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Hollow Wings

KaedekaShizuru wrote:

因为担心做成激霸于是自己送上门来=w= 233

[General]
希望能向SB里添加飘雪的特效 尤其在KIAI段
没有歌词Lyrics太可惜了啊 做sb好累的啊求求放过我OVQ

[Hard]
希望能稍微跳一点 低bpm的跳图以后再做。。。我一跳就停不下来了
00:19:445 (3) - spin?我觉得break更好
01:10:393 (1) - 这里spin就感觉不太好了 进入KIAI我觉得需要更进一步拉开间距(更跳一点? 主要是想跟那个渐响的音,所以就spinner了
01:12:204 - 这里应该有个circle或者跟01:12:462 组成slider 加了note
02:01:341 (1) - 这spin感觉太偷懒了吧Orz 这显然是故意的
02:33:152 (1) - 同01:10:393 (1) 同上
02:34:962 - 同01:12:204 同上

[Normal]
02:01:341 (1) - 同hard 同上
02:15:307 (1,2) - 向正中心靠一些 02:15:307 (1) - 以中心线对称 其实个人不太喜欢对称的说 不过稍微变了下位置

美丽
太善良了Orz 希望能激霸一点 这曲子我想做成ex也行,但是。。。还是算了orz
thx for modding!
1PSA
[General]
  1. 我觉得这个歌曲没有SB太可惜了。而且我觉得这个BG有些违和的感觉,BG感觉略忧伤,这个歌听起来还是很优美抒情的http://osu.ppy.sh/s/46552我觉得这个BGquite good. hhhhhh
[Hard]
  1. 01:43:238 - 01:43:497 -要不要考虑加note
  2. 02:01:341 (1) - 这个spin......后面有鼓点我觉得用note更好吧
  3. 02:16:600 - 如果把Break提前到这里结束怎么样
  4. 02:36:514 (4,5,1) - 正三角没做好?
  5. 03:15:824 (2) - 尾巴稍稍有一点没包好?
  6. 03:19:962 (1) - 这里可以用note03:22:548 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里和前面一致用spin怎么样
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:824 (3,1) - 稍稍有点没包好
  2. 02:17:893 - 02:26:169 - 这段Break完全可以做的嘛

没了。好歌快rank! :)
Crystal
hi! as requested

[Hard]
00:57:204 (4) - 这个放在392|152 离下一个近点比较舒服
01:10:393 (1) - 这个放在蓝线上好像没有什么音 可以后延到白线
01:17:893 - 加个note吧 人声还是蛮重的
01:35:479 (7,1) - 对调NC
*02:58:238 (10,1) - ^
02:24:876 (8) - ctrl+J看起来好看一些
02:52:807 (4) - 188|68 强迫症看哭了OvQ
03:19:445 (6) - 建议就一个单点在03:19:445 一个滑条我第一次玩以为要跟人声跟到底的 结果突然就转盘了感觉不太好

[Normal]
为啥DS2.1 OvQ 好厉害的感觉
01:16:341 (7) - 加个note?
01:17:376 (2) - ^
02:17:893 (2) - stack感觉不太好打


好像摸不出啥了 这种style好美 :)
good luck!
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

1PSA wrote:

[General]
  1. 我觉得这个歌曲没有SB太可惜了。而且我觉得这个BG有些违和的感觉,BG感觉略忧伤,这个歌听起来还是很优美抒情的http://osu.ppy.sh/s/46552我觉得这个BGquite good. hhhhhh 此曲除了忧伤还是忧伤。。。不过bg我可以换个色调倒是真的
[Hard]
  1. 01:43:238 - 01:43:497 -要不要考虑加note 不想加
  2. 02:01:341 (1) - 这个spin......后面有鼓点我觉得用note更好吧 此spinner我肯定不会动
  3. 02:16:600 - 如果把Break提前到这里结束怎么样 放在了02:16:859结束
  4. 02:36:514 (4,5,1) - 正三角没做好?这仅仅是keep ds的blanket,无法摆成正方形的除非sv=1.046ds
  5. 03:15:824 (2) - 尾巴稍稍有一点没包好? fixed
  6. 03:19:962 (1) - 这里可以用note03:22:548 (1,1,2,3,4,1) - 这里和前面一致用spin怎么样 我是故意用了不同的rhythm
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:824 (3,1) - 稍稍有点没包好 fixed
  2. 02:17:893 - 02:26:169 - 这段Break完全可以做的嘛 不知为何就想break了,不是偷懒哦orz

没了。好歌快rank! :) 好!

Crystal wrote:

hi! as requested

[Hard]
00:57:204 (4) - 这个放在392|152 离下一个近点比较舒服 00:57:204 (4,5) - 跟的是vocal ”残留“,柑橘用个跳比较好
01:10:393 (1) - 这个放在蓝线上好像没有什么音 可以后延到白线 薯片跟我讲了这个,我改成从前面红线开始
01:17:893 - 加个note吧 人声还是蛮重的 不,这里我只跟鼓
01:35:479 (7,1) - 对调NC 我懂你的意思,不过这里我觉得nc下在后面更好,所以还是不改了
*02:58:238 (10,1) - ^ ^
02:24:876 (8) - ctrl+J看起来好看一些 咦,我觉得现在这样更好看啊OVQ
02:52:807 (4) - 188|68 强迫症看哭了OvQ fixed,比我还强迫症OVQ
03:19:445 (6) - 建议就一个单点在03:19:445 一个滑条我第一次玩以为要跟人声跟到底的 结果突然就转盘了感觉不太好 姆,柑橘滑条没问题呢,不改啦OVQ

[Normal]
为啥DS2.1 OvQ 好厉害的感觉 哎?!OVQ
01:16:341 (7) - 加个note? 不啦,虽然加了柑橘更consistent但觉得没太必要,后同
01:17:376 (2) - ^ ^
02:17:893 (2) - stack感觉不太好打 放其他地方柑橘都比较违和,所以就stack好了,柑橘还行OVQ


好像摸不出啥了 这种style好美 :) 纳尼?这种style好美?OVQQQ
good luck!
and spboxer's irc mod here
2014-10-13 21:24 spboxer3: 現在有空? 幫你IRC
2014-10-13 21:24 Hollow Wings: 好
2014-10-13 21:25 Hollow Wings: 来
2014-10-13 21:25 Hollow Wings: (虽然忘了check前面两人的mod噗
2014-10-13 21:27 spboxer3: 00:01:341 (1,2) - 前頭開頭這個地方感覺有點不太對勁 節奏感覺
2014-10-13 21:27 spboxer3: 阿 這是Normal
2014-10-13 21:27 spboxer3: http://puu.sh/cavf8.jpg 我的建議
2014-10-13 21:27 Hollow Wings: 哎!不对吗!OQ
2014-10-13 21:28 spboxer3: 試試看這樣會不會比較好點
2014-10-13 21:28 spboxer3: 因為中間那段音都在藍線上 所以你結尾在紅線會怪怪的
2014-10-13 21:29 Hollow Wings: 好那就改吧噗
2014-10-13 21:29 Hollow Wings: (虽然怎样柑橘都行噗
2014-10-13 21:29 spboxer3: 00:19:962 - break的開頭移到這裡??
2014-10-13 21:30 Hollow Wings: 好
2014-10-13 21:32 spboxer3: 00:53:066 (4,1) - 我知道可能這樣會損失一點打擊感 但是最簡單的難度我還是希望spinner能長一點 我會建議把spinner開頭放在4的位置上
2014-10-13 21:33 Hollow Wings: spinner的头直接拖到00:53:324吧?
2014-10-13 21:33 Hollow Wings: 4的存在我觉得很有必要哎噗
2014-10-13 21:34 spboxer3: 恩...看你囉 我是覺得其實這麼慢的曲子在打完前面3的位置按鍵是會放開的
2014-10-13 21:34 spboxer3: 後面才出spinner一樣會有按按鍵的動作>_>
2014-10-13 21:34 spboxer3: 不過看人吧~
2014-10-13 21:35 Hollow Wings: 这。。。对直读的人来说简直无法理解orz
2014-10-13 21:35 spboxer3: 額...
2014-10-13 21:35 spboxer3: 好吧>_>
2014-10-13 21:36 Hollow Wings: 一般核心玩家打图都是:看到物件就打物件,音乐只是对物件的距离啊节奏啊起到辅助作用的bgm罢了
2014-10-13 21:36 Hollow Wings: 噗
2014-10-13 21:37 spboxer3: 冏...
2014-10-13 21:37 spboxer3: 看你的感覺吧
2014-10-13 21:37 Hollow Wings: 噗好OVQ
2014-10-13 21:38 spboxer3: 我覺得解釋有點麻煩而且也不一定會被接受 因為是個人看法233
2014-10-13 21:38 spboxer3: 如果想聽在解釋吧XD
2014-10-13 21:39 Hollow Wings: 我知道你的想法
2014-10-13 21:39 Hollow Wings: 不用解释
2014-10-13 21:39 Hollow Wings: 不过我还是不改
2014-10-13 21:39 Hollow Wings: 你下节奏的方式我懂
2014-10-13 21:39 spboxer3: 恩恩
2014-10-13 21:40 Hollow Wings: go on好了
2014-10-13 21:41 spboxer3: http://puu.sh/cavRP.jpg03:00:048 (1,2,3) -
2014-10-13 21:41 spboxer3: 03:00:048 (1,2,3) -
2014-10-13 21:41 spboxer3: 這個位置感覺節奏比較怪一點
2014-10-13 21:42 Hollow Wings: 233
2014-10-13 21:42 Hollow Wings: 你那样也行啦,就你那样吧
2014-10-13 21:43 spboxer3: 恩...>_>
2014-10-13 21:43 spboxer3: 感覺就是音還連著 可是卻被note打斷了的感覺
2014-10-13 21:43 spboxer3: 嘛~ 你覺得自己喜歡比較重要~
2014-10-13 21:43 Hollow Wings: 嗯,我觉得都不错
2014-10-13 21:43 spboxer3: 要hard囉
2014-10-13 21:43 Hollow Wings: 不过你让我见到了我不曾想过的下节奏方式所以我想试试看
2014-10-13 21:43 Hollow Wings: 好
2014-10-13 21:44 spboxer3: 00:19:445 - 這地方的break好像可以snap一下
2014-10-13 21:45 Hollow Wings: fixed
2014-10-13 21:47 spboxer3: 00:44:790 (4,5,6) - 不知道怎麼解釋 感覺音樂本身有點不同 音色部分三個都不同 可是4,5是反向的 5,6是同向的 就感覺有點怪怪的<-強迫症了
2014-10-13 21:48 Hollow Wings: 那就改成45同向56反向就行
2014-10-13 21:49 spboxer3: 好像也是一樣阿orz...
2014-10-13 21:49 spboxer3: 我的觀點是三個都要同/反向 雖然只是個人觀點
2014-10-13 21:49 Hollow Wings: 你的意思是要全都反向咯
2014-10-13 21:50 spboxer3: 恩...我的感覺是這樣
2014-10-13 21:50 spboxer3: 不過重點是你自己的感覺
2014-10-13 21:50 spboxer3: 你覺得都行不要動也可以的
2014-10-13 21:51 spboxer3: 01:10:393 (1) - 這個spinner感覺開始位置 有點不知道為甚麼要從這開始的感覺
2014-10-13 21:52 Hollow Wings: http://puu.sh/cawsM/06594bea8a.jpg
2014-10-13 21:52 Hollow Wings: 改成了这样
2014-10-13 21:52 Hollow Wings: 应该还行
2014-10-13 21:53 Hollow Wings: ok改了
2014-10-13 21:53 Hollow Wings: 02:33:152 (1) - 这个也改掉
2014-10-13 21:53 spboxer3: ok
2014-10-13 21:55 spboxer3: 02:16:859 - break下在這會不會太騙人>_> 不過我覺得下在這不錯
2014-10-13 21:56 Hollow Wings: 这个break太短了吧。。。还是不作死了orz
2014-10-13 21:56 spboxer3: 233
2014-10-13 21:59 spboxer3: 03:17:764 (3,4) - 打起來怪怪的阿
2014-10-13 21:59 Hollow Wings: 不会啊
2014-10-13 22:00 spboxer3: 額...
2014-10-13 22:00 spboxer3: 正常來說你看到那個note你會聯想到那是在1/8上>_>?
2014-10-13 22:00 Hollow Wings: 是的
2014-10-13 22:01 Hollow Wings: ar7可以保证所有直读都顺利进行
2014-10-13 22:01 spboxer3: 好吧orz...
2014-10-13 22:01 Hollow Wings: 实在读不懂
2014-10-13 22:01 spboxer3: http://puu.sh/cawYu.jpg
2014-10-13 22:01 Hollow Wings: od5的容错和note+slider的pattern也很难出100
2014-10-13 22:01 spboxer3: 我先給我的建議吧~ 要不要用ok的:3
2014-10-13 22:02 Hollow Wings: 我觉得那个鼓音有个tap点更好玩些
2014-10-13 22:02 spboxer3: 好
2014-10-13 22:03 spboxer3: 那差不多就這樣吧~
2014-10-13 22:03 Hollow Wings: 好~

thx for modding!
Autumn
支持华语歌

Normal

  1. CS-1 OD-1 没了。CS不减感觉和Hard差不多
  2. 大概会有脑残挑03:29:272 (2) - 这种。你留个心眼,不行喷回去就是。

Hard

  1. 00:41:686 - 有个Clap没用上,这可是clap啊。弄个短滑条或者折返一下
  2. 01:30:307 (5) - 调个头把01:31:341 (6) - 变成跳,可以强调一下这个clap
  3. 02:24:100 (7,8) - 遮挡不好看呀
  4. 02:50:738 - 我觉得还是要加个note强调一下vocal:http://puu.sh/cef8s/4b22583615.jpg
  5. 03:40:652 - 这边插条绿线30%,我觉得whistle太响了点..换了两条耳机都一样,肯定不是耳机问题!
没太迟吧!
Zweib
你好

看到图感觉和自己image差的有点多,不好怎么给排列或节奏建议啊;虽然我还是觉得这个hard摆放物件应该避免重叠,不好看 approach circle混在一起读图也不舒服。

[Hard]
00:19:445 (3) - 这个break也可以不要的
01:40:652 (1) - 放到01:40:135开始,后面两个object删掉,然后break从01:44:790开始
02:01:341 (1) - 这个spinner太二了haha,感觉设法拆成两三个连续转盘也比放一个12秒长的要好,- -还是跟鼓下节奏吧,然后在02:13:755 - 02:16:859 放个转盘
02:32:893 (1) - 从02:32:635 开始
03:23:066 (1,2,3,4,1) - 挺容易打早的= =。。感觉你这张图就是spacing用的非常小气,normal看着还更舒服点
03:53:647 (1) - 这个spinner做个消音处理吧

[Normal]
03:06:514 (5) - 感觉可以remove

唔MP3是不是换过

spinner效果多test几遍试试
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Autumn wrote:

支持华语歌 好!

Normal

  1. CS-1 OD-1 没了。CS不减感觉和Hard差不多 妈的,normal不能用cs4吗,法克,算了还是改吧为了rank噗。
  2. 大概会有脑残挑03:29:272 (2) - 这种。你留个心眼,不行喷回去就是。这个应该没问题233

Hard

  1. 00:41:686 - 有个Clap没用上,这可是clap啊。弄个短滑条或者折返一下 这里主要是想稍微跟一下vocal。。。漏了一个应该没事吧!OVQ
  2. 01:30:307 (5) - 调个头把01:31:341 (6) - 变成跳,可以强调一下这个clap 纳尼,不想搞跳啊噗噗,全程无脑ds噗
  3. 02:24:100 (7,8) - 遮挡不好看呀 哎,好吧,我还是blanket
  4. 02:50:738 - 我觉得还是要加个note强调一下vocal http://puu.sh/cef8s/4b22583615.jpg
  5. 03:40:652 - 这边插条绿线30%,我觉得whistle太响了点..换了两条耳机都一样,肯定不是耳机问题!改成了40%
没太迟吧!没有!OVO

Zweib wrote:

你好 你好你个头啊OVQ

看到图感觉和自己image差的有点多,不好怎么给排列或节奏建议啊;虽然我还是觉得这个hard摆放物件应该避免重叠,不好看 approach circle混在一起读图也不舒服。 要的就是这种感觉。。。你有多久没见过炒鸡善良图了!OVQ

[Hard]
00:19:445 (3) - 这个break也可以不要的 我觉得有必要有。。。
01:40:652 (1) - 放到01:40:135开始,后面两个object删掉,然后break从01:44:790开始 不好
02:01:341 (1) - 这个spinner太二了haha,感觉设法拆成两三个连续转盘也比放一个12秒长的要好,- -还是跟鼓下节奏吧,然后在02:13:755 - 02:16:859 放个转盘 不要啊,要的就是一个转盘转到底OVQ
02:32:893 (1) - 从02:32:635 开始 哎,还是从吸气的时候开始吧
03:23:066 (1,2,3,4,1) - 挺容易打早的= =。。感觉你这张图就是spacing用的非常小气,normal看着还更舒服点 只是因为bpm低而已
03:53:647 (1) - 这个spinner做个消音处理吧

[Normal]
03:06:514 (5) - 感觉可以remove

唔MP3是不是换过 木有啊

spinner效果多test几遍试试
thx for modding!
DeletedUser_1574070
  • Hard
  1. 01:30:307 (5) - 4:315 for better overlapping
  2. 02:36:514 (4) - rotate just a bit(10'). itll better shaped
  3. 02:50:738 (9,1) - unstacking these can have better feeling.
  4. 03:01:600 (6) - many might surprised so NC?
  • Normal
  1. 00:52:548 (2,3,4) - for better flow and shape, u can make this pattern a triangle.
good song and map but i'm concerned at normal diff being controvercial due to the undiscernable slider length for noobs.
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Kloyd wrote:

  • Hard
  1. 01:30:307 (5) - 4:315 for better overlapping changed to another style now
  2. 02:36:514 (4) - rotate just a bit(10'). itll better shaped nope for uhmm... ds snap? lol... composing is fine here imo.
  3. 02:50:738 (9,1) - unstacking these can have better feeling. changed to another style as well
  4. 03:01:600 (6) - many might surprised so NC? hmm ok~
  • Normal
  1. 00:52:548 (2,3,4) - for better flow and shape, u can make this pattern a triangle. sure
good song and map but i'm concerned at normal diff being controvercial due to the undiscernable slider length for noobs. hmm the sv in normal can be really easy to catch to noobs imo... ;w;
thx for modding!
Flask
[Hard]
  1. 00:01:341 - ~ 00:05:221 - 我覺得你可以用soft-whistle跟一些比較重的音 像是00:02:117 - 00:03:152 - 00:03:669 - 之類的
  2. 02:15:307 - ^
  3. 03:01:600 (1) - 硬要湊那個音還不如不跟..破壞整個慢慢的意境了
我覺得你Hard最後一段kiai做得不錯. 不過也僅限於最後一段, 前面kiai沒有激昂的感覺啊.. 其實這種歌還是可以做的出燃點來的, 不過主要跟vocal, 你都跟背景音的話就會有點散散的=3=

加油吧
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Flask wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:01:341 - ~ 00:05:221 - 我覺得你可以用soft-whistle跟一些比較重的音 像是00:02:117 - 00:03:152 - 00:03:669 - 之類的 哎!这里加了太吵啦!OVQ
  2. 02:15:307 - ^ ^
  3. 03:01:600 (1) - 硬要湊那個音還不如不跟..破壞整個慢慢的意境了 哎,这个多好啊!!!OVQQQ
我覺得你Hard最後一段kiai做得不錯. 不過也僅限於最後一段, 前面kiai沒有激昂的感覺啊.. 其實這種歌還是可以做的出燃點來的, 不過主要跟vocal, 你都跟背景音的話就會有點散散的=3= 姆,就是想做善良嘛OVQ

加油吧 OVQ
Oracle
m4m

General
  1. 04:05:479 - I can't here anything and there's a red line. What's this for?
  2. artist should be in traditional chinese, which is “許慧欣”
    then, the album name in tags should be changed to “美麗的愛情”as well.
  3. might want to have 192kbps mp3 instead of 128 one. i'll try to offer one later~http://puu.sh/d4tX3/9c1ef2eed2.mp3
Normal
  1. 00:15:566 (2,3) - spacing inconsistency here, try placing it somewhere around 344,156
  2. 00:32:376 (2,3,1) - fix the spacing here so they're all 2.1x away from each other.
    and many more, go through the diff to balance the spacing please~
  3. 00:37:290 (4,1) - might be a bit tricky on such low AR. it's your call tho.
  4. 01:17:635 (2,3) - you're following vocal for most cases so i don't get why you ignore it here. was expecting you follow the vocal here as well. Just like what you did in Hard.
  5. 01:34:186 (2,3) - ^
  6. 02:40:135 (2,3) - ^
  7. 02:56:945 (2,3) - ^ this one sounds more natural tho
  8. 02:15:307 (1) - a symmetrical one?

Hard
  1. 03:15:824 (2) - ctrl+G works better for me.
  2. 00:59:014 (1) - 把第一个red tick往右挪动一点吧,跟白线对应上。http://puu.sh/d4quR/71028ffe65.jpg
good song, call me~
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Oracle wrote:

m4m

General
  1. 04:05:479 - I can't here anything and there's a red line. What's this for? reset timing... isn't it old rules stoke... anyway fixed.
  2. artist should be in traditional chinese, which is “許慧欣” added
    then, the album name in tags should be changed to “美麗的愛情”as well. added
  3. might want to have 192kbps mp3 instead of 128 one. i'll try to offer one later~http://puu.sh/d4tX3/9c1ef2eed2.mp3 ok, done.
Normal
  1. 00:15:566 (2,3) - spacing inconsistency here, try placing it somewhere around 344,156 oops, i rearranged 00:13:755 (1) - 's setting and ds is ok now.
  2. 00:32:376 (2,3,1) - fix the spacing here so they're all 2.1x away from each other. fixed
    and many more, go through the diff to balance the spacing please~ fixed some with larger off than 0.1
  3. 00:37:290 (4,1) - might be a bit tricky on such low AR. it's your call tho. this can be fine to noobs playing normal coz dat low bpm imo.
  4. 01:17:635 (2,3) - you're following vocal for most cases so i don't get why you ignore it here. was expecting you follow the vocal here as well. Just like what you did in Hard. lol nope, i didn't follow vocal track both here and hard diff orz. same as below.
  5. 01:34:186 (2,3) - ^
  6. 02:40:135 (2,3) - ^
  7. 02:56:945 (2,3) - ^ this one sounds more natural tho
  8. 02:15:307 (1) - a symmetrical one? i hate symm.

Hard
  1. 03:15:824 (2) - ctrl+G works better for me. ofc, changed.
  2. 00:59:014 (1) - 把第一个red tick往右挪动一点吧,跟白线对应上。http://puu.sh/d4quR/71028ffe65.jpg good, fixed
good song, call me~
thx for modding!
Oracle
♪~

About the timing for last spinner,
it's really difficult and unnecessary to time them properly so i think it's fine as-is. Already asked for 2 QATs' opinion,



About the spinner being too soon in Normal,
The song is 58 bpm so we can't still be rigidly following that 2/1 guideline in this case. I think the current gap is logical and acceptable.

@next BAT, double-check the gap between spinners and notes after it to consider if they're acceptable. It's always better to have more opinion~
Flower
123

[Hard]
00:45:824 (6) - changing to a 1/2 slider at 00:46:341 - would have more feelings (and add a note at 00:45:824 - )
02:04:250 - reduce volume by like 10%, the bonus covers music too much
02:51:772 (2) - move to like 132,240 or so to avoid touch with 02:50:997 (1) -
02:53:066 (5) - change to a 1/2 slider + a circle to follow vocal?
03:01:600 (1,1) - latter 1 is totally covered. it's very risky, so please move latter 1 to a more visible position
03:53:647 (1) - make a fade-out volume arrange

[Normal]
01:25:652 (2) - extend by 1/2? 01:26:169 - sounds stronger
02:01:341 (1) - same as Hard
02:15:307 (1,2) - if you feel unsafe, there's a simple way to compromise: delete them, and drag beginnings to 02:17:893 - . I think the gap is totally acceptable, though. Therefore, the decision is up to you.
02:40:135 (2) - extend by 1/2?
03:00:048 (1,2,3,4) - I'd prefer this pattern:
03:19:962 (1) - if you feel unsafe, there's a simple way to compromise: end the spinner at 03:23:066 - .
03:53:647 (1) - same as hard

吗的怎么都泡了还能摸出这么多,是不是你都reject了
还有你要不要择个凶日rank,比如1213纪念国耻,这样你可以先不改。
有什么想法直接pm我就好

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Flower wrote:

123

[Hard]
00:45:824 (6) - changing to a 1/2 slider at 00:46:341 - would have more feelings (and add a note at 00:45:824 - ) seems better to me as well, changed.
02:04:250 - reduce volume by like 10%, the bonus covers music too much changed.
02:51:772 (2) - move to like 132,240 or so to avoid touch with 02:50:997 (1) - changed.
02:53:066 (5) - change to a 1/2 slider + a circle to follow vocal? hmm nope here.
03:01:600 (1,1) - latter 1 is totally covered. it's very risky, so please move latter 1 to a more visible position thou i still think it's ok... it's just a stack pattern with a really short slider... still changed to another style.
03:53:647 (1) - make a fade-out volume arrange changed.

[Normal]
01:25:652 (2) - extend by 1/2? 01:26:169 - sounds stronger nope for just wanna follow drum and ignore that hit-hat beat.
02:01:341 (1) - same as Hard changed.
02:15:307 (1,2) - if you feel unsafe, there's a simple way to compromise: delete them, and drag beginnings to 02:17:893 - . I think the gap is totally acceptable, though. Therefore, the decision is up to you. when the spinner totally disappear, the slider followed is totally not appear. so i think this is safe and no change.
02:40:135 (2) - extend by 1/2? same as above.
03:00:048 (1,2,3,4) - I'd prefer this pattern: i think beat at 03:01:600 really need a tap to emphasis, so no change.
03:19:962 (1) - if you feel unsafe, there's a simple way to compromise: end the spinner at 03:23:066 - . changed coz this is not like the previous one.
03:53:647 (1) - same as hard changed.

吗的怎么都泡了还能摸出这么多,是不是你都reject了 你是人?
还有你要不要择个凶日rank,比如1213纪念国耻,这样你可以先不改。择不呢热爆挖鼻,还是赶紧rank了吧奥拉都拖了我半个月。。。
有什么想法直接pm我就好 好~ OVO

Good luck!
thx for modding!
Flower
I think there's no reason not making our final step.

Qualified!
Topic Starter
Hollow Wings

Flower wrote:

I think there's no reason not making our final step. let's do xxx to the end w.

Qualified!
thank u Oracle and Flower~~
Myxo
Congratz :3

I'm a bit worrying about the Normal diff.. I can imagine that with such a low SV, since different length of sliders look really similar now, it will be difficult to read for newbies. And also, the spacing is incredibly high (>2.0x) so newbies have to speed-up their movement after every slider.. I'm sure osu never had this case often (in the last couple years) so I dunno how it's handled o: It sure creates a beautiful atmosphere... I hope it won't get disqualified x.x
KaedekaShizuru
Congratz!
你的良心都在这里了么233333
Zweib
Congratz~
Kaguya Hourain
Gratz and happy birthday (?) :D
Rakuen
:) Grats :)

华语歌 :D

58 0.0!
Kibbleru
grats hw

i dont want to be that type of critic but.. doesn't it look like her hand kind of gets cut off under the umbrella o_O?

also should at least have tickrate 2 :I if not 4
[Seraphin]
hi
congrat

...

Kibbleru wrote:

i dont want to be that type of critic but.. doesn't it look like her hand kind of gets cut off under the umbrella o_O?
o shit
now I can't unsee the mental image of her having her wrist up severed
Autumn
玛雅 我竟然FL了HW的图
Lavender

Autumn wrote:

玛雅 我竟然FL了HW的图
玛雅 我竟然DT了HW的图
听起来就很厉害
alacat
happy birthday :>
Colourful

Autumn wrote:

玛雅 我竟然FL了HW的图
爷爷,还是SS
Princess God
恭喜rank
1PSA
:) :)
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