From the Rakutenshi Modding Queue~ (SeNoZinD
General
Very well done
Easy
00:25:674 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could do something like this instead? http://puu.sh/av4ug/1857f9f95c.jpg
00:27:146 (4) - Make it shorter like this maybe? http://puu.sh/av4CH/6bffb2b062.jpg it would follow the vocals a bit better
00:31:563 (1,2,3) - Just so you could follow the vocals better, add in another circle and rearrange like the first like this http://puu.sh/av4N3/fe9154b2a7.jpg
00:33:035 (4) - Shorter like this? http://puu.sh/av4VQ/a81551477c.jpg
Normal
Nothing I would change.
Hard
00:14:999 (4) - Maybe this could use a ctrl-g for flow
00:19:416 (4,1) - These could be blanketed a bit better
00:35:244 (3) - Perhaps change this into something like this http://puu.sh/av5Jh/461da7e561.jpg
00:50:704 (1,2,3) - Triangle pattern instead?
00:58:802 (3) - Rotate into something like this? http://puu.sh/av5W5/e813310bd4.jpg For a better blanket and flow
Insane
Nothing I would change.
Future
00:21:993 (3) - Ctrl-G for flow
00:54:385 (7,8) - ^Same thing
I hope this helped you!!
General
Very well done
Easy
00:25:674 (1,2,3) - Maybe you could do something like this instead? http://puu.sh/av4ug/1857f9f95c.jpg
00:27:146 (4) - Make it shorter like this maybe? http://puu.sh/av4CH/6bffb2b062.jpg it would follow the vocals a bit better
00:31:563 (1,2,3) - Just so you could follow the vocals better, add in another circle and rearrange like the first like this http://puu.sh/av4N3/fe9154b2a7.jpg
00:33:035 (4) - Shorter like this? http://puu.sh/av4VQ/a81551477c.jpg
Normal
Nothing I would change.
Hard
00:14:999 (4) - Maybe this could use a ctrl-g for flow
00:19:416 (4,1) - These could be blanketed a bit better
00:35:244 (3) - Perhaps change this into something like this http://puu.sh/av5Jh/461da7e561.jpg
00:50:704 (1,2,3) - Triangle pattern instead?
00:58:802 (3) - Rotate into something like this? http://puu.sh/av5W5/e813310bd4.jpg For a better blanket and flow
Insane
Nothing I would change.
Future
00:21:993 (3) - Ctrl-G for flow
00:54:385 (7,8) - ^Same thing
I hope this helped you!!