STYLE FIVE - FUTURE FISH

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Topic Starter
Yasora

MisakiYuri wrote:

Can't find anything wrong with it. I'm a new modder and you do have 18 ranked maps after all,This is a great map,I need it ranked soon :3 star~.

Normal:

01:12:422 (6) - move somewhere else? this is normal - everything should be visible?
not everything, but I guess it's better to move it too lol
thank you :3!
Fuuyu
Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue




*Mp3 --> OK


*BG --> OK


[Easy]
00:22:729 (1,2) Improve slider?


00:30:091 Move ( x:same y:248 )
00:41:134 Move ( x:same y:240 ) to even the spacing
01:08:005 Suggestion


01:21:624 Improve your slider on this part


[Normal]
00:19:048 improve your blanket

[Hard]
Nothing



That's All, not much to comment here . . great map
Good Luck~
Topic Starter
Yasora

xLoupGarou wrote:

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue




*Mp3 --> OK


*BG --> OK


[Easy]
00:22:729 (1,2) Improve slider? don't want too curve in here..


00:30:091 Move ( x:same y:248 )
00:41:134 Move ( x:same y:240 ) to even the spacing imo the spacing seems already true o.o
01:08:005 Suggestion


01:21:624 Improve your slider on this part


[Normal]
00:19:048 improve your blanket inb4 I'm not blanket that indeed

[Hard]
Nothing



That's All, not much to comment here . . great map
Good Luck~
thank you :3
MissGeurts
Hello, before I start I think this map is pretty much ready for ranking.

[Easy]
00:10:951 Nothing wrong with it, I just want to point out I really like the fish ;p
01:08:005 I don't know if this slider is meant to be symmetrical but it isn't, the ending point is higher than the starting point.

[Normal]
00:26:226 I think it would sound nice if there would be a clap or a finish since there is also one on the hitcircles 1 and 5
01:17:207 - 01:18:312 I think placing hitsounds on some of these would sound good. I think it sounds a little empty.

[Hard]
Looks good to me. No weird placements, enough sounds and enough different formed sliders to keep the map interesting.

[Insane/Future]
I wasn't able to complete it in playmode but I'll give modding it a shot ;)

Since distance snap is activated I think the placement and timing of the notes are correct and I can't really find anything in either one of the difficulty's so I'm not much of help here. Maybe you can find a more experienced modder to do these difficulty's

Well, I really like this beatmap and hope it will get ranked soon :)
Topic Starter
Yasora

MissGeurts wrote:

Hello, before I start I think this map is pretty much ready for ranking.

[Easy]
00:10:951 Nothing wrong with it, I just want to point out I really like the fish ;p fish fish fish I don't have fish after all.....
01:08:005 I don't know if this slider is meant to be symmetrical but it isn't, the ending point is higher than the starting point. just wanna make it different

[Normal]
00:26:226 I think it would sound nice if there would be a clap or a finish since there is also one on the hitcircles 1 and 5 right, clap then
01:17:207 - 01:18:312 I think placing hitsounds on some of these would sound good. I think it sounds a little empty. um,, I don't think so

[Hard]
Looks good to me. No weird placements, enough sounds and enough different formed sliders to keep the map interesting.

[Insane/Future]
I wasn't able to complete it in playmode but I'll give modding it a shot ;)

Since distance snap is activated I think the placement and timing of the notes are correct and I can't really find anything in either one of the difficulty's so I'm not much of help here. Maybe you can find a more experienced modder to do these difficulty's

Well, I really like this beatmap and hope it will get ranked soon :)
thank you :3!

shet can't update my map. suck connection ~_~
Moo-Chan
From my modding queue~

Insane:

  1. 00:10:029 (8) - You should put this note under this slider, ( 00:09:477 (6) )
  2. 01:03:772 (4) - Move to x:256 y:160
  3. 01:12:606 (7) - Move to x:432 y:84


All I saw for the Insane~
Future:

  1. Maybe even the sliders out a bit to match others~
  2. 00:19:416 (6) - Move to x:272 y:200


About it for Future~

Love the map <3 Good luck with getting it ranked
Topic Starter
Yasora

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~

Insane:

  1. 00:10:029 (8) - You should put this note under this slider, ( 00:09:477 (6) ) eto.. I want it not stacked fully
  2. 01:03:772 (4) - Move to x:256 y:160 move it somewhere :3
  3. 01:12:606 (7) - Move to x:432 y:84


All I saw for the Insane~
Future:

  1. Maybe even the sliders out a bit to match others~ xD
  2. 00:19:416 (6) - Move to x:272 y:200 moved it somewhere too :3


About it for Future~

Love the map <3 Good luck with getting it ranked
thank you~~
Ichigaki
Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)
Called from ♪ ichia7x's standart!mania Modding Queue ♪


[General]
  1. Kyaaaa, Free `3`)
  2. Nobunaga Shimazaki Tatsuhisa Suzuki Mamoru Miyano Tsubasa Yonaga Daisuke Hirakawa < who's this?
  3. , please che- wait... Oh man :x
  4. Please add the main character to the tags if you want >.<)b

[Future]
  1. How about change the OD and HP to 8 and 8 or 8 and 7?
  2. 00:37:821 (5) - remove this, so move this 00:37:913 (6) - to 00:37:821 - without changing the end point
  3. 00:49:232 (1,2) - how about give 'more space' in here?


[Insane]
  1. 00:04:876 (3) - how about remove this and move 00:04:692 (2) - to 00:04:508 (1) -
  2. 00:37:821 (3) - same as the future one
  3. 00:43:710 (3,4) - same concept as above
  4. 01:23:097 (1,2,3) - change this same as 01:24:017 (4) - and give it the pattern


[Hard]
  1. Change OD to 7
  2. 00:00:643 - Will be nice if you give spinner here to 00:02:115 -
  3. 01:26:594 (4) - move to x:320 y:256


[Normal]
Nono~thing

[Easy]
Cleeeear~ FISH `3`)

Go go for ranked >.<)b ;)
Topic Starter
Yasora

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map :)
Called from ♪ ichia7x's standart!mania Modding Queue ♪


[General]
  1. Kyaaaa, Free `3`)
  2. Nobunaga Shimazaki Tatsuhisa Suzuki Mamoru Miyano Tsubasa Yonaga Daisuke Hirakawa < who's this? who performed this song ofc o3o
  3. , please che- wait... Oh man :xomg fff xD
  4. Please add the main character to the tags if you want >.<)b huelazyhue

[Future]
  1. How about change the OD and HP to 8 and 8 or 8 and 7?
  2. 00:37:821 (5) - remove this, so move this 00:37:913 (6) - to 00:37:821 - without changing the end point
  3. 00:49:232 (1,2) - how about give 'more space' in here?


[Insane]
  1. 00:04:876 (3) - how about remove this and move 00:04:692 (2) - to 00:04:508 (1) - the current seems more fit with vocal..
  2. 00:37:821 (3) - same as the future one
  3. 00:43:710 (3,4) - same concept as above
  4. 01:23:097 (1,2,3) - change this same as 01:24:017 (4) - and give it the pattern nah


[Hard]
  1. Change OD to 7 no
  2. 00:00:643 - Will be nice if you give spinner here to 00:02:115 - nah
  3. 01:26:594 (4) - move to x:320 y:256 too far, but moved it somewhere instead


[Normal]
Nono~thing

[Easy]
Cleeeear~ FISH `3`)

Go go for ranked >.<)b ;)
thank you :)
Setsurei

- used the NM ticket -
it should be 4 diffs but I can't mod Insane diff and Future diff because I don't understand 2014's flow
[Easy]
00:08:005 (1) - ekornya naikin dikit
00:53:281 (2,3) - ctrl G, then fix the hitsounds and the position
00:56:226 (2,3) - ^
01:13:894 (2,3,4) - blanket properly
[Normal]
00:33:220 (1) - rotate 25 degree CW, selection centre
[Hard]
00:13:894 (1) - tail 384|124
00:23:833 (4) - 72|48

all good, orz sorry can't mod much
good luck
Tsusumu
Hi Hi, From moo-chan's (and soon to be mine too) modding queue~

Insane
00:06:532 (1) - Maybe blanket this better
00:27:882 (5) - ^
(I moved the slider a little bit on the timeline to be able to use the approach circle from the 2 but after you blanket it you can move the slider back to where it should be)

(That's what I mean when I say blanket better) it makes the curves smoother and look better imo
00:35:796 (1) - maybe blanket this around the 6 (again I move the slider around on the timeline to be able to use the approach circle) and you can use the approach circle at whatever point you see fit to blanket
00:36:532 (4) - blanket better again :3
00:37:453 (1) - nudge the start and middle nodes down once and the end up once to blanket
00:38:741 (1) - you could probably blanket this too
00:39:477 (3) - if you blanket the previous one then it looks like you copied to make this slider so re copy so they look the same
00:44:631 (1) - blanket better
That's all I see for the insane~

Future
00:49:232 (1) - this slider is pretty ugly, I'd change it somehow
00:49:784 (2) - ^
01:13:342 (3) - this overlaps slightly with 01:13:342 (3) - (it makes it look kinda bleh)
01:26:226 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't do this for a couple reasons 1.It's not consistent with how you've been using triples in your song 2.It's unnecessarily hard for no reason 3.It looks kinda ugly

Well that's all I have, hope I helped some \(>w<)/ good luck with getting your map ranked~
Topic Starter
Yasora

Setsurei wrote:


- used the NM ticket -
it should be 4 diffs but I can't mod Insane diff and Future diff because I don't understand 2014's flow
[Easy]
00:08:005 (1) - ekornya naikin dikit
00:53:281 (2,3) - ctrl G, then fix the hitsounds and the position
00:56:226 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:13:894 (2,3,4) - blanket properly
[Normal]
00:33:220 (1) - rotate 25 degree CW, selection centre
[Hard]
00:13:894 (1) - tail 384|124
00:23:833 (4) - 72|48 changed by myself

all good, orz sorry can't mod much
good luck[/color]

Xellie wrote:

Hi Hi, From moo-chan's (and soon to be mine too) modding queue~

Insane
00:06:532 (1) - Maybe blanket this better
00:27:882 (5) - ^
(I moved the slider a little bit on the timeline to be able to use the approach circle from the 2 but after you blanket it you can move the slider back to where it should be)

(That's what I mean when I say blanket better) it makes the curves smoother and look better imo
00:35:796 (1) - maybe blanket this around the 6 (again I move the slider around on the timeline to be able to use the approach circle) and you can use the approach circle at whatever point you see fit to blanket I'm not blanketing (6) in here
00:36:532 (4) - blanket better again :3
00:37:453 (1) - nudge the start and middle nodes down once and the end up once to blanket
00:38:741 (1) - you could probably blanket this too no ;_;
00:39:477 (3) - if you blanket the previous one then it looks like you copied to make this slider so re copy so they look the same
00:44:631 (1) - blanket better seems already blanketed for me
That's all I see for the insane~

Future
00:49:232 (1) - this slider is pretty ugly, I'd change it somehow
00:49:784 (2) - ^
01:13:342 (3) - this overlaps slightly with 01:13:342 (3) - (it makes it look kinda bleh)
01:26:226 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't do this for a couple reasons 1.It's not consistent with how you've been using triples in your song 2.It's unnecessarily hard for no reason 3.It looks kinda ugly

Well that's all I have, hope I helped some \(>w<)/ good luck with getting your map ranked~
thanks both of you :3!
-[ Asuna ]-
hi~
From My Queue

[Easy]
00:16:839 (1) - 1 grid keatas PF blanket
00:18:312 (3) - kekananin 1 grid ^
00:23:097 (2) - slider reverse ?
00:28:250 (2) - blanket can be improved
00:31:563 (1,2) - gimana kalo slider ? membosankan kalo cuma 1 circle :v
00:35:980 (1) - blanket can be improvd
00:42:974 (3,1) - blanket ?
01:21:993 (2) - blanket can be improved

[Normal]
01:12:790 (1,2) - try this imo

01:21:624 (1) - blanket can be improved

[Hard]
00:07:453 (4) - stack with slider ?
00:12:422 (1) - bikin lebih curve dan blanketing ?
00:13:342 (2) - blanket can be improved
00:30:459 (2,3) - zigzag ? ctrl + g satu-satu...
01:21:072 (4) - stack with slider ?

yep.. sowwy masih nubi.. xD
jadi mungkin gk terlalu bantu..
tapi semoga membantu..
GL~ with your map..
Topic Starter
Yasora

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

hi~
From My Queue

[Easy]
00:16:839 (1) - 1 grid keatas PF blanket
00:18:312 (3) - kekananin 1 grid ^
00:23:097 (2) - slider reverse ? seems boring if reverse cuz (4) is reverse too
00:28:250 (2) - blanket can be improved
00:31:563 (1,2) - gimana kalo slider ? membosankan kalo cuma 1 circle :v pengen konsisten ama yg 1,2 sebelumnya :v
00:35:980 (1) - blanket can be improvd
00:42:974 (3,1) - blanket ? no
01:21:993 (2) - blanket can be improved

[Normal]
01:12:790 (1,2) - try this imo

01:21:624 (1) - blanket can be improved

[Hard]
00:07:453 (4) - stack with slider ? seems nanggung gimana gitu mencetnya..
00:12:422 (1) - bikin lebih curve dan blanketing ?
00:13:342 (2) - blanket can be improved
00:30:459 (2,3) - zigzag ? ctrl + g satu-satu...
01:21:072 (4) - stack with slider ? same

yep.. sowwy masih nubi.. xD
jadi mungkin gk terlalu bantu..
tapi semoga membantu.. membantu kok XD
GL~ with your map..
thank you :3!

in new page as always
xxdeathx
The Free! ending song animations are hilarious

[General]
  1. if i'm not mistaken, style five refers to the voice actors of the 5 main characters, so you should add the characters' names to tags: nagisa, rei, rin, makoto, and haruka. people seem to like doing that nowadays.
  2. they also add the studio name to tags: kyoto animation, kyoani


[Easy]
  1. 00:10:950 (1) - if you have something like this at the end, it'll match up with the fish drawing that appears at the end of the video
  2. nothing else aside from a few tiny not even worth mentioning nazi blankets


[Normal]
  1. 00:35:980 (1,2) - nazi blanket, use approach circle to help perfect it like http://puu.sh/ahhOe/da8d2ab429.png
  2. 00:45:183 (4) - maybe making it straight between the sliders is better
  3. 01:12:790 (1,2,3) - try forming a triangle with these instead of the 3rd one branching off


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:588 (1,2,3) - i'd map the 1/2 beat red ticks as well since the vocals are there and it feels awkward to ignore them like this
  2. 00:09:477 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:14:815 (3,4) - blanket is too far in the middle
  4. 00:30:091 (1,2,3,4) - are these meant to be parallel?
  5. 00:36:532 (4,1,2,3,1) - this pattern doesn't look aesthetically pleasing, maybe it's the straight line of circles so give them some angle
  6. 00:47:575 (4,1) - improve blanket
  7. 01:17:207 (1,2,3) - 01:23:097 (1,2,3) - same thing earlier


[Insane]
  1. 00:06:348 (6,1) - blanket is far in the middle
  2. 00:09:109 (5,6) - i'm used to less curvy sliders
  3. 00:38:373 (4,1) - try to blanket these
  4. 00:43:618 (2) - even the spacing
  5. 01:23:097 (1,2,3) - i'd map the 1/2 beat red ticks as well since the vocals are there and it feels awkward to ignore them like this


[Future]
  1. 00:03:588 (1) - i'd rather blanket 00:04:140 (3) because it's closer in time
  2. 00:06:348 (1) - i'd ctrl-G this one for better flow from previous objects and then adjust 00:06:716 (2) to keep flow
  3. 00:30:091 (1,2) - line these up?
  4. 00:35:796 (1,2,3) - spacing is a little far compared to 00:38:741 (1,2,3)
  5. 00:44:262 (6,1) - improve blanket
  6. 00:53:097 (3,4) - ^ but a little more nazi
  7. 00:56:042 (3,4) - ^
  8. 01:01:011 (1) - ctrl-g for flow


good luck!
Joon
hi

Hit sound modding

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
00:19:600 (4,5) - Volume 60% -> 40%

[Hard]
fine.

[Insane]
fine.

There was no problem with the hit sound.
good luck
Topic Starter
Yasora

xxdeathx wrote:

The Free! ending song animations are hilarious

[General]
  1. if i'm not mistaken, style five refers to the voice actors of the 5 main characters, so you should add the characters' names to tags: nagisa, rei, rin, makoto, and haruka. people seem to like doing that nowadays.
  2. they also add the studio name to tags: kyoto animation, kyoani


[Easy]
  1. 00:10:950 (1) - if you have something like this at the end, it'll match up with the fish drawing that appears at the end of the video yeah but no idea how to put in there cuz timeline isn't enough
  2. nothing else aside from a few tiny not even worth mentioning nazi blankets i suck at this orz


[Normal]
  1. 00:35:980 (1,2) - nazi blanket, use approach circle to help perfect it like http://puu.sh/ahhOe/da8d2ab429.png
  2. 00:45:183 (4) - maybe making it straight between the sliders is better seems boring if dat strait for me
  3. 01:12:790 (1,2,3) - try forming a triangle with these instead of the 3rd one branching off not sure triangle like what but I try to change (3)'s tail direction


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:588 (1,2,3) - i'd map the 1/2 beat red ticks as well since the vocals are there and it feels awkward to ignore them like this will change if the other mention this again, cuz I feel 1/1 more interesting..
  2. 00:09:477 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
  3. 00:14:815 (3,4) - blanket is too far in the middle
  4. 00:30:091 (1,2,3,4) - are these meant to be parallel? ye
  5. 00:36:532 (4,1,2,3,1) - this pattern doesn't look aesthetically pleasing, maybe it's the straight line of circles so give them some angle
  6. 00:47:575 (4,1) - improve blanket
  7. 01:17:207 (1,2,3) - 01:23:097 (1,2,3) - same thing earlier yeah same too


[Insane]
  1. 00:06:348 (6,1) - blanket is far in the middle
  2. 00:09:109 (5,6) - i'm used to less curvy sliders
  3. 00:38:373 (4,1) - try to blanket these
  4. 00:43:618 (2) - even the spacing
  5. 01:23:097 (1,2,3) - i'd map the 1/2 beat red ticks as well since the vocals are there and it feels awkward to ignore them like this


[Future]
  1. 00:03:588 (1) - i'd rather blanket 00:04:140 (3) because it's closer in time
  2. 00:06:348 (1) - i'd ctrl-G this one for better flow from previous objects and then adjust 00:06:716 (2) to keep flow
  3. 00:30:091 (1,2) - line these up? no
  4. 00:35:796 (1,2,3) - spacing is a little far compared to 00:38:741 (1,2,3)
  5. 00:44:262 (6,1) - improve blanket
  6. 00:53:097 (3,4) - ^ but a little more nazi
  7. 00:56:042 (3,4) - ^
  8. 01:01:011 (1) - ctrl-g for flow


good luck!

Joon wrote:

hi

Hit sound modding

[Easy]
fine.

[Normal]
00:19:600 (4,5) - Volume 60% -> 40%

[Hard]
fine.

[Insane]
fine.

There was no problem with the hit sound.
good luck
thanks both of you :)
eINess


From My Queues.

Red : Must Fix. (Unrankable)
Blue : Should be fix it. (Recommendation)
Black : General suggestions.
Purple : My personal opinion.
[General]
    1. cheak in Widescreen Insane diff.
    2. BUG? ' ㅅ ' What is that??


    [Future]
      1. AR > 7 BPM is not fast. ' ㅅ '
      2. 00:04:140 (3,4) - ctrl + G. (Switch)
      3. 00:09:293 (5) - overlap with (3). DS is not certain, So make think that overlap.
      4. 00:19:416 (6) - remove tail's sampleset.
      5. 00:21:256 (1,2) - Circle the better.
      6. 00:30:091 (1,2,3) - How about this? more better sound.
      7. 00:30:827 (3) - constant DS.
      8. 00:40:121 (6) - remove please.sound is better.


      [Insnae]
        1. 00:15:919 (4,5) - Switch
        2. 00:27:882 (5) - slider start here. 00:27:698 (4) -
        3. 00:59:539 (1,2) - Switch
        4. 01:22:361 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - How about this?
          • http://puu.sh/ajAfA/5fc83ab11f.jpg


        [Hard]
          1. 00:27:146 (1,2) - Switch
          2. 00:38:373 (3) - remove repeat?
          3. 00:44:078 (3) - ^
          4. 01:09:661 (4,1) - Switch // 01:09:845 (1) - this slider's head clap really Awkward.


          [Normal]
  1. OD > 4
  2. 01:17:207 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? Rad track hear a bass guitar.
  3. 01:23:097 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Easy]
Fine.

GL~
Topic Starter
Yasora

eINess wrote:



From My Queues.

Red : Must Fix. (Unrankable)
Blue : Should be fix it. (Recommendation)
Black : General suggestions.
Purple : My personal opinion.
[General]
    1. cheak in Widescreen Insane diff.
    2. BUG? ' ㅅ ' What is that?? I guess it's because star rating but dunno :v


    [Future]
      1. AR > 7 BPM is not fast. ' ㅅ ' but it's fit with jump in here ;-;
      2. 00:04:140 (3,4) - ctrl + G. (Switch)
      3. 00:09:293 (5) - overlap with (3). DS is not certain, So make think that overlap.
      4. 00:19:416 (6) - remove tail's sampleset. it will sounds weird
      5. 00:21:256 (1,2) - Circle the better. wanna keep it mirroring with (2)
      6. 00:30:091 (1,2,3) - How about this? more better sound.
      7. 00:30:827 (3) - constant DS. changed pattern
      8. 00:40:121 (6) - remove please.sound is better.


      [Insnae]
        1. 00:15:919 (4,5) - Switch
        2. 00:27:882 (5) - slider start here. 00:27:698 (4) -
        3. 00:59:539 (1,2) - Switch no
        4. 01:22:361 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - How about this? no
          • http://puu.sh/ajAfA/5fc83ab11f.jpg


        [Hard]
          1. 00:27:146 (1,2) - Switch want same with 00:33:035 (1,2) -
          2. 00:38:373 (3) - remove repeat? no
          3. 00:44:078 (3) - ^ no
          4. 01:09:661 (4,1) - Switch // 01:09:845 (1) - this slider's head clap really Awkward. don't want ruin the pattern :<


          [Normal]
  1. OD > 4
  2. 01:17:207 (1,2,3,4) - How about this? Rad track hear a bass guitar. sounds nice but I guess it's more understandable 1/1
  3. 01:23:097 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^

[Easy]
Fine.

GL~
thank you :)
Mortem
Hi, as requested from my queue.

Normal:
00:07:269 (2,3,4) - Try to replace it with slider w/ reverse arrow.
00:10:581 (4) - Put it opposite of (2).


Hard:
Nothing to complain about.

I know it's small mod, I'm sorry, but I didn't find anymore mistakes.

Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry

Good Luck!
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