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Delis

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-07-13T02:21:40+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年9月5日 at 23:41:36

Artist: Ray
Title: Nagi
Source: 凪のあすから
Tags: Nagi no asukara captin1
BPM: 129
Filesize: 7262kb
Play Time: 04:04
Difficulties Available:

captin's Normal (1.6 stars, 258 notes)
Hard (2.99 stars, 457 notes)
Insane (3.51 stars, 601 notes)

Download: Ray - Nagi
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Delis 2015-02-06T17:19:32+00:00, edited 24 times in total.

10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2014-07-14T15:08:53+00:00

(((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o))) 1st!

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-07-20T09:05:26+00:00

OK 2nd! ~~and 0~~

*EDIT: OOOOOOO 10nya senpai (kouhai? no idea ww) thank you for the stars><\\

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-07-30T13:55:54+00:00

skype mod

[22:09:02] Satellite: skypeでかくわ
[22:09:14] Satellite: insane
[22:09:15] Satellite: 00:57:416 (1,2,3) -
[22:09:15] Satellite: これ
[22:09:16] [osu!]Delis: OK_
[22:09:28] Satellite: ここだけ前後メロディ拾ってるのに裏拾ってて
[22:10:01] Satellite: 00:57:416 - ここ単体に音あるけど
[22:10:05] Satellite: 普通に無視してメロディ拾って
[22:10:22] Satellite: こうしたさある
[22:10:24] Satellite: http://puu.sh/axlQy/0e96ee30ae.jpg
[22:10:55] [osu!]Delis: たしかに
[22:12:34] Satellite: 01:19:974 (5,6) - これ現状でも
[22:12:34] [osu!]Delis: そのpuushの3/4スライダーなんかﾍﾝじゃない？？？
[22:12:38] Satellite: いい流れなんだけど
[22:12:50] Satellite: Ctrl+Gしたほうがスライダーからだしいい流れになると思うんだけど
[22:12:55] Satellite: え
[22:12:58] Satellite: おかしくないはず
[22:13:11] Satellite: 00:57:184 - ここからスライダー
[22:13:21] [osu!]Delis: そう
[22:13:27] [osu!]Delis: 00:57:532 -
[22:13:28] [osu!]Delis: ここ
[22:13:30] [osu!]Delis: 音ないし
[22:13:36] [osu!]Delis: へんじゃない？？
[22:13:40] Satellite: まあそれはある
[22:13:45] Satellite: 00:57:649 - ここに
[22:13:48] Satellite: 歌詞があるから
[22:13:54] Satellite: スライダーエンドで拾っても単発で拾っても
[22:14:05] Satellite: どっちでも多少overmapだけどアリなんじゃないかなあ感
[22:14:36] Satellite: 00:57:416 - それかここでとめてもいいかも
[22:14:55] Satellite: http://puu.sh/axm5S/dc49e645ca.jpg
[22:14:59] Satellite: これなら裏の音でも拾えるけど
[22:15:44] Satellite: mappingってむずかしくない？
[22:16:04] [osu!]Delis: yoshi
[22:16:07] [osu!]Delis: 配置こまってたし
[22:16:09] [osu!]Delis: それにしよう
[22:16:12] Satellite: OK
[22:16:16] Satellite: 次も書く
[22:16:18] [osu!]Delis: CTRL＋GはGした
[22:16:22] Satellite: 01:22:532 (1,2) - ここも
[22:16:25] Satellite: Ctrl+Gしたほうが
[22:16:28] Satellite: Aimしやすさない？
[22:16:34] Satellite: 左回りの三角から
[22:16:45] Satellite: 次の１に飛ぶAimってなんか叩きづらかった
[22:16:54] Satellite: それならじぐざぐにしたほうが
[22:17:33] Satellite: 01:23:463 (2,3) - ここもCtrl+GしたほうがAimしやすかったんだけど
[22:17:36] Satellite: 好みの問題かも
[22:17:39] Satellite: 一度試してみて
[22:18:34] Satellite: くるくる１方向に回っていってフィットしてる音でもないし
[22:18:45] Satellite: Aimしやすさ(個人的に)の配置(?)のほうが
[22:18:47] Satellite: いいような
[22:18:56] Satellite: これは提案~
[22:18:58] Satellite: =v=
[22:19:06] [osu!]Delis: オ
[22:19:21] [osu!]Delis: 1個目のCTRL+Gした
[22:19:24] [osu!]Delis: 2個目のやつは
[22:19:37] [osu!]Delis: このままのほうがよくない？？？？？？？？？？
[22:19:40] [osu!]Delis: って感じだから・・・・・
[22:19:48] Satellite: OK
[22:19:58] Satellite: 後同じ場所の指摘で
[22:20:20] Satellite: これって私の中では行うんだけど音付け忠実な人はやらなさそうなことなんだけど
[22:20:29] Satellite: どっちかっていうとサビの後半で盛り上がるところ？だから
[22:20:39] Satellite: 01:23:230 (1,3,5) - こういうところ全部Finishいれたい派なんだけど
[22:20:40] Satellite: どうなの？
[22:20:44] Satellite: バシバシなります
[22:21:10] Satellite: 歌詞の "な"　と　"み"　の部分
[22:21:24] [osu!]Delis: これ曲うるさくないから
[22:21:29] [osu!]Delis: めｔｔｔｔっちゃうるさいと思うの・・・
[22:21:35] Satellite: かなりうるさい
[22:21:50] Satellite: もちろん提案だからno change OK ore genki
[22:22:17] [osu!]Delis: Satelliteさん最近finish厨だからな・・・・・・・・
[22:22:21] Satellite: めっちゃうるさいよ
[22:24:03] [osu!]Delis: 01:39:974 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
[22:24:07] [osu!]Delis: ここ配置なんかきたなくない？？
[22:24:13] Satellite: その前に１つ..
[22:24:18] Satellite: 01:27:416 (3) - これ単発にしよ
[22:24:29] [osu!]Delis: あ
[22:24:31] [osu!]Delis: いいかんじの見つけたOK
[22:24:54] [osu!]Delis: WHy
[22:24:58] Satellite: いや
[22:25:02] Satellite: 歌詞で１つ１つ言葉あるのに
[22:25:16] Satellite: スライダー使う意味なくない？歌詞で１つ１つ言葉あるところはサークルで拾ったほうが
[22:25:19] Satellite: フィットすると思うんだけど・・
[22:26:42] Satellite: 01:29:044 (7) - これ
[22:26:44] [osu!]Delis: う～ん
[22:26:48] Satellite: 三角形するために流れつぶしてない？
[22:27:22] [osu!]Delis: そう？？
[22:27:37] [osu!]Delis: そこ三角にしたくてそう配置したわけじゃないからなあ
[22:28:07] [osu!]Delis: 配置したら三角っぽくなったからそうなったけど
[22:28:39] Satellite: http://puu.sh/axmPc/658686f6e6.jpg
[22:28:42] Satellite: こっちで三角にしない？
[22:28:58] Satellite: それはない？
[22:29:12] [osu!]Delis: koreha
[22:29:12] [osu!]Delis: ださい
[22:29:18] Satellite: わかる
[22:29:32] Satellite: 01:29:509 (7) - これなー
[22:29:33] [osu!]Delis: ラブライブの紫の髪っぽい配置してる
[22:29:36] Satellite: スライダーより
[22:29:42] Satellite: 単発+３連打のほうがあってるきがするんだけどこれも
[22:29:46] Satellite: 個人差なのかな
[22:30:29] [osu!]Delis: 正直それは変えても
[22:30:32] [osu!]Delis: いいんだけど
[22:30:47] [osu!]Delis: 変えなくても変えてもどっちでも大して変わらないでしょ
[22:30:49] [osu!]Delis: って感じがある
[22:31:06] Satellite: 01:40:672 (7) - これx288 y300
[22:31:19] Satellite: 7.8.1no
[22:31:26] Satellite: 流れ直線のほうが綺麗じゃない？
[22:31:36] [osu!]Delis: そういうの
[22:31:37] [osu!]Delis: 助かる
[22:32:00] Satellite: (8と1コピーして貼り付けて1を８の上に重ねたら7の位置わかるじゃん)
[22:32:22] [osu!]Delis: 天才か・・・？
[22:32:34] Satellite: 今まで普通にそうやって配置してきてるわ・・
[22:33:07] Satellite: 01:48:579 (5) - これ上でいいの？
[22:33:39] [osu!]Delis: どこがいい？
[22:34:04] Satellite: 2と4の線上
[22:34:04] Satellite: http://puu.sh/axn6j/8613816452.jpg
[22:34:31] Satellite: ちなx332 y364
[22:34:41] [osu!]Delis: まあこれは
[22:34:43] [osu!]Delis: わかるんだけど
[22:34:44] [osu!]Delis: う～ん
[22:34:49] Satellite: maakoreha
[22:34:56] Satellite: これは図形にしたいからここにおいたけど
[22:34:58] Satellite: 実際は
[22:35:13] Satellite: x384　y312あたりまで
[22:35:22] Satellite: こっちに飛ばしたほうが上よりAimしやすいし
[22:35:26] Satellite: 流れも綺麗だと思う
[22:35:58] Satellite: あとどうでもいいけど 01:47:881 (2) - これ1grid上ね
[22:36:18] Satellite: 1gridあげたら綺麗な平行四辺形になるよ
[22:36:25] Satellite: 14と23が平行になって
[22:36:31] Satellite: 13と42も平行になる
[22:37:00] [osu!]Delis: フツ～に置いたら横になるけど上のほうがいい感じだ・・・・
[22:37:17] Satellite: it's okay! ore GENKI
[22:37:39] [osu!]Delis: よくわかんないけど1grid upした
[22:37:45] Satellite: 1gridあげるの
[22:37:49] Satellite: これめっちゃ大事だからまじで
[22:37:51] Satellite: まじで！
[22:38:03] [osu!]Delis: blanket
[22:38:05] [osu!]Delis: 1grid up
[22:38:06] [osu!]Delis: ty
[22:38:16] Satellite: 14をコピーして
[22:38:19] Satellite: 23に重ねたらわかる
[22:38:19] [osu!]Delis: 大事だ･･･
[22:38:37] Satellite: http://puu.sh/axnlX/5b9a30e536.jpg
[22:38:38] Satellite: こうなってたから
[22:38:44] Satellite: 1gridあげる必要があったのよ
[22:38:52] [osu!]Delis: NICE
[22:39:34] Satellite: 02:15:091 (5,6) - ここ
[22:39:36] Satellite: もったいない
[22:39:39] Satellite: 配置的には問題ないんだけど
[22:39:50] Satellite: 音大きくなってあわせる123　4に対して
[22:39:58] Satellite: 56なにもしないってもったいない
[22:39:59] [osu!]Delis: たしかに
[22:40:04] Satellite: たしかにｗ
[22:40:45] Satellite: 56を
[22:40:48] Satellite: http://puu.sh/axnsB/70db1ba595.jpg
[22:40:51] Satellite: こんな感じにすれば
[22:40:56] Satellite: DS的にも合うし
[22:40:59] [osu!]Delis: なにやってるかメッチャわかんないそれ
[22:41:14] Satellite: いやね？
[22:41:23] Satellite: 02:14:393 (1,2,3,4) - ここジャンプさせてるのに
[22:41:31] Satellite: 02:15:091 (5,6) - ここDS1.2くらいでそのままって
[22:41:33] Satellite: どうなんっていう
[22:41:42] [osu!]Delis: tasi
[22:41:44] [osu!]Delis: kani
[22:41:52] Satellite: 今の画像の
[22:41:55] Satellite: 提案は
[22:42:02] Satellite: 02:15:091 (5) - x220　y368と
[22:42:12 | 22:42:23を編集しました] Satellite: 02:13:928 (4) - ここに 02:15:323 "6"- これスタック
[22:42:42] Satellite: 流れもDSも綺麗になるけど
[22:42:46] Satellite: 02:16:021 (9) - これに被るようになっちゃうから
[22:42:53] Satellite: そのあたりは修正が必要になるけどね
[22:43:35] [osu!]Delis: http://puu.sh/axnCZ/7778de3694.png OK
[22:43:39] Satellite: 02:16:486 (1) - 1grid左で 02:16:486 (1,2,3) - ここが直線になる
[22:43:50] Satellite: OK
[22:44:12] [osu!]Delis: OK
[22:44:14] [osu!]Delis: DID
[22:44:18] Satellite: あーでも
[22:44:30] Satellite: 1を1gird動かしても意味ないかも
[22:44:38] [osu!]Delis: wtf
[22:44:43] Satellite: どうせ02:16:951 (3) - これStackLeniencyで左上にズレちゃうでしょ？
[22:44:51] Satellite: Edit画面ではぴったり合うけどプレイでずれる
[22:45:00] [osu!]Delis: ずれてるなあ
[22:45:25] [osu!]Delis: 3を1gridsita sitara
[22:45:31] [osu!]Delis: 大体直線じゃない？？
[22:45:41] Satellite: ちょっとまってね
[22:45:44] Satellite: 先に書かせて
[22:45:54] [osu!]Delis: (sun)
[22:45:55] Satellite: 02:20:439 (6,7) - ここ１番サビのほうだとFinish入ってたきがする
[22:46:32] Satellite: 02:16:486 (1,2,3) - ここを直線にしてもどうせスタックさせるなら意味ない
[22:46:44] Satellite: Leniency考慮して直線にするなら
[22:48:44 | 22:50:00を編集しました] Satellite: 02:16:486 (1) - x272 y104
02:16:718 (2) - x152 y132
[22:48:45] [osu!]Delis: finish=>CLAPに変えて2番もいれた
[22:48:48] Satellite: であってるかも？
[22:49:12] Satellite: あーおかしいか・・
[22:49:19] [osu!]Delis: ﾄﾞｯﾁﾀﾞ・・・
[22:49:36] [osu!]Delis: maa
[22:49:41] [osu!]Delis: 大体直線だし大丈夫でしょ！！
[22:50:06] Satellite: [22:48] Satellite:

<<< 02:16:486 (1) - x272 y104
02:16:718 (2) - x152 y132
[22:50:08] Satellite: こうかな・・・
[22:50:45] Satellite: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1873089
[22:50:48] Satellite: どう？おそらくあってる

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-02T05:07:46+00:00

^=^b
さてらいとしゃんありがとうｗｗ

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-14T00:57:40+00:00

hi

SPOILER

osu file format v13

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XinCrin

2,846 posts

Joined January 2012

XinCrin 2014-08-14T04:53:17+00:00

Hi Delis! From your request

captin's Normal

00:13:463 (2) Hmm... Whistle at the beginning of this slider?. Since you can hear a strong piano sound here
00:18:346 (4) Maybe you could move the last sliderpoint to x:176 y:304 to improve the flow.
SPOILER
00:54:393 (4) Could be better if you move this slider to x:280 y:32, because the current blanket feels so weird |If you do this , don't forget to fix the spacing with next objects|
SPOILER
00:57:184 (2) A Finish at the slider end sounds very good with the music!. Try it
00:59:277 (4) You could try using a Whistle at the beginning of this slider since music needs it
01:45:323 (2) The "Finish" from this circle sounds a bit weird , maybe you could remove it or decrease the volume to 10%-20%
01:59:742 (1) Try using some hitsounds in this spinner :c
02:41:370 (2) Maybe you could move this slider to x:288 y:120 to improve the flow
02:48:579 (2) Same as 01:45:323 (2)

Hard

00:06:718 (4) Maybe you could change this circle for a 1/2 slider , like 00:02:998 (4) - 00:10:439 (4). Since it's the same rhythm
00:17:881 (4) Could you make it , curved please?. It improves the flow, something like this:
SPOILER
00:24:160 (4) What about to CTRL+G this slider?. Makes a small but fun jump
01:45:323 (2) Could you increase the volumen for this circle around 15 - 20%?. Sounds a bit high
01:59:742 (1) In my opinion , could be better if this spinner ends in 02:02:998 , sounds perfect with the "finish" and add a 1/2 slider in 02:03:463.
02:17:416 (4,5) Hmm . . .you could use some Whistles here , since you can hear some Whistles in the music here
03:25:323 (Spinner) What about to add a spinner here? . As captin did in his diff

Insane

00:06:951(x) Why are you ignoring that sound?. I can hear a piano sounds almost silenced but in my opinion you should not ignore it
00:37:649 (8,9,10) Is this triplet really necessary?. It doesn't follow the music or some sound. Maybe you could simply remove 00:37:765 (9)
00:41:486 (3) (^)
01:12:998 (1) This 1/3 slider feels so weird , it should end in 01:13:230 (1/2 slider). Try it please
SPOILER
02:01:718 (1) Same suggestion I told you on the hard
02:51:835 (5) Could you center it?. Just a random idea (1 grid right)
03:25:323 (Spinner) What about to add a spinner here? . As captin did in his diff
03:34:160 (6) You've forgot a Clap here
03:36:253 (1) 1/2 slider is better than 1/3 n.n

Wow! great mapset
Good luck guys!

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-14T07:09:05+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
Hi Delis! From your request

Hard

00:06:718 (4) Maybe you could change this circle for a 1/2 slider , like 00:02:998 (4) - 00:10:439 (4). Since it's the same rhythm there was a 1/2 slider instead of a circle, but the piano sound 00:06:951 - was a bit awkward for 1/2 slider's end, so I decided to change into a circle. anyway I might change it later..
00:17:881 (4) Could you make it , curved please?. It improves the flow, something like this: I was a straight slider lover when I was mapping this diff lol, changed!
SPOILER
00:24:160 (4) What about to CTRL+G this slider?. Makes a small but fun jump ~~not bad idea, but I really liked to use like this flow in this diff, and song is a calm part so \:D/~~ nvm changed
01:45:323 (2) Could you increase the volumen for this circle around 15 - 20%?. Sounds a bit high 15 - 20% is too low here for me, I just adjusted the volume on my own.
01:59:742 (1) In my opinion , could be better if this spinner ends in 02:02:998 , sounds perfect with the "finish" and add a 1/2 slider in 02:03:463. the sound was like... drum-hitnormal and I probably supposed a finish doesn't fit somehow light sound. and 02:03:463 - the cymbal sound would more suitable with finish in my opinion, so I will keep current pattern for now.
02:17:416 (4,5) Hmm . . .you could use some Whistles here , since you can hear some Whistles in the music here it will loud hitsound if I added whistles while overlapping with clap/finish, that's why I didn't added whistles for the piano sound.
03:25:323 (Spinner) What about to add a spinner here? . As captin did in his diff orz sorry the song says that should add break here ;_;

Insane

00:06:951(x) Why are you ignoring that sound?. I can hear a piano sounds almost silenced but in my opinion you should not ignore it yes the sound can be followed by a circle or something but as you mentioned, that is almost silent and as a player, current pattern feels really better to play for me.
00:37:649 (8,9,10) Is this triplet really necessary?. It doesn't follow the music or some sound. Maybe you could simply remove 00:37:765 (9)
00:41:486 (3) (^) both feel nice to play, and I don't use triplet only that the song sounds triplet.
01:12:998 (1) This 1/3 slider feels so weird , it should end in 01:13:230 (1/2 slider). Try it please yea done
SPOILER
02:01:718 (1) Same suggestion I told you on the hard as I mentioned on hard
02:51:835 (5) Could you center it?. Just a random idea (1 grid right) yeah okay, also adjusted a bit the place of (4)
03:25:323 (Spinner) What about to add a spinner here? . As captin did in his diff This is also I wrote on hard
03:34:160 (6) You've forgot a Clap here hehe I forgot to add it after I remapped this pattern, nice.
03:36:253 (1) 1/2 slider is better than 1/3 n.n this slider follows the vocals so fine as is imo, try to listen the vocals properly, you probably agree with me ;w;

Wow! great mapset
Good luck guys!

omg you're so fast after I asked to mod, thank you so much!

also made some minor changes for my diffs~

ALSO ALSO Thanks to litoluna for a star \:D/

Ryuuka Toki

72 posts

Joined July 2012

Ryuuka Toki 2014-08-14T14:16:22+00:00

Hi,from my queue
The volume in the start is a little bit loud,try 10%? and the overall volume of your finish is a little bit loud.Not quiet fits the song.
[easy]
I don't really support using cs 3.3.This makes little difference from cs3.
01:12:998 (4) - move to x:92 y:168 to avoid 1.1 DS
02:35:788 (4) - that note's place is strange in flow imo,follow the way slider moves will be better
03:16:486 (4) - ^
03:07:649 (3) - not cool,why stop using curve slider?
03:35:788 (3) - move to 412,44?
02:27:649 (3) - ctrl+J?
00:53:695 (3) - that's not pretty,try to move 4 to left a little bit
The volume in the start is a little bit loud,try 10%? and the overall volume of your finish is a little bit loud.Not quiet fits the song.(same

[Hard]
Ar7.2 make no sense I think.If you think ar7 is slow then try ar7.5.But I think ar7 is enough.
00:20:207 (4) - ctrl+g
00:22:998 (2) - Ds is too large,I think DS between 2 and 3 2.0 is enough
01:09:044 (3) - use the ctrl+h version replace it
01:06:021 (2) - Well,I think ctrl+g brings more fun
02:35:556 (2) - use the ctrl+h version replace it
02:39:044 (2) - ctrl+g same reason
00:02:300 (3,4) - That part's is too far from 1,2 DS around 1.6 should be fine.Like moving that part to 4 so that covers 00:04:393 (1) -
00:46:486 (6) - move it down a little bit.May be better to look.
03:21:602 (1) - that 2 big straight slider is not so nice-looking. change like this?

00:29:277 (6) - Ctrl+G(haha

[Insane]
00:02:300 (4) - too far from 3,I feel hard to catch when I played it.
00:38:346 (1,2,3,4) - you can make a square pattern here(take 1's end as a note)
00:44:160 (4) - you can make a larger DS bewteen 4 and 3,at least the same as 1 and 2.
01:03:463 (5) - move to 256,116?
01:10:905 (8) - move it to have a better blanket with 7(But it may kill your stack)
01:17:881 (7,1,2,3,4) - what about a star pattern?
01:59:742 (1,1) - May be star as blue line is too hurry?
02:08:811 (7) - curve it like 00:32:067 (3) - in normal?
03:43:695 (3) - move to 92,116(nazi mod)

All diffs are really good which proves you and captin1 pro mapper!!!

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-14T23:11:26+00:00

XinCrin wrote:
captin's Normal

00:13:463 (2) Hmm... Whistle at the beginning of this slider?. Since you can hear a strong piano sound here did on end
00:18:346 (4) Maybe you could move the last sliderpoint to x:176 y:304 to improve the flow. fine as is
SPOILER
00:54:393 (4) Could be better if you move this slider to x:280 y:32, because the current blanket feels so weird |If you do this , don't forget to fix the spacing with next objects| nah, prefer mine
SPOILER
00:57:184 (2) A Finish at the slider end sounds very good with the music!. Try it yep
00:59:277 (4) You could try using a Whistle at the beginning of this slider since music needs it mmhm
01:45:323 (2) The "Finish" from this circle sounds a bit weird , maybe you could remove it or decrease the volume to 10%-20% fine for me
01:59:742 (1) Try using some hitsounds in this spinner :c whistle i guess?
02:41:370 (2) Maybe you could move this slider to x:288 y:120 to improve the flow fine as is
02:48:579 (2) Same as 01:45:323 (2) same

Ryuuka Toki wrote:
[easy]
I don't really support using cs 3.3.This makes little difference from cs3. there's a very noticeable difference
01:12:998 (4) - move to x:92 y:168 to avoid 1.1 DS oops
02:35:788 (4) - that note's place is strange in flow imo,follow the way slider moves will be better fine as is
03:16:486 (4) - ^ ^
03:07:649 (3) - not cool,why stop using curve slider? for the pattern
03:35:788 (3) - move to 412,44? nah, i like as is
02:27:649 (3) - ctrl+J? hmm good idea but i like mine
00:53:695 (3) - that's not pretty,try to move 4 to left a little bit i like it
The volume in the start is a little bit loud,try 10%? and the overall volume of your finish is a little bit loud.Not quiet fits the song.(same seems fine to me, will see what delis says

thanks

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Delis

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Delis 2014-08-14T23:46:50+00:00

Ryuuka Toki wrote:
Hi,from my queue
The volume in the start is a little bit loud,try 10%? and the overall volume of your finish is a little bit loud.Not quiet fits the song. the first part is not that loud for default skin and the volume will silent if changed to 10 - 15%. about the finishes are also fine for default skin I guess.

[Hard]
Ar7.2 make no sense I think.If you think ar7 is slow then try ar7.5.But I think ar7 is enough. AR7.2 will be AR10 on Hard Rock, and it makes a bit harder to play with DTHR. or I would rather change to AR6.5 to make easier for DTHR.
00:20:207 (4) - ctrl+g oke
00:22:998 (2) - Ds is too large,I think DS between 2 and 3 2.0 is enough no, this spacing is actually more readable pattern for 1/1 in my opinion.
01:09:044 (3) - use the ctrl+h version replace it w-why...?
01:06:021 (2) - Well,I think ctrl+g brings more fun this is intentional
02:35:556 (2) - use the ctrl+h version replace it why, it looks worse for me --;
02:39:044 (2) - ctrl+g same reason same, I don't like it orz
00:02:300 (3,4) - That part's is too far from 1,2 DS around 1.6 should be fine.Like moving that part to 4 so that covers 00:04:393 (1) - I don't get it properly, but it definitely fine to play..
00:46:486 (6) - move it down a little bit.May be better to look. no idea you meant that is not proper straight line or not, if you meant zigzag is better, then I personally like straight than zigzag patterns.
03:21:602 (1) - that 2 big straight slider is not so nice-looking. change like this? I prefer current one ;_;

00:29:277 (6) - Ctrl+G(haha okay ww

[Insane]
00:02:300 (4) - too far from 3,I feel hard to catch when I played it. D: this should be fine in Insane diff... even if the part is so calm, this doesn't be called as a big jamp..
00:38:346 (1,2,3,4) - you can make a square pattern here(take 1's end as a note) ffff this is already a square... well adjusted for more exact square
00:44:160 (4) - you can make a larger DS bewteen 4 and 3,at least the same as 1 and 2. *-* what is different with 1 and 2? and this spacing is enough here I guess.
01:03:463 (5) - move to 256,116? the spacing was weird..
01:10:905 (8) - move it to have a better blanket with 7(But it may kill your stack) This idea is actually nice to make better spacing between 01:11:370 (3) - and the stacked slider
01:17:881 (7,1,2,3,4) - what about a star pattern? no! the pattern is one of my favorite patterns..
01:59:742 (1,1) - May be star as blue line is too hurry? it doesn't affect anything to play even if I moved the 2nd spinner on red tick or somewhere.
02:08:811 (7) - curve it like 00:32:067 (3) - in normal? I have made the slider to make a symmetrical (?) pattern with 02:09:509 (2) - and Normal diff is not mine ww
03:43:695 (3) - move to 92,116(nazi mod) ok

All diffs are really good which proves you and captin1 pro mapper!!!

thank you for modding hehe, updated captin's changes too! also thanks for the 2 stars captin aniki

-Neipezi

2,246 posts

Joined October 2011

-Neipezi 2014-08-15T04:10:34+00:00

こんにちは、Delisさん:)
初めて日本語でModます。
下手に理解できるように努力いたします。

[captin's Normal]
taicho owo
01:27:416 (4) - add to whistle in the head?
02:08:811 (4) - add to whistle in the tail?
02:09:742 (5) - add to whistle in the head?

[Hard]
01:00:207 (3) - NCを追加？
01:48:579 (5) - ^
03:25:323 - insaneと同じです。
03:56:951 (4) - NCを追加？

[Insane]
01:59:742 (1) - ここにwhistleを追加？
01:48:579 (5) - NCを追加して、x224 y84に移動しますか？
02:16:718 (2,3,4) - 間隔を一定にすることがどうですか？座標は02：16：718（2） - x172 y120、02：16：951（3,4） - x56 y152です。

Image

02:51:835 (5) - NCを追加？
03:25:323 - 休み時間が短すぎて、ここにノートを追加する必要があります。03:25:323 - で03:27:184 - までspinnerを追加し、03:28:114 - にcircleを追加することがいかがでしょうか？
03:44:625 (5) - x352 y232に移動？

good lucky owo/

captin1

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Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-15T04:19:12+00:00

02:09:742 (5) - add this one delis, other two i don't think it's needed.

thanks!

ShiraKai

534 posts

Joined September 2010

ShiraKai 2014-08-16T18:22:53+00:00

hihi! from PM

[General]
特になしです。

[captin's Normal]

00:23:928 (2) - blanket?
img
00:40:672 (4) - remove whistle at end?
00:58:114 (3) - add whistle at start?
02:16:253 (3) - ^
01:41:137 (2) - add finish at start?
02:35:788 (4) - move to x:264,y:11? 02:35:788 (5) - x:366,y:49?
02:48:579 (2) - remove finish and add clap. why do you use finish? i think the sound is same at here.(01:30:439 (2) - )
03:05:788 (1) - add whistle at start with Volume 30% ?

[Hard]

00:44:393 (5) - 00:43:463 (1,2,3,4) - ここの音と比べて音が弱いのでそのまま単発でというよりはスライダーの終点とかでフォローしてあげた方がいいかもしれません。
03:33:928 (4,5) - ctrl + G? 3から4がAIMし辛そうに見えたので

[Insane]

01:48:579 (5) - ここにNCとかどうですか？
02:51:835 (5) - ^
02:12:532 (1) - ctrl + J してx:246,y:53に移動しませんか？これの後への入り易さより前がジャンプなので向きはこっちの方がいいかなと思います。
02:19:509 - add note? １番では５連打になっていたので気になりました。拾っている音的には2連打・2連打の音取りがベストだと思うので、１番を変える方がいいかもしれません。
03:06:718 (10) - NCここからでは？

完成度高くてほとんど言うことなかったです

Good Luck!

Delis

1,433 posts

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Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-17T02:16:10+00:00

SPOILER

-Neipezi wrote:
こんにちは、Delisさん:)
初めて日本語でModます。
下手に理解できるように努力いたします。

[Hard]
01:00:207 (3) - NCを追加？少し短い...
01:48:579 (5) - ^ last noteに NEW COMBOは付けたくないですorz
03:25:323 - insaneと同じです。
03:56:951 (4) - NCを追加？これも上記と同じで

[Insane]
01:59:742 (1) - ここにwhistleを追加？nice, added!
01:48:579 (5) - NCを追加して、x224 y84に移動しますか？ NCはそのままで (I wrote the reason in Hard diff)、移動しました。
02:16:718 (2,3,4) - 間隔を一定にすることがどうですか？座標は02：16：718（2） - x172 y120、02：16：951（3,4） - x56 y152です。moved 2 to x172 y120 and then moved 3,4,5 to x56 y156 for stack leniency
Image
02:51:835 (5) - NCを追加？これもlast noteにNC追加したくないのでー
03:25:323 - 休み時間が短すぎて、ここにノートを追加する必要があります。03:25:323 - で03:27:184 - までspinnerを追加し、03:28:114 - にcircleを追加することがいかがでしょうか？多分大丈夫だと思いますが、、、後でBATに聞いてみます。
03:44:625 (5) - x352 y232に移動？ジャンプ汚い感じになるので保留で＞＜でも代わりに少し下にずらしました。

good lucky owo/

thank you for modding! your japanese is good enough if you wrote these without translator... anyway thanks a lot!

ShiraKai wrote:
hihi! from PM

[General]
特になしです。

[Hard]
00:44:393 (5) - 00:43:463 (1,2,3,4) - ここの音と比べて音が弱いのでそのまま単発でというよりはスライダーの終点とかでフォローしてあげた方がいいかもしれません。ここはバスドラム?の音（00:43:463 (1) - と 00:44:858 (6) - ここにもある音です。）が強いのでそれにあわせて00:43:463 (1,2,3,4) - より少し大きめのジャンプを作ってみたんですが、恐らくスライダーのほうがここはやりやすくなると思うので今の所は保留させて貰います。ただ恐らく同じポイントをまた他の方に言及されたら変えると思います。
03:33:928 (4,5) - ctrl + G? 3から4がAIMし辛そうに見えたのであう。。。本当にごめんなさい、ここは変えたくない理由も何も無いんですが、個人的に気に入ってるので保留させて貰いたいです。
[Insane]
01:48:579 (5) - ここにNCとかどうですか？
02:51:835 (5) - ^ ごめんなさい、1個上のmodの返事にも書いているんですが、breakに入る前のlast noteにNCを置きたくないのであえて置いてません。多分これも変えたほうがいいかと思うんですが、そのままでも恐らく問題にはならないと思いますし、やっぱりそのままのほうが個人的には好きなので
02:12:532 (1) - ctrl + J してx:246,y:53に移動しませんか？これの後への入り易さより前がジャンプなので向きはこっちの方がいいかなと思います。OK~~
02:19:509 - add note? １番では５連打になっていたので気になりました。拾っている音的には2連打・2連打の音取りがベストだと思うので、１番を変える方がいいかもしれません。あえて2番目のほうを難しく(多分...) してるのでこうなってるんですが、実際には揃えたほうがやっぱり良いと思うので、また誰かに言われたら変えると思います。
03:06:718 (10) - NCここからでは？連打の一番最後から置くnew comboはあんまり好きじゃないので、代わりにこの5連打の最初に置いて、このパート全体のnew comboを少し調整しました。
完成度高くてほとんど言うことなかったです
Good Luck!

moddingありがとうございました！好みの問題でno changeしちゃったのが多いんですが、緑で書いてあるトコロはmod内でも書いてますがまた指摘されたりした場合は変えると思うので許してください。and お星様2個もありがとうございます！！

~~ thanks!

captin: added a whistle 02:09:742 (5) - head -.-

NoHitter

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3,785 posts

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NoHitter 2014-08-17T04:44:22+00:00

[General]
- Overall the mapset is great. Just some suggestions.

[Insane]
- 00:05:091 (2,3,4) - (2) is not perfectly in the middle of the two sliders here. Adjust (4) or (3) a bit so that it'll be in the middle. Placing (2) in the center temporarily then using Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J on one of the sliders will work.
- 00:13:928 (1) - IMO, start the spinner at 00:14:160 instead since that's when you can hear the slowly increasing sound. Add a note at 00:13:928 instead?
- 00:17:184 (4,5) - These two don't flow well. I recommend placing (5) on the upper right of (4)'s tail. You have to adjust (6) though. http://puu.sh/aVM5Q/a9c3c020d9.jpg
- 00:23:463 (3,4,5) -IMO it would look better as a perfect triangle.
- 00:24:625 (1,2,3) - Same comment about flow here. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/aVMkH/abe857ce54.jpg
- 00:31:602 (5) - This should be facing the other direction for better flow. http://puu.sh/aVMpo/bbabab7173.jpg
- 00:37:184 (6,7,8) - The distance change here is kind of ugly looking

I suggest placing (7) equally from (6) and (8).
- 00:47:649 (2) - For better flow, you should either make it higher or lower respective to the previous slider. http://puu.sh/aVMyC/32de11a847.jpg or http://puu.sh/aVMzq/a8bf4ef9d9.jpg
- 00:49:974 (3) - I was expecting this to be perfectly center between the sliders. If you want to keep the stack on the previous note, maybe move slider (2) instead?
- 01:22:067 (4) - Place this in the "center" of the previous slider? http://puu.sh/aVMLo/3bec3f86b2.jpg
- 01:22:532 (1) - IMO (1) would be better placed where the previous slider is pointing to. You would have to rearrange your combos ahead though if you did this change. http://puu.sh/aVMUH/c3cfd00a96.jpg ;; http://puu.sh/aVN1U/b5ccc5ff69.jpg maybe?
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 02:01:718 (1) - Start on the red tick at 02:01:835? That's where I can hear the cymbals.
- 02:06:253 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
- 02:15:323 (6,7) - This plays oddly, because of the fact that (6) comes off strongly, so (7) doesn't quite have enough intensity to warrant a note. Make (6) into a slider instead which ends at (7). It should solve the intensity problem and at the same time, allow you to place a hitobject there.
- 02:16:718 (2) - IMO a bit of oval flow works here. http://puu.sh/aVNs9/414d9b1e9c.jpg
- 02:19:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Similar here. ^ http://puu.sh/aVNtV/0d647a786f.jpg
- 02:24:160 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
- 02:33:695 (4) - This really would play better if it faced the other direction (ctrl+G) IMO

- 02:35:556 (2) - Move this a bit to the left so that it exceeds the X-axis of the previous slider a bit. This will help in flow. http://puu.sh/aVNFQ/c8dfa0cb0e.jpg
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 03:05:672 (4,5) - This plays oddly since you have your vocal at 03:05:788 which is never hit by the notes here. Either make into an outright stream or just add a note there.
- 03:23:463 (1,2,3) - I expected a stream here since you were going for the build up with those 1/4s from earlier

- 03:27:184 () - Move break here like what you did in Hard.
- 03:44:160 (4) - Ctrl+G here for better flow?

[Hard]
- I've been more lax on your same-end facing sliders here since it feels like a motif in this difficulty, but in general, same-end facing sliders don't flow as well compared to those which face the opposite end.
- 00:46:253 (5,6,7,1) - The current pattern doesn't flow well IMO. Maybe something like http://puu.sh/aVO9z/8b524d26b8.jpg ?
- 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4) - Change pattern to http://puu.sh/aVOcY/0a36168efd.jpg ?
- 01:13:928 (3) - Place this up a bit more for better oval flow. http://puu.sh/aVOg0/07e8a13579.jpg The stack won't be that noticeable anymore by that time anyway.
- 01:22:532 (1,2,3) - If you wanted to make it flow properly, http://puu.sh/aVOoq/a48db25736.jpg would have been a better arrangement, but you have to fix the pattern after this.
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 02:13:230 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow.
- 02:18:579 (2) - Place this up for better oval flow.
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better.

[captin's Normal]
- There's nothing to point about in this diff.
- 00:22:998 (1) - Move the slider end by one grid to the right, so the flow will be much better (The end will point a bit better to the start of the next object)
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better.

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-17T07:22:26+00:00

reply for NoHitter's mods

NoHitter wrote:
[General]
- Overall the mapset is great. Just some suggestions.

[Insane]
- 00:05:091 (2,3,4) - (2) is not perfectly in the middle of the two sliders here. Adjust (4) or (3) a bit so that it'll be in the middle. Placing (2) in the center temporarily then using Ctrl+H and Ctrl+J on one of the sliders will work. maybe better now
- 00:13:928 (1) - IMO, start the spinner at 00:14:160 instead since that's when you can hear the slowly increasing sound. Add a note at 00:13:928 instead? I think start at current point is fine. mine feels more natural and smooth than yours to me, and actually the increasing sound is start at 00:13:928 -, try listen to the song by playback speed 25% well inaudible for 100% though..
- 00:17:184 (4,5) - These two don't flow well. I recommend placing (5) on the upper right of (4)'s tail. You have to adjust (6) though. done!http://puu.sh/aVM5Q/a9c3c020d9.jpg
- 00:23:463 (3,4,5) -IMO it would look better as a perfect triangle. I guess I didn't suppose these objects are somehow triangle pattern, I just placed them to be flow like "へ" (I'm not sure what I am saying...)
- 00:24:625 (1,2,3) - Same comment about flow here. Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/aVMkH/abe857ce54.jpg yes
- 00:31:602 (5) - This should be facing the other direction for better flow. http://puu.sh/aVMpo/bbabab7173.jpg nahh I like my pattern here ;w;
- 00:37:184 (6,7,8) - The distance change here is kind of ugly looking I suggest placing (7) equally from (6) and (8). I think it's fine as is, I have made a jump 00:37:416 (7) - for the piano
- 00:47:649 (2) - For better flow, you should either make it higher or lower respective to the previous slider. http://puu.sh/aVMyC/32de11a847.jpg or http://puu.sh/aVMzq/a8bf4ef9d9.jpg moved it higher, is not same as the screen shot since it's overlapping with the hp bar..
- 00:49:974 (3) - I was expecting this to be perfectly center between the sliders. If you want to keep the stack on the previous note, maybe move slider (2) instead? moved (1) instead, I don't know it's being perfectly center place though
- 01:22:067 (4) - Place this in the "center" of the previous slider? http://puu.sh/aVMLo/3bec3f86b2.jpg perhaps done!
- 01:22:532 (1) - IMO (1) would be better placed where the previous slider is pointing to. You would have to rearrange your combos ahead though if you did this change. http://puu.sh/aVMUH/c3cfd00a96.jpg ;; http://puu.sh/aVN1U/b5ccc5ff69.jpg maybe? uuh it's fine to play and I really liked the pattern in this diff so I wanna keep for now ><
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better. how to move the break there, I couldn't move more than current time. or you meant removing the spinners
- 02:01:718 (1) - Start on the red tick at 02:01:835? That's where I can hear the cymbals. alright, done
- 02:06:253 (3) - Ctrl+G for better flow. looks a bit far and I would prefer mine, but yours is also good for me, I might change it
- 02:15:323 (6,7) - This plays oddly, because of the fact that (6) comes off strongly, so (7) doesn't quite have enough intensity to warrant a note. Make (6) into a slider instead which ends at (7). It should solve the intensity problem and at the same time, allow you to place a hitobject there. well hard to explain for me but (6) and (7) circles instead of a slider plays better to me as a player...
- 02:16:718 (2) - IMO a bit of oval flow works here. http://puu.sh/aVNs9/414d9b1e9c.jpg sorry I'm a fan of straight patterns orz
- 02:19:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Similar here. ^ http://puu.sh/aVNtV/0d647a786f.jpg ^ too ;.;
- 02:24:160 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow. mine is better just for me as is
- 02:33:695 (4) - This really would play better if it faced the other direction (ctrl+G) IMO did ctrl+g
- 02:35:556 (2) - Move this a bit to the left so that it exceeds the X-axis of the previous slider a bit. This will help in flow. http://puu.sh/aVNFQ/c8dfa0cb0e.jpg I don't feel anything changes but done
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better. for me better as is ><
- 03:05:672 (4,5) - This plays oddly since you have your vocal at 03:05:788 which is never hit by the notes here. Either make into an outright stream or just add a note there. yeah I wanted to follow the vocals there but some patterns that I have tried to follow the vocals were awkward for me, so I decided to put circles / sliders for the bass-drum here. I feel it fits..
- 03:23:463 (1,2,3) - I expected a stream here since you were going for the build up with those 1/4s from earlier I didn't want to make any streams for this map, I have done 03:05:091 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - but it's not really long, but need 9 circles to be a stream here that's why I didn't put a stream here.
- 03:27:184 () - Move break here like what you did in Hard. my fault, done
- 03:44:160 (4) - Ctrl+G here for better flow? same reason as the sliders that I have done like this flow.

[Hard]
- I've been more lax on your same-end facing sliders here since it feels like a motif in this difficulty, but in general, same-end facing sliders don't flow as well compared to those which face the opposite end. orz same end sliders are good as much as opposite end sliders for me --
- 00:46:253 (5,6,7,1) - The current pattern doesn't flow well IMO. Maybe something like http://puu.sh/aVO9z/8b524d26b8.jpg ? as I mentioned in Insane, I'M A FAN OF STRAIGHT FLOW OTL
- 00:50:672 (1,2,3,4) - Change pattern to http://puu.sh/aVOcY/0a36168efd.jpg ? adjusted on my own.
- 01:13:928 (3) - Place this up a bit more for better oval flow. http://puu.sh/aVOg0/07e8a13579.jpg The stack won't be that noticeable anymore by that time anyway. yeah nice
- 01:22:532 (1,2,3) - If you wanted to make it flow properly, http://puu.sh/aVOoq/a48db25736.jpg would have been a better arrangement, but you have to fix the pattern after this.
- 01:49:044 () - Move start of the break here. It fits the music better.
- 02:13:230 (2) - Ctrl+G for better flow. it will be forced flow between 02:12:532 (1) - and 02:13:230 (2) -
- 02:18:579 (2) - Place this up for better oval flow. I'm probably into straight flow orz
- 02:52:532 () - Move the start of the break here. It fits the music better. both break stuffs are same as Insane.

thanks for modding! the flow suggestions (well sorry for some sliders) were helpful to polish appearance for the overall mapset.

captin1

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2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-17T16:46:39+00:00

did all three, might want to do time links like 01:49:044 - next time, so that they don't link to an object

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:凪 -nagi-
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Iceskulls

1,612 posts

Joined February 2012

Iceskulls 2014-08-18T15:05:49+00:00

Hello there from my modding queue
I will try my best to mod this ><

[General]
You have break time but no check at letterbox during breaktime ?

[Insane]

00:08:811 (2) - Maybe you can move slider tail down a little bit so it become nice flow and also symmetry with 00:09:742 (4) - http://puu.sh/aXyKk/6befc51fa1.jpg
00:11:835 (1,2,3,4) - I think if you move (4) to lining with (1) you will get nice square shape http://puu.sh/aXyUv/253a01e029.jpg
00:21:602 (6) - x+5, I like it to be line up with 00:20:905 (5) - 's tail
00:31:602 (5) - I suggest Ctrl+G this to emphasis in high-pitched vocal here
00:54:393 (1,2) - This blanket can improve
01:19:974 (5,6) - Doesn't looks like good line up since (5) form nice triangle shape with 01:18:114 (1,2) - so how about move (5) to x=200 y=172 and move (6) to x=225 y=281
01:22:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - I really like pattern here but I guess you can make spacing of 01:22:532 (1,3) - , 01:23:463 (2,3) - , 01:23:230 (1,4) - more consistent http://puu.sh/aXA11/615b456747.jpg sorry but I can't provide information like x=? y=? since it has so many NC here and it will waste some space here so if you want information like that pm me in-game or use forum pm
01:39:044 (5) - Move to x=420 y=255 for same spacing of 01:38:811 (4) - and 01:38:114 (3) - 's tail
01:41:602 (3,4) - I see you change spacing suddenly here but I don't know what the reason for that (emphasis instrument?) but I like to form a square pattern here with 01:41:137 (1,2) - and when I change to square pattern http://puu.sh/aXADp/a7c70933e2.jpg it doesn't hurt spacing for the next notes much too
01:45:323 (4) - Maybe you can lower hitsound volume here it might be too lound and the music also sound low compare to the previous note here 01:44:858 (3) -
02:24:160 (2) - Ctrl+G because I want to emphasis in high-pitched vocal just like 00:31:602 (5) -
02:26:253 (2,4) - I like this more if you line up these 2 notes >.< http://puu.sh/aXB4b/2a0b3f97a2.jpg
02:28:346 (4) - y+4 you line up 02:27:649 (1,2) - perfectly and you should line up (3) and (4) perfectly too
02:30:207 (5) - Ctrl+G because the music seem to start to change to low tone here and you might need to Ctrl+G 02:30:672 (6) - too because the music change to high tone and I want to emphasis this tone by using slider to let the player know the music's tone is changed
02:36:951 (4) - y=144 you line up 02:36:253 (1,3) - perfectly and you should line up (2) and (4) perfectly too
02:37:649 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe you can make spacing of 02:38:114 (5,1) - consistent like 02:37:649 (2,3,4,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1939912
03:13:695 (4) - x=88 if you intend to line up this with 03:13:230 (1,2,3) -
03:32:765 (1,2,4) - Maybe you can improve triangle shape here
03:35:323 (6) - x=156 if you intend to line up this with 03:34:858 (4) - and if you made change this, change this 03:35:788 (7) - too so it line up perfectly
03:36:253 (1,2) - This here sound weird because blue line doesn't has beat sound maybe you can lower the volume at (1)'s tail
03:41:370 (1,2,3) - x=226 y=255 you nearly spacing perfectly with 03:40:905 (3) -
03:44:160 (4) - Same as 00:31:602 (5) - and 02:30:207 (5) -

[Hard]
AR=7.2 eh! why it not 7.0 ? Well I just hate precise AR (except AR x.5)

00:08:114 (1,2) - Ctrl+G (2) so you don't do symmetry pattern only for this part?
00:39:509 (5) - Ctrl+G emphasis higher tone in music and to keep using of symmetry pattern just like 00:31:137 (3,4,5) -
00:43:928 (3,5) - Spacing doesn't looks good maybe line up these just like what you did with 00:43:463 (1,2,4) -
00:50:672 (1,3) - You can improve blanket here
01:21:137 (3,4,5) - Maybe improve square shape here
01:27:881 (6) - one grid down and this will line up with 01:27:184 (4) - perfectly
02:16:486 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you can improve square shape here
02:34:858 (1) - Move to x=136 y=69 so this will spacing with (8) same as 02:34:160 (6,7) -
02:36:951 (4,5) - Blanket can improve here
02:39:509 (3) - Ctrl+G because emphasis higher tone in music
03:09:044 (1,3,4) - x=256 I like it to be line up perfectly
03:34:160 (5) - x=456 y=204 so this will spacing with (4) same as 03:33:463 (2,3) -
03:34:625 (3,4,5) - Maybe improve triangle shape here
03:44:625 (3) - Ctrl+G because higher tone in music and also follow the symmetry pattern you do here 03:43:695 (1,2) -
03:45:788 (1) - x=261 y=208 if you intend to line up this with 03:45:556 (5) - and you also get nice triangle shape of 03:45:323 (4,5,1) -

[captin's Normal]
CS=3.3 eh! you can make it 3.5 or 3.0 captin xD (Because I don't like precise adjustment)
Slider tick rate=2 it just looks weird to have only one slider dot at the end of the slider like this 00:06:021 (2) - I like consistent slider dot

00:44:858 (3) - x+4 if you intend to line up this with 00:44:393 (2) -
00:49:044 (1) - Move to x=254 y=8 for consistent spacing with 00:48:114 (4,2) -
00:59:277 (4) - I see you want to emphasis in vocal so you decide to repeat at blue line well you just follow the instrument from here 00:56:486 (1) - but you decide to change to follow vocal xD oh well I suggest you to repeat at white line or just make it a regular slider
01:39:742 - Maybe you can add a note here the music here just really nice to follow I would like it if you put a note here for tuh-tuh-tuh tuh--tuh tuh tuh---tuh tuh tuh sound here >< if you add a note here do the same to this 01:43:463 - too
01:44:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really nice change in rhythm here I like it also you can line up (5) and (6) for better triangle shape of 01:47:649 (5,6,1) -
02:11:370 (2) - y+4 if you intend to line up this with 02:10:905 (1) -
02:34:858 (3,4) - Line up?
02:46:951 (6,1) - You can improve blanket here
03:15:788 (3,4) - Line up?

That's all
Well done really nice mapset

I give this map a star

Good luck

Delis

1,433 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

Delis 2014-08-18T17:52:28+00:00

CelsiusLK wrote:
Hello there from my modding queue
I will try my best to mod this ><

[General]
You have break time but no check at letterbox during breaktime ? I don't like it :p

[Insane]
00:08:811 (2) - Maybe you can move slider tail down a little bit so it become nice flow and also symmetry with 00:09:742 (4) - http://puu.sh/aXyKk/6befc51fa1.jpg done
00:11:835 (1,2,3,4) - I think if you move (4) to lining with (1) you will get nice square shape http://puu.sh/aXyUv/253a01e029.jpg I feel nothing between the screen shot and current one ==
00:21:602 (6) - x+5, I like it to be line up with 00:20:905 (5) - 's tail probably current one is better flow
00:31:602 (5) - I suggest Ctrl+G this to emphasis in high-pitched vocal here no need to emphasize the vocals and I like mine ><
00:54:393 (1,2) - This blanket can improve tried but I'm not sure it's better, my blanket skill can't be improved forever
01:19:974 (5,6) - Doesn't looks like good line up since (5) form nice triangle shape with 01:18:114 (1,2) - so how about move (5) to x=200 y=172 and move (6) to x=225 y=281 current flow is much better to play, 01:20:439 (1) - move to the bottom to be straight line with 01:20:207 (6) - though
01:22:532 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - I really like pattern here but I guess you can make spacing of 01:22:532 (1,3) - , 01:23:463 (2,3) - , 01:23:230 (1,4) - more consistent http://puu.sh/aXA11/615b456747.jpg sorry but I can't provide information like x=? y=? since it has so many NC here and it will waste some space here so if you want information like that pm me in-game or use forum pm no one cares the spacing while playing and I probably can't adjust them properly, orz
01:39:044 (5) - Move to x=420 y=255 for same spacing of 01:38:811 (4) - and 01:38:114 (3) - 's tail :o why? it ruins a jump here..
01:41:602 (3,4) - I see you change spacing suddenly here but I don't know what the reason for that (emphasis instrument?) but I like to form a square pattern here with 01:41:137 (1,2) - and when I change to square pattern http://puu.sh/aXADp/a7c70933e2.jpg it doesn't hurt spacing for the next notes much too the spacing was just for fun to play, fixed now bit I might change to current one again
01:45:323 (4) - Maybe you can lower hitsound volume here it might be too lound and the music also sound low compare to the previous note here 01:44:858 (3) - yes
02:24:160 (2) - Ctrl+G because I want to emphasis in high-pitched vocal just like 00:31:602 (5) - I already emphasized by slider jumps
02:26:253 (2,4) - I like this more if you line up these 2 notes >.< http://puu.sh/aXB4b/2a0b3f97a2.jpg fixed by moving 02:25:788 (1,2,3) -
02:28:346 (4) - y+4 you line up 02:27:649 (1,2) - perfectly and you should line up (3) and (4) perfectly too maybe fixed this on above
02:30:207 (5) - Ctrl+G because the music seem to start to change to low tone here and you might need to Ctrl+G 02:30:672 (6) - too because the music change to high tone and I want to emphasis this tone by using slider to let the player know the music's tone is changed the flow will be weird :< and no one notices the tone changes are noticing with patterns.
02:36:951 (4) - y=144 you line up 02:36:253 (1,3) - perfectly and you should line up (2) and (4) perfectly too 148 instead because better http://puu.sh/aXPVJ/57dcddbfc3.png
02:37:649 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Maybe you can make spacing of 02:38:114 (5,1) - consistent like 02:37:649 (2,3,4,6) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1939912 current one looks much better, also I DON'T EVEN CARE SPACING CONSISTENCY...
03:13:695 (4) - x=88 if you intend to line up this with 03:13:230 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure what you are saying but yours is... : http://puu.sh/aXQ6n/cde836a727.png
03:32:765 (1,2,4) - Maybe you can improve triangle shape here not sure but done 1 grid up 03:32:998 (2) -
03:35:323 (6) - x=156 if you intend to line up this with 03:34:858 (4) - and if you made change this, change this 03:35:788 (7) - too so it line up perfectly I mostly don't care the line up things, and this slider is put on the middle between 03:34:393 (1,2,3) - and 03:34:858 (4) - http://puu.sh/aXQrY/12f0f75c9e.png
03:36:253 (1,2) - This here sound weird because blue line doesn't has beat sound maybe you can lower the volume at (1)'s tail there's end of the vocal, anyway decreased the volume by 20
03:41:370 (1,2,3) - x=226 y=255 you nearly spacing perfectly with 03:40:905 (3) - the perfect spacing was just 1 grid up :<
03:44:160 (4) - Same as 00:31:602 (5) - and 02:30:207 (5) - same
[Hard]
AR=7.2 eh! why it not 7.0 ? Well I just hate precise AR (except AR x.5)

Delis wrote:
[Hard]
Ar7.2 make no sense I think.If you think ar7 is slow then try ar7.5.But I think ar7 is enough. AR7.2 will be AR10 on Hard Rock, and it makes a bit harder to play with DTHR. or I would rather change to AR6.5 to make easier for DTHR.
+ AR7.5 is probably kinda fast for this song

00:08:114 (1,2) - Ctrl+G (2) so you don't do symmetry pattern only for this part? yes no need to make a consistency here
00:39:509 (5) - Ctrl+G emphasis higher tone in music and to keep using of symmetry pattern just like 00:31:137 (3,4,5) - no...
00:43:928 (3,5) - Spacing doesn't looks good maybe line up these just like what you did with 00:43:463 (1,2,4) - no need to be lined up, 00:43:463 (1,2,3) - a triangle =.=
00:50:672 (1,3) - You can improve blanket here I ignored blanket pattern here
01:21:137 (3,4,5) - Maybe improve square shape here how should I improve..
01:27:881 (6) - one grid down and this will line up with 01:27:184 (4) - perfectly totally don't care but moved
02:16:486 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe you can improve square shape here nah..
02:34:858 (1) - Move to x=136 y=69 so this will spacing with (8) same as 02:34:160 (6,7) - I'm really lazy to fix this thing..
02:36:951 (4,5) - Blanket can improve here 02:36:951 (4) - make a smooth curved slider
02:39:509 (3) - Ctrl+G because emphasis higher tone in music this jump is enough for emphasis
03:09:044 (1,3,4) - x=256 I like it to be line up perfectly i dunno but only moved 03:09:974 (4) -
03:34:160 (5) - x=456 y=204 so this will spacing with (4) same as 03:33:463 (2,3) - it's not same, current one is close to the same spacing.
03:34:625 (3,4,5) - Maybe improve triangle shape here this is not a triangle, just this looks like a triangle --;
03:44:625 (3) - Ctrl+G because higher tone in music and also follow the symmetry pattern you do here 03:43:695 (1,2) - no
03:45:788 (1) - x=261 y=208 if you intend to line up this with 03:45:556 (5) - and you also get nice triangle shape of 03:45:323 (4,5,1) - intended
That's all
Well done really nice mapset
I give this map a star

Good luck

thank you for modding and the star! \:DD/

also updated captin's changes p/3314232

captin1

osu! Alumni

2,595 posts

Joined February 2011

captin1 2014-08-18T23:09:52+00:00

"ShiraKai"

[captin's Normal]

00:23:928 (2) - blanket? prefer mine
00:40:672 (4) - remove whistle at end? sounds fine as is
00:58:114 (3) - add whistle at start?
02:16:253 (3) - ^
01:41:137 (2) - add finish at start? no thanks
02:35:788 (4) - move to x:264,y:11? 02:35:788 (5) - x:366,y:49? prefer mine
02:48:579 (2) - remove finish and add clap. why do you use finish? i think the sound is same at here.(01:30:439 (2) - ) finish is in music, but added clap
03:05:788 (1) - add whistle at start with Volume 30% ?

"CelsiusLK"

[captin's Normal]
CS=3.3 eh! you can make it 3.5 or 3.0 captin xD (Because I don't like precise adjustment) remember to keep the mapper's intent in mind when you mod, not what you want to see. I want the precise adjustment
Slider tick rate=2 it just looks weird to have only one slider dot at the end of the slider like this 00:06:021 (2) - I like consistent slider dot

prefer it as is

00:44:858 (3) - x+4 if you intend to line up this with 00:44:393 (2) - sorry no
00:49:044 (1) - Move to x=254 y=8 for consistent spacing with 00:48:114 (4,2) - but it already is consistent?
00:59:277 (4) - I see you want to emphasis in vocal so you decide to repeat at blue line well you just follow the instrument from here 00:56:486 (1) - but you decide to change to follow vocal xD oh well I suggest you to repeat at white line or just make it a regular slider it follows instrument too though
01:39:742 - Maybe you can add a note here the music here just really nice to follow I would like it if you put a note here for tuh-tuh-tuh tuh--tuh tuh tuh---tuh tuh tuh sound here >< if you add a note here do the same to this 01:43:463 - too prefer not to, more simple rhythm
01:44:858 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Really nice change in rhythm here I like it also you can line up (5) and (6) for better triangle shape of 01:47:649 (5,6,1) - triangle is fine as is
02:11:370 (2) - y+4 if you intend to line up this with 02:10:905 (1) - not necessary
02:34:858 (3,4) - Line up? ^
02:46:951 (6,1) - You can improve blanket here fine as is
03:15:788 (3,4) - Line up? ^

thanks

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TitleUnicode:凪 -nagi-
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ArtistUnicode:Ray
Creator:Delis
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492,228,162532,2,0,P|456:277|357:289,2,165,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,172,164160,5,6,0:0:0:0:
376,152,164625,2,0,P|328:136|284:96,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,100,165323,2,0,P|180:116|136:156,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,204,166021,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,288,166486,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,232,166951,2,0,P|344:228|404:312,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,340,168114,5,4,0:0:0:0:
196,308,168579,1,12,0:0:0:0:
164,204,169044,2,0,L|160:92,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,256,170207,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,308,170439,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,260,170905,2,0,P|328:256|420:276,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,352,171835,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,182998,12,2,184625,0:0:0:0:
176,216,185788,6,0,P|204:256|320:252,1,165,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,186718,2,0,L|468:240,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,136,187649,2,0,B|396:120|396:120|352:72,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,80,188811,2,0,P|224:108|192:176,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,224,189509,2,0,P|192:252|68:260,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,212,190439,6,0,L|56:96,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,72,191370,2,0,P|220:108|328:76,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,16,192532,2,0,L|452:12,1,55,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,120,193230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,220,193695,2,0,L|432:288,2,55,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,160,194625,5,8,0:0:0:0:
224,192,195091,2,0,P|156:200|108:192,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,208,195788,2,0,L|76:76,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,44,196486,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,24,196951,2,0,P|216:20|292:40,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,120,197881,5,4,0:0:0:0:
252,172,198346,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,172,198579,2,0,P|208:176|132:156,2,110,4|4|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,120,199974,2,0,L|352:56,2,55,2|10|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,168,200672,2,0,L|384:264,2,82.5,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,144,201602,5,4,0:0:0:0:
504,224,202067,1,4,0:0:0:0:
504,224,202300,2,0,P|456:240|404:344,1,165,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,203463,12,0,205323,0:0:0:0:
244,200,208811,6,0,B|284:220|316:184|376:216,1,110,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,280,209742,2,0,P|452:256|432:132,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,104,210905,6,0,P|280:104|212:92,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,124,211602,2,0,P|128:112|68:124,2,110,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,176,212765,2,0,P|208:216|264:248,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,252,213463,2,0,L|324:316,1,55,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,340,214160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,256,214625,6,0,L|485:141,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,152,215323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
324,132,215788,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,24,216253,2,0,P|247:27|180:20,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,56,216951,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,56,217184,2,0,P|188:88|180:208,1,165,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,276,218346,6,0,L|232:308,2,110,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,240,219742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
8,240,219974,2,0,P|52:184|52:89,1,165,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,44,220905,1,2,0:0:0:0:
140,32,221370,2,0,P|168:24|192:12,2,55,2|4|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,76,222067,6,0,P|180:120|172:204,1,110,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,296,222998,2,0,P|188:328|256:352,1,110,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,336,223695,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,268,224160,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,176,224625,2,0,L|320:60,1,110,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,32,225323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,128,225788,6,0,P|188:140|116:136,1,110,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,124,226486,2,0,L|92:248,1,110,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,340,227416,1,4,0:0:0:0:
68,340,227649,2,0,P|156:312|232:356,2,165,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,324,229277,5,4,0:0:0:0:
24,216,229742,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,216,229974,2,0,P|48:176|104:132,1,110,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,140,230672,2,0,P|195:106|224:59,1,110,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,16,231602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,56,232067,2,0,P|452:108|408:212,1,165,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,124,233230,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,196,233695,1,4,0:0:0:0:
172,124,234160,2,0,P|160:88|156:16,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
215,158,235323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,196,235556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,292,236021,2,0,P|256:307|203:293,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,236951,12,4,244393,0:0:0:0:

while i'm here,

TitleUnicode:凪 -nagi-

putting Nagi -nagi- seems really stupid, but might be the correct metadata http://vgmdb.net/album/42900

sigh

Delis

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Delis 2014-08-19T01:11:08+00:00

updated, and the title... it looks worse but ~~changed inb4 Lanturn coming~~ CHANGED CHANGED

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Lanturn

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Lanturn 2014-08-19T01:19:09+00:00

Oh, hi

Edit: lol

Delis

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Delis 2014-08-19T01:24:25+00:00

dAMN I just edited a word and you posted before finished editing... nice NiNJA (I'm not sure ninja means in osu but)

Loneight

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Loneight 2014-08-23T11:37:53+00:00

Hi o/
Request from My googledoc.

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue

[general]

add 1000~1500 ms to lead-in , though it will increase automatically when the map rank, the first-note still too suddenly appear for me ;w;

[captin's Normal]

Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 -
03:29:044 -
00:28:579 (2) - remove the whistle at end to make 00:28:579 (2,3) - 's hitsound have a diversification? because I heard 00:29:277 -'s piano volume is higher than 00:29:044 - . If you want to keep, reduce the volume at 00:29:044 -
01:45:788 (3) - feel a little weird, because the soft-hitnormal is a little weak to make a hitting feeling, how about add a whistle at start? though it not follow any musical instruments, would be better for player to feel obvious rhythm
02:11:835 (3) - seems you miss a clap at end, don't you? (run
02:15:323 (2) - add a finish at end? I feel there has a finish-sound like this slider's start

nice diff! has smooth flow and great rhythm!

[Hard]

Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 -
03:29:044 -
~~some 1/2 jump is easier to misread to 1/1 rhythm, for example: 01:29:742 (5,1) - , how about increase the AR to 7.5?~~ alright, seems other modder had pointed this lol
00:29:044 - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) -
00:44:160 (4) - add a whistle? I think there is same as 00:29:277 (6) - 's start
00:53:928 (5,6) - try ctrl+G? flow would be better IMO. And 02:08:346 (6,7) - same as here
02:19:974 (1) - the flow makes me feel uncomfortable, try to change the slider's direction or use other method?
explain

great diff :3

[Insane]

Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 -
00:28:579 (1) - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) -
00:44:160 (4) - same as Hard's 00:44:160 (4) -
03:10:439 (3) -try ctrl+G, make it curve down would be more suitable for vocal, also better for flow
03:44:160 (4,5) - I feel a little weird, seems there should have a jump to emphasize the vocal's change, so 03:44:160 (4) - try ctrl+G, also would make flow better

nothing to say, anyway, great job!

that's all!
good luck and star for you (run

Delis

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Delis 2014-08-23T12:25:59+00:00

Loneight wrote:
Hi o/
Request from My googledoc.

Black is just suggestion, if you don't like , you can skip it
Blue is recommended to fix
red is unrankable issue
[general]
add 1000~1500 ms to lead-in , though it will increase automatically when the map rank, the first-note still too suddenly appear for me ;w; 0 was enough I guess but it's probably better, done :>
[Hard]
Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 -
03:29:044 -
~~some 1/2 jump is easier to misread to 1/1 rhythm, for example: 01:29:742 (5,1) - , how about increase the AR to 7.5?~~ alright, seems other modder had pointed this lol haha yeah... I totally suppose 7.5 is fast for this.. also I'm not sure for players who play hard diffs, but at least some 1/2 jumps are not that hard to read for me with the current AR.
00:29:044 - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) - yea
00:44:160 (4) - add a whistle? I think there is same as 00:29:277 (6) - 's start same as Insane diff, ><;
00:53:928 (5,6) - try ctrl+G? flow would be better IMO. And 02:08:346 (6,7) - same as here hmm it will be awkward for the straight slider, I made a zigzag flow 00:53:230 (3,4,5,6) - here. I dunno but it flows worse for me ;w; and 02:08:346 (6,7) - I don't wanna hide under 02:07:649 (4) - head, it would be much harder to read on HD >.< sorry and I think the flow for the straight 1/1 slider is not that bad...
02:19:974 (1) - the flow makes me feel uncomfortable, try to change the slider's direction or use other method? tried to fix! I'm not sure I did though..
explain
great diff :3 XD I thought this was bad, thank you!

[Insane]
Useless green line:
green line
03:04:858 - oops, 02:51:835 - decreased the volume by 10 to make a difference with the green line (and actually it fits), and added 20% for the spinner
00:28:579 (1) - same as Normal's 00:28:579 (2) - sure
00:44:160 (4) - same as Hard's 00:44:160 (4) - I think it doesn't fit because of bass-drum at 00:44:393 - I'm not sure but somehow awkward to listen..
03:10:439 (3) -try ctrl+G, make it curve down would be more suitable for vocal, also better for flow uh sorry I prefer current flow orz
03:44:160 (4,5) - I feel a little weird, seems there should have a jump to emphasize the vocal's change, so 03:44:160 (4) - try ctrl+G, also would make flow better I didn't like the ctrl+g pattern made a jump between (4) and (5) + rearranged some patterns instead.
nothing to say, anyway, great job!
that's all!
good luck and star for you (run

thanks lone for modding and the star! (don't run ww

@captin: update before look through Loneight's mods, changed audio lead-in for your diff too. (it's okay if you applied before update, it doesn't take long to change)

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-08-23T14:41:28+00:00

star

Delis

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Delis 2014-08-23T14:45:55+00:00

thank you! \:D/

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XinCrin wrote:

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Ryuuka Toki wrote:

Ryuuka Toki wrote:

-Neipezi wrote:

ShiraKai wrote:

NoHitter wrote:

CelsiusLK wrote:

Delis wrote:

[general]

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Loneight wrote:

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