The whole map looks really messy, mostly because of confusing skin elements (like sliderfollowcircle.png, hit50.png, hit100.png which are almost 100% black), but it's about putting notes too.
[Linkred's Mild]Set the slider tick value to 1. 2 sounds odd.
00:37:887 (2,3) - Spacing. Stack it on vanishing end of the slider or move somewhere else.
00:58:700 (5) - New combo.
[01:22:700] - Start kiai?
01:25:700 (2) - New combo.
01:28:700 (3) - ^
01:31:700 (4) - ^
01:31:700 (1,1) - Spacing.
01:55:700 (2) - New combo.
[Kotomi's Hard]Hitsounds are too loud. Could you decrease the volume by ~30-40%?
00:36:200 (5) - New combo.
[00:57:200] - Add a note.
00:57:575 (7) - Delete clap from first repeat (00:57:950) and from the end (00:58:700) and add a clap to the start (00:57:575) and to the second repeat (00:58:325). Sounds much better.
00:59:075 (8) - Add a clap and new combo.
00:59:450 (2) - Delete clap.
01:09:200 (5) - New combo.
01:40:700 (9) - ^
02:17:450 (9) - ^
02:22:512 (6) - Unrankable hidden slider. Move it somewhere else.
02:22:512 (6,1) - Also spacing.
[03:11:825] - Start kiai again.
[Lunatic]Raise HP Drain a bit (1-2 ticks).
[00:46:325] - Add a note.
01:09:200 (5) - New combo.
01:13:887 (1) - This slider is hidden. Please move the repeat up (read the spoilerbox).
01:26:825 (10) - New combo (because of it's hidden).
01:28:325 (4) - ^
01:42:200 (2) - New combo.
01:49:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hitsounds it the same like 01:46:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10).
[02:04:700] - Add a note.
02:21:575 (1,1,1,1,1) - This slider placement isn't okay. I don't know what to expect about this pattern while playing. Please unstack them and space with Distance Spacing.
02:40:512 (1) - The same problem with hidden hitsound like before. Move the repeat up.
03:03:950 (10) - New combo (because of it's hidden).
03:05:450 (4) - ^
03:19:512 (3) - ^
03:24:950 (1) - Make this slider looks normal. It looks like a note and don't fit this place.
03:27:950 (4) - ^
03:31:512 (1,2,3) - Unrankable. Move (2,3) somewhere else.
[Extra Stage]Awwr. Overmapped.
Hitsounds are too loud. Could you decrease the volume by ~30-40%?
Also I have no idea why is it mapped with soft-hitsounds type.
00:33:012 (15,1) - Spacing. I didn't know it's the continue of the stream or the 1/4 break.
00:34:418 (14,15) - ^
00:37:325 (1,2,1,2) - Samples sound odd. Hitsounds it the same like 00:36:762 (1,2).
00:38:450 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:40:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Please do something with these hitsounds. All of the notes are claps and it's totally out of the rhythm.
01:47:637 (11) - New combo.
01:50:637 (11) - New combo.
02:01:700 (1) - Hidden slider. Move it somewhere else.
02:14:450 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The way how it sounds... It's weird. If you delete the clap from 02:14:450 (1) and make all of the triples sound like this, it will be much better.
02:19:325 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:23:450 (6) - New combo.
02:32:075 (1) - Make this slider straight?
02:52:512 (1) - End this slider at [02:53:825].
[02:54:012] - Add a break.
[02:59:825] - [03:23:450] - I don't like how this part has been copy-pasted.
03:18:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The same problem with hitsounding.
+star