonnyc wrote:

[Another]
00:36:260 (1) - I don't think it's a good idea to reduce the slider as the same length with the previous one... I find this quite fitting considering how surprising the sudden change in the music is.
01:13:630 (4) - This note seems to break consistency imo. 2 1/4 jumps in a row hasn't appeared previously. It does feel odd, fixed.
Thank you for the mod :3
Aka
lol priti pls,
00:09:208 (1) - add a whistle on the tail, normal sampleset on the head of 00:09:728 (2) - ,thanks
DeletedUser_1574070
  • Beginner
  1. 00:15:798 - plz add a note for a snare. same as 00:19:960 -
  2. 01:08:861 (3) - put the 2dots as u did on the 2nd half of the slider. just a suggestion
  3. I couldn't understand why u deliberately omitted notes which suits on normal-whistle hitsounds. just for a difficultyspread? i want to deal mainly with that kind of rhythm. others are fine. really.
  • Aka
  1. 00:32:792 (4) - it repeats. really. so, i'd like u to shape this slider symmetrical. like moving the reddot 297:105.
  2. 00:36:260 (5,6) - continuous 1/2 'might' confuse normalplayers in my thought. 'I' think its fine enough, but it can be only me, so i recommend u NC on 5 cuz i don't want u to make radical change.
  3. 00:40:422 (2,4) - i think notes are needed here. my suggestion is stacking a circle on the end of sliders and adjust spacing.
  4. Others are fine. ah, not fine. its solid.
  • Pritiversible
  1. 00:07:127 (3) - i found out smth awkward here. beat is needed here instead of there. 00:07:301 - and 00:07:474 - .
  2. 00:22:908 (6) - distancerate is just a computed rate, and its someway different when it comes to playing. this repetitive slider does too. It seems not 1.0x spaced but nearer, so i recommend u to space this more, or NCing new notes after repetitive slider.
  3. 00:43:890 (1,2,3) - it can be really great if u try slight fade-out here. loosing the volume 5~10% down for each notes.
  4. 01:06:781 (7) - try stack the end.
  5. 01:29:324 (6) - NC? (im not sure)
  6. someway hard considering its just after normal imo. but i think its safe enough. cuz hyper iz difficult enough.
  • Zare
  1. 00:33:139 (2) - NC again for antijump
  2. 00:36:607 - add a note here / or nc this 00:36:780 (7) - / or convert 00:36:260 (1) - into two circles, and NC on the secondcircle.
  3. 00:41:463 (4) - i appreciate its good try, good pattern, but only when it comes to insane+. try reduce this spacing. put the 4 here 00:40:942 (2) -
  4. 00:44:931 (9) - SV change. NC
  5. i gonna make u a plot again. 01:01:231 (1) - NC / put note 01:01:578 - which stack the head of slider 01:01:925 (1) -
  6. 01:19:960 (4) - NC
  7. 01:28:804 (2) - spacing more. it suits.
  • Another
  1. 00:22:908 (2,3,1) - more dropping down can be great.
  2. 00:26:549 (1,2) - convert this into kicksliders in order to express the sounds? dunno
  3. 00:36:607 - add a kickslider, make the end stack with the head of 00:36:780 (1) -
  4. 00:43:370 (3,4,5) - any reason for only putting this 0.1x spaced while other patterns are keeping stacked?
  5. 00:57:936 (2,3,4) - ^
  6. 01:01:231 (3) - make this symmetrical, im not meaning keep vertical or horizontal, but just the shape of the slider.
  7. 01:13:630 (4) - this circle makes thing boring imo.
  8. 01:28:804 (1,2) - how about putting these around 365:244, with ctrl+G? it works great imo.

  • Elvis
  1. what should i mod here........
  2. 00:25:162 (7) - spacingchange occurs here so NC?
  3. 00:30:711 (7) - ^
  4. 00:49:960 (5,6) - i felt something strange here. press J this 00:49:960 (5,6) - , and put a note 00:50:220 -
  5. 00:57:763 (1,2,3,4,5) - its good and creative but i think consistent spacing works more good. no ground for velocity change in my thought.
  6. its just a crazy stuff, so i think my mod would make this map worse...
  • Jenny
  1. 00:25:509 (3,4) - ctrl+G each note.
  2. 01:16:491 (9) - NC
  3. and some personal thing.... can't u just reduce spacing for these??? 00:39:902 (2,2,2,2) - sigh.... i think its too faraway

G L
Zare
denying everything from Sonnyc & Kloyd except for a NC, a hitsound fix and a small spacing changes

still waiting for someone to point out how extremely shitty and rhythmically wrong the ending is, but modders don't seem to see that for some reason

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osu file format v13

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emilia
Time for some kors k goodness, from M4M :D

  • [Beginner]
  1. 00:27:243 (2,3) - Think minor nazi blanket problem
  2. 00:28:977 (2,3) - Shift 3 slightly lower for better circular flow
  3. 01:05:393 (2,1) - Maybe have something between, feels empty

    Really nothing much to say. Slider shapes are perfect, flow's great :) . Maybe some beat placement problems(?) but it isn't a major issue.

    [Aka's Normal]
  4. 00:13:023 (3,5) - Why not stack?
  5. 00:17:185 (5,1) - Try blanket
  6. 01:01:925 (1,2) - Nazi blanket
  7. 01:04:006 (4) - Don't really see a point in a mini jerk in the slider, but its k

    Basically no problems. Nice Normal :)

    [Pritiversible's Advanced]
  8. 01:14:931 (2,5,6) - Would suggest DS of 2 to 5 = 2 to 6
  9. 01:24:468 (2) - I would say curve the slider, but up to you
  10. 01:26:202 (6,1) - Maybe go for something more circular

    Really cool and neat Advanced. Every mod on this diff is basically just a suggestion, since its so good already :)

    [Zare's Hyper]
  11. 00:01:405 (3,4) - Don't hear a note meaning to be at the end of slider 3, would suggest making 3,4 a singular slider
  12. 00:39:902 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - DS looks a bit confusing
  13. 01:28:630 (2) - I think you missed a pretty strong beat here

    Spotted some DS problems like 01:03:659 (2,3,1,2) - . Would suggest you shift them to look something like 01:28:977 (1,2,3,4,5) - , since this pattern can bring about DS ambiguity, so the player reads the approach circles instead. But eh, the flow's pretty amazing, really cool Hyper :)

    [Another]
  14. 00:42:330 (2) - Just a suggestion, try ctrlg here so jumps are harder
  15. 01:02:965 (7) - Suggest you don't skip the 'down' here, the later bit as well: 01:04:353 (6) - .
  16. 01:17:705 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Having a triplet in the beginning of a stream can be a problem, but I think its k
  17. 01:29:064 (1) - Hold up was that a fukin hitsound???? :o

    Nice Another, really not many mistakes, I can't find anything to mod, other than this: 00:11:983 (1,2,3) - . Distance from 1-2 is really far, so I'm not sure if you want to have these. I mean you get used to them overtime, but they get confusing once they stop and start again. Still cool though :)

    [Elvis' Extra]
  18. 00:00:885 (1,2) - Don't really understand the sudden change in SV, but eh its an Extra
  19. 00:03:659 (1,2) - ^. If anything 1 should have higher SV since that's where the airhorn's at
  20. 00:16:838 (1,2) - Maybe try a blanket?
  21. 00:33:832 (1,1,2,3,4) - Highly undesirable for a spaced stream to happen after an exceedingly slow slider, but meh it IS an Extra
  22. 00:41:809 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Maybe try to have a more even shape, like a better circle
  23. 00:47:705 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Why no stream here when there are streams here: 00:45:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - ?? If they have basically the same music I suggest similar rhythmic pattern as well, but eh its an Extra
  24. 00:53:601 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Looks really cool, but try something more creative? Its fine really, just opinions
  25. 00:55:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Players may have a hard time tracking this while in gameplay, so not sure if you want to keep this
  26. 01:05:046 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - Same issue with the spaced stream thing

    Really cool map, I really love it :D Its a style that's rather unfamiliar to me, but I love it a lot :) Mods are basically just opinions. Some NC spam may be rather unneeded though.

    [Jenny's Extreme]
  27. 00:42:156 (1,2,1,2) - Wow this looks really far, suggest tone down on DS
  28. 00:45:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - DS looks rather messy in general here

    Really not many things not even many suggestions. Probably only thing I can say is to have curvier sliders. DS can occasionally be a problem, but it isn't major in this map.
Blazing cool mapset, you know what, have a star (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚
Hope this ranks quick :D
Topic Starter
Avena

Estellia- wrote:

Time for some kors k goodness, from M4M :D

  • [Beginner]
  1. 00:27:243 (2,3) - Think minor nazi blanket problem nope
  2. 00:28:977 (2,3) - Shift 3 slightly lower for better circular flow fixed
  3. 01:05:393 (2,1) - Maybe have something between, feels empty imo the player needs time to understand this and get on to the second slider, the stack makes this a bit harder to read.
Really nothing much to say. Slider shapes are perfect, flow's great :) . Maybe some beat placement problems(?) but it isn't a major issue.

[Pritiversible's Advanced]
  1. 01:24:468 (2) - I would say curve the slider, but up to you iunno I really like it currently
  2. 01:26:202 (6,1) - Maybe go for something more circular ^
Really cool and neat Advanced. Every mod on this diff is basically just a suggestion, since its so good already :)

[Another]
  1. 00:42:330 (2) - Just a suggestion, try ctrlg here so jumps are harder Fixed
  2. 01:02:965 (7) - Suggest you don't skip the 'down' here, the later bit as well: 01:04:353 (6) - Fixed
  3. 01:17:705 (2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Having a triplet in the beginning of a stream can be a problem, but I think its k It's fine
  4. 01:29:064 (1) - Hold up was that a fukin hitsound???? :o yah
Nice Another, really not many mistakes, I can't find anything to mod, other than this: 00:11:983 (1,2,3) - . Distance from 1-2 is really far, so I'm not sure if you want to have these. I mean you get used to them overtime, but they get confusing once they stop and start again. Still cool though :)

Blazing cool mapset, you know what, have a star (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚
Hope this ranks quick :D
Thank you for the mod :3
Zare
updated diff
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Aka

Kloyd wrote:

  • Aka
  1. 00:32:792 (4) - it repeats. really. so, i'd like u to shape this slider symmetrical. like moving the reddot 297:105. i like my non-symmetrical shape
  2. 00:36:260 (5,6) - continuous 1/2 'might' confuse normalplayers in my thought. 'I' think its fine enough, but it can be only me, so i recommend u NC on 5 cuz i don't want u to make radical change. its just 2 1/2 sliders, lol. ive been using such pattern lots of times and it wasnt seem confusing
  3. 00:40:422 (2,4) - i think notes are needed here. my suggestion is stacking a circle on the end of sliders and adjust spacing. wrong timestamp? o_o

Estellia- wrote:


  • [Aka's Normal]
  1. 00:13:023 (3,5) - Why not stack? because i dont like stacking notes which are repeating
  2. 00:17:185 (5,1) - Try blanket nah
  3. 01:01:925 (1,2) - Nazi blanket
  4. 01:04:006 (4) - Don't really see a point in a mini jerk in the slider, but its k why not, i didnt want to make it fully straight and with noticeable sharp curve
thanks
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362,292,89671,5,4,1:0:0:0:
Atrue
Pm me when you get about 2 testplays for each Ex diffs. >.>
Topic Starter
Avena
Quite a bit of changes have been made to Elvis' and Jenny's diffs after some discussing with both of them, So the mod responses aren't really needed since most of the things were fixed.
Yarissa



onions
Aka
onion
Ohrami
i feel ashamed to post noob scores which only took me 1 try but they beat kaoru so i must


Secretpipe
why you guys are so pro ? ;;
Irreversible
Because

Topic Starter
Avena
revived can someone please give me a bubble alr
Pho

Per Ingame-PM request.

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable stuff
Purple: Extremely questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
  1. Not 100% sure if this is rankable, but looks like your normal-hitwhistle69 has a really large delay: http://puu.sh/eA6Wr/da2da52630.png .
    Other custom hitsounds are fine, although they have 3ms delay.
  2. On all diffs: 00:16:838 - 01:12:330 - Normal-whistle on sliderends and on 01:17:879 - sliderstart (with lower volume) would be neat, but this is preference.
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:087 (3) - 00:08:861 (3) - Whistle for consistency with 00:03:312 (3) - or delete it on the latter.
  2. 00:11:289 (3,1) - Flows a bit bad, it'd be better if you'd do a halfway-overlap instead: http://puu.sh/eA7l1/a8e462e5e0.jpg
  3. 00:16:145 (2) - Normal-Whistle on sliderend?
  4. 01:11:289 (3,4) - This pattern is pretty difficult for a Easy difficulty, would be a good idea to nerf this: http://puu.sh/eA8qp/0179189fbb.jpg
[Normal]
  1. 00:39:728 (1) - The sliderstart feels considerably weak in terms of hitsounds, how about changing the sampleset to drum and add a normal-hitfinish like you did at 00:40:769 - ?
  2. 00:43:890 (4) - Normal-sampleset instead of drum? This also feels weak when you compare it to 00:43:197 (3) - while the music is still intense.
  3. 00:53:254 (3) - Maybe normal-sampleset here.
[Pritiversible's Hard]
  1. 00:03:312 (4) - Drum-whistle on sliderend might be a good idea instead of soft-whistle.
  2. 00:05:740 (2) - Whistle on sliderstart.
  3. 00:11:463 (2,3) - I found these hitsounds to be almost inaudible since the music is so loud here, can you increase the volume of them by 10~20%?
  4. 01:08:861 (5) - NC
[Zare's Hyper]
  1. Ein paar Stellen, an denen du NC setzen solltest: 00:03:659 (5) - 00:31:405 (8) -
  2. 00:14:064 (6) - Whistle am Sliderende.
  3. 00:54:989 (1,2) - Normal-Samplesets am Anfang des Sliders bzw. Circles, weil es relativ starke Beats im Track sind.
  4. 01:27:243 (3) - Der Soft-Finisher hier ist unnötig, da gibt es nichts im Track was eine Betonung benötigt. Rauslöschen.
    Wenn wir schon dabei sind, wäre eine gute Idee die beiden Circles 01:27:069 (2,3) - in einen Slider zu mergen, da 01:27:243 - mMn keinen starken Beat erfordert.
  5. 01:28:630 (2,3) - Könntest du auch in einen Slider mergen, außer du willst den starken Beat bei 3 behalten.
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:873 (4) - Whistle.
  2. 00:05:567 (3) - Whistle on sliderend.
  3. 00:32:098 (4,5) - Finish be on 5's sliderstart instead of 4.
  4. 00:36:260 (1) - You could make this a backslider to hit the weaker beat at 00:36:607 - as well, the gap felt a bit awkward to me while playing.
  5. 00:48:832 (3) - Delete whistle on sliderstart.
  6. 00:55:682 (3) - Clap on sliderstart and 00:56:029 (4) - clap on sliderend, I feel this combo could need the extra hitsounds.
[Elvis' Expert]
Sliderheaps all the way at second half~ I still have issues with two of them:

  1. 00:55:682 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm probably not the best person to judge this, but this 1/6 sliderheap doesn't make sense to me musically as it follows nothing properly on the track.
    Probably there to build up tension (which i don't even think is necessary at this section), i would just replace it with a 1/4 circlestream. Even if it's less 'creative', it'd at least follow beats that are relatable to the track.
  2. 01:04:353 (1,2) - Uh yeah, these are pretty much overmapped, there's like no sounds at where they're placed (with exception of 01:04:353 - ) and you still have such a high volume on them. The following would make much more sense: http://puu.sh/eCGAz/1957f478d5.jpg
  3. 01:08:168 (4,2,1) - Blanket better.
  4. 01:10:075 (2) - How about NCing here, the SV change is pretty notable.
[Jenny's Extra]
Yeah, I can't play this properly, so I don't think I can give valuable mods on this one. Sorry.

All in all pretty neat mapset, all Insanes had some pretty nice trick patterns. Good luck with this.
Topic Starter
Avena

Pho wrote:


Per Ingame-PM request.

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable stuff
Purple: Extremely questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
  1. Not 100% sure if this is rankable, but looks like your normal-hitwhistle69 has a really large delay: http://puu.sh/eA6Wr/da2da52630.png .
    Other custom hitsounds are fine, although they have 3ms delay. Doesn't actually matter since nothing comes after it.
[Insane]
  1. 00:32:098 (4,5) - Finish be on 5's sliderstart instead of 4. The clap is enough, also there's a cymbal on 4..
All in all pretty neat mapset, all Insanes had some pretty nice trick patterns. Good luck with this.
Applied everything that was deleted.
Thanks for modding :3
Edit: Didn't fix the last thing on Elvis' diff since it's consistent with the rest of the diff.
Aka
everything fixed, thanks
http://puu.sh/eDHZj/c4d583436a.osu
Topic Starter
Avena
Changed NC on Irre's part, fixed stuff for Zare since he's inactive
Update~
Zare
So
Bubble when?
Avishay
Why is 'evilelvisv2' in the tags? Also, 'collab' is not necessary since you got 'collaboration' and 'collab' is part of it, which makes 'collab' pointless.
Topic Starter
Avena

Avishay wrote:

Why is 'evilelvisv2' in the tags? Also, 'collab' is not necessary since you got 'collaboration' and 'collab' is part of it, which makes 'collab' pointless.
it's Elvis' old name
also it is honey.
Hinsvar
wow i'm late by like a million trillion years

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Aka's Normal
  1. 00:39:728 (1,2) - I know what do you choose to follow here, but hey, the instruments at 00:40:422 and 00:41:463 are extremely noticeable, and it'd be weird to leave them alone, so what about using circles to map them?
>Zare's Hyper
  1. 00:43:023 - Why not try mapping this tick? The instrument here is pretty noticeable, and it'd be nicer to keep the consistency in the rhythm by mapping it.
  2. 01:05:913 (4) - You may want to NC this to indicate the spacing change...
>Elvis' Expert
  1. 01:27:243 (3) - Consider removing this to make the other notes here accentuated better, like what you did previously in the similar section of the song?
>Jenny's Extra
  1. 01:16:665 (12,13,1) - Any reason of doing this instead of making something more normal, like reversing (12) and (13)? It is playable, but I feel that it's awkward due to the positioning of the objects.
Well uh yeah, sure, poke me once you're done.
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