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Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial

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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 05 de mayo de 2010 at 21:23:18

Artist: Demetori
Title: Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial
Source: Touhou
Tags: Linkred2 sakuya Kotomi-chan
BPM: 160
Filesize: 10768kb
Play Time: 03:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extra Stage (5 stars, 691 notes)
  2. Kotomi's Hard (4,25 stars, 239 notes)
  3. Linkred's Mild (1,82 stars, 94 notes)
  4. Lunatic (5 stars, 518 notes)
Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My first map. Play and comment in the forum :)
La mayor parte del skin es de touhou que es de S i R i R u , espero que no alla ningun problema . Tambien darle las gracias a FPRC16 que me ayudo en el tema del skin

Mosr of the skin is of the Touhou one which belongs to S i S i R i. I hope it doesn't cause any problem. Also Ywanna thank FPRC16 who help me on the skin theme (so I can rea it)

Pubbled
Jesss
Star... ya te mando el map con el timing corregido...

Toma como referencia esta diff. a la hora de arreglar las otras diffs ^^

Suerte :3

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Lunatic].osu
Zakiu
realmente me ha gustado mucho el mapa lord ^^ espero que te vaya muy bien con el ;3

starred ^^
vivere
Esta muy bueno para ser tu primer map así que...Te mereces una estrellita ;)
penaxo
me gusto mucho tu beatmap lord espero ke te lo rankeen prke esta muy bueno te mereces la estrella
Neo Adonis
Great beatmap. Too many jumps in Lunatic, but I think you planned it on that way.
[Taiko]_old
hola lord ta weno tu map soy liukang pero esta es la cuenta de mi hermano porque a mia en el foro no la acepta te dare una estrella
Fenya
etto... muy bueno tu map, yo creo que deven aver uno detalles en los que te faltan y para eso deves pedir ayuda, yo no te podria decir todos los detalles, pero lo que te falta es un poco mas de skin.
trata de pedir la ayuda en los foros para mejorar tu map y tambien le puedes pedir ayuda a beu.
y eso xD.
Taira Yoshiyuki
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Kotomi-chan
Buen map, aunque en Lunatic hay muchos jumps xD...
¡Star! ;3

PD. dale créditos a S i R i R u por usar parte de su skin en el de la song xD
Trans_Am
:oops:
Neo Adonis
Recently I noticed you have a break time at the end of the Lunatic diff. That break isn't needed, and it produces the song doesn't end on Taiko. Please, erase it manually on a text editor.
orioncomet
ok, let's me try.. orion's mod go!!

~[General]~
- set BG color to Black is better
- set PreviewTime in all diffs (Menu- Timing--->>Set Current Position as Preview) and make sure that all of difficulty have the same
- delete Creato's name out of tag because it's your map you don't need it ~
- add name of guest's diff on the TAG

~[Linkred's Easy+]~
- add offset like other diffs 3200
00:32:250 (4,5,6) - spacing
01:04:687 (2) - ^
01:06:187 (5) - ^
02:08:062 (6,7) - ^

~[Hard]~
- I think this diff is Insane >_<
- Silder Velocity faster then [Lunatic]
00:32:825 (5) - spacing
00:33:200 (6) - ^
01:22:700 - 01:46:700 this part KIAI time too long shorten it at 01:34:887 maybe
01:36:950 (7) - end this silder at 01:37:325 is better more on blue trick, IMO
01:37:512 (8,9,10) - spacing
01:44:450 Insert break time
02:04:325 (14) - insert 1 stack
03:14:075 (7) - end this silder at 03:14:450 is better more on blue trick, IMO
03:21:012 (1) - try sound finish

~[Lunatic]~
like [Hard] 01:22:700 - 01:46:700 this part KIAI time too long shorten it at 01:34:887 maybe
end KIAI time at 03:21:200
LOL i don't know how will i mod this diff but [Lunatic] jump's part so funny

star then :P goodluck~
Kytoxid
[General]

Remove "Lunar Clock Luna Dial demetori" from tags.
Uh oh, you seem to have deleted 2 of the background images. When the "xxx.jpg and xxx.jpg files are unused, remove?" dialogue pops up, click No. They're actually the background for the 2 other difficulties.
Comboburst is too wide, max is 500px width.
Unused files:
- ranking-back.png
- ranking-replay.png
- ranking-retry.png
- .osb file
Lots of little white patches near the edges for skin elements, clean those up?
Don't really like the spinner, since it doesn't give much of a sense of where the center actually is, and how fast it's spinning. As well, the background seems vertically squished.

Jumping from 2 stars to 5 is a bit harsh, consider a middle Normal?

[Linkred's Easy+]

Eh, Easy+ is weird. Is it Easy or Normal?
Unrankably low stack leniency.
This map has countdown different from the other diffs.

01:22:700 (1,2,3) - Awkward sounding repeats...

[Hard]

More like an Insane.

00:42:200 (1,2,3) - Watch spacing; 1-2 and 2-3 are equally spaced, but time-wise, are different.
00:53:075 (1) - Spacing in this section is messed.
01:24:387 (1,1,1) - Don't need so many new combos. I'm also concerned with how the slider heads fall on the off-beats (Red ticks) instead of the white ones, which plays much nicer.
01:27:387 (1,1,1) - ^
01:35:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Very random pattern. (also finishes hurt the ears, including the parts after this)
02:04:700 - This break doesn't make much sense.
02:21:575 (1,1,1,1,1) - Random and unexpected, repeats are concealed by the hitbursts.
02:25:325 - End kiai before the break?

Same comments as before for the last section of the map.

[Insane]

Max score is quite high.

00:25:325 (4) - Totally out of nowhere.
00:36:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^, and spacing between sliders is inconsistent.
00:48:950 (1,2,3) - Bleh, antijump.
01:00:387 - Remove this break; too short.
01:09:575 - Weird place to start a break, map a bit more.
01:22:700 - Spacing here is ridiculous, make it more reasonable.
01:35:825 (1,2) - Weird timing.
01:37:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Weird pattern.
01:42:199 (15,1) - Spacing is way too big already, why this jump mid-stream?
01:46:700 - Stream is way too long, not fun.
01:52:887 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing.

Not going to keep modding this, mostly just the spacing is way too crazy and it feels like a really long stream with a few breaks. I recommend you scrap this difficulty, make Hard your Insane, and map a proper Normal/Hard.

Good luck!
[DBF]
Its really cool~ take it, star~

irc mod, lol.
DJPop
I don't know a blank spinner circle is rankable or not...


~Linkred's Easy+~
02:04:418 (4) - move 1/4 left

~Lunatic~
SliderTickRate:1
00:29:262 (1) - remove new combo
00:30:762 (1) - ^
00:53:450 (1) - ^
00:53:825 (1) - ^
00:58:325 (3) - new combo
01:12:200 (4) - ^
01:13:887 (10) - ^
01:35:825 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move up 1 grid & left 2 grids (Lv3)
01:39:387 (7) - new combo
01:42:387 (1) - remove new combo
01:48:575 (11) - new combo
01:51:575 (6) - ^
01:54:575 (11) - ^
01:57:575 (11) - ^
02:00:575 (6) - ^
02:03:575 (6) - ^
02:17:450 (4) - ^
02:23:450 (2) - ^
02:33:387 (1) - remove new combo
02:34:887 (1) - ^
02:38:825 (4) - new combo
02:40:512 (13) - ^
03:12:950 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - move down 1 grid & right 2 grids (Lv3)
03:16:512 (7) - new combo
03:19:512 (1) - remove new combo

~Extra Stage~
00:16:700 (5) - new combo
00:22:700 (5) - ^
02:17:450 (4) - ^
02:19:043 (1) - remove new combo
03:23:825 - end the map here


+Star
Linkred
Edit: Added sounds and changed the diff to a less-weird name.

Alright bg image was submitted.

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Linkred's Mild].osu
Astom
En general no le veo nada "malo" al map excepto que es muy dificil xDD me gusto la cancion y esos blanco,azul y rojo sugestivos xDDDD

El unico detalle sep es que en extra stage son muy rapidos los sliders.

Mi estrellita man y suerte.
Kotomi-chan
La dif que me pediste, y el bg que me gustaría que le pusieras <3
Si le falta algo, dime por PM in-game

Download: Demetori - Lunar Clock ~ Luna Dial (lordfoster) [Normal].osu

Linkred

Kotomi-chan wrote:

La dif que me pediste, y el bg que me gustaría que le pusieras <3
Si le falta algo, dime por PM in-game


Te quedo bacano, man.
sesito71
Wow, que bueno el mapa!! :O

[Linkred's Mild]

01:37:512 (5,6) - Spacing
01:39:012 (8) - ^

[Kotomi's Hard]

00:35:825 (4,5) - Puedes alinear esto con la nota anterior?
01:52:793 (1) - Yo empezaría el spinner en el tick blanco (01:52:700), pero acábalo en el mismo sitio ee xD
01:55:700 (1) - Acaba el spinner en el tick blanco (01:58:721)
02:35:825 (1) - Alinea esto con la nota anterior (?)
Veamos, hay un pequeño lío con unas notas, colócalas dónde te digo ok? (usa 1/6) ^^
02:52:575 (1), 02:52:825 (2), 02:53:075 (3), 02:53:325, 02:53:575 (5), 02:53:825 (6)
02:56:825 (8) - New combo
03:14:825 (6) - ^

[Lunatic]

AWESOME!

[Extra Stage]

Resnap all notes!


Bueno, y eso es todo creo, te doy una estrella! :)
fartownik
The whole map looks really messy, mostly because of confusing skin elements (like sliderfollowcircle.png, hit50.png, hit100.png which are almost 100% black), but it's about putting notes too.


[Linkred's Mild]

Set the slider tick value to 1. 2 sounds odd.

00:37:887 (2,3) - Spacing. Stack it on vanishing end of the slider or move somewhere else.
00:58:700 (5) - New combo.
[01:22:700] - Start kiai?
01:25:700 (2) - New combo.
01:28:700 (3) - ^
01:31:700 (4) - ^
01:31:700 (1,1) - Spacing.
01:55:700 (2) - New combo.


[Kotomi's Hard]

Hitsounds are too loud. Could you decrease the volume by ~30-40%?

00:36:200 (5) - New combo.
[00:57:200] - Add a note.
00:57:575 (7) - Delete clap from first repeat (00:57:950) and from the end (00:58:700) and add a clap to the start (00:57:575) and to the second repeat (00:58:325). Sounds much better.
00:59:075 (8) - Add a clap and new combo.
00:59:450 (2) - Delete clap.
01:09:200 (5) - New combo.
01:40:700 (9) - ^
02:17:450 (9) - ^
02:22:512 (6) - Unrankable hidden slider. Move it somewhere else.
02:22:512 (6,1) - Also spacing.
[03:11:825] - Start kiai again.


[Lunatic]

Raise HP Drain a bit (1-2 ticks).

[00:46:325] - Add a note.
01:09:200 (5) - New combo.
01:13:887 (1) - This slider is hidden. Please move the repeat up (read the spoilerbox).
01:26:825 (10) - New combo (because of it's hidden).
01:28:325 (4) - ^
01:42:200 (2) - New combo.
01:49:700 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hitsounds it the same like 01:46:700 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10).
[02:04:700] - Add a note.
02:21:575 (1,1,1,1,1) - This slider placement isn't okay. I don't know what to expect about this pattern while playing. Please unstack them and space with Distance Spacing.
02:40:512 (1) - The same problem with hidden hitsound like before. Move the repeat up.
03:03:950 (10) - New combo (because of it's hidden).
03:05:450 (4) - ^
03:19:512 (3) - ^
03:24:950 (1) - Make this slider looks normal. It looks like a note and don't fit this place.
03:27:950 (4) - ^
03:31:512 (1,2,3) - Unrankable. Move (2,3) somewhere else.


[Extra Stage]

Awwr. Overmapped.
Hitsounds are too loud. Could you decrease the volume by ~30-40%?
Also I have no idea why is it mapped with soft-hitsounds type.

00:33:012 (15,1) - Spacing. I didn't know it's the continue of the stream or the 1/4 break.
00:34:418 (14,15) - ^
00:37:325 (1,2,1,2) - Samples sound odd. Hitsounds it the same like 00:36:762 (1,2).
00:38:450 (1,2) - Spacing.
01:40:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - Please do something with these hitsounds. All of the notes are claps and it's totally out of the rhythm.
01:47:637 (11) - New combo.
01:50:637 (11) - New combo.
02:01:700 (1) - Hidden slider. Move it somewhere else.
02:14:450 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - The way how it sounds... It's weird. If you delete the clap from 02:14:450 (1) and make all of the triples sound like this, it will be much better.
02:19:325 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
02:23:450 (6) - New combo.
02:32:075 (1) - Make this slider straight?
02:52:512 (1) - End this slider at [02:53:825].
[02:54:012] - Add a break.
[02:59:825] - [03:23:450] - I don't like how this part has been copy-pasted.
03:18:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The same problem with hitsounding.

+star
Kujo
Star mah niggah (am i allowed to say that? D: )
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