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Arash feat. Helena - Broken Angel (Kritikally Akklaimed Remi

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Kritikally

Smoothie wrote:

M4M~

[General]
Background should be 1024x768. Yours is currently 1023x767

[Kind of Sane]
CS6 → CS5
AR8 → AR7
(For a better diff spread)
COMPROMISED - CS 5.5, AR 7.5

00:04:729 - How about adding a note here with the soft sampleset and a finish? Would fit here quite well.
DONE
00:08:729 - I recommend adding a note here. The pause feels a bit weird imo.
DONE
00:10:729 (4,5) - Make these two notes one slider instead? Would make these two a bit nicer to hit 00:11:229 (5,6)
DONE
00:12:479 (7) - I'd remove this one and add a single note with a finish here instead: 00:12:729
DONE
00:14:979 (1,2,3,4) - I know you are following the beat in the background here... But I highly recommend you to move these notes to the white lines. They play kinda weird the way they are now. 00:16:729 - If you moved the notes I've mentioned above, add a note here with a soft finish.
DONE and DONE
00:18:729 (8) - Soft finish ~
DONE
00:26:479 (4,5) - Weird spacing.
FIXED
00:26:729 (5) - Make this one a repeating slider and remove this note here: 00:28:729 (1). Plays pretty well.
After that, add a new combo here: 00:29:229 (6)
I love that a lot more than I did the long slider, DONE.
00:34:729 (3) - Soft finish~
ADDED.
00:52:229 (7) - New combo
00:52:729 (11) - Finish
Both DONE.
01:00:729 (5) - Add a clap on the second repeat for consistency with the hitsounds.
01:01:729 (6) - ^
01:03:729 (3) - Missing clap on the slider end~
01:05:729 (1) - ^
01:08:729 (7) - Clap on the second repeat~
01:09:729 (8) - ^
Claps added. Placed a soft clap on the upbeat for those sliders -- enjoy the sound, fits leading to snare roll.
01:17:729 (3) - ^
01:20:729 (9) - Finish
Both DONE.
01:22:229 (4) - Missing clap on the slider start.
01:24:229 (8) - ^
01:25:729 (3) - Clap on the second repeat.
01:35:979 (4,5,1) - Plays a bit weird imo. How about this? 01:40:229 (4) - Missing clap on the start~
01:43:979 (1) - I don't think this spinner fits here. How about removing it and adding notes here 01:44:229 & 01:44:729 ?
Good idea! Added!
01:46:980 (1,2) - Looks nicer like this: Agreed.
01:48:980 (1,2) - Kinda the same as I mentioned above. Would look nicer if they were more symmetrically 01:50:980 (1,2) - ^
01:52:980 (1,2) - ^
01:54:980 (1,2) - ^
01:56:980 (1,2) - ^
Prettied up those sliders to be parallel with (1)

02:00:105 (10) - Add a new combo here and remove the new combo there 02:00:230 (1)
I must have overlooked that. ADDED.
02:12:229 (8) - Missing clap~
02:13:730 (3) - Missing clap on the second repeat. (I will not point the other missing claps out... I'm sure you will notice which ones are missing :))
^^ Checked ENTIRE beatmap for missing claps and ADDED.
02:40:230 (8) - New Combo
02:47:980 (4,5,1) - The same as I mentioned above. Plays a bit weird. Just do the same I mentioned ealier~ 02:58:979 (1,2) - Make these more symmetrically. (And the ones that follow~)
DONE.
03:12:104 (10) - Add a new combo here and remove the one there 03:12:229 (2)
Adjusted.

[Normal]
00:04:729 - Same as I mentioned on the other diff.
00:14:979 (1,2,3,4) - Same as I mentioned on the other diff. Placing them on the white lines will make them so much nicer to play.
00:18:729 (8) - Finish~
00:45:729 (3) - Missing clap on the slider end~
00:48:479 (6) - Move this one to 00:48:729 . It plays a bit odd the way it is now.
00:50:229 (2) - Add a clap here?~
All Done.
01:03:229 - How about adding a note here?
I thought of that while I was fixing the hitsounds, added :D
01:04:729 (3) - Extend this slider to 01:05:229
01:10:979 (1) - Finish?
01:24:479 (6) - Same as I mentioned here 00:48:479 (6)
All 3 done.
01:57:230 (5) - New combo~
01:59:605 (8) - A soft finish one the end sounds quite nice.
02:18:730 (4) - Clap on the slider end~
03:10:979 (1) - Finish~
All done

FIXED ALL HITSOUNDS

Lovely song~
Good luck!
Thanks, I put in a bit of work making the beat, appreciate the compliment, and thanks again for your modding help!!!
Gaia
IRC Mod 1 (From Kritikally)
2014-07-09 02:11 Gaia: Lool
2014-07-09 02:11 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: 00:06:729 (5,7) -
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: for example
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: when you can avoid u want to
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: overlapping
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: when you do it on purpose
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: i.e. slider bows
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: it looks good
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: but when it's random like this it doesn't look good
2014-07-09 02:14 Gaia: 00:13:229 - this gap is kinda eh
2014-07-09 02:15 Kritikally: gap as in distance spacing?
2014-07-09 02:15 Gaia: no
2014-07-09 02:15 Gaia: the rhythm
2014-07-09 02:15 Kritikally: oh
2014-07-09 02:15 Kritikally: I'm about done with this, then I'll look over everything
2014-07-09 02:15 Gaia: i understand u stopped cuz vocals
2014-07-09 02:15 Gaia: mm alright
2014-07-09 02:20 Kritikally: p/3225098#p3225098
2014-07-09 02:20 Kritikally: posted
2014-07-09 02:20 Gaia: saw it
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: resume ur irc?
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 02:21 Kritikally: kk
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: yeah err
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: so 00:13:979
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: 00:13:979 -
2014-07-09 02:22 Gaia: the way you restarted is kinda awks
2014-07-09 02:22 Gaia: 00:18:979 (1,1) -
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: spinner
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: i suggest shortening it or something
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: giving people 1/2 a beat to react might be not enough time
2014-07-09 02:23 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: 00:24:479 (4) -
2014-07-09 02:23 Kritikally: yeah, when I run it, that usually keeps me from SSing lol
2014-07-09 02:23 Kritikally: and about ~14s
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: move it to (280, 228)
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: to look better
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: lol.
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: I had it on the red ticks
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: but everyone complained that it wasn't on the white ticks
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: when I was following the strings and not the kicks lol
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: well yeah
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: generally
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: ur first combo should be on the white ticks
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: maybe I can move 2 over to the red
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: and make them sliders
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: covering an eighth note each
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: 2,3,4
2014-07-09 02:25 Gaia: eighth?
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: think that would play/feel less awkward
2014-07-09 02:25 Gaia: nononon
2014-07-09 02:25 Gaia: please
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: white to white is a quarter note
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: 1/1
2014-07-09 02:25 Gaia: yeah ik
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: but remember
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: this is hard
2014-07-09 02:26 Kritikally: true
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: you want to stay on
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: 1/4
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: for hard
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: for easy i'd stay on 1/1
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: very rarely 1/2
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: normal is 1/2
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: hard 1/4
2014-07-09 02:26 Kritikally: what do you suggest for the gap from 00:12:729 to 00:14:729?
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: insane 1/4 and maybe 1/8
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: i'd take it all out imo
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: lol.
2014-07-09 02:27 Kritikally: I suppose I can use 1/1s
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: but since u already have it
2014-07-09 02:27 Kritikally: ohh
2014-07-09 02:27 Kritikally: you mean completely remap it
2014-07-09 02:27 Kritikally: ugh
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: no
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: take
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: 00:14:729 (1,2,3,4) -
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: these out
2014-07-09 02:28 Kritikally: make it a break?
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: mhm
2014-07-09 02:28 Kritikally: nice
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: right
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: and
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: 00:22:479 (6) -
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: this is oddly placed
2014-07-09 02:30 Gaia: i'd blanket it with the (5) instead
2014-07-09 02:30 Kritikally: adjusted to be below, fixed rest and next combo to be within distance snap
2014-07-09 02:30 Gaia: wait show me
2014-07-09 02:30 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:30 Gaia: cuz honestly you could've just done this and not move anything else
2014-07-09 02:31 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3hM0/26ed60a7e6.jpg
2014-07-09 02:31 Kritikally: is there a quick way to link ss's?
2014-07-09 02:31 Gaia: you have puush dont you?
2014-07-09 02:31 Kritikally: I've been alt+ps, pasting into mspaint, cropping, saving, uploading to dropbox
2014-07-09 02:31 Kritikally: rofl
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: LOL
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: grabbing mspaint
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: err
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: puush
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: u know u can take ss with
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: had mspaint on the brain
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: osu
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: right?
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: yeah, but can't crop them
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: u dont have to
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: usually when I'm modding I'm forum modding
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: can't be pasting 1920x1090 pics to forums
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: oh
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: 1080~
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: lool
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: what a guy
2014-07-09 02:33 Kritikally: yeah, all that work just to help people out lol
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: lmao
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: such dedication
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: u get a thumbs up
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: and if ur guna dl puush
2014-07-09 02:33 Kritikally: I am now
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: im guna go grab a drink of water real quick
2014-07-09 02:33 Kritikally: kk
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: brb
2014-07-09 02:34 Kritikally: gonna take me 30s or so to set this acctu p
2014-07-09 02:35 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3hYs/360d47d7a9.jpg
2014-07-09 02:36 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3i14/5d986243be.jpg
2014-07-09 02:36 Kritikally: first is the change to the slider so it's not in crappy position
2014-07-09 02:36 Kritikally: second is the next combo moved to correspond with distance snap
2014-07-09 02:43 Gaia: hey sorry
2014-07-09 02:43 Gaia: that took a while lol
2014-07-09 02:43 Kritikally: np
2014-07-09 02:43 Kritikally: made a couple changes, subtly
2014-07-09 02:43 Kritikally: subtle
2014-07-09 02:43 Kritikally: gonna reupload
2014-07-09 02:43 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 02:44 Kritikally: stuck at distributing
2014-07-09 02:44 Kritikally: lol
2014-07-09 02:45 Gaia: really
2014-07-09 02:45 Gaia: aw
2014-07-09 02:45 Gaia: export?
2014-07-09 02:45 Gaia: or just give me the new files
2014-07-09 02:45 Kritikally: https://www.dropbox.com/s/yuihmnwhuffrq ... mix%29.osz
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: exported
2014-07-09 02:46 Gaia: u coulda just puushed this too lol
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: could I? haha
2014-07-09 02:46 Gaia: yup xD
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: ahh ctrl+shift+u
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: still new to puush
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: been using dropbox for years
2014-07-09 02:46 Gaia: xD
2014-07-09 02:47 Gaia: btw
2014-07-09 02:47 Gaia: 00:18:729 (9) -
2014-07-09 02:47 Gaia: some people like to do it
2014-07-09 02:47 Gaia: u can nc this for emphasis
2014-07-09 02:47 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:47 Kritikally: I'll make the combo to 10 and move the slider over
2014-07-09 02:47 Kritikally: err
2014-07-09 02:47 Kritikally: nc where 10 would be
2014-07-09 02:48 Gaia: 10?
2014-07-09 02:48 Gaia: no dont add any new notes
2014-07-09 02:48 Gaia: care not to overmap
2014-07-09 02:48 Gaia: careful*
2014-07-09 02:49 Kritikally: oh ok
2014-07-09 02:49 Gaia: 00:26:729 (5) -
2014-07-09 02:49 Gaia: i dont know about this slider
2014-07-09 02:49 Gaia: a lot of repeats is like a long ass slider
2014-07-09 02:49 Gaia: very boring
2014-07-09 02:50 Kritikally: will change, one second
2014-07-09 02:50 Gaia: 00:32:729 (7) -
2014-07-09 02:50 Gaia: move this to
2014-07-09 02:51 Gaia: (188,280)
2014-07-09 02:52 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:52 Gaia: 00:39:479 (7,8) - stack these ends together
2014-07-09 02:53 Gaia: 00:40:729 (1) - center perfectly
2014-07-09 02:53 Gaia: 00:48:729 (1) - ^
2014-07-09 02:53 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:53 Kritikally: all done
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: 00:52:229 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: move it to the center
2014-07-09 02:54 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: and make
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: 1
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: into where 2 was
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: ehh
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: like this
2014-07-09 02:55 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3iYl/8032773620.jpg
2014-07-09 02:55 Kritikally: kk, just rotate it ;)
2014-07-09 02:55 Gaia: or that lol.
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3j1G/d433513d0e.jpg
2014-07-09 02:56 Gaia: 00:55:729 (2,3,5) -
2014-07-09 02:56 Gaia: blanket?
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: define blanket here
2014-07-09 02:56 Gaia: (y)
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: oh, I get it
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: so 5's slider points are perfectly parallel
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: with 2 and 3
2014-07-09 02:56 Gaia: something like this i guess
2014-07-09 02:57 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3j5e/b70fbbff81.jpg
2014-07-09 02:57 Gaia: oops i circled 3 by accident
2014-07-09 02:57 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 02:57 Kritikally: okay, I get the idea
2014-07-09 02:57 Gaia: mm i guess if u make it parallel it works too
2014-07-09 02:58 Gaia: 00:58:479 (4,5) - curve this down more
2014-07-09 02:58 Gaia: to lead into the next note
2014-07-09 02:58 Gaia: + blanket
2014-07-09 02:59 Gaia: 01:02:729 (1,2) - line these 2 up
2014-07-09 02:59 Gaia: 01:02:729 (1,2) - and stack these 2
2014-07-09 02:59 Gaia: oops
2014-07-09 02:59 Gaia: 01:03:229 (2,4) - these 2
2014-07-09 03:00 Gaia: 01:06:729 (3) - (332, 96)
2014-07-09 03:01 Gaia: 01:18:729 (4,6) - dont over lap
2014-07-09 03:01 Gaia: just point the (6) down more
2014-07-09 03:02 Gaia: 01:24:729 (1) - (256, 192) for perfect center
2014-07-09 03:03 Kritikally: all done
2014-07-09 03:03 Gaia: 01:28:729 (10) - move left more to be a better looking triangle
2014-07-09 03:03 Gaia: oh but 01:26:729 (4) - fc here
2014-07-09 03:03 Gaia: kay
2014-07-09 03:03 Gaia: 01:36:229 (5,1) - blanket
2014-07-09 03:05 Gaia: line these 2 up 01:39:729 (2,5) -
2014-07-09 03:06 Kritikally: k, taken care of
2014-07-09 03:08 Gaia: 01:58:979 (7) - move this and the rest a bit higher
2014-07-09 03:08 Gaia: to match with01:58:729 (6) -
2014-07-09 03:08 Gaia: 02:00:729 (6) - NC if u want
2014-07-09 03:08 Gaia: bleh
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: i just realized
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: the ds in here 02:16:229 (8,9,10) -
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: and here 02:17:229 (1,2,3) -
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: are different
2014-07-09 03:09 Kritikally: oh shit, I'll fix that
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: there might be other places i just found this one
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: i mightve missed some before
2014-07-09 03:09 Kritikally: fixed, I'll go over the whole map with a fine tooth comb checking spacing
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: when we're done
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: ds
2014-07-09 03:10 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: what happened was
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: after my once over
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: I changed the ds from 0.7 to 0.8
2014-07-09 03:10 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: and didn't fix everything that aimod didn't pick up
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: (early in the modding)
2014-07-09 03:11 Kritikally: apparently nobody noticed it before you
2014-07-09 03:11 Kritikally: and this map is like 6-7 mods deep
2014-07-09 03:11 Kritikally: lol
2014-07-09 03:11 Gaia: lmao
2014-07-09 03:11 Gaia: yeee
2014-07-09 03:12 Gaia: 02:36:729 (1) - center perfectly
2014-07-09 03:12 Gaia: ur kiai is pretty well done
2014-07-09 03:13 Gaia: 02:40:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - just copy and past the last one lol
2014-07-09 03:13 Gaia: this one looks distorted :\
2014-07-09 03:13 Gaia: 02:54:229 (3) - put it somehwere else cuz it overlaps
2014-07-09 03:13 Kritikally: kk
2014-07-09 03:13 Gaia: 02:55:979 (1) - id remove this since its super short
2014-07-09 03:14 Gaia: and not enough room till next note
2014-07-09 03:14 Kritikally: 2:28 to 2:32, moved that whole combo around slightly (ds)
2014-07-09 03:14 Gaia: 03:12:729 (6) - nc mebe
2014-07-09 03:14 Kritikally: made it so (4) and (6) sliders are parallel
2014-07-09 03:15 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3jYQ/45679de3fd.jpg
2014-07-09 03:15 Gaia: dat recycling sign lel.
2014-07-09 03:15 Kritikally: will put 5 in the middle of the points lol
2014-07-09 03:15 Kritikally: ?
2014-07-09 03:15 Kritikally: which recycling sign?
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: no nothing lmao
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: was talking about ur reverse arrow
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: btw
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: 02:30:729 (4,6) - these 2 should match
2014-07-09 03:16 Kritikally: I fixed that already
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: o
2014-07-09 03:16 Kritikally: it was what I was just mentioning
2014-07-09 03:16 Kritikally: rofl
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: i couldnt really see in ur ss
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: my bad
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: >:
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: maybe its my eyes trolling me
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: past midnight
2014-07-09 03:18 Gaia: it looks wiggly to me i have no idea
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: well, I moved 5 in my ss too
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: to be evenly between 4 and 6
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: after the fact
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: so
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: what you were saying did make sense
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: even if I already did it ;)
2014-07-09 03:19 Gaia: doesnt look in between tho
2014-07-09 03:19 Gaia: in ur ss
2014-07-09 03:19 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3kdd/707b2acdb4.jpg
2014-07-09 03:19 Gaia: a little more to the left?
2014-07-09 03:20 Kritikally: I fixed it after the ss
2014-07-09 03:20 Kritikally: ;)
2014-07-09 03:20 Kritikally: it's perfect in the map
2014-07-09 03:20 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 03:20 Gaia: thats good
2014-07-09 03:20 Gaia: yeah the rest looks fine
2014-07-09 03:21 Gaia: i guess ill look at the normal
2014-07-09 03:23 Gaia: i suggest
2014-07-09 03:23 Gaia: CS 3 AR 4 OD 4 HP 4
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: SV can also be lowered
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: its 120 bpm so its not very fast
2014-07-09 03:24 Kritikally: ok
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: generally speaking
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: 00:06:729 (4,5) -
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: blankets like these can be done a lot better
2014-07-09 03:25 Gaia: 00:14:729 (1,2,3,4) - take out since u did in hard too
2014-07-09 03:25 Gaia: 00:16:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2014-07-09 03:25 Gaia: is too hard
2014-07-09 03:25 Gaia: for normal
2014-07-09 03:25 Kritikally: k, I can change that up
2014-07-09 03:25 Kritikally: one sec
2014-07-09 03:25 Kritikally: feel free to keep going
2014-07-09 03:26 Gaia: like
2014-07-09 03:26 Gaia: err
2014-07-09 03:26 Gaia: put some sliders in
2014-07-09 03:27 Gaia: like this for example http://puu.sh/a3kDt/5f4f940ae2.jpg
2014-07-09 03:27 Gaia: 00:27:729 (1,2,3) - better triangle
2014-07-09 03:28 Gaia: 00:30:479 (2) - up more
2014-07-09 03:28 Gaia: 00:33:729 (1) - overlaps
2014-07-09 03:30 Gaia: 00:54:729 (1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/a3kL7/71fb8eb964.jpg
2014-07-09 03:30 Gaia: oh and 00:52:979 (1) - remove
2014-07-09 03:31 Gaia: wait i didnt mean remove
2014-07-09 03:31 Gaia: i meant shorten by a little bit
2014-07-09 03:31 Gaia: 00:57:229 (4,1) - blanket
2014-07-09 03:32 Gaia: 00:56:729 (3) - 1/2 beat after, match with piano
2014-07-09 03:33 Gaia: and like this
2014-07-09 03:33 Gaia: 00:58:479 (2) -
2014-07-09 03:33 Gaia: + a few other more
2014-07-09 03:33 Gaia: put it on the downbeat it makes more sense rhythmically
2014-07-09 03:34 Kritikally: k, getting there
2014-07-09 03:34 Gaia: 01:04:479 (4,1) - these 2 can be prettier
2014-07-09 03:35 Gaia: 01:14:729 (4,5) - u can blanket better
2014-07-09 03:35 Gaia: 01:22:729 (4,5) - bad overlap
2014-07-09 03:35 Gaia: can look better as a triangle
2014-07-09 03:36 Gaia: 01:45:604 (3) -
2014-07-09 03:36 Gaia: blue ticks in normal
2014-07-09 03:36 Gaia: no
2014-07-09 03:37 Kritikally: where you said remove 52:971
2014-07-09 03:37 Kritikally: did you mean the slider?
2014-07-09 03:37 Kritikally: err spinner
2014-07-09 03:38 Gaia: yea
2014-07-09 03:38 Kritikally: oh, shorten
2014-07-09 03:38 Gaia: to fix blue ticks
2014-07-09 03:38 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3lbB/d2403e0611.jpg
2014-07-09 03:45 Gaia: lol damn
2014-07-09 03:45 Gaia: my comp crashed.
2014-07-09 03:46 Gaia: and I lost my chat log
2014-07-09 03:46 Gaia: can u save it and send it to me lol
2014-07-09 03:46 Kritikally: lol yeah
2014-07-09 03:46 Gaia: thanks lmao
2014-07-09 03:46 Kritikally: yw ♥
2014-07-09 03:46 Kritikally: I wholeheartedly appreciate all the time you're taking for me right now
2014-07-09 03:46 Gaia: lool npnp
2014-07-09 03:46 Kritikally: how do you like the beat, by the way? I made it myself in a couple of hours ;)
2014-07-09 03:47 Gaia: mm ive never heard the original version
2014-07-09 03:47 Gaia: cant really do a comparison aha
2014-07-09 03:47 Kritikally: nothing like it
2014-07-09 03:47 Gaia: nice song tho~
2014-07-09 03:47 Kritikally: thanks ♥

IRC Mod 2 From me
00:45 Gaia: lol damn
00:45 Gaia: my comp crashed.
00:45 Gaia: and I lost my chat log
00:46 Gaia: can u save it and send it to me lol
00:46 Kritikally: lol yeah
00:46 Gaia: thanks lmao
00:46 Kritikally: yw ♥
00:46 Kritikally: I wholeheartedly appreciate all the time you're taking for me right now
00:46 Gaia: lool npnp
00:46 Kritikally: how do you like the beat, by the way? I made it myself in a couple of hours ;)
00:47 Gaia: mm ive never heard the original version
00:47 Gaia: cant really do a comparison aha
00:47 Gaia: nice song tho~
00:47 Kritikally: nothing like it
00:47 Kritikally: thanks ♥
00:47 Gaia: tbh
00:47 Gaia: i saw the artist
00:47 Gaia: arash
00:47 Gaia: I was like whuuuuut.
00:48 Gaia: cuz I got a classmate named arash and he sings songs
00:48 Gaia: and uploads on utube and stuff
00:48 Kritikally: does he sing in farsi
00:48 Kritikally: like this guy?
00:48 Gaia: well this is a girl
00:48 Gaia: singing
00:48 Gaia: o-o
00:48 Kritikally: [https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/53008455/osuhelp/Gaia.txt your log of this irc mod]
00:48 Kritikally: there's a guy doing the verses
00:48 Gaia: ohh
00:48 Kritikally: the chick does the chorus
00:48 Gaia: yeah in the bg right
00:49 Kritikally: well, the guy's a tenor and the chick is alto
00:49 Gaia: but nah he raps
00:49 Kritikally: so their vocal ranges overlap
00:49 Gaia: lmao
00:50 Gaia: i cant imagine my friend singing this
00:50 Gaia: not one bit
00:50 Gaia: actualy...
00:50 Gaia: maybe.. LOL
00:51 Kritikally: how old is he?
00:51 Kritikally: and what is his vocal range like?
00:51 Kritikally: tenor like the guy in this song?
00:51 Gaia: 17
00:51 Gaia: and
00:52 Gaia: mm i think so yeah
00:52 Kritikally: nice
00:52 Gaia: but then again he usually raps so thats not really singing
00:52 Gaia: lol.
00:52 Kritikally: ahh
00:52 Kritikally: get him to sing his own hooks or something
00:52 Kritikally: ;)
00:53 Gaia: Loooool
00:53 Gaia: well I dont really know him that well
00:54 Gaia: oh derp
00:54 Gaia: back to modding lol.
00:54 Gaia: 02:21:229 (1) - overlap
00:54 Gaia: 02:32:229 (5,3) - ^
00:55 Gaia: 02:26:729 (4,5) - u can blanket
00:57 Gaia: 02:34:729 (4,5) -
00:57 Gaia: try this
00:58 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3m7Y/830e1f16f3.jpg
00:58 Gaia: and the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/a3m95/6aba379fa0.jpg
00:58 Gaia: i moved the circle up so u can see it in 1 picture
00:59 Gaia: 02:33:729 (3) - 02:35:729 (5) - if u do ^^ then stack the end of (3) with the end of (5)
00:59 Gaia: and for 02:37:229 (1) -
01:00 Gaia: you can use the same rhythm as the one right before it
01:02 Kritikally: ugh, because of the CS/AR change
01:02 Kritikally: the whole section from like 2:25 on is overlapping
01:02 Kritikally: I gotta redo it
01:02 Kritikally: but it's normal, so it should be easy ;)
01:02 Kritikally: just a matter of repositioning everything
01:03 Gaia: loool
01:03 Kritikally: then aligning and making it pretty
01:03 Gaia: just check ai mod
01:03 Gaia: if it approves then ur good
01:04 Gaia: 02:50:729 - these downbeats
01:05 Gaia: especially since they're the start of the measure
01:05 Gaia: you shouldn't ignore
01:05 Kritikally: k fixed that section, moving on
01:05 Gaia: lol
01:05 Gaia: where are you again
01:06 Gaia: i feel like im a whole minute aheaad of u or sth
01:07 Gaia: 02:53:229 (5,6) - blanket
01:07 Gaia: 02:57:604 (2) - these blue ticks again >:
01:07 Gaia: fix same way as i told u before
01:07 Gaia: plus
01:07 Gaia: 02:57:604 (2,4) - they're not parallel
01:08 Gaia: and so the rest is just same thing
01:08 Gaia: make parallel and fix rhythm
01:09 Gaia: im done
01:09 Gaia: ask if u have questions ill help u out
01:09 Gaia: in the mean time ill go utube original version lol
01:12 Kritikally: gahhh
01:12 Kritikally: I hate that you can't copy/paste in here
01:12 Kritikally: your chat, for example
01:12 Gaia: yeah u can
01:12 Gaia: oh
01:12 Gaia: lol
01:12 Kritikally: I mean, I can't copy a line of your chat
01:12 Kritikally: to spit back at you
01:12 Gaia: lmao
01:12 Gaia: just copy the notes
01:13 Kritikally: yeah
01:14 Kritikally: all I gotta do now is fix those sliders that are pseudo-triplets
01:14 Gaia: lol
01:14 Gaia: so ur good to go?
01:14 Kritikally: I think so, one sec
01:14 Kritikally: gotta decide how I wanna change these lol
01:15 Kritikally: oh, I got it
01:15 Gaia: i can give u some suggestions
01:15 Gaia: which part u looking at?
01:16 Kritikally: the section around 01:45:xxx
01:16 Kritikally: then it repeats after the last kiai
01:16 Gaia: i saw my ss right?
01:16 Gaia: u*
01:17 Kritikally: yeah
01:17 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3lbB/d2403e0611.jpg
01:17 Kritikally: this one?
01:18 Gaia: yup
01:21 Gaia: wat i did with it
01:21 Gaia: here
01:22 Gaia: ur DS was 0.8x right?
01:22 Kritikally: 0.6 on normal
01:22 Kritikally: 0.8 on hard
01:22 Gaia: oh right ok
01:22 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3nhQ/5ddb0ceb12.jpg
01:22 Gaia: since i cant show u in 1 big picture
01:22 Kritikally: I see what you mean
01:23 Kritikally: I ended up doing http://puu.sh/a3njm/530f18a721.jpg
01:23 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3njV/ab067bb469.jpg
01:23 Gaia: and so on
01:23 Gaia: well its just an example
01:23 Kritikally: okay, I think that's actually better
01:23 Gaia: lol
01:24 Kritikally: alternating from being parallel to perpendicular
01:24 Gaia: keep flow in mind
01:24 Kritikally: yeah
01:24 Kritikally: like, mine for the first set
01:24 Kritikally: then yours for the next
01:24 Kritikally: and so on
01:24 Kritikally: err yours first
01:24 Kritikally: you get what I'm trying to say, right?
01:24 Gaia: careful with the overlapping though
01:24 Gaia: but sure
01:24 Gaia: as long as it flows well
01:24 Gaia: i guess lol
01:24 Kritikally: yeah, I'm repositioning the entire section
01:24 Kritikally: so there's no overlap
01:25 Kritikally: and the rhythm stays
01:25 *Gaia thumbs up
01:25 Kritikally: shouldn't be any issues whatsoever
01:25 Kritikally: I learn incredibly fast
01:25 Kritikally: ;)
01:25 Gaia: btw
01:25 Kritikally: ♥
01:25 Gaia: 01:51:604 (5,1) -
01:25 Gaia: this is too big a jump
01:25 Gaia: i didnt touch this
01:25 Gaia: so yea
01:25 Kritikally: like I said, I'm gonna redo that entire section
01:26 Gaia: kays
01:26 Gaia: goodies
01:26 Kritikally: removing the triplet sliders
01:26 Kritikally: keeping everything in flow
01:26 Gaia: and err
01:26 Gaia: here
01:26 Gaia: 01:46:729 (1) -
01:26 Gaia: I'd nc this
01:26 Gaia: instead of
01:26 Gaia: 01:47:229 (2) -
01:26 Gaia: because beginning of the measure
01:26 Kritikally: I already deleted all of that as I'm fixing it
01:26 Kritikally: rofl
01:26 Gaia: lmao
01:26 Gaia: alright
01:26 Gaia: looks like ur good to go
Yeah cool remix lol really is nothing like the original
Good luck from now~
Topic Starter
Kritikally

Gaia wrote:

IRC Mod 1 (From Kritikally)
2014-07-09 02:11 Gaia: Lool
2014-07-09 02:11 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: 00:06:729 (5,7) -
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: for example
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: when you can avoid u want to
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: overlapping
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: when you do it on purpose
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: i.e. slider bows
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: it looks good
2014-07-09 02:12 Gaia: but when it's random like this it doesn't look good
2014-07-09 02:14 Gaia: 00:13:229 - this gap is kinda eh
2014-07-09 02:15 Kritikally: gap as in distance spacing?
2014-07-09 02:15 Gaia: no
2014-07-09 02:15 Gaia: the rhythm
2014-07-09 02:15 Kritikally: oh
2014-07-09 02:15 Kritikally: I'm about done with this, then I'll look over everything
2014-07-09 02:15 Gaia: i understand u stopped cuz vocals
2014-07-09 02:15 Gaia: mm alright
2014-07-09 02:20 Kritikally: p/3225098#p3225098
2014-07-09 02:20 Kritikally: posted
2014-07-09 02:20 Gaia: saw it
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: resume ur irc?
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 02:21 Kritikally: kk
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: yeah err
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: so 00:13:979
2014-07-09 02:21 Gaia: 00:13:979 -
2014-07-09 02:22 Gaia: the way you restarted is kinda awks
2014-07-09 02:22 Gaia: 00:18:979 (1,1) -
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: spinner
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: i suggest shortening it or something
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: giving people 1/2 a beat to react might be not enough time
2014-07-09 02:23 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: 00:24:479 (4) -
2014-07-09 02:23 Kritikally: yeah, when I run it, that usually keeps me from SSing lol
2014-07-09 02:23 Kritikally: and about ~14s
2014-07-09 02:23 Gaia: move it to (280, 228)
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: to look better
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: lol.
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: I had it on the red ticks
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: but everyone complained that it wasn't on the white ticks
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: when I was following the strings and not the kicks lol
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: well yeah
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: generally
2014-07-09 02:24 Gaia: ur first combo should be on the white ticks
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: maybe I can move 2 over to the red
2014-07-09 02:24 Kritikally: and make them sliders
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: covering an eighth note each
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: 2,3,4
2014-07-09 02:25 Gaia: eighth?
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: think that would play/feel less awkward
2014-07-09 02:25 Gaia: nononon
2014-07-09 02:25 Gaia: please
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: white to white is a quarter note
2014-07-09 02:25 Kritikally: 1/1
2014-07-09 02:25 Gaia: yeah ik
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: but remember
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: this is hard
2014-07-09 02:26 Kritikally: true
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: you want to stay on
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: 1/4
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: for hard
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: for easy i'd stay on 1/1
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: very rarely 1/2
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: normal is 1/2
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: hard 1/4
2014-07-09 02:26 Kritikally: what do you suggest for the gap from 00:12:729 to 00:14:729?
2014-07-09 02:26 Gaia: insane 1/4 and maybe 1/8
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: i'd take it all out imo
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: lol.
2014-07-09 02:27 Kritikally: I suppose I can use 1/1s
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: but since u already have it
2014-07-09 02:27 Kritikally: ohh
2014-07-09 02:27 Kritikally: you mean completely remap it
2014-07-09 02:27 Kritikally: ugh
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: no
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: take
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: 00:14:729 (1,2,3,4) -
2014-07-09 02:27 Gaia: these out
2014-07-09 02:28 Kritikally: make it a break?
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: mhm
2014-07-09 02:28 Kritikally: nice
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: right
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: and
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: 00:22:479 (6) -
2014-07-09 02:28 Gaia: this is oddly placed
2014-07-09 02:30 Gaia: i'd blanket it with the (5) instead
2014-07-09 02:30 Kritikally: adjusted to be below, fixed rest and next combo to be within distance snap
2014-07-09 02:30 Gaia: wait show me
2014-07-09 02:30 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:30 Gaia: cuz honestly you could've just done this and not move anything else
2014-07-09 02:31 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3hM0/26ed60a7e6.jpg
2014-07-09 02:31 Kritikally: is there a quick way to link ss's?
2014-07-09 02:31 Gaia: you have puush dont you?
2014-07-09 02:31 Kritikally: I've been alt+ps, pasting into mspaint, cropping, saving, uploading to dropbox
2014-07-09 02:31 Kritikally: rofl
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: LOL
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: grabbing mspaint
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: err
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: puush
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: u know u can take ss with
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: had mspaint on the brain
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: osu
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: right?
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: yeah, but can't crop them
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: u dont have to
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: usually when I'm modding I'm forum modding
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: can't be pasting 1920x1090 pics to forums
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: oh
2014-07-09 02:32 Kritikally: 1080~
2014-07-09 02:32 Gaia: lool
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: what a guy
2014-07-09 02:33 Kritikally: yeah, all that work just to help people out lol
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: lmao
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: such dedication
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: u get a thumbs up
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: and if ur guna dl puush
2014-07-09 02:33 Kritikally: I am now
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: im guna go grab a drink of water real quick
2014-07-09 02:33 Kritikally: kk
2014-07-09 02:33 Gaia: brb
2014-07-09 02:34 Kritikally: gonna take me 30s or so to set this acctu p
2014-07-09 02:35 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3hYs/360d47d7a9.jpg
2014-07-09 02:36 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3i14/5d986243be.jpg
2014-07-09 02:36 Kritikally: first is the change to the slider so it's not in crappy position
2014-07-09 02:36 Kritikally: second is the next combo moved to correspond with distance snap
2014-07-09 02:43 Gaia: hey sorry
2014-07-09 02:43 Gaia: that took a while lol
2014-07-09 02:43 Kritikally: np
2014-07-09 02:43 Kritikally: made a couple changes, subtly
2014-07-09 02:43 Kritikally: subtle
2014-07-09 02:43 Kritikally: gonna reupload
2014-07-09 02:43 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 02:44 Kritikally: stuck at distributing
2014-07-09 02:44 Kritikally: lol
2014-07-09 02:45 Gaia: really
2014-07-09 02:45 Gaia: aw
2014-07-09 02:45 Gaia: export?
2014-07-09 02:45 Gaia: or just give me the new files
2014-07-09 02:45 Kritikally: https://www.dropbox.com/s/yuihmnwhuffrq ... mix%29.osz
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: exported
2014-07-09 02:46 Gaia: u coulda just puushed this too lol
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: could I? haha
2014-07-09 02:46 Gaia: yup xD
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: ahh ctrl+shift+u
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: still new to puush
2014-07-09 02:46 Kritikally: been using dropbox for years
2014-07-09 02:46 Gaia: xD
2014-07-09 02:47 Gaia: btw
2014-07-09 02:47 Gaia: 00:18:729 (9) -
2014-07-09 02:47 Gaia: some people like to do it
2014-07-09 02:47 Gaia: u can nc this for emphasis
2014-07-09 02:47 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:47 Kritikally: I'll make the combo to 10 and move the slider over
2014-07-09 02:47 Kritikally: err
2014-07-09 02:47 Kritikally: nc where 10 would be
2014-07-09 02:48 Gaia: 10?
2014-07-09 02:48 Gaia: no dont add any new notes
2014-07-09 02:48 Gaia: care not to overmap
2014-07-09 02:48 Gaia: careful*
2014-07-09 02:49 Kritikally: oh ok
2014-07-09 02:49 Gaia: 00:26:729 (5) -
2014-07-09 02:49 Gaia: i dont know about this slider
2014-07-09 02:49 Gaia: a lot of repeats is like a long ass slider
2014-07-09 02:49 Gaia: very boring
2014-07-09 02:50 Kritikally: will change, one second
2014-07-09 02:50 Gaia: 00:32:729 (7) -
2014-07-09 02:50 Gaia: move this to
2014-07-09 02:51 Gaia: (188,280)
2014-07-09 02:52 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:52 Gaia: 00:39:479 (7,8) - stack these ends together
2014-07-09 02:53 Gaia: 00:40:729 (1) - center perfectly
2014-07-09 02:53 Gaia: 00:48:729 (1) - ^
2014-07-09 02:53 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:53 Kritikally: all done
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: 00:52:229 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: move it to the center
2014-07-09 02:54 Kritikally: k
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: and make
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: 1
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: into where 2 was
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: ehh
2014-07-09 02:54 Gaia: like this
2014-07-09 02:55 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3iYl/8032773620.jpg
2014-07-09 02:55 Kritikally: kk, just rotate it ;)
2014-07-09 02:55 Gaia: or that lol.
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3j1G/d433513d0e.jpg
2014-07-09 02:56 Gaia: 00:55:729 (2,3,5) -
2014-07-09 02:56 Gaia: blanket?
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: define blanket here
2014-07-09 02:56 Gaia: (y)
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: oh, I get it
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: so 5's slider points are perfectly parallel
2014-07-09 02:56 Kritikally: with 2 and 3
2014-07-09 02:56 Gaia: something like this i guess
2014-07-09 02:57 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3j5e/b70fbbff81.jpg
2014-07-09 02:57 Gaia: oops i circled 3 by accident
2014-07-09 02:57 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 02:57 Kritikally: okay, I get the idea
2014-07-09 02:57 Gaia: mm i guess if u make it parallel it works too
2014-07-09 02:58 Gaia: 00:58:479 (4,5) - curve this down more
2014-07-09 02:58 Gaia: to lead into the next note
2014-07-09 02:58 Gaia: + blanket
2014-07-09 02:59 Gaia: 01:02:729 (1,2) - line these 2 up
2014-07-09 02:59 Gaia: 01:02:729 (1,2) - and stack these 2
2014-07-09 02:59 Gaia: oops
2014-07-09 02:59 Gaia: 01:03:229 (2,4) - these 2
2014-07-09 03:00 Gaia: 01:06:729 (3) - (332, 96)
2014-07-09 03:01 Gaia: 01:18:729 (4,6) - dont over lap
2014-07-09 03:01 Gaia: just point the (6) down more
2014-07-09 03:02 Gaia: 01:24:729 (1) - (256, 192) for perfect center
2014-07-09 03:03 Kritikally: all done
2014-07-09 03:03 Gaia: 01:28:729 (10) - move left more to be a better looking triangle
2014-07-09 03:03 Gaia: oh but 01:26:729 (4) - fc here
2014-07-09 03:03 Gaia: kay
2014-07-09 03:03 Gaia: 01:36:229 (5,1) - blanket
2014-07-09 03:05 Gaia: line these 2 up 01:39:729 (2,5) -
2014-07-09 03:06 Kritikally: k, taken care of
2014-07-09 03:08 Gaia: 01:58:979 (7) - move this and the rest a bit higher
2014-07-09 03:08 Gaia: to match with01:58:729 (6) -
2014-07-09 03:08 Gaia: 02:00:729 (6) - NC if u want
2014-07-09 03:08 Gaia: bleh
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: i just realized
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: the ds in here 02:16:229 (8,9,10) -
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: and here 02:17:229 (1,2,3) -
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: are different
2014-07-09 03:09 Kritikally: oh shit, I'll fix that
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: there might be other places i just found this one
2014-07-09 03:09 Gaia: i mightve missed some before
2014-07-09 03:09 Kritikally: fixed, I'll go over the whole map with a fine tooth comb checking spacing
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: when we're done
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: ds
2014-07-09 03:10 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: what happened was
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: after my once over
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: I changed the ds from 0.7 to 0.8
2014-07-09 03:10 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: and didn't fix everything that aimod didn't pick up
2014-07-09 03:10 Kritikally: (early in the modding)
2014-07-09 03:11 Kritikally: apparently nobody noticed it before you
2014-07-09 03:11 Kritikally: and this map is like 6-7 mods deep
2014-07-09 03:11 Kritikally: lol
2014-07-09 03:11 Gaia: lmao
2014-07-09 03:11 Gaia: yeee
2014-07-09 03:12 Gaia: 02:36:729 (1) - center perfectly
2014-07-09 03:12 Gaia: ur kiai is pretty well done
2014-07-09 03:13 Gaia: 02:40:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - just copy and past the last one lol
2014-07-09 03:13 Gaia: this one looks distorted :\
2014-07-09 03:13 Gaia: 02:54:229 (3) - put it somehwere else cuz it overlaps
2014-07-09 03:13 Kritikally: kk
2014-07-09 03:13 Gaia: 02:55:979 (1) - id remove this since its super short
2014-07-09 03:14 Gaia: and not enough room till next note
2014-07-09 03:14 Kritikally: 2:28 to 2:32, moved that whole combo around slightly (ds)
2014-07-09 03:14 Gaia: 03:12:729 (6) - nc mebe
2014-07-09 03:14 Kritikally: made it so (4) and (6) sliders are parallel
2014-07-09 03:15 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3jYQ/45679de3fd.jpg
2014-07-09 03:15 Gaia: dat recycling sign lel.
2014-07-09 03:15 Kritikally: will put 5 in the middle of the points lol
2014-07-09 03:15 Kritikally: ?
2014-07-09 03:15 Kritikally: which recycling sign?
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: no nothing lmao
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: was talking about ur reverse arrow
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: btw
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: 02:30:729 (4,6) - these 2 should match
2014-07-09 03:16 Kritikally: I fixed that already
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: o
2014-07-09 03:16 Kritikally: it was what I was just mentioning
2014-07-09 03:16 Kritikally: rofl
2014-07-09 03:16 Gaia: lol
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: i couldnt really see in ur ss
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: my bad
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: >:
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: maybe its my eyes trolling me
2014-07-09 03:17 Gaia: past midnight
2014-07-09 03:18 Gaia: it looks wiggly to me i have no idea
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: well, I moved 5 in my ss too
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: to be evenly between 4 and 6
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: after the fact
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: so
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: what you were saying did make sense
2014-07-09 03:18 Kritikally: even if I already did it ;)
2014-07-09 03:19 Gaia: doesnt look in between tho
2014-07-09 03:19 Gaia: in ur ss
2014-07-09 03:19 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3kdd/707b2acdb4.jpg
2014-07-09 03:19 Gaia: a little more to the left?
2014-07-09 03:20 Kritikally: I fixed it after the ss
2014-07-09 03:20 Kritikally: ;)
2014-07-09 03:20 Kritikally: it's perfect in the map
2014-07-09 03:20 Gaia: alright
2014-07-09 03:20 Gaia: thats good
2014-07-09 03:20 Gaia: yeah the rest looks fine
2014-07-09 03:21 Gaia: i guess ill look at the normal
2014-07-09 03:23 Gaia: i suggest
2014-07-09 03:23 Gaia: CS 3 AR 4 OD 4 HP 4
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: SV can also be lowered
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: its 120 bpm so its not very fast
2014-07-09 03:24 Kritikally: ok
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: generally speaking
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: 00:06:729 (4,5) -
2014-07-09 03:24 Gaia: blankets like these can be done a lot better
2014-07-09 03:25 Gaia: 00:14:729 (1,2,3,4) - take out since u did in hard too
2014-07-09 03:25 Gaia: 00:16:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
2014-07-09 03:25 Gaia: is too hard
2014-07-09 03:25 Gaia: for normal
2014-07-09 03:25 Kritikally: k, I can change that up
2014-07-09 03:25 Kritikally: one sec
2014-07-09 03:25 Kritikally: feel free to keep going
2014-07-09 03:26 Gaia: like
2014-07-09 03:26 Gaia: err
2014-07-09 03:26 Gaia: put some sliders in
2014-07-09 03:27 Gaia: like this for example http://puu.sh/a3kDt/5f4f940ae2.jpg
2014-07-09 03:27 Gaia: 00:27:729 (1,2,3) - better triangle
2014-07-09 03:28 Gaia: 00:30:479 (2) - up more
2014-07-09 03:28 Gaia: 00:33:729 (1) - overlaps
2014-07-09 03:30 Gaia: 00:54:729 (1,2) - try this http://puu.sh/a3kL7/71fb8eb964.jpg
2014-07-09 03:30 Gaia: oh and 00:52:979 (1) - remove
2014-07-09 03:31 Gaia: wait i didnt mean remove
2014-07-09 03:31 Gaia: i meant shorten by a little bit
2014-07-09 03:31 Gaia: 00:57:229 (4,1) - blanket
2014-07-09 03:32 Gaia: 00:56:729 (3) - 1/2 beat after, match with piano
2014-07-09 03:33 Gaia: and like this
2014-07-09 03:33 Gaia: 00:58:479 (2) -
2014-07-09 03:33 Gaia: + a few other more
2014-07-09 03:33 Gaia: put it on the downbeat it makes more sense rhythmically
2014-07-09 03:34 Kritikally: k, getting there
2014-07-09 03:34 Gaia: 01:04:479 (4,1) - these 2 can be prettier
2014-07-09 03:35 Gaia: 01:14:729 (4,5) - u can blanket better
2014-07-09 03:35 Gaia: 01:22:729 (4,5) - bad overlap
2014-07-09 03:35 Gaia: can look better as a triangle
2014-07-09 03:36 Gaia: 01:45:604 (3) -
2014-07-09 03:36 Gaia: blue ticks in normal
2014-07-09 03:36 Gaia: no
2014-07-09 03:37 Kritikally: where you said remove 52:971
2014-07-09 03:37 Kritikally: did you mean the slider?
2014-07-09 03:37 Kritikally: err spinner
2014-07-09 03:38 Gaia: yea
2014-07-09 03:38 Kritikally: oh, shorten
2014-07-09 03:38 Gaia: to fix blue ticks
2014-07-09 03:38 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3lbB/d2403e0611.jpg
2014-07-09 03:45 Gaia: lol damn
2014-07-09 03:45 Gaia: my comp crashed.
2014-07-09 03:46 Gaia: and I lost my chat log
2014-07-09 03:46 Gaia: can u save it and send it to me lol
2014-07-09 03:46 Kritikally: lol yeah
2014-07-09 03:46 Gaia: thanks lmao
2014-07-09 03:46 Kritikally: yw ♥
2014-07-09 03:46 Kritikally: I wholeheartedly appreciate all the time you're taking for me right now
2014-07-09 03:46 Gaia: lool npnp
2014-07-09 03:46 Kritikally: how do you like the beat, by the way? I made it myself in a couple of hours ;)
2014-07-09 03:47 Gaia: mm ive never heard the original version
2014-07-09 03:47 Gaia: cant really do a comparison aha
2014-07-09 03:47 Kritikally: nothing like it
2014-07-09 03:47 Gaia: nice song tho~
2014-07-09 03:47 Kritikally: thanks ♥

IRC Mod 2 From me
00:45 Gaia: lol damn
00:45 Gaia: my comp crashed.
00:45 Gaia: and I lost my chat log
00:46 Gaia: can u save it and send it to me lol
00:46 Kritikally: lol yeah
00:46 Gaia: thanks lmao
00:46 Kritikally: yw ♥
00:46 Kritikally: I wholeheartedly appreciate all the time you're taking for me right now
00:46 Gaia: lool npnp
00:46 Kritikally: how do you like the beat, by the way? I made it myself in a couple of hours ;)
00:47 Gaia: mm ive never heard the original version
00:47 Gaia: cant really do a comparison aha
00:47 Gaia: nice song tho~
00:47 Kritikally: nothing like it
00:47 Kritikally: thanks ♥
00:47 Gaia: tbh
00:47 Gaia: i saw the artist
00:47 Gaia: arash
00:47 Gaia: I was like whuuuuut.
00:48 Gaia: cuz I got a classmate named arash and he sings songs
00:48 Gaia: and uploads on utube and stuff
00:48 Kritikally: does he sing in farsi
00:48 Kritikally: like this guy?
00:48 Gaia: well this is a girl
00:48 Gaia: singing
00:48 Gaia: o-o
00:48 Kritikally: [https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/53008455/osuhelp/Gaia.txt your log of this irc mod]
00:48 Kritikally: there's a guy doing the verses
00:48 Gaia: ohh
00:48 Kritikally: the chick does the chorus
00:48 Gaia: yeah in the bg right
00:49 Kritikally: well, the guy's a tenor and the chick is alto
00:49 Gaia: but nah he raps
00:49 Kritikally: so their vocal ranges overlap
00:49 Gaia: lmao
00:50 Gaia: i cant imagine my friend singing this
00:50 Gaia: not one bit
00:50 Gaia: actualy...
00:50 Gaia: maybe.. LOL
00:51 Kritikally: how old is he?
00:51 Kritikally: and what is his vocal range like?
00:51 Kritikally: tenor like the guy in this song?
00:51 Gaia: 17
00:51 Gaia: and
00:52 Gaia: mm i think so yeah
00:52 Kritikally: nice
00:52 Gaia: but then again he usually raps so thats not really singing
00:52 Gaia: lol.
00:52 Kritikally: ahh
00:52 Kritikally: get him to sing his own hooks or something
00:52 Kritikally: ;)
00:53 Gaia: Loooool
00:53 Gaia: well I dont really know him that well
00:54 Gaia: oh derp
00:54 Gaia: back to modding lol.
00:54 Gaia: 02:21:229 (1) - overlap
00:54 Gaia: 02:32:229 (5,3) - ^
00:55 Gaia: 02:26:729 (4,5) - u can blanket
00:57 Gaia: 02:34:729 (4,5) -
00:57 Gaia: try this
00:58 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3m7Y/830e1f16f3.jpg
00:58 Gaia: and the rhythm like this http://puu.sh/a3m95/6aba379fa0.jpg
00:58 Gaia: i moved the circle up so u can see it in 1 picture
00:59 Gaia: 02:33:729 (3) - 02:35:729 (5) - if u do ^^ then stack the end of (3) with the end of (5)
00:59 Gaia: and for 02:37:229 (1) -
01:00 Gaia: you can use the same rhythm as the one right before it
01:02 Kritikally: ugh, because of the CS/AR change
01:02 Kritikally: the whole section from like 2:25 on is overlapping
01:02 Kritikally: I gotta redo it
01:02 Kritikally: but it's normal, so it should be easy ;)
01:02 Kritikally: just a matter of repositioning everything
01:03 Gaia: loool
01:03 Kritikally: then aligning and making it pretty
01:03 Gaia: just check ai mod
01:03 Gaia: if it approves then ur good
01:04 Gaia: 02:50:729 - these downbeats
01:05 Gaia: especially since they're the start of the measure
01:05 Gaia: you shouldn't ignore
01:05 Kritikally: k fixed that section, moving on
01:05 Gaia: lol
01:05 Gaia: where are you again
01:06 Gaia: i feel like im a whole minute aheaad of u or sth
01:07 Gaia: 02:53:229 (5,6) - blanket
01:07 Gaia: 02:57:604 (2) - these blue ticks again >:
01:07 Gaia: fix same way as i told u before
01:07 Gaia: plus
01:07 Gaia: 02:57:604 (2,4) - they're not parallel
01:08 Gaia: and so the rest is just same thing
01:08 Gaia: make parallel and fix rhythm
01:09 Gaia: im done
01:09 Gaia: ask if u have questions ill help u out
01:09 Gaia: in the mean time ill go utube original version lol
01:12 Kritikally: gahhh
01:12 Kritikally: I hate that you can't copy/paste in here
01:12 Kritikally: your chat, for example
01:12 Gaia: yeah u can
01:12 Gaia: oh
01:12 Gaia: lol
01:12 Kritikally: I mean, I can't copy a line of your chat
01:12 Kritikally: to spit back at you
01:12 Gaia: lmao
01:12 Gaia: just copy the notes
01:13 Kritikally: yeah
01:14 Kritikally: all I gotta do now is fix those sliders that are pseudo-triplets
01:14 Gaia: lol
01:14 Gaia: so ur good to go?
01:14 Kritikally: I think so, one sec
01:14 Kritikally: gotta decide how I wanna change these lol
01:15 Kritikally: oh, I got it
01:15 Gaia: i can give u some suggestions
01:15 Gaia: which part u looking at?
01:16 Kritikally: the section around 01:45:xxx
01:16 Kritikally: then it repeats after the last kiai
01:16 Gaia: i saw my ss right?
01:16 Gaia: u*
01:17 Kritikally: yeah
01:17 Kritikally: http://puu.sh/a3lbB/d2403e0611.jpg
01:17 Kritikally: this one?
01:18 Gaia: yup
01:21 Gaia: wat i did with it
01:21 Gaia: here
01:22 Gaia: ur DS was 0.8x right?
01:22 Kritikally: 0.6 on normal
01:22 Kritikally: 0.8 on hard
01:22 Gaia: oh right ok
01:22 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3nhQ/5ddb0ceb12.jpg
01:22 Gaia: since i cant show u in 1 big picture
01:22 Kritikally: I see what you mean
01:23 Kritikally: I ended up doing http://puu.sh/a3njm/530f18a721.jpg
01:23 Gaia: http://puu.sh/a3njV/ab067bb469.jpg
01:23 Gaia: and so on
01:23 Gaia: well its just an example
01:23 Kritikally: okay, I think that's actually better
01:23 Gaia: lol
01:24 Kritikally: alternating from being parallel to perpendicular
01:24 Gaia: keep flow in mind
01:24 Kritikally: yeah
01:24 Kritikally: like, mine for the first set
01:24 Kritikally: then yours for the next
01:24 Kritikally: and so on
01:24 Kritikally: err yours first
01:24 Kritikally: you get what I'm trying to say, right?
01:24 Gaia: careful with the overlapping though
01:24 Gaia: but sure
01:24 Gaia: as long as it flows well
01:24 Gaia: i guess lol
01:24 Kritikally: yeah, I'm repositioning the entire section
01:24 Kritikally: so there's no overlap
01:25 Kritikally: and the rhythm stays
01:25 *Gaia thumbs up
01:25 Kritikally: shouldn't be any issues whatsoever
01:25 Kritikally: I learn incredibly fast
01:25 Kritikally: ;)
01:25 Gaia: btw
01:25 Kritikally: ♥
01:25 Gaia: 01:51:604 (5,1) -
01:25 Gaia: this is too big a jump
01:25 Gaia: i didnt touch this
01:25 Gaia: so yea
01:25 Kritikally: like I said, I'm gonna redo that entire section
01:26 Gaia: kays
01:26 Gaia: goodies
01:26 Kritikally: removing the triplet sliders
01:26 Kritikally: keeping everything in flow
01:26 Gaia: and err
01:26 Gaia: here
01:26 Gaia: 01:46:729 (1) -
01:26 Gaia: I'd nc this
01:26 Gaia: instead of
01:26 Gaia: 01:47:229 (2) -
01:26 Gaia: because beginning of the measure
01:26 Kritikally: I already deleted all of that as I'm fixing it
01:26 Kritikally: rofl
01:26 Gaia: lmao
01:26 Gaia: alright
01:26 Gaia: looks like ur good to go
Yeah cool remix lol really is nothing like the original
Good luck from now~
Made most suggested changes and reworked the interlude section to remove difficult repeat sliders for Normal.

If most modders were like you, the quality of pending maps would be astronomically better than it currently is. I literally cannot thank you enough for your boundless assistance tonight. Much ♥!
Topic Starter
Kritikally
Went in by hand and manually checked every single event's DS (within 0.04-0.05x for aesthetic purposes), hitsounds, and prettied up fugly sliders.
[-Sophie-]_old
From my moe queue!
[Hard]
00:26:729 - The design of this slider makes the flow sound awkward, maybe changing design will help?
01:00:729 (5) - Collab with 01:01:729 (6) to make it flow easier
01:02:979 - Kiai time right here
01:08:729 (7) - 01:09:729 (8) - Same as 01:00:729 (5)
02:47:479 (4) - Add a note here. Sounds better
02:55:979 - Spinner is too small.
m4m : p/3219520. Thanks!
Topic Starter
Kritikally

[-Sophie-] wrote:

[Hard]
00:26:729 - The design of this slider makes the flow sound awkward, maybe changing design will help?
Changed to a smaller repeat slider.

01:00:729 (5) - Collab with 01:01:729 (6) to make it flow easier
Done.

01:02:979 - Kiai time right here
There's a lot of Kiai time already on the map (3 chorus totaling 33 bars (9+8+16)). While it does make sense to place Kiai time in that section (as it's considerably stronger), that would be another 5 bars of Kiai time on an already Kiai-intensive map. I will consider it though.

01:08:729 (7) - 01:09:729 (8) - Same as 01:00:729 (5)
Made same adjustment as before.

02:47:479 (4) - Add a note here. Sounds better
Done.

02:55:979 - Spinner is too small.
Removed spinner and added quarter notes instead to lead into complex section.
Thanks for the assistance, I'll return the favor now ♥
PEPOTTI
[General]
You should more pay attention to put notes same distance.
I think you overuse the turn.



[Normal]
00:16:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - little difficult. I recommend to replace circles only with sliders + circles.
02:00:229 (3,1) - move notes as follows

02:50:229 (2) - move notes as follows




[Hard]
00:07:479 (7,1) - move notes as follows

00:26:729 (5) - You should decrease the number of the turn to 2, and put notes
01:00:729 (5) - ^
01:08:729 (7) - ^
01:41:729 (2,3) - move notes as follows

01:45:479 (3) - detach note from one before note
01:47:479 (3) - ^
01:49:479 (3) - ^
01:51:479 (3) - ^
01:53:479 (3) - ^
01:55:479 (3) - ^
01:57:479 (3) - ^
01:59:479 (3) - ^
02:53:729 (2,3) - ^
02:56:979 (1,2) - ^
02:59:479 (2) - ^
03:01:479 (2) - ^
03:03:479 (2) - ^
03:05:479 (2) - ^
03:07:479 (2) - ^
03:09:479 (2) - ^

^ means same as above



good luck~
Topic Starter
Kritikally

PEPOTTI wrote:

[General]
You should more pay attention to put notes same distance.
Distance spacing is NOT an issue. Manually checked both difficulties.
I think you overuse the turn.
It fits better for the tail end of 8-bar snare rolls.



[Normal]
00:16:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - little difficult. I recommend to replace circles only with sliders + circles.
Done.
02:00:229 (3,1) - move notes as follows

02:50:229 (2) - move notes as follows

Both done.



[Hard]
00:07:479 (7,1) - move notes as follows

Done.
00:26:729 (5) - You should decrease the number of the turn to 2, and put notes
Done.
01:00:729 (5) - ^
Done.
01:08:729 (7) - ^
Changed to circle and extended spinner to cover gap.
01:41:729 (2,3) - move notes as follows

Done.
01:45:479 (3) - detach note from one before note
01:47:479 (3) - ^
01:49:479 (3) - ^
01:51:479 (3) - ^
01:53:479 (3) - ^
01:55:479 (3) - ^
01:57:479 (3) - ^
01:59:479 (3) - ^
02:53:729 (2,3) - ^
02:56:979 (1,2) - ^
02:59:479 (2) - ^
03:01:479 (2) - ^
03:03:479 (2) - ^
03:05:479 (2) - ^
03:07:479 (2) - ^
03:09:479 (2) - ^
I personally like those sliders the way that they are. If I get more negative feedback on them, I'll consider it.

^ means same as above



good luck~
kakifly
Normal

HP drain can be lowered just a bit
00:10:729 (4) - the flow and arrangement can be really improved here, for example try something like this (00:11:729 (5) - can start on the white tick& end on a white tick)

00:16:729 (1,2,3,4) - kind of hard for normal considering your SV ?
00:21:729 (2) - instead of having this [img]00:21:729%20(2)%20-[/img] you can make it easier by shaping the slider like this?
00:23:729 (3) - ^
00:25:729 (1) - ^
00:39:229 (5) - improved the flow here http://puu.sh/a5v0x/ca30f28c36.jpg try this
01:08:729 (6) - try not having something like this for normal
01:16:229 (6) - fix flow
01:15:229 (5) - fix blanket : do this
( see its blanketed around the approach circle of 4 circle)
ill stop mentioning flow and blankets >w<

btw, NC's should usually start on the largest white tick, and its best if you DO NOT end a slider on them (its ok sometimes though i think) :3

01:22:729 (4,5,6,1) - the arrangement is pretty bad with these notes >.< OTL
01:25:229 (1) - so many repeats qwq in my opinion i dont like sliders with more than 1 repeat

blanketing needs some work, if you need help you can read this guide on neat sliders t/208596

maybe you could add hitsounds on some notes owo

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Hard

Circle size is a bit small, move it to 4
not gonna mention neat sliders, flow ( the word kind of explains itselfs) or NC's since i mentioned them above
00:52:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - i wouldnt recommend a stream arranged into a circle qwq
02:40:229 (1) - ^


overall your rhythm is pretty good, except i still dont prefer so many repeats on a slider, but thats why my opinion *-*


Hope that helped and goodluck with your beatmap ~ :3
sheela
Hey. I want to do M4M, so here's my mod.

General

  1. Use this background: http://puu.sh/a5mN7/477f024596.jpg
    I can see hard edges, so the background above fixes them.

Normal

  1. 00:05:229 (2) - Add another point to the slider, by holding Ctrl and clicking on the slider. Move this point to x:286 y:336 and move the second point to x:319 y:315, so it could make a blanket combo with 00:06:229 (3) .
  2. 00:08:229 (5) - Move this to x:187 y:41. The flow will be better.
  3. 00:09:229 (2) - Try to make a blanket with 00:10:229 (3) or 00:08:729 (1) .
  4. 00:10:729 (4) - Loosen the slider by moving the second point to x:452 y:298 and move the last point to x:383 y:362. This change needs 00:11:479 (5) to be moved at x:357 y:357. Also, add a new combo to 00:10:729 (4) .
  5. 00:21:729 (2) - Make a symmetric pattern with 00:20:729 (1) . Which means that you have to move the second point to x:191 y:135 and the last point to x:283 y:247. After, you need to move 00:22:479 (3) to x:177 y:89.
  6. 00:34:479 (4) - Move this to x:133 y:18 and move 00:34:729 (1) to x:177 y:26, so they won't get too much overlapped.
  7. 00:40:229 (6) - Try to loosen the curve to try to follow the curve of 00:39:229 (5) . But this change will affect 00:39:229 (5) to be edit.
  8. 00:44:229 (5) - Try to make a blanket pattern with the tail of 00:42:729 (4) .
  9. 00:45:729 (3) - Make a symmetric pattern with 00:46:729 (4) :
  10. 00:47:479 (5) - Make another slider pattern. This one gets overlapped and it's not pretty.
  11. 00:50:229 (2,3,4,5,6) - Perfection the star pattern by moving:
    - 00:50:729 (3) to x:227 y:133
    - 00:51:229 (4) to x:306 y:176
    - 00:51:729 (5) to x:285 y:263
    - 00:52:229 (6) to x:196 y:278.
  12. 00:52:979 (1) - Remove the spinner so it could let a little break.
  13. 00:57:729 (1) - Improve the blanket by moving the second point to x:166 y:118 and the last point to x:211 y:162. 00:58:479 (2) needs to be move to x232 y:156.
  14. 01:00:479 (5) - Move the note to x:317 y:233. That way, 00:59:729 (4) could shoot to the next note.
  15. 01:04:729 (4) - Make a symmetric pattern with 01:03:729 (3) . This change will affect 01:05:729 (1) to be changed.
  16. 01:08:729 (6) - This slider has too much repeat. Try this:
  17. 01:15:229 (5) - Try to fix the blanket with the approach circle of the previous note:
    This will make 01:16:229 (5) to change.
  18. 01:18:729 (4) - Try to replace it by a wave slider:
    This leads to 01:20:229 (5) to be moved.
  19. 01:22:729 (4,5) - Try to make another pattern. The slider overlap the other one.
  20. 01:25:229 (1) - Remove two repeats and add a note on 01:26:229. It sounds better.
  21. 01:48:729 (1) - Move this somewhere at x:421 y:170, so it won't get to overlap.
  22. 02:12:229 (6) - It has a different distance to the next note. Try moving 02:11:229 (5) to x:361 y:286. After, move 02:12:229 (6) to x:158 y:178. Move the second point to x:152 y:122 and move the last point to x:223 y:29.
  23. 02:16:229 (5) - Make a blanket with the tail of 02:14:729 (4) :
  24. 02:21:229 (1) - Try to make a blanket with the tail of 02:19:729 (5) .
  25. 02:27:229 (5) - Move this to x:167 y:145. It'll make 02:26:229 (3,4,5) a better triangle pattern. Don't forget to move 02:28:229 (6) .
  26. 02:30:729 (4) - Make a normal curve.
  27. 02:49:229 (1) - Make a proper blanket with 02:50:229 (2) .

    • Needs a little work on overlap pattern like 02:57:729 (2,3) , 02:59:729 (5,1) .

Hard

    1. 00:07:479 (7) - Move the second point to x:414 y:237 and move the third point to x:506 y:139. It'll skip the little overlay.
    2. 00:29:729 (3) - Stack the head with 00:28:729 (1) . It makes a better flow.
    3. 00:33:729 (1) - Make a symmetric pattern with 00:34:229 (2) :
    4. 00:40:229 (8) - Make a symmetric pattern with the same aspect as 00:39:479 (7) :
    5. 00:43:479 (6) - Make a blanket with the head of 00:42:729 (4) .
    6. 00:48:229 (8) - Try to make the same way as 00:40:229 (8) .
    7. 01:08:854 (1) - Reduce the length of the spinner to 01:10:729 and add some notes after?
    8. 01:16:229 (8) - Same way as 00:40:229 (8) .
    9. 01:24:229 (8) - ^ as 00:48:229 (8) .
    10. 01:32:229 (4) - Turn it into a normal curve. This one is weird.
    11. 01:42:229 (3) - Weird curve. Tweak with the third point or remake the slider.
    12. 01:45:479 (3) - I suggest to move this somewhere else. It's a little weird placement. The following sliders has the same problem: 01:47:479 (3) - 01:49:479 (3) - 01:51:479 (3) - 01:53:479 (3) - 01:55:479 (3) - 01:57:479 (3) - 01:59:479 (3) -
    13. 01:44:729 to 01:59:854 - The patterns are too repetitive. Too much of copy-paste is too boring. Try to make other patterns.
- In the difficulty, there's too much repetitive patterns, which makes the map boring. Try making other patterns.
- I think it needs a normal difficulty.
I saw the other mod popped up, so maybe there some suggestions that may are repeated.
Well, that's all. Since I want to do M4M, my map is DECO*27 feat. GUMI - Ame Moyou
Good Luck on ranking this map.
Topic Starter
Kritikally

konoshin69 wrote:

Normal

HP drain can be lowered just a bit
Lowered by .5
00:10:729 (4) - the flow and arrangement can be really improved here, for example try something like this (00:11:729 (5) - can start on the white tick& end on a white tick)

Reworked that combo from 2 to 5 -- better alignment and blanketing
00:16:729 (1,2,3,4) - kind of hard for normal considering your SV ?
Removed, adjusted spinner.
00:21:729 (2) - instead of having this [img]00:21:729%20(2)%20-[/img] you can make it easier by shaping the slider like this?
00:23:729 (3) - ^
00:25:729 (1) - ^
Done, done, and done.
00:39:229 (5) - improved the flow here http://puu.sh/a5v0x/ca30f28c36.jpg try this
Nice, I like that! Done.
01:08:729 (6) - try not having something like this for normal
Love the idea too much to give it up, not to mention that they're only eighth notes -- far from a Normal difficulty issue. However, if I get more negative feedback on it I'll consider reworking that combo.
01:16:229 (6) - fix flow
01:15:229 (5) - fix blanket : do this
( see its blanketed around the approach circle of 4 circle)
Done and done.
ill stop mentioning flow and blankets >w<

btw, NC's should usually start on the largest white tick, and its best if you DO NOT end a slider on them (its ok sometimes though i think) :3

01:22:729 (4,5,6,1) - the arrangement is pretty bad with these notes >.< OTL
Moved 6 and 1 appropriately.
01:25:229 (1) - so many repeats qwq in my opinion i dont like sliders with more than 1 repeat
Personal preference vs. personal preference. I'll keep it as it is pending additional criticism on that particular slider. IMO, it accents the snare roll in lieu of a spinner.

blanketing needs some work, if you need help you can read this guide on neat sliders t/208596

maybe you could add hitsounds on some notes owo

Oh also check aimod (ctrl+shift+A) and turn on distance snap, theres just 1 note that has bad spacing, since in easy and normal the spacing has to be even ^^
Must have overlooked it. Fixed.



Hard

Circle size is a bit small, move it to 4
Compromise -- 4.5.
not gonna mention neat sliders, flow ( the word kind of explains itselfs) or NC's since i mentioned them above
00:52:229 (1,2,3,4,5) - i wouldnt recommend a stream arranged into a circle qwq
02:40:229 (1) - ^
I don't see an issue with it. If I get more criticism on it I'll make them a little more straight or stacked.


overall your rhythm is pretty good, except i still dont prefer so many repeats on a slider, but thats why my opinion *-*


Hope that helped and goodluck with your beatmap ~ :3
Topic Starter
Kritikally

sheela901 wrote:

Normal

  1. 00:05:229 (2) - Add another point to the slider, by holding Ctrl and clicking on the slider. Move this point to x:286 y:336 and move the second point to x:319 y:315, so it could make a blanket combo with 00:06:229 (3) .
    Done!
  2. 00:08:229 (5) - Move this to x:187 y:41. The flow will be better.
    Agreed.
  3. 00:09:229 (2) - Try to make a blanket with 00:10:229 (3) or 00:08:729 (1) .
    Done with (3).
  4. 00:10:729 (4) - Loosen the slider by moving the second point to x:452 y:298 and move the last point to x:383 y:362. This change needs 00:11:479 (5) to be moved at x:357 y:357. Also, add a new combo to 00:10:729 (4) .
    Conflicted with last edit, completely changed slider.
  5. 00:21:729 (2) - Make a symmetric pattern with 00:20:729 (1) . Which means that you have to move the second point to x:191 y:135 and the last point to x:283 y:247. After, you need to move 00:22:479 (3) to x:177 y:89.
    Conflicted with last edit, performed most of this.
  6. 00:34:479 (4) - Move this to x:133 y:18 and move 00:34:729 (1) to x:177 y:26, so they won't get too much overlapped.
    Conflicted with previous edit which resolved issue.
  7. 00:40:229 (6) - Try to loosen the curve to try to follow the curve of 00:39:229 (5) . But this change will affect 00:39:229 (5) to be edit.
    Done.
  8. 00:44:229 (5) - Try to make a blanket pattern with the tail of 00:42:729 (4).
    Done.
  9. 00:45:729 (3) - Make a symmetric pattern with 00:46:729 (4) :
  10. 00:47:479 (5) - Make another slider pattern. This one gets overlapped and it's not pretty.
    Reworked slider to properly bend around (4), looking a lot less fugly.
  11. 00:50:229 (2,3,4,5,6) - Perfection the star pattern by moving:
    - 00:50:729 (3) to x:227 y:133
    - 00:51:229 (4) to x:306 y:176
    - 00:51:729 (5) to x:285 y:263
    - 00:52:229 (6) to x:196 y:278.
    Done. Looks cleaner :)
  12. 00:52:979 (1) - Remove the spinner so it could let a little break.
    Good idea! It is Normal, after all. Done.
  13. 00:57:729 (1) - Improve the blanket by moving the second point to x:166 y:118 and the last point to x:211 y:162. 00:58:479 (2) needs to be move to x232 y:156.
    Conflicted with previous edit -- already resolved.
  14. 01:00:479 (5) - Move the note to x:317 y:233. That way, 00:59:729 (4) could shoot to the next note.
    Done.
  15. 01:04:729 (4) - Make a symmetric pattern with 01:03:729 (3) . This change will affect 01:05:729 (1) to be changed.
    Reworked (1,2,3,4) to improve on it.
  16. 01:08:729 (6) - This slider has too much repeat. Try this:
    I've received enough criticism on that slider -- changed it.
  17. 01:15:229 (5) - Try to fix the blanket with the approach circle of the previous note:
    This will make 01:16:229 (5) to change.
    Done.
  18. 01:18:729 (4) - Try to replace it by a wave slider:
    This leads to 01:20:229 (5) to be moved.
    Done.
  19. 01:22:729 (4,5) - Try to make another pattern. The slider overlap the other one.
  20. 01:25:229 (1) - Remove two repeats and add a note on 01:26:229. It sounds better.
    Done and done.
  21. 01:48:729 (1) - Move this somewhere at x:421 y:170, so it won't get to overlap.
    Done.
  22. 02:12:229 (6) - It has a different distance to the next note. Try moving 02:11:229 (5) to x:361 y:286. After, move 02:12:229 (6) to x:158 y:178. Move the second point to x:152 y:122 and move the last point to x:223 y:29.
    Readjusted (5)'s length and blanked (5) and (6) with (4).
  23. 02:16:229 (5) - Make a blanket with the tail of 02:14:729 (4) :
  24. 02:21:229 (1) - Try to make a blanket with the tail of 02:19:729 (5).
    Done.
  25. 02:27:229 (5) - Move this to x:167 y:145. It'll make 02:26:229 (3,4,5) a better triangle pattern. Don't forget to move 02:28:229 (6) .
    Moved the sliders and circles around in that combo, fixed triangle pattern and flows better into (6).
  26. 02:30:729 (4) - Make a normal curve.
    Conflicts with previous edit -- already done.
  27. 02:49:229 (1) - Make a proper blanket with 02:50:229 (2) .
    Done.

    • Needs a little work on overlap pattern like 02:57:729 (2,3) , 02:59:729 (5,1) .

Hard

    1. 00:07:479 (7) - Move the second point to x:414 y:237 and move the third point to x:506 y:139. It'll skip the little overlay.
      Did something similar.
    2. 00:29:729 (3) - Stack the head with 00:28:729 (1) . It makes a better flow.
      Done.
    3. 00:33:729 (1) - Make a symmetric pattern with 00:34:229 (2) :
      Changed to something different -- blanketed (1) with (2)).
    4. 00:40:229 (8) - Make a symmetric pattern with the same aspect as 00:39:479 (7) :
      Done, and will do with all future repeats of that sequence.
    5. 00:43:479 (6) - Make a blanket with the head of 00:42:729 (4) .
      Done.
    6. 00:48:229 (8) - Try to make the same way as 00:40:229 (8).
      Done.
    7. 01:08:854 (1) - Reduce the length of the spinner to 01:10:729 and add some notes after?
      Cut spinner duration in half, moved it to second half of snare roll, and created a challenging lead-in to it.
    8. 01:16:229 (8) - Same way as 00:40:229 (8) .
    9. 01:24:229 (8) - ^ as 00:48:229 (8) .
      Done and done.
    10. 01:32:229 (4) - Turn it into a normal curve. This one is weird.
      Kept it curved but blanketed it with (5) -- Looks fine to me now. ;)
    11. 01:42:229 (3) - Weird curve. Tweak with the third point or remake the slider.
      Remade slider.
    12. 01:45:479 (3) - I suggest to move this somewhere else. It's a little weird placement. The following sliders has the same problem: 01:47:479 (3) - 01:49:479 (3) - 01:51:479 (3) - 01:53:479 (3) - 01:55:479 (3) - 01:57:479 (3) - 01:59:479 (3) -
    13. 01:44:729 to 01:59:854 - The patterns are too repetitive. Too much of copy-paste is too boring. Try to make other patterns.
      Squeezed a couple of other actions in there to make it less repetitive.
In the difficulty, there's too much repetitive patterns, which makes the map boring. Try making other patterns.
I reworked at least 20 events during the course of the mod not including your suggestions.
I think it needs a normal difficulty.
Wasn't the "Normal" difficulty you just modded before the Hard a normal difficulty?
Topic Starter
Kritikally
Added intro to song and instituted a key change at the bridge. Adjusted all bookmarks/timing points/notes/etc to compensate for addition of intro.
Topic Starter
Kritikally
Added another element to section before bridge and before outro. Reworked map in those sections (totaling 16 bars) to compensate.
Julie
UWAHH SORRY SO LATE XD



[Normal]
00:00:000 - remove this timing point, is useless
00:00:001 - ^
00:16:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A bit to hard for normal, remove all the note on red tick, because usually circle are harder to have better accuracy on, so having too much will be way to hard for new player to get good accuracy on it
00:55:729 (2) - better blanket with the end of 00:54:729 (1)
00:57:729 (1) - better blanket with 00:57:229 (4)
01:08:729 (6) - might be too hard for a normal, user might not know when to stop and stop before because of 01:10:729 (1)
01:22:729 (4,5) - overlap
01:25:229 (1) - might want to change it.
02:14:729 (4,5,1) - the flow is kinda hard for mouse user o.o
02:21:229 (1) - ^ hard, the end of slider 02:21:229 (1) is closer then the end of this 02:19:729 (5) , might cause confusion for new player.
02:28:229 (6,1) - ^ have to turn back mouse backward
02:32:229 (5) - the end touching 02:30:729 (4)
02:39:729 (1,2,3,4,1) - remove 2 and 4, same reason as 00:16:729 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9)
02:49:229 (1) - try this so is better flow
02:51:229 (3,4) - could make a better flow ^^


[Hard]
00:00:000 - remove this timing point, is useless
00:00:001 - ^
00:21:316 - timing point kinda off, this note 00:21:316 (1) sound is after the music one x,x (for the hard), so you might want to use the same timing point as Normal, and also map the begining like normal.
If you don't want to do above, um change the timing point to 21,220 with this option and I used this to mods (MY OFFSET AREN'T 100% PERFECT XDD)
because snapping won't help, the difference is huge xD
00:23:316 (5) 00:24:066 (7) - overlap
00:27:970 (7) - should start at 00:28:220
00:39:720 (7) - lose the beat
00:41:720 (5) - ^
00:46:220 (3,4) - might want to change it, this 00:46:220 (3) revese
00:47:720 (5) - lose the beat
00:49:720 (9) - ^
00:58:220 (3) - less reverse
00:59:970 (6) - better blanket
01:12:970 (4) - this slider should start here 01:12:720
01:13:720 (5) - lose the beat
01:15:720 (5) - ^
01:21:720 (5) - ^
01:23:720 (4) - ^
02:01:720 (3,4,5,6) - doesn't match, avoid blue tick here >,<
02:03:845 (4,5) - ^
02:05:845 (3,4,5,6) - ^, use white and red it has the same sound, or except if you want to make a stream, but don't use blue tick only ^^
02:13:845 (3,4,5,6) - ^
03:21:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - um you're kinda creating sound here, match the piano and make it go slower and finish it here 03:29:921

Good luck ^^
Topic Starter
Kritikally

Julie wrote:

UWAHH SORRY SO LATE XD


Your normal mod is based on an older song version, not applicable.

[Hard]
00:00:000 - remove this timing point, is useless
00:00:001 - ^
Done and done.
00:21:316 - timing point kinda off, this note 00:21:316 (1) sound is after the music one x,x (for the hard), so you might want to use the same timing point as Normal, and also map the begining like normal.
Timing was off by 4ms, not 104ms -- offset changed to 21320.
00:23:316 (5) 00:24:066 (7) - overlap
Adjusted so end points meet perfectly.
00:27:970 (7) - should start at 00:28:220
It's synced with the vocals.
00:39:720 (7) - lose the beat
00:41:720 (5) - ^
Done and done.
00:46:220 (3,4) - might want to change it, this 00:46:220 (3) revese
Changed.
00:47:720 (5) - lose the beat
00:49:720 (9) - ^
Done and done.
00:58:220 (3) - less reverse
Done.
00:59:970 (6) - better blanket
Done.
01:12:970 (4) - this slider should start here 01:12:720
Done.
01:13:720 (5) - lose the beat
01:15:720 (5) - ^
01:21:720 (5) - ^
01:23:720 (4) - ^
All done.
02:01:720 (3,4,5,6) - doesn't match, avoid blue tick here >,<
02:03:845 (4,5) - ^
02:05:845 (3,4,5,6) - ^, use white and red it has the same sound, or except if you want to make a stream, but don't use blue tick only ^^
02:13:845 (3,4,5,6) - ^
These notes are following the pizzicato sound to the letter. I'll boost the volume of them in this section and the next section they appear so it's more obvious.
03:21:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - um you're kinda creating sound here, match the piano and make it go slower and finish it here 03:29:921
The sound here is not being invented at all. I think you have an older version of the audio without the added element in that section. Again, I'll boost the volume of that sound in that and the former section so it's more obvious.

Good luck ^^
The Girls
[Normal]
00:28:070 (2) - You can clean up the shape of the slider by moving the middle point on the slider in between the other two.



01:15:070 (2) - Move down a litttle --- follow the trajectory of the slider.

01:44:820 (6, 7, 1) - Either make 6 the NC, not 1 or make them all part of the previous combo.

02:42:067 (2) - If its part of the purple combo, probably better to C+H and bracket with the purple combos.

02:57:320 - 03:03:320 - Fill up please, I know you wanted to just down the downbeats, but it isn't consistent with the difficulty and actually detracts from the flow of the beatmap and the song, a simple easier pattern would give the player the rest you intended for them.

Have you tried using a muffled cymbal-hitsound for your clap? I don't know where to find that hitsound, just look in the sample-set libraries. I might be better than the clap you have right now.


[Hard]

00:39:820 & 00:41:820 - Place a beat there. Increase fluidity of the beatmap. And wherever this trope shows up in the song. Its easier to hit beats consistently on downbeats, than to hit them when the person sings, since players will always know the beats---the singing can change.

00:58:320 - Bracket with 2. (Make S shape)

01:09:320 - No NC. I know you like to keep the next downbeats a different color. But you are following it up with a spinner, would look nicer if you kept 1 color.

02:01:320 - Use some different hitsound for this section. To emphasize it.

02:16:945 (5) - Is that supposed to be where it is right now?

02:25:320 - end - I feel there isn't much variation, its just the same pattern and tropes copied from previous chorus parts. Consider adding more notes or changing the slider velocity. It feels a little flat in terms of ramping, climactic finishes in beatmaps. Or maybe the DS can increase a little bit. What do you think?

Overall, there is not much to say, since its pretty good and you probably modified it a lot---just a little bit of cleanup work left i guess :D
Midge
Hey man, here for the m4m, here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/165533

If there's too many diffs, i'd rather you focus on the insane before anything else

[Normal]

00:28:070 (2) - idk about this shape, it'd be better if it were a snail slider http://puu.sh/aa9B4/d13f16fb6c.jpg
00:35:070 (1) - start this spinner at 00:33:320
00:39:320 - im only going to say this once: there should be a note here. i recommend turning 00:39:070 (3) into a slider that rides into the white tick: this applies to all sections like this
00:43:820 - note here
00:45:820 - ^ (im gonna stop pointing these out as well)
01:03:320 (4,5) - wonky overlap. good concept, but odd execution. have the sliders not touch in the middle http://puu.sh/aaafr/2632103696.jpg
here's the code if you know how to use it
62,152,63320,2,0,P|113:88|208:54,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,78,64070,2,0,B|219:170|168:93|147:162|109:178|135:258|46:189,1,225,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:32:820 (6) - wonky blanket, move the middle anchor to x:337 y:201
01:39:320 (4,5) - same deal, lol
02:02:320 (3) - 4double repeating sliders are hard to catch in normals. try this: http://puu.sh/aab2q/547230ed0c.jpg
02:26:320 (2,3,4) - use ds, these are spaced weirdly
02:28:820 (6) - stack the tail end on the 3
02:35:320 (4) - ekhkhk overlap :V
02:50:320 (3) - weird slider shape imo

So the issue I see in a lot of new mappers is that they map one of two things: vocals or bg music. If you map just the vocals, it leaves a lot of holes in your map. The trick is to find a good balance between the two, that way the player is doing something thoughout the entire song, rather than just waiting.

[Hard]

00:23:320 (5,6,7) - really nice concept, but executed poorly, please clean this up :S
00:35:320 (1) - same as what i suggested in the normal diff
00:39:070 (6) - weird blanket :V
00:43:320 (5) - same as what i suggested in normal
00:50:820 (2) - should copy+paste 1 and rotate http://puu.sh/aac6g/b1112032c0.jpg
01:08:820 (1,2,3,4,1) - sloppy :V
01:21:570 (5) - this is pretty confusing :S
02:16:695 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - reeeaaally sloppy stream

A lot of the same problems that were in normal are in this too :S

Good luck, there's a lot of good ideas, but in general this is a pretty sloppy map. Stacks are sort of off, streams are wonky, sliders are odd looking, this would look really good if it were cleaned up.

o/
Topic Starter
Kritikally

The Girls wrote:

[Normal]
00:28:070 (2) - You can clean up the shape of the slider by moving the middle point on the slider in between the other two.



01:15:070 (2) - Move down a litttle --- follow the trajectory of the slider.
Changed the slider entirely for (2), added circle (3).

01:44:820 (6, 7, 1) - Either make 6 the NC, not 1 or make them all part of the previous combo.
Done.

02:42:067 (2) - If its part of the purple combo, probably better to C+H and bracket with the purple combos.
No idea what you mean here.

02:57:320 - 03:03:320 - Fill up please, I know you wanted to just down the downbeats, but it isn't consistent with the difficulty and actually detracts from the flow of the beatmap and the song, a simple easier pattern would give the player the rest you intended for them.
Done.

Have you tried using a muffled cymbal-hitsound for your clap? I don't know where to find that hitsound, just look in the sample-set libraries. I might be better than the clap you have right now.
I'll look into custom hitsounds. For me, the stock clap sounds too hard and the soft finish sounds too soft -- was expecting more of a ride cymbal.

[Hard]

00:39:820 & 00:41:820 - Place a beat there. Increase fluidity of the beatmap. And wherever this trope shows up in the song. Its easier to hit beats consistently on downbeats, than to hit them when the person sings, since players will always know the beats---the singing can change.
This makes sense. I originally had circles there, and I had several modders tell me to remove them. I'll place them back.
00:58:320 - Bracket with 2. (Make S shape)
Done.
01:09:320 - No NC. I know you like to keep the next downbeats a different color. But you are following it up with a spinner, would look nicer if you kept 1 color.
Done.

02:01:320 - Use some different hitsound for this section. To emphasize it.
Will look into custom hitsounds later today.

02:16:945 (5) - Is that supposed to be where it is right now?
Moved to x:104, y:158.

02:25:320 - end - I feel there isn't much variation, its just the same pattern and tropes copied from previous chorus parts. Consider adding more notes or changing the slider velocity. It feels a little flat in terms of ramping, climactic finishes in beatmaps. Or maybe the DS can increase a little bit. What do you think?
I'll definitely look into adjusting the SV and DS after the bridge. It makes sense.

Overall, there is not much to say, since its pretty good and you probably modified it a lot---just a little bit of cleanup work left i guess :D
Topic Starter
Kritikally

Midge wrote:

Hey man, here for the m4m, here's my map https://osu.ppy.sh/s/165533

If there's too many diffs, i'd rather you focus on the insane before anything else

[Normal]

00:28:070 (2) - idk about this shape, it'd be better if it were a snail slider http://puu.sh/aa9B4/d13f16fb6c.jpg
Conflicts with previous edit -- Changed (2) and added (3).
00:35:070 (1) - start this spinner at 00:33:320
Done.
00:39:320 - im only going to say this once: there should be a note here. i recommend turning 00:39:070 (3) into a slider that rides into the white tick: this applies to all sections like this
Kind of conflicts with previous edits, received criticism in past to remove those. Re-added them.
00:43:820 - note here
00:45:820 - ^ (im gonna stop pointing these out as well)
Done and done.
01:03:320 (4,5) - wonky overlap. good concept, but odd execution. have the sliders not touch in the middle http://puu.sh/aaafr/2632103696.jpg
here's the code if you know how to use it
62,152,63320,2,0,P|113:88|208:54,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,78,64070,2,0,B|219:170|168:93|147:162|109:178|135:258|46:189,1,225,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Made those sliders to not overlap.
01:32:820 (6) - wonky blanket, move the middle anchor to x:337 y:201
Done.
01:39:320 (4,5) - same deal, lol
Already done. ;)
02:02:320 (3) - 4double repeating sliders are hard to catch in normals. try this: http://puu.sh/aab2q/547230ed0c.jpg
Leaving them as they are pending additional criticism.
02:26:320 (2,3,4) - use ds, these are spaced weirdly
They are spaced at 0.6x (+/- 0.01), not an issue.
02:28:820 (6) - stack the tail end on the 3
Done.
02:35:320 (4) - ekhkhk overlap :V
Done.
02:50:320 (3) - weird slider shape imo
I don't think it's that weird. If I get any other criticism on it I'll change it.

So the issue I see in a lot of new mappers is that they map one of two things: vocals or bg music. If you map just the vocals, it leaves a lot of holes in your map. The trick is to find a good balance between the two, that way the player is doing something thoughout the entire song, rather than just waiting.

[Hard]

00:23:320 (5,6,7) - really nice concept, but executed poorly, please clean this up :S
Cleaned with previous edit -- (5)'s slider end meets (7)'s slider end perfectly.
00:35:320 (1) - same as what i suggested in the normal diff
Done.
00:39:070 (6) - weird blanket :V
Had already fixed on my own, but done.
00:43:320 (5) - same as what i suggested in normal
Done.
00:50:820 (2) - should copy+paste 1 and rotate http://puu.sh/aac6g/b1112032c0.jpg
Done.
01:08:820 (1,2,3,4,1) - sloppy :V
Removed then used Ctrl+Shift+D to make them perfect and rotated so DS wasn't an issue.
01:21:570 (5) - this is pretty confusing :S
Reworked it a bit, should be fine now. :)
02:16:695 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - reeeaaally sloppy stream
Fixed.

A lot of the same problems that were in normal are in this too :S

Good luck, there's a lot of good ideas, but in general this is a pretty sloppy map. Stacks are sort of off, streams are wonky, sliders are odd looking, this would look really good if it were cleaned up.

Fixed most (if not all) of the stacks, streams are more aesthetic/aligned, most sliders are fixed. Feel free to have another look if you'd like ♥

o/
Topic Starter
Kritikally
Added custom hitsounds. Need feedback on normal-hitnormal and normal-hitclap.
RikiH_
Hi man, m4m

Normal

00:27:320 (1,2,3) - I will mod this diff considering it as the easiest diff of the set. So, this pattern is really complicated for newbie players, it will confuse them
00:33:320 (1,1) - 1/1 distance between the spinner and the slider is not enough, give some recovery time, I suggest to end the spinner in 00:36:320 -
00:38:320 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like how they overlap, I suggest to create a different pattern
00:43:070 (3,4) - This overlap is ugly, I highly suggest to change it
00:46:320 (3,4) - Maybe this looks better
00:51:570 (1,1) - Same issue as 00:33:320 (1,1) - shorten the spinner a bit
00:59:820 (4) - I really feel like there is a missing clap on this tick, please add it :)
01:03:320 (4,5) - Pretty tricky to read for newbie players, this is pretty much the same issue found in 00:27:320 (1,2,3) - I don't like the overlap with 01:05:820 (1) - either
01:11:320 (1) - Finish in the beginning!
01:09:320 - I'd map this part, otherwise yo will have a kiai during a pause, which is very weird, add a long slider or some notes
01:14:320 (1,2) - Really hard to play for newbies because of the stack
01:22:320 (1,2,3) - This pattern is too hard for newbies, too many stacks (I don't like the shape of the first slider as well...)
01:31:820 (5,6) - Same problem
01:35:820 - Missing clap on this tick
01:39:320 (4,5) - Same as before about this pattern
02:12:320 (5,6) - Replace this with a 2-repeats-slider like this 02:10:320 (2) - or this 02:14:320 (3) for consistancy with your patterns
02:16:820 (3,1) - Fix the spacing issue between 2 and 3, then put the notes like this in order to avoid the stacking
02:21:320 (1,1) - Shorten the spinner like I said before
02:31:820 - Clap
02:36:820 - ^
02:43:820 (5,6) - Same issue about the stack
02:47:820 - Clap
02:50:320 (3) - This looks ugly, I'd change it
02:52:820 - Clap
03:11:570 (1) - You know what to do

Hard

00:24:070 (7,1) - Really weird overlap in my opinion
00:58:320 (2) - Consider using a ctrl+g on this slider, it flows better with it
01:31:320 (5.7) - Ugly overlap
01:36:070 (5,7) - Same
Please go through the map and change all the overlaps like that, it's pointless to keep mentioning them
02:08:820 (6) - Missing clap here
03:14:445 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe it's just me but during the testplay I couldn't read this pattern
03:22:445 (4,5,6,7) - ^

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In my opinion you need to work more on some patterns that are not really good-looking in my opinion, I hope my mod helped a bit, good luck :)
Topic Starter
Kritikally

RikiH_ wrote:

Hi man, m4m

Normal

00:27:320 (1,2,3) - I will mod this diff considering it as the easiest diff of the set. So, this pattern is really complicated for newbie players, it will confuse them
This is Normal, not Easy. Events triggering on eighth notes (red ticks) are fine -- especially at only 120BPM.
00:33:320 (1,1) - 1/1 distance between the spinner and the slider is not enough, give some recovery time, I suggest to end the spinner in 00:36:320 -
Shortened spinner to end at 00:36:320.
00:38:320 (2,3,4,5,6) - I don't like how they overlap, I suggest to create a different pattern
Reworked that combo a bit.
00:43:070 (3,4) - This overlap is ugly, I highly suggest to change it
Moved (4) slightly.
00:46:320 (3,4) - Maybe this looks better
Done.
00:51:570 (1,1) - Same issue as 00:33:320 (1,1) - shorten the spinner a bit
Done.
00:59:820 (4) - I really feel like there is a missing clap on this tick, please add it :)
The clap would occur during the slide and not at a start or end point -- nowhere to add it without worsening the flow of the hitsounds.. Instead, shortened slider (4), added circle (5).
01:03:320 (4,5) - Pretty tricky to read for newbie players, this is pretty much the same issue found in 00:27:320 (1,2,3) - I don't like the overlap with 01:05:820 (1) - either
Red-ticked events for Normal are fine. Moved and rotated slider at 01:05:820 (1) to not overlap with previous slider (5).
01:11:320 (1) - Finish in the beginning!
Done.
01:09:320 - I'd map this part, otherwise yo will have a kiai during a pause, which is very weird, add a long slider or some notes
01:14:320 (1,2) - Really hard to play for newbies because of the stack
Fixed.
01:22:320 (1,2,3) - This pattern is too hard for newbies, too many stacks (I don't like the shape of the first slider as well...)
Fixed.
01:31:820 (5,6) - Same problem
Fixed.
01:35:820 - Missing clap on this tick
Fixed similar to previous change.
01:39:320 (4,5) - Same as before about this pattern.
Unchanged due to same reasoning as before.
02:12:320 (5,6) - Replace this with a 2-repeats-slider like this 02:10:320 (2) - or this 02:14:320 (3) for consistancy with your patterns
Already reworked this section slightly.
02:16:820 (3,1) - Fix the spacing issue between 2 and 3, then put the notes like this in order to avoid the stacking
02:21:320 (1,1) - Shorten the spinner like I said before
Done.
02:31:820 - Clap
Done.
02:36:820 - ^
Fixed.
02:43:820 (5,6) - Same issue about the stack
Fixed.
02:47:820 - Clap
Fixed.
02:50:320 (3) - This looks ugly, I'd change it
Same slider used three previous times in similar fashion at same section -- wasn't ugly then -- why now?
02:52:820 - Clap
Fixed.
03:11:570 (1) - You know what to do
One quarter-note rest between spinner and event is sufficient here, especially when event is in the dead middle of screen and not in a corner.

Hard

00:24:070 (7,1) - Really weird overlap in my opinion
Had already changed.
00:58:320 (2) - Consider using a ctrl+g on this slider, it flows better with it
Done, and moved (3).
01:31:320 (5.7) - Ugly overlap
01:36:070 (5,7) - Same
Stacks properly and prettied up blanket around (6).
Please go through the map and change all the overlaps like that, it's pointless to keep mentioning them
02:08:820 (6) - Missing clap here
Fixed.
03:14:445 (5,6,7,8) - Maybe it's just me but during the testplay I couldn't read this pattern
03:22:445 (4,5,6,7) - ^
Reworked pattern slightly to make them more visible and less likely to break flow.

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In my opinion you need to work more on some patterns that are not really good-looking in my opinion, I hope my mod helped a bit, good luck :)
D33d
I'll be watching this set. You're showing a lot of promise, although I've only checked hard mode, but it seems to play well. Try some more ambitious things with pattern formation and you're onto a winner. I'll happily help you via IRC if you have any specific issues.
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