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NoHitter

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Joined June 2009

NoHitter 2014-08-17T04:44:22+00:00

[General]
- Overall the mapset is great. Just some suggestions.

[Insane]
- 00:05:091 (2,3,4) - (2) is not perfectly in the middle of the two sliders here. Adjust (4) or (3) a bit so that it'll be in the middle. Placing (2) in the center temporarily then using Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J on one of the sliders will work.
- 00:13:928 (1) - IMO, start the spinner at 00:14:160 instead since that's when you can hear the slowly increasing sound. Add a note at 00:13:928 instead?
- 00:17:184 (4,5) - These two don't flow well. I recommend placing (5) on the upper right of (4)'s tail. You have to adjust (6) though. http://puu.sh/aVM5Q/a9c3c020d9.jpg
- 00:23:463 (3,4,5) -IMO it would look better as a perfect triangle.
- 00:24:625 (1,2,3) - Same comment about flow here. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/aVMkH/abe857ce54.jpg
- 00:31:602 (5) - This should be facing the other direction for better flow. http://puu.sh/aVMpo/bbabab7173.jpg
- 00:37:184 (6,7,8) - The distance change here is kind of ugly looking

I suggest placing (7) equally from (6) and (8).
- 00:47:649 (2) - For better flow, you should either make it higher or lower respective to the previous slider. http://puu.sh/aVMyC/32de11a847.jpg or http://puu.sh/aVMzq/a8bf4ef9d9.jpg
- 00:49:974 (3) - I was expecting this to be perfectly center between the sliders. If you want to keep the stack on the previous note, maybe move slider (2) instead?
- 01:22:067 (4) - Place this in the "center" of the previous slider? http://puu.sh/aVMLo/3bec3f86b2.jpg
- 01:22:532 (1) - IMO (1) would be better placed where the previous slider is pointing to. You would have to rearrange your combos ahead though if you did this change. http://puu.sh/aVMUH/c3cfd00a96.jpg ;; http://puu.sh/aVN1U/b5ccc5ff69.jpg maybe?
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 02:01:718 (1) - Start on the red tick at 02:01:835? That's where I can hear the cymbals.
- 02:06:253 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
- 02:15:323 (6,7) - This plays oddly, because of the fact that (6) comes off strongly, so (7) doesn't quite have enough intensity to warrant a note. Make (6) into a slider instead which ends at (7). It should solve the intensity problem and at the same time, allow you to place a hitobject there.
- 02:16:718 (2) - IMO a bit of oval flow works here. http://puu.sh/aVNs9/414d9b1e9c.jpg
- 02:19:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Similar here. ^ http://puu.sh/aVNtV/0d647a786f.jpg
- 02:24:160 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
- 02:33:695 (4) - This really would play better if it faced the other direction (ctrl+G) IMO

- 02:35:556 (2) - Move this a bit to the left so that it exceeds the X-axis of the previous slider a bit. This will help in flow. http://puu.sh/aVNFQ/c8dfa0cb0e.jpg
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 03:05:672 (4,5) - This plays oddly since you have your vocal at 03:05:788 which is never hit by the notes here. Either make into an outright stream or just add a note there.
- 03:23:463 (1,2,3) - I expected a stream here since you were going for the build up with those 1/4s from earlier

- 03:27:184 () - Move break here like what you did in Hard.
- 03:44:160 (4) - Ctrl+G here for better flow?

[Hard]
- I've been more lax on your same-end facing sliders here since it feels like a motif in this difficulty, but in general, same-end facing sliders don't flow as well compared to those which face the opposite end.
- 00:46:253 (5,6,7,1) - The current pattern doesn't flow well IMO. Maybe something like http://puu.sh/aVO9z/8b524d26b8.jpg ?
- 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4) - Change pattern to http://puu.sh/aVOcY/0a36168efd.jpg ?
- 01:13:928 (3) - Place this up a bit more for better oval flow. http://puu.sh/aVOg0/07e8a13579.jpg The stack won't be that noticeable anymore by that time anyway.
- 01:22:532 (1,2,3) - If you wanted to make it flow properly, http://puu.sh/aVOoq/a48db25736.jpg would have been a better arrangement, but you have to fix the pattern after this.
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 02:13:230 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
- 02:18:579 (2) - Place this up for better oval flow.
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better.

[captin's Normal]
- There's nothing to point about in this diff.
- 00:22:998 (1) - Move the slider end by one grid to the right, so the flow will be much better (The end will point a bit better to the start of the next object)
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better.

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-17T07:22:26+00:00

reply for NoHitter's mods

NoHitter wrote:
[General]
- Overall the mapset is great. Just some suggestions.

[Insane]
- 00:05:091 (2,3,4) - (2) is not perfectly in the middle of the two sliders here. Adjust (4) or (3) a bit so that it'll be in the middle. Placing (2) in the center temporarily then using Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J on one of the sliders will work. maybe better now
- 00:13:928 (1) - IMO, start the spinner at 00:14:160 instead since that's when you can hear the slowly increasing sound. Add a note at 00:13:928 instead? I think start at current point is fine. mine feels more natural and smooth than yours to me, and actually the increasing sound is start at 00:13:928 -, try listen to the song by playback speed 25% well inaudible for 100% though..
- 00:17:184 (4,5) - These two don't flow well. I recommend placing (5) on the upper right of (4)'s tail. You have to adjust (6) though. done!http://puu.sh/aVM5Q/a9c3c020d9.jpg
- 00:23:463 (3,4,5) -IMO it would look better as a perfect triangle. I guess I didn't suppose these objects are somehow triangle pattern, I just placed them to be flow like "へ" (I'm not sure what I am saying...)
- 00:24:625 (1,2,3) - Same comment about flow here. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/aVMkH/abe857ce54.jpg yes
- 00:31:602 (5) - This should be facing the other direction for better flow. http://puu.sh/aVMpo/bbabab7173.jpg nahh I like my pattern here ;w;
- 00:37:184 (6,7,8) - The distance change here is kind of ugly looking I suggest placing (7) equally from (6) and (8). I think it's fine as is, I have made a jump 00:37:416 (7) - for the piano
- 00:47:649 (2) - For better flow, you should either make it higher or lower respective to the previous slider. http://puu.sh/aVMyC/32de11a847.jpg or http://puu.sh/aVMzq/a8bf4ef9d9.jpg moved it higher, is not same as the screen shot since it's overlapping with the hp bar..
- 00:49:974 (3) - I was expecting this to be perfectly center between the sliders. If you want to keep the stack on the previous note, maybe move slider (2) instead? moved (1) instead, I don't know it's being perfectly center place though
- 01:22:067 (4) - Place this in the "center" of the previous slider? http://puu.sh/aVMLo/3bec3f86b2.jpg perhaps done!
- 01:22:532 (1) - IMO (1) would be better placed where the previous slider is pointing to. You would have to rearrange your combos ahead though if you did this change. http://puu.sh/aVMUH/c3cfd00a96.jpg ;; http://puu.sh/aVN1U/b5ccc5ff69.jpg maybe? uuh it's fine to play and I really liked the pattern in this diff so I wanna keep for now ><
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better. how to move the break there, I couldn't move more than current time. or you meant removing the spinners
- 02:01:718 (1) - Start on the red tick at 02:01:835? That's where I can hear the cymbals. alright, done
- 02:06:253 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow. looks a bit far and I would prefer mine, but yours is also good for me, I might change it
- 02:15:323 (6,7) - This plays oddly, because of the fact that (6) comes off strongly, so (7) doesn't quite have enough intensity to warrant a note. Make (6) into a slider instead which ends at (7). It should solve the intensity problem and at the same time, allow you to place a hitobject there. well hard to explain for me but (6) and (7) circles instead of a slider plays better to me as a player...
- 02:16:718 (2) - IMO a bit of oval flow works here. http://puu.sh/aVNs9/414d9b1e9c.jpg sorry I'm a fan of straight patterns orz
- 02:19:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Similar here. ^ http://puu.sh/aVNtV/0d647a786f.jpg ^ too ;.;
- 02:24:160 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow. mine is better just for me as is
- 02:33:695 (4) - This really would play better if it faced the other direction (ctrl+G) IMO did ctrl+g
- 02:35:556 (2) - Move this a bit to the left so that it exceeds the X-axis of the previous slider a bit. This will help in flow. http://puu.sh/aVNFQ/c8dfa0cb0e.jpg I don't feel anything changes but done
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better. for me better as is ><
- 03:05:672 (4,5) - This plays oddly since you have your vocal at 03:05:788 which is never hit by the notes here. Either make into an outright stream or just add a note there. yeah I wanted to follow the vocals there but some patterns that I have tried to follow the vocals were awkward for me, so I decided to put circles / sliders for the bass-drum here. I feel it fits..
- 03:23:463 (1,2,3) - I expected a stream here since you were going for the build up with those 1/4s from earlier I didn't want to make any streams for this map, I have done 03:05:091 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - but it's not really long, but need 9 circles to be a stream here that's why I didn't put a stream here.
- 03:27:184 () - Move break here like what you did in Hard. my fault, done
- 03:44:160 (4) - Ctrl+G here for better flow? same reason as the sliders that I have done like this flow.

[Hard]
- I've been more lax on your same-end facing sliders here since it feels like a motif in this difficulty, but in general, same-end facing sliders don't flow as well compared to those which face the opposite end. orz same end sliders are good as much as opposite end sliders for me --
- 00:46:253 (5,6,7,1) - The current pattern doesn't flow well IMO. Maybe something like http://puu.sh/aVO9z/8b524d26b8.jpg ? as I mentioned in Insane, I'M A FAN OF STRAIGHT FLOW OTL
- 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4) - Change pattern to http://puu.sh/aVOcY/0a36168efd.jpg ? adjusted on my own.
- 01:13:928 (3) - Place this up a bit more for better oval flow. http://puu.sh/aVOg0/07e8a13579.jpg The stack won't be that noticeable anymore by that time anyway. yeah nice
- 01:22:532 (1,2,3) - If you wanted to make it flow properly, http://puu.sh/aVOoq/a48db25736.jpg would have been a better arrangement, but you have to fix the pattern after this.
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 02:13:230 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow. it will be forced flow between 02:12:532 (1) - and 02:13:230 (2) -
- 02:18:579 (2) - Place this up for better oval flow. I'm probably into straight flow orz
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better. both break stuffs are same as Insane.

thanks for modding! the flow suggestions (well sorry for some sliders) were helpful to polish appearance for the overall mapset.

captin1

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2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-17T16:46:39+00:00

did all three, might want to do time links like 01:49:044 - next time, so that they don't link to an object

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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2014-08-18T15:05:49+00:00

Hello there from my modding queue
I will try my best to mod this ><

[General]
You have break time but no check at letterbox during breaktime ?

[Insane]

00:08:811 (2) - Maybe you can move slider tail down a little bit so it become nice flow and also symmetry with 00:09:742 (4) - http://puu.sh/aXyKk/6befc51fa1.jpg
00:11:835 (1,2,3,4) - I think if you move (4) to lining with (1) you will get nice square shape http://puu.sh/aXyUv/253a01e029.jpg
00:21:602 (6) - x+5, I like it to be line up with 00:20:905 (5) - 's tail
00:31:602 (5) - I suggest Ctrl+G this to emphasis in high-pitched vocal here
00:54:393 (1,2) - This blanket can improve
01:19:974 (5,6) - Doesn't looks like good line up since (5) form nice triangle shape with 01:18:114 (1,2) - so how about move (5) to x=200 y=172 and move (6) to x=225 y=281
01:22:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - I really like pattern here but I guess you can make spacing of 01:22:532 (1,3) - , 01:23:463 (2,3) - , 01:23:230 (1,4) - more consistent http://puu.sh/aXA11/615b456747.jpg sorry but I can't provide information like x=? y=? since it has so many NC here and it will waste some space here so if you want information like that pm me in-game or use forum pm
01:39:044 (5) - Move to x=420 y=255 for same spacing of 01:38:811 (4) - and 01:38:114 (3) - 's tail
01:41:602 (3,4) - I see you change spacing suddenly here but I don't know what the reason for that (emphasis instrument?) but I like to form a square pattern here with 01:41:137 (1,2) - and when I change to square pattern http://puu.sh/aXADp/a7c70933e2.jpg it doesn't hurt spacing for the next notes much too
01:45:323 (4) - Maybe you can lower hitsound volume here it might be too lound and the music also sound low compare to the previous note here 01:44:858 (3) -
02:24:160 (2) - Ctrl+G because I want to emphasis in high-pitched vocal just like 00:31:602 (5) -
02:26:253 (2,4) - I like this more if you line up these 2 notes >.< http://puu.sh/aXB4b/2a0b3f97a2.jpg
02:28:346 (4) - y+4 you line up 02:27:649 (1,2) - perfectly and you should line up (3) and (4) perfectly too
02:30:207 (5) - Ctrl+G because the music seem to start to change to low tone here and you might need to Ctrl+G 02:30:672 (6) - too because the music change to high tone and I want to emphasis this tone by using slider to let the player know the music's tone is changed
02:36:951 (4) - y=144 you line up 02:36:253 (1,3) - perfectly and you should line up (2) and (4) perfectly too
02:37:649 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe you can make spacing of 02:38:114 (5,1) - consistent like 02:37:649 (2,3,4,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1939912
03:13:695 (4) - x=88 if you intend to line up this with 03:13:230 (1,2,3) -
03:32:765 (1,2,4) - Maybe you can improve triangle shape here
03:35:323 (6) - x=156 if you intend to line up this with 03:34:858 (4) - and if you made change this, change this 03:35:788 (7) - too so it line up perfectly
03:36:253 (1,2) - This here sound weird because blue line doesn't has beat sound maybe you can lower the volume at (1)'s tail
03:41:370 (1,2,3) - x=226 y=255 you nearly spacing perfectly with 03:40:905 (3) -
03:44:160 (4) - Same as 00:31:602 (5) - and 02:30:207 (5) -

[Hard]
AR=7.2 eh! why it not 7.0 ? Well I just hate precise AR (except AR x.5)

00:08:114 (1,2) - Ctrl+G (2) so you don't do symmetry pattern only for this part?
00:39:509 (5) - Ctrl+G emphasis higher tone in music and to keep using of symmetry pattern just like 00:31:137 (3,4,5) -
00:43:928 (3,5) - Spacing doesn't looks good maybe line up these just like what you did with 00:43:463 (1,2,4) -
00:50:672 (1,3) - You can improve blanket here
01:21:137 (3,4,5) - Maybe improve square shape here
01:27:881 (6) - one grid down and this will line up with 01:27:184 (4) - perfectly
02:16:486 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you can improve square shape here
02:34:858 (1) - Move to x=136 y=69 so this will spacing with (8) same as 02:34:160 (6,7) -
02:36:951 (4,5) - Blanket can improve here
02:39:509 (3) - Ctrl+G because emphasis higher tone in music
03:09:044 (1,3,4) - x=256 I like it to be line up perfectly
03:34:160 (5) - x=456 y=204 so this will spacing with (4) same as 03:33:463 (2,3) -
03:34:625 (3,4,5) - Maybe improve triangle shape here
03:44:625 (3) - Ctrl+G because higher tone in music and also follow the symmetry pattern you do here 03:43:695 (1,2) -
03:45:788 (1) - x=261 y=208 if you intend to line up this with 03:45:556 (5) - and you also get nice triangle shape of 03:45:323 (4,5,1) -

[captin's Normal]
CS=3.3 eh! you can make it 3.5 or 3.0 captin xD (Because I don't like precise adjustment)
Slider tick rate=2 it just looks weird to have only one slider dot at the end of the slider like this 00:06:021 (2) - I like consistent slider dot

00:44:858 (3) - x+4 if you intend to line up this with 00:44:393 (2) -
00:49:044 (1) - Move to x=254 y=8 for consistent spacing with 00:48:114 (4,2) -
00:59:277 (4) - I see you want to emphasis in vocal so you decide to repeat at blue line well you just follow the instrument from here 00:56:486 (1) - but you decide to change to follow vocal xD oh well I suggest you to repeat at white line or just make it a regular slider
01:39:742 - Maybe you can add a note here the music here just really nice to follow I would like it if you put a note here for tuh-tuh-tuh tuh--tuh tuh tuh---tuh tuh tuh sound here >< if you add a note here do the same to this 01:43:463 - too
01:44:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really nice change in rhythm here I like it also you can line up (5) and (6) for better triangle shape of 01:47:649 (5,6,1) -
02:11:370 (2) - y+4 if you intend to line up this with 02:10:905 (1) -
02:34:858 (3,4) - Line up?
02:46:951 (6,1) - You can improve blanket here
03:15:788 (3,4) - Line up?

That's all
Well done really nice mapset

I give this map a star

Good luck

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-18T17:52:28+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
Hello there from my modding queue
I will try my best to mod this ><

[General]
You have break time but no check at letterbox during breaktime ? I don't like it :p

[Insane]
00:08:811 (2) - Maybe you can move slider tail down a little bit so it become nice flow and also symmetry with 00:09:742 (4) - http://puu.sh/aXyKk/6befc51fa1.jpg done
00:11:835 (1,2,3,4) - I think if you move (4) to lining with (1) you will get nice square shape http://puu.sh/aXyUv/253a01e029.jpg I feel nothing between the screen shot and current one ==
00:21:602 (6) - x+5, I like it to be line up with 00:20:905 (5) - 's tail probably current one is better flow
00:31:602 (5) - I suggest Ctrl+G this to emphasis in high-pitched vocal here no need to emphasize the vocals and I like mine ><
00:54:393 (1,2) - This blanket can improve tried but I'm not sure it's better, my blanket skill can't be improved forever
01:19:974 (5,6) - Doesn't looks like good line up since (5) form nice triangle shape with 01:18:114 (1,2) - so how about move (5) to x=200 y=172 and move (6) to x=225 y=281 current flow is much better to play, 01:20:439 (1) - move to the bottom to be straight line with 01:20:207 (6) - though
01:22:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - I really like pattern here but I guess you can make spacing of 01:22:532 (1,3) - , 01:23:463 (2,3) - , 01:23:230 (1,4) - more consistent http://puu.sh/aXA11/615b456747.jpg sorry but I can't provide information like x=? y=? since it has so many NC here and it will waste some space here so if you want information like that pm me in-game or use forum pm no one cares the spacing while playing and I probably can't adjust them properly, orz
01:39:044 (5) - Move to x=420 y=255 for same spacing of 01:38:811 (4) - and 01:38:114 (3) - 's tail :o why? it ruins a jump here..
01:41:602 (3,4) - I see you change spacing suddenly here but I don't know what the reason for that (emphasis instrument?) but I like to form a square pattern here with 01:41:137 (1,2) - and when I change to square pattern http://puu.sh/aXADp/a7c70933e2.jpg it doesn't hurt spacing for the next notes much too the spacing was just for fun to play, fixed now bit I might change to current one again
01:45:323 (4) - Maybe you can lower hitsound volume here it might be too lound and the music also sound low compare to the previous note here 01:44:858 (3) - yes
02:24:160 (2) - Ctrl+G because I want to emphasis in high-pitched vocal just like 00:31:602 (5) - I already emphasized by slider jumps
02:26:253 (2,4) - I like this more if you line up these 2 notes >.< http://puu.sh/aXB4b/2a0b3f97a2.jpg fixed by moving 02:25:788 (1,2,3) -
02:28:346 (4) - y+4 you line up 02:27:649 (1,2) - perfectly and you should line up (3) and (4) perfectly too maybe fixed this on above
02:30:207 (5) - Ctrl+G because the music seem to start to change to low tone here and you might need to Ctrl+G 02:30:672 (6) - too because the music change to high tone and I want to emphasis this tone by using slider to let the player know the music's tone is changed the flow will be weird :< and no one notices the tone changes are noticing with patterns.
02:36:951 (4) - y=144 you line up 02:36:253 (1,3) - perfectly and you should line up (2) and (4) perfectly too 148 instead because better http://puu.sh/aXPVJ/57dcddbfc3.png
02:37:649 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe you can make spacing of 02:38:114 (5,1) - consistent like 02:37:649 (2,3,4,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1939912 current one looks much better, also I DON'T EVEN CARE SPACING CONSISTENCY...
03:13:695 (4) - x=88 if you intend to line up this with 03:13:230 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure what you are saying but yours is... : http://puu.sh/aXQ6n/cde836a727.png
03:32:765 (1,2,4) - Maybe you can improve triangle shape here not sure but done 1 grid up 03:32:998 (2) -
03:35:323 (6) - x=156 if you intend to line up this with 03:34:858 (4) - and if you made change this, change this 03:35:788 (7) - too so it line up perfectly I mostly don't care the line up things, and this slider is put on the middle between 03:34:393 (1,2,3) - and 03:34:858 (4) - http://puu.sh/aXQrY/12f0f75c9e.png
03:36:253 (1,2) - This here sound weird because blue line doesn't has beat sound maybe you can lower the volume at (1)'s tail there's end of the vocal, anyway decreased the volume by 20
03:41:370 (1,2,3) - x=226 y=255 you nearly spacing perfectly with 03:40:905 (3) - the perfect spacing was just 1 grid up :<
03:44:160 (4) - Same as 00:31:602 (5) - and 02:30:207 (5) - same
[Hard]
AR=7.2 eh! why it not 7.0 ? Well I just hate precise AR (except AR x.5)

Delis wrote:
[Hard]
Ar7.2 make no sense I think.If you think ar7 is slow then try ar7.5.But I think ar7 is enough. AR7.2 will be AR10 on Hard Rock, and it makes a bit harder to play with DTHR. or I would rather change to AR6.5 to make easier for DTHR.
+ AR7.5 is probably kinda fast for this song

00:08:114 (1,2) - Ctrl+G (2) so you don't do symmetry pattern only for this part? yes no need to make a consistency here
00:39:509 (5) - Ctrl+G emphasis higher tone in music and to keep using of symmetry pattern just like 00:31:137 (3,4,5) - no...
00:43:928 (3,5) - Spacing doesn't looks good maybe line up these just like what you did with 00:43:463 (1,2,4) - no need to be lined up, 00:43:463 (1,2,3) - a triangle =.=
00:50:672 (1,3) - You can improve blanket here I ignored blanket pattern here
01:21:137 (3,4,5) - Maybe improve square shape here how should I improve..
01:27:881 (6) - one grid down and this will line up with 01:27:184 (4) - perfectly totally don't care but moved
02:16:486 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you can improve square shape here nah..
02:34:858 (1) - Move to x=136 y=69 so this will spacing with (8) same as 02:34:160 (6,7) - I'm really lazy to fix this thing..
02:36:951 (4,5) - Blanket can improve here 02:36:951 (4) - make a smooth curved slider
02:39:509 (3) - Ctrl+G because emphasis higher tone in music this jump is enough for emphasis
03:09:044 (1,3,4) - x=256 I like it to be line up perfectly i dunno but only moved 03:09:974 (4) -
03:34:160 (5) - x=456 y=204 so this will spacing with (4) same as 03:33:463 (2,3) - it's not same, current one is close to the same spacing.
03:34:625 (3,4,5) - Maybe improve triangle shape here this is not a triangle, just this looks like a triangle --;
03:44:625 (3) - Ctrl+G because higher tone in music and also follow the symmetry pattern you do here 03:43:695 (1,2) - no
03:45:788 (1) - x=261 y=208 if you intend to line up this with 03:45:556 (5) - and you also get nice triangle shape of 03:45:323 (4,5,1) - intended
That's all
Well done really nice mapset
I give this map a star

Good luck

thank you for modding and the star! \:DD/

also updated captin's changes p/3314232

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-18T23:09:52+00:00

"ShiraKai"

[captin's Normal]

00:23:928 (2) - blanket? prefer mine
00:40:672 (4) - remove whistle at end? sounds fine as is
00:58:114 (3) - add whistle at start?
02:16:253 (3) - ^
01:41:137 (2) - add finish at start? no thanks
02:35:788 (4) - move to x:264,y:11? 02:35:788 (5) - x:366,y:49? prefer mine
02:48:579 (2) - remove finish and add clap. why do you use finish? i think the sound is same at here.(01:30:439 (2) - ) finish is in music, but added clap
03:05:788 (1) - add whistle at start with Volume 30% ?

"CelsiusLK"

[captin's Normal]
CS=3.3 eh! you can make it 3.5 or 3.0 captin xD (Because I don't like precise adjustment) remember to keep the mapper's intent in mind when you mod, not what you want to see. I want the precise adjustment
Slider tick rate=2 it just looks weird to have only one slider dot at the end of the slider like this 00:06:021 (2) - I like consistent slider dot

prefer it as is

00:44:858 (3) - x+4 if you intend to line up this with 00:44:393 (2) - sorry no
00:49:044 (1) - Move to x=254 y=8 for consistent spacing with 00:48:114 (4,2) - but it already is consistent?
00:59:277 (4) - I see you want to emphasis in vocal so you decide to repeat at blue line well you just follow the instrument from here 00:56:486 (1) - but you decide to change to follow vocal xD oh well I suggest you to repeat at white line or just make it a regular slider it follows instrument too though
01:39:742 - Maybe you can add a note here the music here just really nice to follow I would like it if you put a note here for tuh-tuh-tuh tuh--tuh tuh tuh---tuh tuh tuh sound here >< if you add a note here do the same to this 01:43:463 - too prefer not to, more simple rhythm
01:44:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really nice change in rhythm here I like it also you can line up (5) and (6) for better triangle shape of 01:47:649 (5,6,1) - triangle is fine as is
02:11:370 (2) - y+4 if you intend to line up this with 02:10:905 (1) - not necessary
02:34:858 (3,4) - Line up? ^
02:46:951 (6,1) - You can improve blanket here fine as is
03:15:788 (3,4) - Line up? ^

thanks

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while i'm here,

TitleUnicode:凪 -nagi-

putting Nagi -nagi- seems really stupid, but might be the correct metadata http://vgmdb.net/album/42900

sigh

Delis

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Delis 2014-08-19T01:11:08+00:00

updated, and the title... it looks worse but ~~changed inb4 Lanturn coming~~ CHANGED CHANGED

Last edited by Delis 2014-08-19T01:19:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-08-19T01:19:09+00:00

Oh, hi

Edit: lol

Delis

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Delis 2014-08-19T01:24:25+00:00

dAMN I just edited a word and you posted before finished editing... nice NiNJA (I'm not sure ninja means in osu but)

Loneight

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1,332 posts

Joined January 2011

Loneight 2014-08-23T11:37:53+00:00

Hi o/
Request from My googledoc.

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[general]

add 1000~1500 ms to lead-in , though it will increase automatically when the map rank, the first-note still too suddenly appear for me ;w;

[captin's Normal]

Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 -
03:29:044 -
00:28:579 (2) - remove the whistle at end to make 00:28:579 (2,3) - 's hitsound have a diversification? because I heard 00:29:277 -'s piano volume is higher than 00:29:044 - . If you want to keep, reduce the volume at 00:29:044 -
01:45:788 (3) - feel a little weird, because the soft-hitnormal is a little weak to make a hitting feeling, how about add a whistle at start? though it not follow any musical instruments, would be better for player to feel obvious rhythm
02:11:835 (3) - seems you miss a clap at end, don't you? (run
02:15:323 (2) - add a finish at end? I feel there has a finish-sound like this slider's start

nice diff! has smooth flow and great rhythm!

[Hard]

Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 -
03:29:044 -
~~some 1/2 jump is easier to misread to 1/1 rhythm, for example: 01:29:742 (5,1) - , how about increase the AR to 7.5?~~ alright, seems other modder had pointed this lol
00:29:044 - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) -
00:44:160 (4) - add a whistle? I think there is same as 00:29:277 (6) - 's start
00:53:928 (5,6) - try ctrl+G? flow would be better IMO. And 02:08:346 (6,7) - same as here
02:19:974 (1) - the flow makes me feel uncomfortable, try to change the slider's direction or use other method?
explain

great diff :3

[Insane]

Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 -
00:28:579 (1) - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) -
00:44:160 (4) - same as Hard's 00:44:160 (4) -
03:10:439 (3) -try ctrl+G, make it curve down would be more suitable for vocal, also better for flow
03:44:160 (4,5) - I feel a little weird, seems there should have a jump to emphasize the vocal's change, so 03:44:160 (4) - try ctrl+G, also would make flow better

nothing to say, anyway, great job!

that's all!
good luck and star for you (run

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-23T12:25:59+00:00

Loneight wrote:
Hi o/
Request from My googledoc.

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue
[general]
add 1000~1500 ms to lead-in , though it will increase automatically when the map rank, the first-note still too suddenly appear for me ;w; 0 was enough I guess but it's probably better, done :>
[Hard]
Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 -
03:29:044 -
~~some 1/2 jump is easier to misread to 1/1 rhythm, for example: 01:29:742 (5,1) - , how about increase the AR to 7.5?~~ alright, seems other modder had pointed this lol haha yeah... I totally suppose 7.5 is fast for this.. also I'm not sure for players who play hard diffs, but at least some 1/2 jumps are not that hard to read for me with the current AR.
00:29:044 - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) - yea
00:44:160 (4) - add a whistle? I think there is same as 00:29:277 (6) - 's start same as Insane diff, ><;
00:53:928 (5,6) - try ctrl+G? flow would be better IMO. And 02:08:346 (6,7) - same as here hmm it will be awkward for the straight slider, I made a zigzag flow 00:53:230 (3,4,5,6) - here. I dunno but it flows worse for me ;w; and 02:08:346 (6,7) - I don't wanna hide under 02:07:649 (4) - head, it would be much harder to read on HD >.< sorry and I think the flow for the straight 1/1 slider is not that bad...
02:19:974 (1) - the flow makes me feel uncomfortable, try to change the slider's direction or use other method? tried to fix! I'm not sure I did though..
explain
great diff :3 XD I thought this was bad, thank you!

[Insane]
Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 - oops, 02:51:835 - decreased the volume by 10 to make a difference with the green line (and actually it fits), and added 20% for the spinner
00:28:579 (1) - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) - sure
00:44:160 (4) - same as Hard's 00:44:160 (4) - I think it doesn't fit because of bass-drum at 00:44:393 - I'm not sure but somehow awkward to listen..
03:10:439 (3) -try ctrl+G, make it curve down would be more suitable for vocal, also better for flow uh sorry I prefer current flow orz
03:44:160 (4,5) - I feel a little weird, seems there should have a jump to emphasize the vocal's change, so 03:44:160 (4) - try ctrl+G, also would make flow better I didn't like the ctrl+g pattern made a jump between (4) and (5) + rearranged some patterns instead.
nothing to say, anyway, great job!
that's all!
good luck and star for you (run

thanks lone for modding and the star! (don't run ww

@captin: update before look through Loneight's mods, changed audio lead-in for your diff too. (it's okay if you applied before update, it doesn't take long to change)

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-08-23T14:41:28+00:00

star

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-23T14:45:55+00:00

thank you! \:D/

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-24T14:27:47+00:00

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane

01:30:207 this vocal beat should be followed
02:08:346 (6,1) - blanket
generally fine lol, can't find much issues

Hard

02:24:625 (3,1) - blanket
03:29:742 (3,1) - ^

captin's Normal

00:32:067 (3,4) - blanket?
01:27:416 (4,6) - ^
02:46:951 (6,1) - blanket perfect
03:55:556 (5,6) - ^

sry for poor mod orz

a star to u, good song and map

good luck

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-24T20:40:31+00:00

fixed those all from Loneight, HW I think the blankets are all fine enough as is.

thanks!

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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352,276,140439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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280,184,143695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,264,144160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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56,312,159044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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112,204,166021,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,288,166486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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300,340,168114,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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196,308,170439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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476,352,171835,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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348,120,197881,5,4,0:0:0:0:
252,172,198346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-24T20:58:49+00:00

Hollow Wings wrote:
from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Insane
01:30:207 this vocal beat should be followed indeed, added
02:08:346 (6,1) - blanket t-tried
generally fine lol, can't find much issues
Hard
02:24:625 (3,1) - blanket no idea you meant 02:25:788 (1) - , tried
03:29:742 (3,1) - ^ mmmmm how to, did anyway

a star to u, good song and map

good luck

thank you for modding and the star HW! --/
you should have better if put code or axis for blanket in your mod, mappers who made a lot of weird blanket can't fix the blanket problems properly, it should be helpful

also updated captin diff

mingmichael

1,720 posts

Joined May 2012

mingmichael 2014-08-25T12:07:21+00:00

ohooo nagi nagiii <3 star ~★

btw Delis, the romanised title is unrankable actually :c melophia told me on my map to change Nagi-nagi- to be Nagi, and it was unranked because of it. actually we map a same song, but i mapped the short one and you map the full ver hehee

Hollow Wings

1,514 posts

Joined July 2010

Hollow Wings 2014-08-25T13:15:40+00:00

Delis wrote:
thank you for modding and the star HW! --/
you should have better if put code or axis for blanket in your mod, mappers who made a lot of weird blanket can't fix the blanket problems properly, it should be helpful ok, i see, maybe i'll try, thx for that tip :3

also updated captin diff

litoluna

1,073 posts

Joined April 2011

litoluna 2014-08-26T10:18:26+00:00

hi hi i i

twitter kara

[Insane]

00:54:393 (1) - ここCtrl+Gしたほうが僕の好みだったり。一つ前の00:50:672 (1,2) - ともspacing合うんじゃないかなと思いました。
今の下にAIMしていく形も好きなので提案として受け取ってくれると
01:59:742 (1,1) - voに合わせたほうが終わりがわかりやすい気がしました。
01:59:742 (1) - end at 02:01:137 -
02:01:602 - spinner end at 02:02:998 - or 02:03:463 -
02:02:998 - で終わらせた場合02:03:463 - に1/2sliderが合うかも。
02:08:346 (6) - 終端にclapあったほうが良さそうo.o
03:28:811 (1) - 03:28:811 - の緑線でBPMx0.8になってて03:29:044 - の緑線でBPMx1.00になってるのってミス？
03:29:044 - の緑線消して大丈夫だと思う。
Hardはx1.00で2つ引いてあったから03:29:044 - 消してokだと思う。

[Normal]

03:04:858 - and 03:29:044 - unnecessary green line?

低BPM作るのうますぎ
rank まってまっす

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-26T13:58:47+00:00

りとるなたそ～～

litoluna wrote:
hi hi i i

twitter kara wwwwww

[Insane]
00:54:393 (1) - ここCtrl+Gしたほうが僕の好みだったり。一つ前の00:50:672 (1,2) - ともspacing合うんじゃないかなと思いました。
今の下にAIMしていく形も好きなので提案として受け取ってくれると CTRL+Gそのままじゃないですがそんな感じに変えてみました！
01:59:742 (1,1) - voに合わせたほうが終わりがわかりやすい気がしました。ここは確か元々それで、指摘されて変えた部分な（はず）なのでこのままで様子見したいです＞＜。
01:59:742 (1) - end at 02:01:137 -
02:01:602 - spinner end at 02:02:998 - or 02:03:463 -
02:02:998 - で終わらせた場合02:03:463 - に1/2sliderが合うかも。って書いてから続いてるのに気づいてこれええな～だったんで1/2スライダーは入れないでいじってみました！
02:08:346 (6) - 終端にclapあったほうが良さそうo.o このスライダー作ったときに消えましたx.xb
03:28:811 (1) - 03:28:811 - の緑線でBPMx0.8になってて03:29:044 - の緑線でBPMx1.00になってるのってミス？
03:29:044 - の緑線消して大丈夫だと思う。yes
Hardはx1.00で2つ引いてあったから03:29:044 - 消してokだと思う。ok~~
[Normal]
03:04:858 - and 03:29:044 - unnecessary green line? 片方ムリヤリunnecessaryじゃなくさせました！！
低BPM作るのうますぎ
rank まってまっす

modありです！！本当にしてくれると思わなかった。。。（今度違う譜面頼もうと思ってたｗｗ）

@mingmichael I will ask some BATs later to confirm that, thank you for pointing out there!　(EDIT) oops, forgot to write thanks for the star too! (EDIT2) changed!

@Hollow Wings no blanket mods in harder diffs = best way though

Yasora

2,702 posts

Joined May 2010

Yasora 2014-08-29T14:21:23+00:00

long song omg

Normal

00:39:974 (3,4) - how about make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1979483 ? slider (4) for following long vocal
00:53:695 (3,4) - honestly I don't really think overlap like this is good. it's like (4) forced place in there 8(
01:16:718 (3,4) - similar with 00:39:974 (3,4) - or if you don't want change, at last give whistle in here.. feels circle (4) is empty lol
01:28:346 (5) - add whistle like 02:46:486 (5) -
01:34:160 - circle with clap?
02:17:416 (4) - whistle on reverse
02:36:253 (5,1) - similar think with 00:53:695 (3,4) - why don't try to make slider (5) tail direction toward (1)? the flow more better imo
03:13:230 (4) - whistle
03:15:091 (2,3) - whistle at beginning. why the whistle suddenly stop in here lol
03:41:370 (5,1) - same as 02:36:253 (5,1) -
03:56:602 - change volume into 30~40% ? finish in spinner end sounds too loud

Hard

00:02:067 - 00:05:788 - 00:09:509 - add note for piano? the current is nice too, but following the piano more be accurate owo like in 00:12:532 (2) -
00:49:509 (4) - move 4 grid left? just make it same spacing between (3) and (5) huehueuhe
00:50:672 (1) - it seems better to just blanket (3)? http://puu.sh/bcIqv/b2c33bff7e.jpg
00:52:532 (1,2) - swap nc. you added nc almost in long white tick right?
00:57:416 (5) - why you skipped cymbal sound in red tick ;w;
01:02:532 (2) - is it for jump purpose? but I guess it's better have spacing like between 01:02:881 (4) - and 01:03:695 (1) - lol I mean move it to 168|172
01:10:439 (4) - stack this more better? or it's just me...
02:15:556 (5) - same as 00:57:416 (5) -
02:19:625 (5) - ctrl + g more be cool o3o
03:15:788 (4) - add whistle at start. feels weird since you added one in (2) and (3) orz
03:25:323 - can you just remove this break... it seems not really needed and weird in gameplay or start break from here
03:40:672 (2) - move 1 grid right hueuheu
04:04:393 - lower volume into 30 ~ 40%?

Insane

00:44:160 (4) - nc here? I just don't expect it's a jump at first lol also that nc make 1-2-3 combo colour uuuwuuwuw
00:50:439 (5) - stack this more better? or it's just me again?
00:58:114 (9) - add finish. it feels connected with finish in 00:57:184 (5) - and 00:58:811 (3) -
01:31:835 (5,1) - swap nc based on your pattern and long white tick hue
02:06:253 (3) - ctrl+g?
02:15:788 - add note with finish.. the cymbal obviously can heard
02:19:277 (1,2,3,4) - um ye flow is nice but imo it's can more interesting if like this -> http://puu.sh/bcJY8/981c62e9c6.jpg
02:24:625 (3) - move 6 grid right? looks better if 02:23:695 (1) - 02:24:160 (2) - and here have similar spacing
03:22:300 (5) - maybe add finish at end with lower volume is nice imo
03:23:463 (1) - ^ but at start
03:25:323 - same as in hard
04:04:393 - lower volume into 30 ~ 40%?

nice map

Melophobia

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Joined September 2011

Melophobia 2014-08-31T04:20:43+00:00

mingmichael wrote:
melophia

*okay*

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-31T04:50:14+00:00

"Yasora"

long song omg

Normal

00:39:974 (3,4) - how about make it like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1979483 ? slider (4) for following long vocal nice
00:53:695 (3,4) - honestly I don't really think overlap like this is good. it's like (4) forced place in there 8( idk i like it
01:16:718 (3,4) - similar with 00:39:974 (3,4) - or if you don't want change, at last give whistle in here.. feels circle (4) is empty lol yeah added some whistles throughout
01:28:346 (5) - add whistle like 02:46:486 (5) -
01:34:160 - circle with clap? mm no thanks
02:17:416 (4) - whistle on reverse
02:36:253 (5,1) - similar think with 00:53:695 (3,4) - why don't try to make slider (5) tail direction toward (1)? the flow more better imo I like this, think it looks nice
03:13:230 (4) - whistle
03:15:091 (2,3) - whistle at beginning. why the whistle suddenly stop in here lol idk ww
03:41:370 (5,1) - same as 02:36:253 (5,1) - as before
03:56:602 - change volume into 30~40% ? finish in spinner end sounds too loud

nice map

thanks!

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124,192,144625,2,0,P|116:137|121:82,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,36,145323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,84,145788,6,0,P|312:104|364:96,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,76,146486,2,0,P|438:123|476:168,2,110,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,44,147649,2,0,P|304:24|252:32,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,56,148346,2,0,L|208:120,1,55,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,204,149044,1,4,0:0:0:0:
204,300,149509,6,0,P|248:256|260:208,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,150207,1,2,0:0:0:0:
360,124,150672,1,2,0:0:0:0:
468,152,151137,2,0,P|474:214|492:268,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,304,151835,1,10,0:0:0:0:
456,304,152067,2,0,P|396:276|304:312,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,332,153230,6,0,P|149:316|84:312,2,110,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,228,154625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,228,154858,2,0,P|236:141|248:60,1,165,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,8,155788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
336,52,156253,2,0,P|364:60|396:64,2,55,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,104,156951,6,0,P|368:156|368:216,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,300,157881,2,0,P|236:264|196:256,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,252,158579,1,2,0:0:0:0:
56,312,159044,1,2,0:0:0:0:
4,216,159509,2,0,P|1:157|12:96,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,68,160207,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,136,160672,6,0,P|184:148|248:144,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,184,161370,2,0,P|316:180|396:188,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,228,162300,1,4,0:0:0:0:
492,228,162532,2,0,P|456:277|357:289,2,165,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,172,164160,5,6,0:0:0:0:
376,152,164625,2,0,P|328:136|284:96,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,100,165323,2,0,P|180:116|136:156,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,204,166021,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,288,166486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,232,166951,2,0,P|344:228|404:312,1,165,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,340,168114,5,4,0:0:0:0:
196,308,168579,1,12,0:0:0:0:
164,204,169044,2,0,L|160:92,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,256,170207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,170439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,260,170905,2,0,P|328:256|420:276,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,352,171835,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,182998,12,2,184625,0:0:0:0:
176,216,185788,6,0,P|204:256|320:252,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,186718,2,0,L|468:240,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,136,187649,2,0,B|396:120|396:120|352:72,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,188811,2,0,P|224:108|192:176,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,189509,2,0,P|192:252|68:260,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,212,190439,6,0,L|56:96,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,72,191370,2,0,P|220:108|328:76,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,16,192532,2,0,L|452:12,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,120,193230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,193695,2,0,L|432:288,2,55,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,160,194625,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,195091,2,0,P|156:200|108:192,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,208,195788,2,0,L|76:76,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,44,196486,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,24,196951,2,0,P|216:20|292:40,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,120,197881,5,4,0:0:0:0:
252,172,198346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,172,198579,2,0,P|208:176|132:156,2,110,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,120,199974,2,0,L|352:56,2,55,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,200672,2,0,L|384:264,2,82.5,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,144,201602,5,4,0:0:0:0:
504,224,202067,1,4,0:0:0:0:
504,224,202300,2,0,P|456:240|404:344,1,165,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,203463,12,0,205323,0:0:0:0:
244,200,208811,6,0,B|284:220|316:184|376:216,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,280,209742,2,0,P|452:256|432:132,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,210905,6,0,P|280:104|212:92,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,211602,2,0,P|128:112|68:124,2,110,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,176,212765,2,0,P|208:216|264:248,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,213463,2,0,L|324:316,1,55,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,340,214160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,256,214625,6,0,L|485:141,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,152,215323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,132,215788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,24,216253,2,0,P|247:27|180:20,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,216951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,56,217184,2,0,P|188:88|180:208,1,165,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,218346,6,0,L|232:308,2,110,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,240,219742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,240,219974,2,0,P|52:184|52:89,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,44,220905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,32,221370,2,0,P|168:24|192:12,2,55,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,76,222067,6,0,P|180:120|172:204,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,296,222998,2,0,P|188:328|256:352,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,223695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,268,224160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,176,224625,2,0,L|320:60,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,32,225323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,128,225788,6,0,P|188:140|116:136,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,124,226486,2,0,L|92:248,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,340,227416,1,4,0:0:0:0:
68,340,227649,2,0,P|156:312|232:356,2,165,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,324,229277,5,4,0:0:0:0:
24,216,229742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,216,229974,2,0,P|48:176|104:132,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,140,230672,2,0,P|195:106|224:59,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,16,231602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,56,232067,2,0,P|452:108|408:212,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,124,233230,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,196,233695,1,4,0:0:0:0:
172,124,234160,2,0,P|160:88|156:16,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,158,235323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,235556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,292,236021,2,0,P|256:307|203:293,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,236951,12,4,244393,0:0:0:0:

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-09-03T17:33:17+00:00

Yasora wrote:
long song omg

Hard
00:02:067 - 00:05:788 - 00:09:509 - add note for piano? the current is nice too, but following the piano more be accurate owo like in 00:12:532 (2) - they're able to ignore orz
00:49:509 (4) - move 4 grid left? just make it same spacing between (3) and (5) huehueuhe 3 grid looks cute
00:50:672 (1) - it seems better to just blanket (3)? http://puu.sh/bcIqv/b2c33bff7e.jpg somehow I suck at making blanket,,, changed to another pattern
00:52:532 (1,2) - swap nc. you added nc almost in long white tick right? the nc follows the vocals/lyrics ;w; most of nc too!
00:57:416 (5) - why you skipped cymbal sound in red tick ;w; kk
01:02:532 (2) - is it for jump purpose? but I guess it's better have spacing like between 01:02:881 (4) - and 01:03:695 (1) - lol I mean move it to 168|172 okie
01:10:439 (4) - stack this more better? or it's just me... just you...
02:15:556 (5) - same as 00:57:416 (5) - ye
02:19:625 (5) - ctrl + g more be cool o3o this was opposite direction before but this was hard in this diff (some modders say so) I would like to keep as is --;
03:15:788 (4) - add whistle at start. feels weird since you added one in (2) and (3) orz missing san
03:25:323 - can you just remove this break... it seems not really needed and weird in gameplay or start break from here wtf this is best break imo ;w;
03:40:672 (2) - move 1 grid right hueuheu kkkkk
04:04:393 - lower volume into 30 ~ 40%? yea
Insane
00:44:160 (4) - nc here? I just don't expect it's a jump at first lol also that nc make 1-2-3 combo colour uuuwuuwuwit seems over nc but sure
00:50:439 (5) - stack this more better? or it's just me again? sadly, again.
00:58:114 (9) - add finish. it feels connected with finish in 00:57:184 (5) - and 00:58:811 (3) - the sound is too weak to put finish orz
01:31:835 (5,1) - swap nc based on your pattern and long white tick hue afff did nc spam
02:06:253 (3) - ctrl+g? nahh
02:15:788 - add note with finish.. the cymbal obviously can heard pleaseeee let me ignore the sound here ;w; I really don't wanna make a triplet here ._.
02:19:277 (1,2,3,4) - um ye flow is nice but imo it's can more interesting if like this -> http://puu.sh/bcJY8/981c62e9c6.jpg it was fucking weird to play ;w; also doesn't fit since the song is kind of calm
02:24:625 (3) - move 6 grid right? looks better if 02:23:695 (1) - 02:24:160 (2) - and here have similar spacing ububub 02:25:323 (4) - I prefer this flow
03:22:300 (5) - maybe add finish at end with lower volume is nice imo they don't seem to follow any sound so I don't wanna overuse finish this song.
03:23:463 (1) - ^ but at start
03:25:323 - same as in hard sameee
04:04:393 - lower volume into 30 ~ 40%? ye
nice map

thanks for modding Yasora, nice ava btw (best anime

updated normal diff too~~

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-09-03T21:07:55+00:00

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

Recheck! Don't give Kds this post =w=

[General]

looks fine to me.

[captin's Normal]

00:50:672 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:08:811 (4,5) - Same as above.
02:34:858 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this.
img
03:35:323 (2,3) - Same as above.
img
Nice Normal :3

[Hard]

OD-1 for mapset balance.
00:50:672 (1) - add whistle on slider end. and 00:51:370 (2) - remove whistle. and 00:51:602 (3) - add whistle.
00:53:695 (4) - remove whistle. and 00:53:928 (5) - add whistle.
01:02:532 (2) - and 02:20:672 (2) - remove clap. add finish.
01:06:486 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:07:184 (4) - remove whistle. and 01:07:416 (5) - add whistle.
01:21:370 (4) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:22:067 (5) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
01:27:881 (6) - add whistle on slider end.
01:36:021 (5) - add whistle on slider end. Along back melody.
02:05:091 (1) - add whistle on slider end. and 02:05:788 (2) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:08:811 (1,2) - Same as above. (hitsound pattern
02:12:532 (1,2) - Same as above.
02:15:556 (5) - add whistle on slider end.
02:28:346 (2) - add whistle. and 02:28:579 (3) - remove whistle.
02:28:346 (2,3,4) - Why do you use random Distance Snap? I think not much this part. Please use Distance Snap.
02:31:835 (2) - remove whistle. and 02:32:067 (3) - add whistle. and 02:32:300 (4) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:35:556 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse.
02:39:509 (3) - add whistle on slider end.
02:40:439 (2) - add whistle.
02:49:277 (6) - add whistle on slider head. and 02:49:742 (7) - add whistle.
03:33:463 (2,3,4,5) - Same as 02:28:346 (2,3,4) -
03:44:625 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 03:45:556 (5) - add whistle.
03:56:718 - add note?
Some hitsound pattern. Please confirm it by yourself =w=

[Insane]

00:26:718 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:36:486 (3,4,5,6) - Why do you use random Distance Snap? I think not much this part. Please use Distance Snap.
01:02:532 (2) - and 02:20:672 (7) - Same as Hard diff.
01:09:974 (6) - It is difficult to do Aim.. I think Move X:172 Y:68 better.
01:13:463 (2) - add whistle.
01:14:160 (5) - add whislte on slider end.
01:17:416 (6) - Same as above.
01:32:765 (1) - Remove New Combo. I think not need this place.
01:33:463 (2) - add clap?
01:36:253 - add note.
02:19:277 (1,2,3,4) - Why do you use different patterns? About 01:01:137 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think It's little danger.
02:24:625 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 02:25:556 (5) - add whistle. and 02:25:788 (1) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:31:137 (1,2) - Same as Hard diff. (hitsound pattern
02:32:765 (4) - add whistle.
02:34:160 (5) - add New Combo and 02:34:858 (1) - remove New Combo. Please Check 01:16:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
02:35:556 (2) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:39:509 (3,5) - slider end and circle. add whistle.
03:36:951 (3) - Move X:344 Y248. Try this. It is mere suggestion.
03:41:835 (4) - Move X:148 Y:312 try this. It is mere suggestion.
03:44:625 (5,2) - Same as 02:39:509 (3,5) - (hitsound pattern
Good job.

Call me Back.

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-09-04T09:36:30+00:00

Satellite wrote:

Red : Unrankable issue / must fix.
Bold : Should be fixed / highly suggested.
Black : Just suggestion.

Recheck! Don't give Kds this post =w=

[General]
looks fine to me.
[Hard]
OD-1 for mapset balance. I would rather raise OD + 1 for Insane, free SS for any mods sucks ._.
00:50:672 (1) - add whistle on slider end. and 00:51:370 (2) - remove whistle. and 00:51:602 (3) - add whistle. k
00:53:695 (4) - remove whistle. and 00:53:928 (5) - add whistle. dunno what you meant for but it doesn't that much here imo ._.
01:02:532 (2) - and 02:20:672 (2) - remove clap. add finish. the sound is not that strong to put finishes
01:06:486 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:07:184 (4) - remove whistle. and 01:07:416 (5) - add whistle. k
01:21:370 (4) - add whistle on slider end. and 01:22:067 (5) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end. bb
01:27:881 (6) - add whistle on slider end. sure
01:36:021 (5) - add whistle on slider end. Along back melody. k
02:05:091 (1) - add whistle on slider end. and 02:05:788 (2) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:08:811 (1,2) - Same as above. (hitsound pattern
02:12:532 (1,2) - Same as above. these done
02:15:556 (5) - add whistle on slider end. k
02:28:346 (2) - add whistle. and 02:28:579 (3) - remove whistle. the whistle at (3) is for the guitar, also adding a whistle there to make 2 whistles in a row sounds weird for me, so I would like to keep current one.
02:28:346 (2,3,4) - Why do you use random Distance Snap? I think not much this part. Please use Distance Snap. y
02:31:835 (2) - remove whistle. and 02:32:067 (3) - add whistle. and 02:32:300 (4) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end. yes
02:35:556 (2) - add whistle on slider reverse. wao
02:39:509 (3) - add whistle on slider end. kk
02:40:439 (2) - add whistle. I've removed a whistle on purpose to emphasize the bell at 02:40:672
02:49:277 (6) - add whistle on slider head. and 02:49:742 (7) - add whistle. desu
03:33:463 (2,3,4,5) - Same as 02:28:346 (2,3,4) - onaji
03:44:625 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 03:45:556 (5) - add whistle. the reason is same as 02:40:439 (2) -
03:56:718 - add note? nah
Some hitsound pattern. Please confirm it by yourself =w=
[Insane]
00:26:718 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. k
00:36:486 (3,4,5,6) - Why do you use random Distance Snap? I think not much this part. Please use Distance Snap. probably fixed, the spacing was unnoticeable though.
01:02:532 (2) - and 02:20:672 (7) - Same as Hard diff.
01:09:974 (6) - It is difficult to do Aim.. I think Move X:172 Y:68 better. soreha sasugani nai kedo sukosi kaeta
01:13:463 (2) - add whistle. b
01:14:160 (5) - add whislte on slider end. indeed the melody is able to be added a whistle, but the sound also can be ignored to me and 3 whistles in 1/2 are a bit noisy >_>
01:17:416 (6) - Same as above. kokoha yes
01:32:765 (1) - Remove New Combo. I think not need this place. http://puu.sh/bkFOz/f8bbceea21.jpg 1回やったことあるんで通りませんか
01:33:463 (2) - add clap? seems it breaks consistent pattern + for me it doesn't fit here ._.
01:36:253 - add note. dame..
02:19:277 (1,2,3,4) - Why do you use different patterns? About 01:01:137 (5,6,7,8,9) - I think It's little danger. fixed if I understand what you meant properly.
02:24:625 (3) - add whistle on slider end. and 02:25:556 (5) - add whistle. and 02:25:788 (1) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end.
02:31:137 (1,2) - Same as Hard diff. (hitsound pattern ye
02:32:765 (4) - add whistle. oops added
02:34:160 (5) - add New Combo and 02:34:858 (1) - remove New Combo. Please Check 01:16:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the nc in 1st part is following the lyrics (kagayaku) although 2nd part didn't have a lyric which is somehow words to follow. let's see, gonna try it out anyway
02:35:556 (2) - remove whistle on slider head. and add whistle on slider end. yeah
02:39:509 (3,5) - slider end and circle. add whistle. ok_
03:36:951 (3) - Move X:344 Y248. Try this. It is mere suggestion. done
03:41:835 (4) - Move X:148 Y:312 try this. It is mere suggestion. prefer current one ><
03:44:625 (5,2) - Same as 02:39:509 (3,5) - (hitsound pattern oreadded
Good job.
Call me Back.

REALmodありです～～whistleの部分は読みにくすぎたんでちゃんと適用されてなかったりリプと実際違う可能性があります-_-..

edit: changed the timing for correct place --*

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-09-04T14:13:44+00:00

Satellite wrote:
[captin's Normal]
00:50:672 (4,5) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. don't think it needs to change, this fits fine for me
02:08:811 (4,5) - Same as above.
02:34:858 (3,4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this. cool
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03:35:323 (2,3) - Same as above. yeah
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Nice Normal :3

thanks!

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Title:Nagi
TitleUnicode:凪-nagi-
Artist:Ray
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Creator:Delis
Version:captin's Normal
Source:凪のあすから
Tags:Nagi no asukara captin1
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Delis

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Delis 2014-09-04T14:19:00+00:00

updaterino

Satellite

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Satellite 2014-09-04T14:49:11+00:00

irc checked with mapper and change snap to preview time.

Bubbled.

Delis

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Delis 2014-09-05T14:24:15+00:00

Sorry but I popped by self-modding for Insane diff ><

SPOILER

00:28:113 (4,1) - changed rhythm + placement to unstack
00:29:974 (3,1) - replaced nc for no reason
00:33:695 (4,5,1,2) - changed to another pattern for more smooth flow
00:40:207 (6) - moved to the right place of 00:39:509 (5) - for better to look
00:45:091 (1,2,3) - moved to few grid down
00:53:695 (5,6,7) - separated a slider into 2 circles to make a better pattern
01:01:137 (1,2,3,4) - stacked both to make easier to play, also adjusted some patterns after this
01:08:811 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - for better flow -.-
03:35:091 (5) - sankakku tsukutta

also decreased AR by 0.2 in Hard diff

Satellite

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Satellite 2014-09-05T14:42:52+00:00

Repair Bubbled~

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-09-05T19:15:04+00:00

(*＾▽＾)／

iyasine

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iyasine 2014-09-05T20:15:53+00:00

おめ～！

captin1

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captin1 2014-09-05T20:40:39+00:00

yay

XinCrin

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XinCrin 2014-09-05T22:45:22+00:00

Congrats Delis!

Konei

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Konei 2014-09-05T23:05:03+00:00

Still a somewhat relaxing and cool song, makes me miss Nagi no Asukara ;_;.

Gratz!

litoluna

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litoluna 2014-09-06T00:12:39+00:00

きた！
おめでと～

Satellite

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Satellite 2014-09-06T02:06:46+00:00

おめでとうございます〜！

Lust

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Lust 2014-09-06T02:10:23+00:00

orz im late

congrats!

Umi

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Umi 2014-09-06T15:37:34+00:00

Just pointing something that suprised me

00:06:951 - Is this intentional ? Even if the volum of piano is reduced here, it's not a reason to ignore it. This feel really awkward and empty. You should consider adding a note.

other than this, enjoyable map. :3

Ray - Nagi

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NoHitter wrote:

CelsiusLK wrote:

Delis wrote:

[general]

[captin's Normal]

[Hard]

[Insane]

Loneight wrote:

[general]

[Hard]

[Insane]

Insane

Hard

captin's Normal

Hollow Wings wrote:

Insane

Hard

Delis wrote:

litoluna wrote:

mingmichael wrote:

Yasora wrote:

Satellite wrote:

Satellite wrote:

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