1. Extra Stage (5,5 stars, 2150 notes)

Wheew wrote:

Dowloaded it just to check it out since Demetori is fun.

http://puu.sh/bDacE/6ea77b1024.png
Unsnapped slider-end 03:15:643 (4) oopsie, fixed lol

The amount of stamina needed to play this is no joke indeed, huehuehue
Maybe a break from: 03:52:691 - 03:58:234 nope nope nope

Since its still a wip I won't say anything more than this since you will prob be changing some stuff up anyways.

Good luck with the map

Mazzerin wrote:

nice map
the slider at 03:15:643 (4) - still seems to be unsnapped even though it got updated? huh weird... should be fixed now
i'd actually recommend lowering the hitsounds by a few % during the solo (that part from 02:44), i couldn't hear the guitar for shit Mhhh, I did want the hitsounds to be loud, but I can still hear the guitar just fine.. I will definitely lower the volume if more people point it out though
00:52:240 (3,4) - how about sliders instead of these 2 notes to follow the guitar riff? it also repeats later at 00:58:023 (3,4) - 01:09:589 (1,2) - etc Would probably make sense too, but I like circles more c:

Okoratu wrote:

isn't the full title of the song
リジッドパラダイス ～ Dawn of the Dead
which is romanized as
Rigid Paradise ~ Dawn of the Dead

??

Wheew wrote:

Not really a mod, no kd already got some from my other comment.
04:44:649 http://puu.sh/bRJF4/8f184db8d7.png <- probably unintentional since its just a split second, this also makes the error for less than 15 seconds of kiai show up in AiMod.
Your map filesize is also over 10MB, not sure if thats a problem tho.

Wheew wrote:

Really wondering what you are going to do with the end since there are about 40 bookmarks there

GoldenWolf wrote:

nop

1. Wow wtf you are such a noob your bg isn't even 1024x768 wow wtf.

1. Unsnapped objects. Check aimod. kdspls
2. I'm not sure how to explain this or why, but for some reason the triples fits the song, but at the same time don't fit all the places you put them for me. I dunno why though so this is basically a completely useless point. I'm probably just being silly, so don't mind this.
   
   
   
   
3. 00:06:809 (1,2,3) - Man these are kinda awkward. I dunno, but they should be easier to read correctly if you space them out a bit more, as players will be more ready for this to be 3/2 and 2/1.
4. 00:22:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Space these so that the spacing increases gradually? Would make it easier to catch the first 1/4 jump as well, and fits the way the song gets higher in pitch. Also, I don't think you need those NCs.
5. 00:45:735 (1,2,3,4) - I like the SV increase, but I think 1.5x is a bit too excessive for the last slider. Makes it look kinda long and stuff. Consider incrementing these by lower values.
6. 00:47:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Personal preference, but I think it looks better to have NCs when you change spacing midstream.
7. 01:07:421 (6,9) - The pattern looks nice, but the distance feels too low
8. 01:11:577 (4,5) - Due to the complexity of the repeatslider + 1/4 slider before, it would probably be best if you didn't also have this 1/4 jump imo. If anything, at least follow the curve of (4) into the stream.
9. 01:45:553 (6,1,2,3) - Maybe unstack the (6,1) a bit more, so it's easier to see the (1) note and time this part correctly.
10. 02:05:704 (5) - Rip offscreen slider
11. 02:16:728 (2,3) - A bit too close compared to the other notes in this section.
12. 02:21:065 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this stream looks out of place, as they barely overlap at all while the other streams all overlap more than this.
13. 02:27:391 (7) - Is that drumwhistle intentional?
14. 02:50:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You should split this up into 4notes+1/4slider as well, as it fits the higher pitch of the guitar imo.
15. 03:10:583 (8) - This is close to (7) and feels lame after the jumps
16. 03:14:740 (7) - Same as above Maybe ctrl+g and moving these a bit further apart?
17. 03:32:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as the other stream, splitting this up works better imo, so the pattern is different when the guitar is higher in pitch. + It feels faster, which works well with the high pitch as well imo.
18. 03:51:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I guess you went straight then curved to follow the way the pitch changes and whatnot, but it looks reaaaaaaaally weird to me. The angle between 03:52:209 (3,4) - isn't sharp enough to quite distinguish them imo. Personally I'd prefer to just make this a circular 1/3 stream, but if anything, try to make the two parts more distinct from each other?
19. 04:01:637 - Where is muh triple.
20. 05:02:270 - I dunno. The 1/4 sliderjumps and constant 1/4 feels a bit excessive to me. You kinda just bumped up the intensity of the map without the song actually getting more intense.
21. 05:20:973 (15) - That's baaarely not outside the playfield. Consider just moving this stream up a bit.

CXu wrote:

[General]

1. Wow wtf you are such a noob your bg isn't even 1024x768 wow wtf. 1023*767 is good enough ok

[Extra Stage]

1. Unsnapped objects. Check aimod. kdspls
2. I'm not sure how to explain this or why, but for some reason the triples fits the song, but at the same time don't fit all the places you put them for me. I dunno why though so this is basically a completely useless point. I'm probably just being silly, so don't mind this. The roles of triples here are mostly to keep the difficulty curve more or less consistent through the map. I like them a lot, and think they fit the intensity of the song (And very few of them are overmapped, mainly during the choruses where the drum pattern is a bit too light during the first 4 measures).
   
   
   
   
3. 00:06:809 (1,2,3) - Man these are kinda awkward. I dunno, but they should be easier to read correctly if you space them out a bit more, as players will be more ready for this to be 3/2 and 2/1. Mh okay, spaced them apart a bit more
4. 00:22:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Space these so that the spacing increases gradually? Would make it easier to catch the first 1/4 jump as well, and fits the way the song gets higher in pitch. Also, I don't think you need those NCs. Okay, altough I'll keep the NCs to be consistent with this part 00:16:819 (1) - there
5. 00:45:735 (1,2,3,4) - I like the SV increase, but I think 1.5x is a bit too excessive for the last slider. Makes it look kinda long and stuff. Consider incrementing these by lower values. I think it's totally okay, I want it to be long and fast :^)
6. 00:47:903 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Personal preference, but I think it looks better to have NCs when you change spacing midstream. Okay, added a bunch of NCs
7. 01:07:421 (6,9) - The pattern looks nice, but the distance feels too low It's a little bit too close I'd agree, I blame myself mapping into corners at the time :c However I don't think it's really an issue, it's just a bit less visually appealing, but I'm fine with that. dun wanna remake whole pattern for visual appeal
8. 01:11:577 (4,5) - Due to the complexity of the repeatslider + 1/4 slider before, it would probably be best if you didn't also have this 1/4 jump imo. If anything, at least follow the curve of (4) into the stream. I think I get what you mean, but I decided to change the stream but slapping some sliders there anyway.
9. 01:45:553 (6,1,2,3) - Maybe unstack the (6,1) a bit more, so it's easier to see the (1) note and time this part correctly. k
10. 02:05:704 (5) - Rip offscreen slider Omggg nooo ajsaaj moved stuff around :c
11. 02:16:728 (2,3) - A bit too close compared to the other notes in this section. Changed this into a jump
12. 02:21:065 (2,3,4,5) - Spacing on this stream looks out of place, as they barely overlap at all while the other streams all overlap more than this. I'm not sure why I have two 5-stream before this one though... changed the pattern into a bunch of triples, it also makes this stream not-so-awkward so yay
13. 02:27:391 (7) - Is that drumwhistle intentional? Huhh it was supposed to be a DC:4 instead of default, but all things considered.. I like it more as a default hitwhistle so keeping it as it is lol. TL;DR - yes
14. 02:50:523 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - You should split this up into 4notes+1/4slider as well, as it fits the higher pitch of the guitar imo. Correct
15. 03:10:583 (8) - This is close to (7) and feels lame after the jumps B-but muh stacking OCD...
16. 03:14:740 (7) - Same as above Maybe ctrl+g and moving these a bit further apart? Ohhh I like this idea, changed it
17. 03:32:450 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as the other stream, splitting this up works better imo, so the pattern is different when the guitar is higher in pitch. + It feels faster, which works well with the high pitch as well imo. I'd agree with this, but I kind of like this being a long stream more, also the stream shape/the way it goes back on itself soemwhat, I like this more than slapping a slider in the middle.
18. 03:51:968 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I guess you went straight then curved to follow the way the pitch changes and whatnot, but it looks reaaaaaaaally weird to me. The angle between 03:52:209 (3,4) - isn't sharp enough to quite distinguish them imo. Personally I'd prefer to just make this a circular 1/3 stream, but if anything, try to make the two parts more distinct from each other? Changed it into a circular pattern, I was mostly just trying to come up with some original shape but it didn't really work out eh
19. 04:01:637 - Where is muh triple. Muh diamond is cooler tho
20. 05:02:270 - I dunno. The 1/4 sliderjumps and constant 1/4 feels a bit excessive to me. You kinda just bumped up the intensity of the map without the song actually getting more intense. I wanted this to be El Grande Finale, but I guess it doesn't work Changed stuff
21. 05:20:973 (15) - That's baaarely not outside the playfield. Consider just moving this stream up a bit. Ok but just a tiiiiny bit.

- DT - wrote:

Shortest mod ever because I'm bad.

00:22:421 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - you could gradually increase the SV for these sliders. Using 1,00x, 1,05x, 1,10x would be more consistent with the rest of the map, as it matches the spacing of the triples on the first slider and the spacing of 00:23:686 (3,4,5,6) - on the last, but using 0,90x, 1,00x, 1,10x would actually be noticeable. I guess I could do something like that

00:16:819 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - match the change of spacing of 00:47:903 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
i.e., make 00:17:180 (1,2,3,4) - more spaced or 00:16:819 (1,2,3,4) - and 00:17:542 (1,2,3,4) - less spaced.
00:28:385 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ could do the same thing with these sliders. I don't feel like there is a need to do that for these as the pitch is not significantly higher or going higher, it stays at a low pitch on both parts there (hence why the generally low spacing on the stream, and the sliders staying on the lower half of the screen)

03:10:221 (6,7) - muh symmetry is nice, but that's some huge jump, way bigger than 03:16:547 (1,2,3,4,5) - which are supposed to be the most intense jumps of the section. muh symmetry is above all else, but I guess I could try reducing the distance a little bit

03:20:161 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 1xmiss simulator 2015, now with 100% less simulation. Yes, I'm salty. ,_, Want some fries with your salt?

04:15:101 (19) - NC plz. Yes ma'am

04:55:041 (2) - point this slider more to the right so people don't accidentally click on the sliderend rather than on the next circle like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3047797 You meant left, right?

05:30:823 (13,14,15,16,17,18) -
05:33:353 (13,14,15,16,17,18) -
05:40:944 (13,14,15,16,17,18) -
Unless there is some deeper reason for them, I don't really like how these sliders flow into the next stream. You could move each stream "down" a bit relative to the slider like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3047955 and it would flow much better IMO. You wouldn't even need to adjust the rest of the streams that much. The deepest reason in the world is that I like this angle more.. I would like to keep it, but if more people point this out I'll change it though.

2015-04-24 13:24 GoldenWolf: I'm watching you.
2015-04-24 13:24 Harrharrqi: i just finished
2015-04-24 13:24 Harrharrqi: :^)
2015-04-24 13:24 Harrharrqi: it was an embarrassing play too
2015-04-24 13:25 GoldenWolf: damn
2015-04-24 13:25 GoldenWolf: and I missed that
2015-04-24 13:25 Harrharrqi: ;w;
2015-04-24 13:25 Harrharrqi: anyways
2015-04-24 13:25 Harrharrqi: i got confused here 00:06:809 (1,2,3) - 
2015-04-24 13:25 Harrharrqi: theres nothing you're really following on
2015-04-24 13:25 Harrharrqi: and it feels awkward to play imo
2015-04-24 13:26 GoldenWolf: yes ther eis
2015-04-24 13:26 GoldenWolf: there is*
2015-04-24 13:26 GoldenWolf: listen the drums
2015-04-24 13:27 Harrharrqi: it still felt really awkward
2015-04-24 13:28 Harrharrqi: everytime i played that part though
2015-04-24 13:29 GoldenWolf: mh
2015-04-24 13:29 GoldenWolf: not sure what to do there then
2015-04-24 13:29 GoldenWolf: feels so empty if I leave this out
2015-04-24 13:29 Harrharrqi: maybe follow the guitar
2015-04-24 13:29 GoldenWolf: and I can't really map the guitar there if I ignored it previously
2015-04-24 13:29 Harrharrqi: dunno if it'll make it better or worse though
2015-04-24 13:29 GoldenWolf: doesn't make sense
2015-04-24 13:29 GoldenWolf: probably worse
2015-04-24 13:29 Harrharrqi: i guess leave it
2015-04-24 13:29 Harrharrqi: but you should probably change it if someone else bring it up though
2015-04-24 13:30 Harrharrqi: also
2015-04-24 13:30 Harrharrqi: 00:46:277 (2,3,4) - 
2015-04-24 13:30 Harrharrqi: i thought nc was needed for sv changes
2015-04-24 13:30 Harrharrqi: nothing wrong it played out well
2015-04-24 13:30 GoldenWolf: I have no problem changing, but I need an actual replacement for that that isn't the two options I just mentionned
2015-04-24 13:31 GoldenWolf: would be quite the nc spam
2015-04-24 13:31 GoldenWolf: I don't wanna risk breaking hp drain
2015-04-24 13:31 GoldenWolf: especially since it's at 8
2015-04-24 13:31 GoldenWolf: also no need for nc there
2015-04-24 13:31 GoldenWolf: it plays totally fine without
2015-04-24 13:31 GoldenWolf: would be just useless imo
2015-04-24 13:31 Harrharrqi: yea just something i thought bats might be upset at
2015-04-24 13:32 GoldenWolf: what's a BAT
2015-04-24 13:32 GoldenWolf: :^)
2015-04-24 13:32 Harrharrqi: (^:
2015-04-24 13:32 Harrharrqi: 01:08:867 (12) - here you have same combo color
2015-04-24 13:32 Harrharrqi: but earlier at
2015-04-24 13:33 Harrharrqi: 00:57:300 (1) - you changed it
2015-04-24 13:33 GoldenWolf: oh I just changed it and forgot to do it twice
2015-04-24 13:33 Harrharrqi: oh ok
2015-04-24 13:34 GoldenWolf: fixed lol
2015-04-24 13:36 Harrharrqi: cutting it close here lol 02:07:511 (2) - 
2015-04-24 13:36 Harrharrqi: but it doesnt go off screen so i guess its ok
2015-04-24 13:39 GoldenWolf: yeah I already moved it up
2015-04-24 13:39 Harrharrqi: 02:54:860 (17) - i cant hear the 1/8
2015-04-24 13:40 GoldenWolf: turn volume up
2015-04-24 13:40 GoldenWolf: first two hits aren't super neat
2015-04-24 13:40 GoldenWolf: but it's definitely there
2015-04-24 13:41 GoldenWolf: also when listening at normal speed you can tell there is something fast going on there
2015-04-24 13:41 GoldenWolf: and it's definitely not a 1/6
2015-04-24 13:41 Harrharrqi: yea i can kinda hear it
2015-04-24 13:41 Harrharrqi: ok thats fine then
2015-04-24 13:43 Harrharrqi: i like that mini slider part
2015-04-24 13:43 Harrharrqi: its cool
2015-04-24 13:43 GoldenWolf: mini slider?
2015-04-24 13:43 Harrharrqi: after the streams
2015-04-24 13:43 GoldenWolf: o
2015-04-24 13:43 Harrharrqi: it looks real pretty lol
2015-04-24 13:44 Harrharrqi: 03:20:161 (1) - didnt know it was 1/6 until i saw it just now
2015-04-24 13:44 GoldenWolf: rlyyy
2015-04-24 13:44 Harrharrqi: i think i'm just bad
2015-04-24 13:44 Harrharrqi: ignore that
2015-04-24 13:44 GoldenWolf: how did you not feel
2015-04-24 13:44 GoldenWolf: LOL
2015-04-24 13:45 Harrharrqi: dunno
2015-04-24 13:47 Harrharrqi: 04:50:884 - it felt awkward to have a space here
2015-04-24 13:48 Harrharrqi: maybe make 04:50:703 (2) - into a slider? up to you
2015-04-24 13:48 GoldenWolf: sliders ewwwww
2015-04-24 13:48 Harrharrqi: the gap just felt out of place though lol
2015-04-24 13:48 GoldenWolf: idk I wanted a "stop" feel there, 1/1 break of some sort
2015-04-24 13:49 Harrharrqi: it worked earlier on the in the song
2015-04-24 13:49 Harrharrqi: b/c you repeated it over a period of time
2015-04-24 13:49 Harrharrqi: but this one was kinda thrown in there
2015-04-24 13:50 GoldenWolf: I guess I can make into a triple then
2015-04-24 13:51 Harrharrqi: hmm nothing else really
2015-04-24 13:51 Harrharrqi: just went through the entire song
2015-04-24 13:52 Harrharrqi: is the mod satisfactory to you ;w;
2015-04-24 13:52 GoldenWolf: aight
2015-04-24 13:52 GoldenWolf: yes ma'am

1. a few minor pattern things, and one spacing was somehow screwed up lol. The most noticable change remains 03:07:872 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - though
2. SB now eats no load in the black parts and the black image has been removed, idk i think we need to start from #1 due to that

1. cutting out the first 8ms of drum-hitwhistle4.wav proved it to not sound any different to me, so i concluded it's actual impact is delayed