1. Lunatic (5,25 stars, 863 notes)

5eania wrote:

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00:10:588 ~ 00:11:205 - recommend stream here. like this : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1816586 ok fixed
00:12:794 ~ 00:12:970 - stream hmm i dont think so since I use stream only on loud 1/4s, this one is too faint to hear
00:13:235 - add note ok
00:19:588 ; 00:19:676 - add circle ok
00:25:058 (5) - Ctrl + G, and 00:25:411 (1) - Ctrl < (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1816594) i'd like to keep the pattern like before because it's repeated in another note
00:26:911 ~ 00:27:441 - stream too faint to put stream here, because if I put stream here then i must put stream on the rest of the song.. typical demetori songs
00:42:529 ~ 00:43:941 - http://cl.ly/Wa8C srsly yours is really nicer to hear >,<
00:44:470 ~ 00:44:911 - stream with soft sound. 00:44:999 ~ normal sound guess soft stream is nice
01:10:323 ; 01:10:411 - add circle this is intentional to emphasize previous note
01:15:970 ; 01:16:058 - ^
02:07:058 (1) - stack to 7 I guess this is ok but that will require a remap on this part, so I'll fix it later
02:12:352 (7) - x372 y64, and add circle to 02:12:441 ; 02:12:529 ori pattern will make a player listen to the music instead looking at the approach circle
02:14:823 (7) - nc, 02:15:087 (8) - x392 y112, 02:15:352 (1) - off nc no because 7 and 8 still in previous part
02:31:588 (8) - stack to 9 this was intentional to emphasize the sound of the note that is different from anywhere else in the song
02:32:382 - add circle ^
02:34:411 (10) - stack to 11 ok
03:11:293 (11) - nc yup
03:12:352 (13) - nc ^
03:13:411 (13) - nc ^
03:20:116 (10) - 1/4 snap repeat slide ok fixedr

1. 00:12:882 - add a 5 or 3 stream here? i can hear a guitar or bass or something hitting 1/4 notes here
2. 00:15:970 - ^
3. 00:18:441 - ^
4. 00:24:441 - ^
5. 00:26:999 - ^
6. this actually happens very often o-o you should turn up your audio a bit more and find these gaps with 1/4 hits in them because those parts with the pauses are undermapped imo
7. 01:09:352 (2,4) - ctrl g these two? this little section 01:09:705 (4,5,6) - is a lot stronger than 01:09:176 (1,2,3) - and to better represent that, should have bigger jumps imo
8. 01:10:058 (6) - move this to 01:10:235 - and add a note at 01:10:058 - ? the drawn out guitar sound starts at 01:10:235 - and ahving it represented with a slider head to tail is much better than only using the tail imo since the tails very weak
9. 01:15:705 (3) - ^ same general idea
10. 01:21:176 (8) - i would ctrl g this to keep the clockwise rotation you have after 01:20:470 (7) - . may need to lower ds between these two 01:21:176 (8,1) - if the change is made
11. 01:23:294 (9,11) - theres a better way.delete 1 of them, copy the one you kept, and then ctrl g the copy. if a perfect overlap was the effect you were going for. it might be a bit hard to read though but how they awkwardly overlap right now feels weird to me
12. 01:28:235 (6) - have this end at 01:28:499 - ? guitar sound is here. may also want to mvoe 01:28:764 (7) - . it isnt exactly easy to read a triplet with an overlap maybe somewhere like 192,168 or something
13. 01:39:794 (6,7) - it would flow better if you ctrl g these two imo
14. 01:58:588 (5,6) - this is a bit of an awkward overlap. move slider 6 more <---- to avoid this overlap?
15. 02:14:823 (7) - NC for better readability? and i would move 02:14:823 (7,8) - these two elsewhere. its pretty hard to read triplets like this when theyre stacked
16. 02:18:529 (4) - guitar starts at 02:18:705 - . think the slider head would be betetr over there since i dont hear anything significant or emphasized at 02:18:529 -
17. 02:31:588 (8,9) - i get youre trying for variability but this looks a bit like 1/4th spacing with the overlap. may want to move 02:31:588 (8) - and lengthen 02:31:764 (9) - . i mean if you want something different you could vary the streams. like add a note at 02:31:676 - . drums playing here, it would work.
18. 02:32:470 (2,5) - avoid overlap~
19. 02:55:763 (9,17,25) - think you should really add NCs here. combos getting waaaaaaay too big
20. 03:07:058 (4,5,6) - same thing about the stacking and the triplets
21. 03:11:999 (9) - swap nc with 03:12:352 (1) -
22. 03:11:293 (1) - swap nc with 03:10:676 (4) -
23. 03:17:647 (3,4) - should make this perfectly go through the slider tail. you can use the arrow keys and turn off grid snap for better precision
24. 03:23:999 (9,17,25) - would NC here
25. 03:27:529 (9) - nc~
26. 03:30:352 (9,1) - swap NC
27. 03:31:235 (2) - ctrl g?
28. 03:42:529 (9) - move to 03:42:705 - and add note at 03:42:529 - same reason as above one
29. 03:50:735 - add note?
30. 03:54:352 (3) - end slider at 03:54:617 - to follow prominent trplet