Katakiri Rekka - TSUBASA -Game size- · forum

Natteke desu

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Natteke desu 2014-07-18T16:03:30+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 15 августа 2014 г. at 1:28:55

Artist: Katakiri Rekka
Title: TSUBASA -Game size-
Source: うみねこのなく頃に散
Tags: higurashi 10th anniversary Umineko no Naku Koro ni Chiru dai hope When They Cry 07th expansion visual novel damnae ryuu aka
BPM: 180,5
Filesize: 3040kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:

Aka's Normal (2 stars, 136 notes)
Damnae's Hard (3,73 stars, 252 notes)
Insane (4,72 stars, 343 notes)
ryuu's Easy (1,35 stars, 75 notes)

Download: Katakiri Rekka - TSUBASA -Game size-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Natteke desu 2014-08-14T21:32:05+00:00, edited 29 times in total.

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-07-18T16:56:12+00:00

бебебе

19:42 EvilElvis: в начале?
19:42 Aka: ну тут парочка есть таких, где последний круг идет в одну сторону, а слайдер с другой хд
19:42 EvilElvis: а
19:42 EvilElvis: ну это да
19:42 Aka: ну и в начал пиздец какой-то
19:42 Aka: да
19:42 Aka: лол
19:43 EvilElvis: обычные просто надоело уже делать
19:43 Aka: аха :D
19:43 Aka: пойду сиграйу
19:47 EvilElvis: заметила в конце овермап?
19:47 Aka: не сильно
19:47 Aka: лол
19:47 Aka: и стрим в начала в тему
19:47 Aka: прям читабелен
19:47 Aka: нарм
19:48 EvilElvis: я кстати удивлен что звезд мало так
19:48 Aka: не сложная ведь
19:48 Aka: тут есть два патта
19:48 Aka: один мне не понравился по флоу
19:48 EvilElvis: показывай жеж
19:48 Aka: 00:17:666 (2,3,4) - 
19:48 Aka: во
19:48 Aka: тут хотелось как-то
19:49 Aka: круговое движение чтоли
19:49 Aka: а оно так на линии
19:49 Aka: неприятно в общем >:(
19:49 EvilElvis: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1831148
19:49 EvilElvis: так точно
19:49 Aka: можно так
19:49 Aka: а можно kRi@TiWN0 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1831152
19:50 Aka: 00:17:666 (2) -  КИМИ заканчивается как раз в двух хренях этого слайдера
19:50 Aka: и там такое в вокале
19:50 Aka: АЙ таа
19:50 Aka: вроде норм
19:50 Aka: ну и еще что-то было
19:51 Aka: 00:24:813 (1,2,3,4,5) -  ну это ты ваще не палишься
19:51 Aka: :ssss
19:51 Aka: 00:27:472 (1,2,3) - вот вот этот не оч
19:51 Aka: двояк сильно близко визуально своим горячим телом
19:51 Aka: к единице
19:51 EvilElvis: воувоу
19:51 Aka: и трояк далеко как форевер элон
19:52 Aka: помири их чтоли 
19:52 Aka: лол
19:52 Aka: ну и все
19:52 EvilElvis: подвигал
19:52 Aka: а еще у тебя назибланкет тут был 00:28:470 (3,1) - 
19:52 EvilElvis: я его как раз поменял
19:52 Aka: <:
19:53 Aka: приятная такая
19:53 EvilElvis: мне хитсаунды немного не нравятся
19:53 EvilElvis: ну может придумаю что
19:54 EvilElvis: что делать будешь?
19:54 Aka: стандартные такие
19:54 EvilElvis: и постани в тред, кд дам

препаре фор май нурмол

340

330 posts

Joined January 2014

340 2014-07-22T10:30:25+00:00

[General]

offset = 872 (01:17:991 - )

[Insane]

00:02:375 (2) - мне кажется, что sampleset = Normal здесь ни к чему. я бы поставил здесь авто
00:08:026 (9) - ^
00:18:663 (2,3) - очень странно звучит этот момент, ибо гитара начинается с красного тика, а слайдер - с белого. убери кружок и поставь на его место слайдер
00:32:209 (11) - без клапа будет лучше, имо
01:16:503 (3) - клап на начало слайдера. а ещё здесь 01:17:999 (1) - , здесь 01:16:503 (3) - , здесь 01:19:162 (1) - , здесь 01:21:821 (1) - и т.д.
01:19:993 (4) - свисток не очень к месту
00:49:910 (3) - additions = drum, а если хочешь, то можешь ещё и на следующий кружок драм поставить
01:06:697 (3,4) - ctrl+g на обоих слайдерах и поменять их местами на таймлайне. так будет играться чуть-чуть получше.
00:52:569 (4,5,6) - выглядит странно. поправь спейсинг между стримом и слайдером

[Damnae's Hard]

01:22:819 (4) - uhh. i dont like this overmapping, it sounds too weird. also you should delete it because didnt put circle here 01:21:489 (3,1) -
00:09:356 (3) - i dont think that drum here is a good idea, it shoud be on the end of this slider 00:09:024 (2) -

[Aka's Noгmal]

00:01:877 (3) - софт? вистл? D: нормал и без свистка будет получше звучать, имо
00:02:874 (5) - зачем тут финиш в начале и на конце слайдера?
00:09:190 (2) - sampeset = drum
00:31:461 (3) - ctrl+g

[ryuu's Easy]

00:30:132 (3) - ctrl+shift+s, в получившемся окне вбиваешь 0,862, "ОК"

Last edited by 340 2014-07-22T11:56:50+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-07-22T11:00:09+00:00

340

340 wrote:
[Aka's Noгmal]
00:01:877 (3) - софт? вистл? D: нормал и без свистка будет получше звучать, имо ↓
00:02:874 (5) - зачем тут финиш в начале и на конце слайдера? ничего не знаю о хитсаундинге, тырила хс с диффы элвиса :v
00:09:190 (2) - sampeset = drum ✔
00:31:461 (3) - ctrl+g мне нравится флоу с подъемом таким, не

:v

osu file format v13

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 10686
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.6

[Metadata]
Title:TSUBASA (Ver hope)
TitleUnicode:TSUBASA (Ver hope)
Artist:Katakiri Rekka
ArtistUnicode:Katakiri Rekka
Creator:EvilElvis
Version:Aka's Normal
Source:Umineko no Naku Koro ni Chiru
Tags:07th expansion visual novel damnae ryuu aka
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Damnae

Elite Storyboarder

640 posts

Joined July 2011

Damnae 2014-07-22T14:13:22+00:00

SPOILER

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[Metadata]
Title:TSUBASA (Ver hope)
TitleUnicode:TSUBASA (Ver hope)
Artist:Katakiri Rekka
ArtistUnicode:Katakiri Rekka
Creator:EvilElvis
Version:Damnae's Hard
Source:Umineko no Naku Koro ni Chiru
Tags:07th expansion visual novel damnae ryuu aka
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Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-07-22T14:46:59+00:00

Hello, rapidmod here, as requested

i'll mod on russian, easier to abuse kd

General:
clear

Insane:
00:03:040 (7) - такое часто сбивает, играть что-то что не дает тебе никакого аудио фидбека, а его нету софт хитнормал тут потерялся вообще, при том что на прошлом триплете семпсет нормал 00:02:375 (2)
00:04:037 (4) - 4я секунда, халфскрин джамп, это бы было бы нормально для экстры имо
00:05:699 (3,4) - ^ отмечу пока что, посмотрим по ходу дифы есть ли что-то подобное в плане консистенси, если есть то и тут трогать не стоит
00:08:359 (12,1) - ^
00:26:475 (2,3) - увеличь спейсинг, очень похоже на 00:23:151 (4,5) и соответственно сыграется так-же
01:03:705 (1,1) - давай тут нормально, бланкет все дела
01:12:181 (1,2,3,1) - это никак не тянет на переход от 0.75 до 1.3 в музыке, это просто чтоб тут запомнили спидап и нажали ретрай
короче мне не понравилось начало до 00:10:686 (4), то ли сложнее остальной карты, то ли менее аккуратно

Damnae's Hard:
00:05:865 (4,5,1) - random, you put jump between 4 and 5 2DS and just 1.3DS between 5 and 1, if you want to reflect music properly with your jumps you should make them at least equally, so i suggest you to increase spacing on 00:06:032 (5,1) -
00:39:439 (1,2,3,1) - flow seems a bit broken here, not a hard level
00:53:400 (2,3,1,2) - ^
00:52:735 (2,3,2,3) - these jumps is too big for hard
01:22:819 (4) - remove for consistency with you previous rhythm

Aka's Normal:
00:08:193 (5) - а що він тихий? у тебя все до этого с клапами 00:06:198 (1,2,3,4) а там нет
00:11:517 (1) - не надо такой сильный хс оставлять на конце слайдера или как-то так http://puu.sh/amiDc/f14c2fbc13.jpg сделать или просто убрать хс

ryuu's Easy:
00:27:472 (1,3) - а что случилось с хсами на слайдертиках тут? ну и далее такие начали встречаться, звучит рандомно, консистенси?
01:15:339 (1,2) - софт семплы только подчеркивают сломанный тут ритм, не маскируют
01:18:996 (2,3) - ^
2\4 клапхсы на слайдертиках :\

Good Luck!

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-07-22T15:44:24+00:00

всё поменяла. всем спасибо.

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Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-07-23T12:20:20+00:00

поисправляла, да

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Kyubey

osu! Alumni

3,097 posts

Joined December 2012

Kyubey 2014-07-23T21:39:23+00:00

Привет, няши. Возможно, буду наци.
[Easy]
00:11:517 (1,2,3) - спейсинг чуть-чуть не ровный, выключи грид снап и подровняй с дистанс снапом, красивее будет
00:15:506 (2,1) - хоть это и почти незаметно, и я придираюсь, но мб сделать симметрию ровной?
00:20:492 (4) - это тоже подровнять можно
00:24:481 (3) - ну это точно подровнять надо
00:30:132 (3) - имхо, репит на большом белом тике звучал бы намного лучше
00:36:780 (2,1) - попробуй вторую половинку у двойки чуть погнуть, чтобы была бланкетом к единичке
00:44:425 (3) - возможно, я просто не любитель таких форм, поэтому предлагаю чуть согнуть первый кусок вот так

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00:59:384 (1) - может, сделать бланкетом к 00:58:719 (3) - ? заодно и переход красивее будет к следующим объектам
01:02:043 (3) - если его чуть-чуть подвигать, то можно сделать двойной бланкет ровнее. и к предыдущему слайдеру, и к следующей ноте
01:09:688 (5) - опять же, спейсинг
01:11:018 (2) - и тут можно
в концовке очень странный ритм, но я не знаю, что тут можно предложить, поэтому пусть будет. но те ноты на пустых местах как-то не звучат
[Normal]
00:02:209 (4,5) - чуть-чуть пофикси бланкет
00:35:450 (3) - при игре залезает примерно на треть хпбара, опусти как-нибудь
00:39:439 (5) - ты можешь попробовать погнуть чуть-чуть первую часть слайдера, чтобы она была бланкетом к 00:40:769 (1) -
00:42:098 (3) - как насчёт выгнуть в обратную сторону? а то как-то скучновато немного выглядит
01:03:040 (3,4) - думаю, что ты и так об этом думала и решила прямо поставить, но всё же, как насчёт забланкетировать их? а пятёрку потом со следующим слайдером стакнуть можно, если флоу дико не нравится
01:11:350 (3,1,2) - у меня дикое желание предложить что-то типа такого

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[Hard]
(nazi modding tho)
00:04:204 (3,1) - this overlap looks bad, isn't it?
00:14:675 (2,1) - they're touching, please break their love and they will never kiss again
00:55:395 (1) - how about moving it a little lower and making perfect triangle here 00:54:564 (3,4,1) - ?
hmm, i can't even nazi this, this hard looks really good and neat for me
[Insane]
00:00:880 (2) - по-моему, здесь должно стоять нк, ибо здесь начинается основная музыка
00:12:181 - ГАВ
00:21:988 - я бы это тоже замапил, ибо под это "нани" что-нибудь хорошо бы стояло с последующим джампом к 00:22:154 (1) - этому слайдеру
00:24:813 (1,3) - чуть кривой бланкет
00:41:766 (4) - как насчёт анстака и сдвига этого слайдера левее? а то не смотрится имхо
00:48:663 (7,1) - ты же обещал пофиксить это движение. оно реально путает, и даже репит не спасает, я даже в едиторе не с первого раза понял, что к чему. ну сделай же ты ктрлджи этому слайдеру
01:08:359 (4,1) - кривоватый бланкет
01:24:481 (1) - оффскрин же ну
в целом норм

ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-07-23T22:22:06+00:00

Kyubey wrote:
[Easy]
00:11:517 (1,2,3) - спейсинг чуть-чуть не ровный, выключи грид снап и подровняй с дистанс снапом, красивее будет оки
00:15:506 (2,1) - хоть это и почти незаметно, и я придираюсь, но мб сделать симметрию ровной? оки
00:20:492 (4) - это тоже подровнять можно оки
00:24:481 (3) - ну это точно подровнять надо оки
00:30:132 (3) - имхо, репит на большом белом тике звучал бы намного лучше но тогда же след. слайдер не начать! ну и кароч. мне нравится мой репит .3.
00:36:780 (2,1) - попробуй вторую половинку у двойки чуть погнуть, чтобы была бланкетом к единичке тот вариант, что ты предложил, мне не очень понравился. я попробовала сделать его плавной галочкой. но он такой короткий, что бланкеты вообще не оч кароч. ну и всё. я оставила его, как есть
00:44:425 (3) - возможно, я просто не любитель таких форм, поэтому предлагаю чуть согнуть первый кусок вот так лул. а я не любитель таких форм. для меня вот эти краснаяточка-слайдеры. либо оба конца плавные, либо оба прямые.
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00:59:384 (1) - может, сделать бланкетом к 00:58:719 (3) - ? заодно и переход красивее будет к следующим объектам нет. слишком много плавности подряд тогда будет.
01:02:043 (3) - если его чуть-чуть подвигать, то можно сделать двойной бланкет ровнее. и к предыдущему слайдеру, и к следующей ноте мне самой этот слайдер колол глаза. но я вообще хз. с нижним как будто не ровно. ну я подвинула, но всё равно как-то не оч.
01:09:688 (5) - опять же, спейсинг оки
01:11:018 (2) - и тут можно оки
в концовке очень странный ритм, но я не знаю, что тут можно предложить, поэтому пусть будет. но те ноты на пустых местах как-то не звучат да. я эти ноты нах убрала. но сначала они мне очень нравились.

спасибо, qb-naziyan ~

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Damnae

Elite Storyboarder

640 posts

Joined July 2011

Damnae 2014-07-23T22:45:36+00:00

spoilerboxerino

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Artist:Katakiri Rekka
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Creator:EvilElvis
Version:Damnae's Hard
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Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2014-07-24T01:12:36+00:00

Везде где есть мой коммент там да, остальное нет в силу того что мне не нравится или я считаю иначе, итц.

340 wrote:
[General]
offset = 872 (01:17:991 - )
[Insane]
00:02:375 (2) - мне кажется, что sampleset = Normal здесь ни к чему. я бы поставил здесь авто
00:08:026 (9) - ^
00:18:663 (2,3) - очень странно звучит этот момент, ибо гитара начинается с красного тика, а слайдер - с белого. убери кружок и поставь на его место слайдер
00:32:209 (11) - без клапа будет лучше, имо да
01:16:503 (3) - клап на начало слайдера. а ещё здесь 01:17:999 (1) - , здесь 01:16:503 (3) - , здесь 01:19:162 (1) - , здесь 01:21:821 (1) - и т.д.
01:19:993 (4) - свисток не очень к месту
00:49:910 (3) - additions = drum, а если хочешь, то можешь ещё и на следующий кружок драм поставить
01:06:697 (3,4) - ctrl+g на обоих слайдерах и поменять их местами на таймлайне. так будет играться чуть-чуть получше.
00:52:569 (4,5,6) - выглядит странно. поправь спейсинг между стримом и слайдером

Sieg wrote:
Hello, rapidmod here, as requested

i'll mod on russian, easier to abuse kd

General:
clear

Insane:
00:03:040 (7) - такое часто сбивает, играть что-то что не дает тебе никакого аудио фидбека, а его нету софт хитнормал тут потерялся вообще, при том что на прошлом триплете семпсет нормал 00:02:375 (2)
00:04:037 (4) - 4я секунда, халфскрин джамп, это бы было бы нормально для экстры имо
00:05:699 (3,4) - ^ отмечу пока что, посмотрим по ходу дифы есть ли что-то подобное в плане консистенси, если есть то и тут трогать не стоит
00:08:359 (12,1) - ^
00:26:475 (2,3) - увеличь спейсинг, очень похоже на 00:23:151 (4,5) и соответственно сыграется так-же
01:03:705 (1,1) - давай тут нормально, бланкет все дела
01:12:181 (1,2,3,1) - это никак не тянет на переход от 0.75 до 1.3 в музыке, это просто чтоб тут запомнили спидап и нажали ретрай
короче мне не понравилось начало до 00:10:686 (4), то ли сложнее остальной карты, то ли менее аккуратно

тут все да кроме третьего момента с джампом, такой переход и хотел, хитсаунды на диффках девочек сейчас посмотрю

Aka's Normal:
00:08:193 (5) - а що він тихий? у тебя все до этого с клапами 00:06:198 (1,2,3,4) а там нет
00:11:517 (1) - не надо такой сильный хс оставлять на конце слайдера или как-то так http://puu.sh/amiDc/f14c2fbc13.jpg сделать или просто убрать хс

ryuu's Easy:
00:27:472 (1,3) - а что случилось с хсами на слайдертиках тут? ну и далее такие начали встречаться, звучит рандомно, консистенси?
01:15:339 (1,2) - софт семплы только подчеркивают сломанный тут ритм, не маскируют
01:18:996 (2,3) - ^
2\4 клапхсы на слайдертиках :\

Good Luck!

Kyubey wrote:
Привет, няши. Возможно, буду наци.

[Insane]
00:00:880 (2) - по-моему, здесь должно стоять нк, ибо здесь начинается основная музыка
00:12:181 - ГАВ
00:21:988 - я бы это тоже замапил, ибо под это "нани" что-нибудь хорошо бы стояло с последующим джампом к 00:22:154 (1) - этому слайдеру
00:24:813 (1,3) - чуть кривой бланкет
00:41:766 (4) - как насчёт анстака и сдвига этого слайдера левее? а то не смотрится имхо
00:48:663 (7,1) - ты же обещал пофиксить это движение. оно реально путает, и даже репит не спасает, я даже в едиторе не с первого раза понял, что к чему. ну сделай же ты ктрлджи этому слайдеру
01:08:359 (4,1) - кривоватый бланкет
01:24:481 (1) - оффскрин же ну
в целом норм

Мостли алл да, а движение я поправил, просто немного меньше спейсинг сделал, после еще одного твоего упоминания еще меньше сделал

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-07-24T10:39:01+00:00

кью

Kyubey wrote:
[Normal]
00:02:209 (4,5) - чуть-чуть пофикси бланкет ✔
00:35:450 (3) - при игре залезает примерно на треть хпбара, опусти как-нибудь разве? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1851222
00:39:439 (5) - ты можешь попробовать погнуть чуть-чуть первую часть слайдера, чтобы она была бланкетом к 00:40:769 (1) - в жопу бланкеты D;
00:42:098 (3) - как насчёт выгнуть в обратную сторону? а то как-то скучновато немного выглядит ака скучный говномапир, тут всьо по флоу, ниоч по флоу идет выгнутый в другую >:
01:03:040 (3,4) - думаю, что ты и так об этом думала и решила прямо поставить, но всё же, как насчёт забланкетировать их? а пятёрку потом со следующим слайдером стакнуть можно, если флоу дико не нравится я попробовала это сделать, флоу со стакнутым на следующим очень уг, а если сделать (5) на место (3), то все патты до конца надо будет менять. я уже сфейлилась лул
01:11:350 (3,1,2) - у меня дикое желание предложить что-то типа такого
SPOILER
не люблю такие оверлапы, но загнула их ✔

ЭЛВИС ОБНОВИ, В ПРОШЛЫЙ РАЗ НЕ ОБНОВИЛ

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Beige

Elite Mapper

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Beige 2014-07-24T13:32:43+00:00

<3

Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2014-07-24T15:39:29+00:00

W h i t e wrote:
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Lust

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Lust 2014-07-25T00:04:16+00:00

hello

[General]

For artist put 片霧烈火 and move katakiri rekka to tags
Not liking the preview time, doesn't reflect well on the song, try 00:11:350 - instead

[ryuu's Easy]

00:13:843 (4,1) - This doesn't really carry the rhythm well for me. There is a lot of stuff going on in the music and I think it will be better accented with this, try it out and see if you like it:
00:14:841 (1) - Remove NC, to be consistent with your combo coloring
01:02:043 (3) - This slider shape seems a bit forced, try to make the curve at the end less harsh
00:29:467 (2) - (Nazi) 454:316 to be stacked perfectly underneath 00:26:143 (5) - 's slider end
01:20:658 (1) - You need some more of those custom slider ticks here to cover all the noise in the music effectively

[Aka's Normal]
I think the combos need to be worked on the most. Combo coloring works best when they go with the music as opposed to a set pattern or number. The playing patterns seem alright though

Try and add a spinner somewhere, to stagger the scores
00:13:511 (1) - Remove NC, place it 00:14:176 (2) - here instead, its better to go with the music as opposed to with the pattern (which I am assuming is what you are trying to do, correct me if im wrong)
00:16:503 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:16:835 (2) - instead
00:19:162 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:19:494 (2) - instead
00:27:140 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:27:472 (2) - instead
00:34:785 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:35:450 (3) - instead
00:37:777 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:38:109 (2) - instead
00:39:439 (5,1) - The flow here is very sharp because of the shape of 5, thus making the transition to 1 a bit awkward. I suggest turning 5 in to a straight up and down slider or curve it in the direction of 1 to smooth the play
00:43:096 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:43:428 (2) - instead
00:51:406 (5,6) - Blanket can be improved, use 6's approach circle to help you out with this
00:59:716 (2,3,4) - You need to be careful with triangle patterns like these in lower difficulties. Because of the lower AR, players might assume to jump to on over to 4 and skipping 3. I would arrange this pattern something like this to avoid confusion
SPOILER
That way you can create a nice triangle pattern with the hitbursts on 01:00:713 (5,1) - instead! Looks quite nice imo

[Damnae's Hard]
Looks fine to me, nothing really stood out when playing it. Although the soft whistles in the end seem a bit odd to me when the song itself is reaching its climax. Try and add a spinner somewhere, maybe at the end and fade out with the music.

[Insane]
Great diff. Always a pleasure playing your maps!

Like the other diffs, try to add a spinner somewhere
00:23:151 (4,5,1) - When I saw this in the editor, I was pretty skeptical. However giving this a play and it turned out the most fun pattern to play! I like what you did here, fits great
00:24:813 (1,3) - (Nazi) Pattern would look cleaner if this was a perfect blanket
00:31:794 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This stream looks a bit sloppy. I think it will look and play better having a straight line of circles going downwards
00:37:112 (3,4,5) - Triplets like these are great. However if you have them it kills the momentum you have going with the previous patterns. Try facing the triplet upwards towards the next slider or replace it with a repeating 1/4, I feel it'll play better
01:24:481 (1) - Eh maybe not have the slowdown too slow, try 0.75 instead. Going from 1.50 to 0.5 is a lot to get, and I ended up slider breaking because I didn't know that the slider was going to slowdown

Nice set guys, good luck!

Faan

269 posts

Joined July 2013

Faan 2014-07-25T09:05:48+00:00

From my modding Queue (I just put all the considered song into collection and randomly selected one.... soooo here's our lucky winner~)

Easy:
00:30:132 (3,1) - try something like http://puu.sh/aqidz/87991dfaae.jpg
pretty nice difficulty to be honest :/

Normal:
00:32:791 (1) - you can curve this more to create a better shape :3
01:00:381 (4,1) - overlap maybe stack.
01:05:699 (2,4) - overlap

another nice difficulty..... sigh I can't mod nice difficulties ;w;

Hard:

00:02:209 (1,1) - overlap
00:19:993 (2,4) - I find this a bit ugly
00:37:777 (2,2) - move the slider a bit down so the other slider fits into the other slider like... ahhh...http://puu.sh/aqiFM/456177cd42.jpg
00:42:763 (3,1) - slight overlap
00:44:757 (1,4) - stack？
01:19:828 (2,3) - ^

;w;

Insane:

00:11:849 (2,2) - idk maybe blanket this a bit
01:06:530 (2,3) - I would prefer blanket due to OCD but idk
01:08:359 (4,1) - improve OCD

Some pretty mad jumps in this, suggest soften it a bit

"Hey AI mod what do you think of this Insane"
"Expert :3"
http://puu.sh/aqj3y/d42d150d74.png

KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2014-07-25T10:59:47+00:00

Mod Request From Kazamastar’s Modding Queue
Hello, EvilElvis !
Thank’s for calling me to mod your beatmap 
Let’s get started..

ryuu's Easy

Perfect! Nothing to mod 

Aka's Normal

Change AR to 5.5,
Nothing to mod 

Damnae's Hard

AR 8 is too big for hard, try AR 7.2,
Reduce stacking.

Insane

There’s a lot of Stacking notes,
and some notes are unreadable (unpredictable),
Fix it 

That’s All EvilElvis ! Good luck !

Special Notes : i mod before you update your beatmap

Last edited by KUURAhoshi 2014-07-25T21:42:56+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Aka

1,777 posts

Joined January 2012

Aka 2014-07-25T12:14:26+00:00

lust

Lust wrote:
[Aka's Normal]
I think the combos need to be worked on the most. Combo coloring works best when they go with the music as opposed to a set pattern or number. The playing patterns seem alright though
Try and add a spinner somewhere, to stagger the scores idk where to place any spinner rly, last sound where i placed slider is really short and not suitable for spinner imo
00:13:511 (1) - Remove NC, place it 00:14:176 (2) - here instead, its better to go with the music as opposed to with the pattern (which I am assuming is what you are trying to do, correct me if im wrong) ummm all NCs are placed following the lyrics, new couplets, etc and i feel like it cant be done there another way. so i cant really agree with your suggestions ;_:
00:16:503 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:16:835 (2) - instead
00:19:162 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:19:494 (2) - instead
00:27:140 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:27:472 (2) - instead
00:34:785 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:35:450 (3) - instead
00:37:777 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:38:109 (2) - instead
00:39:439 (5,1) - The flow here is very sharp because of the shape of 5, thus making the transition to 1 a bit awkward. I suggest turning 5 in to a straight up and down slider or curve it in the direction of 1 to smooth the play ✔ .w.
00:43:096 (1) - Remove NC, place it on 00:43:428 (2) - instead same as above about NCs, "kaeruu~" is a new word and i'd like to start combo from this part
00:51:406 (5,6) - Blanket can be improved, use 6's approach circle to help you out with this ✔
00:59:716 (2,3,4) - You need to be careful with triangle patterns like these in lower difficulties. Because of the lower AR, players might assume to jump to on over to 4 and skipping 3. I would arrange this pattern something like this to avoid confusion okay ✔ though i dont like flow to slider, curved it into another side
SPOILER
That way you can create a nice triangle pattern with the hitbursts on 01:00:713 (5,1) - instead! Looks quite nice imo
thanks~

faan

Faan wrote:
Normal:
00:32:791 (1) - you can curve this more to create a better shape :3 i like slightly curved ones \owo/
01:00:381 (4,1) - overlap maybe stack. there is not overlap after previous mod xD
01:05:699 (2,4) - overlap and this one is intentional, i like how those overlaps go

another nice difficulty..... sigh I can't mod nice difficulties ;w;

thank you for taking a look~

kazamastar11

Kazamastar11 wrote:
Change AR to 5.5, ar 5.5 is pretty high imo, 5 is fine owo
Nothing to mod 

thank you for taking a look~

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KUURAhoshi

585 posts

Joined January 2014

KUURAhoshi 2014-07-25T14:21:27+00:00

Your welcome

If it's not helping, feel free to tell me.. I'll shoot Kudosu star..

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ryuu

802 posts

Joined February 2011

ryuu 2014-07-25T19:45:28+00:00

Lust wrote:
[ryuu's Easy]
00:13:843 (4,1) - This doesn't really carry the rhythm well for me. There is a lot of stuff going on in the music and I think it will be better accented with this, try it out and see if you like it: too many 1/2 sliders in a row. it's boring for me
00:14:841 (1) - Remove NC, to be consistent with your combo coloring done
01:02:043 (3) - This slider shape seems a bit forced, try to make the curve at the end less harsh this is my favourite slider in whole diff ♥
00:29:467 (2) - (Nazi) 454:316 to be stacked perfectly underneath 00:26:143 (5) - 's slider end done
01:20:658 (1) - You need some more of those custom slider ticks here to cover all the noise in the music effectively okay. i remap this part :<

thank u ~

Faan wrote:
Easy:
00:30:132 (3,1) - try something like http://puu.sh/aqidz/87991dfaae.jpg done
pretty nice difficulty to be honest :/

thanks :3

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Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2014-07-26T01:48:26+00:00

Lust wrote:
hello hey

[General]
For artist put 片霧烈火 and move katakiri rekka to tags thanks
Not liking the preview time, doesn't reflect well on the song, try 00:11:350 - instead
[Insane]
Great diff. Always a pleasure playing your maps! you embrassed me pls
Like the other diffs, try to add a spinner somewhere i'll try
00:23:151 (4,5,1) - When I saw this in the editor, I was pretty skeptical. However giving this a play and it turned out the most fun pattern to play! I like what you did here, fits great thankee
00:24:813 (1,3) - (Nazi) Pattern would look cleaner if this was a perfect blanket huum i'll try to
00:31:794 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This stream looks a bit sloppy. I think it will look and play better having a straight line of circles going downwards fxd
00:37:112 (3,4,5) - Triplets like these are great. However if you have them it kills the momentum you have going with the previous patterns. Try facing the triplet upwards towards the next slider or replace it with a repeating 1/4, I feel it'll play better now it's a slider
01:24:481 (1) - Eh maybe not have the slowdown too slow, try 0.75 instead. Going from 1.50 to 0.5 is a lot to get, and I ended up slider breaking because I didn't know that the slider was going to slowdown 0.75 feels a bit fast for this moment so 0.6 k
Nice set guys, good luck!

Thanks! Also about preview point, i'll gonna use another one< just dunno where i'll put it

Faan wrote:

Fixed blankets, also about jumps, huh i don't feel like diff too hard o:

Kazamastar11 wrote:

huum, thanks

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-07-26T02:20:42+00:00

http://vgmdb.net/album/34075
Disc 2 Track 2

Considering the length of this track. I wonder if this would actually be the correct title. "hope" is just the song this is based off of.
http://youtu.be/69QECN4a3nU?t=6m4s
Doesn't really say, but the length of this matches the maps length, and sounds almost the exact same.

Filename: Tubasa(short ver hope) <-- I found this on https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t5WbC-blm5U but I really don't know how accurate it is. I'm assuming you based it off the file name (or the last mapper of this song did). Regardless, if it is the file name, I think it might be best to use the album's title instead.

TSUBASA -Game size-

You should add "dai" to the tags. Add "hope" to the tags as well if you change the title.
"When They Cry" is part of the series name so add this as well to the tags.

Natteke desu

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Natteke desu 2014-07-26T03:51:29+00:00

Lanturn wrote:

http://vgmdb.net/album/34075
Disc 2 Track 2

Considering the length of this track. I wonder if this would actually be the correct title. "hope" is just the song this is based off of.
http://youtu.be/69QECN4a3nU?t=6m4s
Doesn't really say, but the length of this matches the maps length, and sounds almost the exact same.

Filename: Tubasa(short ver hope) <-- I found this on https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t5WbC-blm5U but I really don't know how accurate it is. I'm assuming you based it off the file name (or the last mapper of this song did). Regardless, if it is the file name, I think it might be best to use the album's title instead.

TSUBASA -Game size-

You should add "dai" to the tags. Add "hope" to the tags as well if you change the title.
"When They Cry" is part of the series name so add this as well to the tags.

wow, thank you so much

Damnae

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Damnae 2014-07-26T04:13:46+00:00

no changes for me :>

Breadhunter

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Breadhunter 2014-07-28T09:41:20+00:00

Здравствуйте.
Попробую написать мод, но после ряда плеев, скорее всего буду всякую мелочь писать. Так что все на ваше усмотрение

ryuu's Easy

Надеюсь, меня простят D:
00:18:830 (2) - Переместил на 1 клетку вверх (x:124 y:52), сильно не меняет, но спейсинг выравнивается
00:24:813 (4) - Тут я тоже выровнял бы (x:332 y:180 вместо 179) тогда он будет на одном уровне с 5. Мод от бога
00:43:096 (1) - Рекомендация. Я бы повернул слайдер перпендикулярно линии образованной 2 и 2

Тут этот список заканчивается, мда

Aka's Normal

00:38:109 (2) - Тут тоже совет

начало слайдера сдвинул (x:468 y:164) так изгиб сохраняется (нарисую)

как-то так.
00:54:730 (2,3) - 2 (x:204 y:344) 3 (x:296 y:304) Так вроде 2 лучше следует за 1
И тут все, выше писали что все очень хорошо и с этим трудно спорить.

Damnae's Hard

01:12:348 (3) - Начало слайдера на (x:104 y:168)
Очень очень хорошая дифа

Insane

Тут все сложно, вот к примеру
если сравнивать спейсинг тут 00:32:375 (13,1) - тут 00:23:400 (5,1) - тут 00:48:663 (7,1) -
и тут 00:43:345 (7,1) - то вот тут что-то не так, вот тут 00:46:004 (6,1) - лучше, но все же можно сдвинуть
вот этот 00:46:004 (6,1) - так (x:264 y:12)
Очень понятно объяснил
01:07:278 (5,1) - может центровать?
А тут изгиб усилить как-то так

01:20:575 (9,1) - уже писал выше, просто хуже не будет если сдвинуть на (x:204 y:308)

Краткая аналитика
Мапсет 10 из 10, особенно понравился хард

В общем, удачи с картой и скорейшего ранка ее, надеюсь, мой мод был не самым бесполезным.

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