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Aoi Eir - IGNITE (TV size ver.) [Osu|Taiko]

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xxdeathx
2,661 posts
Joined July 2013
xxdeathx
Hi BakaDekaane, Kibble, and Dark.

[General]
  1. Add TV Size to title instead of tags? Both ranked versions have it, although differently.
  2. Where's video o.o
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:884 (1) - obligatory don't-repeat-sliders-more-than-once-in-easy
  2. 00:11:375 (2,3) - the blanket looked a tiny bit close on the end point but i fixed it by moving the end point and (1) http://puu.sh/b2XfT/464a478a98.png
  3. 00:49:796 (5) - new combo?
  4. 01:03:831 (5) - give NC and 01:05:586 (1,4) - swap NC to stay consistent with NC every 2 measures
  5. 01:15:059 (5) - NC here for ^
[Normal]
  1. why 0.79 slider speed o.o
  2. 00:30:147 (1,2) - should follow the same new comboing as 00:18:217 (1,2,1) - to stay consistent or vice-versa. Compare corresponding notes in these two sections and try to match up the new combos.
  3. 00:10:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - stacking 1/2 beat and 1/1 beat so close to each other may be a little hard to read
  4. 00:51:200 (1,2) - line them up?
[Hard]
  1. AIMod says unsnapped object
  2. 01:05:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kind of questionable in that 6 1/2 circles in a row is inconsistent with the rest of the map's difficulty. Maybe stack them or use some 1/2 sliders to make it easier.
  3. 01:09:270 (1) - move to the right of the previous object so it flows better http://puu.sh/b2Wzv/3cf41794ee.png
[Kibbleru's Hard]
  1. 00:12:603 (1,2,1) - use better spacing to distinguish 1/2 and 1/1 beat
  2. 00:51:375 (2) - curve downward for better flow http://puu.sh/b2Wgd/2de79790bf.png
  3. 00:53:656 (1) - remove NC since it's still part of the same measure
  4. 01:05:235 (1) - curve to the right for flow
  5. 01:23:305 (6) - move to around here so it's in a similar direction direction as 01:23:481 (1) - http://puu.sh/b2Wp4/a801373847.png
  6. 01:28:042 (2,2) - end part is a little messy, having these overlap would be neater
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:621 - the sounds you're mapping from 00:18:919 (1,2,3,4) - continue onto this tick so another circle would be good here
  2. 00:52:252 (5) - you can separate the 1/2 drums from the 1/4 drums/melody like http://puu.sh/b2VWq/dba0be8895.png or http://puu.sh/b2VXh/9914f2205b.png
  3. 01:00:147 (4,5) - line up the direction of the player's cursor with the slider's curve for better play
  4. 01:17:516 (8,4) - might as well stack for neatness
Wow, uh, this was one of the more unique difficulties I've seen in a while.

[Dark's Insane]
  1. 00:04:709 (6,1) - the flow from 00:03:831 (1,2,3,4,5) seem to point downwards so try http://puu.sh/b2URJ/6aa7d6d60c.png
  2. 00:35:761 (1,2,3) - I moved a circle closer in time to (3) and its approach circle shows where you want to blanket around http://puu.sh/b2UWw/2407fab84a.png
  3. 00:38:217 (9,1) - jump could be a little bigger to emphasize the music
  4. 00:48:744 (6) - move end point to 172, 136 for neater blanket
  5. 00:48:393 (5,6) - i think this flows better from previous object http://puu.sh/b2V6j/c5901091a8.png
  6. 00:55:937 (3,4) - doesn't flow too well because of the right angle between circle-to-slider and the path of the slider. you want the slider's path to be in the same direction as the circle to slider, like http://puu.sh/b2Vbv/091204521d.png or http://puu.sh/b2Veq/c0492ab37c.png
  7. 01:18:217 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 01:20:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:22:077 (1,2) - have the sliders start on the strong vocals since a keypress is much more emphasis than a slider end
Can't have enough Ignite. Good luck!
DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
DakeDekaane
xxdeathx

xxdeathx wrote:

Hi BakaDekaane, Kibble, and Dark.

[General]
  1. Add TV Size to title instead of tags? Both ranked versions have it, although differently. /*Not breaking anything, I'll keep :3[____]
  2. Where's video o.o /*Soon.
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:884 (1) - obligatory don't-repeat-sliders-more-than-once-in-easy /*Obligatory it's long enough for beginners to see the second repeat.
  2. 00:11:375 (2,3) - the blanket looked a tiny bit close on the end point but i fixed it by moving the end point and (1) http://puu.sh/b2XfT/464a478a98.png /*I fixed it.
  3. 00:49:796 (5) - new combo? /*It still can belong to previous combo, and let the new combo be for the spinner.
  4. 01:03:831 (5) - give NC and 01:05:586 (1,4) - swap NC to stay consistent with NC every 2 measures /*Something similar
  5. 01:15:059 (5) - NC here for ^ /*^
[Normal]
  1. why 0.79 slider speed o.o /*math too stronk
  2. 00:30:147 (1,2) - should follow the same new comboing as 00:18:217 (1,2,1) - to stay consistent or vice-versa. Compare corresponding notes in these two sections and try to match up the new combos. /*Oops, okay
  3. 00:10:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - stacking 1/2 beat and 1/1 beat so close to each other may be a little hard to read /*Okay, did something simpler.
  4. 00:51:200 (1,2) - line them up? /*Okay
[Hard]
  1. AIMod says unsnapped object /*Fixed
  2. 01:05:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Kind of questionable in that 6 1/2 circles in a row is inconsistent with the rest of the map's difficulty. Maybe stack them or use some 1/2 sliders to make it easier. /*I'll be keeping this for now, I like how it plays and also I believe it compliments nicely the intensity there.
  3. 01:09:270 (1) - move to the right of the previous object so it flows better http://puu.sh/b2Wzv/3cf41794ee.png /*Moved 01:08:744 (4) instead
[Insane]
  1. 00:19:621 - the sounds you're mapping from 00:18:919 (1,2,3,4) - continue onto this tick so another circle would be good here /*I'm mainly mapping on the piano things for this part before vocals, adding a note more would be a bit intrusive.
  2. 00:52:252 (5) - you can separate the 1/2 drums from the 1/4 drums/melody like http://puu.sh/b2VWq/dba0be8895.png or http://puu.sh/b2VXh/9914f2205b.png /*Not changing this long slider, though I made it prettier
  3. 01:00:147 (4,5) - line up the direction of the player's cursor with the slider's curve for better play /*Okay
  4. 01:17:516 (8,4) - might as well stack for neatness /*Not really noticeable while playing :p
Wow, uh, this was one of the more unique difficulties I've seen in a while. /*o3o

Can't have enough Ignite. Good luck!
Thanks for modding :3
Nyukai
2,415 posts
Joined July 2012
Nyukai
Hey, M4M, creo que ya lo hablamos o3o

El map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/191541 ~

General:

  1. Quita el Widescreen Support en Normal, en los dos Hard y en los dos Insane, creo que no tienes SB o3o
Easy:

  1. Le pondría CS:2,5, el CS que tienes ahora se acerca al 3 lo cual en mi opinión es más para un Normal, pero sólo es mi opinión (?)
  2. 00:31:200 (1, 2) - El NC lo pondría en (2) o3o
  3. 00:38:568 (4) - NC imo, la música sube un poco ~
  4. 00:57:516 (3) - Muévelo hasta x:300 y:102, quizá tu intención no era hacerlo simétrico, pero queda mejor en conjunto (?)
  5. 01:03:831 (5, 1) - El NC debería estar en (5).
  6. 01:06:638 (4) - Añade NC~
Normal:

  1. 00:22:428 (7) - Em... Quizá debas arreglar esto. http://puu.sh/b4jdK/1a213839de.jpg ><
  2. 00:25:410 (1) - No es necesario el NC.
  3. 00:31:200 (1) - Quita el NC.
  4. 00:32:954 (4) - Añade NC.
Hard:

  1. Preferiría CS:7,5, 7 es demasiado lento y 8 quizá demasiado rápido, así que yo pondría 7,5 xD
  2. 00:25:937 (7) - NC~
  3. 00:46:288 (11) - ^
Kibbleru's Hard:

  1. Maybe AR:7,5?
  2. 00:12:603 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo o3o
  3. 00:29:445 (3, 4) - What do you think about something like this? http://puu.sh/b4jJT/e796596af0.jpg It's a nice blanket (or at least a try of blanket). Btw, if you do that, move (4) to x:324 y:180.
Insane:

  1. Oh no, esos círculos ya son demasiado pequeños para mí ;_;
  2. 00:25:937 (7) - Añade NC~
Dark's Insane:

  1. 00:03:305 (6, 1) - El NC debería estar en (6) creo.
  2. 01:05:937 (6) - Yo... pondría NC o3o
  3. 01:15:059 (9, 1) - Esto ya sí que lo recomiendo: pon NC en (9) en vez de (1).
  4. 01:17:165 (5) - Lo mismo de 01:05:937 (6).
  5. 01:28:919 (8) - Ponle finish en vez de clap.
Eso es todo, me gustaron sobretodo los insane o3o

Suerte~
Luna-
811 posts
Joined June 2012
Luna-
xxdeathx mod

xxdeathx wrote:

Hi BakaDekaane, Kibble, and Dark. Hi~

[Dark's Insane]
  1. 00:04:709 (6,1) - the flow from 00:03:831 (1,2,3,4,5) seem to point downwards so try http://puu.sh/b2URJ/6aa7d6d60c.png since it's flowing to the same way I don't see problem with this(also I like how it looks)
  2. 00:35:761 (1,2,3) - I moved a circle closer in time to (3) and its approach circle shows where you want to blanket around http://puu.sh/b2UWw/2407fab84a.png Fixed
  3. 00:38:217 (9,1) - jump could be a little bigger to emphasize the music Don't think it's necessary
  4. 00:48:744 (6) - move end point to 172, 136 for neater blanket Fixed
  5. 00:48:393 (5,6) - i think this flows better from previous object http://puu.sh/b2V6j/c5901091a8.png Fixed in my own way
  6. 00:55:937 (3,4) - doesn't flow too well because of the right angle between circle-to-slider and the path of the slider. you want the slider's path to be in the same direction as the circle to slider, like http://puu.sh/b2Vbv/091204521d.png or http://puu.sh/b2Veq/c0492ab37c.png Fixed
  7. 01:18:217 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 01:20:673 (1,2,3,4,5) - 01:22:077 (1,2) - have the sliders start on the strong vocals since a keypress is much more emphasis than a slider end Fixed I think,since I following drums too I changed it a bit, hope it feel better now

Inyuschan mod

Inyuschan wrote:

Dark's Insane:

  1. 00:03:305 (6, 1) - El NC debería estar en (6) creo.El vocal empieza otra vez en 00:03:831 - por lo que prefiero dejarlo así
  2. 01:05:937 (6) - Yo... pondría NC o3o No me gusta spamear tanto de nc, así que no hay cambios
  3. 01:15:059 (9, 1) - Esto ya sí que lo recomiendo: pon NC en (9) en vez de (1). Fixed
  4. 01:17:165 (5) - Lo mismo de 01:05:937 (6). ^
  5. 01:28:919 (8) - Ponle finish en vez de clap. Fixed


thanks both for the mod :)

Dark's Insane
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Aoi Eir - IGNITE.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54095
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:IGNITE
TitleUnicode:IGNITE
Artist:Aoi Eir
ArtistUnicode:藍井エイル
Creator:DakeDekaane
Version:Dark's Insane
Source:ソードアート・オンラインⅡ
Tags:Sword Art Online SAO GGO opening TV Size Kibbleru Dark_Accelerator
BeatmapID:459484
BeatmapSetID:190961

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
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DakeDekaane
osu! Alumni
3,500 posts
Joined February 2012
Topic Starter
DakeDekaane
Inyus

Inyuschan wrote:

Hey, M4M, creo que ya lo hablamos o3o

El map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/191541 ~

General:

  1. Quita el Widescreen Support en Normal, en los dos Hard y en los dos Insane, creo que no tienes SB o3o
Easy:

  1. Le pondría CS:2,5, el CS que tienes ahora se acerca al 3 lo cual en mi opinión es más para un Normal, pero sólo es mi opinión (?) /*CS 2.5 crearía algunos overlaps feos :(
  2. 00:31:200 (1, 2) - El NC lo pondría en (2) o3o /*Es la misma frase en las voces.
  3. 00:38:568 (4) - NC imo, la música sube un poco ~ /*Okay
  4. 00:57:516 (3) - Muévelo hasta x:300 y:102, quizá tu intención no era hacerlo simétrico, pero queda mejor en conjunto (?) /*Okay
  5. 01:03:831 (5, 1) - El NC debería estar en (5). /*No es la primera persona que lo dice, okay.
  6. 01:06:638 (4) - Añade NC~ /*Es la misma frase en las voces.
Normal:

  1. 00:22:428 (7) - Em... Quizá debas arreglar esto. http://puu.sh/b4jdK/1a213839de.jpg >< /*En el default no lo toca pero creo lo bajaré un poco.
  2. 00:25:410 (1) - No es necesario el NC. /*Okay
  3. 00:31:200 (1) - Quita el NC. /*Diferente frase en las voces
  4. 00:32:954 (4) - Añade NC./*Es la misma frase en las voces.
Hard:

  1. Preferiría CS:7,5, 7 es demasiado lento y 8 quizá demasiado rápido, así que yo pondría 7,5 xD /*CS 7.5? o_o, bueno se que te refieres a AR7.5, pero a mi me gusta mas 7 para la diff, veré más opiniones.
  2. 00:25:937 (7) - NC~ /*Lo puse en 00:26:638 (8)
  3. 00:46:288 (11) - ^ /*Lo puse en 00:46:112 (1)
Insane:

  1. Oh no, esos círculos ya son demasiado pequeños para mí ;_; /*Pero si solo es CS4.3 :(
  2. 00:25:937 (7) - Añade NC~ /*Lo puse en 00:26:638 (9)
Eso es todo, me gustaron sobretodo los insane o3o

Suerte~

Gracias por el mod /o/
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru

xxdeathx wrote:

Hi BakaDekaane, Kibble, and Dark.

[Kibbleru's Hard]
  1. 00:12:603 (1,2,1) - use better spacing to distinguish 1/2 and 1/1 beat k
  2. 00:51:375 (2) - curve downward for better flow http://puu.sh/b2Wgd/2de79790bf.png nah doesn't matter too much
  3. 00:53:656 (1) - remove NC since it's still part of the same measure its to distinguish SV change and it kinda gives a nice effect
  4. 01:05:235 (1) - curve to the right for flow same as b4
  5. 01:23:305 (6) - move to around here so it's in a similar direction direction as 01:23:481 (1) - http://puu.sh/b2Wp4/a801373847.png nah this is good imo
  6. 01:28:042 (2,2) - end part is a little messy, having these overlap would be neater I kinda like this tho :( my style is weird
Can't have enough Ignite. Good luck!

Inyuschan wrote:

Kibbleru's Hard:

  1. Maybe AR:7,5?
  2. 00:12:603 (1) - Unnecessary NC imo o3o hmm gives some nice emphasis imo tho :(
  3. 00:29:445 (3, 4) - What do you think about something like this? http://puu.sh/b4jJT/e796596af0.jpg It's a nice blanket (or at least a try of blanket). Btw, if you do that, move (4) to x:324 y:180. nah I prefer what I have
Suerte~
ty for mods

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Nyukai
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Joined July 2012
Nyukai
Sí, quise decir AR:7,5, perdona xD
ReySHeL
612 posts
Joined March 2012
ReySHeL
hi from my queue.

[Oni]
  1. 01:01:024 - add finish. big cymbal.
  2. 01:12:252 - ^
  3. 01:18:217 - k. follow the drum and 01:21:024 - same as here.

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:13:305 - add finish. strong sound here.
  2. 00:18:919 - ^ big cymbal.
  3. 00:30:147 - ^
  4. 01:01:024 - add finish plz. D D K K D pattern and follow the big cymbal too.
  5. 01:12:252 - ^

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:13:305 - add finish.
  2. 00:18:919 - ^
  3. 00:30:147 - ^
  4. 01:01:024 - ^
  5. 01:12:252 - ^
Kantan also fix finishes plz.
good luck~
DakeDekaane
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Only added the finish in 00:30:147, the other notes doesn't fit too much as big notes because they start a calm section > <
Also added the kat suggested in Oni.

Thanks!
AxelHino
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AxelHino
Hi Dake~ :D From my mod queue

Kantan

00:13:305 (1) - change to d. I feel that a bigger emphasis is needed after the calm beginning, and a don would do nice.
00:46:638 (31) - change to d. duplicating the previous pattern would sound a bit boring and i think the drums in the background would sound well with a don.

Futsuu

01:02:779 (18,19) - ctrl+g. Just to differ itself from the previous notes
01:14:007 (20,21) - ^

Muzukashii

00:50:673 - add k, and then...
00:50:849 - add d. I find a sole dk kind of empty. just a little suggestion.

Oni

01:00:937 - add k to match the notes to the drum
01:12:165 - ^
01:14:621 - add d...
01:14:796 - add k... and then
01:14:884 - add d to result in a ddkkd cluster. it matches the drum part but it might clash with the big notes after it so this is merely a tiny suggestion

I think that's all i can point out. Good luck for rank :3
DakeDekaane
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AxelHino

AxelHino wrote:

Hi Dake~ :D From my mod queue

Kantan

00:13:305 (1) - change to d. I feel that a bigger emphasis is needed after the calm beginning, and a don would do nice. /*Done
00:46:638 (31) - change to d. duplicating the previous pattern would sound a bit boring and i think the drums in the background would sound well with a don. /*Done

Futsuu

01:02:779 (18,19) - ctrl+g. Just to differ itself from the previous notes /*Sounds cool, done
01:14:007 (20,21) - ^

Muzukashii

00:50:673 - add k, and then...
00:50:849 - add d. I find a sole dk kind of empty. just a little suggestion. /*I'll keep this for now, the space there is to fit the vocals, which I somehow followed in the previous patterns, may add if some more people tells me too.

Oni

01:00:937 - add k to match the notes to the drum /*Decided to go for a in this part, I find the k k k a bit weird > <[/color]
01:12:165 - ^ /*^
01:14:621 - add d... /*Added this note
01:14:796 - add k... and then
01:14:884 - add d to result in a ddkkd cluster. it matches the drum part but it might clash with the big notes after it so this is merely a tiny suggestion /*Yup, it doesn't feel to nice to play so I prefer to have this 1 beat space.

I think that's all i can point out. Good luck for rank :3

Thanks for the mod >w<
Love
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Love
[Oni]

  1. 00:41:375 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - These feel really odd to me since the drums stick out so much here. Why not try changing 00:41:024 (115,116) - to d d, then have doubles of k k - d d - k k - d d.
  2. 00:44:182 (134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - Same for this, but change 00:43:656 (130,133) - to d's
  3. 00:56:024 (191) - Any reason for this being here?
  4. 01:07:252 (248) - ^
  5. 01:19:884 (303) - ^
  6. 01:22:691 (318) - ^
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:27:165 (34) - Move this 1/2 back for the vocal emphasis.
Really interesting style, but it's not something I'd work with.

Good luck!
DakeDekaane
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Love wrote:

[Oni]

  1. 00:41:375 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128) - These feel really odd to me since the drums stick out so much here. Why not try changing 00:41:024 (115,116) - to d d, then have doubles of k k - d d - k k - d d. /*Added a kat between each ddd, and made something interesting to not make this part too hard?
  2. 00:44:182 (134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145) - Same for this, but change 00:43:656 (130,133) - to d's /*Did in a similar way as above
  3. 00:56:024 (191) - Any reason for this being here? /*I think this don compliments nicely this pattern.
  4. 01:07:252 (248) - ^ /*^
  5. 01:19:884 (303) - ^ /*This note is in the music itself, so I put it there, originally it was a k ddk, but didn't emphasize the violin? nicely
  6. 01:22:691 (318) - ^ /*Did something here tho, because it's different.
[Muzukashii]

  1. 00:27:165 (34) - Move this 1/2 back for the vocal emphasis. /*Done
Really interesting style, but it's not something I'd work with.

Good luck!
Thanks for the mod :3c
sheela
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Joined October 2011
sheela
Yo yo DakeDekaane. And Kibbleru and Dark Accelerator.This song is really popular...

Easy

  1. 00:11:726 (3) - It's not a major problem, but it's just a suggestion. Try to move the slider next to the previous object.
    SPOILER
    I thought it'll make a better circular flow so it'll be comfortable to play. Although, this will ruin the blanket pattern you made to (1) and (2).
  2. 00:18:919 (2) - I was thinking of a new combo on this note. The beat where this note is landed is the beat that changed a part of the music (starts at 00:18:919 to 00:30:147 - ).
  3. 00:37:516 (4,5) - I suggest to remove these notes, and add a 2/1 slider: it starts at 00:37:165 and ends at 00:37:866 . If you skip the downbeat, it feels that there's a lot of emptiness there. I mean, the downbeats are the most important beats in songs, so you shouldn't skip them in easier difficulty in my opinion. So I suggest to add the slider, as it follow the vocals.
  4. 01:06:638 (4) - Add a new combo? The tone of the vocal is louder, so I thought it'll fit. It's the same as the slider on the start of the chorus: 00:55:410 (1) .

Normal

  1. 00:18:919 (2) - Same in Easy (about the new combo).
No major problem in this difficulty.

Hard

  1. 00:18:919 (3) - Same in the two difficulty above this. The beat changed a part of the music.
  2. 00:19:270 (4) - Nazi suggestion. Move the slider little more down-right. It's just a question of "beauty".
  3. 00:30:147 (5) - Maybe a new combo, then remove it from 00:31:200 (1) .

Insane

  1. 00:30:147 (5) - Add a new combo, since it signify that there's a new beat that changed a part of the song.
  2. 01:00:849 (1,2) - In my taste, it's a bit ugly, because of the big distance you put to these notes. Try stacking them with 01:01:024 (3) -'s head so it'll be the same triplet pattern you did through the difficulty.

Kibbleru's Hard

  1. 00:09:796 (2) - Try mirroring it with 00:09:095 (1) : copy-paste 00:09:095 (1) , then flip it horizontally. I think that the current wasn't pretty. So I thought mine would look nicer.
  2. 00:22:428 (3) - Try flipping it horizontally. It'll just indicate that the next object is on the left of the slider.
  3. 01:05:059 (6) - Nazi. Perfectly stack with the next object's head. There's also 01:25:498 (4) .

Dark's Insane

  1. 00:11:726 (5) - Just a little thing. The blanket isn't perfectly wrapped to 00:11:200 (3) -'s head. I just want to point this out.
That's what I can find. = w =.
I hope this mod helps the map! Poke me in-game (or forum) if you guys have any questions. Good Luck on ranking this map! Here's a star for a little boost.
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
only fixed stacks, kept the rest due to personal preference

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Milan-
1,473 posts
Joined August 2011
Milan-
notice me senpai
04:09 rossonero1899: tenias una notas no stackeadas bien en tu easy a todo esto >.<
04:10 DakeDekaane: o3o
04:10 DakeDekaane: en la Easy solo tenia un stack, lo demás es a proposito, creo
04:11 rossonero1899: recuerdo que lo anote en alguna aprte eso
04:11 rossonero1899: 00:25:937 (4,2) -
04:12 rossonero1899: no creo que sea un error del editor
04:12 rossonero1899: creo xd
04:12 DakeDekaane: aaaaaaa
04:13 DakeDekaane: si es error del editor >:(
04:13 rossonero1899: ;w;
04:13 rossonero1899: 00:23:831 (1,2,3) -
04:13 rossonero1899: eso por que no hace mejor el triangulo y poner el slider a la mitad
04:14 rossonero1899: asi es simetrico con 00:26:638 (1) -
04:14 rossonero1899: digo el punto medio del slider
04:16 DakeDekaane: okay o3o
04:17 rossonero1899: tenia una duda por que aca 00:19:972 (1,2,3) - es diferente que aca 00:31:200 (1,2,3) -
04:17 rossonero1899: por el hitsound en 00:32:603 - ?
04:19 DakeDekaane: por que la música es diferente y quiero que los hitsounds lo reflejen o3o
04:19 rossonero1899: uh bueno :3 es necesario cambiar el DS en esta 00:33:656 (4) -
04:19 rossonero1899: :o
04:23 rossonero1899: bueno igual capaz estas viendo otra cosa xD yo solo decia
04:23 DakeDekaane: ;w;
04:23 DakeDekaane: como te das cuenta de eso
04:24 rossonero1899: de que? ;w;
04:24 DakeDekaane: de los errores de spacing
04:24 DakeDekaane: LOL
04:25 DakeDekaane: no me había dado cuenta
04:25 DakeDekaane: o3o
04:25 rossonero1899: AI mod, aunque siempre los veo uno por uno en easy y normal
04:25 rossonero1899: habia otro igual
04:40 DakeDekaane: lol
04:40 DakeDekaane: :c
04:42 rossonero1899: aun tenia una que otra que te podia decir, si quieres, cuando puedas xd
04:43 DakeDekaane: pues dime o3o
04:44 rossonero1899: a ps
04:45 rossonero1899: esos no son el mismo ritmo 00:18:919 (1,1) - o.o
04:45 rossonero1899: por el combo
04:47 DakeDekaane: en el easy?
04:47 rossonero1899: sip
04:47 DakeDekaane: pues es diferente parte musical,
04:49 rossonero1899: umbueno xd 00:41:375 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - esa parte me cuesta entenderla >.<
04:49 rossonero1899: nose si el whistle que pareciera algo ramdom o por que ahi un sonido a la mitad
04:49 rossonero1899: de cada slider
04:50 rossonero1899: o capaz el 2do slider es el que comienza muy pronto, ahi algo mal en mi opinion >.<
04:51 DakeDekaane: la idea original eran sliders de 3/2, pero se iba a perder un poco el patron anterior 00:38:568 (1,2,3) -
04:51 DakeDekaane: igual no suenan mal, es otra manera de simplificarlo
04:53 rossonero1899: Ahm
04:53 rossonero1899: como jugador no lo entenderia, aunque no juego easy
04:53 rossonero1899: asi que nose asdasdas
04:53 rossonero1899: 01:08:393 (5) - ese lo vas a dejar ahi?
04:54 DakeDekaane: si o3o
04:55 rossonero1899: que cambia el ds por nada en mi opinion xd 01:21:375 (2,1) - ese no esta stackeado bien
04:55 rossonero1899: si es que eso querias xd
04:56 DakeDekaane: ajustaria la velocidad del slider, pero me da flojera =w=
04:56 DakeDekaane: para el stack, no es muy visible al jugar al igual que no era mi intención
04:57 rossonero1899: xD bueno fui muy perfecionista ahi ;w;
04:57 rossonero1899: en el normal encontre esto extraño00:11:375 (4,5) -
04:58 rossonero1899: por que stackear, si haces eso no tendrias que hacerlo desde 00:11:024 (3) - ?
04:58 rossonero1899: ademas que no es como un poco dificil de jugar con 1 stack de 1/2 y otro de 1/1 casi al lado? ;w;
05:00 DakeDekaane: okay, lo arreglo
05:01 rossonero1899: otra cosa que me llamo la atencion por que no mapeaste este beat 00:12:779 - ?xD
05:01 rossonero1899: en ninguna de tus diffs
05:03 DakeDekaane: siento que reduciría un poco el énfasis en las voces, que es en lo que me estoy basando la mayor parte del mapa o3o
05:03 rossonero1899: aa bueno xd si me di cuenta cuando jugue tu insane
05:05 rossonero1899: 00:37:866 (6,7) - por que no un slider en vez?
05:05 rossonero1899: haria como enfasis esa voz corrida que le sale xD
05:06 DakeDekaane: la voz no cambia mucho, asi que decidí mantener todo con circulos o3o
05:08 rossonero1899: igual :3 00:41:375 (1) - en esa parte aun no entiendo el whistle xD soy muy mlo con hitsounds, pero suena como fuera de lugar
05:09 DakeDekaane: ah, el whistle va con la guitarra
05:10 rossonero1899: pero por ejemplo en 00:44:709 - igual esta la guitarra, no le pones por que es mas bajo?
05:11 DakeDekaane: sep
05:12 rossonero1899: es necesario ese triple 00:57:165 (3,4,5) - ?
05:12 rossonero1899: el 4 no esta demas ahi?
05:12 rossonero1899: tomando como referencia lo que hiciste aca 00:37:165 (4,5,6,7) -
05:13 rossonero1899: se que es totalmente diferente esas partes si xD
05:13 rossonero1899: pero igual
05:14 DakeDekaane: movi el triple a 00:57:516 - , ahi quise enfatizar un poco las voces, pero creo que no lo hice bien > <
05:16 rossonero1899: aahm ahi tiene mas sentido en ese caso
05:16 rossonero1899: lo mismo despues
05:16 rossonero1899: 01:08:393 (3,4,5) -
05:16 DakeDekaane: sep, también lo cambié
05:17 rossonero1899: 01:23:481 (3) - es un 3?
05:17 rossonero1899: lo hiciste aproposito por el numero del combo?x
05:17 rossonero1899: xD
05:17 DakeDekaane: solo un slider bonito que quedo en forma de 3, no estaba planeado o3o
05:18 rossonero1899: decilucion ;(
05:18 DakeDekaane: :(
05:20 rossonero1899: en tu hard
05:20 rossonero1899: no crees que esto esta muy junto? ;w; 00:04:182 (3,4,5) -
05:22 DakeDekaane: con la velocidad lenta de los sliders el flujo se vería afectado si hago los espacios entre circulos más grandes :c
05:23 rossonero1899: o sea igual juegan bien, pero como 1.8x en vez de 1.7 igual hubiese sido mas bonito, creo :c
05:26 DakeDekaane: :C
05:27 rossonero1899: :c
05:27 rossonero1899: 00:33:656 (8,1,2) - ese no seria mejor http://puu.sh/bp2YQ/ade0ed6753.jpg
05:27 rossonero1899: por el wiu wiu
05:28 rossonero1899: o en vez de los 3 circulos un slider con repeticion
05:28 rossonero1899: pero el wiu wiu
05:29 DakeDekaane: con el combo ahí intento seguir más las percusiones > <
05:30 rossonero1899: oh tiene mas sentido xd
05:31 rossonero1899: esta parte casi la fallo cuando la jugue
05:31 rossonero1899: 00:38:217 (8,1) -
05:31 rossonero1899: casi en todo el mapa los stacks son de 1/2
05:31 rossonero1899: y este es de 1/1 y no lo pude distinguir bien
05:32 DakeDekaane: pero un stack se siente mejor ahi que continuar con el spacing constante D:
05:34 rossonero1899: si si es verdad, solo decia lo que paso cuando lo jugue xD
05:34 rossonero1899: creo que fue por el sonido de fondo que tiene esa parte, pense que habia otra nota
05:36 rossonero1899: 00:43:481 (9,10) - ese es otro intrumento?
05:37 DakeDekaane: las percusiones, para complementar el ritmo anterior
05:37 rossonero1899: no lleva nc por nuevo intrumento?xd
05:37 rossonero1899: como hiciste aca 00:45:760 (7,8,1,2,3) -
05:37 DakeDekaane: pues es la misma parte ritmicamente
05:38 rossonero1899: eres musico? ;w;
05:38 DakeDekaane: originalmente eso era parte del combo anterior, pero la gente se iba a quejar de que era muy largo, por eso partí ese
05:38 rossonero1899: ahm
05:39 DakeDekaane: no tengo nada de musico, pero me gusta tener el menor numero de NCs posible o3o
05:39 rossonero1899: que me hace sentir inferior que yo no se nada de musica xD
05:40 rossonero1899: por que aca 01:05:410 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - son 6 circulos, osea entiendo los 3 finales
05:40 rossonero1899: pero los 3 primeros no seria mejor de otra forma?
05:41 DakeDekaane: en cuanto a objetos? no realmente
05:42 rossonero1899: hiba decir con un 1/2 repeated, pero no tendria sentido con lo que tienes anterior creo xd
05:44 rossonero1899: a todo esto por que el kiai no termina cuando el spinner termina?
05:44 DakeDekaane: =w=
05:44 DakeDekaane: si no se nota durant el juego no hace daño
05:46 rossonero1899: cambiaste el sv en insane?
05:46 rossonero1899: me parece mas rapido que la ultima vez xD
05:46 DakeDekaane: no, siempre ha sido 2.00
05:46 rossonero1899: ah mi imaginacion
05:46 rossonero1899: 00:22:252 (7) -
05:46 rossonero1899: que es eso?
05:46 DakeDekaane: un circulo
05:46 DakeDekaane: :D
05:47 rossonero1899: .-.
05:47 rossonero1899: uno bonito :D
05:47 rossonero1899: xD
05:47 DakeDekaane: no se que paso, lo arreglé ;w;
05:47 rossonero1899: 00:25:410 (5,1) - no lo quieres stackear?
05:48 DakeDekaane: nope
05:48 rossonero1899: xD
05:49 rossonero1899: la diff juega super bien
05:49 rossonero1899: hasta que llegé aca 00:56:989 (1) -
05:49 rossonero1899: :(
05:49 DakeDekaane: pero si es una estrellita <3
05:49 DakeDekaane: :(
05:50 DakeDekaane: todos aman las estrellas (?)
05:50 rossonero1899: pero la estrellita tiene overlap y mata mi combo :(
05:50 rossonero1899: xD
05:51 DakeDekaane: ya veré que dicen los demás
05:51 DakeDekaane: :(
05:51 DakeDekaane: es la primera queja que recibo
05:52 DakeDekaane: y eso que no es AR8 www
05:52 rossonero1899: es que me complica Personalmente por que empieza con un triple y luego empieza a saltar
05:52 rossonero1899: ahi te matan
05:52 rossonero1899: :c
05:52 rossonero1899: xD
05:53 rossonero1899: 01:23:481 (2) - como haces esas figuras simetricas?
05:53 rossonero1899: con pacienciay amor?
05:53 DakeDekaane: si
05:54 DakeDekaane: y con algo de sumas y restas si no quieres contar cuadrito por cuadrito
05:54 rossonero1899: oh, cierto igual .-.
05:55 rossonero1899: y eso era todo lo que tengo :c
05:55 rossonero1899: perdona mi nubiedad xD
05:55 DakeDekaane: bueno, gracias de igual manera, me ayudo en algunas partes :3
05:55 rossonero1899: enserio?
05:55 DakeDekaane: si quieres postear en el thread para tu kd, hazlo, lo mereces
05:55 rossonero1899: bueno xd

quiero ganar PPs pronto ;w;
DakeDekaane
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sheela901

sheela901 wrote:

Yo yo DakeDekaane. And Kibbleru and Dark Accelerator.This song is really popular...

Easy

  1. 00:11:726 (3) - It's not a major problem, but it's just a suggestion. Try to move the slider next to the previous object. /*I'd want to keep my blanketing ;w;
    SPOILER
    I thought it'll make a better circular flow so it'll be comfortable to play. Although, this will ruin the blanket pattern you made to (1) and (2).
  2. 00:18:919 (2) - I was thinking of a new combo on this note. The beat where this note is landed is the beat that changed a part of the music (starts at 00:18:919 to 00:30:147 - ). /*Done.
  3. 00:37:516 (4,5) - I suggest to remove these notes, and add a 2/1 slider: it starts at 00:37:165 and ends at 00:37:866 . If you skip the downbeat, it feels that there's a lot of emptiness there. I mean, the downbeats are the most important beats in songs, so you shouldn't skip them in easier difficulty in my opinion. So I suggest to add the slider, as it follow the vocals. /*Did something else here, but mapping the downbeat.
  4. 01:06:638 (4) - Add a new combo? The tone of the vocal is louder, so I thought it'll fit. It's the same as the slider on the start of the chorus: 00:55:410 (1) . /*It's still the same phrase in vocals, so I keep this

Normal

  1. 00:18:919 (2) - Same in Easy (about the new combo). /*Done.
No major problem in this difficulty.

Hard

  1. 00:18:919 (3) - Same in the two difficulty above this. The beat changed a part of the music. /*Done.
  2. 00:19:270 (4) - Nazi suggestion. Move the slider little more down-right. It's just a question of "beauty". /*Done.
  3. 00:30:147 (5) - Maybe a new combo, then remove it from 00:31:200 (1) . /*It's still the same phrase in vocals, so I keep this

Insane

  1. 00:30:147 (5) - Add a new combo, since it signify that there's a new beat that changed a part of the song. /*It's still the same phrase in vocals, so I keep this
  2. 01:00:849 (1,2) - In my taste, it's a bit ugly, because of the big distance you put to these notes. Try stacking them with 01:01:024 (3) -'s head so it'll be the same triplet pattern you did through the difficulty. /*Argh, did some big changes so de spacing isn't awkward ;w;

I hope this mod helps the map! Poke me in-game (or forum) if you guys have any questions. Good Luck on ranking this map! Here's a star for a little boost.
Thanks a lot for modding and the star :3

Gracias de nuevo rossonero :D
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Hay, from my modding queue

Uhm, so, you requested that I mod the GDs, and they both look great, so I'm sorry to not mod them, but take my 2 stars ><
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Bumpity bump.

BATs pls
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go dake o/
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Dark's Insane

Solo una pequeña sugerencia antes de considerar dar icono al mapa:

  1. 00:40:937 (3,4,5,1) - Esto la primera vez que lo jugué me pareció bastante forzado y difícil de leer, te recomiendo intentar algo diferente ya que a pesar de el patrón también contiene un poco de overmap.
Changes/Fixes

  1. Added (tv size ver.) in the title
  2. Fixed some patterns to increase the aesthetics and flow
  3. Added some NC patterns
  4. Fixed spacing/rhythm issues for the easiest difficulties
Nothing much to say, this mapset is almost ready to go.. call me back when you're done to apply the changes.

Log
2014-10-22 01:18 Gero: Pero que horrible mapa 
2014-10-22 01:18 Gero: ;w;
2014-10-22 01:18 DakeDekaane: :c
2014-10-22 01:18 DakeDekaane: ya se que me odias
2014-10-22 01:18 Gero: sabes que no :3
2014-10-22 01:18 Gero: quieres irc mod? xD
2014-10-22 01:18 Gero: asi me evitas postear
2014-10-22 01:19 DakeDekaane: pues ya que (?)
2014-10-22 01:19 Gero: seras mi primer circle'd 
2014-10-22 01:19 Gero: :3
2014-10-22 01:19 DakeDekaane: flojo
2014-10-22 01:19 DakeDekaane: aw
2014-10-22 01:20 Gero: let's start
2014-10-22 01:20 Gero: cambia la resolucion de tu BG ya que hasta donde tengo entendido yo esa dimension no es rankeable 
2014-10-22 01:21 Gero: 1366x768 seria lo ideal
2014-10-22 01:22 Gero: de acuerdo con los demas mapas y para ya no confundir la full version que ya esta rankeada seria mejor si cambiaras el titulo a Aoi Eir - IGNITE (TV size ver.), reglas son reglas dake
2014-10-22 01:22 Gero: :<
2014-10-22 01:22 DakeDekaane: pues ya que
2014-10-22 01:22 DakeDekaane: :<
2014-10-22 01:22 Gero: otra cosa, no añadiras video?
2014-10-22 01:22 DakeDekaane: lo del bg asi lo dejo, no es unrankable >_>
2014-10-22 01:22 Gero: seguro?
2014-10-22 01:23 DakeDekaane: y no, flojerita
2014-10-22 01:23 DakeDekaane: seguro
2014-10-22 01:23 Gero: donde dice eso? orz 
2014-10-22 01:23 Gero: bueno empecemos xD
2014-10-22 01:23 DakeDekaane: la regla dice que no debe de exceder 1366x768 nadamás
2014-10-22 01:23 Gero: oh vale, entonces esta bien 
2014-10-22 01:24 Gero: 00:04:884 (1,1) -  solo una pequeña sugerencia , ya se que agregaste el NC en el siguiente slider por el cambio de vocal pero no piensas que ambos son demasiado cortos? que opinas de eliminar el NC de 00:07:691 (1) - ?
2014-10-22 01:25 DakeDekaane: en la Easy?
2014-10-22 01:25 Gero: Si
2014-10-22 01:25 Gero: 00:18:217 (1,1) -  que tal volver ambos un slider? o3o
2014-10-22 01:26 Gero: 00:25:937 (4,2) - sere nazi por que si (?) pero apila el circulo en el final del slider correctamente
2014-10-22 01:26 DakeDekaane: el primer NC se queda, si no sería algo inconsistente con el kiai, y los dos circulitos se quedan asi, porque el slider no queda muy bien con la pausa en la música o3o
2014-10-22 01:27 Gero: 00:33:656 (4,1) -  spacing, este salto en una easy? por favor..
2014-10-22 01:28 DakeDekaane: oops
2014-10-22 01:29 Gero: 01:19:270 (3,4,5) - estos y 01:22:077 (3,4,5) - estos podrias volverlos un slider ya que muchos circulos en un lapso pequeño de tiempo podria ser un poco complicado no lo crees? ademas asi baja la dificultad de alguna manera
2014-10-22 01:30 Gero: 01:28:919 - no se, tal vez solo sea yo pero que opinas sobre terminar el kiai time aqui?
2014-10-22 01:30 DakeDekaane: pls, no se nota
2014-10-22 01:31 DakeDekaane: y lo de los circulos, dejame lo veo
2014-10-22 01:31 DakeDekaane: bueno, haré lo de los sliders
2014-10-22 01:32 Gero: eso es todo en la easy
2014-10-22 01:32 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/459485 Aoi Eir - IGNITE [Normal]]
2014-10-22 01:32 Gero: 00:10:498 (1,2) -  spacing pls
2014-10-22 01:33 DakeDekaane: son 0.05, no seas tan nazi conmigo :(
2014-10-22 01:33 Gero: Vale lo dejare pasar esta vez :( oye oye agrega un normal-sliderslide 
2014-10-22 01:33 Gero: suena bastante feito el tssssssss..
2014-10-22 01:34 DakeDekaane: okay
2014-10-22 01:34 DakeDekaane: de hecho lo estaba pensando agregar, pero la fatiga :3
2014-10-22 01:34 Gero: hay dios que hororr, que simetrico para mis ojos
2014-10-22 01:34 Gero: no no no unrankeable (?)
2014-10-22 01:34 DakeDekaane: HAHAHAHA
2014-10-22 01:34 Gero: 00:52:252 (4) -  seria nazi con este slider pero creo que si te dijera que la curva de este mismo esta muy fea no lo cambiarias verdad?
2014-10-22 01:35 DakeDekaane: depende, si me sugieres algo mejor
2014-10-22 01:35 Gero: no me digas eso que me pongo creativo (?)
2014-10-22 01:36 DakeDekaane: :3
2014-10-22 01:37 Gero: 01:00:849 -  que tal algo asi?
2014-10-22 01:38 Gero: una bonita curva en vez de estar cerrada?
2014-10-22 01:38 DakeDekaane: o3o
2014-10-22 01:39 Gero: eso es todo en la normal
2014-10-22 01:39 DakeDekaane: mejor pongo un spinner como en la easy (?)
2014-10-22 01:39 Gero: como gustes, cualquiera de las dos cosas funciona par ami
2014-10-22 01:39 Gero: para mi*
2014-10-22 01:40 DakeDekaane: okay
2014-10-22 01:41 Gero: ya que la mayoria del mapa es simetrico que opinas de hacer algo como esto http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2158940 con estos objetos 00:10:498 (1,2,3,4,5) - 
2014-10-22 01:41 Gero: siento que se ve mas ordenado
2014-10-22 01:42 Gero: (ignora la linea de arriba btw)
2014-10-22 01:43 Gero: 00:26:989 (2) - creo que olvidaste agregar un whistle aqui?
2014-10-22 01:43 DakeDekaane: no me gustan los stacks asi, pero intentaré hacer algo parecido
2014-10-22 01:43 Gero: vale
2014-10-22 01:43 DakeDekaane: nope
2014-10-22 01:43 DakeDekaane: esta bien sin el whistle
2014-10-22 01:43 Gero: 00:31:551 (3,5) - aplia ambos pls :<
2014-10-22 01:44 DakeDekaane: deberían quitar del BAT a Gero por ser tan nazi
2014-10-22 01:44 DakeDekaane: :(
2014-10-22 01:45 Gero: pues si quieres que tu mapa se quede asi de horrible :c
2014-10-22 01:45 Gero: 00:41:375 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -  que spacing usaste aqui? al testearlo me dio bastantes problemas, es un poco confuso 
2014-10-22 01:46 DakeDekaane: 1.5 -> 1.0 -> 1.5 y asi
2014-10-22 01:46 Gero: vale, dejalo 
2014-10-22 01:46 DakeDekaane: si quieres lo modifico un poco para que sea un poco más parejo, pero el cuadradito me gusta
2014-10-22 01:46 DakeDekaane: :<
2014-10-22 01:47 DakeDekaane: bueno, el molinito
2014-10-22 01:47 Gero: dejalo asi
2014-10-22 01:47 Gero: 00:52:252 (5) - ya que como cambiaste el slider en la normal, deberias de hacer lo mismo aqui (?)
2014-10-22 01:47 DakeDekaane: ay no
2014-10-22 01:47 Gero: ay si 
2014-10-22 01:47 DakeDekaane: ese si me gustó, el otro si de plano estaba feo
2014-10-22 01:48 Gero: yo diria ya que un slider es mas facil que un spinner xD y como que da cierta inconsistencia 
2014-10-22 01:48 Gero: pero bueno 
2014-10-22 01:49 Gero: 01:03:656 (1,2,3) -  remueve el stack manual, es el unico que usaste en todo el mapa 
2014-10-22 01:49 DakeDekaane: nah, Easy - Normal -> spinner, Hard - Insane - slider, se mantiene algo de consistencia, aunque no sea tan facil de notar =w=
2014-10-22 01:49 Gero: vale vale
2014-10-22 01:49 DakeDekaane: lo voy a arreglar porque no se que pasó con el spacing, pero si lo dejo normal, va a haber un overlap feo
2014-10-22 01:49 Gero: 01:06:463 (1) - este slider peligrosamente esta tocando la barra de HP 
2014-10-22 01:50 Gero: 01:14:358 (6) - CTRL + G para un mejor flujo?
2014-10-22 01:51 DakeDekaane: rompe mi spacing
2014-10-22 01:51 Gero: ash.. pesado :<
2014-10-22 01:52 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/456217 Aoi Eir - IGNITE [Kibbleru's Hard]]
2014-10-22 01:52 Gero: santo overmap..
2014-10-22 01:53 DakeDekaane: pero a la gente le gusta (?)
2014-10-22 01:53 Gero: esto creo que deberia de ser renombrado a Insane
2014-10-22 01:53 Gero: tiene bastantes triples y unos saltos que para hard no me convencen..
2014-10-22 01:54 Gero: en comparacion con tu hard esto es bastante dificil
2014-10-22 01:55 DakeDekaane: sep, por eso tuve que hacer mi Hard, para balancear el spread
2014-10-22 01:55 Gero: considera lo de renombrar la diff practicamente es solo eso xD
2014-10-22 01:55 Gero: casi 4 estrellas.. pls
2014-10-22 01:56 DakeDekaane: okay, ya le digo
2014-10-22 01:56 Gero: ah otra cosa, no usara algun spinner en la diff?
2014-10-22 01:56 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/483970 Aoi Eir - IGNITE [Insane]]
2014-10-22 01:56 Gero: 00:04:709 (6) -  NC ya que en comparacion a los demas este es mas largo
2014-10-22 01:57 DakeDekaane: okay
2014-10-22 01:57 Gero: 00:35:059 (4) -  un CTRL + G no estaria mal, que piensas?
2014-10-22 01:59 DakeDekaane: siento que el siguiente spacing sería algo confuso, pero dejame probar
2014-10-22 02:01 DakeDekaane: no se juega mal o3o
2014-10-22 02:02 Gero: dat copy paste
2014-10-22 02:02 Gero: xD
2014-10-22 02:03 DakeDekaane: pls
2014-10-22 02:04 Gero: sobre lo del spinner en la dificultad de kibbleru puedes ignorarlo ya que las dos Insanes no tienen 
2014-10-22 02:05 DakeDekaane: el mio si tiene
2014-10-22 02:05 DakeDekaane: :v
2014-10-22 02:05 Gero: ah cierto xD nvm then
2014-10-22 02:05 Gero: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/459484 Aoi Eir - IGNITE [Dark's Insane]]
2014-10-22 02:06 Gero: solo hay una cosa que me molesto al jugar la diff de dark
2014-10-22 02:06 Gero: 00:40:937 (3,4,5) -  esto me parece un poco dificil e incomodo
2014-10-22 02:06 Gero: me gustaria que consideraras la eliminacion de 3 
2014-10-22 02:06 Gero: o hacer un cambio ya que es bastante overmap 
2014-10-22 02:07 DakeDekaane: sep, eso dejaselos en el post (?)
2014-10-22 02:08 Gero: eso seria todo 
2014-10-22 02:08 Gero: :3
2014-10-22 02:09 DakeDekaane: bueno, entonces dejame ajusto bien algunas cosas y lo del titulo :<
DakeDekaane
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Thanks Gero <3

@Kibb: Gero also asked you to consider changing your diff name to Insane as it has jumps and a lots of triples.
Kibbleru
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hmm i can see what you're getting at, but imo i still mapped it as a hard so i would prefer it being called a hard.

my actual insanes are quite different than this q:
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sheela901 wrote:

Dark's Insane

  1. 00:11:726 (5) - Just a little thing. The blanket isn't perfectly wrapped to 00:11:200 (3) -'s head. I just want to point this out.
Fixed
That's what I can find. = w =.

Gero wrote:

Dark's Insane

Solo una pequeña sugerencia antes de considerar dar icono al mapa:

  1. 00:40:937 (3,4,5,1) - Esto la primera vez que lo jugué me pareció bastante forzado y difícil de leer, te recomiendo intentar algo diferente ya que a pesar de el patrón también contiene un poco de overmap.
Reduje un poco el ds para que no se vea tan complicado, no le veo mucho problema a este patrón y para mi fluye bien
Aparte aproveche para arreglar unas cosas nazis y feas

Ugly Insane
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Gero
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Standard difficulties are fine for me now ~

Circle'd ~
Stefan
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;A;

[Kantan]
Looks fine, the only thing which worries me is the density of the Kiai section. It got a lot more circles compared to the rest where I really don't know if it's necessary. But from now I leave this as good.

[Futsuu]
00:22:428 (6) - It doesn't feels well to play, the effect isn't really here to add a drumslider. Do add a note on 00:22:428 instead, the break phase is fine.
00:34:007 (23) - would consider to emphasize the vocal here and remove this note.
00:34:709 (25,26,27,28) - If you wanna have the 1/2 effect then you got to map o ooo at least and not ooo o, listen carefully at 00:35:235. We probably could leave the Hitsounds how they are now.
00:57:165 (5) - k sounds much better but it's uo to you.
01:08:393 (7) - ^
01:02:779 (18,19) - I find the twist suddenly to swap the hitsound rhythm very awkward, I think you get going by starting d k d k ... and then the swap is really weird. Highly considered to change back as k d.
01:14:007 (20,21) - ^

[Muzukashii]
00:22:428 (25) - Same like Futsuu.
00:41:200 (68,80,12) - On personal sight I think these notes plays like fillers. It's better to leave the notes on the big white ticks without a note behind at 1/2.
01:02:603 (23) - I find the usage of ddkkd not that efficient imo, the rhythm at 01:02:428 (22,23,24,25,26,27) - is basically the same like 01:01:024 (17,18,19,20,21) except this (23) note which isn't fitting in this pattern. I consider to remove this.
01:13:831 (61) - ^
01:05:410 (32) - Leaving a short break here would be a good thing.

[Oni]
00:02:077 - 00:11:726 - There is no difference between Muzukashii and Oni in this section. Try to make a clear difference here what Muzukashii and what Oni is.


Hmmm the set looks fine but I might catching another BAT to go through the set.
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Stefan wrote:

;A; /*;A;

[Kantan]
Looks fine, the only thing which worries me is the density of the Kiai section. It got a lot more circles compared to the rest where I really don't know if it's necessary. But from now I leave this as good. /*Considering the kiai is like the most intense part of the song yeah, I put more notes there because that

[Futsuu]
00:22:428 (6) - It doesn't feels well to play, the effect isn't really here to add a drumslider. Do add a note on 00:22:428 instead, the break phase is fine. /*Okay
00:34:007 (23) - would consider to emphasize the vocal here and remove this note. /*Okay
00:34:709 (25,26,27,28) - If you wanna have the 1/2 effect then you got to map o ooo at least and not ooo o, listen carefully at 00:35:235. We probably could leave the Hitsounds how they are now. /*But I already have o ooo, as the measure start is in 00:34:358.
00:57:165 (5) - k sounds much better but it's uo to you. 00:34:358 - /*Sounds cool, done
01:08:393 (7) - ^ /*Ditto
01:02:779 (18,19) - I find the twist suddenly to swap the hitsound rhythm very awkward, I think you get going by starting d k d k ... and then the swap is really weird. Highly considered to change back as k d. /*Yup, done
01:14:007 (20,21) - ^ /*Ditto

[Muzukashii]
00:22:428 (25) - Same like Futsuu. /*Ditto
00:41:200 (68,80,12) - On personal sight I think these notes plays like fillers. It's better to leave the notes on the big white ticks without a note behind at 1/2. /*I find a bit weird having a pause there as the guitar introducing to the next part too.
01:02:603 (23) - I find the usage of ddkkd not that efficient imo, the rhythm at 01:02:428 (22,23,24,25,26,27) - is basically the same like 01:01:024 (17,18,19,20,21) except this (23) note which isn't fitting in this pattern. I consider to remove this. /*Yeah, I agree here
01:13:831 (61) - ^ /*Ditto
01:05:410 (32) - Leaving a short break here would be a good thing. /*It'd feel a bit awkward as it'll be the only vocal note being skipped.

[Oni]
00:02:077 - 00:11:726 - There is no difference between Muzukashii and Oni in this section. Try to make a clear difference here what Muzukashii and what Oni is. /*I'd like to keep this part as I have the same pattern in Kantan/Futsuu and Muzukashii/Oni, I somehow try to keep some things linked between these pairs on my maps.


Hmmm the set looks fine but I might catching another BAT to go through the set.
Thanks for modding Stefan >w<
roufou
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Oni:
00:57:340 imo this pattern doesn't fit vocals, I rather go with o ooo than ooo o


no kd, it's a great map besides this, I just missed at this pattern which I really shouldn't at this kind of map, so in my opinion the flow could be better, also the other stream which is actually the same I'm okay with as it makes sense with the vocals, I think.
Nwolf
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I got called here, just some minor stuff in Oni

[Oni]

00:54:182 (185,186,187,188,189) - This doesn't sound right, it's kinda incomplete. Recommend to either change the last two notes to dons (tho the emphasis on the big don could be ruined) or, what I prefer more, delete the first three notes to avoid this incomplete sound, cause then there's just the two notes for the guitar instead of following vocals and the guitar in a weird way. Or delete all five notes.
01:19:884 (304,305) - vs. 01:22:603 (319,320,321) - Sounds the same to me, is mapped differently though.


Very good diffs!
Stefan
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If you have replied on agu and Nwolf's Mods I will recheck Oni and then we're done here. Kantan/Futsuu/Muzukashii got my OK.
DakeDekaane
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@agu: Changed that part in both sections as vocals are the same, nice suggestion.
@Nwolf: Deleted the notes before the kiai and changed the slider for a spinner. Made the last part the same, first pattern: odk -> ddk

Thanks :)
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Okay, that looks good to go. Bubbled!
qoot8123
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Hi o/ I have looked through the taiko set, i have an suggestion on Oni.

Oni :

00:58:217 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24) - this pattern is unique, but I think it could stop on 00:59:972 - instead 01:00:323 (24) - , because i found that the vocal and drum sounds are apparent, so i think you can try to remove the finish on 01:00:323 (24) - and then add d on 01:00:147 - , it not only fit the melody but also make a good consistency with 01:00:673 (25,26,27,28) -

01:11:200 (80,81) - same as above ^


Just a small suggestion tho, but i think this kind of pattern can make a different impact on 00:58:217 (18,19,20,21,22,23,24) -
DakeDekaane
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Well, I really want to keep that because the vocal rhythm ends in 01:00:323 - , tried putting the notes and plays a bit better for me as a kat, but didn't like how the vocals were interrupted ;w;

Thanks for checking though.
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geegee finally bubbled
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double post i polished this up a bit and removed alot of stupid whistles >_>

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Lanturn
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Lanturn
[General]
since you don't have a video, and there is a break on Easy through insane. You should enable letterboxing.

BG: 1228x768? -> http://puu.sh/dslpe.jpg | I tried to keep in as much boobs as I could ;)

There is a slight delay on your softclap.wav so I removed it: http://puu.sh/dslyF.wav | The delay was about 10ms? Your original file is: http://puu.sh/dslCa.wav if you need it back in the odd case I f'd something up lol.

You should have the red timing line at 00:02:077 - on all diffs. This makes all of the measures start correctly instead of one measure too early. If you listen with nightcore mod on, you'll understand what I mean when you hear the 'finish' crash sound playing in the wrong spots. This will probably make a lot of your green timing off by 1ms, and it'll need fixing. Be sure to resnap all your notes as well. (and I wanted to rank this too... )

00:13:130 (1,2) - on both GD's and Taiko diffs. This sounds a bit off. It might just be me though. The first note in particular feels like it should be later.

[Easy]
  1. 00:11:375 (2,3) - Maybe add a whistle to either (2) or the head of (3)? It feels a little bland without some kind of hitsound here. Preferably the head of (3) | Note that you whistled these in hard/insane but not in Easy/normal. Check these on all diffs and decide what you want to do for consistency.
  2. 00:35:761 (3) - This blanket is a bit off as well.
  3. 01:03:130 (4) - x308 y254 for a perfect square... no really!
  4. 01:06:638 (4,5,6) - First off. 01:06:638 (4,5) - has DS issues. Secondly. The (6) could be blanketed a little better. Although it makes the blanketing around (6) a bit worse, move the tail node to x360 y116 and the middle node to x231 y192 for symmetry. This also gets rid of the 1.16 DS error. If you don't like the final result, then try nudging it around a bit more. Just make sure to keep the DS.
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:761 (5,6) - Not perfectly stacked, even though it doesn't matter anyways. Might as well make it pretty though :3
  2. 00:43:305 (2,2) - As odd as this might sound. I found this much easier to play with these two notes deleted. It fits the 3/2 bounces you're doing here. Maybe consider deleting these two notes?
  3. 01:16:288 (4) - I love your sliders, but when I look at this one, I don't know what to say. It feels lifeless bluntly put. Maybe add something to pick up the guitar with a curve. http://puu.sh/dsc1W.jpg ? the guitar picks up right on the second bounce.
[Hard]
  1. 00:57:340 (3) - are you sure you don't want to skip the head and start on the dominant vocals? it kind of goes against your whole mapping style here. There really isn't any important sounds playing at 00:57:340 - anyways. It just doesn't feel like something you'd do honestly :P
  2. 01:03:656 (1,2,3) - These could be spaced a little better. I also suggest using a little more spacing. 0.25 to 0.30 looks nice.
[Insane]
  1. 00:49:270 (6) - ? I don't feel this note at all. Comparing it to the rest of the set. this feels much better deleted.
  2. 01:01:726 (4,5) - and 01:01:024 (3,7) - stack the tails? you can simply do this by control+G on each one seperately and moving them to the middle grid, and control+g back.
[Kibbleru's Hard]
We talked? Gonna check this after the update. It'll be renamed to hard+ because it's too hard for a hard.

[Dark's Insane]
  1. It's good. one thing I will kind of mention is: 00:40:673 (2,3,4,5) - sounds a bit strange since the snare-like hit seems to happen slightly before (4) and doesn't mix well with the hitsound. It makes this part odd to play.
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[Kantan]
  1. The only thing that slightly made me think was the short spinners, and then the short time after it, like 00:11:726 (1,1) - I'm assuming this is fine but it does feel like I had to rush for it. Not sure if it's a bit much or not.
[Oni]
00:41:375 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130) - Are you sure about these? I honestly don't see these as triples, only as 1/2 notes like Muzuakashii has them. I'm no oni player though, but just wanted to mention this.

All of the Taiko diffs feel / play great!

Call me back whenever you think everything is fine and I can rebubble. The main problems lie in the general part. I'm also assuming we're sticking with TV size ver. even though the website probably should hold more priority? -> "IGNITE (TV size)" I don't think it matters in the end, but I think we should start going with websites over CD covers like it's been suggested on the ranking criteria threads.
DakeDekaane
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Topic Starter
DakeDekaane

Lanturn wrote:

[General]
since you don't have a video, and there is a break on Easy through insane. You should enable letterboxing. /*I don't like how letterboxing loooks :(

BG: 1228x768? -> http://puu.sh/dslpe.jpg | I tried to keep in as much boobs as I could ;) /*Alright, thanks

There is a slight delay on your softclap.wav so I removed it: http://puu.sh/dslyF.wav | The delay was about 10ms? Your original file is: http://puu.sh/dslCa.wav if you need it back in the odd case I f'd something up lol. /*Going to slap Kibb

You should have the red timing line at 00:02:077 - on all diffs. This makes all of the measures start correctly instead of one measure too early. If you listen with nightcore mod on, you'll understand what I mean when you hear the 'finish' crash sound playing in the wrong spots. This will probably make a lot of your green timing off by 1ms, and it'll need fixing. Be sure to resnap all your notes as well. (and I wanted to rank this too... )

00:13:130 (1,2) - on both GD's and Taiko diffs. This sounds a bit off. It might just be me though. The first note in particular feels like it should be later. /*Moved the offset to 2081. I thought I was the only one thinking the offset was a bit off, so I didn't do it until now ;w;

[Easy]
  1. 00:11:375 (2,3) - Maybe add a whistle to either (2) or the head of (3)? It feels a little bland without some kind of hitsound here. Preferably the head of (3) | Note that you whistled these in hard/insane but not in Easy/normal. Check these on all diffs and decide what you want to do for consistency. /*Done.
  2. 00:35:761 (3) - This blanket is a bit off as well. /*Fixed a bit.
  3. 01:03:130 (4) - x308 y254 for a perfect square... no really! /*Done.
  4. 01:06:638 (4,5,6) - First off. 01:06:638 (4,5) - has DS issues. Secondly. The (6) could be blanketed a little better. Although it makes the blanketing around (6) a bit worse, move the tail node to x360 y116 and the middle node to x231 y192 for symmetry. This also gets rid of the 1.16 DS error. If you don't like the final result, then try nudging it around a bit more. Just make sure to keep the DS. /*Did something interesting here :P
[Normal]
  1. 00:25:761 (5,6) - Not perfectly stacked, even though it doesn't matter anyways. Might as well make it pretty though :3 /*Done.
  2. 00:43:305 (2,2) - As odd as this might sound. I found this much easier to play with these two notes deleted. It fits the 3/2 bounces you're doing here. Maybe consider deleting these two notes? /*Though it makes sense, I made the rhythm there as that for the viola and the transition part, respectively (also that'd break the nice symmetry)
  3. 01:16:288 (4) - I love your sliders, but when I look at this one, I don't know what to say. It feels lifeless bluntly put. Maybe add something to pick up the guitar with a curve. http://puu.sh/dsc1W.jpg ? the guitar picks up right on the second bounce. /*You caught me, going to use that because looks cool and I used some shapes there in Hard too.
[Hard]
  1. 00:57:340 (3) - are you sure you don't want to skip the head and start on the dominant vocals? it kind of goes against your whole mapping style here. There really isn't any important sounds playing at 00:57:340 - anyways. It just doesn't feel like something you'd do honestly :P /*Yeeeesssss
  2. 01:03:656 (1,2,3) - These could be spaced a little better. I also suggest using a little more spacing. 0.25 to 0.30 looks nice. /*Leaving that way, I'm looking for something stack-like
[Insane]
  1. 00:49:270 (6) - ? I don't feel this note at all. Comparing it to the rest of the set. this feels much better deleted. /*That note was there for the guitar, but you're right.
  2. 01:01:726 (4,5) - and 01:01:024 (3,7) - stack the tails? you can simply do this by control+G on each one seperately and moving them to the middle grid, and control+g back. /*Done.
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[Kantan]
  1. The only thing that slightly made me think was the short spinners, and then the short time after it, like 00:11:726 (1,1) - I'm assuming this is fine but it does feel like I had to rush for it. Not sure if it's a bit much or not. /*I think 2 beats are enough given the low OD.
[Oni]
00:41:375 (119,120,121,122,123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130) - Are you sure about these? I honestly don't see these as triples, only as 1/2 notes like Muzuakashii has them. I'm no oni player though, but just wanted to mention this. /*Yup, the triples there are to have some stress for the guitar, following the drums would leave it as a simple d d k d d k..., ddd k ddd k..., or similar, tried to do something not so common here :P.

All of the Taiko diffs feel / play great! /*Thanks :3

Call me back whenever you think everything is fine and I can rebubble. The main problems lie in the general part. I'm also assuming we're sticking with TV size ver. even though the website probably should hold more priority? -> "IGNITE (TV size)" I don't think it matters in the end, but I think we should start going with websites over CD covers like it's been suggested on the ranking criteria threads. /*Personally I'd go without any label, but seeing this is somehow enforced, I prefer to take whatever is printed.
Thanks a lot Lanturn, well, I guess I'll have to wait a bit more ;~;

@Kibb, Dark: Moved the timing points in your diffs. If you made any changes, send me the update as it is, I'll take care for the timing.
Edit: Kibb, looks like there's a reverse arrow hidden in this part 00:41:375 (if it isn't there then it is in the other similar), try to avoid it ;A;
Kibbleru
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Kibbleru
okay fixed reverse arrow stuff

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256,136,75410,2,0,P|252:92|240:60,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,24,75761,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,120,75937,2,0,L|56:132,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,212,76375,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,88,78744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
219,67,78919,2,0,P|185:53|148:50,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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260,156,80323,2,0,P|262:117|266:81,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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436,360,81551,1,2,0:0:0:0:
484,276,81726,2,0,P|486:231|480:192,1,75,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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176,120,82779,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,120,82866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,120,82954,2,0,P|179:83|198:51,1,75,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,24,83305,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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140,240,84007,2,0,L|146:203,2,37.5,2|8|8,0:0|0:3|0:3,0:0:0:0:
192,324,84358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,268,84533,2,0,P|311:269|368:276,1,75,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,296,84796,1,8,0:3:0:0:
392,296,84884,5,8,0:3:0:0:
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383,89,85235,2,0,P|377:129|376:164,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,204,85498,1,8,0:3:0:0:
348,204,85586,2,0,P|284:168|212:183,1,150,8|10,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,292,86638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,180,86814,6,0,P|184:175|232:172,1,75,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,236,87165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,360,87340,6,0,P|360:318|372:284,1,75,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,236,87691,1,8,0:3:0:0:
408,124,87866,5,8,0:3:0:0:
312,132,88042,1,8,0:3:0:0:
280,40,88217,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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