1. Marathon (5.05 stars, 716 notes)

Fast wrote:

굿

Nwolf wrote:

bbj I'll kill you in your sleep

[Taco]

00:13:792 (56) - Shouldn't this be kat for the annoying high thingy thing? you're right
00:13:948 (57,58,59) - Suddenly opposite color whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat wuuuut no change
00:18:167 (92,93,94,95) - no doublets here pls triplets only pattern is not fun tho
00:42:776 (309,310) - Invert color to prepare for the kat rhythm change accepted
00:43:010 (311,315) - Change to kat for same reason as above ^
- 01:12:542 - to 01:22:542 - is actually a nice part to build in a few more breaks since it is calmer than before and after...
-> 01:13:713 (557,558) - Delete these accepted
-> 01:14:338 - Add a don here accepted
-> 01:15:276 (570) - Move this 01:15:588 - here accepted
-> 01:15:979 (575,576) - Delete these moved the position of stream instead
01:17:854 - to 01:22:542 - I don't get why you overmapped so incredibly much here compared to previous parts. I don't get it too it's like my stupid childhood - remapped
02:07:542 (986) - Change to kat cause it plays (and sounds) better) accepted
02:47:698 (1359,1360,1361,1362) - Is this really necessary yes
03:12:932 (1600) - Change to don, don't like dat dkkkd. accepted
06:03:088 (1271) - Change to kat to somewhat keep snare rhythm ehh no because it's to fit the melody
08:06:994 (221,223) - Think it plays better if you trade these two current pattern kinda sounds better
08:11:760 (267,268,269,270) - pls changed the pattern
11:46:369 (244) - Would cut the stream here since making something evil like this at the end seems pretty harsh okay ;_; preventing cancer
12:46:604 (776) - Change to kat for moar playability ehh no dat pattern is just being simple

hm.. that's it! :D

Good luck thanks <3

Lunaris Filia wrote:

00:02:385 (6,7) - k d (내려가는 음이 맞는것 같음) - 고침
00:33:245 (223,224) - dd (그닥 강조할만한 음이 없는듯) - 리듬을 주로 따라감
00:33:245 (223) - 맞는 음이 없고 플레이어게 0.078초의 쉬는 시간도 주고싶으니까 지워주세요 ㅠㅠ - 이 맵은 어렵습니다. 스타레이팅도 그렇게 말하고 있고요 :3
00:36:917 (255,256,257) - kkd (225 노트에서 음이 하나 있어서) - 2줄 위와 같음
00:38:245 (268) - 00:33:245 (223,224)과 동일 - 그거랑 동일
00:38:010 (266,267) - dk (↗) - 2줄 위와 같음
00:42:542 ~ 00:47:542 (353) - 살짝만 쉽게 해주셨으면 좋겠...... - ㄴㄴ
01:10:042 (528) - k - ㅇㅋㅇㅋ 배경에 여자아이 츠키코였나 얘 졸귀네요
01:10:354 (529,530,531,532,533,534,535) - k kkd d k K - 마지막 노트는 곡에 맞지도 않네요 </3
01:12:542 ~ 01:22:542 (629) - 여기도 노트 살짝씩 아껴가면서 느긋하게; - 이미 고친게 있는 파트임
01:31:917 (708,709,710,711,712) - ddkdK 마지막부분 K로할지 k로할지는 알아서 조절해주세여 - ㄴㄴ 그리고 ddkdK은 이제 언랭커블임
01:48:167 (827,828,829,830) - d k d k - 2번째 줄과 같음
01:53:635 (865) - k - ㅇㅇ 고침
01:54:963 (876,877) - 876을 지우고 877을 K로 하는건 어떨련지 - ㄴㄴ
01:56:292 (885,886,887,888) - K d d k - ㄴㄴ
02:06:292 (968,969,970) - K d D - ㄴ
02:12:542 ~ 02:13:479 - ddk dk d dk - 02:12:932 - 에 노트 추가
02:28:323 (1189) - k - ㄴㄴ
02:30:042 (1203) - k - ㄴㄴ
02:38:479 (1270,1271,1272) - kkk? - 리듬을 완전히 따라간 부분입니다
02:39:104 (1275) - d - ㅇㅋ
03:01:448 (1484,1485) - d k 말고 ddk? - ㄴㄴ
03:21:917 (1) - 스핀너무짧음; 앞부분연타를 k로 맞추고 스핀부분을 ddd로 대체 - 스피너 늘림
03:29:885 (51) - 03:30:042로 이동 - 03:30:042 - 에는 노트가 이미 있는데요;
03:36:135 (92) - d - ㄴㄴ
04:27:229 (448) - 04:27:385로 이동 - ㄴㄴ
04:39:963 (562) - 04:39:807로 이동 - ㄴㄴ


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- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

My personal M4M request. - that's fast m8

taiko

OD 4? cuz Very very long... - I already considered about it and I thought OD5 fits.
00:21:917 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - very unfriendly(hard) and limited the player range. So I suggest you cancel that 1/6 since it is just the beginning. - I more likely followed the song. That's why. Also don't you think the map itself is already for limited player range.. :/
00:52:385 (394,395) - kk - oh sure
01:12:463 (547) - delete - whhhyyy :<
01:12:542 (548) - finish
01:12:698 (549) - k - These two lines are rejected since I mapped it rhythm-based.
01:14:963 (565) - delete
01:15:042 (566) - finish - Here too. You shoulda know that there's audible RHYTTMHfdsafghb
01:15:198 (566) - k - Probably the same goes with 01:12:698 (549)
01:54:963 (874) - delete
01:55:042 (875) - finish - I guess I don't have to tell you 3 three times.
02:10:901 (1011) - d (kddkkdk is very weird) - But it fits the song
02:46:370 (1340) - delete
02:47:229 (1347) - delete - 4 times already
03:11:682 (1581) - delete - 5 times and still counting
03:55:042 (228) - i really dislike finish at the end of stream. - Okay you dislike it but why?
04:32:463 (488) - k - Accepted
04:32:620 (490,491) - delete and 04:34:885 (510,511) - delete to make it clear - 6
04:33:557 (497) - delete this note and 04:35:745 (516) - this note - 7
04:46:604 (614,615,616,617,618,619) - all k is good imo. - bad imo
05:04:729 (789,792,795) - finish - It doesn't even fit the song u w0t
05:06:604 (799,800,801,802,803,804,805,806,807) - kkddkdkkd feels better here - Current one is fine tho
06:19:729 (1433) - d - I found that there is no clearly audible bass and the pitch is high so I thought k would be fine here.
06:59:650 (1743) - k - B..But d was to follow the song going down
07:34:104 (1) - fuusen is not a good idea here. advice:07:34:104 to 07:34:572 'kdd d k' - Extended the spinner instead. Not to break 6444 combo and it is to follow the melody which is going high. That is actually a nice idea, sry :<
08:09:650 (248) - delete - I don't see any certain reason.
09:45:354 (684) - delete - ^
09:50:041 and 09:50:354 add d - you surely hoped if it would be kinda melody-based
09:50:666 - add k , make09:50:822 (714) - D and 09:50:900 (715,716) - delete - ^
09:53:713 (733,734,735,736,737,738,739,740,741,742,743) - not very good imo. - Following piano. Oh and it is mapped a bit off, changed the pattern.
My recommendation: 09:53:869 to 09:54:494: 'kkdk d kd' - Look a bit above
09:55:275 (745) - delete 09:55:354 (745) -
09:55:744 (748) - delete - The reason is already told I guess
10:49:416 (1195,1196,1197,1198) - i prefer single note after dddkd. So my advice: 'd dkd' instead of 'kkd d' - No...
12:38:479 (695,696,697,698,699) - according to music here, kkkkk can be a choice. - Yup, kinda kddkk would also be good but no
12:53:374 (803,804,805,806,807,808,809,810,811,812,813,814,815) - i love the style here though it's difficult to play(speedchanges...) - Thanks!
13:27:072 (1038) - idk why but i prefer this final note D.... - idk why but K fits xD

That's all. Enjoy.

bbj0920 wrote:

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

My personal M4M request. - that's fast m8

taiko

OD 4? cuz Very very long... - I already considered about it and I thought OD5 fits.
00:21:917 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126) - very unfriendly(hard) and limited the player range. So I suggest you cancel that 1/6 since it is just the beginning. - I more likely followed the song. That's why. Also don't you think the map itself is already for limited player range.. :/
00:52:385 (394,395) - kk - oh sure
01:12:463 (547) - delete - whhhyyy :<
01:12:542 (548) - finish
01:12:698 (549) - k - These two lines are rejected since I mapped it rhythm-based.
01:14:963 (565) - delete
01:15:042 (566) - finish - Here too. You shoulda know that there's audible RHYTTMHfdsafghb
01:15:198 (566) - k - Probably the same goes with 01:12:698 (549)
01:54:963 (874) - delete
01:55:042 (875) - finish - I guess I don't have to tell you 3 three times.
02:10:901 (1011) - d (kddkkdk is very weird) - But it fits the song
02:46:370 (1340) - delete
02:47:229 (1347) - delete - 4 times already
03:11:682 (1581) - delete - 5 times and still counting
03:55:042 (228) - i really dislike finish at the end of stream. - Okay you dislike it but why?
04:32:463 (488) - k - Accepted
04:32:620 (490,491) - delete and 04:34:885 (510,511) - delete to make it clear - 6
04:33:557 (497) - delete this note and 04:35:745 (516) - this note - 7
04:46:604 (614,615,616,617,618,619) - all k is good imo. - bad imo
05:04:729 (789,792,795) - finish - It doesn't even fit the song u w0t
05:06:604 (799,800,801,802,803,804,805,806,807) - kkddkdkkd feels better here - Current one is fine tho
06:19:729 (1433) - d - I found that there is no clearly audible bass and the pitch is high so I thought k would be fine here.
06:59:650 (1743) - k - B..But d was to follow the song going down
07:34:104 (1) - fuusen is not a good idea here. advice:07:34:104 to 07:34:572 'kdd d k' - Extended the spinner instead. Not to break 6444 combo and it is to follow the melody which is going high. That is actually a nice idea, sry :<
08:09:650 (248) - delete - I don't see any certain reason.
09:45:354 (684) - delete - ^
09:50:041 and 09:50:354 add d - you surely hoped if it would be kinda melody-based
09:50:666 - add k , make09:50:822 (714) - D and 09:50:900 (715,716) - delete - ^
09:53:713 (733,734,735,736,737,738,739,740,741,742,743) - not very good imo. - Following piano. Oh and it is mapped a bit off, changed the pattern.
My recommendation: 09:53:869 to 09:54:494: 'kkdk d kd' - Look a bit above
09:55:275 (745) - delete 09:55:354 (745) -
09:55:744 (748) - delete - The reason is already told I guess
10:49:416 (1195,1196,1197,1198) - i prefer single note after dddkd. So my advice: 'd dkd' instead of 'kkd d' - No...
12:38:479 (695,696,697,698,699) - according to music here, kkkkk can be a choice. - Yup, kinda kddkk would also be good but no
12:53:374 (803,804,805,806,807,808,809,810,811,812,813,814,815) - i love the style here though it's difficult to play(speedchanges...) - Thanks!
13:27:072 (1038) - idk why but i prefer this final note D.... - idk why but K fits xD

That's all. Enjoy.

I'll be modding your map tomorrow.

http://puu.sh/dTmKR/8d0bb9a3ed.osu

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Almost see.
Answer for 'unfriendly': of course I know you follow the song, but it is just the beginning(0:21). And some player can solve difficult pattern after they fit the song(bpm, music style etc...)

Answer for why don't put finish at the end of 1/4 stream: That means it is not 1/4 again, it is already a rapid 1/8 for full-alt or non-alt player.

And as you said you map to follow rhythm, and I saw so many part that you don't follow the rhythm(sometimes it needs free-style and i Strongly agree). Some of my suggestions r based on my opinion, and my opinion is I think this part is not very good to follow the music therefore need some freestyle.

I spent 2 whole hours to mod but obviously you r not very satisfied with my mod. That's why I wrote this.

bbj0920 wrote:

- Love1yV1ruS - wrote:

Almost see.
Answer for 'unfriendly': of course I know you follow the song, but it is just the beginning(0:21). And some player can solve difficult pattern after they fit the song(bpm, music style etc...)

Answer for why don't put finish at the end of 1/4 stream: That means it is not 1/4 again, it is already a rapid 1/8 for full-alt or non-alt player.

And as you said you map to follow rhythm, and I saw so many part that you don't follow the rhythm(sometimes it needs free-style and i Strongly agree). Some of my suggestions r based on my opinion, and my opinion is I think this part is not very good to follow the music therefore need some freestyle.

I spent 2 whole hours to mod but obviously you r not very satisfied with my mod. That's why I wrote this.

I don't really see the reason why I should not put the stream in the earlier part, as long as the song calls for.

welp It seems that you don't know that kkkkD ddddK pattern is rankable and actually playable. It ain't no 1/8, it IS, 1/4.

And yeah pretty much what you said, but I map free-style if it fits, as long as it ain't hurting song. I did map this song rhythm-based overall.

Please be noticed that I'm always satisfied that someone looked at my map and actually helped, and glad to check it. It is just that if it is involuntarily good mod, it makes me happy. I hope you're not that stupid that you don't even know I checked your mod deeply.

Xgor wrote:

Got requested to mod this SB.

[SB load]
You haven't removed the background image even if you don't use it in the SB at all
How to do it here (t/55177)
As the default color when you remove the screen will be black you won't need the black image you have behind the background at all time.
If you do these things you'll save +2 SB load ! oh. I didn't know this technique. thank you