-Famous- wrote:

M4M request from my Queue

General

1. 00:37:903 to 00:59:332 - Sounds like Kiai Time.
2. 01:46:475 to 02:07:903 - ^

Normal

1. 00:01:475 (2,3) - Spacing. Keep the spacing, because newbies can't read such a different spacing. Move them closer just like 00:04:332 (2,3). But that's how distance snap spaced it...
2. 00:10:760 (2,3) - Same problem as above. OK
3. 00:22:189 (3,4) - The spacing is different here too. Just try to keep the spacing. I don't point every spacing, that's different, because the mod will be too long for "no reason". No, that's how distance snap spaced it...
4. 00:34:332 (3,4) - I'm not sure: Can newbies read that? That's how distance snap spaced it...
5. 00:43:618 (1) - The slider looks a little bit weird. Move the last sliderpoint to x:84 ; y:132. After that change, move 00:45:046 (2) to x:64 ; y:40 to fix the blanket. Move 00:46:475 (3) one box up to fix the blanket too. Then fix the stack 00:45:046 (2,4). Changed area
6. 00:50:046 (1,3) - Blanket? OK
7. 00:56:296 (2,4) - ^ OK
8. 01:19:332 (2,3) - ^ OK
9. 02:09:689 - A break doesn't fit here imo. If you watch the dance, no one is really doing anything
10. 02:15:046 (1,2) - Blanket? OK
11. 02:28:260 (5,7) - Don't stack them. Move 02:28:975 (7) to x:332 ; y:248. OK
12. 02:55:046 - A spinner would fit here. Pass

Hard

1. Same problem like the Normal diff. You have to keep the spacing!
2. 00:36:475 (4,5,6,7) - Isn't it too hard to read? Well, it gets larger with every beginning of the chorus.
3. 01:45:046 (3,4,5,6) - ^
4. 02:12:725 (2) - Just no. OK...
5. 02:55:046 - A spinner would fit here.
   
   The biggest problem here is the spacing.

Insane

1. Some object placement are hard too read. Too much stacks. Actually that's okay, but that don't look nice at some parts.
2. 00:54:332 (7,8) - Don't sound right. OK to me, at least
3. 00:59:332 (5) - I REALLY hate this! Just wanted to say that. xD Then tell me what to do instead of just complaining...
4. 01:10:760 (5,6) - Spacing is too huge. I'll center on the y-axis
5. 01:42:903 (7,8) - ^ Umm... what difficuties do you even play...
6. 02:11:475 (7,8) - Spacing. ^
7. 02:12:725 (2) - What is this? That totally sounds wrong. 02:12:903 (3,4) that sounds wrong too. Luhan's singing isn't on 1/8 so I had to make it like this to matchw ith his singing.
8. 02:30:760 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Too extreme. Then how do maps like https://osu.ppy.sh/s/44519 this ranked!?
9. 02:37:189 (10,11,12,1) - That sounds wrong too. 02:37:189 (10,11) go with bai se de feng
10. 02:45:760 (8,9) - ^
11. 02:48:618 (10,11) - The spacing is too huge again.
12. 02:55:046 - A spinner would fit here. Don't like putting spinners in insane difficulties. The difficulty is based on the player's actually play level. Not but how fast they can spin.

That's my mod. I hope I could help you. Good luck!

Moo-Chan wrote:

From my modding queue~

Insane:

1. 00:00:761 (1,2,3,4) - I would suggest making these hit sounds just a bit quieter I'll do the same with the other difficulties, then.
2. 00:13:618 (7) - If you're going to place this note on the white tick, maybe place the note a bit farther away from the note before it. It lets the player know that there's a slight pause before the note Sure
3. 00:29:153 (7,1) - Feels a bit awkward to play Really?
4. 00:36:475 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - The hit sounds for these are reallly quiet and no one like to play without hit sounds. So maybe increase the volume a bit SO MUCH WORK
5. 00:37:189 (13) - NC
6. 01:45:046 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - Again with the low volume hit sounds. Increase them a bit SO MUCH WORK
7. 01:45:760 (12) - NC
8. 02:12:725 (2) - Change this to maybe a single note Luhan's "di fang ke hui tou" doesn't fall on the first blue line, so I had to do it like this, but I'll try finding a way to make it easier to read.
9. 02:30:760 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Once again with the hit sounds lol. Increaseee. Also, the placement of this stream, is really awkward. Put them together more or don't space them so far out. It feels weird playing a stream with a space in between it. Although, that's my opinion SO MUCH WORK. Also, I'm just used to playing with such jumps, but obviously people like WubWoofWolf, thelawa and SnowWhite should people able to do this without "failing."
10. 02:31:475 (13) - NC
11. 02:53:975 (7,8,9,10) - Sound way too quiet. Increase the volume a bit I'll wait for someone else to mention this.

Overall I like the map. I could see this getting ranked (:

Good luck with your mapset~

Xellie wrote:

Hi Hi, I'm here cause I'm just gunna grab random songs from Moo-chan's queue :3
all my suggestions for moving nodes/notes by say 1 grid unit or something are all in very small grid size (grid level 4) But that's how I did the whole map...
Insane
00:25:939 (12,13) - The jump between these seems too big cause it doesn't really match the music at all, I liked the kinda close jumps before hand cause the singer was going fast, but that last jump seems out of place.Made the gap smaller
00:29:332 (1) - Blanket this better (Start x:348 y:224, middle node x:392 y:256, end x:464 y:244) and you'd have to move the slider before it a little to have the start and end of the two sliders match up OK
00:30:046 (3) - ^ (nudge entire slider to the right twice and the start node to the right once) I tried to...?
00:31:118 (6) - ^(nudge the middle node down twice and to the right once, and the end node down twice) Can't really follow, but changed anyways
00:32:189 (1) - ^(end node up 4 and middle node up 1 and left 1) Changed anyway
00:36:118 (4) - the overlap this has with the stream is kinda ugly Put the end in the beginning of the stream
00:37:189 (13) - new combo Too early
00:37:903 (1) - you could blanket this with 00:38:618 (3) - by nudging the middle node of 1 over to the right once on grid size 4 and the end over 2 times
(middle node X:20 y:212, end x:52 y:288) OK
00:38:439 (2) - move up 2 times and right three times Already changed when I did the mod above
00:38:618 (3) - move the end node to the left 1 time Actually, I had to changed a bit more than that.
00:48:082 (7) - blanket better (move entire slider up 2 times and the the slider end node to the left 3 time) Isn't it fine like this?
00:59:332 (5) - Most of my mod so far is opinion but this HAS to be a new combo in order for players to recognize the super slow down of SV If that's the case, then I would have to add another colour specifically for Insane.
01:07:903 (5) - move start node to the left twice and the end node to the left once and down once Pass
01:17:903 (1) - move entire slider up once OK
01:45:760 (12) - new combo again Still to early
01:49:689 (2,3) - move middle node to the left twice, and the end node to the left twice and up twice Changed
02:07:903 (6) - HAS to be new combo as well, same reason Already happened
02:08:618 (7) - First this slider feels awkward cause what it's mapped to has no real impact so the repeats are weird, and secondly I'm not 100% sure but I'm pretty sure that having the hitsounding below 15% volume is unrankable It's at 40%...
02:12:725 (2) - the overlap of this is ugly and makes it hard to recognize as a slider
02:30:760 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - I get you're trying to make the kiai time section more difficult, but the astronomical spacing increase is just too much compared to what the same streams earlier in the song were I made the spacing smaller, but I'll have to fix the rest of the map because of the transition.
02:31:475 (13) - and also new combo Still to early~
02:37:010 (9,10,11) - the spacing for this and for 02:38:439 (2,3,4) - this are extremely different which makes it feel kinda awkward It follows the vocals

Final thoughts: there's several times where the volume for hitsounds goes below 15% which I think is unrankable (check with a BAT to be sure) Also it might be a good idea to add a spinner somewhere cause it's suggested in the ranking guidelines(not the rules) because it allows for greater score variability. I'll try asking about the volume when a BAT notices the map.

Overall I like the map, and hope I helped some \(>w<)/ Good Luck!

1. 00:00:761 (1) - There is technically nothing wrong with this, but the flow can be better if this weren't a straight/linear slider. Use something like this?
2. 00:04:332 (2) - Move the node on the tail to (189,53) for a better flow here?
3. 00:12:903 (3) - Move to (363,169)? You'll know why when you see it.
4. 00:12:903 (3,4) - Don't you think they are too close to each other compared to 00:12:189 (1,2,3)?
5. 00:24:332 (3) - Move to (336,183)?
6. 00:36:475 (4,5,6,7) - It's not allowed to use sliders that are silenced since they're extremely confusing, and you shouldn't try to map a silent part with something like this. Just map the vocal or something, and use a far higher volume. (Applies to the similar cases.)
7. 00:41:118 (2) - Move to (211,143) so 00:40:760 (1,2,3)'s heads will form a triangle?
8. 00:43:618 (1,3,4) - Try to make them not touch each other?
9. 00:44:332 (2) - Try this? Looks and flows better.
10. 00:53:618 (5,6,1) - The spacing and rhythm here makes this part confusing to play overall... Just saying.
11. 01:10:225 (3) - Move to (349,55) for a better flow?
12. 01:13:439 (2) - Move to (233,148), for, again, a better flow?
13. 01:27:189 (3,4,5,6) - What's with the spacing inconsistency at the end of the pattern?
14. 01:37:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
15. 01:42:189 (5) - Move to (199,33) for a better blanket?
16. 02:07:010 (2,3,4,5) - Make them straighter like this?
17. 02:37:010 (6,7,8) - uh wtf what's with the spacing here. It's very unbalanced and will be very hard to read for players. Make the spacing consistent please.
18. 02:45:760 (4,5,1) - Any reason you suddenly decreased the spacing here? Looks odd considering the spacing you use in kiai times.

1. 00:01:653 (2) - Stack to 00:01:832 (3)'s head instead of 00:00:761 (1)'s? Flows better.
2. 00:07:725 (6,7) - Why not make the spacing bigger? It'd play better instead of forcing the position so 00:07:903 (7) would be stacked below 00:07:368 (4).
3. 00:36:475 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - What's with this stream? It just... feels forced compared to the song itself. (Applies to the other streams before the choruses.)
4. 00:53:796 (5) - Move to (240,175) so 00:53:439 (3,4,5) will form a triangle? It'll create a nicer flow too.
5. 01:01:118 (1,2,3,4) - Make them in-line with each other? You know, either move (1,3) to y:200 or (2,4) to y:192. You should know why.
6. 01:10:760 (5) - NC to denote that this is the beginning of a different unique pattern?
7. 01:36:832 (8,10) - Try to make them not touch each other?
8. 01:37:189 (10,1) - Consider using a single slider shape for these two sliders. You know, make them have the same curve. Trust me, it'd play better.
9. 02:07:903 (1,2) - While this is kinda readable, this kind of rhythm doesn't fit the song, especially that 1/16 slider. In fact, silencing it won't help; it'd be worse since it doesn't give any feedback and is just unfitting. Consider using a single slider like the first chorus.
10. 02:26:743 (1,2) - wtf?

-Famous- wrote:

I just thought the Insane diff is too hard at a few parts.

Hinsvar wrote:

Well hello there! I'll mod your map...

...or more like giving general advices. After a little quick look at your map, I decided that it'd be better. Way better for me and you. Well okay, at least just for the Normal diff.

First, the spacing must be consistent with almost no exceptions (you'll know the exceptions later if you map long enough; one of them is when it's just impossible to place notes anywhere because of how the music goes). 00:37:903 (1,2,3) is NOT an exception, for example; you're not allowed to make the spacing inconsistent for the sake of blanketing. Also, you CAN'T make the spacing inconsistent to achieve/create symmetrical patterns.

Still in Normal, 00:00:761 (1,2,3) is very tricking because the spacing is visually the same, yet the difference is very noticeable in terms of the rhythm. 00:00:761 (1,2) are a beat apart from each other, and 00:01:475 (2,3) are half beats apart.

Then, you shouldn't really do something like 00:10:760 (2,3), where you place (3)'s head near (2)'s. It feels like you're forced to return to the spot you previously were on, which doesn't make a good thing since you're not moving a lot from your current spot. (Stacks are obviously not a problem, though.)

Also, you should start to use more curved sliders. For example, you can try making 00:22:189 (3) look like this.

Before I move on further, I think you should emphasize piano notes like 00:03:618 (1) with your custom finish hitsound. That'd be better since the spots won't make you feel weird while playing.

Hmm, then, for 00:34:332 (3,4), try this? Or just make sure (4) doesn't touch (3)'s tail.

00:47:189 (4,5) - Consider making them not touch each other, or at least make (4) overlap (5) exactly on the middle of it. That'd be neater.

The combo pattern is also not consistent, especially after the first break. I think you already know what to do here, so I'll leave that to you.

A little thing that I want to say: 02:26:832 - Why is the combo not gray here? I thought you only use it on the choruses...? And now that I think of it, why do you only use the kiai time on the last chorus? The other choruses are also quite strong, too.

Well, I just want to say that your Normal diff can be made far better than how it is now. For the Hard and Insane diffs, since they're quite okay, I'll return to the usual per-object comments.

I would rather prefer that you just modded regularly AND teach me who to make it better because looking at things like this kind of gave a me a headache trying to solve how to make it more playable.

>Hard

1. 00:00:761 (1) - There is technically nothing wrong with this, but the flow can be better if this weren't a straight/linear slider. Use something like this? Ok
2. 00:04:332 (2) - Move the node on the tail to (189,53) for a better flow here? You're obviously not using grip snap, but OK
3. 00:12:903 (3) - Move to (363,169)? You'll know why when you see it.
4. 00:12:903 (3,4) - Don't you think they are too close to each other compared to 00:12:189 (1,2,3)? OK
5. 00:24:332 (3) - Move to (336,183)? I do the x-axis, but can't really do with the y-axis because of distance snap.
6. 00:36:475 (4,5,6,7) - It's not allowed to use sliders that are silenced since they're extremely confusing, and you shouldn't try to map a silent part with something like this. Just map the vocal or something, and use a far higher volume. (Applies to the similar cases.) Really? I'll ask a BAT when they notice later about it then.
7. 00:41:118 (2) - Move to (211,143) so 00:40:760 (1,2,3)'s heads will form a triangle? But it's already a triangle...
8. 00:43:618 (1,3,4) - Try to make them not touch each other? I changed it, but it's kinda hard to because of distance snap.
9. 00:44:332 (2) - Try this? Looks and flows better. Did something else to the area
10. 00:53:618 (5,6,1) - The spacing and rhythm here makes this part confusing to play overall... Just saying. I tried...
11. 01:10:225 (3) - Move to (349,55) for a better flow? Not that I won't, I can't
12. 01:13:439 (2) - Move to (233,148), for, again, a better flow? Ah...?
13. 01:27:189 (3,4,5,6) - What's with the spacing inconsistency at the end of the pattern? OK
14. 01:37:903 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ OK
15. 01:42:189 (5) - Move to (199,33) for a better blanket? Umm... Distance snap
16. 02:07:010 (2,3,4,5) - Make them straighter like this? OK
17. 02:37:010 (6,7,8) - uh wtf what's with the spacing here. It's very unbalanced and will be very hard to read for players. Make the spacing consistent please. OK
18. 02:45:760 (4,5,1) - Any reason you suddenly decreased the spacing here? Looks odd considering the spacing you use in kiai times. Oh, god, I was think about TRakker - Rootus at the think, so my mind was not in the phrase of making a map.

>Insane

1. 00:01:653 (2) - Stack to 00:01:832 (3)'s head instead of 00:00:761 (1)'s? Flows better. Nah, pass
2. 00:07:725 (6,7) - Why not make the spacing bigger? It'd play better instead of forcing the position so 00:07:903 (7) would be stacked below 00:07:368 (4). Make a triangle
3. 00:36:475 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - What's with this stream? It just... feels forced compared to the song itself. (Applies to the other streams before the choruses.) Well, at least I didn't make a space every four circles like how the song sounds.
4. 00:53:796 (5) - Move to (240,175) so 00:53:439 (3,4,5) will form a triangle? It'll create a nicer flow too. OK
5. 01:01:118 (1,2,3,4) - Make them in-line with each other? You know, either move (1,3) to y:200 or (2,4) to y:192. You should know why. OK
6. 01:10:760 (5) - NC to denote that this is the beginning of a different unique pattern? OK
7. 01:36:832 (8,10) - Try to make them not touch each other? Pass
8. 01:37:189 (10,1) - Consider using a single slider shape for these two sliders. You know, make them have the same curve. Trust me, it'd play better. OK
9. 02:07:903 (1,2) - While this is kinda readable, this kind of rhythm doesn't fit the song, especially that 1/16 slider. In fact, silencing it won't help; it'd be worse since it doesn't give any feedback and is just unfitting. Consider using a single slider like the first chorus. I'll also ask the BAT about this, because I saw this somewhere else, but I don't remember...
10. 02:26:743 (1,2) - wtf? Oh, weird, how the slider move there...

Well that's it.

Your Insane is pretty good actually. I'm just kinda worried about those 1/8 jumps, though, since it's hard to differ between 3/8 and 1/4 sliders here. Also, avoid placing an object on a previous object's place too much. Try to be more dynamic!

Good luck on the way

Rad- wrote:

Hello, my part from the M4M :p

One thing i can say about the whole mapset is that the greyed combo colors really make the maps more boring, specially since you would do something like that if the map actually had a storyboard or something, this way it feels bland.

There are lots of patterns that ''stop'', it breaks the flow of the map so much, even for this kind of song, because those stops are not at the right places most of the time, try to move around more when mapping.

From 00:37:903 - to 00:59:332 and 01:46:475 - to 02:07:903 , make these kiai times, because its still a chorus. Actually, doing this makes it harder for hidden players

Normal

The whole spacing of this map is too inconsistent, many times too close (or on top of the next objects) and other times too far away. Learn to make a more stable map with proper spacing. Currently something I'm constantly working on.
There are waaay too many sliders like this 00:04:332 (2) in the whole intro, really repetitive Well, it's because I have to make the hitsounds match...
00:35:135 - - Remove this inherited point, because from 00:35:135 - to 00:37:903 - there is a huge silence, and add a Finish to that spinner Why would I want to here "PEW" in the middle of the map instead of matching it with the hitsounds?
00:56:296 (2) - Delete this slider, it starts in a really weird place for a Normal, and make 00:55:046 (1) - this slider reverse, doesnt have to fit the lyrics. all it really matters is to follow the song well, and yes, you might have to delete the inherited points you have there for the hitsounds. And most importantly, place the 00:55:046 (1) slider on x:372 y:60 with end of slider at x:188 y:68. Um... I followed SOME of that, main the slider
00:57:010 (2,3) - Place these objects closer to the previous pattern. MY GOD the timing point you gave me and the slider and circle is SO off
00:57:993 (1) - Move the start of this slider to 00:58:260 (1) Eh?
01:29:332 (5) - NC OK

Hard

This map also has really bad spacings, and would look more like an Insane map for the BPMs that it has, making your Insane look like an ''Extra'', that means that the difficulty spike is huge. Dang...
00:54:600 (6) - This slider is just too weird, specially with your wrong spacings. Delete it, and add 3 circles at: 00:54:510 (6) 00:54:689 (7) and 00:54:868 (8) , you know how you should place them. I'll ask a BAT
00:56:296 (4) - Delete this circle and place the 00:56:475 (5) - slider there instead, and new circle at 00:57:189 on top of 00:57:368 (6,7) Pass
01:20:403 (4,5,1,2,3) - Patterns like these makes me think this is an Insane. Oh, yeah. spacing
02:37:457 (7,8) - Just, no. Do like in 00:54:600 (6), its too hard to follow it as a Hard difficulty map. And you called it "weird..."
02:54:689 (6) - - Would be better for this slider to start at 02:54:510 to follow the song better, place it closer to the previous object, and maybe add a spinner at the end so the map doesnt end too suddenly. Pass

Insane

01:10:760 (5,6) - Don't think so, make it end at a blue tick and not yellow one. But someone already supported this...
01:12:546 (2) - Add an object here, probably somewhere distant, and another here 01:13:082 (4), maybe on top of 01:13:439 (6). Nothing really there
02:07:903 (1,2) - Distance is too close. Too close or too far? I'm surprised someone said it was too CLOSE.
02:11:832 (8) - Delete and reverse 02:11:475 (7) If you repeat, it doesn't really end at a good place.
02:22:189 (5) - Make it end at a blue tick. Kinda the same real as above. Except it when Chen sings "ke wo yi ran gan jue xing fu wei yi de li you," that "ran" doesn't fall on the blue tick. SO this happened.
02:30:760 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - Extremely bad stream, even the other 2 weren't this bad in spacing and jump. I think I fized it in a previous mod already.
02:37:814 (13) - This wont work, delete it Moved it to the next slider
02:54:332 (9,10) - End in a better way, the slider ends in an uncomfortable position and doesnt follow the song as well as it should.

Overall, you need to practice more mapping to create your own original patterns that would actually work when playing, and of course, play other maps more often to know exactly how to make a proper difficulty spread as well as map better insanes that would be fun to play. But the insane is fun to play~

[ Joey ] wrote:

Hello! I'm really sorry for the delay on the m4m!

Insane
This is the most difficult 84 bpm song I have ever seen lol I've seen HARDER
00:02:189 - Remove the whistle here, it sounds better Believe me when I say, this but actually sound BETTER with headphones.
00:07:725 (6,7) - I know you are trying to stack these, but the distance just doesn't feel good. Putting 6 at (414, 220) looks better Fized it before coming to this mod.
00:20:046 (10,11,12) - Maintain same distance OK
00:25:582 (10,11,12,13) - I don't hear a reason to add jumps like this. There are no heavy beats I'll put the thought aside for now, and think about it in another mod.
00:29:332 (1) - ctrl + g Pass
00:37:189 (13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - I like these, but I would prefer them closer together: http://puu.sh/agr3f/28d6b4c0ba.jpg Also the combo runs too high. Cut it in half Why
01:45:760 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) - ^ Is your computer like... 1024x768 or something...?
00:38:618 (3) - ctrl + g OK
00:39:332 (5,6,7) - maintain same distance OK
00:42:546 (8,9,10) - The distance in this combo makes it really confusing. Especially this distance: 00:42:903 (9,10) - it's way too far. I highly recommend using distance snap for this combo. VUT
00:54:332 (7,8) - same problem here. It should be more obvious that this is a 1/8 note Actually more like 1/16, but Imma keep it as it is.
00:57:635 (8,9,10) - Doesn't sound like a stream belongs here. Only needs a note here: 00:57:725 Matches back voicing
01:01:118 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing distance snap again What?
01:10:760 (5,6) - Wowww this distance is huge. I highly recommend lowering it Nuuu, someone like it like this~
02:02:903 (9,10) - ^ If people know the some, if should be easy.
02:22:189 (5,6) - ^ No problem here
02:12:725 (2) - eh, I don't see a reason for this Did something with a previous mod.
02:27:010 (2) - this note is in the middle of a slider. probably an accident Yeah, that's right.
02:54:868 - This is better imo; http://puu.sh/agrR4/f67b767abe.jpg But I don't like spinner in my insane maps... It's not fair that someone can get an extra 1000 points because they can spin well like SiLvIa...
I think you should prioritize distance snap more more often, rather than trying to stack in this diff.
Your combos also run a little high
Really fun difficulty, especially for a low bpm song. Eh~

I would mod the rest of the difficulties, but I am really busy with other mods to do at the moment, and your mod was kind of short on mine =/
If I have free time, I'll come back and mod the other diffs.
I hope you understand.

1. why your BG 1023x767? should change 1024x768.
2. why you used tag ',' ? this is not need imo.
3. remove widescreen support all diff. because you not used SB.
   

1. Normal diff AR6... i think really high this. try AR5.
2. 00:12:189 (3,4,5) - these overlaps. looks bad. so, normal diff don't overlaps better.
3. 00:15:046 (1,2) - ^
4. 00:20:760 (1) - add clap slider head.
5. 00:21:475 (2) - add clap slider reverse.
6. 00:35:046 (4) - i want clap.
7. 02:37:189 (4) - add clap. really fit.

1. 00:51:475 (6) - add clap.
2. 02:05:046 (3) - spacing close imo.
3. 02:24:332 (2) - add clap slider head.
   

1. 00:37:189 (13) - add NC..
2. 01:45:760 (12) - ^
3. 02:31:475 (13) - ^

P o M u T a wrote:

Hey Ya!

[General]

1. why your BG 1023x767? should change 1024x768. It's only one pixel difference...
2. why you used tag ',' ? this is not need imo. OK
3. remove widescreen support all diff. because you not used SB. It's not on!! How many people are saying this!?
   

[Normal]

1. Normal diff AR6... i think really high this. try AR5. OK
2. 00:12:189 (3,4,5) - these overlaps. looks bad. so, normal diff don't overlaps better. OK
3. 00:15:046 (1,2) - ^ OK
4. 00:20:760 (1) - add clap slider head. OK
5. 00:21:475 (2) - add clap slider reverse. OK
6. 00:35:046 (4) - i want clap. You sound so demanding~
7. 02:37:189 (4) - add clap. really fit. Oops, forgot about that.

[Hard]

1. 00:51:475 (6) - add clap. How in the world do I miss thing ese!?
2. 02:05:046 (3) - spacing close imo. OK
3. 02:24:332 (2) - add clap slider head. OK
   

[Insane]

1. 00:37:189 (13) - add NC..
2. 01:45:760 (12) - ^
3. 02:31:475 (13) - ^
   Why?...

map is fine!
also, nice song /
good luck -APXH
regards

-APXH wrote:

P o M u T a wrote:

Hey Ya!

[General]

1. remove widescreen support all diff. because you not used SB. It's not on!! How many people are saying this!?
   

SPOILER

VeeLaHee104 wrote:

-APXH wrote:

[General]

1. remove widescreen support all diff. because you not used SB. It's not on!! How many people are saying this!?
   

it's off only on insane, the first 2 diff is on.

SPOILER

no kudos
came here because i like the song ^^ star~

truonant wrote:

Hello M4M~ from my Mod Queue

none


00:19:332 (1) – adding NC could help increase the readability Not really looking for that, but I'll add this to the list of thing I plan on asking a bat.

SPOILER

00:25:046 (7) – NC – helps increase readability
00:37:189 (1) – NC
01:22:189 (7) – NC
01:27:903 (7) – NC
01:33:796 (7) – NC
01:45:760 (12) – NC
02:31:475 (13) – NC

00:20:760 (1,2) – try stacking slider head and circle on top of 00:23:082 (6) OK, but this was a LOT of changing around
00:32:903 (3) – stack perfectly on slider head of 00:32:189 (1) – (turn off grid snap to fine tune) OK, but I'm used to using grid snap
00:33:082 (4) – stack perfectly on slider tail of 00:32:189 (1) – (turn off grid snap to fine tune) Same as above
00:35:760 (2) – stack perfectly on 00:35:046 (1) – (turn off grid snap to fine tune) I'll pass for now
00:57:903 (1) - could be blanketed better - http://puu.sh/ajWM3/cf3ff7a926.jpg - don’t forget to adjust 00:59:153 (4) after It's how it is now
01:18:618 (3) – stack perfectly on 01:16:653 (7) Only has to move the end point one up~
01:43:618 (1) – could be blankted better on slider head 01:42:903 (7) It's fine now


00:09:332 (1) – could be blanketed better OK
00:26:475 (1) – blanket on slider tail of 00:25:760 (7) - http://puu.sh/ajYY1/26df311da4.jpg OK
00:43:618 (1) - could be blanketed better OK
00:50:760 (5) - ^ It's fine now
02:29:332 (1) - ^ OK
02:35:760 (3) – blanket on 02:36:653 (5) OK
02:41:475 (3) - could be blanketed better OK
02:44:332 (3) - ^ OK
02:50:760 (3) - ^ OK



00:40:046 (2) – could be blanketed better. Use ctrl+G on 00:37:903 (1) to fix - http://puu.sh/ajZFR/50563cc371.jpg OK
00:52:903 (6) - ^ OK
00:56:118 (2) – blanket slider head of 00:57:189 (3) - http://puu.sh/ajZQy/ee64ab6af8.jpg You mean the end, right?
01:15:046 (5) - could be blanketed better Not really looking to blanket here
01:32:189 (3,4) – Perhaps use sliders that blanket slider tail of 01:30:760 (2) - http://puu.sh/ajZZO/454c97b05c.jpg OK
02:17:903 (3) - could be blanketed better OK
02:21:475 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/ak0mA/0e969128bf.jpg OK
02:34:332 (2) - ^ use ctrl + g on 02:32:189 (1) to fix - http://puu.sh/ak0rs/3aea32fbcb.jpg Um... I gues...?
02:39:332 (3) – blanket on slider tail of 02:38:618 (2) OK
02:43:618 (1) – blanket on slider head of 02:42:189 (6) Actually, not looking to blanket this.

P o M u T a wrote:

WHY NC? TOO LONG.

Pjecoo wrote:

Hi, as requested from my queue.

Normal
01:25:760 (2) - Kinda big jump for this diff. Put it little bit closer to each other. (1) -> (2).
02:41:475 (4) - Same ^^ (3) -> (4). But that's what the distance snap did...
02:46:475 (3,4) - It's cool but it's too far from each other. Same reason as above
02:47:903 (5,6) - Same - try to make DS like for (4,5). It is...

Hard
00:13:618 (4,5) - Put them little bit closer to each other. Distance snap.
01:22:010 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - HO-HO-HO-HORY SHITTU, this is totally confusing. I can play this without miss but others who's gonna try it may fail, 'cause it's confusing. It's up to you, if you remove it, or leave it like it is. If you want to remove, don't make it so confusing. OK

Everything else seems fine to me.

Hope that'll helps
If not, then sorry
Good Luck![/color]

Churcheell wrote:

Hello!

As requested by mail, sorry for the delay :3

Insane

------
The main problem i can see here is that the combos are very long and the HP drain is kinda high. They don't really go well together because at parts you fail if you miss a couple of notes. Suggesting the following changes This map is NOT suppose to be easy for ANYONE. Even WubWoofWolf or SnowWhite.:

HP = 6.5 and:

SPOILER

00:07:903 - NC
00:14:332 - ^
00:19:332 - ^
00:25:046 - ^
00:36:475 - ^
00:37:189 - ^
00:48:260 - ^

You get the idea, most of the combos that go up to about 12 might benefit from a NC inbetween

OR HP = 6
------

00:37:189 - Gap is a bit big here given the small timeframe. Close the gap a bit. You can still keep the same pattern but just make the gap a little smaller, or remove a circle on each half of the stream to widen the time gap OK
02:31:475 - ^

OTHER than that, i think this map is pretty beautiful, well done

If you like i can mod the other difficulties, but i'm best at modding harder difficulties. Send me a mail

FlobuFlobs wrote:

Since i cant mod hard/normals/easy one diff mod

insane

1. AR8,5 should be enough for this Difficulty
2. 00:38:796 - 00:38:885 - they are doing nothing
3. 00:49:868 - ^
4. 00:52:725 - ^
5. 01:50:225 - 01:50:314 - ^
6. 01:58:439 - ^
7. 02:10:225 - 02:10:314 - ^
8. 02:13:082 - 02:13:171 - ^
9. 02:21:653 - 02:21:743 - ^
10. 01:47:368 - 01:47:457 - ^ am i missing something? xD There's a beatmap called "Rohi - Kakuzetsu Thanatos." In Pokie's difficulty, there's a sliderslide7 where it's a normal deafault hitsounds combines with some drum. The normal-sliderslide3 is the same concept.
11. Use more different circle colour's at the beginninjg, it really hard to read sometimes WAT HOW
12. 00:12:903 - how about this timline here to emphasize the vocals a bit better? OK
13. 00:16:118 (1) - slider here too, same reason as ^ Eh?
14. 00:10:403 - ^
15. 00:37:100 (12) - is there a reason for this big spacing here? DON"T TRUST ANYONE IN THIS EARTH
16. 00:37:903 (1) - ^
17. 00:54:868 - how about this here? it old one sounds off Pass
18. 00:55:314 - change this slider like that? otherwise the 2 section would be useless and like this you are emphazising both beats
19. 01:45:046 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,1) - i dont get this 1/4 spacing, its horrible to play. its destroying this really nice map
20. 02:30:760 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,1) - just no ^
21. 02:49:064 (11,1) - Looks like 1/2
22. Are not fully stacked circles like these 02:32:189 (1,3) - intentional? Yep

Faan wrote:

From my modding m4m req sorry for like 5 weeks wait (exaggeration)

Normal:
01:17:903 (1) - DS OK
01:26:475 (3) - ^ It's fine, apparently
01:32:189 (3) - ^ OK
01:29:332 (1) - ^ It's fine, apparently
01:37:903 (4) - ^ symmetry though Huh?
01:47:189 (2) - at the start I thought it was because KIAI you wanted to reduce DS.... then I was wrong Most of the map, if not all is already in distance snap.
01:55:760 (5) - DS Changed
02:26:832 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep in mind this is 'normal" OK
02:42:189 (6,1) - blanket OK
02:46:475 (3,4,5,6) - DS better OK
02:49:332 (1,2) - curve 1 more Eh?

Hard:
00:14:332 (5) - slightly off the grid I'd be more of a problem is it was OFF the grid as a whole
00:20:046 (8) - maybe NC Nah
00:21:475 (2,3,4) - sure? Fixed
00:40:582 (6) - NC instead Pass
00:51:475 (6) - NC Pass
00:55:046 (1) - 392,296 for first point after sharp turn Just redid slider as a whole
01:15:046 (1) - ugly overlap Fixed

skinnyjimmy wrote:

Hi! Here's the mod from my queue

I'm still a little new to modding, so don't expect much

[Insane]

00:01:832 (3) - Move this to blanket the first slider better, you can see it is not in the middle Because of the stacking of slider 1 and circle 2, it actually moves location when in actual play, if you actually played the map...

00:13:618 (6,7) - These notes kind of disrupt the flow of the song here, consider moving somewhere else on the map It's fine

00:23:796 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This part is very confusing, consider more spacing on these notes please Made it more visible

00:35:760 (2) - Space this note out a little farther, so people can read it easier, because people will think that you click it right after the first slider, because its right on top of it, if you understand what im saying I can read it. Plus, I'm not the best Insane PLAYER, so there are PLENTIFULY amounts of people that can.

00:37:903 Why is there no Kiai time here? Too flashy...

00:40:760 (1) - Really bad spot for this note imo, consider moving it to 216, 148. It flows a lot better here

00:42:546 (8) - There's no reason for this to be a 1/8 slider, but 00:42:903 (9) - should be, just not 8 It's more like 3/4, but whatever

00:47:903 (6,7) - This is a very awkward sequence here, consider changing this pattenr up a bit If you look at slider 3, it kinda looks like a continuation.

00:52:189 (1) - This shouldn't be so close to 9 because they are the same distance apart on the timeline, if that makes sense, make it more readable with more spacing It's a triangle~

00:59:332 (1) - This slider will definitely break people's combos if they havent played your map before, i agree that it should be slowed down, but not by that much, so change the slider velocity to .50, and make it a return slider. ALSO move it to 124, 40 to better blanket 00:58:618 (3) Pass, and yes, I have PLAYED the map.

00:59:332 (1) - if you do this ^ you will need to add a clap at the head of this slider at 01:00:760 You think I would already have known that?

01:45:671 (11,12) - I think this slider gap is a bit to big Could someone tell me that to Lan Wings, then?

01:46:385 (19,1) - This is WAYYYYYY to big of a gap, and placement of 1 makes this extremely difficult to hit, try to keep it in line with the stream, heres an example

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1900070

01:46:475 I believe Kiai time is appropriate here Still to flashy. I usually don't use it until the end, most of the time

01:56:118 (5) - spacing issue here, make it a little farther so it's easier to read Moved

02:07:903 (1) - like the same issue as before, its slowed down to much, people would never expect it, so change the SV, and make the note a little longer I already have this on my list of things to ask a BAT.

02:31:385 (12,13) - the stream gap is to big here OK

02:32:100 (20,1) - to big of a gap here too OK

02:32:725 (2) - try to avoid overlapping notes, unless its completely necessary Well, just be grateful I didn't have the end of the slider NEXT to the circle in sequence.

Well that's it for my mod! Hopefully this helped you a little bit

Really nice song, I like it

GL with this map!

1. 00:37:189 (13) - I can accept the little jump, but better put a new combo from here
2. 00:42:546 (8) - NC also here. You use the same spacing of the current combo, yet the notes haven't it and it's confusing for the player. Adding a NC solves it imo
3. 01:10:760 (1,2) - Such a jump o.O
4. 01:12:189 (1) - Since the notes have the same time space between them better remove NC
5. 01:13:260 (3) - Put here the previous NC
6. 01:45:760 (12) - You really need a NC here (already explained above)
7. 02:08:618 (2) - Why so far away from the previous note?
8. 02:31:475 (13) - Once again you need a NC
9. Why the black combos? They're really out of place imo

1. 00:26:475 (1,2) - What's this o.O? You can't do such a jump on a Hard diff
2. 00:40:582 (6) - The NC goes here and not 00:40:760 (1) here
3. 00:46:296 (5) - Same ^
4. 00:59:332 (1) - Every 2 ticks (or decide you how much) decrease the volume

1. 02:06:475 (1) - It doesn't fit the song imo

[-MrSergio-] wrote:

Hi there :3 Here's my mod from my modding queue requested centuries ago :3 (I know I'm a lot late, sorry)

[Insane]

1. 00:37:189 (13) - I can accept the little jump, but better put a new combo from here OK. I also applied this to the other times
2. 00:42:546 (8) - NC also here. You use the same spacing of the current combo, yet the notes haven't it and it's confusing for the player. Adding a NC solves it imo From which slider to which slider?
3. 01:10:760 (1,2) - Such a jump o.O Try telling that to Hollow Wings
4. 01:12:189 (1) - Since the notes have the same time space between them better remove NC I thought it was originally confusing. I think someone already pointed out that, though.
5. 01:13:260 (3) - Put here the previous NC
6. 01:45:760 (12) - You really need a NC here (already explained above) Did that already
7. 02:08:618 (2) - Why so far away from the previous note? I ask the BAT
8. 02:31:475 (13) - Once again you need a NC OK
9. Why the black combos? They're really out of place imo I have that for now; I'll make a decision when I get home from vacation.

[Hard]

1. 00:26:475 (1,2) - What's this o.O? You can't do such a jump on a Hard diff Oh, how did that happen in the first place?
2. 00:40:582 (6) - The NC goes here and not 00:40:760 (1) here I put the new combo here mainly because of "bass?"
3. 00:46:296 (5) - Same ^ ^
4. 00:59:332 (1) - Every 2 ticks (or decide you how much) decrease the volume Pass. I don't like having the sound of the spinner in such nice songs, or any of my beatmaps in general.

[Normal]

1. 02:06:475 (1) - It doesn't fit the song imo How so?

That's all from me, see ya

Hi from SoGa's Modding Queue

[General]

1. No Prob.

[Normal]

1. 00:43:618 (1,2) - Fix Blancket?
2. 01:46:475 (1) - x:152 y:128
   
   Good

[Hard]

1. 00:44:868 (3) - Stack?
2. 02:32:189 (1,2,3,4) - Not flow
3. 02:43:975 (2) - Ctrl + G ?

[Insane]

1. 02:41:475 (3,5) - Ctrrl + G?
   
   Nothing more

Sry for this poor mod.

SoGa wrote:

Hi from SoGa's Modding Queue

[General]

1. No Prob.

[Normal]

1. 00:43:618 (1,2) - Fix Blancket? OK
2. 01:46:475 (1) - x:152 y:128 OK
   
   Good

[Hard]

1. 00:44:868 (3) - Stack? Distance snap won't let me.
2. 02:32:189 (1,2,3,4) - Not flow
3. 02:43:975 (2) - Ctrl + G ? OK

[Insane]

1. 02:41:475 (3,5) - Ctrrl + G? Nah
   
   Nothing more

Sry for this poor mod.

Hollow Wings wrote:

from Scorpiour's Modding Queue

Chinese song? one star in advance www Yay~

General

1. combo color 2 and 3 r too similiar, plz change one for easier reading sets So... Much... Work...

Insane

1. 00:00:761 (1,3) - perfect this blanket Actually, it looks fine in actual play:
   
2. 00:04:510 (3,5) - blanket OK
3. 00:10:225 (3,5) - ^, maybe check these detail or nazi issues by urself Fixed
4. 00:25:046 (7) - nc Pass
5. 00:27:903 (5,6) - don't overlap 6's arrow OK
6. 02:24:332 (3,5) - same as above OK
7. rhythms' good to me, thou composings' too random. just map and mod more map, and see other normal or even pro mappers how they deal with their composing in organizations

Hard

1. 00:21:653 (3,4) - stack at 00:19:510 (6,7) - and move 00:21:475 (2) - to make a regular triangle here OK
2. 01:33:975 (7,8) - avoid this overlap OK
3. 02:33:260 (6,7) - maybe blanket attempted try to make it a blanket.
4. almost same words in insane diff

Normal

1. 01:39:332 (5,1) - don't overlap that arrow OK
2. 01:52:189 (1,2) - nearly touched, maybe spread them I spread them out, but not by a lot because of distance snap.

"你的世界“ is actually "your world" in English, and "into your world" is "进入你的世界" in Chinese lol Actually, I've been battling my head about this. I got the English title from this Wikipedia article. However, if I get noticed by a Chinese speaking XAT, I'll try asking if they can give a re-check.

good luck