1. Dandy (Normal+) (2,53 stars, 170 notes)
2. Honey (Easy) (1,6 stars, 95 notes)
3. Meow (Normal) (2,45 stars, 162 notes)
4. QT (Hard) (3,11 stars, 224 notes)

The Girls wrote:

Hi, I'm from Nana's Beginner Mod.

Cheat Sheet:
Must fix! (Unrankable)
Should fix! (Improvable)
Suggestions (Optional)

[General]
- Your metadata for maps aren't consistent. You only have a preview time for Dandy's Normal. All of the other maps have a preview time at -1. You need to make sure all the metadata for the songs are the same. Set the same preview time for the other 3 difficulties.
-Done.
- At first i thought you were doing collab 'cause typically "Person's Difficulty" format is used for guest beatmappers. Naming the difficulties after the main characters is fine, but them QT's Hard can be confusing. But if you don't indicate its Hard, then people will have no idea what QT means...so i dunno, do you have any other naming schemes?
-Uh. I'll leave as it is for now. Maybe I'll find something better later.
- Your mp3 file is 320kbps. Osu only allows mp3 files that are 128 to 192 kbps bitrate. You need to compress it
-Not done. I tried but, for some reason it screws up my timing. I'll leave it untill I find the correct way of doing it.
- Your video dimensions also do not fit the size. I have very little storyboarding experience, you will have to go to #modhelp or General Questions under the forums to figure out how to fix this.
-Fixed.
- Basically, all this is found by AI Mod. Check this for every difficult before you upload/update ever. You can access AI Mod by pressing Ctrl + Shift + A.
- Your BPM is 127.980. It should be 128.000 BPM. Slow your song down to 25%, and 50% to check the timing. Match the metronome exactly with the base beat. After you change your BPM to 128, make sure to resnap all your objects to the new timing. Additionally, usually when you time, you round to the next full BPM when your BPM is within .100 BPM from a full BPM.
I was really afraid of even touching the timing. But it seems it works. Done.
- Your offset is also wrong. You start your song's measure on a small white tick, that isn't the first downbeat of the measure. If you don't understand what I'm saying---check this out. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=10&t=20998
-Done. I think.

[Honey's Easy]

AR is 5. Easy difficulty should have an AR of 2~4 typically. Please consider lowering it a notch.
-Ok.
00:07:013 (1) - Red ticks are heavily frowned upon on Easy difficulty. Stick to white ticks and you're solid. Go through your entire Easy diff. You will have to remap a lot of it unfortunately 'cause you use red ticks a lot throughout the song.
Well, there are ranked maps that use red ticks. Guren no yumiya for example. I changed some of the ticks but there are passages that either feel better using red ticks or others where the beat has to be placed on the red tick.
00:08:185 (3) - New combo. This is the first downbeat of the first measure of the chorus. Remember, use combos to signify measures and stanzas in the song, not the pattern.
-Ok.
00:23:188 (1) - Double reverse-sliders have to go in Easy difficulty. You have to change all of these in this diff.
-Done.
00:48:270 (3) - ^^
-Done.
01:08:664 (2 ) - Blanket slider around Slider 1's radius indicators. Like this:

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You should check out the First Time Beatmappers guides before really starting on a beatmap, cuz its much harder to fix something later on than to do it right the first time around. https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/122533[/color]
01:18:274 (1) - Another example of better blanketing. Check out how to make neater blankets and sliders here-- [url]https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/208596[/url

-Same thing as before.
01:29:526 (2) - Follow the Slider 1's path. Move to the right so it is aligned straight.
Ok.
You use SV multipliers in Normal mode. That is unrankable. Its the same ideas changing your DS for a Easy diff---unrankable.
DS and SV for easy is now fixed. However ther are ranked normal maps that make full use of SV multipliers. Admittedly, there's not a lot of them but still. I'll keep it as it is for now. I'll consider it if every modder screams at me to change it.

[Meow's Normal]

00:01:387 (2, 3) - Make perfect triangle using Beats 1, 2, 3.

-Done as perfect as I could.
00:06:310 (4) - DS wrong. Too close to Slider 3's end. You should turn on Distance Snap and check all of the following values using AI Mod

-Most of these were done intentionally because it felt more natural for me. DS hasn't been very good to me. Probably because of my inexperience but, sometimes it's more hindering than helpful. I think I'll take this on more slowly, wait for other mods and see which of those really need to be changed.
00:14:749 (1) - Definitely no! DS must be consistent in Normal difficulty. Using a new combo doesn't justify messing up the DS, because a player is spatially intuitive about when to hit the note, color doesn't mean anything to a player.
-Ok. Fixed that.
00:18:968 (3) - Blanket and its also offmap.
-Fixed.
00:22:016 (1) - No! It ends on a blue tick? This isn't part of the song. Place on the red tick before it.
-Placed on white tick after it.
00:25:766 (3) - Blanket off Slider 1.
-Done.
00:38:190 (1, 2) - Absolutely not. These two sliders are reversing on an EMPTY beat. You are mapping on a non-existent beat which is very bad for intuitive natural playing. Don't make up what you can't hear. Think of Osu as an extension of song. You are ONLY adding instrumental effects on the beats already there, not remixing the song...
Ok. Changed the pattern.
00:49:207 (3, 4) - Gotta bracket these two sliders.
-Done.
00:56:943 (1, 2) - Again, NO! Nothing in song to warrant these blue tick reverses. Don't beatmap on the blue tick if you are just starting. A good rule is to beatmap what you can play. Go to test mode and try these...if you trip up on any of these patterns, than it means its not intuitive enough. Because you ARE the mapper so you ALREADY know what it should, yet you still make a mistake because you mapped yourself into a trap that you couldn't even avoid.
-Fixed.
01:05:616 (4, 5, 6) - Symmetry with 1, 2, 3? Why is it a whole notch above?
-If it makes any sense, I did it to make the jump smoother.
01:19:681 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6) - Even if the asymmetry is intentional, make sure the angle of the triplet-circles are the same. 4, 5, 6 should be Ctrl + H of 1, 2, 3.
-Fixed.

[Dandy's (ab)Normal]

Okay, so the Star Difference of the 2 Normal difficulties are 2.45 and 2.49. This is virtually no difference. It doesn't warrant another Difficulty. Keep only one of the two.
-Well, Meow's was supposed to be an easy bu I failed and it ended up as normal diff. Anyway, unless absolutely necessary I'll keep both.

[Insane]

OD should be 6~7 for Hard difficulty. Increase by a notch.
-Done.
Your hitsounds a quite random and inhibit the song more than it enhances it. In fact, i think its so messy, you will need to go thru your map and clear it out and re-hitsound.
-Alright. I'll read through the hitsounding guide and try to redo it. If I can't, then I'll go without them. This will take quite a lot of time however, so I'll do that in some later update.
00:20:844 (6) - Make a square with it. Like this

-Done.
00:35:612 (6) - Blanket.
-
00:39:597 (2) - Blanket.
-Uh. I don't think that's even possible with these. Or I'm misunderstanding something.
01:14:289 (2) - Blanket.
-Done.
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[Summary]
Everyone has to start somewhere. You've got some of the ideas down, but in order for this to be rankable and all, its best if you look through the General Questions forum and look at everything on this Compendium.https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/60228 It will make beatmapping so much easier.
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(Also, i see you added some custom hitsounds in your Song folder. In order to access them, you have to switch your timing point's Audio to Custom 1...or whatever Custom number you set your .wav files to. LIke this)


GL with everything
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Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

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  If you agreed these General mod, please apply to all diff in this mapset

1. The mp3 bitrate is above 192 kbps, i can handle this... i'll send you via PM
2. I'm suggest you to change the source to 'スペースダンディ ビバナミダ', and delete 'スペースダンディ' and 'ビバナミダ' from tags, because it's already used in other metadata
3. Change the preview point to 00:53:184 - or same as kiai start time
4. For some impact , maybe you can put this timing point to your timing and point control
   

   53184,-100,4,1,0,91,0,1
   64444,-100,4,1,0,91,0,0
   66380,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
   68184,-100,4,1,0,91,0,1
   83184,-100,4,1,0,68,0,0

   Actually the last kiai start and end point is not snapped, so the last two is highly recommended to used

1. 01:03:262 (1) - Please change this slider's start point to 01:03:496 -
   Nice chart

1. Decrease AR to 5 or below like this guide
2. 00:04:199 - Maybe you can add a circle here, do you hear the clearly beat, right?
3. This's my suggestion, on 01:16:855 to 01:18:027 -
   
   SPOILER

   Before
   After
4. 01:21:309 - 01:22:246 - maybe you can add a circle in each white tick if it's not broke your style
5. 01:23:652 - add a circle, there's soft drum sound
6. 01:27:402 - same ^

1. Decrease AR to 5 or below like this guide
   Sorry, i'm confused to mod this... please don't use 1/4 or blue tick in here, mostly following singer's voice is not good, try to fill the unplaced beat

1. Maybe you can decrease AR to 7 atm, 7.5 is good too
2. 00:00:449 to 00:01:855 - maybe you can fill this empty place with some circles or sliders
3. 00:07:012 - add circle hear, the're strong sound
4. 00:15:098 (1,2) - change this to , there's no need to give note in blue tick on this part
5. 00:21:894 - maybe you can add a circle here to make a new pattern
6. 00:21:777 (7) - NC this if the mod above accepted
7. 00:22:950 (1) - change to , used 50% playback rate
8. 00:34:083 (1) - move to white tick left
9. 00:37:949 - 00:38:066 - maybe at a circle to red and blue tick
10. 00:55:762 - add a circle here above 00:55:880 (9) - to make the pattern
11. 01:01:505 (1) - move to white tick right
12. 01:08:066 - 01:08:184 - add a circle in blue and white tick to make the pattern
13. 01:11:114 (4) - move to red tick right
14. 01:10:528 (3) - change the end point to white tick
15. 01:26:699 - add circle here, there's soft drum sound
16. 01:27:638 (2) - remove NC

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

[General]

• 
  
  If you agreed these General mod, please apply to all diff in this mapset

1. The mp3 bitrate is above 192 kbps, i can handle this... i'll send you via PMI would really appreciate it if you could. I tried to compress it in audacity but the result had really bad sound and it damaged the timing too.
2. I'm suggest you to change the source to 'スペースダンディ ビバナミダ', and delete 'スペースダンディ' and 'ビバナミダ' from tags, because it's already used in other metadata Done.
3. Change the preview point to 00:53:184 - or same as kiai start time
   I placed it on the red tick before that point as I read it's supposed to be done like that.
4. For some impact , maybe you can put this timing point to your timing and point control
   

   53184,-100,4,1,0,91,0,1
   64444,-100,4,1,0,91,0,0
   66380,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
   68184,-100,4,1,0,91,0,1
   83184,-100,4,1,0,68,0,0

   Actually the last kiai start and end point is not snapped, so the last two is highly recommended to used

I don't understand what those numbers mean. :< Could you explain please? I know the first one is offset but what are the others?

[Honey's Easy]

1. 01:03:262 (1) - Please change this slider's start point to 01:03:496 - Looks worse but plays better this way. Done.
   Nice chart

[Meow's Normal]

1. Decrease AR to 5 or below like this guide
   No. It would feel too slow if I did that. That's because I unfortunately picked very low slider velocity. As a result I have to compensate here.
2. 00:04:199 - Maybe you can add a circle here, do you hear the clearly beat, right?Ok.
3. This's my suggestion, on 01:16:855 to 01:18:027 -
   
   SPOILER

   Before
   After
   Fixed.
4. 01:21:309 - 01:22:246 - maybe you can add a circle in each white tick if it's not broke your style
   I think the I'll keep the break here as it emhasizes the end of the refrain.
5. 01:23:652 - add a circle, there's soft drum soundOk.
6. 01:27:402 - same ^Done.

[Dandy's abNormal]

1. Decrease AR to 5 or below like this guide
   Same as with Meow's.
   Sorry, i'm confused to mod this... please don't use 1/4 or blue tick in here, mostly following singer's voice is not good, try to fill the unplaced beat
   Well, this was the first beatmap I've ever done so it's natural it will have the most problems. And what does 1/4 mean? Anyway, I changed a few things so now most of the blue ticks are gone. Except one .

[QT's Hard]

1. Maybe you can decrease AR to 7 atm, 7.5 is good tooI think it's more fluid on 8. Btw, How would you even do 7.5? The slider doesn't let me choose half numbers.
2. 00:00:449 to 00:01:855 - maybe you can fill this empty place with some circles or slidersOk. Added a combo.
3. 00:07:012 - add circle hear, the're strong soundDone.
4. 00:15:098 (1,2) - change this to , there's no need to give note in blue tick on this part
   Ok.
5. 00:21:894 - maybe you can add a circle here to make a new pattern That's a bit too weird.
6. 00:21:777 (7) - NC this if the mod above accepted
7. 00:22:950 (1) - change to , used 50% playback rateDone. And added a beat afterwards.
8. 00:34:083 (1) - move to white tick leftOk.
9. 00:37:949 - 00:38:066 - maybe at a circle to red and blue tickWould look nicer but most probably unplayable.
10. 00:55:762 - add a circle here above 00:55:880 (9) - to make the patternOk I guess.
11. 01:01:505 (1) - move to white tick rightDone.
12. 01:08:066 - 01:08:184 - add a circle in blue and white tick to make the patternAdded only to white, blue would be too fast for this.
13. 01:11:114 (4) - move to red tick right
14. 01:10:528 (3) - change the end point to white tickChanged the whole pattern a bit.
15. 01:26:699 - add circle here, there's soft drum soundOk.
16. 01:27:638 (2) - remove NCDone.

Good Luck \w/

Perdzoch wrote:

ichia7x wrote:

Thanks for give me a chance to mod your map
Called from ♪ ichia7x's [4Mode] Modding Queue ♪

[General]

• 
  
  If you agreed these General mod, please apply to all diff in this mapset

1. For some impact , maybe you can put this timing point to your timing and point control
   

   53184,-100,4,1,0,91,0,1
   64444,-100,4,1,0,91,0,0
   66380,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
   68184,-100,4,1,0,91,0,1
   83184,-100,4,1,0,68,0,0

   Actually the last kiai start and end point is not snapped, so the last two is highly recommended to used

I don't understand what those numbers mean. :< Could you explain please? I know the first one is offset but what are the others?

Good Luck \w/

Thank you for the mod~
Also, coud you explain what that 'code' in general part of the mod means?

First

2517,-100,4,1,0,68,0,0
18500,-100,4,1,0,68,0,0
19437,-100,4,1,0,68,0,0
23109,-100,4,1,0,81,0,0
36840,-100,4,1,0,76,0,0
37956,-100,4,1,0,68,0,0
53184,-100,4,1,0,91,0,1
64444,-100,4,1,0,91,0,0
66380,-100,4,1,0,95,0,0
68184,-100,4,1,0,91,0,1
83184,-100,4,1,0,68,0,0

Second

Third

Done

Perdzoch wrote:

But if I did this I would loose all my velocity multipliers and would have to remap half of each beatmap.

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hey, From V&V's Modding Queue!

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[> General <]

1. - Check AiMod for the mp3...I kno
2. - Why do you need to name the diffs like that? Did another mapper made a GD for this? I think not...I'll do something about it later.
3. - Volume sound should be multiplied by Five.Done.

[> Easy <]

1. 00:07:012 (1,2,1) - Straightic, Make a Triangle formation at least?Ok.
2. 00:10:996 (1,2) - A flow broke here, Make slider (2) blanket slider (1)'s tail.Done?
3. 00:15:684 (2,3) - ^, but flow broke A LITTLE.No idea so I made them less curvy for a better blanket.
4. 00:23:184 (1) - Curving this slider should be a good flow here.Ok.
5. 00:24:121 (2,3,4) - Fix the Spacing here, and blanket.Done.
6. 00:29:043 (2) - Same as 00:23:184 (1) -, And blanket the circle.Darn. I wanted a straight slider here but the flow is really better when curved. Done.
7. 00:31:152 (3) - Flow is weird here, unsharp this slider.Nah. The curve was just off the beat. Corrected that.
8. 00:36:836 - Unused Inherited point, Remove it.Ok.
9. 00:48:027 (3) - Curve for blanket on previous slider's tail?Done.
10. 00:52:012 (5,1) - A jump on Easy? Beginners will not be pleasant. Use one Distance Spacing at a time.There's no jump there. Normal distance snap.
11. 01:09:590 (1,2,3) - Make a Triangle here.Ok.
12. 01:12:402 (1,2) - Curve these sliders a bit, And make symmetry on the slider (2) with 01:14:277 (1) -
13. 01:15:215 (2,2) - Overlapped.Changed pattern.
14. - Almost a nice diff, but needs a little work there.

[> Normal <]

1. 00:08:419 (2,3,4,5) - Fix Spacing hereDone.
2. 00:09:590 (5) - Curve this slider like the previous one for a symmetry and a great flow.Done. I think.
3. 00:14:747 (1) - Remove NC, Still the same track.Ok.
4. 00:15:450 (1,2) - Swap NCI don't understand.
5. 00:22:013 (1) - Same as 00:14:747 (1) -Ok.
6. 00:24:590 (4,1) - Same as 00:08:419 (2,3,4,5) -Done.
7. 00:32:324 (1) - Curve this slider a bit for blanket on slider's tail.Done.
8. 00:34:902 - Add a circle here, the vocals and the beat(MOSTLY) must not be ignored like this. Done.
9. 00:35:372 (2,3) - Nice but same as 00:08:419 (2,3,4,5) -Shortened it a bit but not totally to DS.
10. 00:44:513 (1,2,3) - Remake this triangle formation.No idea what you mean but changed spacing a little.
11. 00:49:200 (3,4) - Same as 00:08:419 (2,3,4,5) -Ok?
12. 00:51:544 (1,1) - Same as 00:14:747 (1) -Nah. it's ok as it is.
13. 01:00:684 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Why not make a star formation here?No idea what kind of star formation you mean.
14. 01:16:152 (3) - Curve for symmetry with 01:17:090 (5) - Curved and blanketed instead.
15. 01:17:090 (5,1,2,3) - Make a diamond formation here.Like this?
16. - Same reason as the previous diff... But a little more work.

Well, Other diffs are much the same reason as the ones i modded, except the Hard diff. It's okay if Distance Spacing is a bit bigger, But not huge. This is just my suggestion.
Good Luck with this map!

xLoupGarou wrote:

Mod Starts Here

Sorry for the Late Reply From . . xLoupGarou's Modding Queue

[ Honey's Easy]
00:10:996 (1) - Move ( x:232 y:96 )Ok.
00:12:402 (3) - Move ( x:408 y:200 )Moved a little bit more to keep DS.
00:12:871 (4) - Adjust and Move your slider . like this . .Done.


00:13:574 (5) - Also Move and Adjust this part forming like a checkmark ( well not exactly ) . like this . .Done.


00:33:027 (5) - Re-Shape this . Yes. Feels better but had to move it a bit to keep DS.


00:40:996 (5) - Suggesting you do it like this . .I like it. Ok.


00:43:809 (3) - Move it here --> 00:43:574 Nope. White tick is better.
01:24:121 (2) - Move your slider ( x:256 y:192 )Ok.

[ Meow's Normal]
00:20:841 (2) - Move ( x:232 y:104 )
00:21:075 (3) - Move your slider ( x:312 y:180 )Ok I guess.

00:25:762 (3) - Move your slider ( x:84 y:280 )Nah. I like this position more.
00:29:044 (4) - Move ( x:172 y:64 )Done.
00:35:372 (1) - Move ( x:56 y:88 )Ok.
00:49:903 (4) - Move your slider ( x:80 y:168 )Ok.

Lastly, I suggest you change your Dandy's [ab]Normal to Dandy's Normal+

Remarks :
Good Luck~

1. 00:10:996 (1) - Don't put this kind of sliders in Easy (too hard for beginners).
2. Try to not use many 1/2 notes in an Easy. Makes more hard the things for beginners. A clear example is the slider above and 00:12:871 (4,5) However, combos like 00:18:496 (1,2) are fine, because they are easy to read. Another hard to read combo is 00:39:590 (2,3,4) Use your criteria here to make Easy easier.
3. 00:31:152 (3) - You should turn this into a curve. Seems nicer and it's easier to follow.
4. 00:55:996 (3,4,1) - Same thing as first suggestions. Change this slider and the following notes.

1. Check AiMod for Distance Snap issues.
2. 00:18:966 (3) - Don't stack this under (1). Makes it hard to read. Move it and redo some things to avoid Distance Snap issues.
3. 00:36:778 (1,3) - Make those less curvy for a nicer appearance.
4. 01:03:497 (2) - Delete a reverse in this slider and add a circle to make combo clearer.
5. 01:14:981 (2) - Make less curvy.

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:

Hi!~ i'm here as requested in my Queue

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[General]
Who is Honey ? who is Dandy ? GD'r ? if not maybe better you should makes your diff name normaly
just easy,normal,hard,insane.. if there is no GD'r
When I try to change the naming of the difficulties it prompts me to upload it as a completely new beatmap so I'm not sure what to do. Will it overwrite the current beatmap or will I have two pending mapsets that are completely the same?Nvm, I managed to solve this.
[Easy]
okay.. first open AiMod and check distance snap for easy,there is 2 problem fix themBut at least the second one had correct distance snap. Anyway I moved it a bit so the messages are gone now.
00:06:309 - add circle here ? the first note should be hereOk.
00:08:652 (2) - yee i know this is easy,but make a normal imo please Ok. Done.

00:10:996 (1,2,3,4,5) - here too , isnt like easy cant use 1/2 but try use 1/1 makes more easy for beginnerNo. I like the flow here. The beginners will have to deal with it.

00:18:496 (1,2) - and this too,i have suggest imo.. stop follow vocal.. try to follow the beat

No. I don't like it. It 's too bland and repetitive.
00:23:184 (1) - blanketing with 00:24:121 (2) - ?Better as it is. Even blanketing should be done in moderation.
00:26:934 (1,2) - yep last suggest.. no more change your map style.. you can ignore imo suggest if you wantIgnored.

00:38:184 (1) - reduce by 1/2Ok I guess.
00:42:402 (1) - (x:368,y:217) to improve the stackDone.
00:44:746 - i think TV size not really need break,you can map this part (anyway already have a break time at 00:37:246 - )Added a slider.
01:15:684 (1) - move to (x:267,y:86) fot blanket with 01:14:277 (1) - ?Ok.
01:16:152 (2) - please makes this slider a little bit far from 01:15:215 (2) - or you can stack them if you applied my mod in aboveI like it. Done.
01:16:152 (2,3,4) - try this imoDone. Looks a bit weird visually but plays allright.

01:21:309 - add note here , and 01:21:777 (1,2,3) - move to white line.. see pic for easy wayNo way. I want to keep the pattern from the first half of the refrain. And it sounds weird too.

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[normal]
First Open AiMod and Aww shheeet.. Fix them..you should consistent the DS for easy and normal diffFixed as much as I could. Some are intentional jumps or shortens so I left them as they are. In one situation it's just Ai mod being an ass. Anyway, it's so hard to please Ai mod. Like a vain woman, no matter what I do it's never good enough.
00:07:950 (2,3) - 1/4 ? oh noo.. this is normal owo.. no 1/4 plzIt's only one and in such a visible situation. People should be able to handle it. I guess i'll make this a normal+ diff then?
00:20:138 (7,8) - better 1/2 slider reverse and add 1/1 slider at 00:20:840 - then remove (9)Done.
00:22:246 (3) - blanket ?Ok.
00:23:652 (3) - 1/2 slider pweaseNice. Done.
00:25:763 (2) - 1/2 isnt fit.. try to remove the 1/2 slider and add circle at 00:25:996 This feels like it leaves too much empty space. Not sure if it's good but I put here a 1/1 slider instead.
00:26:934 (5) - 1/2 slider reverse and add 1/1 slider at 00:28:574Why do you leave so much space out? A break in that place would be very weird. Did the change and added some stuff around.
00:47:091 (2) - overlapped,how about makes blanketing ?Is overlaping bad? Blanketing seems to break the flow here.
01:08:184 (2) - overlappedUn-overlapped it.
01:25:059 (5) - should NC hereOk.
01:27:169 (1) - wat ? end at red tick in 01:29:512Done.

[hard]
00:01:855 - add note here ?
00:03:730 - ^
00:05:605 - ^Done for all three.
00:08:067 (3) - reduce the slider by 1/4 and move to 00:08:184 , and add circle at 00:07:949 ?Done.
00:10:294 (8) - NC here
00:10:997 (1) - remove NC here
00:11:934 (4) - NC
00:14:044 (4) - NC
00:14:980 (1) - remove NC
00:16:622 (5) - NCAll NC's done.
00:18:263 (1,2) - another 1/4 for normal .. noo plzBut this is hard...
00:23:653 (3) - blanketOk.

oops forget , i mod easy though you ask me to mod your diff only ab normal and hard

too bored modding this..
you need to improved your skill mapping.. keep learnThis is my first mapset so it's natural I'm not very good at mapping. Yet.
but hope this helped..Yes it did .
Good luck~ with your map

LixRei wrote:

Came from mod queue. Sorry for the wait.

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[Easy]

1. 00:10:996 (1) - Don't put this kind of sliders in Easy (too hard for beginners).I'm keeping this one. Because I like it.
2. Try to not use many 1/2 notes in an Easy. Makes more hard the things for beginners. A clear example is the slider above and 00:12:871 (4,5)Ok. Changed this. However, combos like 00:18:496 (1,2) are fine, because they are easy to read. Another hard to read combo is 00:39:590 (2,3,4) Use your criteria here to make Easy easier.I know this is a bit hard. I'll consider it if other mods point it out too.
3. 00:31:152 (3) - You should turn this into a curve. Seems nicer and it's easier to follow.Done.
4. 00:55:996 (3,4,1) - Same thing as first suggestions. Change this slider and the following notes.Changed the reverse slider into 1/1 slider. I'll leave the rest as it is.

[Normal]

1. Check AiMod for Distance Snap issues.First one is intentionl because it plays better that way. Thanks for pointing it out. I completely missed the other two. Corrected.
2. 00:18:966 (3) - Don't stack this under (1). Makes it hard to read. Move it and redo some things to avoid Distance Snap issues.You should try out one of the Attack on Titan openings then. They use stacking a lot more often.(Actually, looking at it now it seems to be around the same.) So I'll keep it as it is.
3. 00:36:778 (1,3) - Make those less curvy for a nicer appearance.Done.
4. 01:03:497 (2) - Delete a reverse in this slider and add a circle to make combo clearer.Done.
5. 01:14:981 (2) - Make less curvy.Ok.

...sorry, I can't mod more
The only thing I can say is to check AiMod to solve Dist. Snap issues in Normal+.Well, the problem is that it all seems ok to me. I replayed it so many times that I can SS it no problem so I'm too used to it and cannot see the mistakes anymore.
I could mod the Normal+ and Hard, but I need a lot of effort to point out every mistake, overmappings and whatnot...Overmapping?What? I'm not aware of any..
...so let's leave it until here. Good luck with this (and sorry for not modding more )

Rtyzen wrote:

Hey there from my queue! Sorry it's late

No hitsounds? Please get to adding them in I'll try later but it will suck. I can't really find a method to it. Just look at my hard diff. It's a mess no matter what I try.

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[Easy]

1. 00:54:590 (1,2) - Blanket betterEh, I don't know in what way. Well, I did ...something.
2. 01:03:496 (1) - NC move to 01:04:668 (2) Ok.
3. 01:12:402 (1) - Remove NCDone.
4. 01:18:262 (1) - NC move to 01:19:668 (2)Done.

[Normal]

1. AR-1 OD-1(why would OD be higher on normal than normal+)Lowered AR to 5. BUt upped OD on normal+ to be the same. I think it's ok as it is.
2. 00:17:325 (2) - Doesn't fit with the music if u reverse on a blue tickOk. Made the slider longer.
3. 00:18:496 (1,2,3) - Avoid these overlaps in normalAlready changed it to keep DS due to lenghtening of the previous sllider.
4. 00:24:825 (1) - Remove NCNah. I'll keep this as it is to prevent the situation from becoming too confusing.
5. 00:32:324 (1) - ^Ok.
6. 01:04:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing too wide(for normal)It should be ok with lower AR. However, I put the last beat of the previous combo closer to make it more simple.
7. 01:19:669 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^^

[Normal+]

1. 00:14:747 (1,2,3) - Looks weirdChanged the pattern.
2. 00:26:934 (5) - x-1Done. And changed pattern.
3. 00:33:731 (1,2,3) - Spacing too wideMade shorter.
4. 00:35:372 (4,5,6,7) - Keep the spacing constant for the 4 notes since they are the same time apartNo. That would look really bad. I made the spacing shorter instead.
5. 00:38:184 (1,2) - Spacing too wide and looks weirdMade a blanket at correct spacing.
6. 00:42:638 (5,6) - Better blanket. (Move the second dot)Done.
7. 00:47:091 (2,3) - weird flowChanged pattern.
8. 00:48:263 (4,5,6) - Odd DS (same timing, different spacing)Changed spacing except for 6. 6 is very weird. Originally, it was at normal DS but I always clicked it way too early. In the end I decided to move it to this position. I'll consider it if other modders point it out too but not yet.
9. 00:56:934 (4) - Again, sounds weird if it reverses on a blue noteChanged.
10. 01:19:434 (5,1) - Too closeDistanced.

OK all I can mod for now, might come back and look at hard in the future. Good luck!~