1. The background image is 1228x767 (the reccomended size is 1366x768.) Plus, at the bottom of it, there is >this thing :/<
   You can:
   1. Take >THIS< version and go ahead with it
   2. Search for another background image
   3. Ask a pro photoshopper to remove that alice's emotion thing, then make it to the reccomended size.

1. 00:07:319 (2,3,4) - While the rythm is still undefined, i think something like >THIS< would work better
2. 00:11:964 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - uhm, i don't really know if this is a good idea, you could change to a simple repeat slider or leave it as it is, your choice.
3. 00:30:351 (4,5) - this quick rythm change doesn't benefits from either the previous ones (00:25:513 (3,4,5) - , 00:27:061 (3,4,5) - , 00:28:610 (3,4,5) - ) and the next ones ( 00:31:900 (4,5) - , 00:33:448 (4,5) - ), cause it has the same spacing of the next ones. This could be a problem.
4. 01:29:190 (4,5,6,7) - This could be easily misunderstood with a 1/4 (even if the song bpm is slow enough to allow it :>) A 1/6 slider with one repeat could do the same job pretty well (LIKE THIS)
5. 01:29:964 (7,8,9,1) - pretty much what i said above.^
6. 01:35:190 (3,4) - eww i never liked that kind of pattern :/. You can do something better, like for example, >this<
7. 01:50:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i find this a bit confusing in some ways, probabily because 01:50:674 (2,3) - and 01:50:287 (1) - are on the same zone while the rythm changes
8. 02:33:255 (6,7) - i don't see the why these two are stacked.
9. 04:04:997 - uh, no beat here?
10. 04:49:126 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - In this case, facing this while playing the beatmap on first time will make a good percentage of the players break.
11. 06:27:835 (7,8,9,1) - 1/3 with no warnings while the previous 1/3s were sliders isn't that good. You can new combo them or make them sliders, your choice.
12. 06:44:287 (3,4,5,6,7) - never seen anything like this for the whole map, not a big problem though
13. 06:59:868 (3,4,5) - i hate this ok

ThEBonzi wrote:

Hey :] Hey mate XD

[General]

1. The background image is 1228x767 (the reccomended size is 1366x768.) Plus, at the bottom of it, there is >this thing :/<
   You can:
   1. Take >THIS< version and go ahead with it Went with this one o/
   2. Search for another background image
   3. Ask a pro photoshopper to remove that alice's emotion thing, then make it to the reccomended size.

nazi incoming
[Ascension]

1. 00:07:319 (2,3,4) - While the rythm is still undefined, i think something like >THIS< would work better Did not really get what you mean here, added a slider of my own accord here /o/
2. 00:11:964 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - uhm, i don't really know if this is a good idea, you could change to a simple repeat slider or leave it as it is, your choice. I definitely want this 1/6 here.
3. 00:30:351 (4,5) - this quick rythm change doesn't benefits from either the previous ones (00:25:513 (3,4,5) - , 00:27:061 (3,4,5) - , 00:28:610 (3,4,5) - ) and the next ones ( 00:31:900 (4,5) - , 00:33:448 (4,5) - ), cause it has the same spacing of the next ones. This could be a problem. True, nerfed the spacing! o/
4. 01:29:190 (4,5,6,7) - This could be easily misunderstood with a 1/4 (even if the song bpm is slow enough to allow it :>) A 1/6 slider with one repeat could do the same job pretty well (LIKE THIS) Lowered the spacing I think a slider would be too short and we'd have easy breaks here.
5. 01:29:964 (7,8,9,1) - pretty much what i said above.^ The spacing is fine here it indicates the 1/6 well enough imo.
6. 01:35:190 (3,4) - eww i never liked that kind of pattern :/. You can do something better, like for example, >this< That looks better, changed like that without the red point :3
7. 01:50:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i find this a bit confusing in some ways, probabily because 01:50:674 (2,3) - and 01:50:287 (1) - are on the same zone while the rythm changes I like muh gimmicks here u.u Seriously though, I might consider a change if other mods mention this as well! o/
8. 02:33:255 (6,7) - i don't see the why these two are stacked. Uh, me neither actually lol
9. 04:04:997 - uh, no beat here? Added reverse on the previous slider, I didn't hear anything previously but there seems to be something there after all
10. 04:49:126 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - In this case, facing this while playing the beatmap on first time will make a good percentage of the players break. That's okay let them break if they can't read this as 1/6 then they deserve to break. Maps are not first try FC you know, especially marathons like this.
11. 06:27:835 (7,8,9,1) - 1/3 with no warnings while the previous 1/3s were sliders isn't that good. You can new combo them or make them sliders, your choice. Added NC there, rip colourhax
12. 06:44:287 (3,4,5,6,7) - never seen anything like this for the whole map, not a big problem though Actually it is a big problem because people will confuse it with 1/6. Spacing this out thanks for mentioning! O7
13. 06:59:868 (3,4,5) - i hate this ok :3 spaced out :3

<3 ♥

Akali wrote:

papamodulos ROFL

00:09:642 (1) - just... make it same distance, it's annoying to play Okay
POST EDIT 00:11:964 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I don't reckon having a 1/6 burst so long anywhere later in the map, + it makes double time hell, slider maybe There is some 1/6 with the exact same length and they are circles. I don't really care about DT anyway so this stays.
00:27:351 (4) - too curved, make same curve as previous slider (and probably rotate) slows down flow for no reason and is inconsistent design-wise Yep!
00:34:803 (3,4,5) - ye, less curve Mhmm
00:36:545 (4) - don't see a reason in music to make a stop/stack here, + it might be annoying on dt Did cute jump before the stack, still don't care about DT <:
00:52:997 (1,2) - 1/1 sliders like that play really boring if they are so close, like 00:54:545 (1,2) - this is way better but if you don't want to rearrange it's ok (just a suggestion) I like that, changed!
01:05:771 (2,3) - again shrimp slider, i get the nice overlap/design idea but they suck, really Yeah I thought it was a cool idea when I sucked at mapping
01:08:674 (2) - might be hard to read, stuff like that might work on impactful part but here it looks like you just got cornered and decided for overlap, would avoid that Nah should be fine! If anyone else suggests it I might change it though.
01:29:771 (8) - just few notes after introducing first 1/6s, (still plays like poop) it's hard to read and time properly, don't overlap Okay
01:42:351 (1) - rotate cc and move it lower to remove the stack, guitar changes pitch, small jump would make better impact Alright!
01:46:029 (3,4) - ewww, is it 2009 and we just discovered that sliders don't have to be horizontal or vertical? think of something better Indeed this looks fugly lol
01:50:287 (1,2,3) - NOPE sliders are overlapping in the same fashion and they have different timings, remake I love this gimmick :'(
01:54:932 (1,2) - finally some space between sliders, I wish you did it more I wish it FIT somewhere LOL
02:05:577 (5,1) - weird flow, it's neither smooth nor cut properly, 02:05:771 (1) - 155;193 and 02:06:158 (2) - 207:26 ? Opted to blanket 2 to 1 but fixed all the same!
02:09:448 (3,4,5) - making a large triangle would be more interesting, there is a shitload of 1/1 etc stacks on that map (just a suggestion) These stacks shall never change!
02:12:545 (3,4,5) - ^, etc think about these
02:14:287 (3,4,5,1) - clean guitar is audible enough to not make a 1/1 pause in here Is that even a guitar lol. Changed
02:17:771 (10) - 449;249 Yes
02:38:868 (3,4,5) - weird ds-ing, would make it consistent Weird, thought it was fine, changed!
02:42:545 (7) - cuuurve, it could easily blanket around 02:41:384 (1) - end I was targeting a blanket but I guess I fucked up. Fixed!
02:52:222 (1) - rotate cc 5 degrees Kay~
02:59:964 (1) - make two 1/2 sliders or circles, clean guitar accents stand out here Yes yes nice!! Removed the reverse added a circle instead of 1/2 slider!
03:00:932 (5,6,7) - this could be return slider on the other hand (lead guitar bend) Nah circles is fine~
03:04:610 (1) - ^ Did some cool stuff here actually!
03:22:674 (4,5,6) - actually you could nc EVERY 1/6 on the map (so it's only (1)'s, it makes it more visible that something is changing) There shall be no further NCing here! Muh colourhax >.>
03:24:545 (1) - you can put this on 218;2 somewhere np, would be better than making weird wavy flow with next slider again Indeed!
03:25:513 (4,5) - pls Hehehehe
03:35:577 (1,2,3) - meh again, something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2373343 maybe Yes
03:36:351 (4,5) - if you decided to rearrange previous slider, you know what to do yep
03:37:126 (1) - rotate cc so flow/slider path is in line with 03:37:706 (2) - Did something WAY cooler actually!
03:42:158 (2,3) - hi Remapped almost everything there
03:47:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I just don't like this, idk what would I do though I like that >.<
03:55:900 (2) - something like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2373366 Yes
03:58:997 (2) - rotate cc -45 and put somewhere in the area of 409;266 Yes
04:00:739 (1) - making this super short slider or return slider would be cute Nah impact is enough
04:04:222 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6) - this whole thing is terrible (it's like old 0108 streams), space return sliders out and start next stream somewhere else Yes!
04:10:222 (2,1,2,3,4) - stream path doesn't flow with jump from the 04:10:222 (2) - Did something
04:17:255 (2,3,1) - smooth this out Smooth = outed
04:18:545 (4) - rotate cw so it has same angle as 04:18:158 (3) - Made this a reverse 1/4 actually!
04:23:577 (1,2) - most intense shred in the solo you make player stop, no clue how to remake though, maybe 4 sliders instead of 2? Did four sliders, although I might make this a 1/6 stream or half stream or something.
04:37:513 (1) - isn't this too much offgrid? it's probably ok but don't like it anyway Nah it's fine
04:41:577 (1,2) - random grey combo The 1/4 slider was actually a 1/2 of the same length but I decided it was stupid and remapped it like that, probably have to redo combohax from then
04:49:513 (10,11) - you can make this 1/2 slider, reading and hitting this 1/6s will be hard enough for mediocre no-mod players and makes double time terror and probably valley of combo break unhappiness on dt right here I give no fucks about DT, made 11 a 1/2 slider though because coolness.
04:50:093 (1,2,3,4,5) - you used similar "stacks" before but afaik it's the first time they have rhythm like that, some kaguya (tm) triangles maybe? Nah, beats are exactly the same and I like the stacks there.
04:51:255 (5,1) - ye and it changes to 1/2 here with same spacing, hard to read Meh!
04:54:158 (4,1,2,3) - rip readability again, 1/6 bonkers slider into 1/2 stack Did something cool!
04:58:029 (2,3) - it's ok compared to the rest of straight sliders like that, just ugly overlap, try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2373402 This was too spaced out anyway dunno why it was, reduced spacing a lot and did that overlap.
05:00:739 (1) - bad flow with 05:00:545 (9) - , rearrange so it's straight below 05:00:545 (9) - or something like that Okay
05:13:900 (4,5) - bad flow again Moved tail lower
05:50:868 (6) - copy paste rotate (5) 180 for this slider, move it up and slightly to the right (488;147?) Yeah
05:54:932 (4,5,6) - ewww
05:58:029 (3,4) -
06:02:674 (3,4,5,6) - YAY PROPER JUMPS WAO FUCK YOU
06:27:835 (1,2,3) - this being 1/3 is barely readable, + it's spaced as hell/in the corner of the playfield, valley of combo break unhappiness Good!
06:34:319 (4) - this seems random compared to the rest of the map It plays surprisingly well actually! Subject to change though.
06:38:674 (1,2,3) - this one has 1/3 slider before it so should be fine, still circle + 1/3 slider might be better Nah those circles signify the bass which is the same in the three.
06:39:835 (1,1) - make something better, looks like you got bored and just put two randomly angled straight sliders M-maybe >.>
07:07:513 (3,4,5) - didn't forget about these Hue
07:11:771 (1,2,3,4,5) - for a long map like that you might want to not make a stack here, player is tired already and it can induce some misreads Did something somewhat cool.
07:17:771 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - same these, just make circles close together but not overlapping Maybe
07:19:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and for that some tasty triangles/small star jumps, for an ending this is very anticlimactic Did some jumps

kapow

Estellia- wrote:

Mod !!

• 
  [Ascension]

1. 00:11:964 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - consider curving the stream Nuuu I like how it looks right now, curving it would break the intenton here.
2. 00:17:771 (3,4) - Pattern is super awkward to look at IMO Removed red anchor from both sliders.
3. 01:33:255 (1,2) - blanket fix Yes
4. 01:34:029 (2,1) - ^
5. 02:20:481 (1,1) - ^
6. 02:51:835 (8,9,10,11,1) - Looks very awkwardly shaped, try making this round Yes
7. 02:58:803 (2,3) - blanket fix
8. 03:03:642 (2,1) - ^
9. 03:09:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - Maybe have 2345 all blanket 1 Nah wouldn't flow nicely
10. 03:22:997 (1) - Ugly slider shape, try making this more horizontal instead of vertical I am not changing that slider, for future modders.
11. 03:30:932 (1,2,3) - 2 and 3 blanket 1 differently Fixed
12. 03:31:706 (3,4) - blanket fix
13. 03:33:158 (3,4) - I don't really like how 4 doesn't completely exit 3 I dunno should be fine...
14. 03:41:771 (1,2) - Boring IMO Did a little something
15. 03:46:416 (1,2) - More circular? Rotated ccw
16. 03:58:803 (1) - Suggest shift this further away I like this anti-jump here ;-;
17. 04:10:416 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - This part of the stream is very awkwardly shaped How? o.O
18. 05:40:803 (2,3) - blanket fix
19. 07:19:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't really understand these haphazard jumps They give a feeling of finality and since the music volume increases with every beat I think this is cool, also look at above mod
    
    Ehh your map is actually super neat already. The patterns are perfect and the cleanness is definitely there already. What I want you to consider, however, is mapper intention. You seem to only aim to create a perfect map, only to come out as boring IMO. I'd like it if your map had more jumps, fast SVs in general and maybe less flow-ier patters, because from what I can hear the song is really heavy. But its just a point of view~ This map is practically perf already

Love, Estellia-

zkf wrote:

Merry christmas! Here's a present for one of the guys who taught me mapping in the first place! Hej

SPOILER

00:24:158 (4,5,6,7,8) - Feels a bit boring. Maybe make it a "mini" s curved slider and et 4&5 come from right, and 7&8 from the left. Nah this is intentional to stack 4 and 5 with 7 and 8 to make it hard to read >.>

00:28:610 (3,4) - Flow break feels unnecassary. Possibly Ctrl+G on 3? Flow does not break here, it's a circular flow sliderpair. Ctrl + g would ruin the transition from 2.

00:30:351 (4,5,6) - The regular osu stacking almost takes up 1/4 of the rest of the slider here. I'd say stack these in manually from the top right (standard is top left). Cool idea me likey

00:36:739 (1,2,3,4) - I think a double repeat slider would fit very well here. I'd prefer to keep the stream here since I don't really like double repeat sliders for one instance.

00:57:642 (1) - Slider end is not aligned with a sound in the song. I'd say remove 2, and lengthen 1 until the blue tick. There's definitely something there, else I wouldn't map it <:

01:00:545 (5,6,1) - Same as 3 comments earlier because of the shortly upcoming aligned slider at 01:01:319 (4) - Careful structure here wouldn't allow me to make any changes.

01:20:868 (1) - The slider ends on a very quiet sound in the song. I'd say silence the end hitsound of this. You know I hate silencing sliderends >.>

01:21:642 (3,4,5) - Feels a bit...boring? Maybe repeat the previous pattern (The good old Ctrl+C Ctrl+Shift+R lol.) Perfect triangle alignement, no

01:31:610 (7) - I don't think I hear a sound in the map here. Possibly just remove that note? Pls

01:36:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The jumps feel way to small for the diffculty here. I'd say increase the DS of the general pattern to 1.4. But almost the whole map uses 1.2 :v

01:50:674 (2,3) - The jump feels unnatural to the song. Ctrl+G on 2&3 seems to do the trick. Would feel the same and it wouldn't have the spiraling movement on the cursor that I want.

01:54:932 (1,2,3,4) - I feel like 4 should be moved behind 2, as the kiai reaches it's highpoint. One of the few places in this map that has symmetry left.

02:03:448 (3,4) - Overlap feels unnatural. Possible fix: Why not a blanket? http://puu.sh/dIOCd/e0e021b6c9.jpg This overlap is very pretty and it plays very well actually >.<

02:09:448 (3,4,5) - , 02:18:739 (3,4,5) - and 02:12:545 (3,4,5) - looks like it could be a return slider (with the middle note being the reverse arrow), might not feel as boring as 3 notes on the same place. As with previous mods, NO STACKS WILL CHANGE.

02:39:835 (1,2) - A slider would probaly feel much better here. Quick Example: http://puu.sh/dIOTs/b318601a6b.jpg Nah, same beat circles don't really call for a slider.

03:02:287 (4,5) - That's quite a jump. Ctrl+G on 4 maybe? Again spiral movement on cursor. Feels really nice to play.

03:26:287 (1,2,3) - Maybe move 1 and 2 together so 2 becomes a blanket on 3? Would have to move the following 5 as well... Again careful structure here, I can't really move anything without having to remap the next 2-3 patterns or something.

03:47:964 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's the final moment of the kiai time, seems like an appropiate place for some DS2 jumps. Stacks because the music is the same without any increase or anything at all.

03:53:964 (5) - I feel like the music requests a slider here instead...maybe? Would be nice but eh I prefer circles.

04:00:158 (5) - 1/1 slider would fit pretty well here imo. I dunno I really like these circles here, I wouldn't change anything on these.

04:09:255 (3,4,1) - 3 and 1 overlap in a quite unnatural way, maybe just align the endpoint of 3 with the endpoint of 1? Did something pretty cool actually haha

05:19:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd suggest the following: Set the first note, then set the second note with a distance snap of 0.2, then set the next note with DS0.4, etc...(I think it will end on a DS1.6 jump) this will make the jumps continiously harder for the player, following the style of the music. But it's the exact same beats here :v

07:01:609 (4,5) - Potential 1/4 slider? Turned 3 into double actually :>

07:07:513 (3,4,5) - , 07:10:609 (3,4,5) - 07:13:706 (3,4,5) - and 07:16:803 (5,6,7) - same as mentioned earlier, could be a return slider (again, middle note as reverse arrow) to erase a bit of that emptiness.

1. You don't have any breaks nor storyboard. Disable both Widescreen Support and letterboxes, please.
2. The gray colours you use are somewhat tricky. If you try to take a look at a tag multiplayer game you'll see why gray colours are not recommended to use.

1. Drop OD a little, please. It is nearly impossible to keep high accuracy during such a long time of non-stop playing.
2. 00:28:610 (3,4) - the pattern you used here is totally different and it might be misleading. Use Ctrl+G on 00:28:610 (3) to keep the pattern consistent?
3. 00:56:093 (1) - that beat is heavy, that is why the stack here feels out of place. Try to place a jump between (1) and (2). You'll feel the difference, I believe.
   Note:02:36:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to have some fun with these and similar beats, it will improve your patterns significantly.
4. 01:04:997 (6) - the downbeat (01:05:384 - ) is maped with a slidertail, so players are unabler to hit it. Let's try to make it clickable, so the rhythm will sound more natural example.
   Note: 02:27:061 (6) - same here.
5. 01:42:351 (1) - why don't you mute the slidertick sound and leave the sliderslide audible? This would make much more sense with the music.
   Note: 03:22:997 (1) - same.
6. 01:50:287 (1,2,3) - the sliders are placed in a very similar way, but there is a 2x larger spacing between (2) and (3), which is kinda confusing. They all are stacked together, which makes reading even harder and in the end the pattern becomes too confusing. I'm not sure, but using Ctrl+G on (3) might solve the problem.
7. 02:07:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - minor - mind the unstack. As you know, osu! automatcally unstacks objects, and this stack looks a little weird. Move it to the right and down a little, please.
8. 02:30:545 (1,2,3,4) - minor - you're focusing on y-axis a little too much, I'd say.
9. 03:33:158 (3,4) - according to the rules, reverse-arrows must be clearly visisble, which is not the case for this one as it is overlapped with the previous slider. It might be okay, but I would fix it just to be safe. :p
10. 04:10:416 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - with extremly low HP like 6 the stream will not be challenging enough for players. NCs give too much HP. So, what I suggest to do is to make combos at least 8 circles long :c
    Note: 04:14:674 (1,1,1,1) - this is also giving too much HP.
11. 04:30:351 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - minor - try to unstack them manually, so they will be 100% symmetrical while playing. example
12. 06:11:577 (2,3) - minor - instead of blanketing (2)'s head, try to make a smoother shape, so it will flow in a more natural way. Example
    
    You did really well, most of the patterns are pretty tidy and well-organised. I don't have much to say about the diff, I enjoyed modding it.

-Bakari- wrote:

Yo, as requested. Bakari-nyan :3

[General]

1. You don't have any breaks nor storyboard. Disable both Widescreen Support and letterboxes, please. Dunno why these were on tbh
2. The gray colours you use are somewhat tricky. If you try to take a look at a tag multiplayer game you'll see why gray colours are not recommended to use. I do this on a lot of my maps, signifying slow parts with grey colour is a thing!

[Ascension]

1. Drop OD a little, please. It is nearly impossible to keep high accuracy during such a long time of non-stop playing. OD is as close to AR as I can get it and I like my AR = OD >.>
2. 00:28:610 (3,4) - the pattern you used here is totally different and it might be misleading. Use Ctrl+G on 00:28:610 (3) to keep the pattern consistent? The flow from 2 would just fall apart that way I like this pattern and it play nice really. I don't see how it could be so misleading >.>
   
3. 00:56:093 (1) - that beat is heavy, that is why the stack here feels out of place. Try to place a jump between (1) and (2). You'll feel the difference, I believe. Hmmm reversed the order of sliders and circles in the timeline here, hitsounded accordingly. This fits the best I think.
   Note:02:36:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - try to have some fun with these and similar beats, it will improve your patterns significantly. Did the same for this and the rest as well.
4. 01:04:997 (6) - the downbeat (01:05:384 - ) is maped with a slidertail, so players are unabler to hit it. Let's try to make it clickable, so the rhythm will sound more natural example. True, did a 1/2 slider instead!
   Note: 02:27:061 (6) - same here. Yep!
5. 01:42:351 (1) - why don't you mute the slidertick sound and leave the sliderslide audible? This would make much more sense with the music. I like how the ticks slowly become more audible the farther you go in the slider so you get a feel of what's to come next (kiai) and you couldn't really hear those without a muted sliderslide.
   Note: 03:22:997 (1) - same. Yeah.
6. 01:50:287 (1,2,3) - the sliders are placed in a very similar way, but there is a 2x larger spacing between (2) and (3), which is kinda confusing. They all are stacked together, which makes reading even harder and in the end the pattern becomes too confusing. I'm not sure, but using Ctrl+G on (3) might solve the problem. I really want to keep this I find it so cool omg
7. 02:07:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - minor - mind the unstack. As you know, osu! automatcally unstacks objects, and this stack looks a little weird. Move it to the right and down a little, please. Done!
8. 02:30:545 (1,2,3,4) - minor - you're focusing on y-axis a little too much, I'd say. Nyeh :3
9. 03:33:158 (3,4) - according to the rules, reverse-arrows must be clearly visisble, which is not the case for this one as it is overlapped with the previous slider. It might be okay, but I would fix it just to be safe. :p Wow this played so well, RIP o7
10. 04:10:416 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - with extremly low HP like 6 the stream will not be challenging enough for players. NCs give too much HP. So, what I suggest to do is to make combos at least 8 circles long :c More combo density = More overall HP drain in case you were unaware. This means that having longer combos will have an overall effect on the drain of the map, in this case decreasing it. I believe this is fine, also fits the music the best!
    Note: 04:14:674 (1,1,1,1) - this is also giving too much HP. Same
11. 04:30:351 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - minor - try to unstack them manually, so they will be 100% symmetrical while playing. example Good idea!
12. 06:11:577 (2,3) - minor - instead of blanketing (2)'s head, try to make a smoother shape, so it will flow in a more natural way. Example I thought the swing played fine here owo. Fixed anyway~
    
    You did really well, most of the patterns are pretty tidy and well-organised. I don't have much to say about the diff, I enjoyed modding it. Thanks Bakari-chan ♥

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Best of luck! o7

1. 00:35:964 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not too sure what shape this is suppose to represent, imo it would look nicer if you move (3) to a place like x:480 y:252
2. 00:39:835 (1,1) - Blanket these? It will look a bit nicer that way.
3. 00:57:642 (1,2,3) - This pattern would look nicer if the two sliders were identical, right now they're curved differently.
4. 01:29:190 (4,5,6,9,10,11) - The spacing in these 1/6 streams are different, so it could confuse players considering they appear one after another.
5. 01:42:158 (6,1) - Turn this into an equilateral triangle? I think it will look nicer, because right now it looks uneven.
6. 01:50:287 (1,2,3) - Seriously. these sliders are overlapped in the same way, yet (2,3) are only 1/4 away from each other. This is extremely confusing because the player has absolutely no way of telling that (3) appears 1/4 a beat early. Redo the pattern or ctrl+g (3)
7. 02:04:029 (5,1) - This blanket isn't very good, so you should fix it. Make sure the approach circle and the edge of the slider trail are parallel to each other.
8. 02:22:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tbh, this star pattern is a little small and cramped to look nice, and it looks bland assuming it's not at an angle. Either redo the pattern or rotate it a bit (if you decide to rotate, make sure to move the notes afterwards to their appropriate places.)
9. 02:27:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
10. 02:35:190 (1,2) - Redo this bow pattern, the end of the straight slider (in your case, (2)) should not be overlapped while doing these, or else it will look bad.
11. 03:09:900 (3,4) - I don't hear anything that suggests 1/6. You should replace these two notes with just one, at 03:09:932 - or else it's just unnecessary.
12. 03:21:642 (1,3) - The two sliderends don't stack properly, creating an ugly overlap. You should fix this.
13. 03:25:803 (5,1) - Maybe you could blanket these? Will look nicer imo
14. 03:30:932 (1,2,3,4) - Playing will feel much better rhythmically if you changed the rhythm into something like this:
    
    tbh this is much better than your bland, 1/2 slider rhythm, since this actually follows what the music suggests, and isn't just a repeated monotonous 1/2.
15. 04:07:126 (1,3) - You should improve this blanket, doesn't look very nice atm.
16. 04:37:513 (1) - I'm not too sure about this massive sv change, could be confusing for some players. I think you should change it.
17. 04:41:190 (1,2,3) - This rhythm seems unfitting in comparison to how you've dealt with rhythms like this before. You should delete (2) and move (3) back 1/4 on the timeline. It should look somewhat like this on the timeline:
    
    This is a better way of dealing with this rhythm, since it is consistent with how you've mapped rhythms like this before.
18. 06:06:158 (8,1,2) - Personally, I think you should curve these sliders a little more, would look nicer tbh.
19. 06:07:706 (5,1,2) - This pattern is uneven, it is blanketed closer to (1) then it is to (2). You should fix this, so it looks nicer.

Fluttershy03 wrote:

Hi, mod as requested~ Hello o/

[Ascension]

1. 00:35:964 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not too sure what shape this is suppose to represent, imo it would look nicer if you move (3) to a place like x:480 y:252 Good idea, moved to form a perfect triangle
2. 00:39:835 (1,1) - Blanket these? It will look a bit nicer that way. Sure
3. 00:57:642 (1,2,3) - This pattern would look nicer if the two sliders were identical, right now they're curved differently. Aight
4. 01:29:190 (4,5,6,9,10,11) - The spacing in these 1/6 streams are different, so it could confuse players considering they appear one after another. Hmm that was not intended, good catch!
5. 01:42:158 (6,1) - Turn this into an equilateral triangle? I think it will look nicer, because right now it looks uneven. Opened up the bagel a little so we have better flow and made the triangle equilateral.
6. 01:50:287 (1,2,3) - Seriously. these sliders are overlapped in the same way, yet (2,3) are only 1/4 away from each other. This is extremely confusing because the player has absolutely no way of telling that (3) appears 1/4 a beat early. Redo the pattern or ctrl+g (3) Not sure why everyone suggests ctrl + g on 3 the flow is terrible that way. Gonna remap it so I don't get told by everyone to change it.
7. 02:04:029 (5,1) - This blanket isn't very good, so you should fix it. Make sure the approach circle and the edge of the slider trail are parallel to each other. I wasn't really intending to go for a blanket there lel. Might as well make it one!
8. 02:22:997 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - tbh, this star pattern is a little small and cramped to look nice, and it looks bland assuming it's not at an angle. Either redo the pattern or rotate it a bit (if you decide to rotate, make sure to move the notes afterwards to their appropriate places.) Upscaled the pattern by x1,2 and rotated by 10 degrees clock-wise.
9. 02:27:642 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^ Redid the star a little.
10. 02:35:190 (1,2) - Redo this bow pattern, the end of the straight slider (in your case, (2)) should not be overlapped while doing these, or else it will look bad. Yes you're right, shortened the DS a little <:
11. 03:09:900 (3,4) - I don't hear anything that suggests 1/6. You should replace these two notes with just one, at 03:09:932 - or else it's just unnecessary. There's 1/6 in the music there, more particularly drums.
12. 03:21:642 (1,3) - The two sliderends don't stack properly, creating an ugly overlap. You should fix this. WOW THE UGLY IS STRONG IN THIS ONE!
13. 03:25:803 (5,1) - Maybe you could blanket these? Will look nicer imo 1 Blankets the circle
14. 03:30:932 (1,2,3,4) - Playing will feel much better rhythmically if you changed the rhythm into something like this:
    
    tbh this is much better than your bland, 1/2 slider rhythm, since this actually follows what the music suggests, and isn't just a repeated monotonous 1/2. OH MY GOD THANK YOU SOMEONE FINALLY MENTIONED THIS
15. 04:07:126 (1,3) - You should improve this blanket, doesn't look very nice atm. Done!
16. 04:37:513 (1) - I'm not too sure about this massive sv change, could be confusing for some players. I think you should change it. That's why the red is there bruh! Also tickrate 2!
17. 04:41:190 (1,2,3) - This rhythm seems unfitting in comparison to how you've dealt with rhythms like this before. You should delete (2) and move (3) back 1/4 on the timeline. It should look somewhat like this on the timeline:
    
    This is a better way of dealing with this rhythm, since it is consistent with how you've mapped rhythms like this before. Yep, I agree. I break there all the time hahaha.
18. 06:06:158 (8,1,2) - Personally, I think you should curve these sliders a little more, would look nicer tbh. Yep, agreed!
19. 06:07:706 (5,1,2) - This pattern is uneven, it is blanketed closer to (1) then it is to (2). You should fix this, so it looks nicer. Moved 1 lower.

Well that's it from me, the stream parts toward the end were mapped really well! Good luck~ Thanks so much for a great mod <3 ♥

Okoratu wrote:

dicks

General

1. I think the soft-hitfinish fits the finish sounds in the music WAY better than the current finish does
2. yo song title's wrong: pic from demetori homepage - Link to that page
   So title should be 亡き王女の為のセプテット ～ Ascending Into Naught which is probably romanised as Kaki Oujo no Tame no Septette ~ Ascending Into Naught
3. 東方紅魔郷　～ the Embodiment of Scarlet Devil cuz game origin title thing src
   
   闡提宗祀 ～ Offering to The Sukhavati
   
   OK Changed titles added metadata, thanks ♥
4. whatever about kiai setup: 01:56:093 - thing like uhh resets in here and continues normally in 01:56:481 - so you could use that for a kiai flahs if you want Nice touch added on everything!
5. 03:36:739 - and 03:37:126 - same thing ^
6. 04:26:674 - song loses some of its power here imo could end the current kiai in here and start it in 04:32:868 - again because it seems to regain that stuff there I'd keep this since I've mapped the same way here too.
7. 06:03:061 - and 06:03:448 - same thing as first / second one

Ascension
I don't like diffname being part of title, synonyms for things in title are better imo
Tick rate 1 because most of your 1/1 sliders don't really look like they want to have the slidertick sound anyway? (most noticably on the slow grey part) There's also speedups though :v

1. 00:05:964 (2,3,4) - isn't this 1/6 I don't think so o.o
2. 00:09:061 - not really a sound on this repeat, the thing is more like I believe this plays a little better here and it's barely noticeable I don't think I'm removing this
   
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   or you know you could skip that 1/6 sound and just do the same as 00:08:481 (4) - which would also make sense
3. 00:10:029 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - not really a fan of this kind of pattern because the sounds you're mapping increase in intensity and the thing is just all the same stacks for 6 sounds. a pattern with increasing spacing to represent that kind of buildup would be more fitting imo Okay
4. 00:10:997 - could add 2 1/6 circles if you wanted to after this sound thing - would make the next 1/6 stream seem less lonely Never noticed that 1/6 there! Added!
5. 00:28:610 (3,4,5) - sudden spacing decrease could give you the idea that these sliders are extended to some 1/6 ticks or something while they aren't, you could either randomise the spacing for a few other instances a tiny bit or just make this boringly the same as all the others for the sake of not being confusing and stufff (would prefer the first because variety yes) I increased the spacing of this one
6. 00:30:351 (4,5,6) - stream spacing is even smaller than 00:11:964 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - so misreading it as 1/6 while it is 1/4 would be meh (mentioning because it happened to me) This is technically a stack. I just mapped it like this to make the stack go not the standard way like it does.
7. 00:58:803 (7,8,9,10) - , 01:29:190 (4,5,6,7,9,10,11,1) - , 01:41:771 (3,4,5) - oh yes what could go wrong with this kind of stream spacing a a
8. 00:52:222 (5) - uhm, you were having things like 00:47:384 (3,4,5,6) - up until now and now one of the stronger beats is sliderend and i think mapping similarly to the thing i mentioned in some way would be better Music is different there I think o.o
9. 00:46:416 (6) - i'd rather not have strong guitar on sliderend, there are a ton of possibilities to avoid that Yes
10. 00:46:029 - also mapping the guitar here would be an idea since 00:46:416 (6) - also maps the guitar... maybe Nah would be inconsistent.
11. 01:34:416 (6) - this looks like you tried symmetry like most other patterns in that thing and did not succeed Didn't even intend symmetry there but well let's make it so
12. 01:46:610 (5) - following that slider's direction with the circle placement would be cool Dunno why that's not like that tbh
13. 01:50:674 (2,3,4,5,6) - one of these stacks is broken at least it is confusing as hell ingame (i think it is 01:50:964 (3) - )
    ok i give up i dunno what they are doing but i think they are supposed to do same thing as 01:19:706 (2,3,4) - but somewhat don't which is weird and reads badly I know what it is, it's combo number bug the numbers don't appear for some reason...
14. 01:57:061 (2,3,4,5,6) - 02:01:706 (3,4,5,6,7) - baby streamspacing is boring for kiai imo, sv is also higher but streams are spaced the same ? Right
15. 01:56:093 (4) - would prefer 2 circles for guitar thing instead of parallel slider thing Symmetry gets rekt no
16. 01:58:900 (3) - a small spacing increase to have 2's sliderhead and this one spaced similarly to your 1/2 notes like 01:57:642 (7,8) - or something because noone follows 1/4 sliders through until the end Fine
17. 02:08:093 (5,6,7,8) - splitting this stack up here could be cool because music adds a different layer of sounds here so having some kind of movement there would be fitting, also a left right or up down kind of pattern like this would be cool for 5,6,7,8 Does noone read previous mods? No to unstacking. At all.
    
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18. 02:17:384 (6,7,8,9,10) - high 1/4 spacing right into small 1/4 spacing is not the smoothest transition i could think of Maybe
19. 02:24:351 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - slightly increasing spacing in this pattern would fit the preceding 2 patterns better because doublets there are part of star pattern thing Probably
20. 02:33:255 (6,7,8,9,1) - 1/2 spacing that looks like 1/4 spacing Did something
21. 02:41:384 (1,2) - baby spacing right after bigger spacing in 02:40:997 (6,7) - , is there any specific reason for a visual slowdown thing here if not moving stream to the right a bit would be good Did something different and more fitting.
22. 02:48:739 (7) - baby spacing again i don't even understand why Because I was a freakin idiot 6 months ago.
23. 02:56:868 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - fun Yay~
24. 03:02:577 (5,6) - would space these out further because 03:02:287 (4,5) - are already pretty high 1/4 spacing so it would be K flowing like Okay.
    
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25. 03:09:900 (3,4) - i don't hear any 1/6 here at all, instead the background thing is doing something even more stupid: ROFL WHAT THE FUCK HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA DEMETORI PLS
    
    like ugh really

    
    would suggest ignoring yellow tick sound because it stupid, just mapping blue tick is fine to me
26. 03:32:093 (5,1) - feel too close due to overall spacing in dis part It is
27. also mini overlap of 03:32:481 (1,3) - uh Fixed cuz
28. 03:42:739 (5,6) - same space thingy Yes
29. 03:46:416 (1) - would prefer triangle pattern for guitar Mhmm
30. 03:48:739 (5,6,7,8) - if you changed thing in first kiai i mentioned you should do it here as well
31. 03:53:190 (3,4,5) - i like, would like to see this elsewhere too because i am into custom stacks but uhh not really an issue anywhere else just my preference
32. 04:01:900 - 04:02:287 - i don't think the guitar plays exactly onbeat on the 1/6 or something here but whatever Wasn't sure how to map this myself I find this the most fitting out of everything I tried.
33. 04:06:351 - why skipping guitar here i don't understand would make spacing also more reasonable and stuff Never heard a guitar string there LOL FIXED
34. 04:03:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - also i would prefer higher spacing for stream here because ye I dunno about this.
35. 04:08:739 (6,7) - i think guitar is doing stupid 1/8 shit here again Yeah well I'm leaving this like so for now though
    
    would just map 6 to blue tick instead of putting 1/6 over it

    
36. 04:10:416 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - would prefer if you halved amount of ncs here because uhm you doing stuff like that never again in map i think Fits music so it doesn't matter :v
37. 04:20:093 (1) - just a SV decrease here so you can have it look the same as 04:19:706 (1) - and the rest of the sliders is an option or not? I think people would bitch about it
38. ^ could also be an 1/4 repeat slider with higher SV so that it looks the same lol (just ideas pls disregard if you dislike thank)
39. 04:20:481 - 4:20 yes finish sound as beginning of spinner is like super underrepresenting, circle would be nice Didn't NC new circle cuz it would ruin colourhax.
40. 04:35:771 - a circle maybe Yesh!
41. 04:14:287 (1,2,1) - this 1/4 spacing feels a bit forced, maybe increase the 1/4 spacing between the sliders that follow to make this seem less forced, idk I actually think this plays naturally
42. if you didn't add circle to red tick in 4:35 then at least increase spacing to 04:35:964 (1,2,3) -
43. 04:49:126 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this 1/6 streams feels like complete overkill for this calmer part, consider like having at least some of it as a repeat slider thing or all of it idk Part of it is now a reverse slider
44. 04:54:158 (4) - o :o:
45. 04:56:093 (1,1,1,1,1) - nc spam looks a bit pointless to me but that might just be me, you also don't nc spam for 01:16:997 (8,9,10,11) - or 02:57:255 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - so idk *hints at SV changes at that part*
46. 04:56:964 (1) - also having this stack or at least closer to 04:57:061 (1) - would make more sense imo because right now it's free sliderbreak and free frustration You should have seen how spaced that was before I decided to fix it
47. 05:09:706 (7) - uhmm shouldn't this start in 05:09:642 - and have one more repeat?? I actually think it starts at the red tick LOL
48. 05:21:642 (6) - i think this is more something like Probably haha
    
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49. 05:23:771 (1) - just a note that you could use this color with sv change more often to make it seem less lonely, i think the song has plenty of things where you could do something like that Want me to redo the entire colourhax then K!
50. 06:12:738 (1,2,3) - forcing spacign through stacking things in edit feels weirddd (more space please thanks) It looked cool fuck you :'(
51. 06:27:835 (1,2,3) - previous 1/3 notes had gray combos But these are circles o.o FINE!
52. 06:32:093 (1,1) - moree 1/3 spacing like the other patterns would be nice Yeah
53. 06:38:674 (1,2,3) - yea B)
54. 07:05:771 - why skipping thissss - makes not much sense to meEeE Idk I wanted to map the badass guitar but who cares about subjectivity right.

about shitsounds

1. 00:18:255 - why clap, it's the same as the others (could add claps on all others though because i think that sounds nice) Would be overdoing it and I'm doing it on every section end because the drumhit is actually there in the music.
2. 00:24:835 (7,8) - having clap on 8 could be better Definitely not!
3. 00:35:287 - is there a system to clap on tails or just whenever you felt like Mostly whenever it is in the music.
4. 00:46:029 - not mapping it loses you a whistle :^) Yeah what can you do about it.
5. 01:21:835 - whistle on tail here sounds like mistake Yeah forgot to remove it for some reason.
6. 01:35:964 (6) - adding a whistle for guitar maybe idk Would be too much
7. 01:40:513 - whistle Yes
8. 01:42:448 - would add a green line with like 30 % volume so slidertick sounds are not that louuuuud I actually like how the ticksounds progress the more you go in the slider because volume of the music lowers so ticks bring you to a state of getting hype for the kiai~
9. 01:43:706 - whistle so consistent with everything else Hmm oke
10. 01:49:416 (3) - i don't get the clap here ok nvm i get it if you clap there you should clap in 01:49:610 - because 01:52:513 (3,4) - yea Yes
11. 01:56:287 - whistle cuz 01:46:803 (6) - Okay
12. 01:57:545 - not mapping it loses whistle ugh Welp
13. 02:02:481 (9) - whistle Kay
14. 02:05:964 - whistle Noooooooo
15. 02:08:093 (5) - whistle (not sureeee) Nah
16. 02:11:384 - ah due to this slidertick sound the pattern felt weird now i understand Hehehe
17. 02:26:674 - the whistle noooo ):
18. ^ whatever this part skips whistles like that Yes
19. 01:16:997 (8) - whistle on head? Nah
20. 02:24:158 - whistle cuz 02:42:545 (7) - Oh yes
21. 03:23:093 - something about making sliderticks less loud
22. 03:24:351 - something about pressing w
23. 03:25:513 - remove the clap i think the clap sound is on next blue so ugh Idk why that's there owo
24. 03:27:642 (6) - press w Maybe
25. 03:30:739 - w
26. 03:31:803 - clap??? (see 01:52:513 (3,4) - , same applies to a lot of other patterns, consistency stuffs) 03:33:158 (3) - This is the slider you mean.
27. 03:33:835 - not clap and not finish but the one that's left What????
28. 03:36:932 (7) - w
29. 03:43:126 - w
30. 03:46:803 - clap cuz 02:06:158 (2) -
31. if you did whistle thing for other same thing as 03:48:739 - then don't forget this
32. 04:31:900 (7) - whistle? Nice touch~
33. 04:38:674 (3) - whistleee? Yeeee
34. 04:50:964 (4,5) - i think following whistlepattern could be more straightforward than following 3/4 drums but whhatever Not gonna change this it feels great!
35. 05:24:545 - whiste because 05:27:642 - ? Added more actually.
36. 05:28:997 (4,5) - swapping whistle no? Added instead of swapping.
37. i can't really comprehend whistlepattern in that part but i think 05:41:384 (3,4,1) - somewhere on these should be one Two in fact!
38. 05:50:287 - adding claps every 1/2 would be cool so 05:50:287 (1,3,5,6) - claps and 05:50:481 (3) - should remove the whistle and the whistle should go to 05:50:674 - Added claps on the red ticks only, didn't remove the whistle but added the one you suggested.
39. 05:54:835 (3) - clap cuz preceding patterns? Doesn't feel right
40. 05:56:577 - clap? Yes
41. 06:00:158 (6) - whistle
42. 06:03:255 (6) - whistle
43. 06:04:126 - at least a clap here idk about its tail Clap at start o/
44. 06:11:577 (2,3,4) - i dunno is it different than everything else or why different clap pattern This is a mistake lel
45. 06:39:158 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - shouldn't there be whistle on at least one of these Added on 5
46. 07:01:319 (3,4) - 2 whistles? why Idk lol removed both
    got the finish suggestions by listening to it without sample volumes so turn off your samples to check if i'm right about these or not
47. 00:10:803 (6) - finish? Dunno why this is not there aaaa :V
48. 00:20:481 (1) - i think there's a finish sound here Like every other white tick there
49. 00:23:190 (6) - finish? at least music has finish Like every other white tick there
    [*00:23:577 (1) - ^ I have finish every two measures so no.
50. 00:26:674 (1) - f Not as important
51. 00:28:222 (1) - this one is really weak so not doing this is also ok imo Yes
52. 00:29:771 (1) - if you use soft finishes for some parts this might be one part where you want to use one Welp
53. 00:30:158 (3) - maybe here as well because finish here is not as loud as the one you placed in 00:30:545 (6) - Would compliment the pattern nicely yes
54. 00:32:868 (1) - f Nuuuuu
55. 00:35:577 (6) - finish on head would also be cool
56. 00:35:964 (1) - ^
57. 00:36:351 (3) - this one is really strong Added all three of them before you suggested them :^)
58. 00:46:803 - fffffinish Not strong enough
59. 00:49:900 (1) - finishh ^
60. 00:51:835 (3) - finish Yes
61. 00:52:706 - why would you put finish sound there demtori why Composing powers too strong to handle hue
62. 00:55:706 (3) - finish Missed that one hehe
63. 00:57:255 (2) - ^ This one is quite ambiguous. Some find it fitting some don't. I like it there but if anyone else suggests removal I'd remove it.
64. 01:04:997 (6) - finish on head Not strong enough
65. 01:10:416 (3) - finish on head Yeah
66. 01:56:481 (1) - f n sh n h a Yeah
67. 02:05:771 (1) - optional finish on head but maybe Would sound nice I concur!
68. 02:21:255 (1) - pls fniish Yep
69. 02:27:448 (1) - pls finish Not strong enough
70. 02:30:545 (1) - please ^
71. 02:32:481 (3) - a hue
72. 02:33:642 (1) - are you trying to troll me Maybe
73. 02:36:739 (1) - i think you are B)
74. 02:37:900 (2) - yep 8-)
75. 02:38:577 - dunno if you can put finisher things on this sound Yeah it's nice!
76. 02:45:642 (6) - but you surely can put them here Not strong enough here
77. 02:46:029 (1) - am i allowed to hate you Yes added before I saw suggestion :^)
78. 02:51:061 (3) - maybe one here Would be nice yes
79. 03:27:835 (1) - finish Yep
80. 03:32:481 (1) - it has weak finish sound in head Would be nice
81. 03:32:093 (5) - this does too Too weak
82. 03:40:610 - for some reason there's a finish sound here Made it a circle by removing reverse and added hitfinish with the clap
83. 03:42:932 (6) - could put one in this head I agree!
84. 03:46:029 (7) - lmao rofl
85. 03:47:577 (3) - this sound is pretty unique, could get a pretty unique hitsound for it Can't really think of anything :^)
86. 04:20:481 - ): B)
87. 04:29:771 (1) - lol I honestly thought this had a hitfinish because the sound is exactly the same HAHAHAHAHA
88. 04:35:577 - f n sh Fuck this slider I removed it made it a circle where the slider began and another circle on top of the stack
89. 04:35:964 (1) - yeea Oh baby yes
90. 04:40:610 (1) - weak finish sound heree Not worth it imo
91. 04:42:158 (1) - ^
92. 04:43:706 (1) - ^
93. 04:46:803 (1) - ^
94. 04:50:093 (1,2) - would add finishes to these Fair enough
95. 04:54:545 (1) - e Oh shit
96. 05:15:835 (7) - yea Yeee
97. 05:18:351 (4) - no idea why but it has one Compliments music nicely strangely enough
98. 05:18:932 (9) - yea Lol yes
99. 05:19:319 (1) - yea Indeed
100. 05:21:448 (4) - eeeeeeeeeeeee EeeeeEEEEeEeEE
101. 05:52:222 (5) - this one .. maybe Sounds okay
102. 05:53:771 - maybe Yeah
103. 05:54:158 (1) - yea Mhmm
104. 05:56:868 (5) - yea Yes
105. 05:59:964 (5) - yea Indeed!
106. 06:04:609 (5) - also sounds like it could use one to me Nah would be too much
107. 06:04:997 (1) - this as well This one is nice
108. 06:06:545 (1) - this one fo ssure Yez
109. 06:07:706 (5) - ^ Ye
110. 06:09:255 (5) - BAM-sound it BAM
111. 06:10:803 (7) - ^ ^
112. 06:11:190 (1) - oh i didn't expect this one to be here and wanted to suggest it, neat SEE IT'S NOT THAT BAD!
113. 06:12:351 (5) - maybe Maybe
114. 06:33:642 (1) - yes Oh yes
115. 06:38:093 (5) - yes Wooohoooo
116. 06:47:964 (9) - please Idk why this is missing ;A;
117. 06:52:609 (5) - please Ok I know why this one is missing heheh
118. 06:54:545 (1) - hahaha QAQ
119. 06:59:190 (1) - dunno 06:59:577 (2) - You mean this.
120. 06:59:964 (4,5) - yes Yes
121. 07:19:319 (1) - heheheh ahiuehaiuehaieaoeaeauiheiauheieioea

/done /damn son