GENERALFast timing check: BPM 128 and offset ~830
*I'm not 100% sure if offset is correct, but it feels OK
Since BPM is wrong, I can't do exact mods (because the map is going to change when BPM is change, of course). BUT, I'll give you an overall mod about style etc.
Your kiai time's start end end points are not snapped. Kiai time, and other timing points too, have to be snapped (=placed?) to tics in timeline (white, red, blue...)
↑↑ You can check stuff like this from AiMod:
Editor -> File -> Open AiMod OR Ctrl + Shift + AAdd a break time somewhere in the middle
Your map's ending is really bad. Either map the whole current breaktime, or delete those last objects (=end map earlier).
Your diffs' names make no sense. It is your own choice to change or keep them, but... Come on.
QT / EASYIn easy diff set Slider Velocity (SV) and Distance Spacing (DS) low. Suggestion: SV1,0 and DS0,8.
Also, you have to use distance snapping ALL THE TIME. So, enable it from editors right side. I won't mention DS in easy mod anymore, but remember to check it when repairing your map.
00:11:299 (4,1,2) - Slider from left to right, then jump to left and objects go through the slider... This is bad for flow and 'readability' (especially in easy / normal diffs)
00:11:183 (4) - New combo (NC)
00:12:929 (1) - No NC
00:18:980 (3,4) - Bad overlap. Avoid overlaps in easy diff.
00:23:402 (1) - This many repeats in semi long - long slider works as a good flow breaker and can be confusing. replace with something else.
00:26:660 (3) - ↑↑
00:38:763 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Six 3-point slider in a row? Try to make something more imaginative.
00:49:934 (6) - NC
01:06:226 (1) - Delete NC. Don't make any single onbject combos like 01:05:295 (1), except if you have a really good reason for that.
01:16:001 (1,2) - Another bad overlap.
01:28:569 (1) - Break time + 1 spinner ending is REALLY irritating...
MEOW / NORMALYou could change CS3. Totally optional. (expect if you make this otherwise hard for a normal diff, definitely CS3)
You have to use DS all the time in normal diff too. I recommend DS1,0 and SV1,20-1,40
00:01:059 (1,3) - Make sure those big sliders fit the music...
00:04:783 (3,5) - Overlap
00:04:783 (3) - NC
00:07:576 (5,1) - Really bad jump.
00:11:299 (4) - NC
00:12:230 (6,7) - No jumps... (won't mention here anymore)
00:14:441 (1) - This multislider is just weird. Doesn't fit hte music at all.
00:18:514 (3) - NC
00:33:177 (3,4,1) - Again, these multisliders are just weird. Stuff like 00:36:435 (1) - are used mainly just in epic drum rolls etc...
00:50:167 (6) - NC
00:51:330 (1) - Delete NC
00:52:611 (1) - This one could fit in the music, if placed correctly. However, It might be too bad for normal diff.
00:59:593 (1) - No
01:00:873 (2,3) - Bad overlap
01:04:829 (5) - NC
01:14:604 (1) - This spinner is too short imo.
01:28:801 (1) - Break + this: NO
DANDY, BABY! / HARDYour custom finish hitsound... It fits in couple spots, but that kind of sound just disturbs playing when used too much.
00:01:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Don't fit in the music at all. Also, it's better to start a diff with a bit easier notes, to get the feeling of the map before epic streams etc.
00:03:154 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ↑↑
00:14:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Random, pointless stream.
00:16:187 (1) - Delete NC
Again just random streams.
00:36:319 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - 0_0
00:44:348 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - :/ + ;_;
01:08:553 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This sounds rhytmically OK, actually.
01:15:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Too much circles.
01:28:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - Break + this = Nope
Overall comments:
*Seems like you just spammed random notes here and there. harder diff doesn't necessarily mean double the notes.
*Don't map something you can't clear yourself.
*Watch how other mappers map hard diffs. Try to emulate their style.
*Get some experience as a mapper, and then remap this.
Sorry if I'm too strickt...
Pros
*You have some style in your map, unlike many other new mappers (except hard diff)
*Sliders. Many new maps lack sliders, but not this
Cons
*Timing
*Pointless
MULTIsliders
*Distance spacing and bad looking overlaps
