1. Easy (2.01 stars, 120 notes)
2. Fame (5.19 stars, 321 notes)
3. Hard (3.01 stars, 208 notes)

MissGeurts wrote:

I think it looks good the only thing I didn't see was Kiai Mode.

TestApple wrote:

WHERE IS THE [GAY SEX] DIFFICULTY????? IT'S K DUDE, THAT CAN BE ARRANGED. (extra > 500+hitobjects > collab> wat)

MissGeurts wrote:

I wasn't able to finish the difficulties without no fail but I shall see what I can do.

[General]
I think it looks good the only thing I didn't see was Kiai Mode. I suggest to use it between 00:48:022 and 01:06:433.
Added Kiai time!
[Youthful]
00:21:088 - 00:21:770 I should put at least one extra circle here because the time between slider 1 and slider two is too long.
I took your advice and elaborated on it
[Fame]
00:44:272 - 00:45:022 Also a rather big gap in the timeline.
Same here, took your advice~!

Back to mod the Youthful difficulty after I saw the update xd

[Youthful]
00:13:616 I would put slider 2 to 00:13:684 (and hitcircle 3 together with it) because the spaces between slider 1 and 2 are too big for this timing.This is kind of my mapping style for when songs change.... what's it called... verses(???). Especially with sliders, all I did to change it was to make it look more neat by moving that slider a bit.
00:32:979 I suggest to change the starting place of slider 3 a little bit more to the inside. Got it!

You may want to reduce the size of the video since the size of the beatmap is past 24 Mb now and it needs to be beneath 24 Mb to get ranked.
ya ya i know :< rip need to redownload video editing software I changed the video size!!!!!!
It looks good to me so far, keep up the good work!

Tsuchimikado wrote:

"It's an anime for girls"

1. I see what you did with the difficulty names, but according to the ranking criteria they have to be indicative of their relative difficulty in a way that makes sense (except for the hardest difficulty). The most common is Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane, but Dried Up, Youthful, Fame is a bit of a stretch. You could push it forward longer but be aware that when the time to rank comes, the BAT's may ask you to change them.
2. Tags are for words related to the song that aren't already in the other metadata fields. Since all of your tags appear somewhere else in the metadata, they don't need to and shouldn't be in tags. Please add things like "iwatobi swim club" (part of English title), "s2" (season 2), and "kyoani" and "kyoto animation".
3. You should map an Easy difficulty, which would make your mapset much more favorable. Not having the Easy is a sign of laziness on your part, and doesn't look good to people. Only slow songs can have Normal-Hard or Easy-Normal-Hard mapsets, and faster ones will always have Easy-Normal-Hard-Insane. Normal-Hard-Insane doesn't happen because the song can support an Easy.

1. increase OD and HP drain to about 4.
2. 00:00:798 (1,2) - increase distance snap or change pattern in a way so that these don't overlap
3. 00:43:343 (3,4,5) - not exactly lined up, try angling the slider a little lower
4. 00:55:343 (6,7,8,9,1) - excessive stacking can prove confusing
5. 00:57:934 (2) - remove this circle, since it doesn't follow the music or vocals
6. 00:59:570 (6,8) - 01:00:252 (7,1) - this whole part is confusing because of overlaps like this, please keep objects separated and overlap sparingly to make things simpler
7. 01:20:707 (1,2,3) - never stack a circle between two sliders in normal like this, they can't read it

1. 00:04:207 (2) - also map the two ticks before it to follow the music better
2. 00:08:979 (1,1) - blanket
3. 01:00:661 (3,4,5,6) - make this a little neater, like less overlapping
4. 01:14:843 (3,4) - copy/paste to make these parallel

1. 00:03:116 (2,4) - make these parallel (use copy/paste) to be neater
2. 00:10:343 (3,4) - this is a better blanket http://puu.sh/aJenl/e451ce6d72.png
3. 00:25:752 (4) - the flow from the previous object is awkward. it's much better to ctrl-g and also maybe put this on the other slide of the circle it's blanketing
4. 00:36:116 (4) - keep following the strong beat on the white ticks, it sounded awkward when you suddenly switched to follow vocals after following the instruments earlier
5. 00:36:116 (4,5) - blanket is a little far in the middle
6. 00:43:343 (5,6,7,8,1) - the later notes aren't exactly in a straight line, try to line them together
7. 00:54:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - kind of hard to read the second part because it's stacked
8. 00:56:707 (6,1) - make the middle slider point closer for blanket
9. 01:02:434 (3,5) - ^
10. 01:04:479 (2) - all those slider points are unnecessary
11. 01:15:116 (2) - this area would be better mapped with 1/4 beats, since the music notes are 1/4

Z3R0Xx wrote:

Doing M4M.

My explanations aren't that great so ill add pictures just in case.

Boxes with '^' just refer to the mod above.

Change what you feel like, these are only suggestions.

Well lets get to it!

[General]

Little note, for this map to meet ranking criteria the lowest difficulty must be bellow 2 stars. So I suggest you make Dried Up easier or map an easier difficulty. Keeping fame for sure, I'm probably going to map a normal now (unless someone else wants to do it fufufu)

[Dried Up]

00:02:979 (3,4) - Remove (4) and extend (3) so its on the white tick and makes it a little easier. yupyup
00:13:343 (3,1) - Make slider (1) on the same level as (3). Its looks and flows nicer. yupyup

00:15:525 (3) - Tilt this slider up more yupyup
00:31:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I'm not hitsound expert but I don't think all these claps are really necessary. If you want to keep them lower the volume of the hitsounds. i lowered the volume
00:40:070 (6) - How about moving this note out a bit? You can make a triangular flow with the next slider. good idea!

00:41:161 (2) - Tilt this slider down a bit. yupyup
00:43:343 (3,4,5) - tilt slider (3) down a tiny bit and move (4) down 1 unit so it looks nicer. the next three things i kind of reworked
00:47:025 (2,3) - Maybe change to a slider?
00:55:343 (6,7,8,9) - idk how I feel about this also kind of reworked
01:04:070 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - A little hard don't you think? Seeing as its your lowest difficulty, new players need to be able to do this. Consider revising. revised
01:14:843 (1,2,3,4) - ^ revised
01:20:707 (1,2,3,4) - ^ mostly due to overlap. revised

[Youthful]

00:03:116 (5,1) - I don't like this overlap, makes it hard to read. yupyup, i fixed it so that only the reverse slider and the next circle overlap
00:07:888 (3,1) - Make Slider (1) Head on the same x/y position as slider (3) yupyup, fixed the entire combo to accommodate this fix
00:31:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Please lower these volumes if you plan to keep the claps. changed volume
00:43:343 (2,3,4,5) - Fix these so they looks nicer, placement wise anyways. i sort of changed it... very very minimal changes here
00:51:525 (3) - make this a rounded slider and not a slider with a corner, looks nicer. made it round
00:57:798 (2) - Move this note here x239 y191 i just deleted it and placed a new one so it auto-snaps
00:59:161 (5) - I don't think this is necessary. I don't think it sounds good. left it there for the drumroll part
01:24:116 (3,4) - Remove (4) and extend slider (3) to the red tick made it a reverse slider instead.

[Fame]

Is this another talent Shredder? Haha my jokes suck, I'm sorry, but that SV though... might just be me but it looks incredibly fast along that spacing, that's really tough. Haha, it's just my mapping style, I map the flow based on how I think the movements feel when I move my hand. Which is why the fast velocity feels right to me for this song.

00:21:252 (1) - This slider is boring. Make it curved. made it wavey, not round
00:29:570 (2,3) - Someone said to me that this isn't really recommended because it breaks the flow. Why not try this. here's a picture showing how I play this part

this is a box with a picture hidden inside

00:31:616 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Please lower the volume a bit more (65% maybe)... my ears are bleeding T^T RIP your ears xD lowered the volume
00:38:843 (4) - This (4) does not belong here i removed it and replaced it with a triplet
00:56:979 (1,2,3) - Move (3) over to the right more to make a better triangle. Flows nicely to the next not as well. i suppose.... i was reluctant at first...

01:23:298 (1,2,3) - Not liking this overlapping, consider revising. revised

Not a bad map, still could use some work. Keep working at it and good luck getting it ranked. Any Questions message me or PM me ingame. Also, where i say to lower the volume, reduce by 5% or so because they were incredibly loud (maybe my volume was too high )

xxdeathx wrote:

[General]

1. I see what you did with the difficulty names, but according to the ranking criteria they have to be indicative of their relative difficulty in a way that makes sense (except for the hardest difficulty). The most common is Easy, Normal, Hard, Insane, but Dried Up, Youthful, Fame is a bit of a stretch. You could push it forward longer but be aware that when the time to rank comes, the BAT's may ask you to change them. gotcha
2. Tags are for words related to the song that aren't already in the other metadata fields. Since all of your tags appear somewhere else in the metadata, they don't need to and shouldn't be in tags. Please add things like "iwatobi swim club" (part of English title), "s2" (season 2), and "kyoani" and "kyoto animation". yupyup
3. You should map an Easy difficulty, which would make your mapset much more favorable. Not having the Easy is a sign of laziness on your part, and doesn't look good to people. Only slow songs can have Normal-Hard or Easy-Normal-Hard mapsets, and faster ones will always have Easy-Normal-Hard-Insane. Normal-Hard-Insane doesn't happen because the song can support an Easy.Yeah, so i changed the title's of the difficulties to Normal and Hard. The easy diff, i'll have to get around to doing.

[Dried up]

1. increase OD and HP drain to about 4. HP now 3, OD is 4
2. 00:00:798 (1,2) - increase distance snap or change pattern in a way so that these don't overlap fixed
3. 00:43:343 (3,4,5) - not exactly lined up, try angling the slider a little lowerchanged from the previous mod
4. 00:55:343 (6,7,8,9,1) - excessive stacking can prove confusing ^
5. 00:57:934 (2) - remove this circle, since it doesn't follow the music or vocals ^
6. 00:59:570 (6,8) - 01:00:252 (7,1) - this whole part is confusing because of overlaps like this, please keep objects separated and overlap sparingly to make things simpler ^
7. 01:20:707 (1,2,3) - never stack a circle between two sliders in normal like this, they can't read it ^

This map's star rating is of a normal, but some parts look like a hard. Try to use fewer techniques like stacking or overlapping.

[Youthful]

1. 00:04:207 (2) - also map the two ticks before it to follow the music better didn't take action BECAUSE wasn't sure if you meant two ticks literally (1/4 beat snap div) or you meant 2 single beat ticks (white ticks/red ticks)
2. 00:08:979 (1,1) - blanket done
3. 01:00:661 (3,4,5,6) - make this a little neater, like less overlapping had to break distance snap for this, but i did it
4. 01:14:843 (3,4) - copy/paste to make these parallel reworked this bit

[Fame]

1. 00:03:116 (2,4) - make these parallel (use copy/paste) to be neater reworked
2. 00:10:343 (3,4) - this is a better blanket http://puu.sh/aJenl/e451ce6d72.png that's not what i was going for
3. 00:25:752 (4) - the flow from the previous object is awkward. it's much better to ctrl-g and also maybe put this on the other slide of the circle it's blanketing I tried using MS Paint to show you how this flows in my eyes, but the lines overlapped and looked bad, so...
4. 00:36:116 (4) - keep following the strong beat on the white ticks, it sounded awkward when you suddenly switched to follow vocals after following the instruments earlier I feel like here its okay tho
5. 00:36:116 (4,5) - blanket is a little far in the middle idk if i fixed it, but i changed it a little
6. 00:43:343 (5,6,7,8,1) - the later notes aren't exactly in a straight line, try to line them together they aren't supposed to be, but i made it more clear that its slanted
7. 00:54:388 (3,4,5,6,7) - kind of hard to read the second part because it's stacked reworked
8. 00:56:707 (6,1) - make the middle slider point closer for blanket k
9. 01:02:434 (3,5) - ^ ^
10. 01:04:479 (2) - all those slider points are unnecessary
11. 01:15:116 (2) - this area would be better mapped with 1/4 beats, since the music notes are 1/4 didn't quite understand what you mean

Remember that this song is extremely fast. 220 BPM is even higher than Brynhildr in the Darkness's 218, and even in the insane/extra the mapper avoided too big or too many 1/2 note jumps, preferring to keep most of his 1/2 circle jumps in a line or other simple pattern. It's really hard (much harder than a 5 star map should be) to play the jumps at this high BPM, so try to use fewer of them.

Overall, work on neatness and conforming to difficulty standards, since some parts are inconsistent with what is expected of their difficulty. Good luck!

Tsuchimikado wrote:

IF ANYONE WANTS TO TRY AND MAP A NORMAL AND/OR AN EASY GD, YOU'RE SOOOOO TOTALLY WELCOME TO DO SO. I CAN'T MAP THOSE FOR MY LIFE.