1. Hard (3,39 stars, 483 notes)
2. Normal (1,84 stars, 228 notes)

-Bakari-
Krfawy
Mao
No Dap
Lust
AlexaBM
Bathory Witch
pkk
neonat
Aka
happy30 <testplay>
Desperate-kun
Nozhomi
CDFA
-Bakari- re
Aka
Thank you!

1. Add kripac and two to the tags. Lenka Kripac is the artist's full name and two is the ame of the album.
2. Colour 2 and 4 are way too similar. Replacing one of them with something else would make your map look a bit brighter and bring more pleasure to the players!
3. The bitrate of your mp3 is unrankable. It's 240kbps while the rankable ones are 128-192kbps. No need to worry, tho. I've encoded your mp3 to the rankable bitrate. Get the mp3 here!
   Note: the new mp3 may require minor offset changes.
4. It'd be great to find a 1336x768 version of this BG or to cut it and make it 1024x768. These are recommended dimensions for backgrounds.
5. Quite a few of your slider seem rather untidy and hurt your flow. For example 00:14:400 (3) (Normal) - this one and 00:30:525 (1) (Normal)- this one and there're some more. I highly recommend you to look through the map and improve the sliders according to this guide.
   Note: when I say improve I do mean improve. Making them neater will not affect your style that much, it will just make your map look more tidy, don't worry.
6. Please, remove all unnecessary green lines. It makes no sense to keep them and they make osu! slowe/glitchy.

1. This diff is the easiest and Slider Velocity is rather slow. I'd try to use AR4 and OD/HP 3 or maybe 3,5. this way, the spread will be more balanced and reasonable, also, the diff will become more playable for beginners.
   Note: I consider this diff as the easiest, therefore, it should be playable for beginners.
2. Your comboing at this diff feels rather irregular and a bit random. For example, 00:50:025 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,1) - here, each combo has different length and doesn't match with the music well. try to focus on the instuments and keep your comboing more consistent.
   Note: still having troubles with your comboing? Contact me for some more detailed explanation of comboing.
3. 00:52:275 (2) - the slider feels slightly off vocals. It would match better with the song if you finish it at 00:52:650 - and place a circle at 00:53:025. This way, the downbeat (00:53:025 ) will get emphasized and the vocals will be reflected better.
   Note: 01:26:775 (3) - pretty much the same thing happens here. Since 01:27:529 - is a downbeat and the beginning of a new part, it should be pointed out with a single circle. Similar thing also happens to 01:48:525 - and a few more patterns. Please, try to map these downbeats since leaving them ignored really confuses players while playing!
4. 00:59:400 - 01:00:150 - 01:02:400 - long gaps are rather stressful for beginners, I'd map thes beats to keep yourt rhythm consistent and more catchable.
5. 01:53:400 - there's a clap sound and it feels kinda tricky that you ignore it. Please, try to map such beats, so, your rhyth will be more reasonable and consistent.
6. 02:08:587 (3) - awesome switch to the red ticks rhythm. Nothing wrong here, just saying that it's a great idea!
7. 02:29:025 - the accent of the vocals in the middle of this slider feels rather unfitting. I would try to focus on the vocals here, this way newbies will be able to catch your rhythm after the break. Example
8. 02:47:775 (1) - the head of the slider follows nothing and breaks your consistent rhythm. Instead of that 2/1 gap here, you should try to do focus on the instruments. example
   
   You should work more on your rhythm and improve the appearance. Your comboing also needs some work.

1. I'd go with OD/HP 7 or 6,5. This way, the spread will be better baanced and it will make the diff more challenging and fun to play.
2. 00:15:150 (5,6,1) - try to avoid jumps if they don't correspond well with the music/vocals. 00:15:337 (6,1) - this x3,0+ DS jump wasn't really readable and understandable since the song doesn't feels jumpy at this part.
   Note: the same thing applies for most of the jumps you've used. Jumps are meant to help players feel the song, not to be randomly placed for some "tricky" pattern.
3. 00:23:025 (1,2) - slightly reducing volume on the tail sounds like a good idea to me. The vocal kinda fades at the blue tick, so, hitsounds should be quiter here, imo.
4. 00:39:525 (1) - I would use regular DS on this slider, so, players will be able to read that there's a rhythm change and won't get confused.
   Note: 02:27:337 (3,1) - the same here. Either apply this suggestion r reject it for BOTH patterns to keep patterns consistent.
5. 00:45:525 (1) - please, finish the slider at 00:45:712 - since we can clearly hear a beat there. Finishing this slider on the blue tick feels weird and doesn't match with the song at all, it looks more like overmapping and should be avoided.
   Note: osu! is a rhythm game and we are supposed to follow the rhythm of the song.
6. 01:24:150 (5,1) - a spacing mistake. Having creative patterns is cool, having stacks is also fine but it should be understandable and playable, so, keep the DS consistent, please!
7. 01:26:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - such patterns are used in the most stressful/epic parts of the map. Since it is rather hard to hit so many circles in a row with perfect accuracy. This part is relatively calm and this pattern feels a bit weird here. Consider adding a couple of sliders to make it more suitable and playable.
8. 01:44:025 (1,2) - minor - these sliders appear kinda untidy to me. Varity of slider-shapes is great, but you should make it neat and readable. try criss-cross sliders
   Note: 03:08:025 (1,2) - same thing, right?
   
   The most important things are those kinda overmapped 3/4 sliders and your patterns. 3/4 are overapped and confuse players, as for the untidy sliders, they kinda break your flow and make players feel uncomfortable while playing. Some of the jumps are random and they don't make the gameplay any easier. Please, work more on the diff since it's not bad but needs some serious help!

1. 00:39:525 (1) - Wyruchaj tego slidera proszę tak aby znalazł się na pozycji seksualnej nr X=396 Y=144. Wygląda to może veri podstawowo ale osobiście sądzę że dzięki tej nazi-radzie będzie to wyglądało estetyczniej. :3
2. 01:00:150 (3) - Dobry moment na whistle, chociaż w podobnym momencie jest clap. Poprzednim razem jak Lenia śpiewa "My hearts(...)" to na słowo "My" jest clap, a teraz nie. Niezamierzona niekonswekwencja? xD
3. 01:07:650 (2) - Skarbie, czy mogę cię zgwałcić prosić o przeistoczenie tego slidera tak aby blanketował się z końcówką poprzedniego slidera? Np.: 2. punkt mógłby być na pozycji startowej X=36 Y=276 a trzeci punkt na X=20 Y=332. Nie mówię że ma tak być jak dałem, ale proszę o poprawienie na blanketa takiego bardziej
4. 01:18:525 (1) - Ruchnij proszę czerwonego punktasa na pozycję X=436 Y=312 bo taki krzywy trochę i nie jestem pewien czy tak chciałeś, ale jeżeli to zamierzony efekt to cofam to co piszę!
5. 01:24:525 (1) - To radziłbym trochę przerobić na (jak to nazywam) "łódkę" xD Chodzi mi o to że teraz wygląda to tak trochę na odwal (wybacz ;-;) a wiem że jesteś dobrym mapperem i stać cię na coś lepszego. Osobiście radzę ustawić ostatni punkt slidera na X=252 Y=348 a pomiędzy tym ostatnim a czerwonym punktem dodać kolejny szary który to mógłby być na X=200 Y=348. Może być koncepcja? :3
6. 01:52:650 (2) - Czy na początku slidera brakuje clapa czy ja całkiem głuchnę? o.o (Co jest wysoce prawdopobodne, bo ostatnio słucham TEGO)
7. 01:56:025 (3) - Osobiście nie pasuje mi ani NC ani finish. Może whistle zamiast tego? : o
8. 02:41:025 (1) - Szczerze powiedziawszy nie rozumiem czemu tutaj jest NC, nie czuję żadnego takiego czegoś że w sensie no wiesz. xD Zamiast tego np. dla mnie NC mogłoby zaczynać się tutaj: 02:42:525 (3) i wtedy można by usunąć też NC tutaj: 02:43:650 (1)
9. 02:50:400 (1) - Co prawda byłoby to dosyć krótkie, ale wydaje mi się że ten spinner zaczyna się za szybko zaraz po obiekcie. może zacznij go dopiero od 02:50:400 ?
10. 03:09:525 (1) - Zamiast whistle może zamień to na finish albo clap? Albo dodaj kolejny hitsound, bo moim zdaniem whistle tak trochę słabo samemu wypada, a poprzednim razem przy "My heart" bywały hitsoundy wyraźniejsze.
11. 03:15:525 (1) - Może clap i whistle? Wydaje mi się że ładnie to brzmi i fajnie na zakończenie. :3

1. 00:32:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Kocham ten moment. <3
2. 01:41:400 (3,5) - Może zamień te kółka miejscami? W sensie nie muzycznymi tylko że trójka byłaby na pozycji XY piątki i na odwrót. Wydaje mi się że tak będzie lepij.
3. 01:47:775 (3) - Mały overlap - nie jest perfekcyjnie panią domu pod końcem slidera!
4. 03:15:525 (1) - Jeżeli chodzi o zakończenie mapy, to tutaj jest ta sama sugestia co w Normalu jak idzie o hitsoundy.

Krfawy wrote:

Cześć desko przyboczna. Spóźniony mod. x'D

Normalełette

1. 00:39:525 (1) - Wyruchaj tego slidera proszę tak aby znalazł się na pozycji seksualnej nr X=396 Y=144. Wygląda to może veri podstawowo ale osobiście sądzę że dzięki tej nazi-radzie będzie to wyglądało estetyczniej. :3
2. 01:00:150 (3) - Dobry moment na whistle, chociaż w podobnym momencie jest clap. Poprzednim razem jak Lenia śpiewa "My hearts(...)" to na słowo "My" jest clap, a teraz nie. Niezamierzona niekonswekwencja? xD
3. 01:07:650 (2) - Skarbie, czy mogę cię zgwałcić prosić o przeistoczenie tego slidera tak aby blanketował się z końcówką poprzedniego slidera? Np.: 2. punkt mógłby być na pozycji startowej X=36 Y=276 a trzeci punkt na X=20 Y=332. Nie mówię że ma tak być jak dałem, ale proszę o poprawienie na blanketa takiego bardziej
4. 01:18:525 (1) - Ruchnij proszę czerwonego punktasa na pozycję X=436 Y=312 bo taki krzywy trochę i nie jestem pewien czy tak chciałeś, ale jeżeli to zamierzony efekt to cofam to co piszę!
5. 01:24:525 (1) - To radziłbym trochę przerobić na (jak to nazywam) "łódkę" xD Chodzi mi o to że teraz wygląda to tak trochę na odwal (wybacz ;-;) a wiem że jesteś dobrym mapperem ALEŻ ZABAWNY XDDDDDD i stać cię na coś lepszego. Osobiście radzę ustawić ostatni punkt slidera na X=252 Y=348 a pomiędzy tym ostatnim a czerwonym punktem dodać kolejny szary który to mógłby być na X=200 Y=348. Może być koncepcja? :3
6. 01:52:650 (2) - Czy na początku slidera brakuje clapa czy ja całkiem głuchnę? o.o (Co jest wysoce prawdopobodne, bo ostatnio słucham TEGO)
7. 01:56:025 (3) - Osobiście nie pasuje mi ani NC ani finish. Może whistle zamiast tego? : o
8. 02:41:025 (1) - Szczerze powiedziawszy nie rozumiem czemu tutaj jest NC, nie czuję żadnego takiego czegoś że w sensie no wiesz. xD Zamiast tego np. dla mnie NC mogłoby zaczynać się tutaj: 02:42:525 (3) i wtedy można by usunąć też NC tutaj: 02:43:650 (1)
9. 02:50:400 (1) - Co prawda byłoby to dosyć krótkie, ale wydaje mi się że ten spinner zaczyna się za szybko zaraz po obiekcie. może zacznij go dopiero od 02:50:400 ?
10. 03:09:525 (1) - Zamiast whistle może zamień to na finish albo clap? Albo dodaj kolejny hitsound, bo moim zdaniem whistle tak trochę słabo samemu wypada, a poprzednim razem przy "My heart" bywały hitsoundy wyraźniejsze.
11. 03:15:525 (1) - Może clap i whistle? Wydaje mi się że ładnie to brzmi i fajnie na zakończenie. :3

Hardełette

1. 00:32:025 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Kocham ten moment. <3
2. 01:41:400 (3,5) - Może zamień te kółka miejscami? W sensie nie muzycznymi tylko że trójka byłaby na pozycji XY piątki i na odwrót. Wydaje mi się że tak będzie lepij.
3. 01:47:775 (3) - Mały overlap - nie jest perfekcyjnie panią domu pod końcem slidera!
4. 03:15:525 (1) - Jeżeli chodzi o zakończenie mapy, to tutaj jest ta sama sugestia co w Normalu jak idzie o hitsoundy.

Poszukaj najwyżej 3 czy 4 mody i wpierdzielaj tutaj gwiazdki bo moim zdaniem niepotrzebne tutaj sporo modów. Pobaw się w rEdo albo Andreę - 20 gwiazdek + 4 mody i ranked gwarantowany. XDDDD No właśnie w to się bawię, parę osób się zgodziło na moda i póki co tylko ty i Bakari go zrobiliście :3 XD

Powodzenia! o3o

PS.: Ale co się dzieje z mp3? : / kbps było za duże ale już jest git ;w;

Mao wrote:

Request by Forum PM (: Lenka <3

1. Unrankable Issue/Highly Suggested
2. Comment/Opinion

General

1. You've got an unsnapped Kiai at 02:51:605 - in Hard as AiMod already points out.
2. Disable Widescreen Support in Hard as you want do be consistent with the Normals and you don't have a SB
3. Not a requirement but it would be better if you'd delete the .osb in the folder since you don't have a SB which makes the file pretty pointless :V (Maybe it's just there due to a bug though)
4. Colour 2 and 4 are still to similiar if you ask me. My idea here would be to change 4 a bit more into the yellow-ish like this to difference them a bit more.

Normal

1. The first section of this difficulty is completely bugged for me. Most objects as 00:11:095 (3) - , 00:12:970 (4) - etc. aren't visible as they don't have coordinates in the .osu; I've also asked others to download the set and they have the same problem so I guess there went something wrong with the .osu while submitting.
2. Consider lowering the overall dificulty settings a bit as this is the easiest difficulty in the Set. Perhaps you can lower the AR to 4 or 4.5; also the OD and HP can be lowered a bit ti make it more comfortable to play :/
3. 00:59:470 (2,3,1) - The transition between 3 and 1 feels really harsh due to 1 being so high. I'd suggest you to either lower 1's position or to do something like this to get a circular shape and therefore a smooth flow.
4. 01:09:595 (1,2) - Meeh, please don't stack 2 with 1's tail. This may be confusing for newbie players and as it's the easiest diff in this set it's pretty hard. Also you didn't do this before in the diff and therefore I'd suggest you to just simply space this as normal.
5. 01:18:595 (1) - The DS to the next feels quite big. Try to lower it a bit.
6. 01:39:220 (4,1) - Placing this somewhere around 355|63 would improve the flow by creating a curve which follows 01:36:970 (2) - 's path into 01:39:595 (1) - which would result in a nice fluent movement *^*
7. 01:42:595 (1) - This Slider feels like it's not supporting the Vocals as well as the Instruments that well. Consider to either try something like this or this in order to follow the music here more accurate c:
8. 02:13:720 (3) - I'm not sure if it's just me but the flow from the previous object into this feels broken. Therefore consider to move 3 lower like this to improve the movement and with that the flow of the pattern.
9. 02:42:220 (4) - Try to even out your spacing here. Looks kinda uneven :/
10. 02:47:845 (3) - The Circle here doesn't really fit the Music as there are neither drums nor Vocals which makes it feel weird. Try to either adjust the rhythm like this or like this if you want to follow the drums.
11. 03:06:220 (1) - I don't really see what you are following here as the notes on the white ticks feel much more important which makes it feel weird and off. Try something like this.
12. I like the flow of the most parts but you have to take a bit more of your rhythm as you sometimes ignore pretty important notes and map notes where there's basically nothing on them instead. Otherwise good job! :3

Hard

1. 00:11:845 (3) - The flow from the previous objects into this one feels kinda forced due to the rapid turn provided by its strong curve to the right. Try to rotate this about 30° (Selection Centre) in order to improve the flow a lot here.
2. 00:17:657 (2,3) - Perhaps you can try to CTRL+G this rhythm-wise to make it fit the music way better as the sound on the red tick is way stronger than the one on the white tick you've mapped with the 1/1-Slider's Head.
3. 00:26:657 (5,6,7,8,9) - Try to even out the pattern's spacing a bit more like this to get a nice, way tidier triangular shape (:
4. 00:40:345 (3) - Maybe it's just me but the flow here doesn't work that good due to the direction of this Slider's curve. Getting it symmetrical with 00:39:595 (1) - like [url=http://puu.sh/ai5GT/f71a7b240e.jpg]this[7url] would help the flow a lot.
5. 00:41:470 (2,3,1) - Try to tidy this pattern up a bit as the overlap from 2's track and 1 felt pretty confusing while playing if you ask me ;w; My idea would be something like this to achieve that.
6. 00:47:470 (2,3) - Meh, I'd rather split this into two 1/2-Sliders like this to make the strong vocals at 00:47:845 - clickable by mapping it with a Sliderhead in order to make it feel way more natural. Alternatively you could also do this to follow the drums here.
7. 00:51:407 (4,1) - Be careful with Sliders ending on the big white tick as the big white tick is often the strongest Note in a section so it feels weird not to be clicked. Sometimes it fits when the big white tick doesn't need the emphasis of being clickable but here you even gave it a finish as a Hitsound which also shows how strong it is. Try to CTRL+G these both rhythm-wise to get the note on the big white tick mapped by a clickable action.
8. 00:57:595 (1,2,3,4) - Since 3 is a 10° Rotation of 1 it would feel way more natural in terms of aesthetics as well as flow if 4 would be a rotated version of 2. Example
9. 01:05:470 (2,3,4) - /Minor/ - Try to move these a bit more left to avoid the 2 touching 01:04:720 (4) - in order to tidy the pattern up :3
10. 01:26:470 (2,3,4) - I don't really see the sense of having uneven spacing here as the music doesn't really change. Try to even it out since it looks really unintentional >.<
11. 01:33:595 (1) - Don't you want to use regular DS on this as you've done for 00:39:595 (1) - and 02:27:595 (1) - as well to be consistent? That would play much better imo.
12. 01:44:095 (1,2) - /Minor/ - The wave Sliders you've used for this look really untidy which makes the cross look kinda messy ;w; I've tried to make one for you, feel free to use it! :3
    
    Screenshot+Code

    
    

    296,192,104095,6,0,B|292:238|255:250|255:250|217:262|214:308,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    295,306,104657,2,0,B|292:262|255:250|255:250|217:238|214:191,1,150,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

13. 02:04:345 (3) - I personally think that the Slider' shape doesn't really represet the music and due to 02:03:595 (1,2) - being kinda similiar, symmetry would feel way better. Consider trying something like this to improve the flow by a lot! (:
14. 02:06:595 (1) - The flow from the previous object into this doesn't work well due to a pretty harsh transition. Perhaps you can try something like this to get a way smoother movement here o/
15. 02:31:157 (2,3,4) - The pattern here looks kinda random due the Slider basically feel just put next to each other without any sense. It's hard to say what you can do here tbh but I'd either go for two Sliders of the same kind or for something like this which would be pretty cool but would take some rearranging of the following objects though.
16. 02:39:407 - Why did you leave out this note? It was mapped in all the other Kiais and is pretty strong if you ask me. Please consider to put a Circle there.
17. 02:56:657 (4,5,6) - Hm, the 3/4 Sliders here don't feel like they are supporting the music well if you ask me. Also they feel inconsistent with the other Kiais since you didn't do something like this before. This fits the music here way better and would be consistent with 00:44:657 (2) - for example.
18. Try to be a bit more careful with your rhythm. Some Slidershapes look really untidy but otherwise good job! The diff has potential, get more mods and polish it ;3

Please reply! I hope it was helpful and good luck! :3

No Dap wrote:

Mod :I

Mod as requested.

[General]

1. I testplyaed myself, and Approaching circle is way too thin imo. I couldn't read it sometimes because it's so thin

[Normal]

1. 00:11:095 (3) - This rhythm will play a lot better, it follows vocal and allows you to put clap at 00:12:220 - also letting players click 00:12:595
   
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2. 00:14:095 (1) - Why is this combo so short?
3. 00:28:720 (1) - I don't see why you would add a new combo here.
   and I think I will stop pointing out NC issues because too much.
4. 00:33:595 (1) - I think deleting whistle would go so much better with the music since it gets so quiet from here.
5. I'm not understanding your NC pattern in kiai at all, it is very inconsistent
   00:41:095 (1) - and 00:47:095 (4) - are the same, yet different combo pattern
   00:44:095 (1) - and 00:50:095 (3) - too
6. 00:59:470 - missed a clap
7. 01:01:907 (2,1) - this 1/2 feels very out of place and random from the rest of the map in terms of rhythm and how it plays.
8. 01:27:595 (1) - same as 00:33:595 (1) -
9. 01:52:720 (2,1,2,3) - same as 01:01:907 (2,1) - very inconsistent rhythm
10. 02:15:595 - you either forgot to put drum sample here, or this is a mistake 02:09:595 -
11. 02:50:470 (1) - spinner too short for beginners to notice it and spin it properly
12. 03:06:220 (1) - this 3/2 slider should be in 1/1 instead, vocals and instruments don't follow it.
13. 03:15:595 (1) - Whistle is really too much imo. Just having clap here sounds so much better. whistle will only add an unfitting sound.
    I think you really need to work on NC consistency in all part. They are really inconsistent for a music that is repetitive.

[Hard]

• Will be mostly things I questioned during testplay.

1. 00:17:095 (1,2) - add whistles according to 01:11:095 (1,2) -
2. 00:17:657 (2) - Considering the spacing at 00:16:345 (3,1) - , this jump was very unexpected, not the best flow for random jump in a hard diff imo.
3. 00:23:095 (1) - 3/4 here didn't really play intuitively here. It felt like it was forced. because the holding vocal starts from 00:22:907 -, not 00:23:095 - where you have the 3/4
4. 00:31:345 (1) - Slider head is completely hidden, I could not read this pattern. I don't recommend this in hard diff
5. 00:33:595 (1) - same as normal, whistle really ruins the calmness here imo
6. 00:48:220 (4,5) - This random jump spacing is too much imo. reducing it will provide way smoother play
7. 00:51:407 (4) - I would really like for you to stack this circle under the tail, not head, because of stack I cannot see this circle until the slider is gone
   Also, stacking on tail will flow better, as the jump feels forced here.
8. 00:53:095 (1,2,3) - This maybe your preference, but this stack was too many and unexpected for me.
9. 00:58:345 (3) - NC so it's easier to read, and also consistent overlap like 00:57:970 (2) - 00:58:720 (4) - ?
10. 01:18:407 (3,4,1) - I really didn't like playing this pattern because of stack and a jump.
11. 01:27:595 (1) - yeah, no whistle 00:33:595 (1) -
12. 01:55:907 (5) - try stacking this on 01:56:470 (2) -, I find it plays so much better. and
13. 01:56:657 (3,4) - this blanket looks too forced, lol but nice try.
14. 01:57:220 (4,5,1) -Jump is too big imo, try to reduce?
    
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15. 02:06:407 (5) - Try this, I just don't like stacks under slider, because they play bad for me
    
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16. 02:15:595 - I'm guessing this 02:09:595 - inconsistent hitsound is on purpose?
17. 02:41:095 - here should be a finish instead of whistle according to your finish pattern here
18. 02:51:220 (5,6,7,8) - Try this, because the current placement looks a bit hard.
    
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19. 02:59:095 - same as 02:41:095
20. 03:08:095 - ^
21. 03:15:595 (1) - same as normal, whistle sounds awkward here.

Good luck :3/

1. 00:11:095 (3) - Bring the anchor of this slider further out, so that there is less of a harsh curve. Also it'll create a nicer blanket with 00:10:720 (2) - . Finally it will make for some nice flow in to 00:12:595 (1) -
2. 00:14:095 (4) - 126:149 to be perfectly stacked underneath of 00:12:970 (2) - 's slider end. Because of the low AR this is noticeable in gameplay. Also, I recommend you change this to a straight slider going up and then down so that the curve isn't so harsh and it will flow better downwards in to the following circle.
   
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3. 00:14:095 (4,1) - Meh I would avoid this overlap if possible, the hitburst obstructs the view of the slider head making it look a bit cluttered
4. 00:18:220 (4,1) - This blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
5. 00:20:845 (4,1) - I would also try to avoid this overlap, its so miniscule that it looks like it shouldn't be there. If you are going to overlap things, make sure it looks intended to the player!
6. 00:22:720 (2,1) - Stack these appropriately, 2's hitburst is still visible when 1 appears, making it look messy
7. 00:23:095 (3) - Invert the curve of this slider, so that it flows better coming from and going to the following pattern, here is an example of what you could do
   
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8. 00:26:095 (3) - Eh the whistle doesn't quite fit the slider head here, try and find a hitsound that could add some variety. Maybe something in the drum sampleset. You can also apply that to sliders like 00:23:095 (3) - as well
9. 00:27:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - This play comes out as a bit awkward. You have 1 2 and 3 having upward flow, and then you are immediately changing the direction of the play by having 4's sliderbody go downwards. You can remedy it by making 4 a straight slider angled slightly upwards, and then having 5 on the end going downwards. Here is an example
   
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10. 00:39:595 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you fix this
11. 00:42:970 (1,2) - This just doesn't quite capture the rhythm that is going on here, try something like this. I found it sounded and played way better
    
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12. 00:44:095 (3) - Take the finish off of the head and change it with a whistle or something, it is really loud and obnoxious plus it doesn't really go with the music here
13. 00:45:595 (1,4) - This is a very bad overlap to make, because 1's hitburst still lingers over 4's repeat, kind of obstructing the view of it. I highly recommend you try to avoid this. Also looks kind of sloppy. You can try something like this to avoid it
    
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14. 00:46:720 (3,1) - Stack can be improved. Because of the low AR this is noticeable in play. Move 1 to 480:128 to fix this. Also be sure to fix the spacing later on at the end of the slider after moving
15. 00:50:095 (3) - This slider's shape is a bit random and plays very weird. For better flow coming from and to the next pattern try a shape like this, will also look cleaner and provide for a better blanket!
    
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16. 01:03:220 (5,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 5's approach circle to help you out with this
17. 01:06:595 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you with this, also be sure to fix 01:04:345 (2) - 's slider shape to replicate the change and maintain perfect symmetry
18. 01:10:720 (2) - I would move this so it isn't stacked underneath of the slider end. These are really hard to read, and since this is the lower difficulty you should cut players some slack here
19. 01:18:595 (1) - The slider shape here sags a bit down almost going off screen. I would move the slider end away since you are using an anchor here. Try something like this maybe? You could also get a blanket going
    
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20. 01:26:470 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
21. 01:33:595 (1) - Why change the rhythm here? Be consistent and use the same one you had at the beginning of the first kiai. It sounds and plays way better!
22. 01:56:095 (3) - Why did you stop mapping here? Continue to map until the end of the kiai! There is a rhythm there you have to map, otherwise move the kiai end to where the last note was
23. 02:53:470 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you out with this
24. 02:58:720 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you fix this

1. 00:09:220 (1) - Meh remove this, you didn't do it in the normal so for consistency's sake just take it out
2. 00:53:095 (1,2,3) - This could turn out to be really confusing and hard to read if the player isn't using the bundled skin, I would move 2 somewhere else at least so we can see 3
3. 00:57:595 (1,2,1,2) - Wow! I am very impressed with this pattern! It goes so well with the music, and the movement is so fluid with the play. It is probably the most enjoyable pattern in the map, nice job!
4. 01:00:595 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Use 2's approach circle to help you with this
5. 01:08:095 (1) - I wouldn't make this a 3/4 slider, plays and sounds better as a 1/2. Notice how you have to quiet the slider end? That is a sign that it shouldn't be 3/4!
6. 01:20:095 (1) - ^
7. 01:24:970 (2,3) - The movement here is a bit awkward. You have the first slider going downwards and then you have the last going straight up the other direction, try something like this to help it flow better and make for some nice play
   
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8. 01:25:532 - The pause in the music here doesn't really play too good and is a bit random, I would add a note to compensate and to keep the momentum going
9. 02:44:657 (2) - This slider doesn't really do a good job capturing what is going on in the music, especially since the slider repeat doesn't really land on anything in the music

Lust wrote:

Mod

from pm request

gotta love lenka

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A major issue of this diff is that the strong claps end up on slider ends and repeats, when they should be on circles and slider heads to represent the music better and give the players satisfaction when playing. There is an awful lot of finish spam during the kiais and they sound waaaay out of place! Try and remove some of them and use only when appropriate. Some patterns can be improved but overall it plays fine. There are even some nice plays here and there that keep the map interesting!

1. 00:11:095 (3) - Bring the anchor of this slider further out, so that there is less of a harsh curve. Also it'll create a nicer blanket with 00:10:720 (2) - . Finally it will make for some nice flow in to 00:12:595 (1) -
2. 00:14:095 (4) - 126:149 to be perfectly stacked underneath of 00:12:970 (2) - 's slider end. Because of the low AR this is noticeable in gameplay. Also, I recommend you change this to a straight slider going up and then down so that the curve isn't so harsh and it will flow better downwards in to the following circle.
   
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3. 00:14:095 (4,1) - Meh I would avoid this overlap if possible, the hitburst obstructs the view of the slider head making it look a bit cluttered
4. 00:18:220 (4,1) - This blanket can be improved, use 4's approach circle to help you fix this
5. 00:20:845 (4,1) - I would also try to avoid this overlap, its so miniscule that it looks like it shouldn't be there. If you are going to overlap things, make sure it looks intended to the player!
6. 00:22:720 (2,1) - Stack these appropriately, 2's hitburst is still visible when 1 appears, making it look messy
7. 00:23:095 (3) - Invert the curve of this slider, so that it flows better coming from and going to the following pattern, here is an example of what you could do
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:26:095 (3) - Eh the whistle doesn't quite fit the slider head here, try and find a hitsound that could add some variety. Maybe something in the drum sampleset. You can also apply that to sliders like 00:23:095 (3) - as well
9. 00:27:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - This play comes out as a bit awkward. You have 1 2 and 3 having upward flow, and then you are immediately changing the direction of the play by having 4's sliderbody go downwards. You can remedy it by making 4 a straight slider angled slightly upwards, and then having 5 on the end going downwards. Here is an example
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 00:39:595 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you fix this
11. 00:42:970 (1,2) - This just doesn't quite capture the rhythm that is going on here, try something like this. I found it sounded and played way better
    
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12. 00:44:095 (3) - Take the finish off of the head and change it with a whistle or something, it is really loud and obnoxious plus it doesn't really go with the music here
13. 00:45:595 (1,4) - This is a very bad overlap to make, because 1's hitburst still lingers over 4's repeat, kind of obstructing the view of it. I highly recommend you try to avoid this. Also looks kind of sloppy. You can try something like this to avoid it
    
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14. 00:46:720 (3,1) - Stack can be improved. Because of the low AR this is noticeable in play. Move 1 to 480:128 to fix this. Also be sure to fix the spacing later on at the end of the slider after moving
15. 00:50:095 (3) - This slider's shape is a bit random and plays very weird. For better flow coming from and to the next pattern try a shape like this, will also look cleaner and provide for a better blanket!
    
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16. 01:03:220 (5,1) - Blanket can be improved, use 5's approach circle to help you out with this
17. 01:06:595 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you with this, also be sure to fix 01:04:345 (2) - 's slider shape to replicate the change and maintain perfect symmetry
18. 01:10:720 (2) - I would move this so it isn't stacked underneath of the slider end. These are really hard to read, and since this is the lower difficulty you should cut players some slack here
19. 01:18:595 (1) - The slider shape here sags a bit down almost going off screen. I would move the slider end away since you are using an anchor here. Try something like this maybe? You could also get a blanket going
    
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20. 01:26:470 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you out with this
21. 01:33:595 (1) - Why change the rhythm here? Be consistent and use the same one you had at the beginning of the first kiai. It sounds and plays way better!
22. 01:56:095 (3) - Why did you stop mapping here? Continue to map until the end of the kiai! There is a rhythm there you have to map, otherwise move the kiai end to where the last note was
23. 02:53:470 (3,4) - Blanket can be improved, use 3's approach circle to help you out with this
24. 02:58:720 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use 2's approach circle to help you fix this

The last kiai was a major improvement over the other two, and was quite impressive in comparison! Try and add a spinner somewhere so that the scores can be staggered

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Big improvements here over the normal, looks good! Still have the finish spam as before, try and work on that

1. 00:09:220 (1) - Meh remove this, you didn't do it in the normal so for consistency's sake just take it out
2. 00:53:095 (1,2,3) - This could turn out to be really confusing and hard to read if the player isn't using the bundled skin, I would move 2 somewhere else at least so we can see 3
3. 00:57:595 (1,2,1,2) - Wow! I am very impressed with this pattern! It goes so well with the music, and the movement is so fluid with the play. It is probably the most enjoyable pattern in the map, nice job!
4. 01:00:595 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. Use 2's approach circle to help you with this
5. 01:08:095 (1) - I wouldn't make this a 3/4 slider, plays and sounds better as a 1/2. Notice how you have to quiet the slider end? That is a sign that it shouldn't be 3/4!
6. 01:20:095 (1) - ^
7. 01:24:970 (2,3) - The movement here is a bit awkward. You have the first slider going downwards and then you have the last going straight up the other direction, try something like this to help it flow better and make for some nice play
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:25:532 - The pause in the music here doesn't really play too good and is a bit random, I would add a note to compensate and to keep the momentum going
9. 02:44:657 (2) - This slider doesn't really do a good job capturing what is going on in the music, especially since the slider repeat doesn't really land on anything in the music

Nice diff! Although I think this map suffers from the reverse of the normal - the first and second kiais play very well and contain some pretty intuitive patterns but I found the last kiai to be a bit lacking in comparison. I did find the gap between difficulties to be a bit high, but you should be fine. Other than that, its great!

Good luck! I hope my mod helped a bit, if you have any questions feel free to poke me in pm.

1. Maybe AR 4 instead of 4,5?
2. 00:10:720 (2,3) - Nazi blanket.
3. 00:19:720 (3,4) - ^
4. 00:21:595 (1) - This slider is too near the scorebar, I suggest to lower it a bit. Also you made a blanket with (4), but I want you to make (1) symmetrical
5. 00:32:845 (4,1) - Distance Snap you used here is 1,1 , but you used 1,0 earlier. Fix it and make a perfect triangle 00:32:095 (3,4,1) -
6. 00:42:970 (1,2) - Blanket.
7. 00:50:095 (3,1) - Nazi blanket.
8. 01:02:095 (3) - This slider breaks the flow too much, maybe delete the middle point?
9. 01:06:595 (1,2) - Blanket
10. 01:11:470 (3,1) - ^
11. 01:13:345 (2,3) - ^
12. 01:18:220 (4,1) - ^
13. 01:20:938 (2,1) - ^
14. 01:39:595 (1,2) - ^
15. 02:10:345 (2,3) - ^
16. 03:00:595 (1,2) - ^
17. 03:06:220 (1,2) - ^
18. 01:13:720 (3,4,1) - Make a perfect trinagle?
19. 02:20:470 - 02:21:595 - Why not to map this part? It's too empty
20. 02:32:095 (4,2) - Bad overlap
21. 02:43:345 (2,3) - Blanket? If you don't want to make usual blanket, you can do smth like this or idk:
    
    

1. Check the last kiai time pls, something's wrong with it
2. 00:14:845 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern could be better. Use "Create poligon circles" to make an pentagon, delete one circle and move it like you wanted.
3. 00:17:657 (2,3) - 00:17:657 (2,3) - Blanket.
4. 00:40:907 (4) - This circle breaks your flow. I's move it higher then 00:41:095 (1) -
   
   
5. 00:48:407 (5,1) - Blanket
6. 00:57:970 (2,1,2) - It's better to make this way, you need just to rotate it a bit (10 degrees or so):
   
   
   
7. 01:07:345 (3,1) - Bad overlap
8. 01:19:157 (3) - I want to change this moment a bit. Add a circle here 01:19:157 - , then start a slider from 01:19:345 - to 01:19:532 - . This pattern doesn't ignore the downbeat and fits the song!
9. 01:41:188 (1) - This circle should be here 01:41:095 -
10. 01:56:657 (3,4) - Blanket
11. 02:09:970 (1,2) - ^
12. 02:33:595 (1,2) - ^
13. 02:32:095 (1,1) - Bad overlap

AlexaBM wrote:

hi~ as requested
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1. Maybe AR 4 instead of 4,5? Ok :3
2. 00:10:720 (2,3) - Nazi blanket. Fixed
3. 00:19:720 (3,4) - ^ Fixed
4. 00:21:595 (1) - This slider is too near the scorebar, I suggest to lower it a bit. Also you made a blanket with (4), but I want you to make (1) symmetrical I don't think It's near scorebar, in playmode looks okay.
5. 00:32:845 (4,1) - Distance Snap you used here is 1,1 , but you used 1,0 earlier. Fix it and make a perfect triangle 00:32:095 (3,4,1) - Good idea! Fixed ^^
6. 00:42:970 (1,2) - Blanket. Fixed
7. 00:50:095 (3,1) - Nazi blanket. Fixed
8. 01:02:095 (3) - This slider breaks the flow too much, maybe delete the middle point? Okay, no problem if play better ^^
9. 01:06:595 (1,2) - Blanket Fixed
10. 01:11:470 (3,1) - ^ Fixed
11. 01:13:345 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
12. 01:18:220 (4,1) - ^ Fixed
13. 01:20:938 (2,1) - ^ It's okay I think but changed a bit
14. 01:39:595 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
15. 02:10:345 (2,3) - ^ Fixed
16. 03:00:595 (1,2) - ^ Holy macaroni why I didn't see it D: Fixed
17. 03:06:220 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
18. 01:13:720 (3,4,1) - Make a perfect trinagle? Fixed
19. 02:20:470 - 02:21:595 - Why not to map this part? It's too empty Mapped
20. 02:32:095 (4,2) - Bad overlap Fixed
21. 02:43:345 (2,3) - Blanket? If you don't want to make usual blanket, you can do smth like this or idk: I think it's ok cuz blanket will off the flow
    
    

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1. Check the last kiai time pls, something's wrong with it Omg sure haha Fixed
2. 00:14:845 (3,4,5,6) - This pattern could be better. Use "Create poligon circles" to make an pentagon, delete one circle and move it like you wanted. Good idea, fixed o//
3. 00:17:657 (2,3) - 00:17:657 (2,3) - Blanket. Fixed
4. 00:40:907 (4) - This circle breaks your flow. I's move it higher then 00:41:095 (1) - Fixed
   
   
5. 00:48:407 (5,1) - Blanket Fixed
6. 00:57:970 (2,1,2) - It's better to make this way, you need just to rotate it a bit (10 degrees or so): Fixed
   
   
   
7. 01:07:345 (3,1) - Bad overlap Stacked and moved (1)'s tail
8. 01:19:157 (3) - I want to change this moment a bit. Add a circle here 01:19:157 - , then start a slider from 01:19:345 - to 01:19:532 - . This pattern doesn't ignore the downbeat and fits the song! But I like this moment in map :C
9. 01:41:188 (1) - This circle should be here 01:41:095 - Fixed lel
10. 01:56:657 (3,4) - Blanket I tried many times, but I can't make blanket here... :C Changed a bit, maybe it is better
11. 02:09:970 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
12. 02:33:595 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
13. 02:32:095 (1,1) - Bad overlap Stacked

good luck c:

1. 00:33:595 (1) - Czy tutaj nie brakuje gwizdka?
2. 01:00:595 (1) - Poprzednim razem jak jest "My Heart Skips A Beat" to slider ma i na początku i na końcu gwizdki, a teraz na końcu nie ma. Przypadeg?
3. 01:04:345 (2,1) - Szczerze wydaje mi się że na końcu w dwójce też może być gwizdek oraz na początku jedynki.
4. 01:24:595 (1) - I na początku w jedynce też można by dać gwizdek.
5. 01:27:595 (1) - I tutaj.
6. 01:57:595 (1) - I jeszcze tutaj. xD
7. 02:07:345 (5,6,1) - Szczerze to jest jedyna rzecz która mnie martwi. Modowac to ja nie umiem ale jednak grac normale to i lubię i umiem a ten moment jest dosyc chamski. Gubię się w nim często bo slidery tak nachodzą że nie widzę co gdzie i jak. Dlatego bardzo gorąco proszę o CTRL + H dla slidera numer 5, przesunięcie go na stare miejsce w osi XY ;_; W sensie wiesz, że jak dasz CTRL + H, to przesuń na to samo miejsce co było przed tym, ale wtedy będzie bardziej widocznie.
8. 02:10:345 - Tu jest tak pusto że ludzie mogą się gubić strasznie. Ciężko przez to o SS. : /
9. 02:21:595 (1) - I tutaj też nie ma gwizdka. ;_;
10. 02:59:845 (4) - Może tutaj też na początek dać można gwizdek?
11. 03:15:595 (1) - Błagam zamiast klapsa daj gwizdek bo to nie pasuje : /

1. Z tej racji że jest to NH mapset a Hard do najłatwiejszych nie należy, czy dałoby się zredukować samo OD lub OD i HP do 5? Bo to jest w sumie bardzo szybkie. D:
2. 00:15:220 (5) - Gdzie jest klaps : /
3. 00:32:845 (3,1) - Czemu tu nie ma gwizdków jak pasujo. : /
4. 00:44:095 (1) - Gdzie jest klaps na końcu slidera.
5. 01:27:595 (1) - Gdzie gwizdek ;_____;
6. 01:47:095 (1,3,4,1) - Ale na początku chyba mogły by być gwizdki w tych sliderach? xD Oraz 01:49:345 (3) - tutaj?
7. 02:20:188 (1) - Ale tutaj serio by się przydał : /
8. 02:31:720 (4) - CTRL + G?
9. 02:56:470 (3) - Gdzie jest klaps : /
10. 02:59:657 (3) - Gdzie gwizdek na końcu slidera ;_;
11. 03:15:595 (1) - Tak jak w poprzednim poziomie - Błagam daj gwizdek zamiast klapsa. =.=

Bathory Witch wrote:

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1. 00:33:595 (1) - Czy tutaj nie brakuje gwizdka? Bakari mi kazał ;_;
2. 01:00:595 (1) - Poprzednim razem jak jest "My Heart Skips A Beat" to slider ma i na początku i na końcu gwizdki, a teraz na końcu nie ma. Przypadeg? Nie sondze : / Fix
3. 01:04:345 (2,1) - Szczerze wydaje mi się że na końcu w dwójce też może być gwizdek oraz na początku jedynki. Og
4. 01:24:595 (1) - I na początku w jedynce też można by dać gwizdek. Og
5. 01:27:595 (1) - I tutaj. Bakari mi kazał ;_;
6. 01:57:595 (1) - I jeszcze tutaj. xD Bakari mi kazał ;_; Ale dałem finish bo w tle słychać XD
7. 02:07:345 (5,6,1) - Szczerze to jest jedyna rzecz która mnie martwi. Modowac to ja nie umiem ale jednak grac normale to i lubię i umiem a ten moment jest dosyc chamski. Gubię się w nim często bo slidery tak nachodzą że nie widzę co gdzie i jak. Dlatego bardzo gorąco proszę o CTRL + H dla slidera numer 5, przesunięcie go na stare miejsce w osi XY ;_; W sensie wiesz, że jak dasz CTRL + H, to przesuń na to samo miejsce co było przed tym, ale wtedy będzie bardziej widocznie. Tu nie ma slidera nr. 5 XDDDDDDD
8. 02:10:345 - Tu jest tak pusto że ludzie mogą się gubić strasznie. Ciężko przez to o SS. : / Ale czemu pusto ;_;
9. 02:21:595 (1) - I tutaj też nie ma gwizdka. ;_; Bakari mi kazał ;_;
10. 02:59:845 (4) - Może tutaj też na początek dać można gwizdek? Og
11. 03:15:595 (1) - Błagam zamiast klapsa daj gwizdek bo to nie pasuje : / Krfawy mi kazał ;_;

Hard

1. Z tej racji że jest to NH mapset a Hard do najłatwiejszych nie należy, czy dałoby się zredukować samo OD lub OD i HP do 5? Bo to jest w sumie bardzo szybkie. D: 5 jest za łatwa, jak już się zagra to łatwo jest o SS, jeszcze nigdy nie miałem 100 w tej mapie. Ale HP zmienię na 5 bo fakt faktem mapa długa lekko XD
2. 00:15:220 (5) - Gdzie jest klaps : / Ups XD
3. 00:32:845 (3,1) - Czemu tu nie ma gwizdków jak pasujo. : / Og
4. 00:44:095 (1) - Gdzie jest klaps na końcu slidera. Ups XD
5. 01:27:595 (1) - Gdzie gwizdek ;_____; Jak w normalu^
6. 01:47:095 (1,3,4,1) - Ale na początku chyba mogły by być gwizdki w tych sliderach? xD Oraz 01:49:345 (3) - tutaj? Oki
7. 02:20:188 (1) - Ale tutaj serio by się przydał : / Jak w normalu^
8. 02:31:720 (4) - CTRL + G? Nie, jest dobrze XD
9. 02:56:470 (3) - Gdzie jest klaps : / Ups XD
10. 02:59:657 (3) - Gdzie gwizdek na końcu slidera ;_; Og
11. 03:15:595 (1) - Tak jak w poprzednim poziomie - Błagam daj gwizdek zamiast klapsa. =.= Ale Krfawy mi kazau XDD

Super mapka. Polecam, Bathory Witch. Czytała Krystyna Czubówna.